the original plot of Zootopia of the tame collar :part 2, the taming party
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- Опубликовано: 30 мар 2023
- the original story of Zootopia was sad and wild, in this part I show you the tame collar party that made us all cry,
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#storytime #animation #zootopia
the scene that may have happen after the tame party
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7:46 Nick’s collar glowing yellow after the little bear gets shocked … What a way to convey that he’s holding back tears. Ugh, my heart!
He wasn't the only one
I wasn't holding back my tears :(
I'd like to think the adults in the room had their collars turn yellow since of course, this "taming party" would mark the last time they would be allowed to feel their emotions to the full extent.
The taming party reminds me of those engagement parties where you drink alcohol and spend time with your friends
@@Main_Creator07 indeed
"With This collar, Zootopia Accepts me."
One of the biggest God Damned Lies in this version. But it makes for an excellent experience for Judy to witness.
“The Land of the Free” -song written in *1814*
I don't want to be that guy that makes the sad scene sadder. But I think another way to look at this that's equally if not more heartwrenchingly bleak is that the line isn't actually a lie. Literally speaking at least it's completely true. "With this Collar, Zootopia Accepts Me" and they do, they accept him as a "Proper Predator citizen" in their Civilization. And so with it he is treated like every other "Proper" Predator Citizen with the same laws, rules, and consequences. Even as a child. The statement IS true,....it's just incomplete:
"With This Collar Zootopia Accepts You".
*Without it, they don't.*
@@Nobody0333 well i mean not exactly the same laws, rules and consequences since they do treat prey better as said in the earlier video, so it is a lie.
@@maexslg-at It's never said Zootopia would accept them as equals to prey though, only accepted period. Prey is certainly treated differently if not better but as a Predator citizen, technically the rules are the same for all of them regardless of age, species, or even to an extent behaviors, it's just that the collar has to be involved
Poor little bear
The taming party scene is the thing that completely convinced me that I want some sort of a spinoff or an alternative universe thing with this story
Prequel energy honestly
instead we got zootopia abortion comic
@@RamoneKemono😂😂😂😂
YES PLEASE
original zootopia: racism takes many forms, quietly
this one: RASICM IN PLAIN SIGHT.
i think the original zootopia is how it was in the mid 19th century, and the release is modern society
yeah this ones straight up slavery levels of racism, no sugar coating or anything
@@monbub im not gonna sugar coat it
"F"
Literally institutionalised slavery
@@aeneas.csproj I mean I disagree as a black person that lives today in America. We might not have physical collars that shock us when we are too emotional, but we do have consequences for expressing strong emotions that other groups of people don’t have to deal with specifically white people, so I actually think the tame collar is a great allegory for racism today and how that affects people of color and how it stifles us and what we’re allowed to do and feel and say
Honestly this version of Zootopia sounds *a lot* more interesting than what we got in the end.
I especially like the darkness of the "you can't be yourself" plot point. If this version of the movie was released, it would probably be near the very top of my list of favorite movies.
We really could've gotten something special. Even though the released movie is still good, it feels very tame/generic in comparison.
tame indeed
Agreed. I like the movie we got, but DANG does this version capture my attention and make me feel twice as much.
The fact we got a ""tame"" version of the movie instead of this does feel incredibly ironic and perhaps even a bit telling.
tame huh...there's a metaphor in here somewhere
Sameeee
I actually like how more complex Nick's morality is in this version.. i think the final film would have been better if they had put more focus on the motive for his crimes like they do here. In this version, nick breaks the law to help preds or out of very visible neccessity. It's a lot more clear how messed up the system is if you are a predator.
They even use one of the antagonists to give sympathy to in the 'taming party' which is interesting since Judy would have probably seen him as 'another predator criminal' (like nick) beforehand.
I dont think the Polar Bear is much of a villain.... he's a mafia boss yes, but he was betrayed (allegedly) by Nick. Thing is, even with his money he lent a helping hand to Nick. He has morality, he sees himself in Nick, and honestly, he's a chill dude. =]
Much better then the stupid twist villain plot in the final product
Omfg i want this movie so bad this is tugging at my heartstrings so haaaaard.
SAMEEEEEE
the original movie's pretty good, but if THIS was released . . . oh my gosh, i'd pay millions.
I'd go to cinemas to watch this version of the movie completed. I'd pay the price.
wE dO nOt CuSs In ThIs FaCiLiTy
Saaame. In my opinion, this is better.
lets make it a animated Movie, lets do it !
damn bro, this is hella dark, but hella good. i would totally watch this movie if it were real
Fr
ME TOO!
fr
Well.. zootopia 2?
@@ali1ff3 nah too late
The taming party... I shed a tear...
The scarped sounds so much better than the official. But it would have been too dark and disturbing for little kids to watch.
“With this collar, Zootopia accepts you.”
God this hits way too deep.
@@airlynaces Zootopia but Arstotska
I don't think this would of been too dark for kids really, specifically I find you really underestimating how smart children can be. Well, atleast in my country.
But I understand it's a worldwide thing, not everyone the same and it's a must for the animators to tone it down for the weak hearted.
I guess our nation is too desentized to get scarred no longer
@@Dead8Head As a kid myself (13 years old) I acknowledge how smart kids can be. But I know some kids would have been scared to the bone with the original plot (some other kids would have loved it, for example: ME >:D ). Also DISNEY is supposed to be kid friendly (correct me if I'm wrong), this would have been way too disturbing for DISNEY. I think that's why it was deleted.
@@veronica3662 leave it to Dreamworks, the Anti-Disney
6:49 this scene made me shed tears. It hurts so much
I know! I knew what was gonna happen and I still wanted to cry
Ikr. Like man, just, “whats wrong papa?” and his little look of just.. pain and hurt. God. That hurt
I genuinely love how he sounds so disappointed in the Zootopia accepts you line, because it isn’t true, and because of that, he needs to see someone he deeply cares about get hurt
Right??
Now I would want someone to make a fan made Zootopia movie with this plot.
eeeh probably takes too much budget, plus it'll look like they're milking it for tickets.
An alternative comic, however...
There’s a fanmade Zootopia sequel somewhere thougg
Honestly id be satisfied with a good ao3 writer retelling this story, as long as its faithful to the plot of the original lol
@@WORMPONY im p sure i saw a whole ass fan-made movie on youtube, so someone should call them and tell them to make this story real
@@monbub Yeah I saw that too!
Kazlov is such a great character in this version.
Ehrm, actually, it’s spelled Kozlov🤓🤓🤓
@@Authentic_American Koslov 😅
''we have to move on'' EXCUSE ME I WAS CRYING
SMAE BRO😭😭😭😭
The Russian Bear has to be my favorite! He's basically holding back emotion knowing he'll get electric shocked and that his son is now apart of this broken society.
Top tier Dad in my opinion
God the papa bear's delivery when giving the speech and trying to sound happy but struggling is top notch.
7:46 btw
They can only give you a subdued look of despondency, but the yellow collars betray their deep anguish. Even as an animatic, this moment will be seared into my memory as the defining moment of Zootopia. I didn't cry over the original movie, but this animatic had me bawling.
What's animatic
@@Fu9280 An animatic is a rough version of an animation; often not fully rendered, animated, and is oftentimes made as a draft for actual animations. This means that the colors could be either minimum or have a lack of it; scenes will look choppy and unfinished; along with inconsistent, sketchy lines, and others. I'm late, but I do hope I helped even a bit!
@@TelevisionNTheatre why thank you!
@@Fu9280 You're welcome!
It would be nice if they made an alternative film with this plot line. And just have it rated for older audiences rather than kids younger than 12.
Absolutely
yes it will be better!
Fr. When it came out, I doubt I would have preferred this, but it just seems so much more exciting now. The official is a great movie itself, but compared to this, it could definitely have been better
disney would never do that but i agree, its a great idea
I always felt Zootopia was a little too safe. This could have been challenging and poignant for audiences
I don’t think shying away from the darker aspect is a bad thing. It wouldn’t have even reached audiences I think, it would have be deemed too dark for kids and wouldn’t been as widespread.
Also, in our modern society, racism and discrimination don’t typically happen like this and the final version gives a better showing of how this happens in real life.
@@ruthbrior3236ye but the unused version is just more entertaining in general ngl
Nah zootopia wasn't too safe, it was more subtle in its portrayal of racism, much like how it is today, with how biases and misconceptions in institutions and people drive people to worse life outcomes. This is probably a better film, but a poorer reflection on modern racism
@@celestialrowan well, this is a movie made for little kids, so it's obvious that they would change from this hella dark version. it would be cool for older audiences though!
It doesn't have to be modern tho this could be a prequel
6:50 that scene alone would have hit extremely hard, probably would stick around for longer than the entire current movie did
I love it just for that
6:38 this is a sad moment. With the father who hesitate to really put it. And then really regret what he do.
dang. for being a story board i nearly teared up at the taming party scene. if i can ever figure out animation (or drawing for that matter) i really want to re animate it..
"The bunny is coming."
that is...more ominous than it should be
I love this version so much just from how much more animal jokes are used alone.
The scapegoat and mole one is really good.
I suspect those kind of jokes were cut down on because they are English specific, and Disney movies have to work in a multitude of languages. Not that no puns or US-specific cultural references made it into final movie, but cutting down on jokes that will look like complete non-sequitors to most of your audience is, unfortunately, the smart thing to do when you’re making an international blockbuster.
(Then again, Zootopia specifically might have worked really well as a more indie movie that could have gone HAM with the English-only puns and the dark themes. But then it shouldn’t have been pitched at Disney)
The tame party was so sad 😢
I remember this scene very well… that poor little “big bear” wasn’t aware of what the collar could do and we can tell that his father was very worried about him as the moment he was reading the oath. And I believe this is the moment where Judy understands what the predators, like Nick, is going through. And Nick too was feeling upset about this cause of the flashing yellow light. 😢 this is the saddest scene to see from a pilot plot and I’m kind of in the middle of it glad and sad that this wasn’t in the Final Cut. The reason why I’m glad that it didn’t is because it would’ve raise a lot and I mean ALOT of questions and concerns about the theme in this movie and I’m sad is because I could see this being a very common thing like the Jim Crow laws. I don’t want to talk about it too much but if you know, you know… this scene is so impactful and sad 😢
I mean if Coraline can pass for a kids movie, I’m pretty sure this original plot could
Literally started tearing up at the "taming party" scene wtf. Something that incomplete and I'm that emotional? Jfc. I can't believe this wasn't the final movie.
the tame party has a 3d version too :)
is that what its called?
Oh...
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it’s really sad but i can’t take nick and judy sliding across the floor seriously it’s so funny
Originally, I was skeptical... But this is honestly such a good plot. At first I was a little confused about the tame collars but the way they implemented it was really good, and it made sense.. I honestly don't know why they got this far, seems like months and months of work, just to scrap almost all of it.
Probably cause it was way too dark for the moneymake-kids. Kids.
@@dexshenewolf3017Its not thr kids who are the problem its the adult that judge if kids should be able to watch this or not.
@@ngenge1309I wish more people realized this. As someone who also was once a child (lol) saying I know damn well I would have ate this up if it released during my childhood years would be an understatement. I've noticed a big number of individuals nowadays tends to strongly underestimate the kids and just how much they can understand when given the chance, which is a big shame seeing as they are literally the future of our society.
That was the sharpest cliffhanger cut I've ever seen.
I love it😅
Dude, why didn't they give us THIS movie?! Like, the scene with the young ice bear getting collared was phenomenal!
The taming party made me tear up. 😢
We were robbed of such a moving scene, and better movie in general.
This movie, while not quite as pg as disney likes, would have been such a strong and meaningful movie. One that grows the company in a way
Which is exactly why it got scrapped
It’s so sad that this GENIUS idea got scrapped, I wanna see this movie SOOO BAD!!!!
It was indeed genius but i think it was to dark and Disney does't want people to think that this is racism
@@blackliger4655was there no notes of racism in the og
I LOVE THIS CONCEPT. I cannot express how well that polar bear taming party was written.
I've seen that tame party so many times and every time it makes me SOB. As a minority who lives in the US it's like that. Except we don't get a party, most of us just get hacked in the face and keep it moving. Most don't even get a chance to be a kid.
Chicago?
Same, the taming party scene hits hard when you realize that it just a metaphor for life for minorities like us in the US. In fact, the whole original plot just seems like life for minorities in the US.
Not just "minorities" but all races
I’m so upset we didn’t get the taming party like I get why, (because Disney is full of cowards), but man it’s so emotional and it’s so good
Maybe an unpopular opinion but I like waaaay more this plot that the other, It's sadder, more complex, show how extrem thinks end up and Nick's morality is more explored, I like Judy has the main chracter but Nick works better, I dont think it would be posible but i hope something of that show up in Zootopia 2
The taming party scene always makes me cry
God damn, this is dark. Even simply feeling too happy as a predator was considered bad. The cub was so happy and proud to become an adult and have a collar like all the adults did... and then immediately regretted it as he learned what it did. :(
This original plot definitely has some angry moments where the viewer just feels angry for the victims of an unfair society, but that's what makes the movie great and what makes us cheer for the victims and hope everything will turn out well in the end.
The scariest and angriest part of the final film was when little Nick joined the scouts and was immediately betrayed by having a... muzzle? Put on his mouth, and got bullied by the other kids. That definitely lit a fire inside me and I wanted to just grab him and pull him away and kick the little brats who hurt the poor kit.
But that scene was pretty much it, I think, for getting angry. This original plot seems to have quite a few of those, like the taming party, Nick being darted and running wild, and probably a few other things.
Also Judy seems a lot more, uh... hardcore? Harsh? Badass? Here? Not sure what word to use here, but she definitely doesn't seem as green as in the final movie. Is what I mean.
I think your reaction at 7:59 is pretty much how I felt after watching that scene...... damn......
Why couldn’t we have this instead?? This is so much better and so emotional. 10/10 plot, love it.
I wouldn't lie is a more interassing premise, but they wanted to push a racism allegory and with this plot it was muddled, and the other messages of "hiding who you really are" and "needing to be always friendly to people that hates to not get in trouble" would appeal more to minorities and it could easily offend the majority white Christian market, and no big corporation would ever do that, just see how many of these same group reacted to Lorax from Illumination, a movie with no bite whatsoever.
You can see that the final movie they had a tiny bit of these messages and many reactionaries and conservative news stations made some articles and videos, but it not being the main plot of the movie it quickly died down.
Yeah, I like this way more lol. It’s kind of like how ‘biggering’ got replaced with ‘how bad can be?’
Because the leftist snowflakes will find it too dark. It will hurt their very sensitive world
@@randomly_random_0 no the righties would find it "WOkE"
@@shanellemurrey9300that's a perfect allegory
This theme is definitely darker but it’s so interesting. The taming party, that killing of innocence. Wow. Deep.
the taming collar party scene almost made my cry, I love the movie they made but I think this one would have been even better
As utterly incredible this plot is, this could honestly never be a Disney film. I love the dark setting in this, but, Disney’s strict storytelling standards could never allow something this morbid. I hope a dedicated group of fans could animate this fully, but to do that, we need to make sure competent animators see this! I desperately want this, and I know you do too!
Poor bear brought me to the verge of tears, I couldn't imagine a fully animated version.
Seeing all these storyboards made me realize Zootopia looks better in 2D
i was about to cry in the taming party scene, why was that so deep
NOT LYING BUT I CRYING YET THIS WOULD BE A GREAT CONCEPT FORVTHE MOVIE. Dude I'm actually crying at 7:32
Fucking taming party...oh my fucking god. Dude? I will never forgive the entertainment industry at large for cutting out storylines like these. Sure, it may have been too much for kids but this story is SO IMPORTANT.
Important how?
Damn that scene with the ‘taming’ went so hard. I think i get the whole collars concept was maybe too much for the children but damn that was chilling.
holy shit, i actually cried when we saw nick's yellow collar. and i didn't cry at the version they released, it wasn't THIS emotional. this could really be one of my favorite movies
Geez, man, thanks so much for telling it all in such detail! I've seen concepts of the original story before, but they were mostly concept art and brief descriptions, I haven't seen the storyboards and plus you're a pleasure to listen to!
I like this version of Zootopia A LOT MORE, although it's pretty dark for Disney these days and I understand why it was eventually abandoned.
7:40 I'm sorry, i..... i think i need a napkin
That collaring scene was fucking tragic. Also, Nick as the protagonist instead of Judy is a little more interesting to me, but I kind of get why they made Judy the protagonist in the end. She was probably a better character for the audience to sit with while being introduced to Zootopia and understanding all its flaws, whereas if we started the movie with Nick, it would've been harder to introduce the audience to that society since there's nothing for Nick to be introduced to himself. He's already lived in it his whole life. This original plot is still a very compelling narrative, but I get why they may have shifted focus later on. Still, this original concept is pretty wild
Didn’t realize you were going to put a knife in my heart today
This story is “SUPER DARK” and I love it!!! It’s like a kid’s version of the corrupted Empire of Seanchan from the Wheel of Time book series. If they ever make a sequel or spinoff to this movie then they should totally use this early version of the script as inspiration.
This would have been one of my favorite movies of all time if it had been made.
That bear mitzvah scene hit hard. Thanking his dad... damn.
The one we ended up getting was worse in comparison. Odds are, it was pressure from the higher ups to change it.
8:33 this art is BEAUTIFUL ✨✨✨
6:03 this part is so brutal
The way the video just ended like that made me burst out laughing.
5:28 i remeber seeing that sceneeeee, i also remeber sm said this one was too much and then they kinda canceled this lore of zootopia and redid it. Damn the scene does hit hard.
When an unfinished script is better than what we actually got…
i would love to see a rendered version of this story
That cliffhanger hurt my soul
that birthday scene is very very hard to watch. I see why disney changed it becasue they wanted it to be more kid friendly but damn this would have been a great story
2:18 has me DYING as a Mexican LMAOOO
Rather they thought making the both die was the end of the movie or they couldn’t think of how they could’ve survive so they scratched the plot.
I would honestly watch this. It is a very good plot.
Dang this is way better this has way more feeling in death in it than the first movie
I love this, but all I can think about is “fudge-ative”
I'd honestly be so happy if they made this today or next year or whatever I want this type of plot again
This really needed to be an actual movie, I really wish this was the official movie… I hope this could be a prequel in the future
Man, this needs more views
3:28 The Bunny is coming is the funniest i have everheard. Like couldn't they think of anybetter lmao
Holy frick the way the father bear hesitates when putting the collar on his son is heartbreaking
''Violins in his heart'' is my favorite quote now
2:21 THAT MOMENT WAS HILARIOUS- THE CHINCHILLA’S REACTION LMAOO
i wish disney would go back to making heavier plots. Zootopia felt like Sing! with cops😭
Zootopia came out way before sing… but you are right. They are practically the same.
The birthday scene actually breaks my heart💔
The part that hit me was Khoslav and his son, Morris when he got shocked and Judy felt so bad.😭😭😭🐻❄️
2:00 "no idea what the fck is going here where does this even go this is so weird"
I honestly would have loved this version even more
Whilst the existing version of Zootopia is definitely good and retains ideas of morality and the concept of predator rights over the safety of prey, this one would have been so much better. Possibly not as child-friendly as the final cut, but the social commentary in this would have been so much more powerful imo. As much as I like Judy, I really think it would have been great for her character development to see the collar ceremony, and I would have loved to see the background behind Nick's criminal life besides that one flashback of him in cub scouts.
not gonna lie I feel like if this was shown a lot of people would have had people really talking about how we really see and treat each other. I don't see a reason why this couldn't be shown.
3:32 *Breaking Bad Theme plays*
I remember that bear taming party thing is also partially 3D animated
people are saying this wouldve been “too dark” of a movie and im here to argue against that. if guillermo del toros pinocchio could be made and reach such a wonderful success i think the same can be said about the original zootopia. buts its very clear how the people supervising the movie had a problem with portraying raw racism and segregation, which i take issue with. THIS version of zootopia wouldve been so much better solely because its not bootlicking police. im almost mad this didnt get to the big screens. but im just disappointed
That little cub is so innocent and oblivious to what he’s going to have to deal with the rest of his life it’s so sad 😢
Sounds like something dreamworks would have been brave enough to do
you're showing so much more scene's then I ever found, and it's so cool to see it all connected in an actual story!
“The bunny is coming” killed me
Oh man I did not expect to get teary eyed over this. The taming party... That's.... Damn...
I NEED THIS MOVIE THE TAMING PARTY IS SO HEARTBREAKING HE WAS SO HAPPY AND DIDN'T KNOW THAT SOMETHING WOULD STOP HIM FROM BEING TOO EMOTIONAL 😭🥺
That birthday scene is just too good, man I wish this was the the actual finished movie, the way koslok holds his tears with the yellow beep, his sons realization of what the shock collar is after getting shocked. Just man I wish this was the actual movie
4:47 the taming party scene is by far my favorite scene omg
icl the collars having lights that change with emotions is a really powerful storytelling device tbh
The fact that Koslov had no choice but to put the collar on his son and then the look he gives his son after he’s been shocked makes this even sadder.
Im really glad they decided not to include the line “the bunny is coming”
I dont usually cry during movies, bur holy cow this was the closest to me crying