"A Favor for a Favor" by Vincent V.Cava | CreepyPasta Storytime

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  • Опубликовано: 30 ноя 2024

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  • @MrCreepyPasta
    @MrCreepyPasta  10 лет назад +2540

    Favorite line from this story. "I left the devil hanging"

    • @joellewis2704
      @joellewis2704 10 лет назад +57

      Haha. Yes. I laughed. Favorite story so far. Great narration MCP!

    • @laungvud
      @laungvud 10 лет назад +119

      ... multiplying faster than an asian kid on aderoll.

    • @MaccaMcMacca
      @MaccaMcMacca 10 лет назад +69

      My favourite was "I clean now"

    • @joellewis2704
      @joellewis2704 10 лет назад +7

      ***** your stealing my likes.. haha

    • @Sh4d0wW0l7
      @Sh4d0wW0l7 10 лет назад +31

      No one can look badass driving a Prius XD

  • @theanonymousmrgrape5911
    @theanonymousmrgrape5911 8 лет назад +1030

    This dude is seriously a great writer. It was very interesting how he was able to make the devil into an appealing character and actively get the audience to root for the protagonist to take a faustian bargain. This is one of the best creepypastas I've seen to date. And your narration was spot on too by the way.

  • @Wapikwanis
    @Wapikwanis 8 месяцев назад +13

    9 years later and I still come back to this story

  • @XiahouDun1225
    @XiahouDun1225 7 лет назад +448

    "I once made myself into a snake, just so I could talk to a hot naked chick."
    This is by far the most quotable dialogue in the history of mankind.

    • @charlesblackwell327
      @charlesblackwell327 3 года назад +16

      I totally pissed myself from laughing when I heard that line lololol.

    • @Shadethewolfy
      @Shadethewolfy 2 года назад +12

      He also ran into Gabriel during that time. At least according to Paradise Lost.

    • @Nothingshocking86
      @Nothingshocking86 2 месяца назад

      I know right😂😂😂 one of the best one liners I'd heard for a long time😂

  • @HippoPig21_is_awesome
    @HippoPig21_is_awesome 8 лет назад +917

    "But I'm the lord of fucking darkness and you drive a Prius."

    • @longjohntortellini853
      @longjohntortellini853 8 лет назад +28

      I almost woke up my parents I was laughing so hard.

    • @kimwoodbury3885
      @kimwoodbury3885 8 лет назад +3

      HippoPig21 lmao

    • @kylefalkenberg8534
      @kylefalkenberg8534 8 лет назад +13

      I was about to type that and i saw this...fucking started laughing my ass off

    • @bjorn55531
      @bjorn55531 8 лет назад +6

      now i kow the delvis vikness a Prius

    • @yuboi4225
      @yuboi4225 8 лет назад +2

      Stupidity Unleashed k

  • @Metaknightkirby2
    @Metaknightkirby2 10 лет назад +113

    Props to the writer. This was probably one of the best-written Creepypasta I have ever heard.

    • @FathomLordKarathr
      @FathomLordKarathr 10 лет назад +5

      Do you really think that? Because the dialog was extremely irritating and unrealistic. No characters had any likeable traits or proper motivation and before you go into how the protagonist isn't always likeable, I wanna remind you how the author made repeated excuses for actions trying to present him as someone whom we could relate to. Not to mention this story destroying my interpretation of Satan from Devil's Advocate and Paradise Lost. I have seen better stories with similar plots on Fanfiction.net under the bible category. All you people praising this don't understand good literature. Putting an ending that no one expects since no clues were given to it happening doesn't make it a twist ending! This is just horribly written, it isn't even a book anyone can sell stories on Kindle there's no paperback version of this. Since no publishing company would print it! I came here for creepy stories from the internet not terrible writers trying their hand at horror! GO BACK TO YOUR OLD STORIES MRCREEPYPASTA DO MORE SLIMEBEAST!

    • @Metaknightkirby2
      @Metaknightkirby2 10 лет назад +18

      FathomLordKarathr
      Well that's ... nice to know I guess. Don't really care though. Sorry.

    • @GrayTimber
      @GrayTimber 10 лет назад +18

      FathomLordKarathr Well, that's just, like, your opinion, man. Besides, I'm not sure there are many "likeable" characters in the creepypasta universe.
      I loved this story, personally. I thought Lucifer was well portrayed and likeable, There was purpose to the main character's actions as well as Lucifer's.
      Nice job tearing down a good piece of work. Gods know writers need more of that, these days.

    • @RickisRetiered
      @RickisRetiered 10 лет назад +14

      FathomLordKarathr TL;DR Version:
      "I'm gonna belittle the intelligence of anyone who may have liked this reading because they're not special snowflakes like me. By the way MCP, go back to reading stories by the author you agreed to leave alone because he didn't want you making money off of said readings of his work".

    • @calebblackburn9531
      @calebblackburn9531 10 лет назад +1

      RickyRay102 Well if you don't like the story, the author, the channel, or you just don't have anything nice to say to people, get out of the comment section.

  • @jevilcore
    @jevilcore 8 лет назад +166

    "I'm the lord of darkness and you drive a fucking Prius"
    Even Lucifer has standards

  • @StumbleLuck
    @StumbleLuck 3 года назад +78

    Vincent writes such a good devil. He is a machiavellian manipulator who is totally evil but is so charming at the same time.

  • @ThelxoxlGirls
    @ThelxoxlGirls 8 лет назад +881

    Through the whole story, I couldn't stop freaking imagining the devil as Leafyishere when he was a teenager.

    • @ambercrest8966
      @ambercrest8966 8 лет назад +22

      Yeah, that'd be a perfect fit wouldn't it? 😆

    • @rex4796
      @rex4796 8 лет назад +7

      PERFECT

    • @neofreeze1234
      @neofreeze1234 8 лет назад +15

      Has anyone noticed that Leafy looks like L from Death Note

    • @neofreeze1234
      @neofreeze1234 8 лет назад

      +Snack Ops 3 (my profile pic)

    • @xerox9342
      @xerox9342 8 лет назад +1

      I can Slapyouwithafish if you want

  • @victorjuarez2095
    @victorjuarez2095 8 лет назад +1535

    Omg his Spanish maid voice

    • @CarlosCraft1469
      @CarlosCraft1469 8 лет назад +116

      Damn it Consuela, not now!!!

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад +38

      I know right I don't know if it's offensive or funny XD

    • @mrmutaka8830
      @mrmutaka8830 8 лет назад +39

      Omg I was laughing so hard 😂

    • @destinynigh6888
      @destinynigh6888 8 лет назад +19

      I was laughing harder than I should've at that lol

    • @Sage-lq6lu
      @Sage-lq6lu 7 лет назад +37

      Lmfao I was trying not to smash my laptop to pieces. 'HOUSE KEEPING'
      I CHANGE TOWELS?

  • @MrCreepyPasta
    @MrCreepyPasta  10 лет назад +545

    Come on guys! Have you not seen Tommy Boy?

    • @henry3175
      @henry3175 10 лет назад +12

      I have seen the new Seer episode you are in. That is awesome.

    • @DesiHaynes
      @DesiHaynes 10 лет назад +14

      It's what I thought of. When Tommy was trying to sleep and his friend kept harrassing him. "For the love of god!"

    • @curtiscastillo8940
      @curtiscastillo8940 10 лет назад +1

      Hey how much does it cost you to make a video for us? Like you did for xRebelliousWarrior.

    • @Tgkjj
      @Tgkjj 10 лет назад +6

      reconized it as soon as it started you want me to fluff pillow

    • @james916927
      @james916927 10 лет назад +6

      My stomach hurts so much from "House Keeping" "I Clean Now" it hurts so good

  • @Millie-Million
    @Millie-Million 4 года назад +103

    this creepypasta is a cult classic in my eyes, I'll randomly quote it with my friends who have never read it before and then laugh my ass off for 5 minuets

  • @calummclaughlin7464
    @calummclaughlin7464 8 лет назад +718

    This should be a movie

    • @theviewer6889
      @theviewer6889 8 лет назад +43

      Maybe a short film but not a movie.

    • @xthatwhiteguyx5833
      @xthatwhiteguyx5833 8 лет назад +43

      it could easily be a movie they just gotta put a little more detail in it than what's here. I think it'd be a cool ass movie

    • @theviewer6889
      @theviewer6889 8 лет назад +9

      Film's are generally to long for this. Maybe a long short movie like 30-45 mins or something?

    • @TheJ1aa2m3
      @TheJ1aa2m3 8 лет назад +14

      +Brandon Palin i think I could see this as a twilight zone episode

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад

      Yep

  • @justapup456
    @justapup456 9 лет назад +534

    The Devil's character in this is just hilarious.

    • @Mysticsloth
      @Mysticsloth 9 лет назад +7

      justapup456 more like ridiculous.

    • @No-zx2kg
      @No-zx2kg 9 лет назад +18

      Mysticsloth well considering who he is its not a long shot for him to be so carefree, plus he is immortal so its kind of like he will always be a child in comparison to his lifespan

    • @Mysticsloth
      @Mysticsloth 9 лет назад +1

      eady roland "considering who he is", eh..? if all-powerful beings like the devil, or god at that matter actually existed, it is highly doubtful they'd personally get involved with completely random mortals ^^; i think they'd have to take care of things we can't even begin to comprehend, not goof around like humans. that is not a very impressive trait.

    • @No-zx2kg
      @No-zx2kg 9 лет назад +3

      well eternity can get boring and don't people like petting zoos? He is playing to what are in comparison stupid animals

    • @justapup456
      @justapup456 9 лет назад +1

      I was just stating my opinion about the Devil's character... does it really need to delve into some big conversation?
      I suppose that's what I get for pointing out my opinion on RUclips.

  • @Beanibirb
    @Beanibirb 8 лет назад +372

    This is like the best thing I've ever heard. It's like, man meets Satan, mixed with memes, mixed with pop culture references

    • @poseidon4857
      @poseidon4857 4 года назад +1

      Yo can u help idk get the ending

    • @bruhdley
      @bruhdley 4 года назад +4

      @@poseidon4857 Basically the lady that's sick is actually pregnant with the devils kid (The Antichrist)

    • @rtempest12
      @rtempest12 2 года назад

      @@poseidon4857
      Hi Fellow Creepypasta..
      Remember he said how Hard it was to Find Someone who could bear His Children..!!
      - He Want's the Pastor's Wife... lol...!!
      He Cures Her Cancer.. !!

  • @tylerschannel
    @tylerschannel 4 года назад +53

    " He who hesitates is lost " in the end his hesitation led to very catastrophic consequences ..

  • @ssjswisher8290
    @ssjswisher8290 9 лет назад +138

    "I left the devil hanging"
    That was intense for some reason.

  • @mr.lolman5784
    @mr.lolman5784 8 лет назад +240

    Most intelligent question I could think up...... Erm, wat?
    I can relate.

    • @du.luth214
      @du.luth214 8 лет назад +3

      +Mr. Lolman XD Congrats on watching it all. I got distracted when he said "Multiplying faster than an asian kid on adderall" XDDD

    • @mr.lolman5784
      @mr.lolman5784 8 лет назад

      Same, But this one is a favorite of mine. Very creative.

    • @du.luth214
      @du.luth214 8 лет назад +3

      True, very true. I finally finished it. Let me just say, Deadpool and the devil should throw a fucking party together.

    • @mr.lolman5784
      @mr.lolman5784 8 лет назад +2

      Best damn party.

    • @du.luth214
      @du.luth214 8 лет назад +1

      Yes.

  • @isaacmarks6931
    @isaacmarks6931 9 лет назад +740

    "Multiplying faster than an asian kid on adderall."
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

  • @Cozy-Sims
    @Cozy-Sims 7 лет назад +39

    This seriously would make a badass movie, if they cast it right. These stories are fucking amazing.

  • @lunchbox6558
    @lunchbox6558 8 лет назад +77

    "she had broken my heart leaving me with nothing but a vacant, grief-stricken soul, like a teenager who listens to fall out boy and writes poetry on tumblr"
    im crying this is me

    • @donkeysoxx
      @donkeysoxx 11 месяцев назад

      is this still you? just curious

  • @robertcaldwell273
    @robertcaldwell273 8 лет назад +53

    I love the mild humor put in these stories. In my opinion ones like this and "Quitting" are the best Creepypastas around

  • @WhiteoakKnight
    @WhiteoakKnight 8 лет назад +217

    I wish all deities interacted with people that way. The world would be a more interesting place.

    • @khasanbekmalzagov6240
      @khasanbekmalzagov6240 6 лет назад +22

      well, according to greek mythology, they did

    • @pifflesomepuffnadder855
      @pifflesomepuffnadder855 4 года назад +7

      Tell me about it! I mean, whenever I visit Azteesio, he's always using this "I'm so Proper and No-Nonsensical" act that anyone can see through. It'd be nice to see him let loose or something. He's such a workaholic too.

    • @jimmyshrimbe9361
      @jimmyshrimbe9361 4 года назад

      You'll have to wish that they exist first.

    • @demongoddess2012
      @demongoddess2012 3 года назад +1

      they used to. buuuuuuuuuuuuut then humanity got so fucked up they didn't need to do anything anymore.

    • @GrifoStelle
      @GrifoStelle 3 года назад +5

      @@jimmyshrimbe9361 ahh all the fun in the party is here I see.
      Can't discuss Bacchus and Dionysus competing for best keggers.
      Gurzil vrs Bast for military recruitment
      Sun Wukong vrs Loki for shenanigans
      Nah. We've got to go the route of reality because we don't get enough of that.

  • @Treeeee2008
    @Treeeee2008 3 года назад +34

    I love the devil's personality in this, he's like a mix of Beetlejuice and the genie from aladdin, you know he doesn't have good intentions but his snarky and playful personality makes him really endearing to watch (or in this case listen to) as a professional cartoon character I'm just imagining in my head the many ways he could be animated like a cartoon from the 40s!

  • @thatonegirl8641
    @thatonegirl8641 8 лет назад +697

    When you're that teenager who listens to Fall Out Boy and writes poetry on tumblr

    • @praxmac6845
      @praxmac6845 8 лет назад +27

      awful life choices

    • @stopit3501
      @stopit3501 8 лет назад +3

      ThatOneGirl lol

    • @TheJennymugginsy
      @TheJennymugginsy 8 лет назад +9

      I don't care what anyone says. FOB for life...even though they did totally sell out

    • @stopit3501
      @stopit3501 8 лет назад +3

      TheJennymugginsy tru I like em

    • @caoimherothwell5835
      @caoimherothwell5835 7 лет назад +2

      I don't care just what you think, as long as it's aboououououooout me

  • @lisasummer701
    @lisasummer701 9 лет назад +334

    housekeeping
    i clean now?
    i come in?
    THAT VOICE THOUGH!!
    😂😂 come on..... COME ON!!!!

    • @hailmuse
      @hailmuse 9 лет назад +3

      I wash towels

    • @Flora_Dawn
      @Flora_Dawn 8 лет назад +3

      +Kristy Travis i reminds me of conswella. a youtuber video

    • @nathancannon1470
      @nathancannon1470 8 лет назад +17

      I was thinking on family guy when Peter was doing a skit when he was a maid XD

    • @mjk121882
      @mjk121882 8 лет назад +1

      +Kristy Travis It's a direct rip off from the movie Tommy Boy with Chris Farley. They stole the joke from that movie, which makes it lame.

    • @timothynorris757
      @timothynorris757 8 лет назад

      +mjk121882 Chris Farley got that from Lucifer duh...

  • @adrianpaul1985
    @adrianpaul1985 8 лет назад +639

    Satan's chill in this.

  • @kennedytaylor2301
    @kennedytaylor2301 2 года назад +10

    I still come back to this years later and just now figured out the twist at the end. Vincent is a fantastic author

  • @oliversinclair3834
    @oliversinclair3834 9 лет назад +30

    "I left the devil hanging."
    The best line in my opinion

    • @ixcatls
      @ixcatls 9 лет назад +1

      Just the way he structured it. Hoo man, that was good shit.

  • @michyoung77
    @michyoung77 9 лет назад +58

    This is probably my favorite story by Vincent V. Cava.

  • @deycallmemari
    @deycallmemari 9 лет назад +90

    Lucifer's character in this story is hilarious we can't help but admire him HAHA fricken love it

    • @AZULAPRO
      @AZULAPRO 9 лет назад +13

      deycallmemari lol I kept picturing hades from Hercules playing this role

    • @deycallmemari
      @deycallmemari 9 лет назад +3

      AZULAPRO hahahahha ikr?? it works a little too perfectly hahaha

  • @jessicacourkamp6771
    @jessicacourkamp6771 2 года назад +12

    I'm addicted to listening to your storytelling

  • @Austin-zg6gt
    @Austin-zg6gt 8 лет назад +278

    No one notices that he started the apocalypse probably.

    • @ltsGumbyy
      @ltsGumbyy 8 лет назад +2

      MR.AWESOME182 wait how

    • @MrIsh-tk2vm
      @MrIsh-tk2vm 5 лет назад +26

      Ge did start it. The devil wanted a child...and he got it

    • @chaosflame7278
      @chaosflame7278 5 лет назад +1

      FBI 😂😂yeah bro sly as hell

    • @twinzzlers
      @twinzzlers 5 лет назад +2

      @Aroze Ehewow I'm not a Christian, how does the anti Christ destroy the world?

    • @briann6962
      @briann6962 5 лет назад +17

      Other Gopher he even said in the story that “bringing about the apocalypse with the birth of your child is a turn off for most women”

  • @SeikoChangoesviral
    @SeikoChangoesviral 8 лет назад +106

    "A teenager that listens to Fall Out Boy and writes poetry on Tumblr..." But that's my life....

    • @Ratty_Mask
      @Ratty_Mask 8 лет назад +6

      wait wait wait, are you a male or female? Because from what i seen while on tumblr people think they are a wolf trapped in a humans body or they got kidnaped by "gray aliens."

    • @pipsenpai9690
      @pipsenpai9690 8 лет назад +2

      SAME😂

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад +4

      Ummm. Well that's awkward.

    • @blackraptor1154
      @blackraptor1154 4 года назад

      Ki-Walk Draws what do ya do now?

  • @xaliaviper9395
    @xaliaviper9395 8 лет назад +75

    "i would ride with you but im the lord of fucking darkness and you drive prius so you know....." *dying of laughter*

  • @TheRealfrost-qf9tm
    @TheRealfrost-qf9tm 10 месяцев назад +4

    This one of my favorite stories I come to and listen to every year

  • @jamheart4716
    @jamheart4716 8 лет назад +180

    Omfg when he started talking as the maid I goddamn well died 😂 😂 😂 😂 "house keeping" "I clean now" 😂 😂 idk why I'm laughing so hard

    • @updated5709
      @updated5709 8 лет назад +2

      It was a blatant parody of it.

    • @chasekennedy8624
      @chasekennedy8624 4 года назад

      Sounds like the scene from tommy boy lol

  • @freeze2602
    @freeze2602 8 лет назад +303

    well, if the son of Satan is anything like his father..... it might not be so bad.........

    • @astriaredacted9571
      @astriaredacted9571 4 года назад +7

      Oh!!! I couldn't understand the ending till now!!! Thank you!!! :D

    • @anubisvaxx
      @anubisvaxx 4 года назад

      Well I dont know about that .... it's 50/50 "The Devil" and a human ... i dont think the devil child will be as forgiven and it will maybe more sadistik... and the child dont get that from "The Devil" but what do i know

    • @demongoddess2012
      @demongoddess2012 3 года назад

      @@anubisvaxx you make a good point. but then again, disciplining from Devil Daddy may keep the kid on the straight and narrow

    • @Shadethewolfy
      @Shadethewolfy 2 года назад

      I wouldn't exactly say Jack is anything like his father. Well, not his birth father, anyway. He's much more like his adoptive father, Castiel. I also wouldn't even suggest to Jack that he might be anything like Lucifer; it's a pretty sore subject for him, and he might unmake you with a thought. Nephilim be powerful, yo.

  • @sixtyninety
    @sixtyninety 8 лет назад +83

    "the halls were as empty and barren as a Blockbuster video store" HAH

  • @shadei1142
    @shadei1142 4 года назад +4

    This is still one of my absolute favorite stories from MrCreepyPasta. He absolutely SINGS this story, it’s amazing.

  • @mayamadolyn
    @mayamadolyn 9 лет назад +8

    I never thought any voice could top Kyle's from Borrasca.
    Until the maid voice. Dude, I love you so much.

  • @reno1309
    @reno1309 9 лет назад +48

    eVERY TIME I HEARD THE "CLEANING LADY" VOICE I DIED. I STILL CAN'T BREATHE. EVEN AT THE END. HELP.

    • @sethknowles791
      @sethknowles791 9 лет назад +4

      GODDAMN IT CONSUELA!

    • @reno1309
      @reno1309 9 лет назад +1

      Seth Knowles OH MY JESUS CHRIS. I'M DEAD. AGAIN. XD

    • @vuschii
      @vuschii 9 лет назад

      oh

    • @Adviendha
      @Adviendha 9 лет назад

      It reminds me of the scene in black sheep Idk if that was the movie haha with Chris Farley when the other guy was knocking at the door saying that lmao

    • @squirrelywrath07
      @squirrelywrath07 9 лет назад

      +Quinntail cx He just wanted some more Lemon Pledge.

  • @whitenoiseproductions8957
    @whitenoiseproductions8957 9 лет назад +170

    "I'm the fucking lord of darkness and you drive a Prius"

    • @heyrandomppl9466
      @heyrandomppl9466 9 лет назад +14

      thus, one of the best lines ever was born

    • @justiniani.4501
      @justiniani.4501 9 лет назад +15

      made me laugh so hard i almost forgot it´s supposed to be a creepypasta

    • @JohnWarnockHinckleyJr079
      @JohnWarnockHinckleyJr079 9 лет назад +1

      Hehe

    • @julius9943
      @julius9943 9 лет назад +2

      WhiteNoise Productions Gee I don't know sa**** I can't have pancakes without suger.

    • @cannibalcreep1042
      @cannibalcreep1042 9 лет назад

      Denis Paulovič most of satan's lines in this did that

  • @m3xicanvoodoo
    @m3xicanvoodoo 4 года назад +14

    6 years later and still my favorite creepypasta

  • @HeavyMetalHindu
    @HeavyMetalHindu 10 лет назад +19

    I was ready to hate the demon immediately when he was first described. Then he quickly became the best character I've heard in one of these for quite a while.

  • @zizokg1680
    @zizokg1680 8 лет назад +281

    Dayum Satan seems like a cool guy

    • @dylan7381
      @dylan7381 8 лет назад +5

      ikr

    • @RetroWrathX13B
      @RetroWrathX13B 8 лет назад +14

      I'd share a cold one will em

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад +21

      Hate to admit it but.....(quietly and raspy) yeah

    • @oisinlynch8427
      @oisinlynch8427 8 лет назад +16

      funny I figure if he's from hell he'd love a warm one

    • @EricMtuhuru
      @EricMtuhuru 6 лет назад +1

      RetroMarineX13 I'd smoke a j with him lol

  • @M3GANUT
    @M3GANUT 8 лет назад +70

    "Like a teenager that listens to fall out boy"
    *looks down at fall out boy shirt*

  • @pwnshhhop51
    @pwnshhhop51 8 лет назад +149

    Satan reminds me of Deadpool.

  • @mr_soosa
    @mr_soosa 8 лет назад +189

    That's one 'HELL' of a plot twist

    • @stinkypeepeepoopoo7525
      @stinkypeepeepoopoo7525 6 лет назад +2

      Dipper1123 fuck you

    • @dumbassgamer9887
      @dumbassgamer9887 6 лет назад +1

      Your giving me black butler vibes😂😂

    • @chad6846
      @chad6846 6 лет назад

      Dipper1123 get the fuck out, GET THE FUCK OUT. GET.THE.FUCK.OUUUUUUUUT.

    • @discountjesus2161
      @discountjesus2161 2 года назад

      @Sneed Feed And Seed the devil, disguised as the the priest got the priests wife pregnant with the anti christ

    • @thermo4459
      @thermo4459 2 года назад

      @Sneed Feed And Seed the pastors wife was going to birth the antichrist on Christmas

  • @buldren0101
    @buldren0101 10 лет назад +47

    Really great story, probably the best devil story I've ever heard. I think the best part of this story (warning, spoilers) is how the devil completely follows through on his words, as if all the tales of him being the prime evil are false and that he is just willing to do as he pleases whether it's helpful or not. And yet, you can't help but doubt him and wonder when he's going to completely turn on you.
    I'm not sure what to think of the ending, I can see how he would be able to convince Darcy to bear his child, the Antichrist considering he takes the form of her husband and that up until that point she was infertile and dying from cancer.
    And I don't know whether the Antichrist would be a carefree entity like the devil and do people favors for little costs, or if his coming marks a much greater evil about to unfold. But then again, I think the idea of doubt and uncertainty is the whole theme of this story, so it was a good, fitting ending.

    • @laungvud
      @laungvud 10 лет назад +3

      I don't think she knows.

    • @buldren0101
      @buldren0101 10 лет назад +4

      Lisa Laungvud Well yeah, that's what I think too, the devil outright fooled her and luckily for the devil, she's not a crazy person like he was saying he wanted to avoid.

    • @KaiJenksVoices
      @KaiJenksVoices 10 лет назад

      I'm certain the antichrist will have free will, heck might even be human..
      but the part of being apocalyptic as the devil proclaimed sounds more like armageddon as he _hopes_ it will be but i think an apocalypse would mean zombies, werewolves, vampires, monsters, demons and maybe fallen angels coming out of the wood works. It's all conjecture or theory at this point.
      i personally would find it all kinds of funny when she pops it out it's a new born baby angel... i wonder how much the devil would flip his shit...

    • @KaiJenksVoices
      @KaiJenksVoices 10 лет назад

      Samuel John
      just because fallen angels are demons presumably in the eyes of _god_; doesn't mean they worship the ground where Satan walks... only crazies and witches ~now that part of the supernatural list...
      and the devil also said the bible is filled with half truths: who's to say his child's up coming won't even be apocalyptic as Satan was promising himself?
      you're right about the the "Anti Christ" i was thinking it could be twin sisters; Nothing is as terrifying as two _sweet?_ girls telling you to fork over the cash with a makeshift lollipop shiv...
      Satan is *raising* this child _or more?_ do you think he'll posses his child _and if their are more how in the hell will he do that?_ just to do a few killing sprees? he would have more plans rather than just play dirty tricks that could up-set a higher power, possible?
      i've also just realized Dorthy womb could be the gate from hell... she could literally be giving birth to hell D: crap...
      but this is all theory and conjecture...

    • @paneternalmoonflower2897
      @paneternalmoonflower2897 10 лет назад

      Samuel John Demons are demons, fallen angels are fallen angels some though just decide to take on different paths.

  • @SneakyMuffin
    @SneakyMuffin 9 лет назад +28

    Vinny, my man, if you read this, you're awesome. This is one of the best written things I've heard in a LONG while. Perfect mix of humor with a sort of quirky air around the devil guy. And right after a point that's never really obvious, the story takes the perfect turn to a more creepy feel, then to straight scary.

    • @jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro8520
      @jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro8520 9 лет назад

      The chances of him reading this is about the chances of you getting laid.

    • @SneakyMuffin
      @SneakyMuffin 9 лет назад +9

      Note how I said "if".
      And on a related note *fuck you*.

    • @cab1stborn
      @cab1stborn 9 лет назад +5

      That was a rude comment trablaze, considering the fact that you probably can't even look in a woman's direction without her laughing and walking away.

    • @SneakyMuffin
      @SneakyMuffin 9 лет назад

      Oh wow, I forgot to mention, Vincent V. Cava was the first person to +1 this, so...

    • @jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro8520
      @jamarcusbonquaviustoiletro8520 9 лет назад

      Alhrguy kthx

  • @jrw3620
    @jrw3620 9 месяцев назад +3

    9 years later and still one of my favorites

  • @EricksonFilmsYT
    @EricksonFilmsYT 10 лет назад +13

    That was utterly brilliant, and deceptively chilling

  • @dendren1
    @dendren1 8 лет назад +12

    I love this guys work because he can at the creepy factor while still having a bit of humor

  • @rummagingchaos
    @rummagingchaos 10 лет назад +8

    I absolutely love this story. It's funny at some parts due to the devil's sarcasm but its incorporated just enough moments of scary to leave a little chill down your spine. the suicidal man, getting confronted and outsmarted by a cocky and sarcastic demon and offsetting the entire planet's doom; there's something so awesome about that

  • @snowcone9444
    @snowcone9444 8 лет назад +73

    This NEEEEEDS to be a FILM!!! XD

    • @MiniMo0
      @MiniMo0 7 лет назад +4

      DarknessLord96 all parts played/voiced by MeCreepypasta, especially the maid

    • @snowcone9444
      @snowcone9444 7 лет назад +1

      Sure

    • @NIGHTSHADE-bh4cb
      @NIGHTSHADE-bh4cb 6 лет назад +1

      Agree

  • @danielcartellone8833
    @danielcartellone8833 10 лет назад +48

    I absolutely love this image of the devil in this story. The constant jokes and references made me laugh out of place. I would probably hang out with him on a regular basis. He's fucking hilarious.

    • @Kaltagstar96
      @Kaltagstar96 10 лет назад +4

      Daniel Cartellone The devil in this and The Trickster from Supernatural would be the greatest night out ever.

    • @oren1305
      @oren1305 9 лет назад

      It's much more like the devil in traditional literature; he's a trickster and often meant to take pleasure in baffling and outwitting mortals. (He apparently also liked to play the bagpipes, the fiddle, and enjoyed a good game of cards).

    • @plexissentry9300
      @plexissentry9300 9 лет назад +5

      I thought the same thing. he reminds me of Bill Cipher! lol

    • @philip2hale
      @philip2hale 9 лет назад

      You already do, my friend.

    • @GustavoSanchez-bk3wb
      @GustavoSanchez-bk3wb 9 лет назад

      Kaltagstar96 he was an angle

  • @NickyyChickyy
    @NickyyChickyy 8 лет назад +30

    "Great, lets get started. I'll meet you at the pastors house. I mean, I'd drive with you but I'M THE LORD OF FUCKING DARKNESS and you drive a Prius. So. You know."
    I love this so fucking much.

  • @treedancer7428
    @treedancer7428 9 лет назад +13

    This has always been one of my favorites.

  • @anonimanonim2710
    @anonimanonim2710 11 месяцев назад +2

    8:30 dude saying knock knock after the actual knocking sound just tears me up!😂😂

  • @SoniaSephia
    @SoniaSephia 10 лет назад +4

    MrCreepyPasta AWESOME narration as always! Also Vincent V. Cava, that story was just perfect. With the making a tell with the devil kind of story we always expect he's after a person soul. This time the devil was after finding a stable minded woman to carry is child, thus he chose the pastor's ex wife with cancer. Trippy ending did not see it coming, poor woman she's all happy being cured of cancer, and thinks she's carrying her actual husbands child...wow...

  • @destinynigh6888
    @destinynigh6888 8 лет назад +41

    I think I just found my new favorite creepypasta

  • @xx4444xxDOTexe
    @xx4444xxDOTexe 8 лет назад +181

    Satan played him so easily. Poor fool

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад

      Mmmhmm

    • @oisinlynch8427
      @oisinlynch8427 8 лет назад +24

      what do you mean he get a get out of jail free card from damnation

    • @vanellope681
      @vanellope681 8 лет назад +4

      did you see the end?

    • @MCpoliceman
      @MCpoliceman 8 лет назад +2

      I don't get how he got played

    • @NighName
      @NighName 8 лет назад +50

      Well he created a domino effect where he was indirectly the cause of the apocalypse

  • @emmettdonkeydoodle6230
    @emmettdonkeydoodle6230 7 лет назад +213

    My god what a charismatic bastard. I think I have a crush on Satan lmao

    • @sinisterthewretched2003
      @sinisterthewretched2003 7 лет назад +8

      -- I do too...
      cash me ousside how bow dah? HAHAHA

    • @redtide7
      @redtide7 7 лет назад +14

      Emi Other ya see I'm the Lord of fucking darkness and you drive a prius so, you know.

    • @gabriel_jahseh231
      @gabriel_jahseh231 6 лет назад

      @@redtide7 trying to imitate me pathetic

    • @redtide7
      @redtide7 6 лет назад +5

      Wat?@@gabriel_jahseh231

    • @elizabethrivera6996
      @elizabethrivera6996 3 года назад

      Emmett DonkeyDoodle I think I am deeply in love with aliens 👽🛸, but some people call them “demons or fallen angels” too, but honestly I don’t give a shit anymore: I am deeply in love. What can I say? They just do it for me.

  • @lisztresurrected9438
    @lisztresurrected9438 10 лет назад +7

    "I'm the lord of fucking darkness and you drive a Prius, so..."
    I think that might be my new favorite phrase.

  • @jessiesratrods1210
    @jessiesratrods1210 5 лет назад +16

    This guy has some seriously good dark humor and one liners XD

  • @ZombieGuy2401
    @ZombieGuy2401 8 лет назад +484

    these creepypastas are horrible for 1 reason
    they have to end ;-;

    • @skylarblue1246
      @skylarblue1246 8 лет назад +2

      YES IKR!!

    • @mrmutaka8830
      @mrmutaka8830 8 лет назад +7

      There are many shorter ones and I especially love the longer one you should listen to the whistlers that one is amazing :D

    • @ClockworkCryptid
      @ClockworkCryptid 8 лет назад

      For once, I'm agreeing with a person that just (2 months ago) said one of my favorite creepypastas suck

    • @ZombieGuy2401
      @ZombieGuy2401 5 лет назад

      @@ClockworkCryptid responding to this 2 years later lol, but which creepypasta?

  • @daddy6038
    @daddy6038 5 лет назад +3

    6 years down the road and this is still my favorite creepy pasta ever

  • @timewasteland
    @timewasteland 10 лет назад +7

    On a more serious note, the devil was amazingly voice acted ^^

  • @generalpandemonium5411
    @generalpandemonium5411 10 лет назад +21

    I now long for an entire series of the Swagtastic Satan.

  • @GlavestoneCarnston
    @GlavestoneCarnston 9 лет назад +7

    This story was incredible, one of my favorite parts of this narration was I truely believe that MrCreepyPasta enjoyed playing the role of the carefree lucifer quite a bit.

  • @rockergirl4124
    @rockergirl4124 7 лет назад +4

    hands down my all time favorite pasta... and you narrate this PERFECTLY.

  • @Cyclobomber
    @Cyclobomber 3 года назад +4

    The amount of jokes and analogies is just amazing.

  • @fivesincarnate630
    @fivesincarnate630 8 лет назад +21

    I love that sympathy for the devil reference

  • @noahwic1
    @noahwic1 9 лет назад +46

    Deadpool is satan confirmed.

    • @exm4062
      @exm4062 8 лет назад

      Yup

    • @hermionetwo2739
      @hermionetwo2739 8 лет назад

      I was thinking of lucifer off of the supernatural tv show but we all have our opinions because I have not seen dead pool

    • @jman217
      @jman217 7 лет назад

      Satanpool!!!

  • @ying742
    @ying742 6 лет назад +13

    "im the lord of darkness and you drive a Prius" i cant... i just cant.... im dying

  • @bukay5861
    @bukay5861 9 лет назад +72

    Good guy Satan lookin out for his suicidal bros

  • @dullknifefactory
    @dullknifefactory 10 лет назад +7

    The best creepypasta I've ever had the pleasure of reading. loved it.

  • @leocooper7101
    @leocooper7101 8 лет назад +35

    "The telephone in my room began to ring, it shocked me and I accidently blew my brains out."
    "Hello?" "It's me..."

  • @tsx0013
    @tsx0013 2 года назад +4

    Still one of my favorites after all these years.

  • @g32k
    @g32k 9 лет назад +7

    there should be a movie based off this its the best creepy pasta I've ever heard.

  • @texmex007
    @texmex007 9 лет назад +9

    This Lucifer is so much like Supernatural's Lucifer. I am so happy right now

  • @raydivision6471
    @raydivision6471 8 лет назад +79

    i believe "The Day I Lost my Faith" creepypasta is the sequel to this, it being set in the future and the mystery man being the antichrist

    • @twinzzlers
      @twinzzlers 5 лет назад +3

      Check who made the creepypasta
      Also just because he is the Antichrist doesn't mean it's a sequel.

    • @thunderchild1083
      @thunderchild1083 4 года назад +3

      Team Raydivision if I’m thinking of the right story the guys not the anti christ, he basically calls lucifer a whiney bitch and the anti-Christ wouldn’t that

  • @mannygil1033
    @mannygil1033 5 лет назад +8

    The first time I listened to this was in 2014 and yet I still live listening over and over👌

  • @Kaltagstar96
    @Kaltagstar96 10 лет назад +27

    The kid is just fucking hilarious. 'Is YOLO still a thing' 'Some guys hit the genetic lottery' I'll be quoting this dude for ages. This is probably the most hilarious creepypasta I've ever listened to.

    • @Kaltagstar96
      @Kaltagstar96 10 лет назад +2

      I meant the Devil. 'It doesn't make no sense' 'Neither does Carlos Mencias comedy career!' xD

    • @Kaltagstar96
      @Kaltagstar96 10 лет назад +9

      He kinda reminds me of Hades in Disney's Hercules.

  • @MovieDrivenHDD
    @MovieDrivenHDD 9 лет назад +193

    I am so making a short film of this story, WHO'S WITH ME?

    • @TetrisShark70
      @TetrisShark70 9 лет назад +3

      I Am

    • @MorningStar765
      @MorningStar765 9 лет назад +5

      MovieDrivenHDD That's a wonderful idea!! Please post a link to the video when you make it :D

    • @MovieDrivenHDD
      @MovieDrivenHDD 9 лет назад +1

      I will don't you worry!

    • @magnumsteel9770
      @magnumsteel9770 9 лет назад

      Aye, I really wanna see this done out too. Can I come help you?

    • @MovieDrivenHDD
      @MovieDrivenHDD 9 лет назад

      Sure, everyone is welcome!

  • @labourgeoiscamaraderie5354
    @labourgeoiscamaraderie5354 9 лет назад +4

    One of your better readings.
    "House keeping!" 10/10

  • @sydneypope1317
    @sydneypope1317 4 года назад +2

    I watched this video for the first time 6 years ago, and it is still to this day one of my favourites. Underrated creepypasta classic.

  • @erinneal6467
    @erinneal6467 10 лет назад +17

    and this story is great! i love happy evil characters!

    • @Hilinx
      @Hilinx 10 лет назад +8

      They are the best kind of characters

  • @jennie3135
    @jennie3135 9 лет назад +5

    Im listening to this over and over again... And i swear im going to print out the original story and pass it on to my offspring when they're old enough because this is the best story i have ever heard of in a long time >:))))))

  • @genocidechild9150
    @genocidechild9150 8 лет назад +62

    "Multiplying faster than an Asian kid on aderol"

    • @kingslayer9066
      @kingslayer9066 4 года назад

      @MachineGunTJ19XX Cameron Helmer gotta be one of those guys huh

  • @joshuaford9714
    @joshuaford9714 6 лет назад +1

    This is the only creepypasta I listen to more than once. The voice acting and the writing are just perfect

  • @okay8893
    @okay8893 8 лет назад +71

    If Satan was actually like that I'd like to be friends with him.. I'm probably going to hell now just for saying that

    • @trumpsucks4608
      @trumpsucks4608 6 лет назад +4

      See you there!

    • @grendel7192
      @grendel7192 4 года назад +3

      Bright side is, you get to spend all eternity with the chillest dude in the underworld :)

  • @littlemissbunny6069
    @littlemissbunny6069 10 лет назад +59

    That Hispanic lady voice makes me think about family guy :)

  • @RazzSashimi
    @RazzSashimi 10 лет назад +18

    "I am the lord of fucking darkness and well you drive a prius "XD thats wonderful 

  • @aaronwilder2775
    @aaronwilder2775 6 лет назад +2

    This has to be one of my favorite Creepypastas ever, it would be awesome to see a movie version of this

  • @VaultGeek
    @VaultGeek 9 лет назад +6

    Ohh man, only Vincent v. Cava could make the devil this hilarious

  • @taylarobinson2033
    @taylarobinson2033 10 лет назад +4

    This is my now most favorite creepypasta ever!

  • @sweettanner6752
    @sweettanner6752 6 лет назад +13

    “Just because I look like the lost member of The Backstreet Boys!” Lmfao!!! 😂😂😂

  • @thomasdimitriadis2867
    @thomasdimitriadis2867 6 лет назад +18

    I love how the dude just gives off sick burns while being depressed