Maybe I Am Lonely│Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 7 мар 2018
- I wrote this while feeling an intense loneliness and it pretty much wrote itself. Sometimes we can be surrounded by loved ones, have many friends, or a special someone, and yet still feel so alone.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
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Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
"I'd rather disappear and go silent than feel like I'm bothering some one" i can relate to this and I'm still trying to figure this out.
Oh yes it's very hard to feel that way and I've been trying really hard not to do that these days
Here too...
Same here.
Same
Love apples
"I sigh when I see a group of friends having the time of their lives or couple holding hands" that's me, then I try to cover my jealousy.
“I hesitate to call or send a message because I feel like I’m annoying “ god I absolutely felt that , like 100% of the time which is why I hardly do it anymore 🙁
This is exactly how I feel
Same :(
hey love 🦋🖤
“If you’re sad remember you’re just having a bad day not a bad life “
“I don’t know you but I love you “💖🖤🐝
Sincerely
just a little reminder 🖤🍓🍇🐛
Oh this is nice..
Why doesn't the sad day want to end😔
I love you mel
"Not wanting to become clingy and dependent on others for a piece of happiness" This is one part I relate too, and I'm trying my hardest not to cling to others..
hey! you just gave words to my inner person now i can hear myself..
Haha, that's great!
Holy crap. That’s probably the most relatable poem I’ve ever heard! Bout word for word. Thanks for the smile at the irony!
Lovin’ these poems! Please, keep em coming
Aww thanks!
Elan life best Holland nicht singe ich tamil Mann spricht
@@MelsThoughts i can relate 💯🔥😢
I understand the feeling, I feel it too. Thank you for saying the thing I cant put it in words
Nur Syarah Adiba You're welcome :) I'm glad to hear that you liked it!
I always feel alone. I always wanna call someone to feel better, but don't wanna be a burden. It's hard for me to share my thoughts when I'm too deepen with my emotional thoughts. I have friends, but who knows if they see me as their friend. I'm lonely.
I'm sorry to hear that :( I've been feeling the same lately. I want to reach out to friends, but then I hold back because I feel like they won't want to talk to me. It's a hard and lonely thing to go through
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Your not alone.....
I feel the same way....
Thank you ❤ I've been feeling this poem a lot these days
@@MelsThoughts You can really feel the emotions
I'm glad to hear that :) I try my best to write how I feel
Whoever feels like this, don’t be sad, just be yourself and always remember, you are loved and you are loved because you are precious and because you are special! 💖🥰
I've said every word u spoke this whole year. Every day. Every moment
I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing person and anyone who knows you in life are blessed your words make me feel like I'm not alone thank you so much Mel. 😎 a kindrid spirit.🙏
Those words are so relatable, I also don't wanna bother anyone when my closest people misunderstood me, rather it feels better to disappear. Thanks a lot for the poem :)
This poem has touched my heart. This is how I feel but never could describe it.
Wow!! Beautiful. I can relate.
Goodness... You are totally my soulmate... You are expressing my feelings that even I can't express... I'm a poet too... But I've never got enough words to explain me... But today listening to your poetry made me cry, not because you are like me, but because you could express me... The way I also couldn't... I love your poetry... Thanks for writing this...
maybe i don't belong..maybe i'm afraid of being forgotten and replaced...
mapuh kerah ghinii..
huaaaaa...TOKSE DOHHHHH...
PADE GU..TOKSE DOHHH..
Peritt
Simply amazing~mel....luv it👍
I am bawling my eyes out rn, this is so fuxxing relatable
What you said about feeling like you are bothering someone is what I feel all the time... I love your poetry. I write poetry too, keep it up.
This is actually beautiful!
I wish I impress people through my videos as you impressed me!
🐣
Thank you very much! 😊 I'm happy to hear that you liked it!
You literally just said everything I’m going through. I’m not good with saying what I feel. But Loneliness is the worst
Thank you, Melissa 💜 you hugged me
This is the same feeling I'm going through. Even though I didn't get the answers I needed at least I know I am not alone. Thank you.
This touched my heart❤
I'm in tears, thank you for this.
You're very welcome! :)
This is so relatable.
I have this one on repeat! I can relate so much, I really love your work. It’s beautifully done.
Love it 😊
Thank you!!!
I send you love.xx I have seen the darkness of loneliness
Why i found you this late ??
All these lines ,it' like i'm feeling them in my skin,as i go through the same...Thank you so much for voicing out so many people's feelingz into words..
This video brings me tears😳Please don't stop doing videos
you have a beautiful story to tell
God! Stop being so relatable😥😟😭Finally...you express what I really wanted to say Thank you😊
I feel like u r speaking my inner words ... u r jst amazing
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
I love this, thank you.
Live Happy Thank you for checking it out! 😊 you're very welcome!
Thanks for sharing my thoughts to me❤️
I feel exactly same....each words decribes me....!!!
I love this. Something I can resonate.
I am connected to this
This melt my heart
Soooooooooo relatable!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
i feel this so much .... 😥
you can feel lonely even if your with someone that's the scary part.
You’re right, I’m married for 24 years and most of the time I feel lonely
This hit me hard.. very relatable
Each and every word said here relates to me… i wish that i could meet the person who has written this …😞
'Loneliness brings along jealousy'. That's true, sometimes I compare my life to other. It's like I hurt my self. Loneliness is nothing, my mind said. But deep my heart can't lie.
That's exectly what i feel and i could never describe it
I really hate myself
I love your peoms keep going ♥️
It's really amazing poem..
Your poem hit me this is me 😢😢😢
Every words that you've said hits me:
Why it is so relatable
You need a friend, I'll be that person. BECAUSE, I believe you're a blessing whether your happy 😊 or sad 😥. Everyone is precious & unique in your own way. And You're truly, deeply respected & appreciated by the one's closest to your heart. Never underestimate your value, worth. BECAUSE, whenever your not around, you're truly missed. Everyone has issues. And sometimes (friends) may seem neglectful,but I believe they're having problems also. You're a blessing not a burden. And if you need,time for yourself cool. But don't distance yourself. BECAUSE, family & true friends will always be there holding your hand & waiting. If you feel lonely, do whatever you can to improve that situation. Fill your life with friends, hobbies, projects. Engaged yourself with things, you like doing. Don't ever give up, because life is a beautiful thing. And situations change , just like the weather. We all experience the ups & downs about life. Nomatter the situation, we're stronger than we think. And nomatter where you're at, Theirs someone that appreciates & recognize (you), as a precious friend. Have faith & cling to hope. It will guide& maintain your strength & courage. God will listen & bless your life with the things you deserve. You're worthy of kindness, respect & friendship. You just have to believe in yourself.
This is exactly me, every single word describes me perfectly
I can relate so much, thank you!
No thank you for checking it out! :)
wow i never related to anything more than this. this is written really awesome.
Thank you very much!
Art❤️
Mel mitch and I love your poems butbi know how you have felt in my years long time ago but with Gods helped me I'm so.much better but everyone gets depressed one time another if they say they dont say they dont telling you the truth cause everyone gets that way one time or another but it isn't exactly depression is it but it ant I forget what the dr cause that but everyone has been though it so I'm proud of you whatvyiu have complexed you on the race so stay girl I'm very proud of you me and mitch is both is so keep writing the poems and we will keep reading them im.proud of you my friend thanks
Wish I had someone who could read my mind like you.. THANK YOU!!!
I’d rather disappear and go silent than feel like I’m bothered someone “... oh this talks to me 🙌🏾
Me too..
The words in this poem were one of the last words or sentences that XXXTENTACION aka X the late rapper whose death was unxpected said before his death and it makes me feel lighter that my name sake MELISSA wrote most of them in this poem coz l felt dead after his death coz he really motivated me and made me feel loved and less alone but ever since he died l have never felt the same I was heartbroken coz he really motivated many depressed youths like me but now am looking up to ur poems coz they legit remind me so much about him😞😕😭😭🤧
RIP XXXTENTACION 💗💯
I feel this too
Wowww. Thanks.
"i sigh whenever i see a group of friends having the time of their lives.." and then i started crying
this touched me
❤❤
Same feeling🤞🤗
This is exactly what I feel.
This is nice. I might have to start posting my own I have a book of them.
You should!
This touched my heart
Beautiful words
Thanks for listening :)
In the depths of solitude, a lonely soul resides,
Embracing the silence, where darkness quietly hides,
A yearning for connection, a longing to be seen,
Loneliness, a companion, where the heartache convenes.
In the vast expanse of emptiness, a void unfolds,
Where echoes of laughter and warmth have been untold,
The stillness engulfs, a silent symphony,
Loneliness dances, in melancholic harmony.
No footsteps to follow, no hands to hold,
Loneliness, a companion, in stories left untold,
Aching for understanding, in a world so vast,
Seeking solace amidst the shadows that contrast.
Yet, in this solitude, a strength takes root,
Loneliness, a muse, where resilience takes pursuit,
A self-discovery in the quiet and the plight,
Finding solace in one's own company, day and night.
Loneliness, a teacher, revealing truths untold,
Deepening empathy and compassion, to behold,
A gentle reminder of our human connection,
To reach out and bridge the gaps of isolation.
In the depths of loneliness, a seed of hope is sown,
For amidst the solitude, growth begins to own,
For in this journey, where the heartaches persist,
We find the strength within, to rise and persist.
So embrace the solitude, let loneliness be,
A catalyst for introspection, for the soul to see,
That in the midst of loneliness, we are not alone,
For empathy and understanding will guide us home.
This feeling where you with friends but still feel lonely
Sometimes when you share your deeds what you have done is batter then to keep it because you said you have a family and a few friends but because of that happen you are not ok and feeling alone you need to talk instead to keep. That’s better for you live a batter life which you and everyone deserve
🤧😭😭😭i m already crying
Open your heart
You need your soulmate and it could be the best thing because a soulmate will love you for who you are.
Every words are relatable!!Hey, are you me??🥺
I believe it
I'm not feeling useless but I'm just feeling like I will annoyed someone even with just my existence in the same room so yes maybe I am lonely
I relate to this so much its sad.
this is soo me...
I love you mel
Mom: are you ok?
Me: yeah, I'm ok.
Mom: I'm glad you're ok
Me: 🙃
thank you
NightMaiden Any time 😊❤
this is so true. Even though I'm surrounded by family and I have a boyfriend, I still feel lonely.
I really relate to how you feel. And I love what you do. Inspiring me. I wondered what kind of microphone 🎙️ and program you use to speak and edit? Either way, I hope you are okay, and not just okay, but really truly okay 🤍😔😌
I'm in tears right now because it's looks like this poetry was about me. 😥😥😥💔💔💔
Don't cry, but at least you know you're not alone with this feeling
Just enjoying the travel have the fun not easy but trying to take it easy it's normal ready to me.
If I can yiu can right? just throw thats words pick what you want stick,it its free to everybody.
You will neither be replaced or forgotten bcz now you are reason of my life
I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘
Never lose hope
A very warm thanks to you from India.
Thank you!
Your company is my best priority
We are not alone😥❤️
It was me.❤ maybe I'm a weird human being. I prefer to distance myself to my family, friends and everyone else. I don't know how to be me to anyone. I don't want anyone to judge me as I am. I can relate on this.Maybe I have to find myself alone. So when the times come and I'm ready to talk to someone I won't hide my true feelings anymore.💙🙏
I find my cat as a distraction to my loneliness, but in the middle night, i cant distract it.
Not everyone wants to leave,they figure you don't give a damn about them anymore, so why try, it hurts to love and be turned down
story of my life
Ur voice is vry nice
From India
Just be u inspiration comes standard