This was an enjoyable little ghost story--not a creepypasta exactly, but a more traditional tale with a very satisfying ending. Great job narrating, too!
Absolutely loved this one. I miss traditional stories like this one. Love the super scary too however this one had the feel good factor to it. Great job
I wasn’t expecting this to become one of my favorite “Creepypastas”. The story was narrated greatly. And the story also kept me wanting to know what would happen next.
I loved this story. Whoever wrote this is a genius. It was a lovely period that screamed mystery and suspense. I can only tip my hat to such an author. Whoever it was you truly have a gift.
This wasn't scary it was so sad and disturbing. The thought of the girl terrified and starving or begging for air while the sevents or family walked around unaware of her presences. The thought of her crying as she slowly died is just heart breaking. I don't think I would ever wish that on my worst enemy. No one deserves a death like that
Poor child. A sad thing is in life those men never got punished in life for what they did but maybe in death they meet old Nick himself who gave them a horrific bad time
I find it ironic how yesterday you just uploaded a video about you and your wife just moved into a new house together and then, a creepypasta about family
I love stories like this!!! But now stuck in my head.... "I sit because I can't stand, I stay because I can not leave". I would love to hear more like this!!!!
This is an amazing story it had me drawn in from the beginning and in awe at the end a truly heartbreaking things happened and it ended with happiness and relief
You should try a dictionary over pop music band names. Much more useful and educational. Evanescence: After you lose a loved one, often you're gripped with a fear of evanescence, or the rapid fading from sight or memory of that person. Evanescence comes from the Latin evanescere meaning "disappear, vanish." Something that possesses qualities of evanescence, has a quality of disappearing or vanishing.
This was quite a good story! I really did enjoy it, thought it left me thinking that something was still wrong in the end. Thanks for the daily uploads, they've really been making my summer a lot more interesting!
Great story. Right in the middle of it, a bolt of lightning knocked out my wi-fi for a few minutes. She had started to look for the secret room. I'm like come on I need to hear the rest of this or I'll never fall asleep. I've already been up for 24 hours (insomnia). Thankfully it came backs on in a few minutes. Thanks for the great story👍🏼 Now I'm gonna try and sleep.
Ugh that was so good. I love this kind of story, I wish there were more like it. If I or someone I know goes into movie making I/they need to make a movie about this.
I was about to stop watching this creepy pasta at 15:00 but because I decided to go through with finishing it I don't regret it at all it was a amazing story
I love it❤ An amazing and beautiful story. Not creepy at all. But beautiful. It would be awesome if there was second part to this story. Thanks for the amazing story😄😄😄. Congratulations on owning a new home.
So hauntingly sad, I feel so bad for the little girl and how she must have felt betrayed and lonely hoping against the odds that someone, anyone would find her.... But they never did until someone listened..
Dang I watched this a year late... this needs to be a movie. people in the comments are saying it wasn't scary while they listened to it (..clears throat.. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS) More creepy pastas need this kind of satisfying and not horrifying ending!
I love this!! These r my favorite stories jus a little spooky but so very entertaining!! I wish it were a very long novel, its great weather for jus that!!! Thank u Mr.CreepyPasta!!! 💜 #KeepRUclipsCreep 💜
This was an enjoyable little ghost story--not a creepypasta exactly, but a more traditional tale with a very satisfying ending. Great job narrating, too!
This was sad and so fulfilling. This was an excellent story 11/10
I have to agree with the girl when "I stay because I cannot leave". Yeah, I love Mrcreepypasta's stories too...
What a beautiful story. I didn't even get scared because I was entranced by the perfect word choice. Perfect narration too. Just wow!
Creepypastas have really been blurring the lines between creepy and sad as of late. And I kind of like that...
Absolutely loved this one. I miss traditional stories like this one. Love the super scary too however this one had the feel good factor to it. Great job
Love the long stories! Here we go!
Apple...?
Pear 🍐
🍊Orange
eggplant 🍆
🍉 Watermelon
I wasn’t expecting this to become one of my favorite “Creepypastas”. The story was narrated greatly. And the story also kept me wanting to know what would happen next.
Secrets are like apples you take one and someone beats the shit out of you
Apple...
Mr Creepin pear 🍐
Who the fuck are you getting your apples from?
the bandit king from the food market in Solitude, the guards dont take kindly to thieves
Mr Creepin Oh.
This didn't feel like a creepypasta, it was really good tho
Good. Sometimes CreepyPastas get old
A feelspasta then?
Mo Speckleblitz I didn't order this pasta tho
Hits the feels so feelspasta.
Kinsey Palmer feels more like reading a thriller movie tbh
I loved this story. Whoever wrote this is a genius. It was a lovely period that screamed mystery and suspense. I can only tip my hat to such an author. Whoever it was you truly have a gift.
Kudos to the author. This was genuinely one of the best stories I have heard in a long time.
Your reading also helped give it some life, too
This needs to be made into a movie.
This wasn't scary it was so sad and disturbing. The thought of the girl terrified and starving or begging for air while the sevents or family walked around unaware of her presences. The thought of her crying as she slowly died is just heart breaking. I don't think I would ever wish that on my worst enemy. No one deserves a death like that
Poor child. A sad thing is in life those men never got punished in life for what they did but maybe in death they meet old Nick himself who gave them a horrific bad time
I find it ironic how yesterday you just uploaded a video about you and your wife just moved into a new house together and then, a creepypasta about family
You have a voice of one who could read the ingredients on a shampoo bottle and lull me into a slumber, my dear.
finally a break from the mushroom ones
Xavier Cvirn those were disgusting lol
What did the clock do at dinner?
Go back 4 seconds
Monster_Gaming 11 pear 🍐
Monster_Gaming 11 Me
I hate my life
Monster_Gaming 11 I don't get it
I feel like another valid answer is "he tocked".
the clock... it watches me... bo-dum psssh!
A creepypasta with a happy ended?
..this is nice 💕
I can’t describe how much I LOVE this story
I love stories like this!!! But now stuck in my head....
"I sit because I can't stand, I stay because I can not leave".
I would love to hear more like this!!!!
That was such a sweet and happy ending! Quite different for a creepypasta...yet it is a pleasant difference.
Who the hell is cutting onions? Great job on reading this story and I too was afraid for Isabel.
This story had me at the edge of my seat, and almost made me cry at the end
This was so sad, and so very good.
honestly I haven't seen any hate on your videos, how is that possible
This is an amazing story it had me drawn in from the beginning and in awe at the end a truly heartbreaking things happened and it ended with happiness and relief
I could see this being a movie after adding fillers
This was the most amazing story I've ever heard!! It was put together so well! You conveyed the emotion perfectly. You are a truly amazing narrator!!!
This was a beautiful story in its own way,elegant with the richness of a vast dark joke that someone had always kept to them self...
I'm glad that the little girl was finally put to rest.
This was by far one of the best stories
14:04 Evanescence?
WAKE ME UP INSIDE!!!!!!
You should try a dictionary over pop music band names. Much more useful and educational. Evanescence: After you lose a loved one, often you're gripped with a fear of evanescence, or the rapid fading from sight or memory of that person. Evanescence comes from the Latin evanescere meaning "disappear, vanish." Something that possesses qualities of evanescence, has a quality of disappearing or vanishing.
I CAN'T WAKE UP!!!
Francis Alvaro SAVE MEEEEEE!
SAVE ME FROM THE NOTHING I'VE BECOME
SAVE MEEEEEEE
I love stories like this that keep you on the edge of your seat the whole time! Loved it!!!
Love this! Old fashioned good Dickensian type storytelling.
Mr Creept Pasta Is A Legend 👍👍👍 Truly The Best
King Clutch pear 🍐
I have listened to this time an time again on various occasions. This has to be one of my very very very favorites. Thank u
This story made me stay up till 3:44 am just to hear all of it, damn you Mr.Creepypasta
From one author to another GREAT STORY!!!! Intriguing from beginning to end!!
Nothing better than muting 2k17 and listening to MCP while I play :)
This literally almost made me cry, great job
who else like before watching? (also please keep reading long ones! i love them!!)
I love these more gothic feeling ghost stories
Very good story here Sir, your telling of it was simply wonderful, thank you for all of your hard work it is so appreciated.
This was quite a good story! I really did enjoy it, thought it left me thinking that something was still wrong in the end. Thanks for the daily uploads, they've really been making my summer a lot more interesting!
Ah this saddened me greatly. What a sad thing to happen..
Aww man I love this story, so much mystery and detail was put into this!
Great story. Right in the middle of it, a bolt of lightning knocked out my wi-fi for a few minutes. She had started to look for the secret room. I'm like come on I need to hear the rest of this or I'll never fall asleep. I've already been up for 24 hours (insomnia). Thankfully it came backs on in a few minutes. Thanks for the great story👍🏼 Now I'm gonna try and sleep.
Classic ghost story - well written and well read; of course. Most enjoyable, if a bit sad. Thank you.
Aww this one was really sweet
Another great story MCP! Always great content from your horror vault.
More like this pleeeaaase. Family secrets is the best I've heard yet.
This was one of your best stories ! Thank you for the bedtime story.
I just have to say, this was an amazing Creepypasta reading. Great Job, MCP!
wow! the intro is awesome! ! I've listened to ya for a long time and each story is better than ever.
Ugh that was so good. I love this kind of story, I wish there were more like it. If I or someone I know goes into movie making I/they need to make a movie about this.
One of my favorite stories! Great job!!! ♥️♥️
It had a sad story, yet a happy ending and I find it really amusing, you should do more stories like this if you find any
What is the name of that beautiful piano music? It's been in a few, namely Borrasca.
it's leder's gymnopedie from mother 3
his voice is so smooth and calming
ikr.... its almst erotic honestly
I love the happy and satisfying ending.
Idk what it is about the story but I keep coming back to it, it just makes me feel happy? In a weird way
Very Good story Brenda Ader... 🌺
And of course, the Narration is Great.
Thank you Both for your time and a job Well Done.. ❣️❣️
This one is really sweet! I started to tear up a bit at the end.
That was beautiful and heartbreaking I LOVE IT.
Ah the quintessential ghost story pure gold my friend your narration was on point timing emotion and delivery just awesome cheers mate 👍
Woaah that was a cool story, I love stuff about hidden secrets in old places
This made me cry
And I'm proud of it
I like this story.
Ooh, this was really good! I'd like to listen to more of these types of stories.
This is the only one that made me cry and angry. Think of how many times this story in a different way would be a true one. 😔
This is one of my favorite stories now.
Loved it.
I was about to stop watching this creepy pasta at 15:00 but because I decided to go through with finishing it I don't regret it at all it was a amazing story
This one made me cry.
The only one ever that made me cry at the end. God I’m soft x
Best CreepyPasta this year imo 😊
this made me feel warm inside ty for not making me scared of the dark ^-^
I love it❤ An amazing and beautiful story. Not creepy at all. But beautiful. It would be awesome if there was second part to this story. Thanks for the amazing story😄😄😄. Congratulations on owning a new home.
I absolutely loved this. It was quite beautiful
This story was very sad, good job.
Just loved the best yet for me. But very much enjoy all your stories
great now I can't sleep but so good that I saw this rip me
The honor of having the person who wrote this as an English teacher
Loved this ....can't beat a traditional ghost story.
Fantastic story - thanks!
Aaawwww this is something I can share with my little pre teens. Scary stories with out a massive amount of gore
Now this story was sad but beautiful 😭😭😭
So hauntingly sad, I feel so bad for the little girl and how she must have felt betrayed and lonely hoping against the odds that someone, anyone would find her.... But they never did until someone listened..
Dang I watched this a year late... this needs to be a movie. people in the comments are saying it wasn't scary while they listened to it (..clears throat.. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS) More creepy pastas need this kind of satisfying and not horrifying ending!
Dude your opening it so freaking awesome
Fantastic story!
hey mr creepypasta your awsome amazing videos keep up the good work
That was very good! great job!
I love this!! These r my favorite stories jus a little spooky but so very entertaining!! I wish it were a very long novel, its great weather for jus that!!! Thank u Mr.CreepyPasta!!! 💜 #KeepRUclipsCreep 💜
A Beautiful and traditional ghost tale. ^-^
Anyone else watching this 1 in the morning?
Zackary Jackson unfortunately
Great story
Wonderful..Thanks for story and superb narration.❤💀