Begging For That Love │Spoken Word Poetry
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- Опубликовано: 1 дек 2017
- A poem about wanting to be loved so much by the person that catches your eye, that you slowly start to lose yourself in the process in order to obtain that love.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user bruno-ph
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx
Am I the only one who stopped for a minute and thought how accurate your words are? This was amazing.
Thank you very much! :)
I did too. Accuracy💯
Litterally my life right now
"When it could have been me, should have been me." I loved the honesty that sleeps in that line. This was an amazing piece.
VinoVenitas Thank you very much! That line was raw honesty. Life just happens with us or against us
Atleast it help me to numb the same feeling knowing m not the only one.
I completely agree with you
exactly what im going through..
I feel you, it's a tough thing to go through
Same
One of the best poems i have read in years, this particular poem perfectly reflects my emotions right now....i cried while listening to your recitation.....it was relieving to hear that my feeling of devastation could be so wonderfully resonated by someone else.....i have not spoken about my feeling even with my parents......it felt like you r the closest to my heart though u r thousand miles away.
My dear... you don’t have to beg for love. You have it in your whole being. You were created out of love and you’re not only capable of loving and be loved in return. You are love yourself. Look around you, everything speaks about love...it’s not a feeling. It’s a mystery...once you stop associating love with emotions and feelings, then you begin to see and experience what love truly is....
Mel's Thoughts,the way you beautifully put your words it's just like you're in my head,my mans words cut me deep and makes me fall deeper and deeper and closer and closer to the demons that live within side of me,my heart,and my head and I'm left alone with every emotion running faster and faster and I just scream and pray to God to just take me,take me in the night and take this pain away and let me feel love,happiness, hope,and a clear clean mind so I can love myself again.
I'm glad I could put words to your feelings and thoughts
Dont know where to start..but this is exactly the same m dealing with. Thoughtful and so true to have tears falling..
You’ve always been the one. Let your heart guide you. Not your thoughts because they will dissuade you. Do not listen to others but only your love and let your heart go back where it belongs
Love your thoughts
You write sooo nice lines!! And your voice is teaching to heart
I love this so much.
I wish you knew you are the only one I love - the love of my life. I knew it from the beginning. I hear it in every line, read it on every page, and saw it in your eyes. I want no one else but you. All can be made sense of in less than 30 min. Real talk. True love
The heading looks catchy "Begging for that love" 🙂...it is a great poem.
Its make me feel so upset makes me remember so much while listening to its many thoughts come to my mind I really loved it beautifully written..
I like it. I'd like to hear more.
I think these words really hit me hard
Cos that was wt im going through ryt at this moment..
Neither u cud xpress your feelings with all ur heart nd soul
Nor you could forget abt all the things and move on
Its just all about how can something be so beautiful nd heartbreaking at the same tym..😕😕
Me .... it’s exactly what I’ve been going through the last 7 years
I read your all poetry ..and i love all soo awesome..
Thank you!
Wow!!
This really hit me. Wow.
Express ur feelings and respect others that’s it
You don't need to beg for love. Because you deserve love. My dear.
What is for you will be for you...sometimes it isn't the right timing...anyway it's important to be honest and express your feelings, first because it's liberating and second because this person you love will be happy to know that you love him as much, and it might help him one day in darker times...let him experience what he needs to experience and if he is for you he will come back to you...and anyway we all deserve to be loved so the universe will send you someone else if you ask for it...
It's been 4 months since I first told my 6 years of crush about how I felt and he rejected,it still pains me the wounds are still fresh and I keep thinking about him every single day I cry every night to god about him.
Courage & faith is the key. Never underestimate your ability to rectify the issue. You've got to have the (courage) to face that person & tell them,"how you feel". A face to face conversation, would be more convincing,than hints. BECAUSE, maybe that person has no clue that, its legit. The best confirmation is FROM
your lips. BECAUSE,whenever (someone) hears those(3) words "I love you". Theirs no more blindness,confusion or misunderstanding. Instead theirs potential & possibilities. Faith is the next step. Being willing to take a chance with your significant other. Facing & emracing the future, together. By hoping for the best. And allowing this (dream) to become reality. Its a wonderous thing whenever you try. BECAUSE, you may find that (love) was always waiting.
Amazing truly feel ur emotions in this one keep up the gd work 🙂
I felt that man
Heart touching 😭😭😭😭
"Love, I beg for mercy"😥
Feel the same.
Such a inspiration
Thank you!
This is my favourite one 😄😍
I'm glad you like it! 😄
Wow...wow...am what a poem so sad😥
That happens its very sad becsuse nobody is really yours you share each others company if you both want it
Very nice words ❤
Thank you!
I agree with this 100 %
I'll be here you are the one
Yes
Hits hard
Give respect and take respect
I love him for almost 5 years now, he never felt the same way. Now I'll never gonna see each him again bc we start a new chapter in life (university). My biggest wish is for him to be happy.
I pray that one day you will be healed 😭I know how it feels 💔
@@fatimajidda6116 After 5 months (I wrote my comment 5 months ago) I can tell you that I'm slowly healing and am concentrating on myself right now 🥰
Hey Mell, you are awasome in writing these. Hope your subscription increase. I literally love you work.
Thank you so much!
Amen thank
love
I will never beg again for you. I wasted long enough but these were all thoughts while we were together.
Oh my God oh my God I can't believe it this is exactly how I feel I want my love back in my arms back in like life back in my world I hate that I can't be there because I'm not being believed like a whole liar and it kills me and it hurts like hell
I am not addicted to that love, I have recovered from them, I don't like to live with the people as you
But you are the one l made that clear to you. When we were together didnt you realize it x
Dear...pray is the best way..coz God take care everyone heart...soul...just keeping pray...take action...then let God answer ur pray...never given up or in....pray with pure heart...clear n clean..i wish one day u get what u want...coz sometime u think he good for u buttttt God prepared u more better then him u nuver expect...💖💖💖💖always
I agree on the never give up part as far as god is considered i couldn't care less we make our oh choices we choose we want to be with no one else but us chooses well... Unless our familys (Try) and make us marry someone tho even then you can rejected it think about that next time you think this so call God chooses for us
I am your bigest fan
Aww thank you
Begging someone .....then he doesnt really wAnt you...reality is hard and you cry
Yes I feel the same for you.You just don't know how much life damaged me.If I'm still living it's not because of me.I was tired of living.I wanted to die so bad,but GOD still kept me alive.You just don't know how much I love you.You are my pride.
Is for you 💬❤
100% exactly
I forgot about that love, I feel fear about it
Baby I still love you won’t leave you
You’re my life I’ll wait for you! Don’t give me up cuz I love you so much!! ❤️
Nice
I can relate 🙄
Yes I'm the one I lov you xx
I'm here I didn't leave
You wanna me to disbelieve my eyes and believe written words!¡¡Convence me that you can hurt any one for me,can you send anyone a bad word now to satisfy me?
A year doing nothing but hurting me.You know why you feel all this 💕?coz I never hurt you and I won't
I feel the same i love you. Oh it me talking to you.
Goodbye. 🙏😢💔💜💙
Ok❤️❤️❤️💕💕
Why God allows me to wake daily and long for someone. The same someone he allows to wake daily to hate me.
😢😢😢😢😢no dont leave me dont go away i love u i just dont know what to do if u walk away i will never b the same again u are the one who helps me up all the time when i am down noone believes me everyone thinks i am mad n i gave in to it dont know what to do anymore please dont play with my feeling s if u dont love me go but if u do stay with me love u
Its ok,
So I know this is for a relationship between partners, but to me this reminds me of my relationship with my bio dad.
This is for camille to hearing them
Wlasnie kazdy tak samo czuje i kiedy nadaza sie okazja zeby to wyjasnic to wiekszosc wymieka i ucieka od tej drugiej polowki zamiast stawic czola temu wsztkiemu powiedziec sorry przyznac sie do winy to jeszcze lepiej dokopac jak psu przybledzie na ulicy kopa w tylek i powiedziec paszol wont a potem ludzie maja rozdarte serce i nocami ciagle placza smutne czasami jest zycie czlowieka.
I love you elise
Arre baba. . I am here .. I am not thinking about anyone else .. pr I know that jo honaa mushkil mujhse usme how can I say yes .
I do feel love for you I do love you please forgive
I love you My Honey♾👣 Thank You for choosing Me as your Lifelong Partner💍🔐🌎 I truly adore you in every way possible😍🥰😘💜💚👫🐞🐸♥️🐻
It's yours
Not even coment, have a nice day
I'm sorry Chris please forgive
Message for u my love 🙏🌹
I have tolerated this for long u heard about my ex that makes me feel bad I'm only and single forever if u rejected my love
If someone read this comment please rply me i love her so much I cant even think live without her I lost my friend everything for now she keep ignoring me when I ask her what happened she say nothing what should i do
What happened to you dear
@@lightningstrike9369 thank you for your concern alhamdulillah i am good have a nice day 😊
1:40
Maybe I'm not the one who's suffering from this
My dear istill love you i can't not leave you,i care you everyday
Thats no love online
Baby I feel the same way as you.
I love you with all my heart.
No one else but you.
Babe I need you in my life.
👫❤💝💙💋💋💋💋💋💖
Haha funny really
It's your that's stopping us not minr
I trying but I’m giving up no response ever 💔💔💔💔
Me
لا استطيع التحكم بمشاعري لا ادري يأتي الي ويزول ويأتي لاتعلم سنين طوال عجاف احتاجك احتاج عناق يمحو هذا كله لم اعد اعرف كيف نتواجه كيف تتحكم بمشاعري افتقدك كثيرا بكل جوارحي اعذريني مااردت أن تعلمي مامر به من شده الالم اتمنى لك حياه جديده وان تقدري تضحيتي لك ilove yo bb
Nadikavel M R Radha
Tell me what you need you won't tell me can't read your minf
I am loneliest elephant 🐘 .No one is with me so you don't worry.you are a 🦌 deer many of are also deer.Myself resides very far away you can't reach to me.you all live peacefully because no one can catch me.
I love you can I see you today
One time I dissertation nothing else I don't want anybody's else entry my life I one answer only one more person entry disturb why I tell seriously some more disturb why I don't know
You will go insane .. only lust will satisfy you .. nothing else can ?
Already due to this you have made too many mistakes
Do you want to make more ?
You meet me once please .. I am here only .
All I can tell .... you r love of my life .....
Call me ، text me , before I leave .,,,
I love you very much so .... I don’t know
Why ????
don't from me, since your sins are somany,