As Roy made his way to the teleporter to beam to the Hornet, he said a prayer. A prayer in hopes the crew left on the relic fleet hadn't died from starvation or just killed each other succumbing to space madness. He could almost hear their screams.
More would be fine....... If you proof read them, cut out the BS and parts that make absolutely no sense. Fill in the blanks that require leaps of ridiculous logic. Then put it back together in a relatively seamless way that makes a complete story. Anyone who thinks this is how to tell a story should probably read a book by a real human. They should also understand using AI is fine.... AS A TOOL! It scares me to think this is how Sci-Fi will be done.
1. When did Roy move to the Hornet? 2. Why did the other ships self-destruct when the Hornet was damaged? 3. Why did the eager Hyrogen war fleet not immediately come back to ravage the solar system after the relic fleet self-destructed, leaving nothing to defend the billions of humans or all the important infrastructure? 4. Why were the hyrogen war-weary and why did they accept peace instead of immediately going on the attack again after being humiliated by that deception yet maintaining practically full combat ability, besides the one shuttle destroyed at the end?
I would like to add the note "alien" is a word largely used for the unknown. Some may consider that alot of things. To the concept of indoctrination, to even peaceful things like multiculturalism. Everything in fact may have somewhat of an "alien" side. Interesting to keep in mind, everyone has their own way. It's in like wise scenarios do we find ourselves working together a bit better. Anyway, please continue. I see the story unravel in my mind as if it were a movie almost. One of old; you know what. None of us should do that again... 😅
So...why didn't he just use the human made computer virus on the invasion fleet...... How did the maintained Hornet suddenly become fragile and her hull weakened?
It's a word, it isn't a plot or a story from Star Trek. Yes, the Hirogen were aliens in Voyager. That's the Only similarity tween this story and Star Trek
SO that pattern I see is that you find good human made storys from redit you feed them to an AI to re write them and then you get another AI to read it then post it hmm
It's the second story like this on this channel. Very similar artwork on the video as well. The other video I saw started that the ships were discovered in 2270 something, but 500 years old.. Apparently, Christopher Columbus had spaceships 😂
Yet another disjointed story, read by an AI that doesn't understand the fact that Star Trek level tech doesn't exist in any one of these stories, with the exception of one (if one is to look far enough into it), on any of the channels similar to this. How in the blue moons did the Admiral "Roy" get off the "Celesita"? I'm not even talking about how he got on the bridge of the "Hornet". Ain't no teleporters in any of these stories.
As Roy made his way to the teleporter to beam to the Hornet, he said a prayer.
A prayer in hopes the crew left on the relic fleet hadn't died from starvation or
just killed each other succumbing to space madness. He could almost hear their screams.
That man had really balls of steel and a real sense of duty and honor.
Rest in peace, Admiral Green. You did your duty until last.
At what point did admiral Roy move from the Celestia to the Hornet?
I`m struggling to understand why the ships self destructed..from the story there didnt seem to be a reason for it
@@wildfire160 Yeah that baffled me also.
Yep, full of plot holes this story.
@@apolloxiii5574 AI 'written' ?
AI can't write stories that make sense...
So, Roy was 16 and already a warship captain? Goodness, quite the prodigy.
Sounds likes that war was going badly in the story too.
your average anime protagonist.
As a new listener, i really enjoy these stories. They remind me of discovering Heinlien , Asimov , Howard, etc... many years ago.
Want more HFY stories?
Give me a chance and I wont let you down =)
More would be fine....... If you proof read them, cut out the BS and parts that make absolutely no sense. Fill in the blanks that require leaps of ridiculous logic. Then put it back together in a relatively seamless way that makes a complete story. Anyone who thinks this is how to tell a story should probably read a book by a real human. They should also understand using AI is fine.... AS A TOOL!
It scares me to think this is how Sci-Fi will be done.
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AI written. Hints of a good story in there but it was lost in the depths of inhuman authorship.
This story is from Star Trek: Voyager.
All stories from this channel are from movies or series.
Plenty of plot holes and weaknesses but hey, after a few beers its pretty good
Well done ! Cheers to the "Relic" Fleet !
... Hornet was a carrier, not a battleship; but *shrug*.
Battlecarrier?
88 thank you for a great story.
1. When did Roy move to the Hornet?
2. Why did the other ships self-destruct when the Hornet was damaged?
3. Why did the eager Hyrogen war fleet not immediately come back to ravage the solar system after the relic fleet self-destructed, leaving nothing to defend the billions of humans or all the important infrastructure?
4. Why were the hyrogen war-weary and why did they accept peace instead of immediately going on the attack again after being humiliated by that deception yet maintaining practically full combat ability, besides the one shuttle destroyed at the end?
Absolutely glorious military precision.
Good story durasteel and warp core definitely some influence from Star Wars and Star Trek but still good story
So according to your time line the human captain was 18 when he lead the earth fleet to victory.🤣
88 - I find your stories intense, interesting - they are just the right length for this media...
88 great story. i am a big fan of space operas
88 very imteresting story great presentation thank you ❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
88, This is my first time hearing something like this (thought it was going to be a video). I did "like and subscribe" and will be finding more
Awesome!
I would like to add the note "alien" is a word largely used for the unknown. Some may consider that alot of things. To the concept of indoctrination, to even peaceful things like multiculturalism. Everything in fact may have somewhat of an "alien" side. Interesting to keep in mind, everyone has their own way. It's in like wise scenarios do we find ourselves working together a bit better. Anyway, please continue. I see the story unravel in my mind as if it were a movie almost. One of old; you know what. None of us should do that again... 😅
Bummer. But, honor to the relic fleet.
Excellent, thank you. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Nice story. 88 may be added to by an olds mobile
😊
I have 2 dogs and you can have them both. warning I broke up with them about 40 years ago.
So...why didn't he just use the human made computer virus on the invasion fleet......
How did the maintained Hornet suddenly become fragile and her hull weakened?
Wait, why wasn't the skeleton crew honored too?
the story was great, only the ads ( even though you can skip it ) are quite annoying.
88 what a wonderful story:)
Eighty eight Relics are cool.
I wonder if they know they are taking stuff from the Star trek Universe for this story
1: Warp Engines
2: Hyrogen = Hirogen ( Voyager)
This is very good. What book is this from and who's the author?
Insectoids, mammals or reptiles? The Heroids had mandibles and teeth, and claws?
Ai or not this is actually pretty entertaining
Too many Gaps and blanks and general inconsistencies in the story. Please proofread your stories and do a little actual re-writing to clean it up.
That is a storyline from the TV show Star Trek Voyager. All of the storys from this channel are from a movie or tv show. No originality at all.
Couldn’t find anything on this being related to Star Trek
@@hunterwilson6703 Which part of Hirogen did you miss?
It's a word, it isn't a plot or a story from Star Trek. Yes, the Hirogen were aliens in Voyager. That's the Only similarity tween this story and Star Trek
@@billbrigham9959together with 'Prey' it is enough to point to it being the same race.
Yeah, this one is full of Star Trek references. Especially the name Hierogen.
SO that pattern I see is that you find good human made storys from redit you feed them to an AI to re write them and then you get another AI to read it then post it hmm
Nice.
How many "old relic fleet" sci-fi stories are out there in the Internet?
And "Hierogen" sounds better than "Hierojen".
Whats the name of the movies
very interesting
As usual, I liked your story 😊😊88.
What movie or TV show is this from?
What is the name of the book?
Is this part two?
What movie or book ser is this from please?
88 aND A DAMM NICE STORY
Need to use a spell check ..it’s sensor not censor
oh shut up Karen! 😂
Was this written by an AI? I think it was
Humans? Fuck no!
It's the second story like this on this channel. Very similar artwork on the video as well. The other video I saw started that the ships were discovered in 2270 something, but 500 years old..
Apparently, Christopher Columbus had spaceships 😂
88 Thanks for your interesting stories.
There was a solid framework of a good story, but the execution was just...poor. This could've been written so much better than it was.
Yet another disjointed story, read by an AI that doesn't understand the fact that Star Trek level tech doesn't exist in any one of these stories, with the exception of one (if one is to look far enough into it), on any of the channels similar to this.
How in the blue moons did the Admiral "Roy" get off the "Celesita"? I'm not even talking about how he got on the bridge of the "Hornet". Ain't no teleporters in any of these stories.
Is this real?
Again, it's a story.
I'm down 88
its poorly written and poorly thought out.
why self-destruction other relic ships??? no sense at all.
AI writer
This was a poorly proofread AI story. I'll pass on this channel.
Yawn 🥱 blah blah blah
Same story again
Eighty-eight
This is an audio book not F1ing video reported for misinformation.
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