Sorry about that little blooper that made it past editting there guys... The editor thought it would be funny to include... I mean to his credit it is but still.
Yeah, right?! Or be called Agent 47 or whatever. I reckon the organisation made the arrangements to all that happened to him. "Trust No One".... Especially if it's an evil organisation.
Usually, they don't have to because the experiments are protected and usually covered by other authority. Typically, from what I've seen, they go on to change their identity after the jobs.
3 minutes in, and I know this is the kind of creepy pasta that I like most. One that can trick you into thinking, "well maybe this happened". reminds me of Russian sleep experiment.
Amazing story and fantastic torture methods, but this continued to bug me for the entire video after it was said: "Bluish yellow liquid" That would be green, my dear.
Here's a theory: what if the aftermath of the human experiments was just a hallucination that was brought on by the trauma of killing the prisoners so gruesomely? Keep this quote from the story in mind if you choose to read this: "What I‘m trying to say is, you‘ll never know what‘s inside the mind of a psychopath if you weren‘t born one yourself. Anyone that tries to believe otherwise will, ultimately, drive themselves insane." I thought this up near the ending, where the other scientists asked if whether or not the new researcher was going to be crazy and kill herself, and at first it might seem like a lack of empathy, but what if Harvey was actually crazy? Think about all of the plotholes, such as how the healthy prisoners, or hell, even the blonde lady, was able to get past security, cameras, and literally everything in their way. In addition, how does the laptop, sealed in a lab chamber, become accessed by anyone who can guess the password? It's important to note that this whole story has been told from Harvey's perspective, and for all we know, he could be unreliable in certain parts. I believe that his mind started to deteriorate when he finished the first experiment, when he tried to show compassion. Doubt was creeping into his mind, and the catalyst for his spiral into craziness was the very next experiment, where the blonde woman asked him why he became a murderer. Afterwards, he witnesses the aftermath of a double suicide, and this sows the seed that brings him to commit his own, whereby the blonde is a specter of sorts, haunting him. He completely loses all grasp on reality when he "watches" the videos, which I believe is just his mind substituting the prisoners in the videos with his family members. Otherwise, how else is the timing so perfect? "They" symbolizes his demons, and he's simply watching the videos again and decides to kill himself. In the end, it's a story of how Harvey Synton is coping with his guilt, and how trying to reconcile his emotions with killing real people culminates into his eventual suicide. The two outliers/events that I can think of is the two empty prison cells and Allman getting angry over the escapees, but this can be explained based on the fact that a suicide from headbashing can be rather messy, and I'm sure any boss would be angry and come to see the source of the problem if a vital part of the operation simply didn't respond. Here's a proposed timeline of what actually happens: 1) Harvey Synton becomes head scientist 2) 1st and 2nd experiment 3) Prisoner Suicides 4) 3rd experiment 5) Phone call from Allman, Harvey begins to recieve the first of his mental hallucinations and leaves Allman hanging. 6) Harvey goes back down, and sees the two open cells. In reality, they're just cleaning them up, but he views it as a breakout. He subconciously picks up his laptop 7) Allman, finally having the time, heads to the research facility, mad that Harvey isn't there. Prisoners take pleasure in seeing this and naturally laugh. 8) Harvey reviews the videos, and resolves to kill himself. He retreives the gun and does the deed, destroying and hiding the laptop at the same time. 9) In the aftermath, the ones that got away are simply the ones that killed themselves, and the laptop will just resurface because, in an inherited way, the experiments will repeat. Whether there will be a cycle that repeats is dubious, as the female scientist is "pure evil" If you got this far, thanks for reading, tell me what you think!
I still want to hear about the rest of the tests honestly... also it seriously irks me that the narrator has to go through a 2 hour security clearance and go underground but two restrained inmates can just "break out" and abduct 3 family members and commit their executions in what seems like a matter of minutes, probably under one hour. Like the teenager and his friend must've been on some serious houdini shit, not your fault though, you just tell the stories.
So either the narrator imagined all of it, and magically lost his laptop. OR the entire facility randomly pulled the prank on him for no reason (because they even mentioned that he was the best inventor, why would they risk losing him like they did?).
I don’t think he just lost his mind. The ending did happen and it makes since if you pay attention to the lady scientist who replaces him in the end. When the two escaped the only one there was the lady scientist. She blamed someone else, but I think it’s implied she released them. The narrator even mentions that they shouldn’t have the password to the ISS files. She gave it to them because she wanted the Narrator’s job. After all, she was pure evil.
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I didnt get that from this. Quite the opposite. He realized he wasnt the monster he pretended to be And the guilt destroyed him. His family didnt die. Pretty much everything from the blonde chick talking to him after 'escaping' on is masked by hallucinations, projections of his guilt and his tormented mind. So its reality mixed with hallucination. He did fucked up shit Probabmy mostly to fucked up criminals. But his humanity won out. His forgivness and empathy. In other worse most people he tetsed on were no worse then himself. Only he really had no chouce. If he refused hed be counted as those iss traitors the tortures were being developed for. He was stuck.
Besides; imagineing people really hunted down his family They would be worse monsters. Harvey tested on criminals. That blonde chick *might, have been innocent. But the others for sure were not. But harveys family had nothing to do with anything. True innocents hurt by worse men
I really like how this story plays with emotions rather than just plain old fear. Showing the regret and remorse that Harvey felt after realizing what he had done made him seem more real and overall gave him more depth as a character. (Yes I'm aware that mrcreepypasta didn't write it but I really like his reading of it so I'm giving my analysis here)
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You can't hide the truth from me MCP. I know the title was meant to say "human sex dungeon". But MCP didn't want everyone to know he's a freak, so he changed the title.
Actually, what he REALLY should have done is blown the whistle on the whole thing. Go public with the details, any videos if possible, documents, etc. The public would never ever stand for that and it would be shut down.
I remember the first time I heard this. And I couldn't listen to it again, it was so good it made me over think, and thats a compliment a story should make you think and put yourself in the "specimens" place and feel that's going on
You continue to impress me. Doing streams all day, beating video games, and still finding the time to upload awesome new horror narrations? You sir, are my hero.
@Mr.CreepyPasta I love the way you emote in these stories! I got hooked on your stories ever since I listened to "My Property Isn't Normal", it was so weird, scary, and funny as hell all at once! Keep up the great work! Hopefully I can contribute to your stories sometime soon once I finish a few that I have going. Thumbs up!
Such a great friggin story and u did a seriously awesome job narrating it!!!!! I'm literally lost in this story and I can see it all happening that's how great of a job ur doing with telling this story!!!!!
I thought this story sounded familiar then realized I've read three parts or all or something on an app, it was one of my favs and I'm happy to hear it in a better narrators voice than mine👌👍
Honestly, this video was the keeping video I've ever seen...I usually watch these for fun on my free time, but this one gave me chills multiple times throughout the video
Always look forward to the end of the day when I can unwind to your amazing stories and voice😉 Thanks for giving myself and many others something to escape to...best wishes!!!!
As a kid I was very apathetic. My parents often tell me I used to show lil to no emotion and spoke in a very monotone voice. At the time I didn't notice I was different but looking back it was very strange. I noticed however as I've gotten older I've become more empathetic. It did pique my interest when he mentioned wearing the mask as I often referred to it as for myself. But recently I've begun to wonder what I'm like without the mask but after wearing the mask for so long I don't know what that would be like. I've actually never told anyone about this before but for some reason this creepypasta really resonated with me...
I've been falling asleep to your videos for four years. you have an incredibly soothing voice and someday I hope to shake your hand and hopefully have a clean organized creepy pasta for you. but it is an art and I can't even come close to your original videos. but o want you to know me and hundreds of my friends love your voice and have been huge fans for years.
To be completely honest with you, I didn't really like this story. Not because of the torture and whatever, the writing just seemed very weird it to me. Plus it didn't really make a whole lot of sense. I mean, if Harvey wasn't a psychopath and had empathy well as a family that he very much cares about, why would he take up such a job in the first place? Also, who the fuck are the teenagers? How did they get a hold of Harvey's laptop? So many unanswered questions and very obvious plot holes in this story so I give it 4/10 for at least having proper grammar and a halfway decent moral story.
Perhaps Harvey had a strong sense of justice, and believed in capital punishment. And since he had never been directly caused the death of another person at close proximity, he wouldn't had known that it would've been so painful to witness. He was struggling with justifying his actions throughout the story, slipping between humanizing the criminals and being stone cold about it. As for that teenager and the bald inmate running away, it was written that the security guards did a bad job. Still, I find it a little unbelievable because by 'bad job', it appears almost as though they were completely incompetent, that or a mighty stroke of bad luck, or a sick combination of both. I thought the point of the story was nailed quite alright though.
I totally agree, but I also think that a moral compass is something that should be *lacking* in a creepy pasta. We're supposed to get scared and creeped out, not the narrator.
According to crappypasta logic breaking out of guantanamo bay by simply just walking out while stealing bunch of stuff and straight after that tracking down bunch of people like a professional assassin just so that you can kill them in edgy way and getting away with all of that is stuff that average teenagers can pull off just like that all the time.
When he said “I’m going to stop pretending to be a sociopath” I wanted him to say “I’m going to be one” since his famous got killed in front of him. I wanted revenge
People need to learn that originality is necessary for a hook. Sure, you can take something that's been done a million times, but if you add the right twist or flare it becomes something else entirely, and therefore something that will draw people in. Seriously, look at the wording for the title: "Human Experiment Chamber". Not only does this sound weak as hell and reused to hell and back (see what I did there?), but it barely works in a grammatical sense. Unless this is the rather stupid nickname for a specific room or area, there's nothing to really hook this designation to. Even then, wouldn't this be a 'roll credits' moment if a character uses this designation in the story? It makes it sound cheesy and second-rate. Now, the reason that I'm writing all of this now is because I haven't even watched the video/read the story yet; this is what I thought of when I initially read the title, before I even clicked the video link. If you cannot hook your audience with the title, or they get hung up on said title, then chances are they will just keep walking. It doesn't have to be perfect, but your delivery must walk hand in hand with your plot and development in terms of effort and devotion.
Falling Man154 So I write a genuine statement about writing horror material and that's the most you can say? Children like you should especially take note, since you appear to be responsible for most of the garbage on amateur horror/creepypasta sites.
Ignore them. Creepypastas always draw immature children. You're completely right and while I enjoyed the story at the beginning it ended up falling as flat as its name
Not sure if your going to read this but would you ever consider a gaming channel? I recently saw one of your streams for Luigi's mansion and I know others like myself crave to view more of your personality, out side of the creepy pastas. The reason is because you sound like such an awesome and unique human being, and I'd like to think that people would be super interested too. Also, another great video. Been a long time fan. Farthest creepy pasta I can remember viewing of your channel was Boxxes. The one about the cat~
The detail is so excruciating to hear! It just sends an image to my mind of people dying a harsh death. I know this is how stories go, but the story was pure evil!
Man I've listened to dozens and dozens of creepypastas but this is one of the first to really make me cringe. It actually upset my stomach! Great pasta!^-^
If karma = justice, no. He may have killed (and those he killed may or may not have deserved it) But his family had nothing to do with it. Simply being related isnt a crime. Thus, they were innocent. That isnt justice. Innocents were killed to make the protagonists feel the pain he caused. That is just as bad, if not worse. That is not justice. Especially since we can assume most people he killed were actually killers.
Justice or karma would if he got flayed, injected and melted by acid himself. As you could argue he 'deserves' though, its questionable wether that is even the case. All factors must be accounted for. He was already stuck. Sure, it was a job. But at this point it wasnt JUST a job. Youd have to imagine he couldnt exactly retire whenever he wanted. The organization is whose truly at fault. Even if the victims deserved to die, gruesome deaths such as these I would say are too far. The organization deserved to fall, and the leaders deserve swift judgement. Anyone who tried to stop this process becomes a casuality of 'war' regardless of how much responsibility they hold.
Sorry about that little blooper that made it past editting there guys... The editor thought it would be funny to include... I mean to his credit it is but still.
Actually made it better
Discipline your editor?
MrCreepyPasta great vid
I listen to these right before I go to sleep in a weird way they help me sleep
On the tree there is a number 14 I think hard to see on my phone lol. Anything special about the number..............just out of place.
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"She just sobbed continuously... *ad plays, funky music in the background* 'happy death day!'"
Quiz Nog lmfao
Quiz Nog i got a camdy crush ad when the bars where killing him XD
Now it is all stupid voting ads and hate. -_-
Ad: Why (random guy) shouldn't be voted for and trump hate. Ugh...
I got a pirate type of one
Man... when he asked "Can you hold my hand?" That kinda got to me. Very sad.
Same.
It was like a little kid....
Even when he threatned to break his hand....
Glad to know I'm not the only one lol. I choked a little bit.
Me too.
i literally said “aw☹️”
When he actually held his hand at the end as well, that got me
Hahaha 33:13 ... "Anyone working for ISIS ... oh wow! ISIS ... yeah!" I almost peed myself laughing. Good blooper.
Ken Riven Son I found you
Thought it was part of the story tbh
still fits. anyone working for isis is a cursed madman
Ken Riven XD
Ken Riven lmao had to rewind twice it was so funny
I knew the International Space Station was evil...
Ripley Wilder it's the globalist agenda
I know right
From my point of view the jedi are evil
Cap those were death intimate
wouldn't blue-ish yellow liquid be green?
TheRiceandCake I was going to comment 'so green liquid?' 😂
Hahaha
The liquid can be blue and yellow without mixing based on density
Mix the bodak yellow with the Jay Z blue and you get money green
TheRiceandCake lol true
I love when he says “Hey there kids!” I’m always like “hello father!”
When your daddy issues are so bad that you consider an online creepypasta narrator as a father figure. ( calling myself out on this one)
@@eyelessteeth3219Bro CHILL 🤣
"The two murders laughed madly"
*ad starts*
"HOW TO USE A MEAT THERMOMETER"
XD
Lol
this nearly made me piss myself laughing
I cried at the part where the big man got torn apart :c the thing with ,,can u hold my hand" was sad
You'd think someone doing illegal and fatal human experiments would have a duped identity.
True but its just a story
For shame 😔
Yeah, right?! Or be called Agent 47 or whatever.
I reckon the organisation made the arrangements to all that happened to him.
"Trust No One".... Especially if it's an evil organisation.
Exactly. Like won't the authority pick up people who have like zero immediate family!
Usually, they don't have to because the experiments are protected and usually covered by other authority. Typically, from what I've seen, they go on to change their identity after the jobs.
"Anyone working for ISIS, wait WOW isis... the ISS"
Please keep this in the video
Jayden Daryls it's not like he can remove it
Jayden Daryls lmao as soon as I read ur comment that part came up
3 minutes in, and I know this is the kind of creepy pasta that I like most. One that can trick you into thinking, "well maybe this happened". reminds me of Russian sleep experiment.
FenrirGauntlet, I was thinking the same thing!
Haha are you dumb?
That sounded so mean i was just kidding its a cool story but cmon man
That freaked me the eff out until I began researching more and found it was just a story. Damn good one IMHO.
Old as hell comment but this story fucking sucks lol
Amazing story and fantastic torture methods, but this continued to bug me for the entire video after it was said:
"Bluish yellow liquid"
That would be green, my dear.
Fallen Flyer made me think of a lava lamp
Fallen Flyer bluish yellow 😂😂
Laughed my ass off.
Was scared then this made me feel better thanks. 😂😂
It could be a mixture, or a gradient. Not every colour is block solid lmao.
"Were not going to tell your family anything"
"Cheers."
Haha that made me laugh
23:36 I bursted out laughing. How you said “what” threw me off so hard.
Here's a theory: what if the aftermath of the human experiments was just a hallucination that was brought on by the trauma of killing the prisoners so gruesomely? Keep this quote from the story in mind if you choose to read this:
"What I‘m trying to say is, you‘ll never know what‘s inside the mind of a psychopath if you weren‘t born one yourself. Anyone that tries to believe otherwise will, ultimately, drive themselves insane."
I thought this up near the ending, where the other scientists asked if whether or not the new researcher was going to be crazy and kill herself, and at first it might seem like a lack of empathy, but what if Harvey was actually crazy?
Think about all of the plotholes, such as how the healthy prisoners, or hell, even the blonde lady, was able to get past security, cameras, and literally everything in their way. In addition, how does the laptop, sealed in a lab chamber, become accessed by anyone who can guess the password? It's important to note that this whole story has been told from Harvey's perspective, and for all we know, he could be unreliable in certain parts.
I believe that his mind started to deteriorate when he finished the first experiment, when he tried to show compassion. Doubt was creeping into his mind, and the catalyst for his spiral into craziness was the very next experiment, where the blonde woman asked him why he became a murderer. Afterwards, he witnesses the aftermath of a double suicide, and this sows the seed that brings him to commit his own, whereby the blonde is a specter of sorts, haunting him. He completely loses all grasp on reality when he "watches" the videos, which I believe is just his mind substituting the prisoners in the videos with his family members. Otherwise, how else is the timing so perfect? "They" symbolizes his demons, and he's simply watching the videos again and decides to kill himself.
In the end, it's a story of how Harvey Synton is coping with his guilt, and how trying to reconcile his emotions with killing real people culminates into his eventual suicide. The two outliers/events that I can think of is the two empty prison cells and Allman getting angry over the escapees, but this can be explained based on the fact that a suicide from headbashing can be rather messy, and I'm sure any boss would be angry and come to see the source of the problem if a vital part of the operation simply didn't respond.
Here's a proposed timeline of what actually happens:
1) Harvey Synton becomes head scientist
2) 1st and 2nd experiment
3) Prisoner Suicides
4) 3rd experiment
5) Phone call from Allman, Harvey begins to recieve the first of his mental hallucinations and leaves Allman hanging.
6) Harvey goes back down, and sees the two open cells. In reality, they're just cleaning them up, but he views it as a breakout. He subconciously picks up his laptop
7) Allman, finally having the time, heads to the research facility, mad that Harvey isn't there. Prisoners take pleasure in seeing this and naturally laugh.
8) Harvey reviews the videos, and resolves to kill himself. He retreives the gun and does the deed, destroying and hiding the laptop at the same time.
9) In the aftermath, the ones that got away are simply the ones that killed themselves, and the laptop will just resurface because, in an inherited way, the experiments will repeat. Whether there will be a cycle that repeats is dubious, as the female scientist is "pure evil"
If you got this far, thanks for reading, tell me what you think!
Reynold Kao this was a lot to read 😂
Ffibo X lol yeah, I wrote this whole thing when I was bored at night.
this is actually a really good theory and makes a lot of sense
This was a great theory. I feel it actually makes the story a lot better in my opinion.
Agreeable
I still want to hear about the rest of the tests honestly... also it seriously irks me that the narrator has to go through a 2 hour security clearance and go underground but two restrained inmates can just "break out" and abduct 3 family members and commit their executions in what seems like a matter of minutes, probably under one hour. Like the teenager and his friend must've been on some serious houdini shit, not your fault though, you just tell the stories.
So either the narrator imagined all of it, and magically lost his laptop. OR the entire facility randomly pulled the prank on him for no reason (because they even mentioned that he was the best inventor, why would they risk losing him like they did?).
@@theprogrammer32 he lost his mind. None of it happned. Atleast, not the end
I don’t think he just lost his mind. The ending did happen and it makes since if you pay attention to the lady scientist who replaces him in the end. When the two escaped the only one there was the lady scientist. She blamed someone else, but I think it’s implied she released them. The narrator even mentions that they shouldn’t have the password to the ISS files. She gave it to them because she wanted the Narrator’s job. After all, she was pure evil.
Youve heard of plot armour they had plot powers
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Dope shit
The stuff of dreams
harvey denied being something that he never wanted to be and finally accepted who he truly was
A monster.
I didnt get that from this. Quite the opposite. He realized he wasnt the monster he pretended to be
And the guilt destroyed him.
His family didnt die.
Pretty much everything from the blonde chick talking to him after 'escaping' on is masked by hallucinations, projections of his guilt and his tormented mind. So its reality mixed with hallucination.
He did fucked up shit
Probabmy mostly to fucked up criminals.
But his humanity won out. His forgivness and empathy.
In other worse most people he tetsed on were no worse then himself. Only he really had no chouce. If he refused hed be counted as those iss traitors the tortures were being developed for. He was stuck.
Besides; imagineing people really hunted down his family
They would be worse monsters. Harvey tested on criminals. That blonde chick *might, have been innocent. But the others for sure were not.
But harveys family had nothing to do with anything. True innocents hurt by worse men
5:00 "She refused to talk to me." "She tried to convince me she was innocent." Which one is it? This is why authors need an editor or 2.
ZarPof I caught that too. I was like um . . . something isn't right here.
no need for a editor just someone with decent reading skills to proofread
it's sad what happened to this writer in the end
She used sign language
ShyGuy Ty Didn't he get hit by a truck.
“She just sobbed continuously”
*ad plays*
*”are you- drooling? Reese’s. Not sorry.”*
"I doesn't" *In the distance* "fUCKING" *Closer to the mic again* "Matter."
_Why did that make me laugh_
I really like how this story plays with emotions rather than just plain old fear. Showing the regret and remorse that Harvey felt after realizing what he had done made him seem more real and overall gave him more depth as a character. (Yes I'm aware that mrcreepypasta didn't write it but I really like his reading of it so I'm giving my analysis here)
Thumbs up to let MCP know we appreciate him👍
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Truest shit you ever said
26:07 "Hey bro, how ya doin'? It's me... Ken Kaniff from Connecticut." ROFLMAO
malandr0bem gonna give you a piece of my mind... A piece of my ass...
"Ehaaaaagh... Kenneth Kaniiiiiiiiff... Ehaaah!"
You can't hide the truth from me MCP. I know the title was meant to say "human sex dungeon". But MCP didn't want everyone to know he's a freak, so he changed the title.
my first thought was "human experimentation chamber sounds like co-ed college dorm room to me".
CezaMVO what the the fuck is wrong with you
CezaMVO id watch that ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Joseph Daniel west
Nothing.... nothing at all
Dis messed up fam....
Anybody else besides me who watches Mr.Creepypasta videos at night?
I love wolves 435 yea literally everybody dumb fuck
Ok....
I love wolves 435 and sameeeeee😂
TJ Graff stop crying bitch
Falling Man154 bitch u fuckin gay asf
In school suspension
@@theprogrammer32 they were joking
What did you do now to get into suspension youre grounded wait until your mom hears about this
😂🤣
@@tyrian666 lol
Aahh I feel bad for uh mate..
"were comin for ya next"
*ad starts
"ARBYS 2 FOR 1 MEATS-"
HELL YEAH ANOTHER EXPERIMENT CREEPYPASTA!!!
Blerk yeeeeeees
Is it jsut me or does "Human Experimentation Chamber" sound kinda like a college dorm room ;)
I alwayslove those the best
@@arthas640 nice generic and over commented comment bruh, same guy same shitty comment.
Actually, what he REALLY should have done is blown the whistle on the whole thing. Go public with the details, any videos if possible, documents, etc. The public would never ever stand for that and it would be shut down.
Jared Hoeft not the whole public, some of them would defend it
Even if he succeded which is unlikely he'd just end up back there, himself a test subject. He went with the better odds.
Blond girl: 'Screams the dudes name and call's him a murder'
Add: "TENDER MAC IS BACK!!"
I remember the first time I heard this. And I couldn't listen to it again, it was so good it made me over think, and thats a compliment a story should make you think and put yourself in the "specimens" place and feel that's going on
You continue to impress me. Doing streams all day, beating video games, and still finding the time to upload awesome new horror narrations? You sir, are my hero.
The way he said “who is they!?” 🤣😂
33:13 "... Oh wow..ISIS yeah..." Dude I wheezed 🤣🤣
Did anyone feel bad for the guy who was so scared he said "Will you hold my hand"
@Mr.CreepyPasta I love the way you emote in these stories! I got hooked on your stories ever since I listened to "My Property Isn't Normal", it was so weird, scary, and funny as hell all at once! Keep up the great work! Hopefully I can contribute to your stories sometime soon once I finish a few that I have going. Thumbs up!
I love everything horror and the way you say it makes it creepier.
This pasta makes you think...... Is the torturer doing the torturing, or is he being tortured, nice twist
Such a great friggin story and u did a seriously awesome job narrating it!!!!! I'm literally lost in this story and I can see it all happening that's how great of a job ur doing with telling this story!!!!!
I actually really liked this story :D
I liked this solely just to get it to 100 likes
Wow...
I love the voice acting in this video, it really brings the story to life
I thought this story sounded familiar then realized I've read three parts or all or something on an app, it was one of my favs and I'm happy to hear it in a better narrators voice than mine👌👍
Oof, this one actually made my stomach hurt. I know they're criminals, but my god, what awful ways to go...
You always know it’s good when it has experiment in the title
Honestly, this video was the keeping video I've ever seen...I usually watch these for fun on my free time, but this one gave me chills multiple times throughout the video
I personally love the experiment creepy pastas their the best ❤
Grimm The Reaper aren't the experiment creepy pastas like the SCPs
Me too the most recent one I seen the Arkansas sleep experiment one was pretty dope
I'm not sure maybe? They might be a genre by them self but I'd like to think of then as creepy pastas
Kyle Ohlson same it was awesome
Grimm The Reaper hell yea, this one was bad ass too can’t wait for more of it
I always listen to your creepypastas while painting which honestly takes hours for me to do so i love listening to your videos
Love it when there is a carpet cleaning add in the middle of this vid 😂
"inmates desperate for revenege"
Good job on the video description there, MCP
Always look forward to the end of the day when I can unwind to your amazing stories and voice😉 Thanks for giving myself and many others something to escape to...best wishes!!!!
Empathy, can be quite useful
splo1nger It can also be quite useless.
@@RUclipssuckscock Ummm, incorrect.
"ISIS, heh, yeah." I laughed so hard at that point. Give your editor a raise.
I don’t know why but I really love the voice narrating the story, I listened to another story told by the same voice and I’m just obsessed!!
Your creepypastas are always so calming to me. I think it’s your voice honestly😌
As a kid I was very apathetic. My parents often tell me I used to show lil to no emotion and spoke in a very monotone voice. At the time I didn't notice I was different but looking back it was very strange. I noticed however as I've gotten older I've become more empathetic. It did pique my interest when he mentioned wearing the mask as I often referred to it as for myself. But recently I've begun to wonder what I'm like without the mask but after wearing the mask for so long I don't know what that would be like. I've actually never told anyone about this before but for some reason this creepypasta really resonated with me...
The security guards were probably Gmod players from a scp role-playing server
I've been falling asleep to your videos for four years. you have an incredibly soothing voice and someday I hope to shake your hand and hopefully have a clean organized creepy pasta for you. but it is an art and I can't even come close to your original videos. but o want you to know me and hundreds of my friends love your voice and have been huge fans for years.
Neat ideas but it makes no sense how the magic prisoners teleported across the earth and did all that. Duper dumb.
Same.
Ultimately I would care they broke out. I don't believe in the justice system but if there were criminal
The story is super detailed yet somehow filled with plot holes!
To be completely honest with you, I didn't really like this story. Not because of the torture and whatever, the writing just seemed very weird it to me. Plus it didn't really make a whole lot of sense. I mean, if Harvey wasn't a psychopath and had empathy well as a family that he very much cares about, why would he take up such a job in the first place? Also, who the fuck are the teenagers? How did they get a hold of Harvey's laptop? So many unanswered questions and very obvious plot holes in this story so I give it 4/10 for at least having proper grammar and a halfway decent moral story.
Perhaps Harvey had a strong sense of justice, and believed in capital punishment. And since he had never been directly caused the death of another person at close proximity, he wouldn't had known that it would've been so painful to witness. He was struggling with justifying his actions throughout the story, slipping between humanizing the criminals and being stone cold about it.
As for that teenager and the bald inmate running away, it was written that the security guards did a bad job. Still, I find it a little unbelievable because by 'bad job', it appears almost as though they were completely incompetent, that or a mighty stroke of bad luck, or a sick combination of both.
I thought the point of the story was nailed quite alright though.
I totally agree, but I also think that a moral compass is something that should be *lacking* in a creepy pasta. We're supposed to get scared and creeped out, not the narrator.
According to crappypasta logic breaking out of guantanamo bay by simply just walking out while stealing bunch of stuff and straight after that tracking down bunch of people like a professional assassin just so that you can kill them in edgy way and getting away with all of that is stuff that average teenagers can pull off just like that all the time.
Fast travel?
That's not crappypasta logic, that's Hollywood.
My empathy meter wouldn’t stop 🛑
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this story was fantastic! Probably one of the best ive heard all year keep it up MrCreepyPasta
When he said “I’m going to stop pretending to be a sociopath” I wanted him to say “I’m going to be one” since his famous got killed in front of him. I wanted revenge
This world is really fucking disgustingly putrid and sickly disturbing!!!!
My budgie just peeped and it scared me so you did great job on this story
This is the only creepypasta that has made my heart pound,props
Great story. I love when justice is served.
this isn't horror... this is just... sick!
there's a difference between horror and gory death...
PJ6300gaming It’s not real?? Stop being so triggered.
Toasted Citrus sorry dude. Didnt mean to get worked up. Each to their own i guess...
PJ6300gaming I’m Sorry too.
As great as ever my friend
Why do I always start binging these again at Christmas
This is super detailed yet somehow filled with plot holes!
cool a new video
Love it as always MCP been subbed since you were 10k
Logan Kinney hipster week trash
Holy cow, I love the emotional fear pouring out of this one and I'm not even done yet.😲
I want to hear the story of the woman at the end
Fuck this one twisted my stomach 😩
People need to learn that originality is necessary for a hook. Sure, you can take something that's been done a million times, but if you add the right twist or flare it becomes something else entirely, and therefore something that will draw people in. Seriously, look at the wording for the title: "Human Experiment Chamber". Not only does this sound weak as hell and reused to hell and back (see what I did there?), but it barely works in a grammatical sense. Unless this is the rather stupid nickname for a specific room or area, there's nothing to really hook this designation to. Even then, wouldn't this be a 'roll credits' moment if a character uses this designation in the story? It makes it sound cheesy and second-rate.
Now, the reason that I'm writing all of this now is because I haven't even watched the video/read the story yet; this is what I thought of when I initially read the title, before I even clicked the video link. If you cannot hook your audience with the title, or they get hung up on said title, then chances are they will just keep walking. It doesn't have to be perfect, but your delivery must walk hand in hand with your plot and development in terms of effort and devotion.
Falling Man154 So I write a genuine statement about writing horror material and that's the most you can say? Children like you should especially take note, since you appear to be responsible for most of the garbage on amateur horror/creepypasta sites.
Ignore them. Creepypastas always draw immature children. You're completely right and while I enjoyed the story at the beginning it ended up falling as flat as its name
A lot of what you said is pretentious drivel that doesn’t even make sense.
OH god I don't wanna imagine how much pain these guys were in
Wow! Fabulous reading and great story.
Any other creepy pastas like this? I enjoyed it quite a lot.
Not sure if your going to read this but would you ever consider a gaming channel? I recently saw one of your streams for Luigi's mansion and I know others like myself crave to view more of your personality, out side of the creepy pastas. The reason is because you sound like such an awesome and unique human being, and I'd like to think that people would be super interested too. Also, another great video. Been a long time fan. Farthest creepy pasta I can remember viewing of your channel was Boxxes. The one about the cat~
A gaming channel would be great!
The detail is so excruciating to hear! It just sends an image to my mind of people dying a harsh death. I know this is how stories go, but the story was pure evil!
23:35 - "What?" LMAO
24:24 when he says "who is they" he sounds like captain hornblower from the TV programme hornblower I swear
Oh, those pesky D-class. 😆
Can't wait for my favorite experiment pasta: PICKLE RIIIICK!
Man I've listened to dozens and dozens of creepypastas but this is one of the first to really make me cringe. It actually upset my stomach! Great pasta!^-^
Great story MCP!
Legit my favorite creepy pasta
welp, the scientist got a bit of karma
Mad-Hatter-ison
Assuming Karma is a form of justice, then no not really.
NellucVidGuy you don’t think that was justice?
If karma = justice, no. He may have killed (and those he killed may or may not have deserved it)
But his family had nothing to do with it.
Simply being related isnt a crime. Thus, they were innocent. That isnt justice. Innocents were killed to make the protagonists feel the pain he caused. That is just as bad, if not worse. That is not justice. Especially since we can assume most people he killed were actually killers.
Justice or karma would if he got flayed, injected and melted by acid himself. As you could argue he 'deserves' though, its questionable wether that is even the case. All factors must be accounted for. He was already stuck. Sure, it was a job. But at this point it wasnt JUST a job. Youd have to imagine he couldnt exactly retire whenever he wanted. The organization is whose truly at fault. Even if the victims deserved to die, gruesome deaths such as these I would say are too far.
The organization deserved to fall, and the leaders deserve swift judgement. Anyone who tried to stop this process becomes a casuality of 'war' regardless of how much responsibility they hold.
I love these type stories bring me more.
I know this is an older video, but I really like the timer in the lower right hand corner. It feels very ominous 😂
Thank you for the story dad
Awesome story, darlin'! Thanks much!😘
"The two murderers laughed madly"
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Wonderful as usual and have a happy Halloween
Charge you'r Empathy Sensor LOL thats some tech talk there
23:36 -Me when someone says they don't like Halloween