Why Do I Care? │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 1 сен 2018
- I've been struggling with self love, patience and trying to figure things out as the days pass by. It's been a while since I sat down and wrote something, so I wrote down my thoughts while trying to analyze why I act and think a certain way.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
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Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
Why do I care about finding love so badly and breaking myself in the process of hurting my heart over and over again?😔💔
U say the badly awkadakehidupanawksendirikeinginanawksendiridanpilihanhidupawk. Sendiri..
You have no idea how much I needed this! NO IDEA. It’s rather haunting how much this describes my current situation. Thank you thank you thank you Mel!
Wow that's amazing! I'm glad I was able to write something up 😊 you're very welcome! Thanks for the support!
@@MelsThoughts That's very true thing I ever heard and it helped me alot to focus on my goals again
I feel the same way, I wanted to talk but there's no one.......
"Knowing that they try to convince me that I can't survive." That was the line in this one that really stuck with me. I loved this one, glad to see you're still going strong. Keep being this honest and congratz on the 2k
Thank you so much! I appreciate the support and the kind words 😊😁 I will continue to try my best!
This hit home 😭❤
....im hurting...... And this makes me sad cause..........i can relate 😭😭😭😭
I like your text it's really honest. Some people just say to others that they should not care about other's opinions etc, but it's not Something we choose and that we can control all the time !
Thank you very much. I agree, it's easy to tell someone not to care what others think but it's really hard not to. I'm glad you liked this piece :)
Same feeling
@@MelsThoughts because our mind has gone through such kind of conditioning that made us too hard, not to care about what anyone think about us
😥😥😪😪i just dt kw...why do i care??
it melts my heart❤️❤️❤️❤️
Mel why do I relate with you so much??😭 It's like I'm speaking through you...
You are amazing, I appreciate you and your art❤️ ✨ I wish you all the best things life has to offer 🌟
Your voice is more common to my grounds than your such a truthful poetry relating to my life.
Thank you.
Being an eternal optimist, always hoping things will go the way they should, can be very hard on the heart. It is better to let life take care of life. Beautiful poem. Tfs. ❤️💙❤️
Hey! I love all of your poems! I admire the way you write..It's so beautiful. I'm also writing some spoken poetries and hope to be as good as you. Thank you for writing such beautiful poems.
Awe thank you so much! I appreciate it!
This has been my life for so many years. Thank you for describing what I've been struggling to say;) ♥
Thank you :)
@@MelsThoughts You're welcome;) ♥
You just unmasked all my emotions
This is so beautifully done. Good Job!!
Thank you very much :) I'm glad you liked it!
I relate all the way through...
you care for others a lot,your videos they help others you let others know that they are not alone.
I like thinking of it that way :) it makes me feel less alone so I'm glad people like my poems
I really love your work!🎈💕
Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear that!
Still watching in 2020 still hits the same 😅
I can relate to this to every word.
This popped into my life at the right moment. Thank You.
You're very welcome ❤ I hope things go well for you!
@@MelsThoughts Thank You. I hope you find the strenght to fight your battles.✊✊❤
Thank you ❤
@@hdmartinez404 👊👊❤❤❤
Honestly every word spoken is my everyday struggle 💯 😩
No matter what, you don't want me, you don't like you just like me for work. But after 6 months you have been fine. Thank you very much.
I think RUclips can read my mind cause it recommend me on right time .....love u RUclips 💜💜
Because you feel it in your heart and in your soul - it's not in your brain!❤
" Why do I care if I my hardest to get my crush notice me.". Thats sad, but I think you better give your attention to others not me.
What getcontrolu
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I care about two things,not losing my soul,and be happy with my self,unless both of them,I don't care about anything else then that.Life is too short I don't have time to care about anything that will destroy my happiness.Life is not so complicated,you can simplify your life only once you admit certain things and react positively on everything!
It's so so nice...
Thank you so much for this cause I'm going through a hard time right now n i didnt know what to ture to n i didn't look this up some how it found me and I'm so grateful❤
I relate to all this😭🥺😔
"The Beautiful Truth"
a life with poetry
☝️❤️🌍🏴🍀🌈🌞🕊️♾️ 🙏
Hi there, awesome write.
Hey! Thank you so much! 😁
I cried
Thanks Mel...
You're welcome 😊❤
Are you okay............ I hope you will be okay...........writing own feelings on a paper it's great help that you are doing for your self....... God bless you........
I do ❤
Omg HUHUHUHU I love youuuu
thanks a lots for you sir
you are great
Simply because I am an insecure teen who has been broken far too many times and I bet I broke some too💔
Don't ever give up. BECAUSE sometimes things aren't what it seems. Always remain positive with faith & courage. No doubts or fears, just confidence. (Hold on). COMMUNICATION UNLOCKS DOORS. YOU'LL NEVER KNOW TILL THE LINES OF COMMUNICATION IS OPEN. HOLD ON & WAIT TO SEE.
Why do I relate to all these depressed poems
Your not the only person that can relate ! I have been abandoned , cheated , and offered a FWB deal over a year ago ! And I feel now like should I have just accepted what was offered ! Because being alone , with out her ! Tears me to pieces , why after all those talks about forever and marriage was I just not important enough ! Not worth enough to someone that did this before to me , and I gave her more love and she did it again ! Yeah I would react to her behavior that irritated me! Ex: She was touching other men in a bar infront of me ! Lap dancing one rubbing the others chest! And completely ignored me ! On the way home I asked how could you do this to me ! Her reply because I liked it !
I lost it ! I felt so degraded so much anger ! And aftet we got back home she called her EX well supposedly her EX ? And talked to him ! I lost my mind !
But I still loved her ! And there were other instances !
Why do I have to love someone who treated me so poorly???
Wow
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OMG thank you I like your poerty 💞❤😇
You're welcome! ^_^ Thank you for checking it out! I'm glad you like it!
you won't change
Why do I care!
Wow
Come out of the sphere, your inner child is Jesu, once my inner mother is you ,come out of that sphere,don't live in the same circle
i just need that one comment that has those words typed.
Hey. How ya doin? Im here if u wanna talk
Hey
U re worth it. I love you
Why do i care what others think of me
Even though i know their opinions won’t help me in any way
Why do i care when it comes to how i breathe,
How i walk or talk ?
And whether I should go or stay ?
Why do i care if i try my hardest to get my crush to notie me ?
But the effort isn’t mutual
And i am just left ignored or on read
Why do i care if i don’t get a text back and start thinking that i lack
In personality and beauty to the point my negative thought become facts
Why do i care about finding love so badly and breaking myself in the process of hurting my heart
Over and over again
It feels like i can never win
Why do i care if she’s met her soulmate ?
Or he’s already reached his goals ?
Yes, i can be happy for them
But why must i feel like i’m behind and failing compared to them ?
Why do i care about the fears and doubts that eat me alive ?
Knowing that they try to convince me that i can’t survive
Why do i care so much to where i can’t help but cry and can’t seem to sleep ?
Because this so called caring has turned into an obsession
Not even going to mosque and giving the Allah of my confession
Can remove these excruciating and palpitating feelings that suck the life out of me
Why do i care about what a word or an action might mean ?
And continue to agonize over until i’m on the brink of insanity ?
There are many days i wish i did not feel, or think or care at all
Then perhaps life would be easier,
And i wouldn’t continue to fall
Maybe i’m i love with the idea taht somehow things will go my way
Somehow i’ll get my happy ending
And somehaow nothing will go astray
Why can’t i numb these racing thoughts and put a stop to a timer that’s ticking within my mind ?
Why do i care so much if i’m not on the same page as everyone else ?
And force myself to speed up time
I ask myself why i care
And the only answer i can come up with
Is because i do
And unfortunately
So do you......
Same😭😔🥺
She gets me so much. It's like she's toking about me
Klauawkcakap apaapajumpasysemmuka tanya
First we need to accept that we care alot about the one who don't even think about us
Seat alone. Do one wants to sit me . It’s ok. What you did know..God had special seat; angels were around. With smile on my face. Thank you Heavenly Father for sending blessings and love and forgiveness and grace . Amen
Is it okay with you if I use 'Not Good Enough", 'Self Issues', and this poem for my assignment in my Literature class? I will of course give you full credit and leave links for others to be able to view your channel.
((I apologize if this sounds weird or rude, for I have never asked for permission of showing of work. I also am socially awkward so I have trouble creating sentences and making them sound right, so please know that I am trying to not sound weird or rude.))
It feels as tho i can never win
That's cause, i cant. I cant win on my own, and im alone. Everyone seems to be leaving
I love you so much
Talk to me... God...me...us!♥️ I do care♥️
You deserve the last bench, but I was there
Osama
You can not be calm down except the treatment,
First like and comment
good
I love this!! Would I have your permission to use this for my solo this year?
Sure :)
Different people, who raised you, you gave them frown
Yessss y do I care..damn it..
NYS SIS..................''
Make you soulclean
If you know how much pain i hold behind my smile, you will never leave me.. But i don't want to houstage you to my pain, goodbye
I'm sorry🙏 I shared your video on my tiktok page the message in the video was too good to be ignored 🥺 🙏
Camille I have saved this for you for court
Be calm,
Shadow bugs
Wow! That was so great Mel! very relatable and I love how you read it. I actually love writing poetry as well and I noticed I wrote a piece as well titled, "Why Do I Care?" so if you'd like to check it out here it is and I find the themes very similar:
Why Do I Care?
Anxiety can turn me into a silent film
Only to be viewed from a far not heard
No sound
Just silence
Picking up the phone, but no one is on the other end
Only there is someone there, too quiet to hear
Too sad to even want to listen
They just keep staring at me, what do they want?
Are they judging me just to expose my insecurities to their fullest?
But why does what you think matter so much to me?
It doesn't really matter if you don't love me for who I am that's not my problem it's everyone else's...
...Right?
So why then...
Why do I care?
Why?
Why?
Thank you very much! I'm happy to hear that you liked it! :D I just read your poem and I think it's amazing! Very true and I like the way you wrote it
Oh you're welcome :) and thank you! I'm happy you like it! I actually want to do spoken word poetry too and I really love the way you make these, it just feels so nice seeing similar content that I want to do, makes it feel like a realistic goal!
@@jirosense7228 No problem! You should definitely start doing spoken word poetry :) I'm sure many people will enjoy listening!
@@MelsThoughts Thanks! That's very encouraging of you, well if I do I'll be sure to let you know :) there's just so much emotion you can put into it that way, and having a real audience as well!
No problem!
If your reading this I hope you have good day
Maybe my love is not good enough for your soul. I'm extremely sorry about that.
I love you and your poetry and im here waiting for you babe please dont let me die is it really you i swear all thats on mind is you call me dont be scared pmease
this is no nice ❤️
Thank you!
Rosie
I dedicate a song for you, which I like very much
I know that sorry for you help me
Why does things Mean more than understandning?
Why does People sometimes choose money over love, over others!?
I asked myself that same question ! Not even money , but stuff ? They talk about love then gut you after you do everything to be closer to them.
No text back
why do i care
What's your name who is reading this crazily amazing I feel what you're saying every single word it's like you're reading my mind it's like you're reading my heart and soul how can this be like this it doesn't make sense to me unless you my love and somebody else is reading what you wrote at least that's how I feel it it is like because I feel like she's writing talking about me and she doesn't know me so how would she know how it I'm thinking I think it's you and maybe it's you and your writing this and she's reading what I'm thinking and how I'm feeling whoever's doing this poem your amazing voice I could hear it in your expression and in your pain I could hear my love in your voice my love for my girl who I will always love in my life forever
comparison as social creatures 😣
I love you, what can I do for you
Uff.....
È una persona come me che ha visto l'ultima ora della sua vita. Capisce benissimo che la vita un istante e che non fare mai tanti conti a lungo e fare quello che desideri e quando tocca l'amore e se va bene va bene se non va bene non va bene e non bisogna prendersela. Dico un'altra volta troppi calcoli è troppo stupida. A una persona come me ha visto l'ultimo ora della sua vita coi suoi occhi ingiustamente. Non si dtressa Per amore o per altre cose le vede le cose come vanno cosicché troppi calcoli troppo calcoli portano pure troppo stress io questo stress non lo porto nemmeno se vado a notare quei pesci cani cosicché troppi calcoli troppo esaurimento io a questo persona quali faccio i complimenti perché così che io mi sento contenta solo a vedere questa persona e non ho bisogno di niente di più se non è possibile ed è questo il motivo che tanta gente va in depressione. Io entro in acqua alle 6 di mattina con l'onda 120 noto 30 metri lontano dalla riva ho 50 m e non mi stresso perché la morte passa una volta e basta. Chi si stressa perché non ha tutta questa pratica mia cosicché io non nuoto poco ma per tre ore che ti potrebbe mangia tutti i pesci cani che stanno lì dentro tutte chiacchiere e tute stupidate perché domani mattina anche se c'hai i soldi soldi puoi avere un incidente e andare nell'altro mondo cosicché troppi calcoli e troppa stupidità. se la persona mi dice non mi dare fastidio Allora mi allontano ma non deve credere che mi sta esaurendo la vita perché io mi diverto perché amo una persona. se quell'altra persona lo vede come un gioco e non mi dice non mi dare fastidio perché non è normale ma io penso che quella persona lì è più che normale ma non ha l'esperienza della mia vita certe esperienze potresti fare pure il 10 scuole ma non ce la fai a stare dentro e si chiama più o meno intelligenza emotiva c'è si ottiene solo nel campo della Battaglia e non è libri di scuola
Dear I love u so much cutie pie
Do you want stories
If you gave them respect you would have seen me
why do you come to me
Coz your trying to get under my sleeves
Who da fuck dislike this?
Lol exactly!
siapa yang kesini gara" ma'am tj?
ano ba yong pinagsasabi mo di ko maintindihan basta ang alam ko love you too di ba sabi ko huag ka nang magiisip matulog ka ng mahimbing ok
Why do u sound like my story animated
Ifij sad realy sad bb hug me imiss you you dont com
You don't need to care
This is sad
Why should you study
Where you care how I can't understand pretend you fellow different cultures Muslim you one of India rich people me different cultures you could not my follow up evan many can't tell open heart me pour person not available necessary