Perfect your common app essay at the end of this video / pt 2. of writing your essay
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- Опубликовано: 11 сен 2024
- Pt 2 of writing your common app essay tips :D; enjoy!
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► @nico.d.pie on Instagram
Disclaimer: These are only my experiences and personal suggestion, I am not a professional educator.
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Hi! My name is Shadouw and I am currently a freshmen undergrad at Northwestern University at the time of this video.
Find more information about me here: / vincent-yang-4464291bb
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Have feedback or suggestions? Email at vincentyang2026@u.northwestern.edu
you are the only person getting me through the common app essay anxiety 💀💀 thank you!!
Glad to help :D
yeah me too, same here
LOL loved the pop-up animations
You are just godly awesome, I have never heard such advice given so smoothly and consistently! I am recommending your channel and this video to all my friends applying this and next year! Please keep it up
please Don't be Dead😉😉 We need you! & Seriously what I wanna say is Hard work pays off so please don't stop trying your best to help others
At this point, you're my mentor for writing my suicide not- i mean college essays (•‿•)
love that so helpful but what if my essay is about a challenge, not an activity it's mentioned but the prompt is about my growth and self-development after a significant tough period that changed some of my perspectives and values
Should be relatively the same, you still need to show how you grew from the experience, so an anecdote after you describe your challenge should work.
lets goooo thanks for this video bro! also first
🥳🥳Nice to see you in the comments again!
Why aren’t you already famousss???
😂😔wish I knew
@@vincent_yang dw Ong that’s solid advice thank you!
Nico is so funny
I love nico
Great vid Vincent. I hope your entrance to college has been a complete mess of work and stress lol.
LOL YAHIA,
dw i move in this week, it has indeed been a mess around the house
@@vincent_yang LOL, is it just me or is time moving soo slowly, 10th grade has really put me in my place and I’m not even halfway through, what a year it’s going to be lol.
@@yahiaosman8938 💀 Don't remind me, this week has been slower and slower, time is not linear anymore
Wow
Hello! Do you read over essays? If so, could i send it to you?
Yeah same 😭
You can send it to my email if you'd like!
Would the feedback be private ? Or posted online?
@@erikalenh5
Ok so just to be completely transparent I won't share the essay publicly without permission, but as since I'm doing this for free, the amount of feedback I can provide won't be as thorough due to time constraints 😓. The exception is if it's for a video, then I can spend more time with it. (if I were to review the essay on the channel, it would be next year so no worries about that as well if you're worried about direct competition with same grade level peers)
@@vincent_yang when you put it in a video, when will we get the feedback about it tho