I agree with everything RootNegativeSixteen said, but I probably enjoyed this a little more than she did! You've certainly got the potential to become a great pooper, just try making more original ideas and think up more creative things to make out of Michael. I didn't mind the ear rape so much in this one because I did find effects alongside them a slightly funny combination, but yes - you should rather avoid ear rape and keep it to a minimum. Overall I'd say follow RootNegativeSixteen's advice and come up with some more of those wacky jokes! Subscribed.
Thanks, I tried to be different by making it half story half typical ytp ear rape, effects etc, i'll take your word for it, I was going to do sentence mixing with the 2012 rosen vids in this video but i don't have the poems written down so i couldn't -_-
That... wow. I'm having a tough time figuring out what to say to this. ;-_- Here comes a really long comment. On one hand, it definitely looks like you're skilled with Vegas. There was some good sentence mixing, and you were using a wide variety of effects. (I personally can't stand ear rape though; I highly suggest avoiding it. It gets annoying really fast.) On the other hand, I had to watch this poop 4 times in order to figure out what was going on, and the fourth time I had to close my eyes because the visual jokes were way too distracting. Not that there's anything wrong with visual jokes, but they were done in such a way that I couldn't pay attention to the story. For example, I'm trying to imagine the fridge door scene. First two times watching it, I get distracted by the huge screen-covering visual effect and miss the line entirely. Third time watching it I think she's getting stuffed in the fridge. Fourth time I finally figure out that she slammed the fridge door on someone's penis. If that visual effect wasn't there I'd have figured that out a lot quicker. Similarly the unfitting music and visual effect during the knife scene caught me off guard and I missed that part too. I think what you did here was try to fit in way too much material into a short time. I've never had to think about this before let alone tell anyone this, but you shouldn't be making more than one joke at once. I should have been paying attention to the sentence mixing but instead I was still processing all the weird visual jokes, and I ended up not understanding a thing that was going on. It was a lot easier to understand your first poop because you didn't try doing more than one joke at once. Finally, my impression of the poop with my eyes closed. It started out pretty good, what with the sudden fridge door slamming and snorting pizza, but then it just ended in a generic Michael Rosen murder. I've seen WAY too many poops in which Michael kills someone (especially in the "this'll pay him back" manner), so that scene felt really unoriginal. The Boba Fett parts sounded intriguing at first (though the sentence mixing on his name was a little choppy), but the clip with his voice took a bit too long and I got bored (ironically, THAT'd have been the time for a visual effect since it didn't really matter what he said). All in all, this poop's biggest drawback was that what you were seeing rarely had anything to do with what you were hearing, and it ended up being way too much to take in and felt like a big incomprehensible mess. You have the right idea on a lot of things, but you tried to fit too much into to little a time. That's not advice to make your poops longer, BTW, this was actually a good length for a YTP, but trying to make two or three jokes at the same time really made this poop hard to understand. Alright, sorry for rambling on too much. My mind might have crashed a bit since I'm used to new poopers not including enough material. :P Hope all this helped, and sorry I couldn't say it in fewer words.
Thanks for your input I read it all btw! I was going to just go with just the sentence mixing and minimal effects, but I thought of a disturbing theme that was funny to me then I got carried away. e.g. Him murdering the teacher with the happy pokemon music in the background and the transparent red "flash forward" of him supposedly eating the teacher. When I look back I do see the distractions but when you're making the poop yourself you don't see it. The Boba Fett part was very hard to do and couldn't find the perfect bits (Bob A fe tt). T_T The original thing I thought I made was the hypnotize, I lot of people do spooky sound effects, but I tried to shock the audience by adding a weird thing from Family Guy that I found funny, but I guess it's only funny unless you've seen the episode :P I'll be making a sequel where he does things and it's basically just going to be lots of crazy effects, then after that i'll think of something original, no ear rape I promise :3
So you basically just said that your next poop is going to be like this one. >_< Listen, if you're going to be doing "lots of crazy effects", Michael can't be "doing things". That was my main problem with this poop. Either you do a story with not many effects, or you do a poop that's JUST effects, not both. Here's why: the crazy effects we're not supposed to understand, so when you make some random jokes that form a story in between the effects, we won't be paying attention and we'll miss all the jokes. That's exactly what happened here. And even so, doing a poop with just effects is pretty hard, there are only a couple of people I've seen do it right. Check out the "The Michaels Gone Mad" videos by TheLastMovieMaker (i.e. GL1TCH) or anything by Butcher and you'll know what I mean. I've tried doing that kind of poop before and it's a lot harder than it looks. It requires a lot of cutting up clips to less than a frame and making them stutter a lot; it's a lot of work. If you can pull it off that'd be great, but don't try making Michael "do things" at the same time.
RootNegativeSixteen I was just going to have all of the speechless Rosen parts, you know the funny ones where he's moving about with a silly face with effects and music, but now that i think about it yeah you're right, i'm panning far from the story, don't worry i'll think of something :3
![[YTP] Michael and the haunted granny - Halloween Special](http://i.ytimg.com/vi/X0N1mOD4Ggw/mqdefault.jpg)
![[YTP] Michael and the haunted granny - Halloween Special](/img/tr.png)
I agree with everything RootNegativeSixteen said, but I probably enjoyed this a little more than she did! You've certainly got the potential to become a great pooper, just try making more original ideas and think up more creative things to make out of Michael. I didn't mind the ear rape so much in this one because I did find effects alongside them a slightly funny combination, but yes - you should rather avoid ear rape and keep it to a minimum. Overall I'd say follow RootNegativeSixteen's advice and come up with some more of those wacky jokes! Subscribed.
Thanks, I tried to be different by making it half story half typical ytp ear rape, effects etc, i'll take your word for it, I was going to do sentence mixing with the 2012 rosen vids in this video but i don't have the poems written down so i couldn't -_-
aka murder with unfitting Pokemon music, kinda cool
noice
That... wow. I'm having a tough time figuring out what to say to this. ;-_- Here comes a really long comment.
On one hand, it definitely looks like you're skilled with Vegas. There was some good sentence mixing, and you were using a wide variety of effects. (I personally can't stand ear rape though; I highly suggest avoiding it. It gets annoying really fast.)
On the other hand, I had to watch this poop 4 times in order to figure out what was going on, and the fourth time I had to close my eyes because the visual jokes were way too distracting. Not that there's anything wrong with visual jokes, but they were done in such a way that I couldn't pay attention to the story. For example, I'm trying to imagine the fridge door scene. First two times watching it, I get distracted by the huge screen-covering visual effect and miss the line entirely. Third time watching it I think she's getting stuffed in the fridge. Fourth time I finally figure out that she slammed the fridge door on someone's penis. If that visual effect wasn't there I'd have figured that out a lot quicker. Similarly the unfitting music and visual effect during the knife scene caught me off guard and I missed that part too.
I think what you did here was try to fit in way too much material into a short time. I've never had to think about this before let alone tell anyone this, but you shouldn't be making more than one joke at once. I should have been paying attention to the sentence mixing but instead I was still processing all the weird visual jokes, and I ended up not understanding a thing that was going on. It was a lot easier to understand your first poop because you didn't try doing more than one joke at once.
Finally, my impression of the poop with my eyes closed. It started out pretty good, what with the sudden fridge door slamming and snorting pizza, but then it just ended in a generic Michael Rosen murder. I've seen WAY too many poops in which Michael kills someone (especially in the "this'll pay him back" manner), so that scene felt really unoriginal. The Boba Fett parts sounded intriguing at first (though the sentence mixing on his name was a little choppy), but the clip with his voice took a bit too long and I got bored (ironically, THAT'd have been the time for a visual effect since it didn't really matter what he said).
All in all, this poop's biggest drawback was that what you were seeing rarely had anything to do with what you were hearing, and it ended up being way too much to take in and felt like a big incomprehensible mess. You have the right idea on a lot of things, but you tried to fit too much into to little a time. That's not advice to make your poops longer, BTW, this was actually a good length for a YTP, but trying to make two or three jokes at the same time really made this poop hard to understand.
Alright, sorry for rambling on too much. My mind might have crashed a bit since I'm used to new poopers not including enough material. :P Hope all this helped, and sorry I couldn't say it in fewer words.
Thanks for your input I read it all btw! I was going to just go with just the sentence mixing and minimal effects, but I thought of a disturbing theme that was funny to me then I got carried away. e.g. Him murdering the teacher with the happy pokemon music in the background and the transparent red "flash forward" of him supposedly eating the teacher. When I look back I do see the distractions but when you're making the poop yourself you don't see it. The Boba Fett part was very hard to do and couldn't find the perfect bits (Bob A fe tt). T_T The original thing I thought I made was the hypnotize, I lot of people do spooky sound effects, but I tried to shock the audience by adding a weird thing from Family Guy that I found funny, but I guess it's only funny unless you've seen the episode :P I'll be making a sequel where he does things and it's basically just going to be lots of crazy effects, then after that i'll think of something original, no ear rape I promise :3
So you basically just said that your next poop is going to be like this one. >_< Listen, if you're going to be doing "lots of crazy effects", Michael can't be "doing things". That was my main problem with this poop. Either you do a story with not many effects, or you do a poop that's JUST effects, not both. Here's why: the crazy effects we're not supposed to understand, so when you make some random jokes that form a story in between the effects, we won't be paying attention and we'll miss all the jokes. That's exactly what happened here.
And even so, doing a poop with just effects is pretty hard, there are only a couple of people I've seen do it right. Check out the "The Michaels Gone Mad" videos by TheLastMovieMaker (i.e. GL1TCH) or anything by Butcher and you'll know what I mean. I've tried doing that kind of poop before and it's a lot harder than it looks. It requires a lot of cutting up clips to less than a frame and making them stutter a lot; it's a lot of work. If you can pull it off that'd be great, but don't try making Michael "do things" at the same time.
RootNegativeSixteen I was just going to have all of the speechless Rosen parts, you know the funny ones where he's moving about with a silly face with effects and music, but now that i think about it yeah you're right, i'm panning far from the story, don't worry i'll think of something :3
0/10 not enough memes
it melted