58keys William Gallagher
58keys William Gallagher
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Ulysses in the Dock
I don't use Ulysses for Mac, iPhone or iPad -- but here's why 58keys Patreons Leopold Green and Stuart Bilverstone think both you and I should.
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Contact Leopold Green via email: leopold@williamgallagher.com
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Workshop: Surprises
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How I like to write surprises in a story and why this forces me to write better, too. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/p/PLCtk0vyOGM40dh0gwg17tWI70Y1Qhh4Sj&si=qa8uc8vtOxHs9dlg If you b...
Appy Christmas
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Now the best Mac apps writers can buy themselves for Christmas. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/p/PLCtk0vyOGM40dh0gwg17tWI70Y1Qhh4Sj&si=qa8uc8vtOxHs9dlg If you buy through my Amazon o...
Workshop: Don’t answer questions in drama
Просмотров 330День назад
Drama dialogue must sound real, it mustn't be real. Here's my favourite example to do with questions and the best responses. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/p/PLCtk0vyOGM40dh0gwg17tWI...
Christmas devices for writers
Просмотров 87914 дней назад
Forget buying presents for others, this is Christmas for you as a writer who uses Apple gear. Seven or so hardware device recommendations with apps coming next week. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop video...
Workshop: Don't Ask Questions in Articles
Просмотров 48014 дней назад
So why shouldn't you ask questions in articles? Find out why it was painful for me to even type that. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/p/PLCtk0vyOGM40dh0gwg17tWI70Y1Qhh4Sj&si=qa8uc8vtO...
You're Not Writing Enough
Просмотров 88021 день назад
This week's new 58keys video was supposed to be about Apple Intelligence but I can see it in your eyes: you're not writing enough. These apps may help. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net...
Workshop: The Halving Exercise
Просмотров 48321 день назад
Try this ruthless, merciless, hateful editing exercise and watch how much you improve a piece. Thanks to Alex Townley for The Halving Exercise: alextownley.co.uk LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: r...
The best new Mac app updates
Просмотров 1,6 тыс.28 дней назад
If you've already got these Mac apps, the updates are Christmas. If you haven't, you know what to do. 00:00 Introduction 03:25 Hazel 06:36 Raycast 09:08 CleanMyMac 11:19 Default Folder X 13:29 Perplexity for Mac 17:17 Final Cut Pro 11 LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P ...
Workshop: How to Write a News Story
Просмотров 531Месяц назад
If you know how to write a news story, so do your characters. And both you and they will also be able to read news to see when something is not right. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/...
Littlest Keyboard on the iPhone
Просмотров 883Месяц назад
From the smallest practical keyboard for the iPhone to the impractical and even smaller but possibly more fun. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys Writing Workshop videos: ruclips.net/p/PLCtk0vyOGM40dh0gwg17tWI70Y1Qhh4Sj&si=...
Workshop: What to do when you are rejected
Просмотров 545Месяц назад
You did all the right things, you wrote well, and still you're rejected. You cannot change a no into a yes, but you can dramatically help with future prospects and have a calmer soul, too. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Watch the 58keys...
Extra: Writing in Tough Times
Просмотров 1,4 тыс.Месяц назад
It's been a hard week to concentrate on writing and it may not get better anytime soon. But while the regular 58keys Writing Workshop videos continue as normal tomorrow at 7pm UK time, I wanted to say this to you. Don't let writing be something more to beat yourself up about and when you can, do let it be something that helps. LINKS: The Self Distract post I mention: williamgallagher.com/selfdi...
Choosing between MacBook Air and MacBook Pro
Просмотров 4,4 тыс.Месяц назад
Short version: you're a writer, choose the MacBook Air. Yet I bought a MacBook Pro back in 2021 so there are reasons to go for the much more costly device. Or I'm an idiot. It's Occam's razor, isn't it? LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.patreon.com/user?u=86274276 Join the Writer's Mailing list too: eepurl.com/gQTqTT Buy my book on Amazon US: amzn.to/3KhF19P Or Amazon UK: amzn.to/3IzZm94 Wa...
ASMR: Keep writing one word at a time
Просмотров 532Месяц назад
I'm getting through today by being in my own stories instead of the real world and just writing one word after another. It helped me. If I've understood ASMR correctly, maybe it will help you too. This is just an hour of getting on typing. This is an extra edition of 58keys, the regular weekly one will be out at 19:00 UK time as ever. I hope you like it. LINKS: Support 58keys on Patreon: www.pa...
Workshop: How to Get Rejected
Просмотров 994Месяц назад
Workshop: How to Get Rejected
Choosing between the new iMac, Mac mini and MacBook Pro
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Choosing between the new iMac, Mac mini and MacBook Pro
58keys Writing Workshop Trailer
Просмотров 721Месяц назад
58keys Writing Workshop Trailer
iPad mini, Kindles, something, something oh my
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iPad mini, Kindles, something, something oh my
Announcement and more writing on iPads
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Announcement and more writing on iPads
Regretting or not regretting the huge iPhone 16 Pro Max
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Regretting or not regretting the huge iPhone 16 Pro Max
58keys Extra Viewers' Small Keyboards
Просмотров 7042 месяца назад
58keys Extra Viewers' Small Keyboards
The Second Littlest Writing Setup
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The Second Littlest Writing Setup
Ten Reasons to Upgrade (and two not to)
Просмотров 1,4 тыс.3 месяца назад
Ten Reasons to Upgrade (and two not to)
Apple's new iPhone launch for writers
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Apple's new iPhone launch for writers
Extra: Making and writing 58keys
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Extra: Making and writing 58keys
Three Biscuit Guide to the Stream Deck for Writers
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Three Biscuit Guide to the Stream Deck for Writers
Writer's' travel accessories -- What You Leave Behind
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Writer's' travel accessories What You Leave Behind
OmniFocus -- The Fourth Biscuit
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OmniFocus The Fourth Biscuit
First Look: Apple Intelligence for Writers
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First Look: Apple Intelligence for Writers

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  • @TheOjnop
    @TheOjnop День назад

    A very interesting video, thank you. I used Ulysses in the past but gave up when they changed to the subscription model. I have looked at it again quite recently, but after the free trial period decided it wasn't worth going back. I have used Scrivener in the past but really didn't like it much--Ulysses is better in my view. I do like Markdown, having taken it up a few years ago. I much prefer to write using it, mainly because having seen various word processors come and go, leaving users stranded with files in unique formats, I want to be sure I can easily access my work on any computer, pad or phone using any operating system. My writing these days is usually no more than about 2-3000 words two or three times a week and I have found iA Writer (on the Mac and iPad) ideal. One button transforms my Markdown text into a PDF preview, and I often use just that on an iPad mini to speak from. Export to docx, PDF or HTML is no problem.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 21 час назад

      You've reminded me of a time when I gave a speech, reading from my iPad. Normally I memorise them but this was on a topic that was changing up to the last moment so I couldn't. At one point, though, I gesticulated forcefully, and somehow I could see all of my text turn to italic, then to bold -- and then to disappear entirely. I've got an audio recording of that speech and you can hear the moment it happens. I was able to do finish the last ten minutes from memory, but I swear the sound you hear in the moment is of my stomach lurching.

  • @joecrieda7555
    @joecrieda7555 День назад

    Enjoyed that, thanks a lot for sharing.

  • @daniellbrinneman
    @daniellbrinneman День назад

    You might be able to change the keyboard shortcuts in the app by using Keyboard Shortcuts in macOS settings.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 21 час назад

      I tried that, thanks, and it just wouldn't work. It was like it was all being overwritten or countermanded each time. But since I made that, the app has been updated and the Shortcuts option is a little -- a little -- more prominently displayed.

  • @Marco.fm.73
    @Marco.fm.73 День назад

    Thank you, Sir William, for the video. I'm considering replacing my M1 MacBook Air with an iPad for writing, as it's becoming increasingly difficult for me to use the Mac. However, I currently rely on Plottr, Scrivener, and ProWritingAid. Do these tools work well on an iPad, or would it be better to switch to Ulysses once I make the transition?

    • @chc9149
      @chc9149 День назад

      Scrivener outperforms without any doubt Ulysses…on Mac and iPad.

    • @Marco.fm.73
      @Marco.fm.73 23 часа назад

      @chc9149 Thank you for your response. I’ve come across some vlogger Scrivener users who mentioned that they start writing on an iPad but complete the process on a MacBook. This gave me the impression that using Scrivener on an iPad alone might not be sufficient for publishing books. What are your thoughts on this?

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 21 час назад

      You can use just the iPad version of Scrivener. The Mac edition has more options, but I actually think that Scrivener for iPad was an improvement because it simplified those last choices about outputting your book.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 21 час назад

      I should say that while Scrivener is great on the iPad, I don't have any experience of Plottr or ProWritingAid. Hadn't even heard of the latter before!

    • @obbiie1979
      @obbiie1979 19 часов назад

      Plottr has a progressive web app and works well on the iPad. PWA will not work on the ipad at all right now. Ulysses is far more feature complete on Ipad vs. Scriveners Ipad version. It's pretty much the same as the Mac app. Scrivener is 'fine' on ipad but for me, it only works for a first draft. You can't use custom meta data on iPad for example, and I use that a lot in editing.

  • @daniellbrinneman
    @daniellbrinneman День назад

    I like the roundtable discussion. CSS is easy to learn. Please include these folks websites in your video description.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 22 часа назад

      That's a very good point, I should have included them. I'm checking with them both what links are best for them, and will update as I get them. Thanks.

  • @SFAutor
    @SFAutor День назад

    I tested Ulysses for almost a year alongside my main work with Scrivener and quickly realised that Ulysses could not be integrated into my workflow. Many of the features I appreciate about Scrivener are missing in Ulysses. It is a well-made and well-thought-out writing app, but from my point of view, it is not an alternative to Scrivener. Greetings from Germany, Thomas.

  • @1monki
    @1monki День назад

    I used Ulysses until they moved to a subscription model. Currently I'm using Helix and Pandoc to achieve much the same thing.

  • @filip.alimpic
    @filip.alimpic День назад

    Thank you for this video, and for sharing Patreon call with us! Ulysses is a good app, and I am glad people are using it for such a big projects. For me it didn't work. I did not feel like it was an app that I can use to do big projects. For capturing notes I use Bear, and it reminded me of Bear on steroids - but that is just me. I use Scrivener, and with "split screen" option, and some other features, it just gives me so much more than Ulysses. But, Ulysses is such a beautiful app, that I only wish Scrivener would have interface like Ulysses.

  • @johnnyragadoo2414
    @johnnyragadoo2414 День назад

    I need to give Ulysses (and setapp) another look. It might solve my quest for an outliner that suits me, too. I could see sheets as topics, nested as needed. Or I should just upgrade my Mac and get OmniOutliner. That could work, too, and it would be nice to escape the Ghost of MacOS Past. But not for a couple more weeks. Tis the season for uplifting ghost stories, so I'll stick with my old Mac for now, rattling chains and tattered burial shroud notwithstanding. Edited to add: Forgot my manners - excellent video as always and a privilege to see familiar faces. Merry Christmas from East Coast ports of opportunity!

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 День назад

    Three accents for the price of one...thus, an enjoyable trip today. Enjoyed hearing the three of you talk. And now I've checked out the app...so you made me go further....

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 21 час назад

      Ooh! I'd be very curious to know how you find Ulysses for the type of writing you do.

  • @pinsantoni
    @pinsantoni 2 дня назад

    I was expecting some sort of surprise at the end of the video related to the clock on your iPad near you!

  • @sclyon
    @sclyon 2 дня назад

    As a horror author I would love a more scary button

  • @sclyon
    @sclyon 2 дня назад

    I was quite surprised to see iPads on sale at Walmart and Best Buy here in the states. So I got a base model iPad with no upgrades for $279. I'm officially an iPad writer now. I have a keychron q1 pro that I paired via Bluetooth quite nicely and I went on and got scrivener. Thank you for your wonderful videos about these fantastic products sir!

  • @roberthowe1595
    @roberthowe1595 2 дня назад

    I like misdirection in writing. It’s something I’ve experimented with quite a bit and would like to get better at.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      Same here. It’s delicious when it works. I want to tell you the name of a book where the ending made me gasp but that would rather spoil it, wouldn’t it?

    • @roberthowe1595
      @roberthowe1595 2 дня назад

      Fire away. I’ll suspend belief in the plot twist while reading.

  • @GaelyneGasson
    @GaelyneGasson 3 дня назад

    You've commented in the past a few time about the show 'Lou Grant'. That was a favourite of mine when I was in high school. I could swear on a stack of bibles that they used the 3 part trick often - as well as quite a few other 70's and 80's drama series. I remember teaching my late husband to pay attention during the first 5 minutes of a show so he wouldn't be confused by the ending. 😂

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      I’ve been reading some Lou Grant scripts recently; all these years later and they still stand up so well. I am a writer because of that show. Although possibly also because I knew to pay attention at the start. I can only imagine how much more enjoyment your guy got out of TV drama after you’d shown him the error of his ways.

  • @Marine_0317
    @Marine_0317 3 дня назад

    Thank you for this video, I have one question; hope you can answer. Was there anything taken away or removed from previous versions, mainly from version 12?

  • @sclyon
    @sclyon 3 дня назад

    I'm not an apple person but this is definitely a very interesting discussion sir and thank you for the great videos as always. And for somebody wanting to get their first Apple computer would you recommend the Mac Mini for somebody that doesn't travel around a lot with their computer? I see that it's not too crazy expensive

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      Thanks. If you already have a screen, keyboard and mouse then the new Mac mini is an astounding bargain. If you have to buy all of those peripherals too, it’s obviously less good. - but I still think worth it.

  • @GutsyGibbon
    @GutsyGibbon 3 дня назад

    I am a big fan of this idea. I think of it as the Rod Serling Twilight Zone mode. It's a 30-minute show with two commercial breaks. The first part introduces the thing, the second part makes you think you know what is happening, and part three is a complete surprise. By the way, my wife and I are huge Lark Rise fans!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      Ah, I was with you to the end there when you sprang a surprise. Unless you’re being so clever that I am now mansplaining, Lark Rise was by Bill Gallagher, not me, William. I did film a video for BBC/Radio Times of a Lark Rise cover shoot with all the cast, but that’s as close as I’ve come to that show.

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 3 дня назад

    It's no surprise that it is Monday and that you are here...and so am I.

  • @bilvers
    @bilvers 3 дня назад

    You've made me think that I need to alter the opening chapter for Mince Pies a little.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      Ulp. I didn't mean to do that. Tiptoes away quietly.

  • @saintdonoghue
    @saintdonoghue 3 дня назад

    Does the fact that I was totally expecting there to be an actual gun in the video make me a gimmicky writer ... or just an American?

  • @rebeccajordan3732
    @rebeccajordan3732 4 дня назад

    Wish I had found this video sooner!! To late. But at least I got upgrade for discount of $65. Thanks for your review.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      I still feel bad about giving Final Draft a poor review when overall I like it. But maybe this is telling: I got a discount offer too -- I don't think it was as low as yours but it was significant -- and I still haven't got around to upgrading.

  • @lynntaylor6660
    @lynntaylor6660 5 дней назад

    Thanks so much for taking the time to do this "sad" review. (add emoji smiley face) I am very happy you posted it because I really have been considering going up from 12 to 13 and I will just save my $100 and wait for version 15 or 16. I also started with 6, upgraded to 8 and then to 12. Each of those upgrades I feel has been worth it. FD is a fantastic programme. Thank for taking the time!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      My pleasure, thank you for commenting. I will definitely be looking out for what they do next plus eventually I think I'll have to upgrade but, like you, I'm thinking versions 15 or 16.

  • @joecrieda7555
    @joecrieda7555 6 дней назад

    One thing that is rarely covered in Scrivener articles is it can accept other app docs (Omni Outliner, PDF, Mind node etc…) and display them as integral files or as stand alone documents in its own window. I use this a lot and can really appreciate the way this integrates into a Scrivener project .

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 2 дня назад

      And I did not know that. Excellent. Well, no, I knew about PDF but not OmniOutliner or MindNode and I use both of those. Thanks very much.

  • @BowersVoice
    @BowersVoice 7 дней назад

    Watching this made me want to ask more questions of my characters! Thanks (as always), William!

  • @flappospammo
    @flappospammo 7 дней назад

    I bought a macbook pro , wish i'd bought an imac or mini , i HATE laptops and am only using it as I'm between moving properties ... lesson learned... wondered why i hadn't bought one ( white ibook G3 ) since 2001 ... now i can remember .... awful keyboard , fragile screen , total rip off price too

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 7 дней назад

      It would mean yet more money, of course, but you could plug in a separate keyboard and monitor once you've got to the property you're moving to. Is that possible? Or practical?

    • @flappospammo
      @flappospammo 7 дней назад

      @@WilliamGallagher I guess so , I was looking at getting one of those cradle things to hold the laptop and use an external keyboard ... maybe for xmas :)

  • @GaelyneGasson
    @GaelyneGasson 8 дней назад

    Ulysses is one of the reasons I think I'll be a Setapp user for life. I like the grammar checker included with it, among other things, like the ability to write a blog post and upload it directly to my site. I purchased Hazel not long ago and it's been zooming my files to their own ordered folders so fas. But! Until today I didn't know it could change file names. I'll be having a play with that soon.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 8 дней назад

      It's amazing, isn't it? What I only recently appreciated was how Hazel can look inside documents to find details for that renaming. Love this stuff.

  • @ThierryLalinne
    @ThierryLalinne 8 дней назад

    Great recommendations for Xmas. I would add "iA Writer” to the list. Such an exquisite app for writing. Thank you William.🙏

  • @hadders63
    @hadders63 8 дней назад

    I learned loads. Thank you 🙂

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 8 дней назад

    I pronounce Ulysses different than you do. Again, a nice trip to England because of the differences. Thank you.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 8 дней назад

      You are always welcome here. Even with some strange pronunciation of Ulysses

  • @GordonRunklePhoto
    @GordonRunklePhoto 10 дней назад

    But what kind of milk? Whole? Skim? Were they lying about the milk to try to hide the fact that they bought cream?

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 9 дней назад

      And what brand? You missed that. It could go anywhere, including into an ad for a supermarket. This thing writes itself.

  • @ExplicitPublishing
    @ExplicitPublishing 10 дней назад

    Good point, but you overstated your case, and I didn't like the examples given.

  • @UKHaiku
    @UKHaiku 10 дней назад

    Very useful advice. It feels like one of the types of guidelines that should only be broken for a specific purpose, be it comedy (as your example used) or something else that adds value to the story. Could be foreshadowing, maybe an easter egg (we saw Tesco’s milk on the victim’s kitchen counter perhaps..?) - but definitely some advice to consider. When I’ve dabbled in fiction in the past - I attempted a couple Nanowrimos - dialogue has always been a challenge. Difficult to get the right balance between too much and too little.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 9 дней назад

      I am too fond of dialogue. Even my non-fiction articles can arguably be called dialogue, I write so chattily. But it's because I love how much you can convey.

  • @greyfjr
    @greyfjr 10 дней назад

    I was sent by Steve Donoghue but don't hold that against me. =) I recently saw it called a parallel conversation where we wait for the other person to pause talking about themself so can we can talk about ourselves. There's an antagonistic person in my life (no, not Steve) who uses questions not for information but to target, accuse and attack.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 9 дней назад

      Oh! Did he send you with a secret message? Can I now send you back with one -- er, once I've thought of something dramatic? Thank you for coming. And yep, I recognise that first part very well. I haven't had the question-as-weapon, fortunately, but I can see that. I did have one person listen to a reasoned response of mine and sneer "And?". Her face when I shot back "But?".

    • @greyfjr
      @greyfjr 8 дней назад

      😜 "And" undoubtedly after her "But," you showed her yours and didn't look back.

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 10 дней назад

    More loo stories me thinks....

  • @einarbjrndahl6640
    @einarbjrndahl6640 10 дней назад

    If I understand you correctly; in dialoges (be it an answer or not), the response should raise more questions than it answers? «I got your bloody milk»

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 9 дней назад

      No, it's that the response should not just be a flat answer. It needs to move the story on.

  • @Bushidounohana
    @Bushidounohana 10 дней назад

    As others have alluded to, I think this is a brilliant pillar of best practice, but as you note in the video, practice is actually a living spectrum and not a dead dogma. Dramatic capital is the thing, and it might take forms that seem to fly in the face of any given pronunciation or proclamation. That said, I think we have to be responsible about our crafts, not presumptuous about our talents, and always remember the rules as touchstones to keep us doing our best work. While answering a question may be the dramatic answer we’re seeking, we must needs start the game inbounds. My own personal definition of “art” muddles about the metaphorical notion that limitation leads to transcendence, without limitations there is nothing to transcend. Hence reality necessitating art in the first place, hence best practice guiding our hands, hence I am not making any sense, any more, ha!

  • @Matthew_Malenich
    @Matthew_Malenich 10 дней назад

    Dialogue in fiction is a strange beast. I can only speak for myself of course, but I find it only works when there's an *_Invasion of the Body Snatchers_* dynamic going on. It presents itself as one thing when it's actually something else. On one hand, it has to sound natural. But _sound natural_ is distinctly different than _replicate actual conversations._ Real conversations meander. They can be pointless, tedious, and boring. Under the hood, dialogue in fiction is unambiguously contrived, and every line is trying to achieve _something._ The scene has a purpose... presumably... and every line is completely in service to the scene's goal. So if the audience is going to "buy it" the dialogue has to *superficially* sound like something a person might actually say, while in *actuality* every word, pause, omitted detail, etc. is carefully crated to move the story forward. So you have to walk a knife's edge to do that effectively.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 9 дней назад

      Absolutely. I'm told I can't write historical dialogue, I can only do modern convincingly and I think that's true. On the other hand, I do remember having a modern character just tell another "I've got your number" and in context it having five distinct meanings. I was very chuffed about that, and also curious to see which ones the actor chose to convey. In the end, she mumbled the whole line.

    • @Matthew_Malenich
      @Matthew_Malenich 9 дней назад

      @@WilliamGallagher And that's something else (that I edited out of my original comment): What's the medium? You have different considerations if something is meant for the stage, a film set, a novel, etc. I'm a novelist, and view all writing "rules" through that spectrum. But I know essentially nothing about the stage, or writing screenplays. Surely a lot of things translate seamlessly between them all. But I'm sure there are a multitude of reasons, when adapting a novel for the screen, the production company hires a screenwriter to adapt the story into a screenplay and rarely the novelist themselves.

  • @GutsyGibbon
    @GutsyGibbon 10 дней назад

    One of those gems. Such a simple idea. It's one of those "oh, of course!" Thanks, I just stuck it to the wall.

  • @anthonygladman6558
    @anthonygladman6558 11 дней назад

    Your example about not answering questions in drama unless it gives us something new and unexpected reminded me of the advice on adverbs: they're often redundant so best avoided, but they can be very effective if they modify the verb in an unusual way.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 10 дней назад

      I like unusual. I had a client who would painstakingly take apart some of my sentences and rewrite them with cliches, "because people like cliches". I'd have spent minutes crafting a new and hopefully surprising way to convey something specifically because cliches are so familiar and usual that they lose their power. I'm still grump about that. Breathe. Breathe.

  • @tonyscottinFrance
    @tonyscottinFrance 11 дней назад

    Thank you, that was brilliant and makes so much sense. As a retired police detective I can relate to your story. I once read a book on advanced interviews of suspects in my early days. It suggested all sorts of techniques including walking around the room whilst questioning the seated suspect. The interview room was only about 2 square meters but being young and enthusiastic I decided to give it a go. To my horror, when I played the tape recording back to record in writing what was said, I know, a complete waste of time. All I could hear was the crunching of my shoes on the nylon carpet. Not a word could be heard above it. I then had ro try to explain this to a court without looking foolish, which I failed to do. Keep up the good work, happy Christmas. Ps Could you say something about genre. I am writing this story and keep changing my mind on what genre it is. Perhaps I should have decided before I started. Lesson learned.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      I shouldn't laugh, I know. But I did. Sorry. Genre? Interesting. I tend to write the story and then let someone else decide what it is. I was surprised, for instance, to be told that one of my "Doctor Who" stories for Big Finish was horror.

  • @marcpaters0n
    @marcpaters0n 11 дней назад

    Seeing this has just made me realise that a key question in my script shouldn't have been answered (at least not in the way it was) and it's too late now I've submitted it. This is why I need you Wil!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      Okay, since it's you, I'll tell you this. Last week a BBC script call closed and I knew I had a thing that would fit, so what the hell, I went to submit it. Fifty minutes before the deadline, I was filling out the form -- and found that I'd submitted the same thing the year before. So, since I was already in the form, I picked something else. Had a very fast skim-read, decided I liked it more than I'd remembered, put that in. Later that night I found that I'd submitted draft 3 of this thing and there was a draft 4 right next to it in the folder. But I read draft 4 and it wasn't as good. I'm pretty sure I had a point in mind when I started to reply to you.

  • @MatthewBoonGilson
    @MatthewBoonGilson 11 дней назад

    No

  • @StingyGeek
    @StingyGeek 11 дней назад

    In real life: hang out with your friends. In story: Conflict is king.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      Works for me. There is an interesting argument, I believe, that conflict is a very Western way of writing and that other cultures don't do it the same way. But I don't know how they do it.

    • @StingyGeek
      @StingyGeek 11 дней назад

      @@WilliamGallagher It would be interesting to read one of their works, because honestly I can't for the life of me see how you could craft a story that people want to read without conflict at some level. Mad skills if they can do it....

  • @DianeShugart
    @DianeShugart 11 дней назад

    Lazy Monday Me: "Is 58keys dropping videos in the morning?" Responsible Me:: "Are you procrastinating on RUclips again?" Very effective example (milk), btw. Have a good week.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      Thank you. Also, you spotted my deliberate mistake. I think this must've gone out at 7am UK time instead of 7pm UK time. I have a head full of cold, that's my excuse.

    • @DianeShugart
      @DianeShugart 10 дней назад

      @@WilliamGallagher I'm not complaining 😃

  • @davidlammey
    @davidlammey 12 дней назад

    Thanks!

  • @UKHaiku
    @UKHaiku 13 дней назад

    Did I enjoy this video? Yes! I too loathe the use of questions in headlines, without exception it always feels like lazy click-bait, even if the article is actually a good one.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      I see what you did there and I like it very much.

  • @UKHaiku
    @UKHaiku 13 дней назад

    I’ve asked for Apple vouchers this year - I’m so very tempted by the M4 mini. It will be my first Apple silicon mac - I’m still using a 2019 MacBook Pro (last huzzah of the infamous keyboard & touchbar combined!) so it will be nice to have a faster, more modern, option.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 11 дней назад

      Oh, you are so going to enjoy Apple Silicon. If you do buy one, would you let me know how it goes?

  • @johnnyragadoo2414
    @johnnyragadoo2414 15 дней назад

    'Tis the season. I think I'll put a premium on storage and memory over performance. They are all fast enough to run a word processor. I rarely edit video. Great tips!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher 14 дней назад

      I swear I only edit videos so that I can justify buying more expensive Macs. I'm not proud of this.

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 15 дней назад

    AirPods Pro 2, yea! Say more about not buying an SE iPhone. I have SE 2022, and am considering the new one when it comes out in March? Yes? No?