This pasta had so much potential. The beginning and rising action was great, but I feel the gore was excessive and the end was both rushed and very cliché. This would have made for a great setup of a much longer and more thought out piece. 6/10
The ending. I personally loved the story, had me on the edge of my seat threw almost of it. But seriously, after what she told him before her death, and his near death, why would he date a girl the looks just like her? Like, come on, do you even want to live the rest of your life?
(SPOILER) Can I ask why noone cares about the husband getting murdered in the most brutal way possible? Why is her killing the kids the only horrible thing? And before you say, 'he probably had it coming' or something to that effect, you do realise she gets off on murder right? The whole leukaemia story was bogus, used just to lure the main character in. Her previous husband was just as innocent as her kids...
I dont think its that nobody cares but when you hear someone murder a baby or even a child for fun that kinda just takes the forefront of your mind(even though this isnt real)
We've always been expendable. We have more or less two main functions, and they aren't exclusive to just us, so if we can't do it, just find someone else. Even the way this is written is set up to make the death of the men seem insignificant.
@@michaela.754 I wrote this 6 years ago so I can't remember the video but wasn't the husband innocent? Or are you saying all adult humans are less than innocent, thus it's not as bad if they're murdered?
It’s been already 4 years and 2 months since I listened to this Creepypasta, it was also the first Creepypasta narration I’ve listened from MCP and in English, I always will love this story
The modified video can b easily explained, most serial killers aren't just nuts, they are borderline genius and psycho, thus the excessive planning. So clearly she's a hacker and made the video bfor he found it and had a device to cut the power to his laptop noing he'd check everywhere for another, she made the flower pot key obvious on purpose so he wood check, so instead of going to the store she waited and watched outside for her moment, it's her house so clearly she's got a few seCrete enterances in and out to keep quiet, so she waited either in the basement and crept upstairs after him or snuck upstairs ahead of him and waited for the "turn around" to pop out, so clearly after she left she used a secret entrance to make her video in the basement right after she'd left then slipped out and cut the power on him, watched thru the window then climbed in after he headed upstairs and listened and waited, like I sed just cuz she's crazy Don't make her dumb, good example of that in the joker from batman, very smart cuz of his unique gadgets and schemes yet he's nuts cuz he's totally bat shit crazy with undefined mental illnesses lol
This was probably one of the hardest creepypastas I have ever finished because I hate those whole "You know your fucked but you get to listen to every little detail about it until you turn around" kind of stories.
Hmm, dark wavy hair. Green eyes. Kind of reminds me of a girl I used to date. I believe she was a serial killer? Oh well, I'm gonna put that behind me and pretend I won't die :D
I had my headphones listening to this story and near the end after she says turn around my mom walks through the door i never got so damned scared in my life
This was one of the first creepypastas I ever listened to. Still creeps me out. I feel like creepypastas these days don't go as dark as the old ones used to
Slendy... we meet again. After my failiure on 8 pages (simply cause the fatass of a character could'nt sprint for more than 2 seconds) and my failiure on the arrival (no comment)I figured you'd come back for more.
This story did have its cliches, however I can admit this one scared the living hell out of me. Most of the others are just interesting... this one was just.... *on a whole new level of fucked up*. Excuse me while I use my holy water ear drops for this one.
The last video is impossible, if it (WHY.avi) was modified an HOUR ago before he found the Laptop, then how the HELL would she know that he would look at it, and how could she have exactly planned in the video to where she says "Turn Around". Still, good story, but it's impossible.
Maybe she modified it everyday because she did say "I knew you would find out" the whole turn around could have just been her luck on being there at the right time
Uncoordinatedrooster well, technically no. Romeo and Juliet is indeed the only story out there that's worse than Twilight. For all intents and purposes, Edward and Bella DO, in fact, have more chemistry than R and J because they at least talk about the stuff that's going on.
AjPuj Romeo and Juliet date back to Shakespearean times. Where arranged marriage and 'love at first sight' were more common. It's not fair to compare R & J to Trashlight.
Seriously, are you all going to argue over Twilight and Romeo & Juliet? Some people actually LIKE Twilight, so can you not talk trash about it? And Romeo and Juliet is good, but it takes place over literally a couple of days. They're all dead by the end of it. That's not really a love story.
+Kylie Davis You see love, that's the beauty of the internet. People can say what they want and you can chose to either read it or not, if someone wants to talk trash about something, simply ignore it.
This is by far the most scary, unsettling, and disturbing creepy pasta story I have EVER heard. It stayed with me for days. No other creepy pasta has done that.
I watched it while I was constipated on the toilet and the scary part just cleared it right out of me so I would just like to thank u lol Shannon and des
God damn that was edgy I hope the author moved on to make other creepypastas that didn't rely on "UMMM I AM EVIL I WATCH CP HERES TWENTY SENTENCES DESCRIBING CHILDREN GETTING MURDERED TO SHOW U THAT I AM SO EVIL AND SO COOL!!!!"
Hard to believe that so much time has passed since this was first posted :) this was the one of the very first stories my brother and I listened to when we started to truly get into creepy pasta. We were about 12 years old (we're twins). So much time has passed. My brother and I are still avid readers and listeners. I even write some of my own. Ahh... memories...
killer13324 yes that's very bad. do you even hear yourself? you enjoy the thought of torturing child molesters? If you think that someone doing something disgusting and illegal gives you free reign to do the most inhuman, ghastly things to them then you're just as sick. it doesn't matter what motive you hide behind.
khalique fields actually molesting a child is an inhuman act. the torture would be retribution. ***** that's assuming the pain doesn't kill them by putting them into shock or cardiac arrest.
This story sucks. The entire thing is just an excuse for the author to be as gruesome and edgy as possible with no actual effort put into being scary or interesting. The woman character is just there to be evil and all the quirks about her character are so stereotypical that I think the author must've been reading Goosebumps books for inspiration. The only scary thing about this story is that I could see every little "spooky" detail coming from the next planet over, and the "horror" parts of it being delivered in such a hamfisted way that I thought I could smell bacon grease coming from my headphones. D+
i liked it, this was the second time i heard it and still gave me some spook i give it a C, you should hear autopilot at "someordinarygamers" channel listen to it and comment back with your thoughts on it
The original version is worse, the video with the baby?? Yea, she grabs the baby b the legs, and hit;s his head against the wall forcing it to explode.
WHY?! WHY WOULD SOMEONE MAKE THIS MORBID AND TWISTED STORY?! IT'S AMAZING, BUT A BABY AND CHILD?! I CAN UNDERSTAND IF SHE KILLED THE HUSBAND AND ONLY THE HUSBAND, BUT THOSE THINGS CAME OUT OF YOU, AND YOU KILLED THEM?! I'M SO DONE.
I heard "she stuck---" idk what happened butt it was A BABY SO NO NO NO NO NO NO i didn't skip far enough.... I heard added baby cries. NO NO NO NO NO IM DONEEEEE
Is it me, or does the girl in this story sound a lot like Jane? I mean, dark hair, tight black dress, all we need are the pitch black eyes and we have confirmation!
At first I thought "Oh god, this guy is a broke, shallow, overweight loser who objectifies women, has insultingly harsh double-standards and we're supposed to root for him?" But then he surprised me. He grew as a person. He became successful, driven, kind, and a lot more mature. That's good writing. He went from despicable to genuinely sympathetic.
Mitchell Bobo First of all Rodney Alcala aka the Dating Game Serial Killer did in fact go on the Dating Game TV Show. > en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rodney_Alcala Second of all you might want to get your stories straight before you show the internet just how much of a misogynistic little man-b###h you are.
suzukablade Wow. That's really something. Back then employers didn't do background checks. And getting on the Dating Game!!! A movie could be made of him!
I don't know about movies but I do know that they made a few documentaries and it got a lot of press coverage at the time. Also a quick double check of his timeline shows that he was on the show some time in the middle of his spree. So that would be before his murders went on record and that might explain how he got on the show.
the story is creepy, but the ending is just plain dumb. *spoilers* the woman already mentioned to him that she will send a "minion" to finish the job.. so later on a few years later.. he begins a date with another woman that looks exactly like her and it never clued him in as to who this new person could be?
Beautiful wife, nice house, well-paying job: "Fine." Weird shit involving Child Torture pops up on the laptop: "Well, I'm-a gonna go live in a van down by the river, later nerds." *Jumps out window, IMMEDIATELY*
Maybe she was possessed... How would she know he needed a computer and his would not work, and then make the video right then and post it right then. I make no sense but maybe she was possessed
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Suddenly, the single life isn't looking so terrible.
Lol
But what....if your fapping hand was possessed?! *Thunderclap*, *scream*
I love being single.
Nevaeh Evol Thunderfap Screeeemen
Nevaeh Evol BA DUM TSSSHHHHH
This pasta had so much potential. The beginning and rising action was great, but I feel the gore was excessive and the end was both rushed and very cliché. This would have made for a great setup of a much longer and more thought out piece. 6/10
The ending. I personally loved the story, had me on the edge of my seat threw almost of it. But seriously, after what she told him before her death, and his near death, why would he date a girl the looks just like her? Like, come on, do you even want to live the rest of your life?
Kitkatclaw Bri Technically, you can't not live the rest of your life...
Some Guy True.
True
+This is My Name Okay. It's been well established that he's not very bright.
for real huh 😂😭😭😭
You worked at Burger King? Was her name... *Wendy?*
I see what you did there. :P
the lesbian-ness in this story is beautiful.Thank you.^-^ (not an insult i swear.)
uhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuhuuhhhhh
because the wife say "she" by accident
LOL!!!!!!!! what a nice joke, please make more.
This is a classic pasta.
Pure GOLD.
Fuck I love old creepy pastas
that profile pic tho
***** zoboomafoo dawg
XD ?
***** lol xD
XXD ??
I kind of predicted the twist as soon as it was mentioned that she didn't want him in the basement.
I thought it was going bad when he married the woman after just 7 months, when she dident want him in the basement thats it! Nope outa there
Just imagine if the one behind all this was the girl who's number he lost at first.
(SPOILER)
Can I ask why noone cares about the husband getting murdered in the most brutal way possible? Why is her killing the kids the only horrible thing? And before you say, 'he probably had it coming' or something to that effect, you do realise she gets off on murder right? The whole leukaemia story was bogus, used just to lure the main character in. Her previous husband was just as innocent as her kids...
I dont think its that nobody cares but when you hear someone murder a baby or even a child for fun that kinda just takes the forefront of your mind(even though this isnt real)
We've always been expendable. We have more or less two main functions, and they aren't exclusive to just us, so if we can't do it, just find someone else. Even the way this is written is set up to make the death of the men seem insignificant.
Because the murder of humans is bad. The murder of innocent humans is worse.
@@michaela.754 I wrote this 6 years ago so I can't remember the video but wasn't the husband innocent? Or are you saying all adult humans are less than innocent, thus it's not as bad if they're murdered?
@@OrderOfMagnitude1 A lot of people tend to believe that second opinion.
22:30 and this is when little jimmy knew he done married a serial killer
In the beginning i was confused if it was a creepypasta or my life.
If thats the case, then your life is a creepy pasta 😉 (kidding)
But but.... did he make the hamburgers?
That was on my mind for the while ending part...we shall never know 😢
Whole*
He must be good at it, him working at Burger King and all.
He must be good at it, him working at Burger King and all.
I hope so
anyone else felt heart broken when he describes the 8 year old, and hearing the baby cry?
"The traumatic experiences of watching your friends get married, have children, and live the American dream"
wow what kind of friends do you have?
It’s been already 4 years and 2 months since I listened to this Creepypasta, it was also the first Creepypasta narration I’ve listened from MCP and in English, I always will love this story
Omg "two runny eggs nailed to a wall"
Amazing! Loved the video. Appreciate you taking the time to create it and sharing with us.
Doctor Horror I love your videos :D
Doctor Horror Whoa, Doctor Horror! Whats up man? Keep it up with your channel. Doin great!! Love your vids!!
I love your videos 😍
The modified video can b easily explained, most serial killers aren't just nuts, they are borderline genius and psycho, thus the excessive planning. So clearly she's a hacker and made the video bfor he found it and had a device to cut the power to his laptop noing he'd check everywhere for another, she made the flower pot key obvious on purpose so he wood check, so instead of going to the store she waited and watched outside for her moment, it's her house so clearly she's got a few seCrete enterances in and out to keep quiet, so she waited either in the basement and crept upstairs after him or snuck upstairs ahead of him and waited for the "turn around" to pop out, so clearly after she left she used a secret entrance to make her video in the basement right after she'd left then slipped out and cut the power on him, watched thru the window then climbed in after he headed upstairs and listened and waited, like I sed just cuz she's crazy Don't make her dumb, good example of that in the joker from batman, very smart cuz of his unique gadgets and schemes yet he's nuts cuz he's totally bat shit crazy with undefined mental illnesses lol
Most are boardline genius?Brah common we need references
I think you're vastly overestimating the author's ability to write a creepypasta
This was probably one of the hardest creepypastas I have ever finished because I hate those whole "You know your fucked but you get to listen to every little detail about it until you turn around" kind of stories.
This story always made me sad but i listened to it now as a new mother I practically bawled my eyes out with the baby. 😭
This is one of my favorite creepypasta's simply cause of how good the narration is and the story itself
Why'd you have to describe her to look like my aunt. Why.
Sfx Queen Why'd he have to describe her like me? o-o
KillerDragain is it bad that I like I Want this to happen to me? just saying
Cuggaconroyfan30001 What look like the chick that killed 3 people or to have your wife kill 3 people and you be the next?
Sfx Queen Why.avi
Sfx Queen she doesn't look like mine, but she gives off that "auntie sweetie" vibe
That ending, was amazing!
4 days sober from my meth habit...Welp, time to try speed dating
Hmm, dark wavy hair. Green eyes. Kind of reminds me of a girl I used to date. I believe she was a serial killer? Oh well, I'm gonna put that behind me and pretend I won't die :D
I had my headphones listening to this story and near the end after she says turn around my mom walks through the door i never got so damned scared in my life
this whole situation could've been avoided if dude just went to a public library and us their computers...js
+Bellicose He still would've been married to that psychopath.
It also could've been avoided if he dated the first girl. Always save your numbers before you close your phone
+KillStreakKnight she couldve been phsyco to you never know
+KillStreakKnight but she had his number to since she didnt text ir call she clearly wasnt really interested
Harmony's Updatesound maybe
Speed-dating events, that was your first mistake.
Did anyone else laugh when he said two Jehovah witnesses basically saved him? LMAOOO
How the hell did MrCreepyPasta find this picture of my kids??? It was kept safe in my scrapbook.
+Taylor Bivens You sir, are a savage.
wut o_o
SAVAGE
+Taylor Bivens my bad i was going to give it back
he works for the fbi
This one's ended killed it for me. (Pun intended) you knew right after she said "minion" the same thing was gonna happen all over again
Mother of god -slowly takes off sun glasses-
Didn't know that the mother of God owned a pair of sunglasses.
lol
The115Archetype She tries to keep up with the times.
You can tell this Pasta is actually fake.
I mean, 'left hand'? The chances of that are astronomical.
This was one of the first creepypastas I ever listened to. Still creeps me out. I feel like creepypastas these days don't go as dark as the old ones used to
They do just that narrators don't want to do them for fear of
1-monetization
2-getting cancelled for saying fEgit or whatever "offensive" word.
yeah youtube has gotten so soft. it’s a damn adventure to find darker ones. it’s so rare
It's getting intense
Slendy... we meet again.
After my failiure on 8 pages (simply cause the fatass of a character could'nt sprint for more than 2 seconds) and my failiure on the arrival (no comment)I figured you'd come back for more.
;)
I may suck but swallow.. All of it
Slender Man slendyyyyxxDDDD
Shh
This story did have its cliches, however I can admit this one scared the living hell out of me. Most of the others are just interesting... this one was just.... *on a whole new level of fucked up*. Excuse me while I use my holy water ear drops for this one.
lol
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The last video is impossible, if it (WHY.avi) was modified an HOUR ago before he found the Laptop, then how the HELL would she know that he would look at it, and how could she have exactly planned in the video to where she says "Turn Around". Still, good story, but it's impossible.
Because everything in a creepypasta is believable
Whatever man.
i think she was some kind of monster disguised as a human with supernatural demonic powers
i agree with kano 3 lethal injections fk that shet if i was him no dating nothing id live in a bomb shelter house.
Maybe she modified it everyday because she did say "I knew you would find out" the whole turn around could have just been her luck on being there at the right time
Still a better love story than Twilight.
Any story is a better love story than twilight
Uncoordinatedrooster
well, technically no. Romeo and Juliet is indeed the only story out there that's worse than Twilight. For all intents and purposes, Edward and Bella DO, in fact, have more chemistry than R and J because they at least talk about the stuff that's going on.
AjPuj Romeo and Juliet date back to Shakespearean times. Where arranged marriage and 'love at first sight' were more common. It's not fair to compare R & J to Trashlight.
Seriously, are you all going to argue over Twilight and Romeo & Juliet? Some people actually LIKE Twilight, so can you not talk trash about it? And Romeo and Juliet is good, but it takes place over literally a couple of days. They're all dead by the end of it. That's not really a love story.
+Kylie Davis
You see love, that's the beauty of the internet. People can say what they want and you can chose to either read it or not, if someone wants to talk trash about something, simply ignore it.
I have to admit, when it came to the kids I lowered the volume >.>
Great job by the way, love your readings.
Speed dating is now out of my option to find a good girl
ALL THE SINGLE LADIES PUT YOUR HANDS UP
//rAISES EVERYTHING
Lol
Cause im slim shady tYes im the real slim shady
All you other slim shadys are just imatating (spelt wrong)
Watkins Studios so wont the real slim shady please stand up, please stand up
Oh, I hadn't realized I already heard this long ago (probably when it came out) until it got to the basement videos.
ASIDE FROM HER SUSPICIOUSLY NEVER LETTING ME GO NEAR THE BASEMENT SHE HAD NO FAULT.
addicted to your vids!! XD
moral of the story is: Never go to a dating game. Just meet someone in real life
And don't marry someone who seems too perfect, especially after only knowing them for a few months…
and never enter a locked basement
***** or wonder around someone elses
Hyo Koibito well said
***** thank you
This is by far the most scary, unsettling, and disturbing creepy pasta story I have EVER heard. It stayed with me for days. No other creepy pasta has done that.
I think I'll just stay single.
or if you get a gf hire some surveillance in the basement?
dylan alter Or just get a house with out a basement and a attic
Elisha Seaman good point
Did you?
@@masako8980 Unfortunately so
This is such a sad story about a virgin man :(
Yeah but dat honeymoon doe
***** Some shit went down that night ;)
liek if u cri evertim ;,,,(
_This is why I will never, ever speed date..._
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Or date at all...
your profile pic matches the comment and i also like it
What do u mean by that
thats the reason why I WILL speed date.... imagine that type women in bed...... damn. HAHAHA *no disrespect to the ladies reading this*
This is one I came back to every once in a while, not sure why it's stayed entertaining for so long.
at 14:00 i was like nope. nope nope nope nope nope nope.fuck this i am OUT of here
I'm disgusted by my left hand too
I flat out hate mine.
my right hand is my enemy
DAMN YOU LEFT HAND!
Left hand is too op for us men :/
How comedic is it that I'm a girl?
20:05 - Tasty juice... drink it, then convert it to pee!
Single life seems pretty OK now
Ikr
The only use for Jehovah's Witnesses
This story was written by the watchtower society to recruit new members.
Yeah, nobody expected them here.
@@Pixy335 like a certain inquisition?
Of course
@@Pixy335 who was that for?
0:51 story of my life LOL
You and me both 😂
I'd run away from the apartment as fast as I could when I got a quarter into the first video.
Nicely read but if you make a mistake while reading why not just use simple audio editing to fix it.
I always viewed it as him attempting to make it more immersive, as if this event had actually happened to him, so I kinda like it.
I agree with Fiji :)
moral of the story: don't use windows
🙉🙉🙉🙉🙉
...
HAH
Wow...
AHA thats how they get ya...fuckin apple
I watched it while I was constipated on the toilet and the scary part just cleared it right out of me so I would just like to thank u lol Shannon and des
This is Shannon Lol I did that destiny didn't even know
God damn that was edgy I hope the author moved on to make other creepypastas that didn't rely on "UMMM I AM EVIL I WATCH CP HERES TWENTY SENTENCES DESCRIBING CHILDREN GETTING MURDERED TO SHOW U THAT I AM SO EVIL AND SO COOL!!!!"
Hard to believe that so much time has passed since this was first posted :) this was the one of the very first stories my brother and I listened to when we started to truly get into creepy pasta. We were about 12 years old (we're twins). So much time has passed. My brother and I are still avid readers and listeners. I even write some of my own. Ahh... memories...
CAUSE MAMA IM IN LOVE WITH A CRIMINAL!!!!
XDXDXDXDXD
Lol
that made this story by far not even scary xD thanks XD
No problem
Vicki Dickey I'M IN LOVE...WITH A KILLER!
(KILLER)
I am so sorry.
all this is doing is giving me torture ideas to use on pedophiles.
Want more to torture ideas? Look up the origin of laughing jack.
a little extreme don't you think?
not when it comes to child molesters when the subject of them comes up i get extremely sadistic and on a primal level i enjoy it. is that bad?
killer13324 yes that's very bad. do you even hear yourself? you enjoy the thought of torturing child molesters? If you think that someone doing something disgusting and illegal gives you free reign to do the most inhuman, ghastly things to them then you're just as sick. it doesn't matter what motive you hide behind.
khalique fields actually molesting a child is an inhuman act. the torture would be retribution. ***** that's assuming the pain doesn't kill them by putting them into shock or cardiac arrest.
"I close my phone on accident and realized I never saved her number,so it was lost forever. For the love of-"
I was dying XD
18:35 it originally said "I DESERVED THIS" but MrCreepyPasta's version made it more evil, sinister, and brutal
And tasteless.
This story sucks.
The entire thing is just an excuse for the author to be as gruesome and edgy as possible with no actual effort put into being scary or interesting. The woman character is just there to be evil and all the quirks about her character are so stereotypical that I think the author must've been reading Goosebumps books for inspiration. The only scary thing about this story is that I could see every little "spooky" detail coming from the next planet over, and the "horror" parts of it being delivered in such a hamfisted way that I thought I could smell bacon grease coming from my headphones.
D+
i liked it, this was the second time i heard it and still gave me some spook
i give it a C, you should hear autopilot at "someordinarygamers" channel listen to it and comment back with your thoughts on it
and thats putting it lightly
Icantdothatrightnow no one cares about your opinion
Icantdothatrightnow no one cares about your opinion
It just comes across as smut, it's uncomfortable and kind of just offensive without any direction. :/
This protagonist has to be the most unlikeable of any creepy pasta I've ever heard
He is very whiny
How?
The original version is worse, the video with the baby?? Yea, she grabs the baby b the legs, and hit;s his head against the wall forcing it to explode.
Creepy but awesome
Definition of insanity: Doing the same thing over and over, expecting different results.
*DUDE WHAT'S WRONG WITH WORKING IN BURGER KING*
EXACTLY
Giada G. I'm not being stupid it's just a simple comment I made, I don't need your criticism
Giada G. OooooOOOooohhhHHhhHHHhhHHh okey~ Now dat you've given ur reasons i feel sorry
\(°ロ°)/ Sorryyyyy
I work at pizza hut
+miles prower same shit lol
0:00 - 1:03 too much info man..... ene
WHY?! WHY WOULD SOMEONE MAKE THIS MORBID AND TWISTED STORY?! IT'S AMAZING, BUT A BABY AND CHILD?! I CAN UNDERSTAND IF SHE KILLED THE HUSBAND AND ONLY THE HUSBAND, BUT THOSE THINGS CAME OUT OF YOU, AND YOU KILLED THEM?! I'M SO DONE.
James Frost SEEEEEEEE
Renike2012 What even?
lol to much creepy pasta? never heard a dead baby joke? THEY ARENT REAL PEOPLE!!!
anime irl Shut up. No one likes you. Oh, and Too*
Renike2012 Well dang sorry i just hate it when people say it's not real. I wanna believe it's real so shut up.
i've been looking for this for years! thanks for this video!
just wow... seriously the most f***ed up creepypasta iv'e heard in a long time!
Why approach the basement WHEN YOU CAN BUY A NEW COMPUTER
"Being 32 and single is no laughing matter" *sister laughs hysterically in other room*
This is one of my favorite creepypastas!
Dude this one is pretty weak but I remember watching this when it was first posted and oh man the nostalgia
26:22 she survived the first 3 lethal injections?!🤔😂😂😂😂😂😂
Ok with the first few lines I cant shake that this is a creepypasta about a incel
THIS WAS FREAKIN AWSOME.
((Skips the infant clip almost instantaneously.. NOPE))
+Brooke Carter me too
+Brooke Carter It was sad.
I heard "she stuck---" idk what happened butt it was A BABY SO NO NO NO NO NO NO i didn't skip far enough.... I heard added baby cries. NO NO NO NO NO IM DONEEEEE
damn good pasta
it sure was
I buy stuff from Walmart but I work at target
"disgusted by the company of my right hand" 🤣🤣🤣
"my left hand"
this for some reason made me start laughing, and I was like "why the frick am I laughing?! it's not THAT funny!"
Is it me, or does the girl in this story sound a lot like Jane? I mean, dark hair, tight black dress, all we need are the pitch black eyes and we have confirmation!
Thats what you get for forgetting to save numbers and also asking a girl to marry you in a half a year.
Thank you for all the memories time sure flys
At first I thought "Oh god, this guy is a broke, shallow, overweight loser who objectifies women, has insultingly harsh double-standards and we're supposed to root for him?" But then he surprised me. He grew as a person. He became successful, driven, kind, and a lot more mature.
That's good writing. He went from despicable to genuinely sympathetic.
Dagmar the Bomb
Any chance he might be Rodney Alcala?
Mitchell Bobo
First of all Rodney Alcala aka the Dating Game Serial Killer did in fact go on the Dating Game TV Show. > en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rodney_Alcala
Second of all you might want to get your stories straight before you show the internet just how much of a misogynistic little man-b###h you are.
suzukablade Wow. That's really something. Back then employers didn't do background checks. And getting on the Dating Game!!! A movie could be made of him!
I don't know about movies but I do know that they made a few documentaries and it got a lot of press coverage at the time. Also a quick double check of his timeline shows that he was on the show some time in the middle of his spree. So that would be before his murders went on record and that might explain how he got on the show.
How did the character objectify women? Because he looked at their boobs? He commented on their low cut dresses? What were the harsh double standards?
am i the only one that hears hm repeat himself alot
When you say it like that, it sounds like it isn't obvious.
well...... i guess so ya :P
jacob stanfield you try reading aloud for half an hour straight without any mistakes
Kate I understand that. He's bound to make mistakes, but can't he just edit them out?
Kimi FW Yea I've wondered that too...
the music at 23:30 what is that called? What song? It's beautiful and you use it in a lot of your videos
The song is called Something's Wrong. It's by someone on RUclips called myuuji
thanks
this is one of THE BEST creepypastas ever.
the story is creepy, but the ending is just plain dumb. *spoilers*
the woman already mentioned to him that she will send a "minion" to finish the job.. so later on a few years later.. he begins a date with another woman that looks exactly like her and it never clued him in as to who this new person could be?
..Was carving that sentence into the kid seriously something this story needed?
Yes.
Ohh yes indeed
No I'm of the opinion carving something so hateful into a small child wasn't
needed, the guy clearly over shot his try for shock factor.
Mr.CreepyPasta
Posey The scene was horrible. I don't even want to visualize that stuff in fiction
Anyone notice he said "some of them quite low cut" twice lol
Well
First good twist I've seen in a creepypasta
Beautiful wife, nice house, well-paying job: "Fine."
Weird shit involving Child Torture pops up on the laptop: "Well, I'm-a gonna go live in a van down by the river, later nerds." *Jumps out window, IMMEDIATELY*
she survived not 1, not 2, but 3 lethal injections. That alone is scary af. flat out inhuman.
Maybe she was possessed... How would she know he needed a computer and his would not work, and then make the video right then and post it right then. I make no sense but maybe she was possessed
Or the author’s attempt to make it extra spooky
In real life, they can't give it again because it's considered an act of God.
Dude! WTF! I'd call the police after the first video!
Your voice is gold. It's perfect, your tone made me laugh so much :D