Perfection │Spoken Word Poetry

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  • Опубликовано: 17 мар 2018
  • There are times when we crave too much from ourselves which results in self destruction for the unreachable goal of perfection.
    Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
    Background music from freesound.org by the user unfa
    Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

Комментарии • 42

  • @lakshitharamesh5307
    @lakshitharamesh5307 6 лет назад +14

    I see all of your videos and honestly I can relate to everything you say.....Thank you for wonderful words of wisdom 💝

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад +2

      Thank you! ❤️ I appreciate it! I always write from the heart and from whatever is on my mind so I'm glad to hear you can relate and enjoy the videos :)

  • @shylavincent2426
    @shylavincent2426 3 месяца назад

    Yes some kind of complex got into ur mind....when ur capable of doing anything..u can over come everything..be firm. U are great man...u are great....great..❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @chsiralte1406
    @chsiralte1406 5 лет назад +1

    Loved it............... 💐

  • @fleurholtman1848
    @fleurholtman1848 6 лет назад +4

    I love your videos! They inspire me so much..❤️

    • @MelsThoughts
      @MelsThoughts  6 лет назад +1

      Fleur Holtman Thank you very much! I'm glad that they inspire you ❤

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    you collapsed every family with your mind games

  • @mikebaldwin686
    @mikebaldwin686 3 года назад

    Nobody is perfect. I admire someone who is a perfectionist but those people need to rest relax let others who knows you understands you tell you how amazing you are. This so sounds like who I truly love. How I wish she let me show her she is perfect beautiful she sincerely is.

  • @sharonpiccone9094
    @sharonpiccone9094 3 года назад +2

    "I 'ALREADY' 'TOLD YOU',- I 'THOUGHT'-"YOU WE'RE 'PERFECT', HOW 'MANY 'TIMES' O I HAVE TO 'TELL YOU, YOU'RE' PERFECT, THE 'WAY YOU ARE', '"YOU'RE MY 'PERFECT', 'PERFECT' PERSON, YOU'RE 'PERFECT' TO ME!!!." I 'WOULDN'T PROBABLY, 'MEASURE UP', 'AGAIN', TO 'YOUR STANDARD'S, IF I'M 'NOT JUST TALKING TO 'MYSELF', I'LL 'ALWAYS' ,'CARE', I CAN'T 'HELP BUT 'FEEL' FOR 'YOU'!!!.."ALL, I 'EVER, WANTED TO DO, IS 'MAKE' YOU 'HAPPY', I 'WONDER', IF I 'EVEN' COULD, I'M NOT 'SURE I'M NOT 'TALKING ' TO 'MYSELF',!!!..
    WHEN I 'SEE' 'YOU', I 'FEEL LIKE THERE'S A 'SADNESS' , & I WANT TO 'REACH IN, & PULL IT OUT,TO MAKE YOU 'HAPPY', TO 'MAKE 'YOUR' 'HEART', 'SING'!!!.."OOOH LORD, I 'HOPE, I'M 'NOT RAMBLING, ON TO 'MYSELF'!!!.

  • @sarawaddington9696
    @sarawaddington9696 5 лет назад +5

    This is amazing! I would love to use this for a dance piece i am choreographing for my pre teen group. I believe your words could help them. Do you mind if I use it?

  • @mathurinmikehandy8657
    @mathurinmikehandy8657 3 года назад

    OK you win,I'm back in track.

  • @reginepadel8943
    @reginepadel8943 3 года назад +1

    Being perfection is co related of responsibilities that was given for you yet you didn't ask for it. I am already tired I really wanted to do what I want but this responsibility hinders me and paused me for I want.

  • @melindapemberton999
    @melindapemberton999 4 года назад +3

    Mel my friend you hang in there it doesn't last for ever it just seems like it does I was that way until I got sick ant in a wheel chair now it bothers me but it cant do anything a Fitbit hopefully the drs will help me get to walking I hope I know all about you think you are inprefectuonist that was me evetythng had to be just right and initsvplace but now it just bothers me that I can't do it now so its get better my.friend and yourmpoem is great keep it up my friend thanks

  • @kylespurling4898
    @kylespurling4898 5 лет назад +1

    So so right

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    There is a perfection

  • @karliingrit5781
    @karliingrit5781 5 лет назад

    🙌

  • @sabitreepanigrahi9797
    @sabitreepanigrahi9797 4 года назад

    Your every vdos make me feel like what l'm facing n going through...just love it😘but Yeah Feeling like imperfectly perfect I' m...😔

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    because of your imperfection, you destroy every one

  • @anamariemacaraeg7232
    @anamariemacaraeg7232 4 года назад

    👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

  • @winxclub6475
    @winxclub6475 4 года назад

    Perfection is not what we supposed find but sadly that the only thing we only find in ourselves

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    You don't make my heart to hate you

  • @mystiquelou1277
    @mystiquelou1277 6 лет назад +2

    You dont have to be soooo perfect dear people should like the who YOU are i happen to like nerdy people theyre interesting and different

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    Will you come to Saravana Stores

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    One option, Saravana Stores

  • @excellenthealthglobal5386
    @excellenthealthglobal5386 3 года назад

    You are my everything to me ilu ilu

  • @shylavincent2426
    @shylavincent2426 3 месяца назад

    Unni .im not in a mood to understand or grasp anything ..im desperate...disappointed..distracted.. there is a tug of war in my mind...u please don't spoil ur sleep...please go to sleep...love u so much ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @malathyvetrivel8390
    @malathyvetrivel8390 3 года назад

    Uhm ur words are tough..I need Google now😤

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    you will damage after I tell you, I love you

  • @rikabuitendag797
    @rikabuitendag797 3 дня назад

    Miskien moet jy n beter leefstyl aanpak. Die eenkeer toe ek jou gebel het het jy nie geantwoord nie. Toe stuur jy vir my n stemboodskap, in watse toestand. Ek was so geskok, nooit dit van jou verwag nie. Ek sukkel nounog om dit te verwerk. Hoekom, ek weet nie eers hoe baie keer jy in daardie toestand is nie. Die feit dat jy alleen is is jou eie toedoen. Hoe lank hoop ek dat jy jou opwagting gaan maak maar nee te vergeefs ten spyte van al jou beloftes, "I see you soon" hoeveel keer het jy my so vir n gek gehou. "I will take you out soon" ens. So kan ek menige sulke voorbeelde noem. Moet ek trots vol daaroor. As jy so min dink van my om sulke beloftes te maak en dit nooit nakom nie, hoekom gaan jy aan. Probeer jy n gek van my maak, probeer jy my treiter, kry jy genot daaruit of wat. Ek wil net vir jou sê ek het nooit getrou nie maar nooit is ek so deur n man behandel nie. Almal het my nog met respek en menslik behandel. Ek sê vandag dankie dat die Here my gespaar het van waardeur jy is. Ek het net verwag dat dit waardeur jy is jou sou anders laat optree het. Liefde word nie mee gemors nie.

  • @carolinelim8896
    @carolinelim8896 5 лет назад +4

    Do you believe miracle, it could be happened, if you have heart kind and trust God, right 😊👌

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    don't compare you with me

  • @markgrider7122
    @markgrider7122 2 года назад

    Thabks i am not depresses. I was just told it us a blessing I dodged a bullet.she whiuld not have been happy. Sorry hiw many times did i ask fir a phone call.

  • @sosower4871
    @sosower4871 4 года назад +1

    Don't believe the lies. God is the Helper. He gets the glory. Less of us and more of Him. He causes His own to be victorious Overcomers. Do it for Jesus. Yield it all over to Him. and lean not to your own understanding. Heads up. Knees down. The crown is yours. Stay focus. Have the God kind of Faith. Dismiss the lies. Love you much.

  • @aisyahbaby953
    @aisyahbaby953 3 года назад

    Nt worth it

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 3 года назад

    More studies make you

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    do you know your duties, as for your daughter, why you denied me

  • @AnonyMous-et5hp
    @AnonyMous-et5hp 4 года назад

    di kita maintindihan love mo sya bakit di ka pa makalimot bakit sinisira mo sarili mo baka magalit sila sa akin

  • @jesuanthoniyammal2832
    @jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 года назад

    I don't know who are you

  • @sosower4871
    @sosower4871 4 года назад

    You can do all things through Christ.. Who strengthens you. Give it to Jesus. He can bear it. Let Him. Besides, the burden is light when you walk it the right Way.