Whole slabs of illogical. An EMP can stop the Empire?. Why do all the other stuff. BECAUSE ITS NOT A STORY. Then the EMP miraculously has no effect on the Rebel equipment. And if the Wolves arrived in hours via hyperspace, won't the Empire so that. The Armada could just obliterate the whole planet surface, why bother with one valley to battle. Bring out the DEATH STAR.
"I'll grind your bones to dust" it could be a good story if it would stop regurgitating the same old lines taken from age old stories. Every time I hope to hear some originality and then I hear the exact same lines. AI😢.
I had an English teacher explain that curse words are used by one who does not have a good vocabulary...f this and f that and f them. Next story, see how much trouble you have writing without the f word.
Clearly you've never served on active duty, in law enforcement, or even healthcare. Swearing is a way to let off steam and even share camaraderie. Some of the most intelligent people I know are filthy mouthed salty sailors, cops, or nurses.
Might be true but it my be done by a person who don't give a F what you say or think it's a free online story and when the Author gets paied he might change
All investigations, surveys and literature looking into this matter say your English teacher was an imbecile. Those with the highest iq's and widest vocabulary generally use profanities a lot more often than the norm but also have the capacity to know when and when not to use them.
I found the story entertaining. To quote Lenny Bruce it is the suppression of the word that makes it distasteful. Sadly people drop the F-bomb like they use “THE”. I don’t even hear it unless it’s every third word.
Your use of curse words inclines me to avoid any and all your posts. I hope when your mind considers weighty matters you don’t have to use profanity to get understanding.
JC, they have Devil Dogs in the future
I like the story. ❤
Seem like they should have lead with the EMP. They wasted a lot of ordnance before the use of it.
Swearing is part of life's little response
It's 300 in space.
This is TERRA!
I like the story. Please keep it up
Whole slabs of illogical.
An EMP can stop the Empire?. Why do all the other stuff. BECAUSE ITS NOT A STORY. Then the EMP miraculously has no effect on the Rebel equipment. And if the Wolves arrived in hours via hyperspace, won't the Empire so that. The Armada could just obliterate the whole planet surface, why bother with one valley to battle. Bring out the DEATH STAR.
AI generated.
❤
I really like all your stories it’s a great story telling
I liked the story.
Maybe there wil be a sequel to this tale ???.....
Excellent story I truly like it
"I'll grind your bones to dust" it could be a good story if it would stop regurgitating the same old lines taken from age old stories. Every time I hope to hear some originality and then I hear the exact same lines. AI😢.
"The author's fists slammed into the console, warping the plastisteel in his fury..."
Reality recycles sucks to never learn that, she'll less prawn.
I liked the story
Awesome short stories uplifting
i like the story
The story was very entertaining
I like the story
Yes i like the story it was entertaining. 😊
I like the story.
i liked this,got a sub from me
The pain of listening to this jumble of words…..
Hooah
🤘🥳🖖
Slightly interesting story. Random-sentence style writing.
I had an English teacher explain that curse words are used by one who does not have a good vocabulary...f this and f that and f them. Next story, see how much trouble you have writing without the f word.
Clearly you've never served on active duty, in law enforcement, or even healthcare. Swearing is a way to let off steam and even share camaraderie. Some of the most intelligent people I know are filthy mouthed salty sailors, cops, or nurses.
Might be true but it my be done by a person who don't give a F what you say or think it's a free online story and when the Author gets paied he might change
Profanity is merely fluffed up pillows meant to imitate armor. Anyway, I'm pretty sure the author is a computer.
All investigations, surveys and literature looking into this matter say your English teacher was an imbecile. Those with the highest iq's and widest vocabulary generally use profanities a lot more often than the norm but also have the capacity to know when and when not to use them.
I found the story entertaining. To quote Lenny Bruce it is the suppression of the word that makes it distasteful. Sadly people drop the F-bomb like they use “THE”. I don’t even hear it unless it’s every third word.
Your use of curse words inclines me to avoid any and all your posts. I hope when your mind considers weighty matters you don’t have to use profanity to get understanding.
I like the story