Workshop: Surprises

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  • Опубликовано: 28 дек 2024

Комментарии • 20

  • @joecrieda7555
    @joecrieda7555 10 дней назад +1

    Enjoyed that, thanks a lot for sharing.

  • @GutsyGibbon
    @GutsyGibbon 13 дней назад +1

    I am a big fan of this idea. I think of it as the Rod Serling Twilight Zone mode. It's a 30-minute show with two commercial breaks. The first part introduces the thing, the second part makes you think you know what is happening, and part three is a complete surprise. By the way, my wife and I are huge Lark Rise fans!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher  12 дней назад

      Ah, I was with you to the end there when you sprang a surprise. Unless you’re being so clever that I am now mansplaining, Lark Rise was by Bill Gallagher, not me, William. I did film a video for BBC/Radio Times of a Lark Rise cover shoot with all the cast, but that’s as close as I’ve come to that show.

  • @tripley66
    @tripley66 13 дней назад

    It's no surprise that it is Monday and that you are here...and so am I.

  • @GaelyneGasson
    @GaelyneGasson 12 дней назад

    You've commented in the past a few time about the show 'Lou Grant'. That was a favourite of mine when I was in high school. I could swear on a stack of bibles that they used the 3 part trick often - as well as quite a few other 70's and 80's drama series. I remember teaching my late husband to pay attention during the first 5 minutes of a show so he wouldn't be confused by the ending. 😂

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher  12 дней назад

      I’ve been reading some Lou Grant scripts recently; all these years later and they still stand up so well. I am a writer because of that show. Although possibly also because I knew to pay attention at the start. I can only imagine how much more enjoyment your guy got out of TV drama after you’d shown him the error of his ways.

  • @sclyon
    @sclyon 12 дней назад

    I was quite surprised to see iPads on sale at Walmart and Best Buy here in the states. So I got a base model iPad with no upgrades for $279. I'm officially an iPad writer now. I have a keychron q1 pro that I paired via Bluetooth quite nicely and I went on and got scrivener. Thank you for your wonderful videos about these fantastic products sir!

  • @pinsantoni
    @pinsantoni 11 дней назад

    I was expecting some sort of surprise at the end of the video related to the clock on your iPad near you!

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher  11 дней назад

      Curses, I didn't think of that.

    • @maxvanbalgooy
      @maxvanbalgooy 6 дней назад

      “If you show a clapboard in scene one, ….”

  • @bilvers
    @bilvers 13 дней назад +1

    You've made me think that I need to alter the opening chapter for Mince Pies a little.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher  12 дней назад +1

      Ulp. I didn't mean to do that. Tiptoes away quietly.

  • @roberthowe1595
    @roberthowe1595 12 дней назад

    I like misdirection in writing. It’s something I’ve experimented with quite a bit and would like to get better at.

    • @WilliamGallagher
      @WilliamGallagher  12 дней назад

      Same here. It’s delicious when it works. I want to tell you the name of a book where the ending made me gasp but that would rather spoil it, wouldn’t it?

    • @roberthowe1595
      @roberthowe1595 12 дней назад

      Fire away. I’ll suspend belief in the plot twist while reading.

  • @saintdonoghue
    @saintdonoghue 13 дней назад +1

    Does the fact that I was totally expecting there to be an actual gun in the video make me a gimmicky writer ... or just an American?