5 Ways to Write a Likeable Character: Hobie Brown

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  • Опубликовано: 17 окт 2024

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  • @watermeloneo
    @watermeloneo Год назад +3827

    i love how they make us believe hobie will be a love rival against miles but do a complete 180 and make him a homie

  • @whyisyoutubeshowinghandles
    @whyisyoutubeshowinghandles Год назад +2734

    I think my favorite thing about Hobie is that he doesn't talk down to Miles. Gwen and Peter B. mean well, but they(mostly Gwen) try to let him down easy by sugarcoating things or omitting details. Miguel never even gives Miles a chance and tries to decide what right and wrong should be for him. By contrast, Hobie simply gives Miles the puzzle pieces and stands off to the side, keeping an eye on the situation but trsuting he'll put them together when the time is right.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +366

      That's a really insightful comment. You're right, Hobie's approach with Miles could actually be the most healthy.

    • @bloom418
      @bloom418 Год назад +67

      Thats why they homies

    • @freddman0135
      @freddman0135 Год назад +73

      "dont enlist until you know who you're fighting"
      -Hobie Brown, 2023? 2099? who knows

  • @eeveeofalltrades4780
    @eeveeofalltrades4780 Год назад +1399

    Hobie has every reason and characteristic necessary to be a jerk and part of a love triangle, but he's not doing it because he doesn't conform to overused writing tropes.

  • @basmalaalkhalaf1713
    @basmalaalkhalaf1713 Год назад +3038

    i thought i would hate hobie's personality (i liked the way he looked lmao) but honestly he was so real. so actually punk as well, like it was great. great video btw

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +165

      Yeah, I completely get that. They executed it really well. Thanks for watching!

    • @premiumheadpats4150
      @premiumheadpats4150 Год назад +81

      Same. I didn't think I was going to like Hobie or Pav, but I really like both of them.

    • @TheNinjaRacoon
      @TheNinjaRacoon Год назад +13

      Same, I was mostly excited to see Pav but to my surprise I really enjoyed his character

    • @AdidTurreno
      @AdidTurreno Год назад +9

      His animation style gave me vertigo, but I loved him

    • @Indigo360
      @Indigo360 Год назад +30

      Fun Fact, the creator of Spiderpunk has very strong leftist beliefs like hobie does, his beliefs were toned down a bit for the movie, i def recomend reading his comics

  • @ZetaNiGHT
    @ZetaNiGHT Год назад +464

    I think a key aspect of what makes him so likeable that was possibly missed or glossed over in the video is how SUPPORTIVE he is of the other characters. He talks shit, and is assertive and confident in his beliefs, he encourages Miles to think for himself and consider all the angles but doesn't force it, and he doesn't actively put down or insult anyone (just kind of indirectly talking shit on Miguel haha), just questions their beliefs and their line of thinking.
    Just... what a cool mother fucker.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +39

      I agree, I could definitely have done a section on how supportive Hobbie is, especially with Miles.

    • @louissemarguerettenavales1253
      @louissemarguerettenavales1253 Год назад +9

      Everything you said is so valid and real ⁉️⁉️

  • @lucasrichardson3434
    @lucasrichardson3434 Год назад +552

    Hobie is honestly like a big brother to Miles in a lot of ways

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +55

      Yeah, he really is. That's a nice way of looking at it.

    • @wren_.
      @wren_. Год назад +21

      hobie’s the big brother, pav is the little brother, and miles is the middle child

    • @astrix_moon8334
      @astrix_moon8334 Год назад +6

      I also see him that way 😭

    • @claudius3359
      @claudius3359 Год назад +3

      ​@@wren_.Yeah,I can see that too

  • @morganqorishchi8181
    @morganqorishchi8181 Год назад +590

    A tiny detail that I noticed on a rewatch: Hobie has blue shoelaces, something punks and related subcultures only put on when they've killed a police officer. Hobie doesn't deny it when Miguel all but states every Spider-Person has lost someone. Suddenly his decision to be on Miles' side from the very beginning gets recontextualized: he either killed his universe's equivalent mentor figure, couldn't save him and feels as if he might as well have killed the man, or killed a police officer while doing Spider-Punk duties. Hobie Brown has depths upon depths and the fact that we don't get to know 99% of them makes him infinitely more intriguing. As the audience you want to know about his world, how his dynamic is with the people there, and, once you notice them, you want an explanation for those shoelaces. Hobie lives in my head rent free at all times.

    • @stardancer119
      @stardancer119 Год назад +28

      Ooh, thanks for this detail!!

    • @thecookiemeister5374
      @thecookiemeister5374 Год назад +37

      Bold of you to assume Hobie would ever pay rent

    • @carimeslockdownedtree2654
      @carimeslockdownedtree2654 Год назад +52

      He did actually kill a political figure in his comics! I havent read them but that's what I've heard!

    • @tlayudaaa
      @tlayudaaa Год назад +81

      ​@@carimeslockdownedtree2654 he chopped off norman osborn's head in one of the comics for being an asshole and being a fascist dictator. it's been a while since ive read it

    • @pokaay3163
      @pokaay3163 Год назад +19

      thats awesome. the people who are making spiderverse are seriously so into the story and its characters and it shows

  • @ishathakor
    @ishathakor Год назад +165

    i LOVE that they used cockney rhyming slang. it adds so much personality so quickly

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +12

      Absolutely!

    • @foxywoxy1915
      @foxywoxy1915 Год назад +1

      And stuck to other interpretations which also shared the cockney accent

  • @Nana-yh2wp
    @Nana-yh2wp Год назад +778

    Dude I honestly didn’t know about the stupid love triangle rumor until after I saw the movie. I really appreciate how they portrayed his character as an actual punk and ally to Miles. Obviously knew how Miguel (+ Spider Society) viewed miles and finding out the reason why he (Miles)wanted to join the society(cult) he became a supporter and defender. Though he’s still a kid himself, he looks out for the younger spider teens as well, for instance he let Gwen find shelter within his dimension because she was homeless and in a vulnerable position; both becoming friends due to their love of music, style and powers. He’s very playful and hyper with Pav, since he’s(Pav) the youngest, both have shared distaste for the British and are very kind & caring in their own ways. Great video, I really enjoyed it and I hope you get more views for this!
    Ps: I really hate how there are people in the spider verse fandom who mischaracterize Hobie as mean and uncaring and it’s like ? 🤨? Did we watch the same movie & see the same character? He’s far from that to like, infinity.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +75

      Thanks so much! Loved your comments. I agree that Hobie is caring. It comes through in his actions more than in what he says, so maybe that's why sometimes people don't see it.

    • @CrazyWeridoRH
      @CrazyWeridoRH Год назад +8

      What’s the drinking age in England because I thought Hobie was early 20’s or something.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +24

      @@CrazyWeridoRH It's 18 here.

    • @day7163
      @day7163 Год назад +11

      Honestly I thought Hobie's personality would get on my nerves. It didn't thankfully and he was developed as a character much more than, "authority=bad." I don't know if I necessarily like him though. Just wasn't grating.

    • @johnx140
      @johnx140 Год назад

      Am i the only perv with a dirty mind that assumed Gwen and Hobbie fucked? Goddamn., thats what you supposed when a girl leaves her thoothbrosh in a mans house.

  • @rowanistired5708
    @rowanistired5708 Год назад +44

    I really liked how he was a subversion of the “romantic rival” trope. During all the foreshadowing, you expected Hobie to be overly affectionate with Gwen and unnecessarily mean to Miles. But he wasn’t! He treated Gwen like a normal friend and even went out of his way to help Miles. He was set up to be a character you’re meant to hate by playing on cliches, but once he’s revealed, he’s just really cool and entertaining!

  • @arandomqueerfanpeep7655
    @arandomqueerfanpeep7655 Год назад +185

    I was a little nervous about Hobie, because he opened with jokes about punk stereotypes, and i was worried that was actually what the writers thought punk was
    Was very happy with him in the end, love him lots
    I should have had more trust

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +38

      I get that. It was an easy thing to overdo or get wrong. I'm so impressed with how they played it.

    • @hkr0065
      @hkr0065 Год назад +39

      That, and I think we (as an audience) are still not sure how to trust mainstream animated movies. For decades, we've been fed cliche after cliche, and platitudes after platitude. When *this* guy shows up, our gut reaction is to think, "okay, this is clearly just some attempt to sound smart," but it turns out that he's actually legit. The writers took a character that most mainstream animated (or hell, live-action) movies would have ruined, and they actually made him true to his convictions.
      Legitimately, Hobie Brown would be ashamed to realize he's the star of a comic book.
      Based on how cliche mainstream animated movies have been out here, it's no wonder we thought, "Oh shit. Here we go."

    • @Sandstimes
      @Sandstimes Год назад +17

      Fr, I love that they actually went all in and made him a Real punk. It's more than just an aesthetic or hating rules without purpose, people often mistake "punk" with not caring. Hobie is so refreshing because he Does care and that's exactly why he fights the establishment, he has purpose. the writers clearly did their research, maybe a few are punk themselves

  • @kags9367
    @kags9367 Год назад +620

    Great video! Hobie is the best. He was warning Miles from the very start not to fully trust Spider Society, helped him with breaking Miguel's barrier, gave Gwen a place to stay after she was homeless, told Miles the only reason he was still in Spider Society was because he was looking out for his drummer (i.e. Gwen), and after everything went to shit he left her a watch :'))
    Though I will say I don't think Miles necessarily wants to be liked by all of Spider Society, I feel like what he told Hobie, he mainly wants a watch so he can see his friends.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +64

      Thanks! That's a really good point. I agree, seeing his friends is the main driver for Miles. I feel like part of him wants to be accepted while Hobbie is trying to show him that it's more important he's true to himself.

  • @Beanhill_94
    @Beanhill_94 Год назад +199

    I agree with others. I was like I hate this man coming between Miles and Gwen. And then he became my favourite character when he tried his best to help miles.
    I would die for him.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +22

      What's interesting is that almost everyone doesn't want Hobie coming between Miles and Gwen. It's such a clever manoeuvre by the writers to position Hobie as the rival and then flip him to being a friend.

    • @foxywoxy1915
      @foxywoxy1915 Год назад +2

      @@simeonwritesLike your layers bit, they really have us make assumptions only to do a 180° and show us that we were wrong about the character, and that there’s more to it than just our original thought

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +2

      @@foxywoxy1915 Thank you! It's really clever of them to recognise and play with our assumptions like that.

  • @sherlock___holmes
    @sherlock___holmes Год назад +192

    when it comes to intellect, every spider is equally as intelligent as the next if not more intelligent, so logically hobie would be able to accomplish the same dimension warping technology with more or less equipment compared to miguel... i wonder if miguel has realised this? i feel like maybe hobie is a little bit smarter than miguel, not needing a streamlined workshop with perfect technology. plus, spiderpunk in his anti-establishment glory, realised that miles (and mayday to an extent) disprove the idea of canon events or anomalies and are in part utilising this to destabilise miguel's strict spider society

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +46

      Great comments. I think Miguel tends to underestimate the other spider people.

  • @redditStoriesHSP
    @redditStoriesHSP Год назад +580

    I started hating hobie the second he appeared, yet when the movie ended I loved him. Great character and great movie

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +35

      Absolutely 💯 %

    • @saulgoodmanKAZAKH
      @saulgoodmanKAZAKH Год назад +77

      When he was introducing himself and politicising everything that was funny. Loved him right from then

    • @niggardosenpai
      @niggardosenpai Год назад +49

      Chaotic Good characters are always PEAK. Just look at Luffy and Goku

    • @wajeehrizvi
      @wajeehrizvi Год назад +33

      I loved him as soon as i saw him

    • @SelenaY.1331
      @SelenaY.1331 Год назад +14

      Why?

  • @Doctor4077
    @Doctor4077 Год назад +34

    "Hobie you're not helping." *"GOOD"*
    "Just for the record, I quit."
    Greatest Hobie moments right there.

  • @Carlton17277
    @Carlton17277 Год назад +87

    Hobie is like my top 5 favourite characters in this movie.
    When I first heard of him coming into the movie. I was like they are going to do another love triangle which would’ve made the movie a bit flawed. But I’m glad they didn’t and instead made him a brother type character to Miles and a genuine friend to Gwen.
    I like how he told miles use ur palms not just ur fingers and how to use his venom blast when he meets him. which helped Miles later on escape. And how he gives him respect and hyping him up for saving inspector Singh and the little girl.
    Hobie calling Gwen (Gwendy) and Miles (Peter Pan) just makes me laugh because he knows they love each other. And I like how he tends to make
    Miles jealous on the missions she has been on with him and leaving stuff at his place. Just to see if he indeed likes her which he does ofc.
    Him designing his own watch for Gwen while having a conversation with miles in Nueva York and giving advice to him that “ The whole point of being Spider-Man is ur independence and being ur own boss” which is amazing because that’s what miles does at the end by saying “I’m going to do my own thing.” Honestly, his a brother/friend we all want having ur back and giving advice that will help u later on when u need it the most.
    But also him helping gwen by designing a watch to go visit miles because he knows how miles would feel about her at the end. Just shows how much he cares about their relationship and how much he wants her to patch things up with miles.
    I’m done. What an amazing character with so much depth and layers.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +9

      Completely agree! You summed it up really well. 👌

    • @davidcheater4239
      @davidcheater4239 Год назад +8

      I completely disagree with what happened with the watch.
      It doesn't make sense that after throwing the Spider Society watch back at them when he quit that he would then build a watch for Gwen, dropping by her universe then... how would he get back to his own universe if he left the only outside watch with Gwen's father?
      I think he dropped off the watch for Gwen weeks or even months before. I think he's figured out the technology and is building a lot of watches - at least enough for Gwen to form a team of 8 or 9 Spiders + Miles.
      I think he's been planning, infiltrating, and undermining Miguel's operation for a long time.

    • @Carlton17277
      @Carlton17277 Год назад +4

      @@davidcheater4239 yeah, I think u bring good points about the watch. But remember everyone still has Miguel’s watch and he doesn’t know that many have joined Gwen’s band and we do see hobie picking up pieces while miles conversation with him. I do think he hates Miguel’s canon event theory and knew Gwen was going to be a liability with her feelings for miles. So I wouldn’t be surprised if he plan this from the start. And maybe he designed his own watch during his time in the spider society.

  • @gardenshed6043
    @gardenshed6043 Год назад +69

    For me I also feel like there may have been a little personal bias because I’m from London. My friends and I speak like Hobie and we have similar senses of humour. He feels much more like a friend I might have IRL than the other Spider-Man. I think that might also be why I liked Pavitr. I have many more Indian friends than I do American friends. And since a lot of the spider people were American. Maybe that’s why I gravitated towards the English and Indian spidermen. Since I live in England and have a lot of English and Indian friends.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +16

      It's great to hear Hobie feels like a friend you could have IRL. I'd say that means the writers did a great job.

    • @gardenshed6043
      @gardenshed6043 Год назад +10

      @@simeonwrites Yeah. But also personal bias due to geography. And you’ve gotta give props to the writers of Pavitr as well.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +9

      @@gardenshed6043 absolutely!

  • @Blio_
    @Blio_ Год назад +97

    I think he has a specific appeal to people on the left. Even if we aren’t exactly the *same* type of progressive we all know people like him, youthful and firey in the fight against authority. I found it kind of endearing.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +26

      You're right. His passion and strong ideals are endearing. I'd be interested to know if there's a left/right split on Hobie.

    • @reubenax
      @reubenax Год назад +19

      ​@@simeonwritesNo split everyone loves him

    • @Monki-6969
      @Monki-6969 Год назад +13

      @@reubenax He es an anarquist of course everyone who believes in liberty loves him :)

    • @ObeyLucifer
      @ObeyLucifer Год назад +22

      NO LITERALLY. Me and fellow leftists LOVE him on a small community channel here on youtube that posts lefist content everyday. It's awesome.

    • @marcusosborne6123
      @marcusosborne6123 Год назад +29

      “It’s a metaphor for capitalism.”
      If Hobie didn’t immediately become your favorite Spider-Man after that line, you’re a self-mythologizing, narcissistic autocrat

  • @Campedavey
    @Campedavey Год назад +7

    Hobie not being a love interest for Gwen was the right move for sure. He also guided both her and Miles, telling her that she may not have told miles enough about his place in all of this. He never shamed or scolded her outright but he was always looking out for Miles too.

  • @evansbaguette
    @evansbaguette Год назад +146

    I’m such a huge Hobie fan I love how they made him! But this is such a good video! This needs more views

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +5

      Thank you! I'm already really pleased with how it's done and that people are enjoying it. :)

  • @SnagTheRabbit
    @SnagTheRabbit Год назад +28

    I was worried Hobie would be a cliche dickhead love rival, but I was so shocked by how likeable he was. For once a character that others say is cool, and actually ends up being cool. Hobie's awesome.

  • @Trashley652
    @Trashley652 Год назад +5

    I also love that Hobie doesn't just embody the aesthetics of punk, like we often see, but also the ideals. He's got the substance as well as the style, and we see him back that up with his actions, and it's shown as being real and helpful, rather than silly and childish

  • @chelseawhite7117
    @chelseawhite7117 Год назад +8

    The fact that Hobie can just be that freaking smart and not feel the need to say anything about it is such a … well, it’s a smart move

  • @rottensquid
    @rottensquid Год назад +18

    I think a lot of these can be summed up more simply: The archetype foundation you started with, in every instance, is contradicted in the character's introduction, and often throughout their story. Han Solo may be a thief with a heart of gold, but the contradiction is built into that archetype. We don't know whether Han is going to transcend his self-interest until the very end of the film Star Wars (sorry, I'm too old to call it "A New Hope"). I mean, we do, because it's obviously telegraphed, but the point of the story is to watch it play out, not to keep the audience guessing. His act 3 turn is implied by his introduction as a disinterested mercenary. We know better than to take characters at their word. It's always actions that tell the real story. Characters like Obi-Wan and Merlin, similarly, are typically introduced as strange hermits, even fools. Yoda is a perfect example, his comical appearance and behavior hiding the deep well of powerful wisdom within.
    Hobie, similarly, is introduced as the Spider-Man who doesn't follow rules or care about responsibility. In fact, he seems not to care about anyone or anything beyond looking cool and listing everything he hates. Initially, he seems like he's in it for the LOLs. And when he bails on the whole mess when Miles and Miguel end up at odds, this impression is confirmed. He seems too "cool" to take sides. As a guy who grew up in northern California in the 80s, I knew way too many "punks" like this. I still do.
    But as the story plays out, he contradicts that initial impression by proving himself not a nihilist, but a rebel, secretly working against Miguel's oppressive system. Hobie's "punk" attitude isn't rebelling against society, it's rebelling against mindless rule-following. And as with Han Solo, we can see this coming a mile away, because we know not to take characters at face value. When Hobie bails, we can guess we haven't seen the last of him. And when we're proven right, that creates a strong bond with the character.
    I think this is the key to making a character like Hobie lovable. Though his true nature is telegraphed from the beginning, just the act of seeing through the initial presentation involves the audience in the storytelling, rather than forcing us to sit back and watch passively, without drawing our own conclusions. This simple contradiction is the source of the character's layers. We're delighted to see Hobie bond with Mayday. It doesn't really surprise us anymore than his ultimate betrayal of Miguel surprises us. The contradiction is the obvious subtext to the text of his seeming indifference. And that same dynamic is the source of his humor. It's funny to see mister too-cool-for-school bond with a baby. But it deepens his character, because his connection to her as a born rebel is both hilarious and a meaningful observation about the nature of childhood. We're not born rule-followers. It comes from our desire to explore and question authority being stripped out of us. It's funny and poignant.
    So I think a simple formula for creating a lovable character is introducing that contradiction, and finding the character's unity within it. Your character is a bad-ass intergalactic gunslinging bounty-hunter? Give him a baby to look after, and profound bond with it. A midwestern creampuff football coach? Reveal his positivity as an unbreakable force of will, winning over a team of surly, angry, stubborn british footballers. A pretty, lonely teenage orphan girl? Make her the most deadly chess player in the world. The contradiction between what they seem and what they are sets up everything you need to win over audiences.

  • @Fayanora
    @Fayanora Год назад +13

    I hate the implication that caring about other people isn't inherently a very punk thing to do. Honestly there's nothing more punk than caring about other people.

  • @aspiring.creative.person6092
    @aspiring.creative.person6092 Год назад +15

    Hobie’s first appearance I got scared that they would make him so one dimensional just cause of how he introduced himself. So glad I was proven wrong lol.

  • @michellegiacalone1079
    @michellegiacalone1079 Год назад +35

    Excellent writing advice!
    Hobie was my 'type'- the over-smart sarcastic observer type.

  • @mochiattoart514
    @mochiattoart514 Год назад +8

    I instantly fell for how cool he was! He talks like me except I say those things ironically. That instantly made me relate to him.

  • @MK-zl1kc
    @MK-zl1kc Год назад +6

    Oh i loved hobie, because i remember reading his comics few years ago and they were so CHAOTIC

  • @packman2321
    @packman2321 Год назад +17

    If I was going to suggest a break down for making a character cool I'd say, find a style repertoire (clothing, language, behaviour etc) that has values matched by your audience, exaggerate some parts of its aesthetics, and don't let the audience see the work that goes in to preparing it. So with Hobie, he's presented using signifers pulled from a punk aesthetic, which has a history as an anti-authority, activist and art movement, and co-opts signifiers of military and police violence to satirise them (as well as combining them with music and behaviour linked to those values). The audience the film is aiming for is already expected to be somewhat anti-authority (because the point of the movie is Miles standing up against a major one, so any authoritarian lens is going to struggle to engage with the plot) so you make sure the elements of the character design match that value, so it'll be positively received by the audience.
    Then to make it cooler, you just don't show the audience the character having to try. When we follow Miles or Gwen, we see them struggle and compose their identities (the shoulder touch from the first movie being a good example). This lets us see their awkward uncool elements, and undermines their cooler ones. For Hobie we just exclude that, making his awesome parts, appear as natural and simple and making his aspirational (he embodies a value the audience wants and he doesn't seem to have to try to get it, thus cool).
    A similar trick works with beauty in films. Directors often hide the effort that characters that are supposed to be seen as attractive put in to things like fashion, make up, self-presentation, while when we want a character to seem relateable or awkward, we simply show that hard work. The more work you show, the less natural the performance seems and the more opportunity a character has to trip over themselves or show a crack in their unified presentation.

  • @diamond9030
    @diamond9030 Год назад +22

    I thought I was gonna hate Hobie, but he ended up being my favorite character

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      I get that! Although, there are so many great characters in that film, I find it hard to pick a favourite.

  • @pizzastolfo856
    @pizzastolfo856 Год назад +5

    He's a realistic and interesting portrayal of the Chaotic Good alignment

  • @mc_ocelot3577
    @mc_ocelot3577 Год назад +5

    I feel like another thing that immediately makes the audience perceive Hobie as 'cool' is that he is introduced as being immediately able to do something that Miles can't/struggles to. Hobie enters while Miles is struggling to break the laser-wall with his electric powers, and does it without breaking a sweat. This also works because the audience is given the impression that Hobie is better than Miles because he is more experienced, rather than just by virtue of being himself (characters being skilled by virtue of being themselves and no other reason is something that is common in modern media and drives people crazy). Hobie being more competent than Miles is also set up by his earlier mentions, as him being known by Gwen and Pav establishes him as a member of the Spider Society, and obviously someone competent enough to be part of the society. Which at this point in the movie, explicitly means he must be better than - and thus cooler than - Miles.

  • @soupryu
    @soupryu Год назад +65

    I feel like this video will blow up. Maybe not now, but definitely soon, and I'm all here for it. Keep up your grind.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +5

      Thanks so much! I'll definitely do more like this.

  • @mackielunkey2205
    @mackielunkey2205 Год назад +7

    I wished more people talked about how the original Hobie started off as a total loser with a lot of talent who beats himself up too much, and the alternate version of himself is a person who has a strong sense of who he is and doesn’t feel sorry for himself.

  • @hoop6822
    @hoop6822 Год назад +4

    Another technique I’d highlight to specifically make one character cooler than another is by giving the cooler character a certain “idealistic” quality, not as in perfectly exemplifying that quality necessarily. Just a more favourable quality than the opposite.
    Such as how Hobie doesn’t care what people think about him whereas Miles is quite concerned about that. Because not caring about what people think about you is something everyone is told but isn’t necessarily good at Hobie being good at this in contrast to Miles makes him cooler.

  • @isengarde9490
    @isengarde9490 Год назад +3

    1:03 b r u h Sword in The Stone-
    That is a memory I just unlocked.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      Glad you unlocked it. It's really underrated.

  • @crispy0799
    @crispy0799 Год назад +10

    When i first saw this movie i thought: "huh he's normally the prowler in the comics and in other universes he's spiderpunk" so i'd love to see what they're gonna do with him. This guy ended up being a FUCKING CHAD! 👍🔥

  • @rinco1532
    @rinco1532 Год назад +5

    the thing that makes hobie even cooler for me is that he doesn't start the love triangle bs
    thank the gods for that

  • @phantasmicphantasies
    @phantasmicphantasies Год назад +1

    ‘rival for gwens affection’ had me rolling on the floor laughing

  • @LouisAndFriendss
    @LouisAndFriendss Год назад +2

    I loved how Hobie was written, how he was drawn/animated, and the way he interacted with the other characters. (Specifically Miles.) He helped Miles the whole time, gave him advice, but didn't treat him like a kid like the others did. He let Miles make his own decisions while helping along the way. (Giving the palm advice, recommending to make his own watch, helping him out of the cage, and leaving/quitting as soon as the chase began in order to make a watch.)
    Bonus for the accurate desc of 'Punk.' Not making him a jerk, or making him against rules for no reason. Bonus bonus for his amazing comedy!!

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      Completely agree! Thanks for watching and for the great comments.

  • @andrealiee
    @andrealiee Год назад +19

    will keep this in mind!! i am working on a screenplay and want to make characters both believable and enjoyable. thanks so much

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      I'm really glad it was helpful! Thanks for watching, and good luck with the screenplay.

  • @Sootielove
    @Sootielove Год назад +5

    I love how Hobie uses the audience's familiarity with bad punk characters to turn the story on our heads. We see Hobie, he's making jokes about everything being capitalism, not being a team player, not being consistent, etc. and we think we know the stereotypical straw punk from all media. And then they show his support of Miles, encouraging him to stand on his own feet and go against the grain, and his intelligence in weaponising people's perceptions of him in-universe to get away with stealing technology to make his own bands! Hobie doesn't even have that much screentime but he's subversive and honestly one of the most pure-hearted characters in this film. Kindness is core to punk and finally we see it on-screen

  • @sakareeh
    @sakareeh Год назад +12

    Yalll I thought they were gonna make a dumbass love triangle and I was gonna get annoyed. Ended up loving hobie. Also subscribed

  • @jeritheweirdchild
    @jeritheweirdchild Год назад +1

    In the romatic silly swing in Miles' dimension with Gwen, she literally says: "Hobie? oh my gosh you would love him" to Miles when she mentioned about him. You coule tell for a moment he felt a bit insecure, a dude letting his crush crash in his own dimension and hanging out more than Him, who sounds so much cooler, and he didn't even know what reason it was for too. He meets Hobie, gets the jealousy a bit but you can tell Miles understands why everyone thinks hes cool. An interestinc character with this guard of q cool and independent self image.

  • @leoottaway138
    @leoottaway138 Год назад +7

    Great video! I genuinely didn't realise this was from a smaller channel until after i watched the video and went to the comments.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      Thanks! I tried something new with this one. I'll definitely do more like this.

  • @cosmicspacething3474
    @cosmicspacething3474 Год назад +7

    I just like the over the top Anarchism in almost every aspect of his personality

  • @marcopohl4875
    @marcopohl4875 Год назад +1

    "You're not helping" "Good"

  • @okewittat
    @okewittat Год назад +3

    I LOVED HOBIE FROM THE MOMENT HE APPEARED ON SCREENNN

  • @madds5281
    @madds5281 Год назад +1

    At first I thought Hobbie was all talk no action, that he would point out criticisms but not actually do anything about it. So I was impressed to learn that he believes his punk philosophy to his core and will truly break any hierarchy no matter how potentially dangerous. But what makes him great is that his anarchy is calculated to help ppl. He’s in Nuevo York to be there for Gwen and he’s the first one to be on Miles’ side.
    There’s few things more satisfying then a kind character who sticks to his principles.

  • @lanaloveschocolate
    @lanaloveschocolate Год назад +6

    This video is really good! I hope the algorithm gods pick it up!

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +3

      Thank you! That would be awesome. Really I'm just glad people are enjoying it.

  • @silbury2325
    @silbury2325 Год назад +1

    It's a really cool experience to have my own process illuminated. I always start with a core idea identity that I add layers to and kitbash tropes and archetypes until I have an organic feeling character.

  • @Protofall
    @Protofall Год назад +13

    I'm now realising I somehow missed so much during my viewing of the movie, even just for Hobes alone
    - I missed all the foreshadowing and mentioning of Hobe before his reveal
    - I missed his name, although I hear they later made a revision to the film where comic text of "Hobes?" appears on screen when Miles says that
    - I completely missed the fact Miles was jealous of him, I interpretted it as confusion in places and admiration
    - Didn't hear any of the "I don't like Comedy" joke
    - I missed 90% of what he said because of that accent and the film's audio mixing XD
    I was paying attention during the film, but I guess I was distracted with everything else going on.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      There was a lot going on to be fair. It's well worth a second watch. Thanks for commenting!

    • @willow_2312
      @willow_2312 Год назад +5

      Not your fault homie the sound mixing was super weird for this movie, I was only able to catch about 3/4 of the dialogue clearly

    • @hope3290
      @hope3290 Год назад

      @@willow_2312 For real. One of the employees in my theater came in during the previews to apologize about how loud it was and tell us it was the volume suggested by Marvel.

  • @MegaMGstudios
    @MegaMGstudios Год назад +1

    What I really like is that he is forshadowed as a rival for Miles, but when the entire spider society turned their back on him (even his old friends), Hobie is the one who helps him by telling him how to escape.

  • @tatianalangerholz6280
    @tatianalangerholz6280 Год назад +4

    Wow enjoyed the video, I was really captured by Hobie when I first saw him and agree with a lot of ur points!💕

  • @Joy-zz8wz
    @Joy-zz8wz Год назад +2

    "cool punk rebel anarchist" is the trope that hobbi is

  • @RohanTatlow
    @RohanTatlow Год назад +2

    This video is so helpful because I want to be a writer. Thank you so much!

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      I'm so glad it helped! Good luck with your writing.

  • @kittysunrise313
    @kittysunrise313 Год назад +1

    Been considering getting a spider punk tattoo since I seen this move 🤟🏾🤟🏾

  • @damianstarks3338
    @damianstarks3338 Год назад +6

    Yes yes and yes Hobie Brown aka Spider Punk is officially my new favorite Spider Man amazing analysis/breakdown by the way !

  • @Tuntor689
    @Tuntor689 Год назад +1

    I did not like him at first, but he definitely grew on me.

  • @randon_dude_on_yt350
    @randon_dude_on_yt350 Год назад +1

    Thanks for the information, Simeon! I will note these tips for the characters in my novel that I am writing, and will definitely credit you in my acknowledgements.

  • @natalya402
    @natalya402 Год назад +1

    Another thing that makes him likeable is that because he is honest to Miles and helps him use his powers better, he is capitalizing off of Miles likeability and our natural tendency to root for the hero of the story. Miles is a great protagonist anyway, and seeing characters talk down to him, lie to him, or try to stop him from doing what he sees is right makes them less likeable to the audience. This causes Hobie's support and honesty to stand out way more.

  • @Czech-we5zk
    @Czech-we5zk Год назад +2

    you are so underrated you have at least 51K man just keep making videos I’m sure it’s going to come to you sooner or later❤

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      Thanks, man. I'm already planning my next one in this little series.

  • @AlternatedYt
    @AlternatedYt Год назад +1

    He turns pink when touching or near miles because it's like showing their bond or love even tho they just met they like homies

  • @alericia
    @alericia Год назад +1

    Nice analysis and great video :D

  • @Entropy1318
    @Entropy1318 Год назад +2

    Underrated Video, underrated channel. Glad I got this recommended regardless.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      Thanks! I'm still fairly new to this, but I'm working on my content like this video.

    • @Entropy1318
      @Entropy1318 Год назад +2

      @@simeonwrites Ay, good luck making it big, your quality surely deserves it.

  • @amberrichards2778
    @amberrichards2778 Год назад +1

    Good video, 9/10, room for improvement, would watch again

  • @foxywoxy1915
    @foxywoxy1915 Год назад

    Absolutely love this video. Glad I stumbled across it. Great for references for writing

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      I'm so glad it was helpful! Good luck with your writing.

    • @foxywoxy1915
      @foxywoxy1915 Год назад

      @@simeonwrites Thanks! Looking forward to watching the rest of your videos!

  • @employee472
    @employee472 Год назад

    I also think another thing to add is that he wasn't given an unjust amount of power from the start. A lot of times bad writers try to make a character important by almost forcing them to have an important role the story, but hobie's inclusion in the group felt pretty natural but naturally ramped up as he ended up playing an important role using the personality traits we've seen AFTER he was introduced.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      That's a great point. Trying to make a character popular that way may well have the opposite effect.

  • @lukestarkiller1470
    @lukestarkiller1470 Год назад +1

    I didn’t think I would like Hobie as much as I did, I thought his whole punk personality would get old really fast but he was written so well he became probably my favorite character in the movie

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      Quite a few people have said they had that reaction to him. It shows how easily things could have gone wrong if the writing hadn't been on point. Thanks for watching!

    • @lukestarkiller1470
      @lukestarkiller1470 Год назад +1

      @@simeonwrites it definitely could have gone wrong, but yeah man it was a great video

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      @@lukestarkiller1470 thanks!

    • @lukestarkiller1470
      @lukestarkiller1470 Год назад +1

      @@simeonwrites yeah you’re welcome

  • @BingBangPoe
    @BingBangPoe Год назад

    I think this entire film, much like Into the Spider-Verse, is an absolute masterpiece. Every single character is so exceptionally well written and serves a purpose. Hobie Brown was arguably one of the spotlights because of how he stuck out like a sore thumb, with his rebelious, anarchistic attitude that is reflect in every single aspect of him, down to his design and everchanging animation. Truly the team behind this film went above and beyond with the imagery. It easily became my favorite Spiderman film _ever._ I can't wait for the third film.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +1

      Yeah, I feel the same way. The writers knocked these films out of the park!

  • @1stAid
    @1stAid Год назад +2

    Seeing the thumbnail and title was kinda funny for me, since I didn't especially find Hobie likeable

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      That's cool. Thanks for checking it out anyway!

  • @Not.Creative
    @Not.Creative 5 месяцев назад

    I also really like how Hobie clearly has a dark past. Canonically his dimension is a dystopian type and is super dangerous. And when Miles finds out that other spidermen have lost people too, and it’s a cannon event, he looks at Hobie and we can see for only a split second, he seems spaced out before realizing that people are looking at him. Just makes his character better in my opinion 🤷‍♀️

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  5 месяцев назад

      That's a great observation!

  • @PalpitoadLover
    @PalpitoadLover Год назад +1

    This was a good video, thank you simon

  • @ALIEN-DUDE
    @ALIEN-DUDE Год назад

    What i love is that hes like uncle Aaron if he because spider man instead of the prowler, they both are named after the prowlers civilian identity, both tech geniuses, both extremely creative with art and finally they both support miles.

  • @HopefulMathGirl
    @HopefulMathGirl Год назад

    I actually like this video very much. Appreciate your creativity, knowledge and presentation.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for the great feedback.

    • @HopefulMathGirl
      @HopefulMathGirl Год назад

      @@simeonwrites You're welcome :)

  • @KarateGirl999
    @KarateGirl999 11 месяцев назад +1

    From day one, I knew that rumor floating around that Hobie was gonna get between Miles and Gwen was pure, 100%, unadulterated bullshit. He's not some man-slut who wants to stir up jealousy, cause unneeded drama, and try to steal Miles's girl. He's HOMIE BROWN. Lovable punks are among my top three favorite character archetypes. It's truly amazing that Hobie only has about seven minutes of screen time, yet he does so much and has unforgettable lines. So because of that, he doesn't feel underutilized.

  • @shimerrill967
    @shimerrill967 Год назад +2

    i want More Spider Punk in the next movie !
    💙 i love him ❤️

  • @ZeekarPRIME
    @ZeekarPRIME Год назад +2

    Slight critique, it's perfectly acceptable to use cam footage when nothing else is available (and most importantly it's free), but when you're attempting to show off quotes or clips of characters saying things you should really add subtitles to the screen, for people who don't have the best ears it's really difficult to understand what's being said
    Again, just for quotes and clips. Your voice is very clear. And overall the video is great, easy to follow along to, which is why not being able to tell precisely what's going on in the clips stand out that much more

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      Hey, thanks for the feedback! That's a really good point. I'll make sure to do that for the next one I make.

  • @4novey
    @4novey Год назад +5

    step 1: make him fine asf

  • @rainbowcloudss_
    @rainbowcloudss_ Год назад +1

    "make your own watch" *makes his own watch* i didnt even realize that wtf

  • @s0ne01
    @s0ne01 Год назад

    His accent is what made me love him instantly

  • @batmanvsjoker7725
    @batmanvsjoker7725 Год назад

    The fact that he's voiced by the dude from Get Out is the cherry on top

    • @RandomSkyeRoses
      @RandomSkyeRoses Год назад +1

      He also played a character in Black Panther (2018)

  • @alexielouisl.8462
    @alexielouisl.8462 Год назад +2

    i don't agree to the rivalry with miles thing, i rather saw that miles is impressed by hobie, consider miles as an outcast, he was told he wasn't "supposed" to be spiderman and he has powers other spiderfolk do not, the thing of him is to be his own person, his own spiderman in spite of the expectations put on him. None of those he frequented had bioelectric powers. And then out of nowhere entered Hobie outright executing the thing Miles did and thought only *he* could do, then telling Miles the trick to those powers, "use your full hand, not just the fingertips". The payoff later when Miles is captured by Miguel and Miles turns to Hobie, he reminds him of the trick and it allows him to escape. In those scenes, and the movie in general, Miles looked up to Hobie, and he acts i think like a sort of mentor*, helping Miles achieve his best self. I say mentor with an asterisk because he doesn't truly teach him, but he pushes him to do what hes best at and fight for his ideals. he's inspiring him but not truly teaching him.
    I also think the relation between Gwen and Hobie isn't meant to be regarded as love, they're just friends, but the way Gwen said it made it sound like that indirectly, its mega clear she has a crush on Miles and not Hobie.

  • @amycox5733
    @amycox5733 Год назад +6

    Love Hobie Brown, love this video!

  • @QueenGreenflame
    @QueenGreenflame Год назад +3

    To this day...
    I still have no idea what he's saying half the time 💃

  • @egg-queen3574
    @egg-queen3574 Год назад +8

    About making someone “cool”, I think someone another perceived as ‘cool’ demonstrates the traits and personality others wish they had.
    For Hobie, he’s confident, smart, he’s ‘woke’, good-hearted, and sure of himself. He does whatever he wants without worrying about what people think of him.
    Those are traits that I believe most people think of when they think about self-improvement.

    • @hollowwoods7130
      @hollowwoods7130 Год назад

      Found the guy who calls black people on the street woke for existing 💀

  • @ZephyrBW
    @ZephyrBW Год назад +2

    He’s also like the big bro for miles and really had his back the whole time like doesn’t even bat an eye when miles wants to do the right thing. I think hobby is the only one who’s really stopped and think does Miguel actually know what he’s doing or is he just playing god?

  • @bucky5634
    @bucky5634 Год назад +1

    he annoyed me at first but then he quickly became likeable, on the second watch he was cool the whole way through

  • @gardenshed6043
    @gardenshed6043 Год назад +2

    Hawks is a character who I feel like fits these criteria quite well.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      I haven't seen My Hero Academia, but I'll have to check it out!

    • @gardenshed6043
      @gardenshed6043 Год назад +1

      @@simeonwrites Honestly, it started off great but I’m not a big fan of where the manga has gone. Like it’s gone from S down to B in terms of quality for me. The spin off, Vigilantes is S all the way. If you are gonna get into any of them, read that.

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      @@gardenshed6043 Good to know, thanks!

  • @willow_2312
    @willow_2312 Год назад +2

    Spider-punk was always the best spidey and that's not changing any time soon

  • @Sabrinaaa36
    @Sabrinaaa36 Год назад +2

    i loved hobie since he took the mask off!!

  • @jasperion8655
    @jasperion8655 Год назад +2

    Me when I first saw Hobie:
    This guy kinda sucks
    Me by the end of the movie:
    This guy kinda rocks

  • @evildestroyer6129
    @evildestroyer6129 Год назад +1

    I thought that he was going to be some goofy ahh character that Miles would have a sort of rivalry with, thank god I was proven wrong

  • @arturofletcher
    @arturofletcher Год назад +1

    Great video, man. Succinct and entertaining. You should do more character study videos with other movies. Anakin for example. Darth Vader is one of the best ans most iconic villains ever written. Keep it up ;)

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад +2

      Thank you! I'd definitely like to try other characters and films (Star Wars would be great). I've got a couple more Spider-Verse ones I want to make, and then I'll try something new.

    • @arturofletcher
      @arturofletcher Год назад

      @@simeonwrites Oh, great. Looking forward to your next spider-verse video

    • @simeonwrites
      @simeonwrites  Год назад

      @@arturofletcher thanks!

  • @Bubble_Nugget
    @Bubble_Nugget Год назад +2

    When I first heard about him I disliked him, I thought he would be some random strange guy Miles would be jealous of, then he turned out to be super cool

  • @lefay7637
    @lefay7637 Год назад +1

    I hate how well I could understand him, despite his thick accent

  • @skycreeper0173
    @skycreeper0173 Год назад

    Awesome analysis video. I really enjoyed it.

  • @Doctor-mc9zh
    @Doctor-mc9zh Год назад +3

    good video. enjoyed.