Galactic Council Tortured Human Child So We Burned Their Worlds!

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  • Опубликовано: 10 ноя 2024

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  • @zeta138
    @zeta138 6 месяцев назад +559

    Xenos: hurt a child
    Humans: I hereby sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a million souls to oblivion. May Imperial Justice account in all balance; The Emperor Protects. Initiate Exterminatus

    • @mightyspatula5500
      @mightyspatula5500 5 месяцев назад +34

      " I hereby sign the death warrant of an entire world " I love that line

    • @lucianfrostbane
      @lucianfrostbane 5 месяцев назад +9

      The audio for it works so damn well. The almost robotic tone of it. The accent definitely works

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis 5 месяцев назад +8

      I got sad hearing the story… until I read this comment. “The blood of martyrs is the seed of the imperium”

    • @flaxtube322
      @flaxtube322 5 месяцев назад +4

      Ave, Imperator. Fire.

    • @falconcorbin3830
      @falconcorbin3830 5 месяцев назад +1

      Fuck yeah bro!

  • @pietervanderzwaan4295
    @pietervanderzwaan4295 6 месяцев назад +699

    Aliens: hurt a child.
    Humanity: hippity hoppity, the galaxy will be our property.

  • @earlenriquez810
    @earlenriquez810 6 месяцев назад +168

    Aliens: *Tortured a child*
    Humanity: roses are red, as small as a fern; You tortured a child....
    THEN LET THE GALAXY BUUURN!!!

  • @captainhuntank7963
    @captainhuntank7963 6 месяцев назад +782

    Aliens: *tortured a child of humanity*
    Humanity getting the warcrime weapons: *COWABUNGA IT IS*

    • @WolfeSaber
      @WolfeSaber 6 месяцев назад +16

      Plasma guns? I came up with a weapon, based on a real idea, just reworked, that'll nuke those aliens to extinction in a single blast.
      And I came up with the weapon as a replacement for MACs in Halo to fight the Covenant with.
      The science, you just need to have 19.2 tonnes of material at 50% the speed of light to do the same amount of damage as a 3,000 tonne slug going just 4%. Both cases, you produce a thousand times more energy than the Tsar Bomba, as a gun.

    • @TonklinFallen
      @TonklinFallen 6 месяцев назад +10

      Make sure everyone has their Geneva Checklist.

    • @tiefblau2780
      @tiefblau2780 6 месяцев назад +5

      You do not mess with offsprings of any species

    • @youthere6896
      @youthere6896 6 месяцев назад +2

      i like to see some of your stories on Netflix myself

    • @WolfeSaber
      @WolfeSaber 6 месяцев назад

      @@youthere6896 Got a revision of Space Battleship Yamato on Deviantart. Just the world building elements.

  • @peaceguy5993
    @peaceguy5993 6 месяцев назад +254

    Alien: kills child
    Humans: BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE

    • @phantomwraith1984
      @phantomwraith1984 6 месяцев назад +18

      KHORNE DEMANDS BLOOD! *HE WILL RECEIVE YOURS!*

    • @TheCrusaderKing
      @TheCrusaderKing 5 месяцев назад +1

      Thou shalt not suffer the Xeno to live!

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 4 месяца назад +1

      @@TheCrusaderKing : Typical religious nonsense.

    • @TheCrusaderKing
      @TheCrusaderKing 4 месяца назад +2

      @@larryselkirk426
      Not a fan of 40k I take it?

    • @JSmith99
      @JSmith99 4 месяца назад

      Humans have done worse themselves. No alien can match man's inhumanity to man.

  • @doublejace
    @doublejace 6 месяцев назад +137

    "I accept these burdens as the Imperium bleeds. I accept these burdens knowing no fear. I accept these burdens as an Angel of The Emperor. I sheathe my form in this second skin, this veil of machine muscle and false nerves. I stand firm against the alien, the mutant, the heretic I grant no mercy, I give no ground. With humility I bear the Imperialis. A symbol of loyalty unbroken. With reverence I receive actuation, awakening the armour's spirit. With pride I wear the symbol of my chapter and join my brothers in war. I am IRON. I am WRATH. I am DOOM."

  • @Iluvantir
    @Iluvantir 6 месяцев назад +504

    "I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve."
    Geneva Checklist: check. Weapons: check. Rage: CHECK.
    Let's go...

    • @oldman2364
      @oldman2364 6 месяцев назад +12

      Isoroku Yamamoto

    • @robertbrackin6836
      @robertbrackin6836 6 месяцев назад +4

      Forget Rage fury is better.😈

    • @rommelstar1
      @rommelstar1 6 месяцев назад +2

      There would be a laser rifle behind every space rock.

    • @larryselkirk426
      @larryselkirk426 6 месяцев назад

      Yep. The Yadarins are the sleeping giant in this story.

    • @robertbrackin6836
      @robertbrackin6836 6 месяцев назад +8

      @@larryselkirk426 No the humans are the sleeping giants in this story.

  • @dominicmorales6800
    @dominicmorales6800 6 месяцев назад +470

    Demons run when a good man goes to war.

    • @catlovers5497
      @catlovers5497 6 месяцев назад +17

      Doctor who. Demons Run when a good man( the doctor) 😊😊❤❤❤goes to war. I love doctor who❤❤❤❤

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 6 месяцев назад

      Except thanks to the bad Ai it’s clear the alien specifically goaded him into this unsanctioned act of war to justify total war. He puts all of humanity into an uncertain dangerous future by ensuring this personal Vendetta, however justified, is now a species wide attack leading to conflict. Even if there’s a part 2 this man is an easily manipulated idiot that might get lucky.

    • @bloodrinker
      @bloodrinker 5 месяцев назад

      @@catlovers5497 for a sec i first thought of tf2 medic because he outsmarted the devil in the comics because i didnt fully process your reply

    • @Frogcatyyy
      @Frogcatyyy 3 месяца назад +2

      That quote goes hard ngl

  • @MalumNecessarium
    @MalumNecessarium 6 месяцев назад +207

    There is nothing scarier than a man with no one left to lose

    • @peterhall8572
      @peterhall8572 6 месяцев назад +2

      Protective Mother or vengeful Father, Which Is Scarier?

    • @crayonchomper1180
      @crayonchomper1180 5 месяцев назад +3

      The vengeful father will hunt his target to the ends of the universe and cares not for his own safety, only to make his target pay with their life for daring to harm his children

    • @MalumNecessarium
      @MalumNecessarium 5 месяцев назад +3

      @@peterhall8572 protective mother usually breaks in case of loss, and goes berserk.
      Vengeful father is always calculating, and will go to any lengths to make his target suffer
      Then again, “man” is used as a shortened “human” here, not as a sex-describing term, so vengeful mother is quite probable too

  • @sonicfighter64
    @sonicfighter64 6 месяцев назад +83

    Aliens: tortured child
    Also aliens: why do I hear boss music?

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis 5 месяцев назад +3

      Cause artorias heard the call and came from the void for justice 😂😂

    • @cpob2013
      @cpob2013 5 месяцев назад +6

      Why are the stars singing in latin

  • @freybrand1617
    @freybrand1617 5 месяцев назад +61

    Xenos: *butchers an innocent child*
    Humanity:"ABANDON REASON. KNOW ONLY WAR!"

    • @rolandmiller5456
      @rolandmiller5456 3 месяца назад

      Well you killed an innocent child. Most people would not let that go.

  • @johnrussell1881
    @johnrussell1881 6 месяцев назад +102

    The Yadaruns must be made to pay for their many outrages. I look forward to hearing the rest of the story.

  • @michaelrogers4120
    @michaelrogers4120 5 месяцев назад +32

    Xeno- Torture a human child
    Humanity - right, where did we put that Geneva Checklist?

  • @jeremywenham3211
    @jeremywenham3211 6 месяцев назад +55

    “I am the right hand of vengeance, and the last living thing you are ever going to see… God sent me.

    • @Grim-Thesis
      @Grim-Thesis 5 месяцев назад +1

      Is that quote or you???? I’m probably dumb but I gotta make sure cause that’s good

    • @jeremywenham3211
      @jeremywenham3211 5 месяцев назад +3

      @@Grim-Thesis it’s part of a quote from Babylon 5.

    • @hellacoorinna9995
      @hellacoorinna9995 5 месяцев назад +4

      "They are behind me, _you_ are in front of me."

    • @darklordchauncy
      @darklordchauncy 5 месяцев назад

      ​@@hellacoorinna9995If you value your lives, be somewhere else.

  • @918guy
    @918guy 6 месяцев назад +115

    take a shot everytime you hear "slag", "glass", or "ash". 😂

    • @angelmatiastorres
      @angelmatiastorres 6 месяцев назад +3

      Why?

    • @AndrooUK
      @AndrooUK 6 месяцев назад +5

      At least the fate of the galaxy doesn't constantly hang in the balance, and there isn't constant tension throughout even when the character is drinking beer and taking a dump.

    • @Mr_Bio_Hazard
      @Mr_Bio_Hazard 6 месяцев назад +4

      Or click of his mandibles.

    • @popcornfrind
      @popcornfrind 5 месяцев назад

      my liver

    • @hellacoorinna9995
      @hellacoorinna9995 5 месяцев назад

      "FARarakla;aa yerrrrhhhfukkkfukkin fuukk yerhrhan nawwtt muhhh mudhhhduuhhh..."
      *vomiting noises off-screen*
      "RARgh libbeeeh tiinglressshh..."
      *thud*

  • @tacticallawyer
    @tacticallawyer 5 месяцев назад +16

    "We have arrived, and it is now that we perform our charge. In the fealty of the God-Emperor and by the grace of the Golden Throne, I hereby sign the death warrant for this entire world and consign a million souls to oblivion. May the Imperial justice account in all balance. The Emperor protects."

  • @rancidmarmot1994
    @rancidmarmot1994 6 месяцев назад +108

    Loved the story, but I definitely agree with the others. It not only needs but deserves a part 2.

    • @paoloviti6156
      @paoloviti6156 6 месяцев назад +2

      I agree fully with you: this story really deserves part 2 because I liked very much 👍👍👍

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 6 месяцев назад

      It needs a rewrite by a human.

  • @peterhall8572
    @peterhall8572 6 месяцев назад +20

    When Humans walk into the jaws of Death , We walk back out with his gold teeth in our pockets

    • @helpmelearnto
      @helpmelearnto 5 месяцев назад +1

      Oh, I like that one. Just call me Snafu.

  • @Tang0Fox1
    @Tang0Fox1 5 месяцев назад +35

    So they chose the Geneva Checklist? Alright then.

    • @AaronCMarron
      @AaronCMarron 3 месяца назад +1

      Aliens don't know Geneva

    • @andreatomasi3755
      @andreatomasi3755 3 месяца назад +1

      ​@@AaronCMarronthey do now. and the checklist is only getting longer

  • @SnowBlowerNoBlower
    @SnowBlowerNoBlower 6 месяцев назад +80

    I like the story. It needs a part 2, a 3, a 4, and a 5.

  • @adamwitt8160
    @adamwitt8160 5 месяцев назад +18

    Alien: Perform's vivasection on human children
    The father: I am going to glass your home planet, Tie you in your own entrails and March you to court.
    This is why we need dad's in a house. He also kept it very professional all things considered...

    • @Jamhael1
      @Jamhael1 3 дня назад

      Alien: *do stupidity*
      Human: "I'll blow you back to the Stone Age, rip your guts out of your body, drag you back to Terra, and after parade you by the Arc de Triomph, you will be tried in The Hague for your crimes!"

  • @lyromata
    @lyromata 6 месяцев назад +295

    Great story. Definitely needs a part 2

  • @WendiGonerLH
    @WendiGonerLH 6 месяцев назад +14

    Humanity wants to live in peace. It’s up to the xenos whether that means we live *alone*

  • @piratehunter1
    @piratehunter1 6 месяцев назад +13

    If we ever unlock ftl travel I truly hope that we go in hope for peace....but carry weapons that will make the very stars cry out in fear.

  • @burger918
    @burger918 6 месяцев назад +46

    Douglass is basically space John Wick.💀

  • @nohaxgaming6283
    @nohaxgaming6283 5 месяцев назад +9

    For a human there is no such thing as overkill.

  • @TheBeastCH
    @TheBeastCH 6 месяцев назад +11

    The war lasted for decades. Admiral douglas didn't live to see it's ending. His sucessor, Admiral Laura Grant, was the one to order the glassing of the last Yaderan-occupied planet, causing the race to go extinct, within the following two weaks, as the remaining ships of the Yaderan fleets were taken out one by one. No call for surrender was accepted, or even responded to. Other species had offered to come to aid the Yaderans, or shelter their refugees. Every time they did, the Humans glassed two of their worlds, told them to surrender and hand over any Yaderan refugees they shelter, or share the fate of that species, or share their fate. Most backed down. And those who didn't, were hunted until they were extinct or surrendered unconditionally. Out of the 4 species that stood by the Yaderans, only the Vakhulan outlived them, to find themselves enslaved by the Humans, and used for labor in asteroid mines. Their militaries disolved entirely, their governments forced to bow to human law, they were allowed to keep their planets, in exchange for a 30% cut of their entire planetary economic output, and manpower for the asteroid mines, to mine out the metals and minerals to build even more warships, even more planet-busters...
    The peace-treaty between Humanity and the Galactic Council, after the extinction of the Yaderans, quickly summarized and simplefied, ammounts to this: Humans get all the planets, resources and technology from the Species they defeated, no longer respond to Galactic Council Law, and the council promises to never again turn down a formal Demand from Humanity, no matter how ridiculous, and if a Member of any species ever fucks with Humans again, Humanity has the right to wipe that species from the stars.
    Or to summarize it even further: "You fuck with us, fuck you and die"

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 6 месяцев назад

      Yeah, the aliens ships were undetected until they were already over planets, and everybody has orbital bombardment tech. The war lasts 3 weeks, over 50% of humanity’s planets crippled beyond the ability to aid in the war within the first 6 hours. Douglas, having responded to the news of the attack by wasting invaluable time talking to the empty grave set up for his son, was summarily shot by his lieutenant as the casualty reports began coming in. Though Grant didn’t know it, he’d have reached for his own sidearm and done the deed himself if she hadn’t been faster. The aliens plan to goad an idiot who never should have been given command of so much as a bus to as a complete success. The galactic council mourned as a race they could not stop from waging a justified total war (after all, the humans had just killed far more than a few children, to the point that the total number of human children killed to this point could be considered a rounding error of the larger number) annexed the entirety of human territory and gained massive amounts of reasources… and an abundant source of food. The council now had a very real risk of being subsumed entirely as their most dangerous member grew beyond the power of any to control. Scholars believe that over-reliance on AI had eroded human judgement in the millennia before the total war, explaining how somebody as easily fooled and impulsive like Douglas was ever given a command.
      So humanity became remembered as the doom of the galaxy. “HFY” became a popular meme on the Galactic Wide Web. “Humanity, fuck you.”

  • @halfxhalfx8282
    @halfxhalfx8282 5 месяцев назад +10

    Strong ship + a commander with nothing to lose = doom of xenos

  • @dashwhatchamakalit
    @dashwhatchamakalit 6 месяцев назад +35

    We love our spawn, more than we love our boats.
    See what happens when you mess with our boats?
    That's just the opening act if our offspring are messed with.

    • @trazyntheinfinite9895
      @trazyntheinfinite9895 5 месяцев назад

      Spotted the fat electrician

    • @jmallon7354
      @jmallon7354 5 месяцев назад +2

      USA! USA!

    • @raptorep
      @raptorep 5 месяцев назад +4

      Eagle Call
      Alien Scum: What was that?
      BBBRRRRRRRTTTTTTTTTTT
      💀

    • @RandomDude-ur3nk
      @RandomDude-ur3nk 4 месяца назад +1

      They did an japan, and earth did an america

  • @nobigbiggalo9964
    @nobigbiggalo9964 6 месяцев назад +18

    For the love of God, man, give us more. The story needs to be told in full detail. Please finish the whole story it's awesome.

  • @bengraves9416
    @bengraves9416 3 месяца назад +2

    Great story! You’re giving me great writing tips! 💕

  • @dandruff2865
    @dandruff2865 3 месяца назад +1

    When A Good Man Goes to War - Steven Moffat
    Demons run when a good man goes to war,
    Night will fall and drown the sun,
    When a good man goes to war.
    Friendship dies and true love lies,
    Night will fall and the dark will rise,
    When a good man goes to war.
    Demons run, but count the cost;
    The battle's won, but the child is lost.

  • @reginaldwright247
    @reginaldwright247 4 месяца назад +2

    I really, Really Like this story.
    Please continue with the saga of Earth making the Galaxy PAY-FOR-WHAT-THEY'VE-DONE!

  • @OtakuMan05
    @OtakuMan05 6 месяцев назад +102

    Plot twist: The Yardiran Fleet isn't here to make war, they're here to seek a peaceful resolution. Sirius was acting on his own and their Empress had no knowledge of his actions until it was too late. She has come to offer her own head as recompense, knowing that if a war of vengeance breaks out between them, best case scenario is that one of their species survives but just barely. She wants the bloodshed to end on both sides and is here to beg for the end of the cycle of vengeance between them.

    • @nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115
      @nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115 6 месяцев назад +31

      We don't care! We see, we go "pew, pew!", we happy.

    • @Shadowm572
      @Shadowm572 6 месяцев назад +15

      If that’s the plot you want go read the rest of the Ender’s Game Series.

    • @WolfeSaber
      @WolfeSaber 6 месяцев назад +11

      ​@@nosotrosloslobosestamosreg4115No, theirs go pew pew, while ours' go, BRRRRRRRRRTTTTTTTT

    • @Grinch34
      @Grinch34 6 месяцев назад +8

      Just send Doom Guy and Master Chief with a fuq-load of space Marines and Primarch Space Marines.

    • @avukovic84
      @avukovic84 6 месяцев назад +6

      Foolish Yadaruns think Imperium negotiates with xeno filth 😁

  • @comentnine1574
    @comentnine1574 6 месяцев назад +48

    Like the artwork especially the armour.

    • @oledahammer8393
      @oledahammer8393 6 месяцев назад +4

      Very "40K" inspired. A good thing!

    • @Zesty_gojo
      @Zesty_gojo 6 месяцев назад +1

      I think it's AI but I don't know but still that ship and armour is fire

  • @alistairdiren5790
    @alistairdiren5790 6 месяцев назад +30

    Yadirans where lucky a certain ship carrying a certain Spartan was not around.

    • @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx
      @Banthisyoutube-zs6sx 6 месяцев назад +4

      Dun dun dun dun dun........dun dun dun dun dun!!!

    • @Grinch34
      @Grinch34 6 месяцев назад +3

      Prepare to Drop! 😂

    • @vincent_v1094
      @vincent_v1094 5 месяцев назад +5

      Or a certain Doomslayer.

    • @jmallon7354
      @jmallon7354 5 месяцев назад +5

      *the unsc forward unto dawn, flanked by salamanders space marine battle barges exits the warp and slipspace*
      Aliens:*proceed to violently shit themselves out of pure fear*
      Humanity: time for you to die!

    • @DudeTaylor-cx5zb
      @DudeTaylor-cx5zb 5 месяцев назад +2

      Or a space marine

  • @lordnice-m1b
    @lordnice-m1b 5 месяцев назад +3

    Aliens: kills human child
    also Aliens: why do hear the so cald FORCHET SUN
    Humanity: wheres the Geneva check list

  • @markl4593
    @markl4593 6 месяцев назад +7

    Poor little Tommy. Think of the children….the children!

  • @derekdrake8706
    @derekdrake8706 6 месяцев назад +7

    If the bugs wanted to win, to truly defeat humanity, they should just ignore them. One world gone, big deal, bugs don't care about eggs. The empress could have broadcasted to the galaxy that the scientist was acting alone, even if he wasn't, and that the bugs are willing to offer peace.
    See, that would really piss humans off. No war to vent their anger AND it shifts the moral high ground to the bugs, if humans attack they'll be seen as the bad guys. Humans NEED that moral high ground to justify their atrocities, otherwise they go limp as a wet noodle lol.

  • @blackheartgaming6121
    @blackheartgaming6121 4 месяца назад +4

    Theres no need to wonder where your god is cause hes right here and hes fresh out of mercy

    • @Neion8
      @Neion8 Месяц назад +1

      SoA Abridged. I see you are a man of culture.

  • @tr66tr66
    @tr66tr66 6 месяцев назад +64

    Needs a part two

    • @ronaldshank8665
      @ronaldshank8665 6 месяцев назад +2

      Needs an entire book to tell this story...

  • @neilwesley3516
    @neilwesley3516 6 месяцев назад +21

    Excellent, thank you. Part 2 ?
    💯👍

  • @tommykramer8206
    @tommykramer8206 4 месяца назад +2

    and don't even think about hurting our dogs!

  • @dartmart9263
    @dartmart9263 4 месяца назад +3

    So they sent a ship captained by a compromised father who can no longer see things without emotional tainting? LOL

  • @armaggedon390
    @armaggedon390 6 месяцев назад +8

    *sighs*
    Grabs Geneve checklist.

  • @CaptainKPG
    @CaptainKPG 6 месяцев назад +38

    That intro is wild

    • @The_Awsome_Alchemist
      @The_Awsome_Alchemist 6 месяцев назад +2

      I hear ya. My went "Imma give you a chance to rephrase that."

  • @gilbertsandoval1888
    @gilbertsandoval1888 6 месяцев назад +3

    Great story! Thoughly enjoyed the end , would look forward to seeing part two!

  • @cpob2013
    @cpob2013 5 месяцев назад +2

    "Is it morally correct to start a war over a few thousand captured citizens? What about one citizen? We have set an upper limit of one thousand i now propose a lower limit of one. Imagine if we were at a market and i were trying to offer you a dollar for any amout of potatoes between one and one thousand, wouldnt that be absurd?"
    "Men are not potatoes"
    "So you would go to war over a single man held captive? Consider that a war may cost the lives of many more of your people."
    "One or one thousand, you fight"
    "Very good, the number is irrelevant. It is a matter of principle. Of citizens right of sovereignty. The state is obligated to enforce the rights of its citizens, down to the individual."

    • @dartmart9263
      @dartmart9263 4 месяца назад +1

      Sometimes some men are potatoes. FJB

  • @madmanx1662
    @madmanx1662 6 месяцев назад +8

    Really nice! I truly appreciated this audio while getting some chores done! 😅

  • @pfhgjk0
    @pfhgjk0 4 месяца назад

    I've always enjoied stories where Humanity is 'reserved' - until it isn't. I enjoyed your story.

  • @timjinn2441
    @timjinn2441 4 месяца назад +1

    Rules of war and engagement aren't something to hold the enemies of humanity back
    They're there to prevent the most horrific shit that humanity has ever done during the past wars

  • @gregoryjohnston9854
    @gregoryjohnston9854 6 месяцев назад +1

    Great story. Definitely looking forward to a sequel.

  • @hermittao
    @hermittao 5 месяцев назад

    Your stories resonate, and draws me in. Thank You

  • @robleary3353
    @robleary3353 6 месяцев назад +9

    Glad I found this channel!. Nuff said.

  • @avukovic84
    @avukovic84 6 месяцев назад +2

    And that's how you get Imperium of Man...

  • @tazy095
    @tazy095 6 месяцев назад +10

    I like this story need a part 2

  • @Conscript83
    @Conscript83 6 месяцев назад +9

    If this were true we would be so far ahead as a species. If only we could come together like this and protect our children at any cost regardless of race, religion or nationality.

  • @jadesorono6694
    @jadesorono6694 6 месяцев назад +1

    Aliens) turtured a child of humanity face full of a smile
    Humanity) song of no mercy for the wicked 😀

  • @SupCom78
    @SupCom78 6 месяцев назад +10

    i like the story thx for uploading it and pls the next part.

  • @OneJazzKid
    @OneJazzKid 6 месяцев назад +6

    I xannot stress it enough. colossus!!; we really need one !!

  • @TheTektronik
    @TheTektronik 6 месяцев назад +15

    You came up with yourself? This is great.

    • @Marveryn
      @Marveryn 6 месяцев назад +5

      all the story are from a redict. some are good and some not so good

    • @kerbango1
      @kerbango1 6 месяцев назад +2

      The channel.owner who post these isn't very selective about which stories to read. most aren't finished. Annoying but appreciated

    • @kagato23
      @kagato23 6 месяцев назад

      This is ai written

  • @MenBeingHappy
    @MenBeingHappy 6 месяцев назад +1

    Revenge stories are so good.

  • @kevinmcclure7551
    @kevinmcclure7551 6 месяцев назад +5

    Great story, please write a part two

  • @TemplarsatAcre
    @TemplarsatAcre 6 месяцев назад +3

    I agree we need a part two. We cant just leave the story here.

  • @patrickpromen3605
    @patrickpromen3605 5 месяцев назад

    As we gaze down on their burning planet:
    "And shepherds we shall be.
    For Thee, my Lord, for Thee.
    Power hath descended forth from Thy hand.
    That our feet may swiftly carry out Thy command.
    So we shall flow a river forth to Thee.
    And Teeming with souls shall it ever be.
    In Nomine Patris, et Fili, et Spiritus Sancti."

  • @BMrider75
    @BMrider75 6 месяцев назад +3

    It's an okay outline, but needs a decent editor to shape it.

  • @Faiadenza
    @Faiadenza 4 месяца назад

    Just discovered your channel. A glass of wine, excellent story after excellent story, I am the happiest human in the universe right now.

  • @Fellwinter
    @Fellwinter 6 месяцев назад +1

    Stories like this crack me up.
    Fiction: Humanity would never let a human child be tortured.
    Reality: Many Afrikan children died so you could get that mobile phone/PC. Collective Meh.

    • @Rebellions
      @Rebellions 6 месяцев назад

      Nobody fucks with us *but* us. Its quite simple.

  • @regyoung1351
    @regyoung1351 4 месяца назад

    ❤ I liked the story. Please continue writing.

  • @datboitank2318
    @datboitank2318 4 месяца назад +1

    If the Xenos think there so great, Why aren't they made in the image of God.

  • @hardworkerforlife4081
    @hardworkerforlife4081 4 месяца назад

    I liked the story. Humanity first

  • @Smokejensen212
    @Smokejensen212 6 месяцев назад +1

    I didn't come for the video, but the ART!

  • @Daniel19184
    @Daniel19184 4 месяца назад

    Aliens: flee for your lives
    Humanity:a new power is rising to war
    Me: uses the one ring to bring the destruction of the yardairans

  • @captainamerica6525
    @captainamerica6525 6 месяцев назад +1

    The biggest FAFO in galactic history.😅

  • @mb6ooo
    @mb6ooo 5 месяцев назад

    I liked each and every of your stories, keep going!❤

  • @Lucullus15
    @Lucullus15 4 месяца назад

    Aliens: tortures a child then hears a wave of Human rage rushing torwards them

  • @Grim-Thesis
    @Grim-Thesis 5 месяцев назад +2

    Totally made sense after hearing the beginning. If that shit happened, humans of our era would demand blood from not just them but anyone with any relation

    • @raptorep
      @raptorep 5 месяцев назад

      Every person on every world shall rise up with righteous fury, Texans and Floridians hand in hand to wreak furious chaos, the rest of humanity at their backs. *Patriotic_Egale.wav*

    • @dartmart9263
      @dartmart9263 4 месяца назад +2

      If it happened today, our media wouldn’t even show the tape. They wouldn’t even share the news about it. It would be as if it never happened.
      And, in the off chance they did talk about it, they would find some way to blame the kid or humanity as a whole.

  • @boogaloobaloo
    @boogaloobaloo 6 месяцев назад +1

    Suffer not the Xenos to live.

  • @wildcard9786
    @wildcard9786 4 месяца назад

    "I have begun death, destroyer of worlds."

  • @Grombrindal91
    @Grombrindal91 3 месяца назад

    Sounds like a story from the 18th Legiones Astartes. The Salamanders don't fuck around with defending children.

  • @brendanmcconnell4680
    @brendanmcconnell4680 6 месяцев назад +6

    A sudden finish tho.

  • @moxgion
    @moxgion 3 месяца назад +1

    i like this story

  • @timbindle
    @timbindle 6 месяцев назад +2

    I like the story definetly needs a part 2.

  • @shimmyking4
    @shimmyking4 4 месяца назад

    Aliens: Torture a child
    Humans: *Checks the Geneva Convention* don't say shit about Xenos!

  • @_Umbrael_
    @_Umbrael_ 4 месяца назад

    This sounds like the type of shit I'd pull in Stellaris for some random diplomatic incident.

  • @romanjarque9763
    @romanjarque9763 5 месяцев назад

    I loved the story, please continue it ❤❤

  • @Enderwave22
    @Enderwave22 5 месяцев назад +1

    1:15 Man, they're lucky there wasn't animal cruelty involved. Or
    “For every drop of my pup's blood, we destroy three worlds.”
    “You're insane!”
    “Ten worlds.”
    “You can't-”
    “Twenty. Seven.”

    • @Jamhael1
      @Jamhael1 3 дня назад

      "But..."
      "DO YOU WANT ME TO UP THE ANTE?"

    • @Enderwave22
      @Enderwave22 3 дня назад

      @Jamhael1 “FIFTY WORLDS, IT IS!”

    • @Jamhael1
      @Jamhael1 2 дня назад

      @@Enderwave22
      Alien: "Are you mad?"
      Human: "Mad? MAD? SAY THAT AGAIN! SAY! THAT! AGAIN! I DARE YOU! I DOUBLE DARE YOU, MOTHERFUKER! SAY THAT ONE MORE GODDAMN TIME!"

  • @conroytr
    @conroytr 6 месяцев назад +3

    Great story. I really liked it .😊

  • @maddog4298
    @maddog4298 5 месяцев назад

    Love all your stories.

  • @mrsoready
    @mrsoready 5 месяцев назад

    Loved the story...PART 2!

  • @jamesgroce3125
    @jamesgroce3125 5 месяцев назад

    Pretty sure we're watching this story on TV every night since October 7, 2023.
    The good guys have the flag with the blue and white.

  • @Ba.Fi.
    @Ba.Fi. 6 месяцев назад +6

    Nice one.

  • @falloutrains2641
    @falloutrains2641 6 месяцев назад +1

    Geneva Convention? More like Geneva Suggestion

    • @raptorep
      @raptorep 5 месяцев назад

      it's never a warcrime the first time. ey Canada?

    • @Jamhael1
      @Jamhael1 3 дня назад

      ​@@raptorep
      GRUG IS STRONG!
      GRUG HAVE BIG DAKKA!
      GRUG GO TO VALHALLA!
      WITNESS ME!
      * starts shooting a minigun from the hip like a cocaine-fueled gunzerker*

  • @davidmcneill7403
    @davidmcneill7403 5 месяцев назад

    I like the story. Would like a part 2.

  • @narrowmarinenocommentary6633
    @narrowmarinenocommentary6633 5 месяцев назад

    POV; humans pull up with the undead Death Corps of the Krieg and an infinite amount of Ultramarines

  • @shimazuuchiha.3376
    @shimazuuchiha.3376 6 месяцев назад +3

    I like the story? No i loves the story.

  • @mikebowen3315
    @mikebowen3315 4 месяца назад

    Aliens torture a human child
    Humans: is that banjo music I hear?

    • @Jamhael1
      @Jamhael1 3 дня назад

      Humans: "We will not gonna go Medieval on them... too light. We gonna go CAVEMAN ON THEIR ASS!"

  • @slowguy56
    @slowguy56 6 месяцев назад

    Most well written story of this type that I've seen.

  • @MkWatson
    @MkWatson Месяц назад +1

    I like this story.

  • @ashidokono6012
    @ashidokono6012 5 месяцев назад

    Don't take my dog, he wouldn't go no way