What? You're scared that among million's, the probability of there being some guy on the internet that went to movieschool and has the reach, writes a better story then two blokes who where mostly interested in making a fan service theater show on a deadline?
@@hanzerik594it’s not scary that a fan can write a good story, it’s scary that the official,canon sequel to such a well known story needs to be fixed by fans because it’s so stupid and the writers of it are so bad
@@hanzerik594When the fans more and more write better stories then the paid writers, Yeah we have a problem. Writers in hollywood have been garbage for years now
And not just one fan. Dozens of people have done fan rewrites of cinematic failures that are far superior to the official release. Game of Thrones, the ATLA movie, Eragon, Percy Jackson. It happens everywhere.
I can totally see Bellatrix and Rodolphus having kids, but not as a desire to have a happy family. They would have kids to provide Voldemort with future soldiers in his immortal rule.
Now i want a fanfiction of Cedric being reanimated as a vampire after Voldemort kills him , moving to America and falling in love with a random highschool girl... And then becoming batman...
That would be the greatest ending of all time. He just shows up, beats the shit out of Delphi and just says ‘I’m vengeance’ refuses to elaborate then leaves
I wonder why the trolley witch is a monster in the cursed child book? Is it because Harry took the lot from The trolley in the philosopher’s stone? Or the sorcerers stone for the American youtubers.
Even brushing aside the Time Turner aging its user... Prisoner of Azkaban made it abundantly clear that Time Turners caused closed loops (causal loops) - not alternate timelines. There was never a timeline where Buckbeak died and Sirius failed to be freed, because the time travel itself was factored into it. There were always another Harry and Hermione performing the deed. So it also just makes no sense here.
I think Time Turners can cause both. Harry and Hermione was very careful not to affect the regular flow of events, and impacted only those that had nothing to do with the regular flow, except maybe the Patronus by Harry, but since Harry assumed it was his father or something, it was good. If the time turner user doesn't respect the rules and go on to affect the regular flow of events, alternate timeline gets made.
I'm just gana say it I liked the original book of Harry Potter book 8 and thought it was kinda cannon and I'm a huge fan of cedric diggory sadly he dies mmmm whatcha say poor cedric we will always remember the nice person he was NOT THE DEATH EATER HE WAS AND KILLS NEVLE NO JUST BECAUSE HE LOSESS THE GAME THATS NOT CANNON FIR CEDRIC DIGGORY makes me angry because I'm a cedric diggory fan.
I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again, we only ever saw what happens when time turners were used properly. Hermione warned us not to meddle, because terrible things happen to wizards who meddle with time. But we were never shown what this consequence might be. The creation of a parallel timeline where the user gets stuck might be the consequence. This is not a retcon, it’s new information.
The unforgivable curses: Avada Kedavra (The Killing Curse) Crucio (The Torture Curse) Imperio (The controlling curse) The Cursed Child (Makes every potterhead cringe so hard they Avada Kedavra themselves)
FINALLY a rewrite where harry and hermione aren't having an affair, because for whatever reason everybody loves to have that in their rewrites even though it's stupid and unrealistic - it would never happen! this is an amazing rewrite of the script and how you were able to make such a great thing out of the original trash script... it's astounding. i'd love to see you do your own sequel, instead of just fixing this!
I'm glad to hear that this doesn't have that... Ok. Might be worth looking into this, then. (Haven't watched the video yet as of this writing.) Because I've seen an attempt to "fix" this story which only made it worse. Yes, I think it was that Austin one. And I've been dreading "fixes" of it ever since...
YEah, I love that Morgan took it seriously instead of that joke which Austin did. Ron's a Smart man, he's not dumb. Besides Hermione loves him dearly. Harry respects McGonagall. Bloody hell she did everything for him, He loves her as a Granny. I think they were Watching Game of Thrones while writing Harry Potter, Hermione and Harry sex???? They were trying to give HP a GoT touch. And if JKR considers this Idiocity as Canon then, she needs to be reminded of her old self, when she first wrote these novels. This isn't canon no matter what. However, there's one question in my head. If Harry said, "if you want to be Gryffindor, why don't you tell the hat", then how come Albus is still in Slytherin? In my own rewrite he's a Gryffindor, it meant a lot to him, so he's in the same house as his parents and brother, Lily Luna Potter on the other hand is a Ravenclaw. If I ever get my time, Albus will be a Gryffindor and he will make friends with Scorpius a Slytherin. Delphi and she alone will be the main villain. But, just like Voldy with a lot of supporters, Dark Wizards, Warewolves, Trolls and Giants. Time turners aren't completely Out, but they just go back only up to 5 hours, not 29 years, because they know when they return they'll age as much. Thus they fight Delphi while they go back in time but its just a few hours, like the Prizoner of Azkaban. The innocent bi-standards who die are, Amos and his Wife, they die at Delphi's hand in my version. Finally uniting with their son. But the House Diggory isn't extinct, they have many minor cousins, many nieces and nephews of Amos, but Delphi isn't one of them. And Delphi is a Hogwarts student sorted in Gryffindor. I like how Morgan made Delphi as Bellabitch and her husband's daughter. Voldy was Moldy, so he doesn't have sex. Dennis Creevey also plays an important role in my version as his brother died too. And that line "How many would die for you Harry?" would fit Him better than Amos, because even though Amos lost his son, Dennis and Collin almost worshipped Harry in their schooldays. Harry fights Draco. Strong duel. Draco apologizes to Hermione for everything, every form of bullying. Lucius is one of Delphi supporters, but he dies soon after his son and grandson disown him. Hannah declares Dennis as the Godfather of Neville and Hannah's twin daughters Augusta Pomona Longbottom and Alice Minerva Longbottom. Umbridge and Minerva duel takes place. Sprout, Flitwick and Slughorn get a headon action while they handle multiple dark witches each. "The Augaries" are equivalent to "The Death Eaters". Harry finally enters Hufflepuff common room as well. Lorcan and Lysander Scamander play a minor role. Thus we get to see Luna and Rolf as well. Delphi however recieves Dementor's kiss... Muah!!!! The only thing is how to make all this work together, I need time to craft this story.
I really Liked the improvement. It is much more logical. Few things I really liked 1. Omitting time travel 2. Omitting Voldemort 3. The things which you said about Ron. I hate when Ron is made fun of. I really think that Ron is great and you kept him that way. 4. Keeping harry the same. Good and Bad. If you write it completely. I would love to read it
Yeah...Ron doesn't get much love, even in the books. I feel like him being good at wizard chess should have translated well to battle strategy, and positioning in general. Or just thinking ahead. None of that happened.
Changing the rumour of Scorpius to him being a werewolf is brilliant because it goes along with the long standing fan theory that Draco gets bitten by the werewolf Fenrir Greyback as punishment by Voldemort. The story is a big improvement over the garbage we got, and in my head, this is canon. Great work as usual Morgan.
The fact they made Cedric into a death eater is so unreasonable, just like you said, for god’s sake he’s even a Hufflepuff Edit: btw every time he is mentions in the book Harry describes him as handsome, also he is one of the few people who didn’t wear the potter stinks badges so add that to the list
We can all agree Cedric would never do this. However, not all Hufflepuffs are flawless. None of them joined Voldemort as far as we know, but Smith did push firstyears behind him when he run away from the battle of Hogwarts, which is pretty bad.
@Amanda Scott hufflepuffs are also known for having kind, compassionate people who have a strong sense of justice. Does that sound like a death eater to you?
THANK YOU. Ugh, the Cursed Child is like a 10 years old child's first writing. I can't believe they butchered the characters so bad and created so many plotholes. Did they even read the books ONCE?
I like the idea of Delphie being Voldemort’s daughter. Maybe she could spend her entire live thinking she was Voldemort’s daughter and she taught she has to rule the dark. It would be good if at the Harry reveals that she is Lestrange daughter. That would be the shock of her life and will ruin her mind.
@@Yvanehtnioj2000 But she needs a valid reason to think she's Voldemort's daughter to make it work. Like a prophecy she misunderstood or someone of Voldemort's death eater manipulated her to think that because she's a very powerful sorceress and this would give her the determination to do great things "like her father before".
Specifically pointing out that Cedric’s a HUFFLEPUFF brought a smile to my face. We’re canonically the house that has pumped out the least amount of dark wizards in all of Hogwarts history. It’s not the best or biggest argument as to why Cedric would never become a death eater, not even close, but this small emphasis and highlight on the nature of Hufflepuffs just made me smile. “Just and loyal, those Hufflepuffs are true, and unafraid of toil!”
Helga really cheated the system with Hufflepuff. No thief would ever value honesty No big bad would ever value justice No cheater would ever value fair-play There literally cant be a bad Hufflepuff.
Zacharias Smith, a gutless coward of a Hufflepuff, the exact opposite of the brave Cedric Diggory, was the only member of DA to not fight at The Battle of Hogwarts. He has the potential of being every bit the wretch Pettigrew was.
I don't know why you added the (Hopefully) at the end of the video title - it's amazing! Great job; there's never, ever a dull moment in seeing you putting these videos together
I love it, not only does it improve on the cursed child but it has one element I loved from the original series, travel. Don't get me wrong I love Hogwarts but having a book take place almost entirely in a school, especially in such a magic rich world as Harry Potter is just a waste, not to mention invokes PTSD from my own school days. That's why I love the fantastic beasts films, I don't want references to the world outside Hogwarts I want to see it. The mountains, the forests, the wizard town, this feels like a fantasy story
The reason the cursed child is so disappointing for me is that the setting and characters had so much potential, as proved here. The time period, the idea of Harry trying to live a normal life but being affected by the events of the original series, the dynamics between Harry and his family, especially Albus, Albus being in Slytherin, friendship between Albus and Scorpius, etc could have made such a great story. But they chose such a stupid plot, and completely changed the personalities of characters from the originals.
Delphi being Voldemort’s daughter fails in SO MANY LEVELS! First: you mentioned earlier, Voldemort saw himself at his peak of immortality, so an heir would be pointless. Second: he was unable to love, and thats canon. So why would he have sex? Third: Voldemort would consider sex, something so primal, carnal and human as BENEATH him. Fourth: considering how Rowling writes, a body revived via Horcrux, especialy so corrupted by dark magic and emaciated like that would, 100%, no shadow of a doubt, be INFERTILE. He might not even have a functioning penis, or, hell, does he even have functioning internal organs AT ALL? We never saw him eating or drinking aside from the snake’s “milk” prior to his ressurrection! I refuse to believe he got a functioning set of genitalia at all!
You don't need love for sex. Murder, theft, conquring are all base desires humans also have. Sex is a desire that drives nearly anyone, and Voldemort has rarely ever held back on carnal desires. They come to him on a whim and he does it without thinking it through. The killing of Snape comes to mind
finally, someone who wasn't smoking anything made the cursed child. As you said it still has its plot holes but it's much more enjoyable and plausible. Just amazing
Delphi being Voldermorts child makes her have a great motive but the thought of Voldemort having sex, especially after he was brought back is too cringy and unthinkable. Thank you for doing a rewrite. Also too much time travel gets confusing making plot holes easy. Btw your premonition sounds way better. If you got this from 2 days imagine what you could have written after 2 months.
Voldermort is Truely Evil, I just can’t imagine him having sex it’s the same thing as Palpatine from Star Wars, who was also Truly Evil and yet is somehow Rey’s Grandfather. These Dark Lords have no love or urges for anything except power and immortality.
True, i think it would make sense if it involved asexual reproduction, like Voldemort created a child from a piece of his DNA so if all of his plans do fail he can still be revived by the child he created.
I like your version of the rewrite. Great job staying clear & succinct throughout. Staying true to the deepest nature of the characters as they were originally presented in the series. - Ideas tangent... I wish they had taken some time to create a new threat instead of using time travel & revisiting dead villains. To show how the Wizarding world had changed. Perhaps how the Trio had effected the changes and interacted with members of the Wizarding community to accomplish these changes. There are so many opportunities to have shown scenes from the end of the Battle of Hogwarts to the 'modern day' with their children and the new challenges they face. How they dealt with the rights arguments for the different magical beings, etc. What other goings-on would they realistically be dealing with in a Wizarding World at peace? Everyday wizarding crimes? Perhaps bring back the Triwizard Tournament? Or Quidditch games at the pro level, maybe not the finals but the games leading up to the finals? Ginny was a pro player. They could have focused on other characters. Now that I think on it, what I am imagining is more a book of short stories providing glimpses into the everyday lives of some of our favorite characters, not so much a book or screenplay with any plot to it. - Paperwork tangent... Harry is the Head of the Department for Magical Law Enforcement ... is it plausible that he could have had another member of the Dept or his aide (someone who reports to him) read all the reports and provide him with a summary of them? ... I feel like there are a few simple fixes for the paperwork problem. Surely there is another Percy Weasley/Hermione Granger-esque type of character to studiously do the bulk of the paperwork and provide relevant summaries to their superiors? ... - Elder wand tangent... In the books Harry put the Elder Wand back in Dumbledore's tomb, unbroken. Harry losing to Delphie leaves a possible plot hole where she could somehow end up with the Elder Wand. Or a new person searching for the wand could track it. Maybe a rewrite to leave the wand in Dumbledore's tomb broken beyond magical repair? ... - Werewolf tangent... I would have thought with Harry & Lupin's relationship & Harry being Teddy's godfather that werewolf relations could have been better. Perhaps a rewrite where Lupin & Tonks had survived the Battle of Hogwarts and lived with Harry as Teddy's godfather....? Perhaps Lupin could have had a few werewolves that also fought against the dark side at Hogwarts. Have some good examples that not all werewolves are bad/evil/etc...? I can just see a teenage Teddy Lupin & his mom, Tonks, in these super cute "Wolfie Rights" hoodies (that would match each of their hair colors at the moment of course) at a meeting perhaps headed by Remus, Kingsley, Harry, & Bill Weasley lobbying/making the argument to lift so of the laws/sanctions against werewolves or to is so way improve the average werewolf's rights. There were never really specifics about what rights were being suppressed. Also, I find it difficult for Harry, having known Lupin, being the godfather of Lupin's son, and being the Head of MLE, NOT to have any interest in the situation with the werewolves. Perhaps a rewrite with Harry supporting a special fund for St. Mungo's for any werewolves who wished to to be able to have access to the Wolfsbane Potion? Thus rendering them harmless during the full moon.
“That sounds like something a seven year old writing Harry Potter fanfictions would come up with” That’s pretty much the entirety of Cursed Child summed up.
It feel like some preteen first fanfiction, you know, the ones that only care about an idea without the thinking of how to make said idea work. Combined with someone test writing, you know, the kind you make to test and play with a narrative tool you just learned about. For example, the whole 'Scorpio is Voldemort Son' feel like an amateur writer play test the concept of a red herring.
Here’s an idea: The Cursed Child could be about finding thr resurrection stone like Scorpious wants to so he can find his mom, and Delphie can try to “help” Albus and Scorpious but try to find it to revive Bellatrix or something
How to fix The Cursed Child. Step 1: Invent functional Time Machine Step 2: Go back in time to before the screenplay was completed Step 3: Destroy all physical and digital copies, back-ups, and draft versions until the story is complelty unsalvagable. Step 4: Relive the pandemic because Time Travel is a one way trip. But with the knowlage you saved all of man kind from a horrible fan fiction.
Yeees!!! Cursed Child didn't need to exist and maybe, by altering the timeline so we wouldn't have this abomination, which in a "butterfly effect" sort of way may have even caused the pandemic in the first place 😅
The original Cursed Child was so horrible, I've never opened it again. And I reread books that I really like many, many times. Thank you for changing so much of that stomach-churning story. I still can't believe J.K. decided she'd allow that play to stand as canon.
just as much as Thorne & Tiffany didn't read the original 7 HP books before making the Cursed Child, i think Rowling didn't read the Cursed Child before classifying it as canon.
@@JuanMataCFC I lost any bit of respect I had for her when the cursed child came out and she said it was canon. As far as I'm concerned Harry Potter ended with the seventh book. And it won't go any farther
One of the things rhat bugged me the most about the Cursed Child is the fact rhat even Harry believed the rumors. The real Harry WOULD NEVER! Harry had to deal with rumors that he was mad in the head for believing that Voldermort was back, had Voldermort in his head and he (Harry) worried that he was becoming just like Voldermort. So the idea that Harry would allow a child, a freaking child, to deal with rumors about being a child of Voldermort, and not to mention , actually believe it and start a whole freaking investigation, is complete and utter bull crap
This was INCREDIBLE! My only issue is with harry and the trio thinking it's a bad thing to be a werewolf when Lupin was one and he was still a good person and they loved him..
if you loved someone you wouldn't want them to go through unbearable amount of pain every month, and you'd have to know they'd be shunned from society. you wouldn't care, but it'd be preferable if they weren't
I thought it was more of how those particular werewolves were allies of voldemort and if Scorpius was bringing Albus in that meeting, then he must be on their side, therefore a bad werewolf?
With Delphi the hair color thing you could have pulled it off making her a Metamorphmagus like her cousin Tonks. Also would be cool if you added in she is using Bellatrixs wand, like if Narcissa or Draco picked it up before the left the battle, and then gave it to baby Delphi. I liked the werewolf angle with Scorpius, especially with all the fan theories out there that Draco is a werewolf! And it also can play into his homosexuality and having to hide who he really is. For Harry and Draco, you should have added a distrust angle with Delphi cause Draco would have known about her, she was born in his house while he was there. Thank you for getting rid of the time travel and alternate timelines they made no sense!
MovieFlame: I fixed the Cursed Child! Us: *HE IS THE MESSIAH!* Exactly, Voldemort didn't think about an heir because the only one he believed in was himself. Plus like you said, it's pretty obvious Scorpius is Draco's son. It's funny how JK Rowling forgets her own source material
How would Draco even go about asking Voldemort to impregnate her wife ? Voldemort would say you could have asked my future self. And if he even hinted he was gonna die he himself would die and change the fate of the whole world
Honestly the only reason I could see Voldemort having children is if he intended on raising them as weapons. Dude probably thought his children would be magically gifted and I never thought the whole heirs thing in Harry Potter was a real focus.
When I first read this script I was shocked at how out of character they made harry. He is supposed to be a smart, kind-hearted person. For example he wasn’t even able to do crucio properly on Bellatix right after she just killed Sirius. I really like your rewrite, it’s WAYYYY better than that original piece of bullcrap. I would quite enjoy reading this. I just don’t like how delphi is more powerful than Harry, I feel like that kind of disrespects harry’s brilliance. Keep up the good work man! Also if you see this comment I hope you have an amazing day/night!
That’s a way better story than in the actual CC book. There are 2 things I would add: 1. Harry giving Albus the marauders map, when he’s at the same age as James was when he got the cloak. That should take place close to the end, and it would make Albus respect his father even more. 2. Harry’s worries being fueled by nightmares about the past, and him suffering from PTSD.
I don't like that critic. It assumes that the story needs to be a mystery story just by being in the setting of HP, and the way he says it sounds like time travel is inherently a bad trope and that's why the story is bad (because it's a time travel book, not because it's a bad book with many different flaws).
@@juanferrer5924 Nowadays they do, but they don't have to. It seems that is very fashionable in modern literature to set-up mysteries that get solved as the plot advances. But you don't have to have explicit mysteries in the story that need to be solved, of course.
Exactly! They aren't just thrown together accidentally by Rowling, they actually care about and love each other! They do fight alot, but it's a testament to their love building up in the 7 books.
I really like this story and watched it with as much joy and anticipation as I did when reading the books! Incredible! I really like how it ends and in my head you could setup a new series around the "cursed child" where each year he encounters problems after problems, like his father before him, however we could give the final book a darker ending where Harry has to face his child dying thus giving credence to the "cursed" part of his name. I know it's dark but I feel it takes the story in a new way not ignoring nor drudging up the past as we so often see with sequels to classics now, but still gives real weight to it and a meaningful if tragic experience.
If I wrote the Sequel for the Harry Potter series, I would make it about Teddy Lupin, mainly because we don’t know much about him. I think we should have a book series about Teddy growing up without his parents and his relationship with Victoir Weasly.
I would happily read the story the way to recreate it here!! I loved how you corrected the personality of the characters esp Harry and Ron, the prophecy was just awesome, and I loved how you used the stigma behind werewolves in this story showing how difficult their lives are. I would definitely read the story if you rewrite it!
I would add a flashback where Harry brings Kreacher, Winky and all the other House Elves to Dobby's grave at Shell Cottage. Where they have a proper Funeral for him. Which would be a nice send-off. 33:01.
I really appreciate the way you tell this, too - relating it to parallel scenes in the play and reminding us of important changes whenever they are relevant again. Great job!
I guess an argument that Harry could still speak parseltoungue was because he could still remember it. In the battle of hogwarts we could see that Ron had picked up parsletongue from Harry’s sleep, so it is possible to learn it I guess
But I think there is a difference between remembering words in a foreign language (which is basically what Ron did) and actually understanding/speaking a foreign language
I like the idea actually, he would still remember a few words at least. I remember i tried learning Japanese and remembered a few basics. Maybe it works like any other language? I like it.
I don't see how he could've remembered it. It makes sense for Ron to have picked up on some words, but Harry thought he was speaking English when he was speaking it, he never actually heard the words.
If this version would have been in the original script, I would have not only read it several hundred times, but also watch the play in a heart beat. Excellent story telling you did, great job!
Honestly, I’d read this book with the script you wrote In addition: I would’ve written something in about former Death Eaters that have repented being reintegrated into the rest of the wizarding society. It would show the mercy of the good side, and add to the plot quite a bit.
I love the changes you made! But I absolutely hate the fact that the writers of the cursed child ignored Rose completely. I mean, her, Albus and Scorpius had so much potential as a trio. And to be honest, I was really keen on seeing Rose and Scorpius in a relationship despite the fact that their families don't get alog.
Honestly me too. Rose is the same age as them, plus a child of two members of the Golden Trio. Writing her out of the story and having her being needlessly mean the whole time felt like such a waste.
I'm glad you included the lore regarding the Time Turners aging the user. On top of the Time Turners working in a casuality loop, this detail also puts to bed the criticism regarding wizards using the Time Turners to go decades into the past. They appear to be objects used for research or viewing events one was not present for. People then state "if these objects are so dangerous, why did a student get one?" First, only one student got one and Hermione had already shown herself to be studious and took the rules and her education very seriously (for the most part). Dumbledore would absolutely trust her to use it wisely and he could very easily pull strings to get ahold of one. In terms of use, I'm sure Dumbledore and Hermione both agreed any mishaps related to Time Turner abuse would result in their punishments.
Yes, time turners should be limited to a tool for viewing past events but not far in the past, Rowling doesn't have great foresight, she created problems (also notable: slavery) in her world building without being prepared to solve them or take them seriously.
@@c.w.8200 Like the aging part was an addendum added after the series ended, I believe but the causality loop existed in the very book they were introduced and was even fully explained. Having them would ruin a lot of elements such as the mystery solving. Hell, it would easily show Umbridge's abuse toward the students and even have proven Voldemort's return. So Rowling destroys them all to allow her story to continue happening.
Hermione even says in the third book that McGonagall had to fight extremely hard to get Hermione that time turned and that it was strictly for academic purposes
Exactly, and thats how timeturners should have stayed. There really wasnt even a reason for Neville to destroy them all but it just adds even more reasons why the cursed child makes 0 canon sense. If Rowling was smart shed just reiterate the rules of timeturners to begin w
This needs to be the new canon. Imagine in another ten years or so they make this version a film with the original cast. Ah one can dream. You say this isn’t the sequel you’d make, can you make a video detailing the sequel you WOULD make?
UUUUh yesss, this is music to my ears. This can be 100% a HP plot. Everything fits. The slow introduction, The characters act as they should be. The plot thickens. yes, so much yes.
I only read the cursed child once and hated it. Though of what I remember this seems a much more story in line with the original books. Its truly sad that cursed child is cannon. I think what you fixed made it much more palatable. Not exactly how I would've pictured a sequel to the series. Just much better than what we actually got.
This rewrite is soooooo much better. Thank you for fixing it. I was so mad at the ridiculousness of the Cursed Child and its utter lack of respect for the Harry Potter books but now I can feel slightly better with this rewrite.
I would have honestly liked that you had kept the kitchen battle scene between Harry and Draco because, if I remember correctly, Draco apologizes for destroying the kitchen and Ginny replies ‘oh, it’s not my kitchen, Harry does most of the cooking’ and I just laughed at that so much😂 But anyway, it was a very nice rewrite.😊
This fixes everything about the Cursed Child for me. You did well here. This is the way it should be not the way it is. The Cursed Child make Harry look scared, unknowing and dumb as well as Ron. I like the way you complete this story and this story would be more believe and much more cannon then the original Cursed Child. Thank you for this because this is an amazing Fix to a play that should have not be made. I really hope JK rowling take this play and say it is not Cannon anymore. That would be amazing because all of the plot hole and problems it has with all of the characters from the Original.
I thank you, truly, for filling up the void after reading that garbage book. Now I truly feel full, knowing that the series had a sensible and meaningful ending. Even if it's not canon, it'll always, and I mean always, be canon to me... God bless man...🙏🏼
Your version is SOOO much better than the crap Tiffany and Thorne wrote. If this is what you made with all of the restrictions you gave, then your own original Harry Potter sequal idea must be certified gold. Hope you make a video of it in the near future.
Thank you. there are so many stupid plot holes and inconsistencies in the official Cursed Child, and you addressed almost all of them. I do think Ron could be fleshed out more, but considering the garbage you had to base this rewrite on, amazing work! I respect you even more after hearing you mention how "show don't tell" is the number one rule in story writing, and prove you understand it. Bravo!
I like to add that during that conversation with Draco and harry about asking harry to put a stop on the “rumor’s” about Draco’s son and using the werewolf regition act but when harry said no I wanted Draco too say “and I thought you were the one who broke the rules “ then harry said “ you do realize that I broke the rules to save people not to be rude “ which he literally does though out the entire series.
"Also, about Delphi's bluish-gray hair, that sounds like something a seven-year-old writing Harry Potter fanfiction would come up with." Why is this my favorite line of the video? EDIT: OMG 200+ likes! I did not expect for this comment to blow up! Thank you!
I would have left Delphi having blue hair and it be the fact she is a Metamorphmagus like her cousin Nymphadora be the reason for her colourful hair; and I would have explained that the Metamorph trait runs in the Black family, and just like how Andromeda's daughter and grandson had the gene and are Metamorhmagi , Delphini as Bellatrix's daughter, and Andromeda's niece also has that gene. I than would have altered some things such as instead of using the Imperius curse on Amos and controlling him that way , she instead knocked him out and used her abilities as a Metamorphmagus and impersonated him, I would even leave in some of the uncharacteristic dialogue some characters have, such as how "Harry" speaks to Minerva, how "Ron" acts in public places joking and being an idiot to them being instances where it was Delphi using her abilities as a Metamorphmagus, you could have Minerva, and Hermione, be confused as to why Harry and Ron are acting so out of character and it could be later explained because Delphi was acting off information and prejudices her father, and mother (through Bellatrix's diary) had about how Harry and Ron acted. The Death Eaters saw Harry as being full of himself, and they saw Ron was nothing more than Harry's idiot, foolish sidekick. Like take Snape's line in PoA about how Harry and James strut through the halls of hogwarts. To which Harry countered with My father never strutted through the castle nor do I. This shows there is a bias out there of how Harry acts and behaves and those not close to Harry would assume he does these things. Again you could keep certain uncharacteristic dialogue and actions of Harry and other characters in the play, if it is revealed that it was Delphi using her abilities as a Metamorphmagus to infiltrate Harry's group and to also bypass Hogwarts security as even with Dementors at Hogwarts during PoA and arguably when the security of the school was at it's highest, both Sirius and Peter were both able to smuggle into the school and move around freely using their Animagus abilites, so my Delphi with her Metamorphmagus abilities would be able to exploit weaknesses in the school's defences; and it wouldn't be after various different talks that the Adults as well as the reader learn learn how Delphi did this. And it would be her ultimate goal of having Harry lose his son, as she blames, Harry, Ron, Hermione, the Weasley's, Draco, her Aunt Narcissa etc... in her losing her mother so attacking and targeting both the sons of Harry and Draco achieves her revenge plot.
This is an amazing rewrite! You’re an incredible storyteller. It’s clear these writers know very little about the harry potter franchise. Almost all of the characters we love are portrayed very badly and in a way that undermines the previous books. Their plot is so unrealistic and juvenile. I’d love to read and watch your version!
Morgan, okay where do I start?! I absolutely adored this video and your rewrite, I thought it was fantastic. I'm so grateful for those two long days you put into rewriting the script, since now I can finally sleep soundly at night 😂👏💕. As you've mentioned, I too am so excited for your full on self-written sequel, whenever it comes ♡, but till then you've done a phenomenal job on this 👏👏👏
That was a really good rewrite! That was so much better than what we got. Though, having the trolls and giants be on the stage version might be a bit hard to do. Those scenes might not work too well in a play because you can only do so much action on a stage. I like you kept some real parts of Harry's flaws while throwing the fake ones from the play out. Really great job!
Delphine could have the hair based on the slight possibility of inheriting the genes that Tonks got allowing her to shape shift to look however she liked…
I think this is your masterpiece. I’ve been a fan of this channel for like 5 years now and this is one of my favorite videos of yours. I wish a bunch of us fans could get together and shoot the breeze about Harry Potter and the Percy Jackson series. Loving the content overall!
It makes so much more sense now. I never think of cursed child as anything to do with Harry Potter, it’s the only way to survive that horrible script. Thanks for a much more believable story.
Man as soon as you changed the rumor about Scorpius I knew this was going to be amazing. You notice even the tiniest crappy details about this book. I'm halfway through the video and I love what you've done so far.
You know I came up with a character Aurora Lestrange because I though Bellatrix would be pushed to have a child, just like she was pushed to get married by her family's pure blood doctrine to carry on the pure blood family line. She was highly eccentric, a bit unstable, and carried trauma from knowing neither of her parents actually loved her...
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The fact that we live in an era where fans make better scripts is a bit scary
What? You're scared that among million's, the probability of there being some guy on the internet that went to movieschool and has the reach, writes a better story then two blokes who where mostly interested in making a fan service theater show on a deadline?
@@hanzerik594it’s not scary that a fan can write a good story, it’s scary that the official,canon sequel to such a well known story needs to be fixed by fans because it’s so stupid and the writers of it are so bad
@@hanzerik594When the fans more and more write better stories then the paid writers, Yeah we have a problem.
Writers in hollywood have been garbage for years now
They need to hire the fans if they wanna make something good
And not just one fan. Dozens of people have done fan rewrites of cinematic failures that are far superior to the official release. Game of Thrones, the ATLA movie, Eragon, Percy Jackson. It happens everywhere.
I can totally see Bellatrix and Rodolphus having kids, but not as a desire to have a happy family. They would have kids to provide Voldemort with future soldiers in his immortal rule.
Yeah, plus out of duty to preserve their Pure-Blood family line and name.
At the end of the war, if Voldemort won, he would need to start a major breeding program to keep the magical community from dieing out.
or to continue with their pureblood mania
Or Delphi would just be an unplanned accident
It was always strange to me they never had kids, given their pureblood fanaticism
i was so confused when they announced that Voldemort had a child because it so far fetched
HP fans: I want a story about Harry in his older life!
J.K: Cursed Child?
HP fans: Nevermind, forget we said anything
so true
Be Careful What You Wish For Mates
So true
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Ikr
And to think that I was actually excited for this load of shit
I thought jk Rowling didn't write the cursed child
Cedric becoming Batman if he lives is more realistic then him becoming a Death Eater
Now i want a fanfiction of Cedric being reanimated as a vampire after Voldemort kills him , moving to America and falling in love with a random highschool girl... And then becoming batman...
That would be the greatest ending of all time. He just shows up, beats the shit out of Delphi and just says ‘I’m vengeance’ refuses to elaborate then leaves
@@BaronVladHarkonnen help this killed me
@@BaronVladHarkonnen i agree, best ending ever
@@AK-rx8gp 😂😂😂
The Trolley Witch basically being a demon came out of freaking nowhere.
Lady sells candy to children at day and terrorizes Spiderman at night😂
Ik right😂
Me 13.948 seconds into hogwarts legacy:
'Anything off the trolley dears?'
'AVADA KEDAVRA'
Avpm called it lol
I wonder why the trolley witch is a monster in the cursed child book? Is it because Harry took the lot from The trolley in the philosopher’s stone? Or the sorcerers stone for the American youtubers.
Even brushing aside the Time Turner aging its user... Prisoner of Azkaban made it abundantly clear that Time Turners caused closed loops (causal loops) - not alternate timelines. There was never a timeline where Buckbeak died and Sirius failed to be freed, because the time travel itself was factored into it. There were always another Harry and Hermione performing the deed. So it also just makes no sense here.
Exactly!
Yes! Harry and Hermione were just in two places at once. The movie got it perfectly right.
This exactly
Closed loop time travel is my favourite and makes the most sense if it were ever to be real tbh
I think Time Turners can cause both. Harry and Hermione was very careful not to affect the regular flow of events, and impacted only those that had nothing to do with the regular flow, except maybe the Patronus by Harry, but since Harry assumed it was his father or something, it was good. If the time turner user doesn't respect the rules and go on to affect the regular flow of events, alternate timeline gets made.
The moment they retconned how time turners work and character assassinated Cedric Diggory, I lost all respect for this stage play.
I'm just gana say it I liked the original book of Harry Potter book 8 and thought it was kinda cannon and I'm a huge fan of cedric diggory sadly he dies mmmm whatcha say poor cedric we will always remember the nice person he was NOT THE DEATH EATER HE WAS AND KILLS NEVLE NO JUST BECAUSE HE LOSESS THE GAME THATS NOT CANNON FIR CEDRIC DIGGORY makes me angry because I'm a cedric diggory fan.
@WiiManElite Destroying the time turners was the best decisions JK made.
I’ve said it before, I’ll say it again, we only ever saw what happens when time turners were used properly. Hermione warned us not to meddle, because terrible things happen to wizards who meddle with time. But we were never shown what this consequence might be. The creation of a parallel timeline where the user gets stuck might be the consequence. This is not a retcon, it’s new information.
yeah the retcon on the time turner was a huge oversight. maybe it was due in part to the series bein gso large that the thought slipped rowlings mind.
@@intergalactic92 Morgan literally explained how it breaks the pre-established canon, did you even watch the video?
The unforgivable curses:
Avada Kedavra (The Killing Curse)
Crucio (The Torture Curse)
Imperio (The controlling curse)
The Cursed Child (Makes every potterhead cringe so hard they Avada Kedavra themselves)
😂 very true
Underrated comment 😂
Agreed
True
True fr
FINALLY a rewrite where harry and hermione aren't having an affair, because for whatever reason everybody loves to have that in their rewrites even though it's stupid and unrealistic - it would never happen! this is an amazing rewrite of the script and how you were able to make such a great thing out of the original trash script... it's astounding. i'd love to see you do your own sequel, instead of just fixing this!
I agree. Austin McConnell’s video was going all good before that shit happened.
I'm glad to hear that this doesn't have that...
Ok. Might be worth looking into this, then. (Haven't watched the video yet as of this writing.)
Because I've seen an attempt to "fix" this story which only made it worse. Yes, I think it was that Austin one. And I've been dreading "fixes" of it ever since...
YEah, I love that Morgan took it seriously instead of that joke which Austin did.
Ron's a Smart man, he's not dumb. Besides Hermione loves him dearly.
Harry respects McGonagall. Bloody hell she did everything for him, He loves her as a Granny.
I think they were Watching Game of Thrones while writing Harry Potter, Hermione and Harry sex????
They were trying to give HP a GoT touch.
And if JKR considers this Idiocity as Canon then, she needs to be reminded of her old self, when she first wrote these novels.
This isn't canon no matter what.
However, there's one question in my head. If Harry said, "if you want to be Gryffindor, why don't you tell the hat", then how come Albus is still in Slytherin?
In my own rewrite he's a Gryffindor, it meant a lot to him, so he's in the same house as his parents and brother, Lily Luna Potter on the other hand is a Ravenclaw.
If I ever get my time, Albus will be a Gryffindor and he will make friends with Scorpius a Slytherin. Delphi and she alone will be the main villain. But, just like Voldy with a lot of supporters, Dark Wizards, Warewolves, Trolls and Giants.
Time turners aren't completely Out, but they just go back only up to 5 hours, not 29 years, because they know when they return they'll age as much.
Thus they fight Delphi while they go back in time but its just a few hours, like the Prizoner of Azkaban.
The innocent bi-standards who die are, Amos and his Wife, they die at Delphi's hand in my version. Finally uniting with their son.
But the House Diggory isn't extinct, they have many minor cousins, many nieces and nephews of Amos, but Delphi isn't one of them.
And Delphi is a Hogwarts student sorted in Gryffindor.
I like how Morgan made Delphi as Bellabitch and her husband's daughter. Voldy was Moldy, so he doesn't have sex.
Dennis Creevey also plays an important role in my version as his brother died too. And that line "How many would die for you Harry?" would fit Him better than Amos, because even though Amos lost his son, Dennis and Collin almost worshipped Harry in their schooldays.
Harry fights Draco. Strong duel.
Draco apologizes to Hermione for everything, every form of bullying.
Lucius is one of Delphi supporters, but he dies soon after his son and grandson disown him.
Hannah declares Dennis as the Godfather of Neville and Hannah's twin daughters Augusta Pomona Longbottom and Alice Minerva Longbottom.
Umbridge and Minerva duel takes place.
Sprout, Flitwick and Slughorn get a headon action while they handle multiple dark witches each.
"The Augaries" are equivalent to "The Death Eaters".
Harry finally enters Hufflepuff common room as well. Lorcan and Lysander Scamander play a minor role. Thus we get to see Luna and Rolf as well.
Delphi however recieves Dementor's kiss... Muah!!!!
The only thing is how to make all this work together, I need time to craft this story.
@@TheSdzfr this is cool! Have you read the James Potter series by G. Norman Lippert?
@@florelenav5819 Not yet, but saw a video about it.
I am more concerned with Albus's house, was it Gryffindor or Slytherin in that one?
I really Liked the improvement. It is much more logical. Few things I really liked
1. Omitting time travel
2. Omitting Voldemort
3. The things which you said about Ron. I hate when Ron is made fun of. I really think that Ron is great and you kept him that way.
4. Keeping harry the same. Good and Bad.
If you write it completely. I would love to read it
idk why they want the plot to still move around voldermort. He is dead get over it
And of course , omitting the trolley witches weird claws
@@valentinadevogueofficialxit hurt to think about it when reading the book
Yeah...Ron doesn't get much love, even in the books. I feel like him being good at wizard chess should have translated well to battle strategy, and positioning in general. Or just thinking ahead. None of that happened.
This is the actually fun way of fixing it. The easy way is:
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Changing the rumour of Scorpius to him being a werewolf is brilliant because it goes along with the long standing fan theory that Draco gets bitten by the werewolf Fenrir Greyback as punishment by Voldemort. The story is a big improvement over the garbage we got, and in my head, this is canon.
Great work as usual Morgan.
huh? never heard of that theory before, though I can see it easily being something voldy would do
@@alecrutz956 it's not canon, but it is something people have theorised about.
Tho theres an issue with this.. Harry wouldn’t be bothered by this rumour as he knew a werewolf himself and wasnt a bad person
@@Abhishek-ue6tj he would be if he saw the said werewolf dragging his son to a meeting of unruly, rebellious werewolves.
The fact they made Cedric into a death eater is so unreasonable, just like you said, for god’s sake he’s even a Hufflepuff
Edit: btw every time he is mentions in the book Harry describes him as handsome, also he is one of the few people who didn’t wear the potter stinks badges so add that to the list
The biggest character assassination ever ! Which considering Ginny and Ron are unrecognisable and Bill wasn’t even in the films is saying something!
@@katiekuchen9694 I guess it was Charlie who was never in the films. Bill was there in Deathly Hallows movies.
We can all agree Cedric would never do this. However, not all Hufflepuffs are flawless. None of them joined Voldemort as far as we know, but Smith did push firstyears behind him when he run away from the battle of Hogwarts, which is pretty bad.
I like the idea of a Hufflepuff death eater but NOT CEDRIC.
@Amanda Scott hufflepuffs are also known for having kind, compassionate people who have a strong sense of justice. Does that sound like a death eater to you?
Morgan: I Love All 8 Harry Potter Movies.
Cursed Child: Do You Mean 9?
Morgan: *He Doesn’t Even Know What He’s Saying….*
THANK YOU. Ugh, the Cursed Child is like a 10 years old child's first writing. I can't believe they butchered the characters so bad and created so many plotholes. Did they even read the books ONCE?
Ouch
They probs skimmed the first book and was like: alright, time to make an alternate dimension!
Sad how accurate this assessment is.
I believe they haven't even seen the covers of the books
How did jk rowling accept the script? That is my biggest mystery.
That prophecy was a banger. Adding the cursed child to it was a great idea
I like the idea of Delphie being Voldemort’s daughter. Maybe she could spend her entire live thinking she was Voldemort’s daughter and she taught she has to rule the dark. It would be good if at the Harry reveals that she is Lestrange daughter. That would be the shock of her life and will ruin her mind.
I honestly love this idea. I wish it were the case.
It would not be a lie since Delphini is a Lestrange daughter -- Bellatrix Black lestrange's daughter.
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But she needs a valid reason to think she's Voldemort's daughter to make it work.
Like a prophecy she misunderstood or someone of Voldemort's death eater manipulated her to think that because she's a very powerful sorceress and this would give her the determination to do great things "like her father before".
@@cannabishornliu6119 no I mean her thinking she’s Voldemorts daughter when all along she’s really just Bellatrix and Rudolphus daughter lol
That was a very good re-writing. Scorpius being a werewolf wasn’t wrong to Harry (after all, Lupin was) but it was Scorpius being a danger to his son.
Specifically pointing out that Cedric’s a HUFFLEPUFF brought a smile to my face. We’re canonically the house that has pumped out the least amount of dark wizards in all of Hogwarts history. It’s not the best or biggest argument as to why Cedric would never become a death eater, not even close, but this small emphasis and highlight on the nature of Hufflepuffs just made me smile. “Just and loyal, those Hufflepuffs are true, and unafraid of toil!”
Helga really cheated the system with Hufflepuff.
No thief would ever value honesty
No big bad would ever value justice
No cheater would ever value fair-play
There literally cant be a bad Hufflepuff.
No death eater has ever been from Hufflepuff
@@heartsy2838 actually I can see a dark wizard Hufflepuff, Honesty, Justice and Fair Play do not rule out evil.
Zacharias Smith, a gutless coward of a Hufflepuff, the exact opposite of the brave Cedric Diggory, was the only member of DA to not fight at The Battle of Hogwarts. He has the potential of being every bit the wretch Pettigrew was.
@@factfiend1000 oh god... he's so foul, i always forget he was a hufflepuff...
I don't know why you added the (Hopefully) at the end of the video title - it's amazing! Great job; there's never, ever a dull moment in seeing you putting these videos together
This rewrite is canon to me. This is what really happened.
Same! I consider this my headcanon!
@@Mr.Needle-Hamster same
Agreed
Looks like we all have a new canon !
Lol yes
To quote Diane (The Bad Guys) “even trash can be recycled into something beautiful”
Well said there
Hear hear
This is ACTUALLY a good story. I wish there was no follow-up to Harry Potter, but if there had to be one, it should be this.
When the trolley witch threw the pumpkin bombs, I was like, “You’re the trolley witch, not the Green Goblin!”
“You’re to late Dumbledore, Weed has been legalized!”
I remember just staring at the page as I read how the trolly lady turned into a spiderman villain
You win best comment!
Out am I?!
“It’s You that’s out, Trolley - Outta your mind!”
I love it, not only does it improve on the cursed child but it has one element I loved from the original series, travel. Don't get me wrong I love Hogwarts but having a book take place almost entirely in a school, especially in such a magic rich world as Harry Potter is just a waste, not to mention invokes PTSD from my own school days. That's why I love the fantastic beasts films, I don't want references to the world outside Hogwarts I want to see it. The mountains, the forests, the wizard town, this feels like a fantasy story
They literally could have beaten Percy Jackson to it with the school in the USA.
@@suzygirl1843 lol yes
The reason the cursed child is so disappointing for me is that the setting and characters had so much potential, as proved here. The time period, the idea of Harry trying to live a normal life but being affected by the events of the original series, the dynamics between Harry and his family, especially Albus, Albus being in Slytherin, friendship between Albus and Scorpius, etc could have made such a great story. But they chose such a stupid plot, and completely changed the personalities of characters from the originals.
I like watching videos like this, watching someone’s creativity unfold.
Creativity and analytical skills You go, Morgan!
Same
And them cursing the lives of the original garbage creater! Yes, yes, burn the terrible "authors"!!!!! 🔥 🔥 🔥
Agreed, i find it very enjoyable and entertaining.
This is much much better than I expected.
Delphi being Voldemort’s daughter fails in SO MANY LEVELS!
First: you mentioned earlier, Voldemort saw himself at his peak of immortality, so an heir would be pointless.
Second: he was unable to love, and thats canon. So why would he have sex?
Third: Voldemort would consider sex, something so primal, carnal and human as BENEATH him.
Fourth: considering how Rowling writes, a body revived via Horcrux, especialy so corrupted by dark magic and emaciated like that would, 100%, no shadow of a doubt, be INFERTILE. He might not even have a functioning penis, or, hell, does he even have functioning internal organs AT ALL? We never saw him eating or drinking aside from the snake’s “milk” prior to his ressurrection! I refuse to believe he got a functioning set of genitalia at all!
You don't need love for sex. Murder, theft, conquring are all base desires humans also have. Sex is a desire that drives nearly anyone, and Voldemort has rarely ever held back on carnal desires. They come to him on a whim and he does it without thinking it through. The killing of Snape comes to mind
I mean Voldemort DID love Nagini
Please don’t put the idea of Voldemort genitalia in my head…
@@kingconniebonnie2178 I think it’s to late
@@royalpain9281 yep… too late…
I love how hard you go in on anything you don’t like. Respect.
finally, someone who wasn't smoking anything made the cursed child. As you said it still has its plot holes but it's much more enjoyable and plausible. Just amazing
I'm sure if he could he would fix it properly. Maybe he should be jk Rowlings script writer
😂😂😂
The writers were wearing jewelry that they didn't know was a Horcrux. That's why they had polluted minds and was horny while writing.
@@trixmania that would honestly be amazing but nothing can really save the fandom anymore
The originals had their issues but like this rewrite those issues aren't really important as they are enjoyable anyway.
Delphi being Voldermorts child makes her have a great motive but the thought of Voldemort having sex, especially after he was brought back is too cringy and unthinkable. Thank you for doing a rewrite. Also too much time travel gets confusing making plot holes easy. Btw your premonition sounds way better. If you got this from 2 days imagine what you could have written after 2 months.
Voldermort is Truely Evil, I just can’t imagine him having sex it’s the same thing as Palpatine from Star Wars, who was also Truly Evil and yet is somehow Rey’s Grandfather. These Dark Lords have no love or urges for anything except power and immortality.
@@eternalhistory4706 well to be fair Palpatine had a kid that was really a clone of himself. I don’t necessarily think he reproduced himself
True, i think it would make sense if it involved asexual reproduction, like Voldemort created a child from a piece of his DNA so if all of his plans do fail he can still be revived by the child he created.
It was a child by love potion
@Jenny Shull No, it made him want to fuck
I like your version of the rewrite. Great job staying clear & succinct throughout. Staying true to the deepest nature of the characters as they were originally presented in the series.
- Ideas tangent... I wish they had taken some time to create a new threat instead of using time travel & revisiting dead villains. To show how the Wizarding world had changed. Perhaps how the Trio had effected the changes and interacted with members of the Wizarding community to accomplish these changes. There are so many opportunities to have shown scenes from the end of the Battle of Hogwarts to the 'modern day' with their children and the new challenges they face. How they dealt with the rights arguments for the different magical beings, etc. What other goings-on would they realistically be dealing with in a Wizarding World at peace? Everyday wizarding crimes? Perhaps bring back the Triwizard Tournament? Or Quidditch games at the pro level, maybe not the finals but the games leading up to the finals? Ginny was a pro player. They could have focused on other characters. Now that I think on it, what I am imagining is more a book of short stories providing glimpses into the everyday lives of some of our favorite characters, not so much a book or screenplay with any plot to it.
- Paperwork tangent... Harry is the Head of the Department for Magical Law Enforcement ... is it plausible that he could have had another member of the Dept or his aide (someone who reports to him) read all the reports and provide him with a summary of them? ... I feel like there are a few simple fixes for the paperwork problem. Surely there is another Percy Weasley/Hermione Granger-esque type of character to studiously do the bulk of the paperwork and provide relevant summaries to their superiors? ...
- Elder wand tangent... In the books Harry put the Elder Wand back in Dumbledore's tomb, unbroken. Harry losing to Delphie leaves a possible plot hole where she could somehow end up with the Elder Wand. Or a new person searching for the wand could track it. Maybe a rewrite to leave the wand in Dumbledore's tomb broken beyond magical repair? ...
- Werewolf tangent... I would have thought with Harry & Lupin's relationship & Harry being Teddy's godfather that werewolf relations could have been better. Perhaps a rewrite where Lupin & Tonks had survived the Battle of Hogwarts and lived with Harry as Teddy's godfather....? Perhaps Lupin could have had a few werewolves that also fought against the dark side at Hogwarts. Have some good examples that not all werewolves are bad/evil/etc...? I can just see a teenage Teddy Lupin & his mom, Tonks, in these super cute "Wolfie Rights" hoodies (that would match each of their hair colors at the moment of course) at a meeting perhaps headed by Remus, Kingsley, Harry, & Bill Weasley lobbying/making the argument to lift so of the laws/sanctions against werewolves or to is so way improve the average werewolf's rights. There were never really specifics about what rights were being suppressed. Also, I find it difficult for Harry, having known Lupin, being the godfather of Lupin's son, and being the Head of MLE, NOT to have any interest in the situation with the werewolves. Perhaps a rewrite with Harry supporting a special fund for St. Mungo's for any werewolves who wished to to be able to have access to the Wolfsbane Potion? Thus rendering them harmless during the full moon.
THIS. I wish I can like this twice
“That sounds like something a seven year old writing Harry Potter fanfictions would come up with”
That’s pretty much the entirety of Cursed Child summed up.
I bet I could write something better than this. Which I most definitely would!
@@Mr.Needle-Hamster bet
Nah, that's mean...to seven year olds
Her having blue hair actually gave me My Immortal vibes.
It feel like some preteen first fanfiction, you know, the ones that only care about an idea without the thinking of how to make said idea work.
Combined with someone test writing, you know, the kind you make to test and play with a narrative tool you just learned about. For example, the whole 'Scorpio is Voldemort Son' feel like an amateur writer play test the concept of a red herring.
This just proves how an amazing writer and film critic you are Morgan. Great job man, keep doing what you love
Here’s an idea: The Cursed Child could be about finding thr resurrection stone like Scorpious wants to so he can find his mom, and Delphie can try to “help” Albus and Scorpious but try to find it to revive Bellatrix or something
How to fix The Cursed Child.
Step 1: Invent functional Time Machine
Step 2: Go back in time to before the screenplay was completed
Step 3: Destroy all physical and digital copies, back-ups, and draft versions until the story is complelty unsalvagable.
Step 4: Relive the pandemic because Time Travel is a one way trip. But with the knowlage you saved all of man kind from a horrible fan fiction.
What about the people who created it. They'll just rewrite it.
@@catherineterry1111 Thats where Step 3 comes in. Their work will only disapear so many times before they get frustrated and give up on the idea.
@deh proceed to turn 1000 years old when u travel back to 2022 💀
Yeees!!! Cursed Child didn't need to exist and maybe, by altering the timeline so we wouldn't have this abomination, which in a "butterfly effect" sort of way may have even caused the pandemic in the first place 😅
@@korellation1402 Writing was invented around 8000 BC. So you'd be over 10000 years old after that return trip lol
The original Cursed Child was so horrible, I've never opened it again. And I reread books that I really like many, many times. Thank you for changing so much of that stomach-churning story. I still can't believe J.K. decided she'd allow that play to stand as canon.
just as much as Thorne & Tiffany didn't read the original 7 HP books before making the Cursed Child, i think Rowling didn't read the Cursed Child before classifying it as canon.
@@JuanMataCFC I lost any bit of respect I had for her when the cursed child came out and she said it was canon. As far as I'm concerned Harry Potter ended with the seventh book. And it won't go any farther
It so sad that it’s it that this happened I really wished it just ending the harry potter series at book 7 not this STUPID ASS BOOK
One of the things rhat bugged me the most about the Cursed Child is the fact rhat even Harry believed the rumors. The real Harry WOULD NEVER!
Harry had to deal with rumors that he was mad in the head for believing that Voldermort was back, had Voldermort in his head and he (Harry) worried that he was becoming just like Voldermort.
So the idea that Harry would allow a child, a freaking child, to deal with rumors about being a child of Voldermort, and not to mention , actually believe it and start a whole freaking investigation, is complete and utter bull crap
This was INCREDIBLE!
My only issue is with harry and the trio thinking it's a bad thing to be a werewolf when Lupin was one and he was still a good person and they loved him..
oh yhhh
if you loved someone you wouldn't want them to go through unbearable amount of pain every month, and you'd have to know they'd be shunned from society. you wouldn't care, but it'd be preferable if they weren't
I think my point still holds
I thought it was more of how those particular werewolves were allies of voldemort and if Scorpius was bringing Albus in that meeting, then he must be on their side, therefore a bad werewolf?
@@trismite ya i agree with you i was so sad when he died too
Now I want a 100% version of your idea on the Cursed Child.
Honestly
With Delphi the hair color thing you could have pulled it off making her a Metamorphmagus like her cousin Tonks. Also would be cool if you added in she is using Bellatrixs wand, like if Narcissa or Draco picked it up before the left the battle, and then gave it to baby Delphi.
I liked the werewolf angle with Scorpius, especially with all the fan theories out there that Draco is a werewolf! And it also can play into his homosexuality and having to hide who he really is.
For Harry and Draco, you should have added a distrust angle with Delphi cause Draco would have known about her, she was born in his house while he was there.
Thank you for getting rid of the time travel and alternate timelines they made no sense!
MovieFlame: I fixed the Cursed Child!
Us: *HE IS THE MESSIAH!*
Exactly, Voldemort didn't think about an heir because the only one he believed in was himself. Plus like you said, it's pretty obvious Scorpius is Draco's son. It's funny how JK Rowling forgets her own source material
It's not fully cuz of Rowling though it's the other two writers (i forgot their names)
The idea of Voldemort having sex (and with not one but TWO women) is so bizarre, I can’t even find a proper word😂
How would Draco even go about asking Voldemort to impregnate her wife ? Voldemort would say you could have asked my future self. And if he even hinted he was gonna die he himself would die and change the fate of the whole world
@@anastasiiabobeshko is blasphemy the word you're looking for?
Honestly the only reason I could see Voldemort having children is if he intended on raising them as weapons. Dude probably thought his children would be magically gifted and I never thought the whole heirs thing in Harry Potter was a real focus.
When I first read this script I was shocked at how out of character they made harry. He is supposed to be a smart, kind-hearted person. For example he wasn’t even able to do crucio properly on Bellatix right after she just killed Sirius. I really like your rewrite, it’s WAYYYY better than that original piece of bullcrap. I would quite enjoy reading this. I just don’t like how delphi is more powerful than Harry, I feel like that kind of disrespects harry’s brilliance. Keep up the good work man! Also if you see this comment I hope you have an amazing day/night!
I thought he said she only overpowered harry because she prepared traps not because she was stronger than him
@@FlaggermusMann_ he did say that so your right Delphi is not stronger than Harry , she was just being smart by setting traps
I don't know he uses crucio on another death eater as well and the imperious curse on a few people. He really should be in Azkhaban.
@@FlaggermusMann_ I think your right because I realized she just set up traps for the whole book
Well she gained the upper hand because
• She was using dark magic meanwhile Harry wasn't
• She set up traps
• She had the Invisibility cloak
Greatest rewrite ever! This should have been the real script for the Cursed Child. Love it so much!
“And using her Pumpkin Pastys as bombs.”
Since when was the trolley Witch the Green Goblin!?!?
That’s a way better story than in the actual CC book.
There are 2 things I would add:
1. Harry giving Albus the marauders map, when he’s at the same age as James was when he got the cloak. That should take place close to the end, and it would make Albus respect his father even more.
2. Harry’s worries being fueled by nightmares about the past, and him suffering from PTSD.
I like the idea of n.o 1, but I think it would be kinda cool if the map died when the last marauder died ( Remus)
when did rattigrew die?
@@Keli-yi1mp in Malfoy Manor, a little before the trio escaped with Luna and Dobby
@@Ori_Kohav oh yes, sorry it's been awhile since i've watched the movies/read the books
This rewrite you wrote Movieflame is so much better! I give you 5 gold stars! ⭐️
Harry Potter books are mysteries disguised as books about magic
The cursed child is a time travel story disguised as a Harry Potter book
I don't like that critic. It assumes that the story needs to be a mystery story just by being in the setting of HP, and the way he says it sounds like time travel is inherently a bad trope and that's why the story is bad (because it's a time travel book, not because it's a bad book with many different flaws).
Good books usually have an element of mystery regardless
@@juanferrer5924 Nowadays they do, but they don't have to.
It seems that is very fashionable in modern literature to set-up mysteries that get solved as the plot advances. But you don't have to have explicit mysteries in the story that need to be solved, of course.
Hi Austin McConnell fan!
@@didack1419it has a lot of flaws, time travel is hard to get right and they didn't this time
The Ron hand thing and Hermione saving him is nostalgic since that happened in the seventh book and showed how much she really cared about him
Exactly! They aren't just thrown together accidentally by Rowling, they actually care about and love each other! They do fight alot, but it's a testament to their love building up in the 7 books.
@@S-Mania they’re like an old married couple
I really like this story and watched it with as much joy and anticipation as I did when reading the books! Incredible!
I really like how it ends and in my head you could setup a new series around the "cursed child" where each year he encounters problems after problems, like his father before him, however we could give the final book a darker ending where Harry has to face his child dying thus giving credence to the "cursed" part of his name.
I know it's dark but I feel it takes the story in a new way not ignoring nor drudging up the past as we so often see with sequels to classics now, but still gives real weight to it and a meaningful if tragic experience.
This stuff is gold! The cursed child REALLY needs a rewrite. Thank you so much for making this!!!! It’s amazing! WAY better than the original.
FINALLY
AN ACTUAL GOOD CURSED CHILD!
can't wait to watch 🤩
Same lol
The only cursed child that I would like (and has good storytelling and plot)
@@t-archer0820 it does sound really good!
This man should be a writer
@@t-archer0820 nahh still poop but this piece of garbage cant be made good just less poopoop
Once upon a time, I would’ve said that I love absolutely everything to do with Harry Potter. Then, I read the script for the Cursed Child.
If I wrote the Sequel for the Harry Potter series, I would make it about Teddy Lupin, mainly because we don’t know much about him. I think we should have a book series about Teddy growing up without his parents and his relationship with Victoir Weasly.
In cursed child for whatever reason he doesn’t exist like he is not mentioned once
@shalizey1007 They even cut his mention from the recreated Epilogue scene!
I would happily read the story the way to recreate it here!! I loved how you corrected the personality of the characters esp Harry and Ron, the prophecy was just awesome, and I loved how you used the stigma behind werewolves in this story showing how difficult their lives are. I would definitely read the story if you rewrite it!
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This was a beautiful rewrite, in particular, Albus saying "somehow, Voldemort returned" gave me chills.
I would add a flashback where Harry brings Kreacher, Winky and all the other House Elves to Dobby's grave at Shell Cottage. Where they have a proper Funeral for him. Which would be a nice send-off. 33:01.
That is a great idea, very touching.
yeah but where exactly would you add it? not really a place
@@gibbsterV Maybe in a dream.
How does that fit in this story ?
@@Kaygu_ Truth is I've never read the Script or watched the play. I've just watched people's videos explaining why they hate it.
I really appreciate the way you tell this, too - relating it to parallel scenes in the play and reminding us of important changes whenever they are relevant again. Great job!
I guess an argument that Harry could still speak parseltoungue was because he could still remember it. In the battle of hogwarts we could see that Ron had picked up parsletongue from Harry’s sleep, so it is possible to learn it I guess
Actually that makes sense i never thought of that.
But I think there is a difference between remembering words in a foreign language (which is basically what Ron did) and actually understanding/speaking a foreign language
I like the idea actually, he would still remember a few words at least. I remember i tried learning Japanese and remembered a few basics. Maybe it works like any other language? I like it.
I don't see how he could've remembered it. It makes sense for Ron to have picked up on some words, but Harry thought he was speaking English when he was speaking it, he never actually heard the words.
@@THATBrokeAroSpecWallet nope, it's not like that, completely different
If this version would have been in the original script, I would have not only read it several hundred times, but also watch the play in a heart beat. Excellent story telling you did, great job!
Honestly, I’d read this book with the script you wrote
In addition: I would’ve written something in about former Death Eaters that have repented being reintegrated into the rest of the wizarding society. It would show the mercy of the good side, and add to the plot quite a bit.
I love the changes you made! But I absolutely hate the fact that the writers of the cursed child ignored Rose completely. I mean, her, Albus and Scorpius had so much potential as a trio. And to be honest, I was really keen on seeing Rose and Scorpius in a relationship despite the fact that their families don't get alog.
Albus and Scorpius would've been better
@@mrdr0161 I respect your opinion, but I am a sucker for enemies to lovers or secret relationship tropes :)
Honestly me too. Rose is the same age as them, plus a child of two members of the Golden Trio. Writing her out of the story and having her being needlessly mean the whole time felt like such a waste.
I'm glad you included the lore regarding the Time Turners aging the user. On top of the Time Turners working in a casuality loop, this detail also puts to bed the criticism regarding wizards using the Time Turners to go decades into the past. They appear to be objects used for research or viewing events one was not present for.
People then state "if these objects are so dangerous, why did a student get one?" First, only one student got one and Hermione had already shown herself to be studious and took the rules and her education very seriously (for the most part). Dumbledore would absolutely trust her to use it wisely and he could very easily pull strings to get ahold of one. In terms of use, I'm sure Dumbledore and Hermione both agreed any mishaps related to Time Turner abuse would result in their punishments.
Yes, time turners should be limited to a tool for viewing past events but not far in the past, Rowling doesn't have great foresight, she created problems (also notable: slavery) in her world building without being prepared to solve them or take them seriously.
@@c.w.8200 Like the aging part was an addendum added after the series ended, I believe but the causality loop existed in the very book they were introduced and was even fully explained. Having them would ruin a lot of elements such as the mystery solving. Hell, it would easily show Umbridge's abuse toward the students and even have proven Voldemort's return. So Rowling destroys them all to allow her story to continue happening.
Hermione even says in the third book that McGonagall had to fight extremely hard to get Hermione that time turned and that it was strictly for academic purposes
Exactly, and thats how timeturners should have stayed. There really wasnt even a reason for Neville to destroy them all but it just adds even more reasons why the cursed child makes 0 canon sense. If Rowling was smart shed just reiterate the rules of timeturners to begin w
This needs to be the new canon. Imagine in another ten years or so they make this version a film with the original cast. Ah one can dream.
You say this isn’t the sequel you’d make, can you make a video detailing the sequel you WOULD make?
UUUUh yesss, this is music to my ears. This can be 100% a HP plot. Everything fits. The slow introduction, The characters act as they should be. The plot thickens. yes, so much yes.
I only read the cursed child once and hated it. Though of what I remember this seems a much more story in line with the original books. Its truly sad that cursed child is cannon. I think what you fixed made it much more palatable. Not exactly how I would've pictured a sequel to the series. Just much better than what we actually got.
canon*
I do not consider cursed child to be canon. It's a tacked on attempt to milk the canon for more cash.
*noncanon. I will never read a book were tge hero of my childhood Harry slaps his own son. NEVER!!
Same like I expected much more before I read it but afterward I hated it as much as I hate Umbrigde
This rewrite is soooooo much better. Thank you for fixing it. I was so mad at the ridiculousness of the Cursed Child and its utter lack of respect for the Harry Potter books but now I can feel slightly better with this rewrite.
Can definitely relate to Harry not wanting to do his homework
😂
including Harry's dislike of paperwork/homework as a plot point was such a good move.
Also who enjoys paperwork other then maybe hermione?
🤣🤣🤣
29:07 I absolutely loved that line. It showed that oliver was not only a passionate athelete but also a fair player.
They don't make Ron dumb in just the Cursed Child, they have been doing it for all the movies. They just make Hermione perfect and Ron dumb.
This sounds so much plausible! Thank you for sharing your fixing story of a disastrous "canon" play 😂
" cannon" love this. It's so bad I don't count it as cannon.
I would have honestly liked that you had kept the kitchen battle scene between Harry and Draco because, if I remember correctly, Draco apologizes for destroying the kitchen and Ginny replies ‘oh, it’s not my kitchen, Harry does most of the cooking’ and I just laughed at that so much😂
But anyway, it was a very nice rewrite.😊
Everyone in this play: Scorpius is Voldemort’s son
Me: Excuse me he has a nose
Ha!
Thats what Rose said
This fixes everything about the Cursed Child for me. You did well here. This is the way it should be not the way it is. The Cursed Child make Harry look scared, unknowing and dumb as well as Ron. I like the way you complete this story and this story would be more believe and much more cannon then the original Cursed Child.
Thank you for this because this is an amazing Fix to a play that should have not be made. I really hope JK rowling take this play and say it is not Cannon anymore. That would be amazing because all of the plot hole and problems it has with all of the characters from the Original.
“-as I turn this garbage script-“
My dude is full on roast mode with zero mercy 🤣🤣🤣
I thank you, truly, for filling up the void after reading that garbage book. Now I truly feel full, knowing that the series had a sensible and meaningful ending. Even if it's not canon, it'll always, and I mean always, be canon to me...
God bless man...🙏🏼
i DO wish that maybe Teddy Lupin could’ve had a role in it, and maybe they could’ve showed that he was a werewolf, and he could’ve helped them.
I’m pretty sure it’s canon he’s a metamorphis not a werewolf
except he isn't a werewolf
@@lordofmushrooms8804it is, it’s in the 7th book
The apparating effect in this was amazing, great job movieflame
I agree
How the cursed child was made canon:
Writers: Hey J.K, we have written a
book. It's probably worth
alot of money.
J.K Rowling: Money? It's canon.
Your version is SOOO much better than the crap Tiffany and Thorne wrote. If this is what you made with all of the restrictions you gave, then your own original Harry Potter sequal idea must be certified gold. Hope you make a video of it in the near future.
Morgan: Delphi is not going to be Voldemort’s daughter
Potterheads: Oh, thank Merlin
Had to change to make it fit with the theme
Thank you. there are so many stupid plot holes and inconsistencies in the official Cursed Child, and you addressed almost all of them. I do think Ron could be fleshed out more, but considering the garbage you had to base this rewrite on, amazing work! I respect you even more after hearing you mention how "show don't tell" is the number one rule in story writing, and prove you understand it. Bravo!
I like to add that during that conversation with Draco and harry about asking harry to put a stop on the “rumor’s” about Draco’s son and using the werewolf regition act but when harry said no I wanted Draco too say “and I thought you were the one who broke the rules “ then harry said “ you do realize that I broke the rules to save people not to be rude “ which he literally does though out the entire series.
"Also, about Delphi's bluish-gray hair, that sounds like something a seven-year-old writing Harry Potter fanfiction would come up with." Why is this my favorite line of the video?
EDIT: OMG 200+ likes! I did not expect for this comment to blow up! Thank you!
I would have left Delphi having blue hair and it be the fact she is a Metamorphmagus like her cousin Nymphadora be the reason for her colourful hair; and I would have explained that the Metamorph trait runs in the Black family, and just like how Andromeda's daughter and grandson had the gene and are Metamorhmagi , Delphini as Bellatrix's daughter, and Andromeda's niece also has that gene. I than would have altered some things such as instead of using the Imperius curse on Amos and controlling him that way , she instead knocked him out and used her abilities as a Metamorphmagus and impersonated him, I would even leave in some of the uncharacteristic dialogue some characters have, such as how "Harry" speaks to Minerva, how "Ron" acts in public places joking and being an idiot to them being instances where it was Delphi using her abilities as a Metamorphmagus, you could have Minerva, and Hermione, be confused as to why Harry and Ron are acting so out of character and it could be later explained because Delphi was acting off information and prejudices her father, and mother (through Bellatrix's diary) had about how Harry and Ron acted. The Death Eaters saw Harry as being full of himself, and they saw Ron was nothing more than Harry's idiot, foolish sidekick. Like take Snape's line in PoA about how Harry and James strut through the halls of hogwarts. To which Harry countered with My father never strutted through the castle nor do I. This shows there is a bias out there of how Harry acts and behaves and those not close to Harry would assume he does these things. Again you could keep certain uncharacteristic dialogue and actions of Harry and other characters in the play, if it is revealed that it was Delphi using her abilities as a Metamorphmagus to infiltrate Harry's group and to also bypass Hogwarts security as even with Dementors at Hogwarts during PoA and arguably when the security of the school was at it's highest, both Sirius and Peter were both able to smuggle into the school and move around freely using their Animagus abilites, so my Delphi with her Metamorphmagus abilities would be able to exploit weaknesses in the school's defences; and it wouldn't be after various different talks that the Adults as well as the reader learn learn how Delphi did this. And it would be her ultimate goal of having Harry lose his son, as she blames, Harry, Ron, Hermione, the Weasley's, Draco, her Aunt Narcissa etc... in her losing her mother so attacking and targeting both the sons of Harry and Draco achieves her revenge plot.
@@brandoman79 I like it.
All of the cursed child really feels like a wattpad fanfic lmao
Amazing Video once again @MovieFlame especially with the new prophecy, which was amazing, hope to see more videos like this!
This is an amazing rewrite! You’re an incredible storyteller. It’s clear these writers know very little about the harry potter franchise. Almost all of the characters we love are portrayed very badly and in a way that undermines the previous books. Their plot is so unrealistic and juvenile. I’d love to read and watch your version!
Morgan, okay where do I start?! I absolutely adored this video and your rewrite, I thought it was fantastic. I'm so grateful for those two long days you put into rewriting the script, since now I can finally sleep soundly at night 😂👏💕. As you've mentioned, I too am so excited for your full on self-written sequel, whenever it comes ♡, but till then you've done a phenomenal job on this 👏👏👏
That was a really good rewrite! That was so much better than what we got. Though, having the trolls and giants be on the stage version might be a bit hard to do. Those scenes might not work too well in a play because you can only do so much action on a stage. I like you kept some real parts of Harry's flaws while throwing the fake ones from the play out. Really great job!
I just love these harry potter breakdowns please never stop!
Delphine could have the hair based on the slight possibility of inheriting the genes that Tonks got allowing her to shape shift to look however she liked…
Tonks and Delphine are cousins so there is defenaly a possibilitie
Harry only ever gave 1 autograph, and that was for Colin Crevey, and he put it on his grave.
He gave no other autograph his one autograph was an act of respect not like Lockhart.
I think you did an excellent job of rewriting the Cursed Child and I'm pretty curious of how your sequel would have been!
I think this is your masterpiece. I’ve been a fan of this channel for like 5 years now and this is one of my favorite videos of yours. I wish a bunch of us fans could get together and shoot the breeze about Harry Potter and the Percy Jackson series. Loving the content overall!
It makes so much more sense now. I never think of cursed child as anything to do with Harry Potter, it’s the only way to survive that horrible script. Thanks for a much more believable story.
Man as soon as you changed the rumor about Scorpius I knew this was going to be amazing. You notice even the tiniest crappy details about this book. I'm halfway through the video and I love what you've done so far.
You know I came up with a character Aurora Lestrange because I though Bellatrix would be pushed to have a child, just like she was pushed to get married by her family's pure blood doctrine to carry on the pure blood family line. She was highly eccentric, a bit unstable, and carried trauma from knowing neither of her parents actually loved her...
“A terrible story is a terrible story. There is no fixing that.”