For You │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 14 окт 2024
- I wanted to write a poem based off of my thoughts and feelings towards someone. Enjoy! :)
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
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Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
i really love how you made a masterpiece mel
Aww thank you so much!!!
One of the best....love this so much..❤🙏
Like always, outstanding work. I always look forward to hearing your poetry; keep it coming👌🏽👍🏽
Thank you so much for the support! 😊 I will keep doing my best!
You entered my world out of the blue
And came through my door
Not as stranger
But as someone I knew
You notice my wall and I didn't run off
Once you learned the darkness inside of me
You give me tough of love and put your hands through the flames
All the name of caring
And wanting to me to win the hard level of this game
I've smiled more than I have before
And one kiss from you is all that i need to get back up and soar
Oh how I wish I can tell you how much you mean to me
But we are not together
So I'll have to wait and see what will be
Deep down in my heart I hope you're the one
The one I've been looking for
The moon of my sun
It's a bit too early to say those three words that holds so much power
So in the meantime
I will wait patiently for this love to bloom
As does a bud to a flowers
You have seen me break down in tears and my wounds, filled with pain
And yet you have to leave in my side
Because there's nothing to lose and everything to gain
Every hug from you,kiss from you and cuddle from you
Warms me up inside and are tender gestures I can't resist
So let me love,the moment and cherish the moment we share
Let me hope for something more
Let me hope for more love and care
So I'll whisper your name tonight
Before I sleep
And dream of you as one I adore
And the one I wish to keep him ❤️
Our mutual love and respect for each other out wins everything💜💚
That the most accurate statement possible about myself and my ex gf my future wife. Yeah that's it very true
This had me crying so much but it's helping me work on my self thank you so much ❤️
You do such a wonderful job expressing your feelings or other peoples feelings through poems I'm envious of your talent! Hope your doing well and keep up the great work as always! ^-^
Aww thank you so much for the kind words and support! 😊 they mean a lot!
That's so beautiful ❤️
Yes you are right and I feel you . I think if we both try to solve all of our problem then we must succeed .
Beautiful poem 💙💜💙
Thank you ❤
@@MelsThoughts you are very welcome 💖💖💖
Nice poem Mel I love your videos
Thank you very much!! 😊
That is so beautiful
Dear girl, i just love ur voice n ur lines are just so wonderful... I can even relate myself with ur words... May God bless you with lots of happiness.. Love from INDIA
Thank you so much! 😁 I appreciate the kind words!
your voice ,your words😍😍😍
Thank you 😁
Wow your voice is amazing 💖
all of yours word are meaningful for me. thanks for sharing
Thank you!
when your feeling crapy go find some one who loves you and cares and hang out with them "love always wins."
I completely agree :)
LOVE
😊🧡
Awesome.
Excellent....
You inspired me to write poems of my own I just wrote my 10th poem they could be similar to your poems because we have some things in common but I don't copy.
I'm really happy to hear that! :) keep it up and have fun with it. I enjoy writing poems because it helps me express myself
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Beautiful! 💕❤️
Thank you!! 😊😊
Good day, Mel! This is such a masterpiece. May I ask if we can use this for our project in school? We'll give full credits to where it's due. Thank you ❤️
Yes, you can use it :)
Amazing 😍😭I love this
Thank you!
WOW😍
Beautiful love poem 💞
Thank you so much
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I also have eyes and heart
I can so relate to u. I'm going through exactly same condition. I wanted him to know and to see how much pain he had given me. It's been more than a month and my wounds r fresh. Can't tell. How much pain he had given me. I can't breathe. It hurts😭it hurts so bad😢
Aww I'm sorry to hear that 😣 it is hard being in that situation but I hope things get better for you
Great as always Mel one day I hope I will get someone to stay but I don’t think that will ever happen I’m to quit for anyone to notice me
Thank you! Don't worry, in time it will happen and that person will see your worth 😊 I'm also a quiet person so I know where you're coming from but it will be okay
Mel thanks everyone tells me it will happen but I’m not sure right now I natural I’m more of a loner at school
Why. She havefill
I love this, this is so beautiful 😭, this made me think so much of my boyfriend.😭❤️
nice poem 😊
Thank you!
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Love you be strong time n tide will be in our favour
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I AM THERE BUT LORD FORGIVE ME FOR I DON T WANT TO BE A SINNER LORD YOU HAVE CREATED SOUL SO MAGICAL AND GAURD HIM WITH AN ANGEL FROM HEAVEN
You will reap what you sow
Loving massage 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘best
My love everything about you and all habit .Lobe the you laugh some warming to my heart.And the way you throw arms in air.and love way you sing and dance and silly things do .i love get me to laugh.mylove
I hope that to.
I wish I could be a great poet like you.
I'm just a poor amateur on the subject
Thank you very much :) I'm sure you've got what it takes. I just write whatever comes to mind
That's what I'm trying to do.
And your poems are so inspiring.. Please don't stop writing poems.
are you playing, am I a fool in your sight
How will I love you
Hi! Can I use this?
don't disturb me , I don't want your love
In my life I inspired by army and in tough condition remembering the great country USA.There is another part that my mind attached with USA. So without green card I am American too. It is not necessary that I reside in USA.
USA is the best observatory of the world myself highly deciplined person I served my family as a Terminator and dominating person . I can reside anywhere in this world because I know the world.
Taniah. Goodluck
Your voice is very sad he touch our hard
Who is this ??hopefully it's not who I think cause if it is iam sorry your feeling the way you feel your a good person I know !!we had fun while it lasted life isn't that bad you hear me!!!bring yourself out of this heartache you have hugs to you!
I love you
Love u sid
You are scolding me more and more, what had I done to you, how will you ask me to love you
Am I hurt you today?
All things about love I've done to you
Messages from me to you the man who I truly love I I keep waiting for you my love I always love you so much honey you are my heart beat always 🙏🌹
I do no.now what I now. U play the game
How will you scold me
The early to say ready go far forever no more options comment enough pain everything acting please stop my request don't I comment again and again
and yet...you leave
I want asked one pigged all iiiusion really fake play game with me make fill tension you why answer unsociable I know everything now come back everytime told lonely who is lonely your beautiful wife go where answer enough for me I don't want anything anybody else entry my life
Love this poem!! Hey everyone, I just posted two poems on my page and would love some feedback please. I am a first timer
I am not the cause of your failure
Call me!!!
go with your own family, not with me
Dai,NE pombala poruky valila poda,naan aduthavanoda poran nee kudukraan tarcherku ethu thaanda pathil I'm not waiting for u
I hate to hear your voice, you live with your lovers and friends leave me.you play minds game with them
All. Thank u. Misgetandmasaz