Will You Remain │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 11 мар 2018
- People walk in and out of our lives and we wonder whether or not someone is worth the fight and the effort. So sometimes we just need to step back and see if someone really is meant to be by our side.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user luckylittleraven
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
Poetry is not just words, but also the silent voice that speaks to our soul!
The mind that thinks about this is really great,we go through these things but can't pen them down not untill someone does it for us
U really speak my emotions,and u make me cry because i find myself in allmost every word u say..i m crazy abbout somebody but she just keep slipping away every day..and it makes me crazy..but i dont want to be pushy because i will lose everything i am going crazy in my head but hope only remains...i love u keep doing what u do best..your text kill me inside and then they fix all pieces back together..
How did you know my exact situation? It was wonderful. It was almost like you gave a these effed up emotions inside a voice. Thank you. And wonderful.
You're very welcome :) I'm glad I could help give your emotions a voice. It's hard to put how we feel into words sometimes. Thanks again!
I gonna choose to walk away forever. They said letting is the hardest thing to do and letting go is another way to say I love you have peace and be happy forever. It is not that easy but I know you can do it.
Exactly this feeling r in my mind also. u r nt hppy nd sad hopes r wait n watch
Great poem so glad you shared it had to watch it 3 times you are a great writter so nice to meet your channel
Thank you!
Sometimes you are helpless to control things yes well said “don’t look at my way “ good 👍
It touched my heart❤
You'd think I should've lost feelings by now but no, my feels grew deeper. I can't imagine him not being in my life. Through the good and the bad, it doesn't matter as long as you're here fighting for yourself and know that I'll be here waiting.
Well going through this too, n as much as I want to let my man go I can't I love him so much to such an extent that I hate it
Wow!
Sad.
Sometime warn memories is strength to keep us move forward to good .
This is exactly how I feel right now...
I understand how you must feel since I've been feeling the same way
Guys feel the same too...
I have started hard struggle to attain supporting things to help our survival
I am also going now for such towards Nishtar Colony.
I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
My God so hard because I'm not sure but the think I know it has to be you in these poems it's you every freaking word and that's exactly how I feel it's like a freaking weird trip in the magic that's not real and it's obviously real because I'm watching it I'm listening to it that it seems so crazy like someone's reading my mind and going through my heart and soul and putting it down on a poem
Quite hard to smile while you have much pain in you heart. This situation is killing
Why u now thinkingmypain
Yes agree 100%what fate will choose
I am here all ways
Yes
A boy had been flirting with me said he loved me and when i finally figure out that i love him too and tell him over a text i get to know that i was too late he had a girl now and everything change we don't talk we don't touch we don't look at eachother and I feel like i am missing a thing all the time though i don't say anything i don't want to distract him from his life to care for mine i have no idea if his ever going to talk to me or if his at all going to be in My life but I hope!
I won't say that what your saying is exactly what I feel, but I will say its very close cuz nobody can feel the same you can feel something similar to eachother but never the same hope it makes sense....
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Hey thanks so much for this video but love hurts so so bad 💔
Most of this it’s not your choice but the destiny no one do anything.
For as an example I am a mum of three kids very very difficult for me if I were there in the prime of the poem .
So batter to walk away forever
Open door♥️
No friends to let through, and there wouldn't be bumps ups & downs if I didn't forget 8 we are both experiencing new emotions u & I have learned not be what we were the most, y couldn't we do that together? U know all I ever want is to see u smile but if I don't make u happy then we need to go our separate way no sense in trying to please someone who u can't
IM HERE, I CHOSE A LONG TIME AGOTO BE HERE IVE NOT LEFT BECAUSE MY HEART MY SOUL AND ALL THE THINGS I SEE FOR US IN MY HEAD.OUR TOUCHING TRUSTING PASSION AND GO TO BED AND SEE WHAT WE CAN MAKE OUR NEXT DAY INTO , IM SURE WE WILL ENJOY THE SUNSETS , HAVING FUN DOING ANYTHING WE CHOOSE WAKE UP WITH THE BRIGHT NEW DAY AND NEGATIVE ENERGIES LONG GONE, I THINK IT GONNA BE FUN GETTING TO KNW EACHOTHER!!! I LOVE YOU MY SWEET CREATIVE HUBBY
Ek glo dit is nog die verlange en hoop na jou verlede. Mag jou ongelooflike seer van die verlede genees word met nuwe liefde, dit is al wat daardie wonde sal genees. Tot jy nie toelaat om daardie wonde te genees met n nuwe toekoms vol nuwe liefde nie sal daardie wonde oop bly en nooit genees nie, al doen jy wat.
Fine
Find me to explain me all that.You too scary.Be confident and remember:Be sweet to me.I'm waiting for you.
huaaaaaaaa
I'm sure she be round to see you.
Plz I will never wanna lose you or leave you and when you threaten me it's create stabbing pain in my heart ....
I will die ...if you leave ......I have been waiting since our misconnection to adopt you after exams
Stop doubting me even at this late hours am still with you and oh your confused love is dragging me down to unknown basement.
Im staying with u
I wanna come close to you and love my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
Its too late 4 anything... final decision made. I will try find a way to get u all out.
I won't wait for you, you are scolding me always, biting me always because of your failure
God it's so crazy because everything you're saying. Syl I don't know how I don't know how someone could feel like me these words that you're staying there there in neither in my heart and my soul it's crazy I can't even believe like somebody's reading my freaking mind if it's you it's our connection start Interstate Olson dinner Hearts connecting because why would someone say something and it tripping me out because it seems like it's it's something I wrote you before in these texts I am watching the same reading this I feel the same in my heart and my soul and it is cool crazy because you're staying all the words that I feel how did you know that
Hey Mel!
This Poem that you've written hits straight in the feels for me.
I was wondering if I could put this on my channel? If I can take your poem and read it like you did.
Of course I will credit you!
I've made some on my channel already if you want to check it out!
Adi uthavura mathiri Annan thambi uthavamattan
That's what I want I want both of us to run into each other's arms and hold each other forever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever and ever never let go I don't want to be without you I want to be with you until the end of my life I feel like it's the end of my life at this point not being with you I can't help that feeling I can't help feeling that Nazi truth of the matter that's the truth of it all
Mel,I have felt that way before and ant been,not too,long ago still feel that way some times but I know Mitch loves me he just got other stuff no his mind I do to but I'm,the one who,is sick and can't walk,right now now I'm,waiting to,go,to Dr and see what is going on, the Dr said it a bone out of place and then I,have lupus to that don't help anything either but I,just wanted you and everyone else to,know just cause you sick or you got something wrong with you and you love each,other that shouldn't keep you a part from the one you love thanks you listening to me my,friend ,
God made 1 person only once.
For renew Me I need to Die first
Then get up again
please forget me
Ok .. one day I will need you . Of course now also I need a partner but I don't need sexual indulgence so no one will ever be by my side .. that I know .. one day I will need aisa nahi . Bhai bahen bhi nahi h . Career nahi h . Dhan daulat bhi utnaa nahi h . Koi saath hotaa toh achcha hotaa . Wo bhi nahi h.. mummy papa getting old and I am feeling a bit weak though but what I know I can't do . I can't .. to have someone by my side ..
I have to manage alone. Then I have to .. no other way
I wish, I can. But, what I hate, is that I can't live with a toxic co worker. I hate anyone invade my privacy... if they will stay away from my privacy, I think, I can stay and work, live in peace with you...
Iloveudarling
Babe I believe in love never end.
I'm in love with you no one else.
I will never walk way from you again.
I love you so much....
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Hana Sione I loved you so much but there’s nothing more I can do
how can I trust you
My darling our love is not fragile so it's not going break for silly reasons why you are thinking otherwise
I can't let you go out of my heart it won't go you it won't go my love won't go away from you my heart and my soul and I love you more than anybody and I'm with you for the rest of my life I will do anything anything whatsoever to make us work every that is whatever you need whatever I have to do I want to be with you my heart is dying I'm not with you I can't be with you you have to make the decision because my decisions already made I want to live with you I want to be with someone to marry you I want to be with you for the rest of my life and it's up to you the rest because it's your feeling how you feel your happiness not mine that matters most yes I am feeling and it hurts like a b**** that for your happiness I would sacrifice everything of mine
Newer my. Please don't start. OK I love u more
Same things are happening here to me
But you thing that just by RUclips video you will satisfy our relationship .....you are wrong at such point
Plz adopt WhatsApp texting
I promise that you will feel better about yourself and myself my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
I love you my sweetheart Angel KD 😘💘
How are you my little friend.
I'm all yours please forgive me I love you
Yours...always...
Omg love all of your poetry’s 🥺❤️ can you share your Instagram if possible cause I’m making a video with one of your poet
How is poet
Good morning baby
sorry to say.not one time. or very time distubt make me hot temper for so many time tell them ready what i going to do them hangry now enough for me
do you love me, I think that's no
bahala ka kung anong gusto nasaktan ako pero kaya ko kasi pinasok ko alam kong mangyayari magulo ka din kagaya ko ano ba bday mo jan ako din kaya huag kang magtaka
Time islong
So me now......why????
Akatsuki Chick Understandable! It's like that sometimes :/
So true, it just sucks, especially with depression and anxiety.......people don't know how hard it really is...... :'(
Thanks for your motivation too, I liked your other videos too, they helped me out alot......
It is hard :( You want to be the best version of yourself so people will like you and you'll like yourself, but depression and anxiety do make simple things harder sadly :( No problem! Keep your head up and just know you're not alone :) I'm glad to hear my videos have helped you!
This comment last for me I no more talk anybody enough for me for all everything good bye for you tube Tamil video channel all bye
I told you many times I am not available but I stay as a friend. I am not entertataining anyone else. I just want to know lang who that guy is nagpapansin nothing wrong with that. Or I gonna close my youtube to be fair to everyone and social media. I have to focus on other things nlang.
U not understand u. Andhowareu
Oh schat toch, ik wil jou niet kwijt maar vertel me aub als je in een relatie zit wat je met mij van plan bent
What u planing now
I don't love you, don't enter into my life