''The One about the Pizza Guy'' | BRAND NEW CREEPYPASTA
HTML-код
- Опубликовано: 22 сен 2024
- You want to know something? I'm subbed to almost every other narrator on RUclips and I notice a real trend: hardly anyone else is tackling the long stories any more. I can perfectly understand why: it tales a huge amount of time to put together something like what I've made here and I'll never judge other channels for not doing hour-long stories. It is, nonetheless, a real joy to narrate a story that you can really get your teeth into, like tonight's tale.
So, on to tonight's story. Well, this really is a weird one. However you think it's going to go after listening to the first half of it, I'm almost sure you'll be wrong in your assumption. This will surprise you as much as it might infuriate you. It will ask questions that it doesn't adequately answer; be ready to fill in the gaps in what you think happens and how it will end accordingly.
All I ask is, as ever, that you sit back, relax, and enjoy the story! See you all again on Monday...
Oh, and a big shout out to Creep Street, whose incredible Dr. Creepen makeup you'll see right at the end of the vid. Check out her channel:
/ @xodanibugxo
________________________________________
From an original, anonymous story:
www.creepypasta...
Background music by Dr. Creepen van Pasta (freely available for use by other Creepypasta / No Sleep narrators):
/ dr-creepen
Video - ‘Crackling Campfire’ by Aidan Zingplex; used under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC BY 3.0 license
vimeo.com/8920...
Thumbnail image - ‘Untitled' by Maxime Staudenmann; used in adapted form under the conditions of the Creative Commons CC0 license:
unsplash.com/@...
![''Something's in the Basement of the Boston House'' | TERRIFYING BASEMENT HORROR [EXCLUSIVE STORY]](/img/1.gif)
The scariest part of this story is that a Mazda turned into a Honda
I would have ditched the car and started running.
Shawn Kage 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Dr. Creepen Wow. Another what the FUCK did I just listen to? Very smooth Doc.....I had to go back quite a few times as I wasn't really hearing the words...well not comprehending them. But when I finally settled down I still didn't have a good grasp. Jeez! Very long and very full of creepy spooky nasty shit! Thanks Dr. C. You never disappoint. Btw-that is pretty ghoulish makeup at the end. Glad you told us. I was wandering around by then or I'd have missed it.😻😈👹
I'd be sacred it it happened to mine.
It’s the same thing that makes a Subaru a Subaru
What pizza place has a delivery range of 30 miles? That's the most unbelievable part of the story
It's so great to see you read the comments. Keep up the great work Doctor!
I'm a driver sometimes people outside are range call in due to pthe place in there area being closed or telling to call us but it happens the more surprising part is not dilvering the the pizzas getting the cash then leaving like why stay you don't get more by staying if anything you lose money the longer your out and a 130 tip that my whole night so something like this i would accept the tip and bolt it hoping the pizzas were perfect though wouldn't mind having to fix it if nessary I get 4/hr driving 12.50/hr in the shop
At the same time all the drivers are carrying at least a knife a bunch have conceal carry
Depends in the state and city. In places like Los Angeles I think no one is carrying a gun, and PERHAPS a knife.
I used to listen to a lot of narrators but since hearing your readings, I find myself solely listening to your channel.
Thanks so much for putting in the time and effort to get these long stories done. I've always sought them out and since you're basically my exclusive narrator it's wonderful to see you doing these. MUCH appreciated.
Therory: I think the altar was used for an ritual where a person is killed to prevent an entity from coming free. By him refusing to die the ritual failed and the entity get free, destroying everything that was set up to seal it away, including the man that was chosen to perform the ritual. I also think the black dressed man was that entity, disguised as a human like figure to not draw too much attention to it.
Bloode Eye I totally agree!
Excellent! That was pretty much my take on it, too.
Thanks
Great explanation! I too thought it was a ritual to keep an entity at bay to prevent Robbert and his friend from, well, exploding. Perhaps they were gaining something from that ritual, which is why the frat boy was so genuinely happy in the dungeon. Perhaps immortality was what they gained, considering he didn't die even with a hole in his head. When the protagonist escapes, he leaves the two men behind, and the entity is free, who he drops off at the hospital. Still unsure about the relationship between Rob and the guy with the hunting rifle though, I'm not even sure if they are working together or not. There seems to be a much deeper story there too.
There are many layers to this story and I'm interested in knowing what other people got from it.
SuperOnionmaster I think that someone or maybe some other entity chose the two to perform the ritual and made the immortal so they never stop.
You don't usually get open ended and ambiguous creepypastas, this is a unique one. Really makes you think.
I was worried people would dislike it for that reason; glad the ambiguity is being appreciated.
@@DrCreepen Dr. this is definitely one of the very best I've heard and easily in my top ten.
"Alpine Drive? The big place!?" That's a line from Dumb & Dumber! You made my night! 😂
Long stories are my favourite, thank you so much for doing them!
You're very welcome, Kelly
Kelly eevee
Kelly mine too. the are usually MUCH better because the writers put in more effort.but some tubers have longer stories separated into smaller stories in a series
Can you please send me to your top 5 Long dimitiría please DR. CREEPEN I BENNLISTENING TO YOU ATLEAST 2 HOURS A DAY 2 TIMES A WEEK CAUSE IM NOT GONNA LIE I ALSO LISTEN TO MORTIS AND ALL THE PASTA PAGES AS WELL I LISTEN TO GO TO SLEEP AND WHEN I CAN AT WORK WORKING GRAVE YAR. OR CAN YOU PLEASE NAME ME YOUR TOP 5 I WANT TO GET MY GIRLFRIENDS TO UNDERSTAND ME BY LISTENING TO THESE CAUSE SOMETIMES THEY THINK IM WIERD CAUSE I WONT PAY ATTENTION TO THEM SOMETIMES CAUSE I WANT TO LISTEN TO YOUR STORIES
Creepen
I remember my Grandfather's cassette player . He listened to books on tape . He was blind since childhood. Now We have U-tube and You. Thanks Again Dr. Creepen You make life enjoyable . Ps I'm blind myself.
Thanks for taking the time to read this crazy, long story, Doctor! I have officially subscribed after venturing through a lot of your reads. I enjoy your narrations; the way you present the scenarios, the inflections of the characters, the emotions...all very well done. You have easily become one of my favorite creepypasta narrators, if not my most favorite!
Tayto very happy you like my work 😀
OH.MY.GOD!!! What happened to the cheese pizzas?! Please tell my they made it out ok!!
*me
Seems like such a waste of good pizza if they were lost in the explosion!
Nimbsquid _ You are hilarious !😃
No--they turned into the things exploding through the walls. . .
25:36
Despite all the craziness, it actually got delivered and paid for
This story will forever be known as the pizza guy story. Awesome one
Thanks, Phillip!
I agree, no one seems to be posting longer stories anymore....but I listen to these while cleaning, doing laundry, or (most importantly) trying to wind myself down enough to sleep. The shorter ones can be really unsatisfying at those times... if I can't get into the story it just becomes backround noise, in a way more distracting than relaxing.
I can always rely on this channel though- for the narration skills, length of videos and the content you choose. Thanks for putting the time in.
Long stories are my absolute favorite.
I've been listening to a lot of different narrators for some time and I recently stumbled across your work.
You quickly became my favorite narrator of creepypasta a and other scary stories.
I have now happily became another subscriber.
Thank you for what you do, please do keep them coming 🤘🏻🤘🏻
Such a sexy voice
;-)
very
I know right?!!
i am male, and must confess that this guy has a great voice.
How dare u make such an understatement
Love the longer stories as well Doc, Keep up the great work! Huge fan of a lot of the narration community on here and you are right, seems like if it is longer than 15 minutes people have stopped tackling the stories, but some of the longer ones are the best. Gonna sit back with a drink and enjoy this one as well I;m sure, keep up the great work!
Can you come around the back? That's gonna be a no for me FAM
Hard no
I actually had to go around to the back in the middle of the night when I was a driver. I'm 6'2" and can handle myself and I can tell you it's creepy as can be. I ended up just putting on the don't fuck with me face and low and behold it was a weeb who didn't want his mother to know that he had ordered food. Needless to say I always went to the front or they were not getting the food after that.
This is the first of your videos that I've watched, and your intro legit scared me.
I've been looking forward to your long one this evening Dr.
L.andM.E ASMR hello again have a wonderful weekend sweetie ❤
and you didn't disappoint...
L.andM.E ASMR You're so bad ! lol!
kareh hartig ;D
;-) Glad to hear it!
I like to play these while I'm going to sleep, so I only listen to long stories. thank you for taking the time to do these.
Glad they're appreciated!
The Krusty Krab pizza
Yuuri Nikiforov is the pizza
Very funny comment lol love Spongebob it's halaious have an awesome weekend much love Sexy Grandma ✌💘
Yuuri Nikiforov 😂😂😂😂
Yuuri Nikiforov don't forget the diet Dr. Kelp
This would have made for a fairly insane episode of Spongebob.
It's true, very few narrators are doing lengthy stories anymore. To be completely honest, it doesn't bother me at all. Only a select few have the ability to keep the listener interested. You're one of those few. Whether it's a 15 minute story or a 3 hour story, I thoroughly enjoy every moment. Thank you!
About your description, yeah one of the reasons I am subbed to you is because you tend to do longer videos.
That and your voice is easy to fall asleep andnit takes my mind off my tinnitus.
Youre probably my favourite narrator on here.
I just found your videos and I'm in love with the intro for this one; its so relaxing and your voice truly makes it
Epic and creepy cool! I kind of like these horror stories where not everything is always explained. It just leaves me more with an unnerved feeling of how such a crazy, scary event can happen and then just sort of disappear. Anyways really great one!
Glad you enjoyed it, Rick!
We sincerely appreciate the longer stories and your talent in telling them! Thank you!
Creepen, I honestly love your account with how kind you are and your openings to the stories. You're by far my favorite scary story account on here and I believe completely you deserve more attention. I hope you're having an amazing day or night for whenever (or if) you read this!
Aww. Don't get lonely, Doc. We're all there in spirit. :)
Glad to hear it, Kendra.
As a writer of the LONG STORY, I really hope to reach more people. Glad you did this and I'm always listening!
Dude you're the man! I've listened to almost all your stuff, I wish you could post every day man!
Outstanding!!!❤❤❤I love these long creepy tales!! Much thanking you! Your stories are always much anticipated and I never miss one!
THE END OMG DID THE DEVIL GET OUT THE CAR DAME , CAN U SAY CAR FOR SELL I WOULDNT KEEP IT
I've been binge watching your readings for the past 2 days now. Glad to have another story to hold me and to give you another subscriber. Kinda hard to listen to anyone else read creepypastas now that I've found my new favorite reader.
Warisarcy I agree dear I really love his style
Thanks for your very kinds words!
One of my favorite pastas I've heard in a very long time great work!
Thank you for uploading this. I started reading this the other day & got to the part where he kicked him down the stairs, & haven't had the chance to finish it yet.
This is the first video I've ever seen of yours, & you probably get this a lot but you sound eerily similar to Sideshow Bob. Anyway, new subscriber here. I'll definitely be watching some of your videos for a while.
That was impressive, and I am now subscribing. I would never have thought your cultured voice would mesh well with this sort of story, yet I was pleasantly surprised to find that it did! Good story and quite well read!
Your long stories are definitely among the best on RUclips, Doctor! Keep up the awesome work :)
ahhh. The best part of working third shift. listening to these wonderful stories narrated by Dr. Creepen. Longer ones like these make the night go by fast. Thanks again for lending us your voice and time!
Just found your channel and you are easily my new favorite narrator. This was excellent.
I tell people again and again. if u r going to be doing business with anyone you don't know. especially at night, always come armed. Always! even if it's just a blade, or a bb pistol, pepper spray even. jeez oh man
Absolutely
It really is best to be thoroughly prepared!
We can't all be as prepared as Dr. Creepen, he has a posse of at least 3 killer clowns always backing him up, waiting in the shadows, he just snaps his fingers and they come out with chainsaws, balloons, cotton candy, ready for a fight.
Wasp Spray beats the crap out of pepper spray--get the kind that shoots in a 20 foot jet. . . only about 5$ at a hardware or Wal Mart. . . .it is a large can, but then, it works. . .advice I got from a cop.
I know!! You wouldn’t believe the amount of times I’ve ran into portals to hell, exploding people, burning demon houses, ancient supernatural entities, etc while out on business.
* sigh *
Some people will just never take their own security seriously I guess.
Thank you for all the hard work you put into these stories, just so we can listen to them. I love everything you do, keep up the good work, sir.
You're just awesome for reading such long stories...really gets the listener into it! Well, on top of the fact your voice is so engrossing ^^. I'm only a few minutes in now, but thanks for giving me some creepy entertainment for the night! I always like saving your videos for when I get home and want to relax and unwind :).
P.S.- I'm so happy you like the makeup I did for you, I can't even tell you how honored I am to see it in multiple vids or yours!! :)
Very kind of you to put so much effort into it. I've linked to your channel in the description, so I hope a few people find their way to you.
I have listened to cp's when I go to bed for about a year now. I have a few other favs, but I have to say that I have gravitated to yours more over the past few months. You have a real talent for this. Thank you :)
Really glad you like my vids :-)
Long stories are usually fantastic
Hope you liked this one.
Usually, but this one was lackluster. Great narration though.
This story has got to be one of my favorites.
Your voice is amazing! I love putting on my headphones and walking my dog in the middle of the night listening to a good long story
Love your long narrations Doc, your voice is dark velvet and just the trick to relax at night - Please keep the long stories in your medicine bag!
A Honda...? Wasn't he driving a Mazda? Trippy... especially when he didn't notice the change. Whomp whomp.
I have become OBSESSED with your narrations! Thank you for all of your hard work. You make awesome content. It means alot that you put so much effort into what you do!
My second favorite thing about your channel is how you always manage to find such excellent narrations, that I've never heard else where. That could have a little something to do with the fact that, as you mentioned, no one else is tackling these long stories. Oh, and have I told you yet today how much I just adore your deliciously creepy yet dead sexy "narrator" voice? [That is of course reason number one;-) ] Anyway I have my favorite drink (and my safety blanket) as I lie back and get ready to listen...
you know it's a good story when you fall asleep listening to it then wake up and have to find out what happened so you listen to it again... and force yourself not to follow asleep because you absolutely have to know what happened.
Isabella Anderson Thanks for taking the time to return to it!
I love it thank you for sharing. And how can someone make cursing sound so damn sexy. Just wondering :)
I don't usually listen to the one long stories but this was great. probably due to your tone of voice and inflection. Thanks for a wonderful night
I loved this one and really identified with the protagonist. Work sucks. We've all been there, but what follows is pure horror gold.
I'd really like to see this as a short film some day.
Also, your reading is spectacular. There are times that I swear I'm listening to Sam Neil. Especially when it's a story involving space. I get that Event Horizon vibe.
Cheers my friend and, never stop.
I have to say, this was one of the best written and voiced I've EVER heard. I sat on the edge of my seat, laughed so hard I spit up my food and was tense all in the same story. The details of service worker, "oh fuck" when tigers back hit the corner. Just so much I loved about this story. Can't believe it took so long for me to get to this story.
+Dr. Creepen thank you! 😊 That was great! 👌 I appreciate the extra time you put in to make this special treat. Have to listen again, right now. You're amazing! 😸😽
2nd listen just as good and just as much pondering...😸🐦
Heidi Oh there you are! I KNEW you would be here somewhere. Of course way ahead of me! This one was a long bumpy ride-except for Dr.Cs voice-was it not?😍😻I will catch up someday sis!
I live for long stories, that's partly why I love your channel the most! Xx
Awesome as usual. Totally made my Friday night!!! Thanks for taking the time to do this for us.
Truly an audible pleasure to sit by your 🔥, and listen to the story. Fire or a thunderstorm is some of the best background noise you can have for great Narrators. Thank You!
Glad you enjoy the campfire!
This was so friggen awesome, sir! Great visuals for me, in this one.
I KNEW that 2nd guy was still lingering....
your voice and long videos keep me by the fire with my favourite drink.
These stories go great with long bus rides, on a rainy day. Thank you so much for making this creepy girls' day.
I absolutely enjoy your long narrations I love your voice ! Thank you!
This story is so good!!! And your narration added to the mood of scariness
10 views a minute! Not bad. Also I'd like to say thanks for making both my commute and my time falling asleep easier.
You're very welcome, Nafel.
Normally I would listen for a few minutes an d skip to the next video but for some reason I didn't I was glued to your voice awesome well done
I'm a pizza delivery guy myself and honestly I've seen weird things on my deliveries but you're really making me rethink my career choice
I totally agree to your piece in the description. In my opinion, some, if not all, of the best readings are the longer ones! They have story, character, and real value compared to the shorter ones. Short narratives always end abruptly and cliche; meet a character, tragedy, death(or never-ending suffering).
This narration was just wonderful, Doc. ❤
me: listens to first 20 seconds
*instantly subscribes*
I really like the intro for this story
Dr. Creepan, so fond of your work. Especially the hour long stories. I always enjoy your stories over a cup of hot choco :D Keep it up!
By far, my favorite story. Thank you!
No cheese pizzas were harmed in the making of this story.
I've never understood the ppl that look back while running. It slows you down. Also don't understand those that watch.
I was with a friend once and as we were walking we heard a car take off to follow us. I ran without looking back so I made it into my home. She had looked back so the guy caught up. It was a neighbor of mine that was wanting her. Not gonna get into all the reasons of that. But she was so scared, she pissed herself. And he told her, "You're lucky you're with Dragonfly and you know it. I'm not getting her involved but rest assured I'll catch you out alone sometime or with some body that don't matter"
A couple years later, she was found shot in the head as was another friend of hers.
Wat da fuk
Sure
I played this while hearing but not listening your voice is so soothing 🙌🏽
Another fantabulous piece of story telling from Dr Creepen. Really good, keep up the good work.
Outstanding story told by an excellent narrator. I really enjoy the long ones too 🤗
This was an amazing narration. I love the long stories the best!this had the feel of one of those K. Banning Kellum stories. Mixing the mundane with the cosmic horror.
Maybe they were trying to keep a portle to Delphia closed through sacrifice, and it was an agent of Tobit who escaped in the car with the pizza guy.
Some of the other narrators brake the long ones up in to parts .I really appreciate you not making us wait for an ending :)
"All hell broke loose" was no overstatement 😂 ❤
I never expected this 😂 I don't think anyone did! Wonderfully narrated, as always 👌
There is something exceptionally creepy about doing ordinary things with creepy undertones that is spine tingling and one of my very favourite things about CPs. Thank you, Dr.C. Stay well.
Now I want pizza.
I always want pizza.
Necromancer #101: never leave obtaining your human sacrifice to the last minute.
I truly agree. Long stories really have somewhat been scarce to find but they are a joy to listen to. Loved the story and lovely video as always doctor. :)
Well you got my Sub love The longer story's keep it up
hard to top that story, glad I listened to it. loved the unexpected twist, and the powerful imagery.
I want pizza...
Wonder what happened to the order?
Maybe it was needed for the ritual. Who knows. :O
Dr. Creepen these are the important questions
Maybe--but not with my pepperoni cut up on it!
Absolutely love your stories. You're my favourite narrator Dr
I often wonder whether the writers of these ambiguously ended pastas have clear endings to the stories that they're just not sharing, or whether they're created just to mess with people. It sounds like it could be based on a strange nightmare.
Good question, Rob!
Just happened in my town. Ended up being 2 girls attacked, with knives, a Dominoes pizza delivery driver and stole $60. Was it worth it you idiots. Poor guy. Guess you never know Even in a small town.
You really never know.
This streched out type story drives me NUTS! All I can do is yell "Run Away"! "Dumb Ass"!
"hardly anyone else is tackling the long stories any more" yes!! 1000000x yes! the short ones aren't scary to me because they're just over too fast. i need 20 minute+, not 6 minute shorts! ty dr
If I do one under ten minutes, it has to be especially appealing. These hour-long ones are hard to put together in a short time frame, though!
yay! More meds from the doc to cure my horror cravings. and a long one?! niiiice. got my drink...here we go. thanks again doc. you're the only doctor i dont mind visiting. :)
Homer Simpson says: Hmmmmm, horrooorr
Doh!
Ha. I delivered pizzas in my honda a couple months ago. Good times. No spectacular stories came out of it but that, the toking and the driving around in rural areas made this story hit pretty close to home. Was a good listen, long stories with relatable characters are always refreshing to hear.
Highway 54 is easy to west- I live a quarter mile from it. I'm extra creeped out because besides the directions this sounds like my neck of the woods. Awesome story man- not looking forward to the drive down 54 on my way home.
It's only a story, Nic... keep telling yourself that ;-)
The pizza guy gave me mushrooms and I said nothing, scarier than this
Thanks for another awesome story, Dr. Creepen. 🍕🍕
This story reminds me of a Clive Barker novel. lol! This was super , I was on the edge of my seat yelling run ! run! lol , Fabulously narrated Dr.This was a treat ! Thank you !
Moral of the story: Beware taking a job as a pizza delivery person, lol.
I really enjoyed this story and, Dr. Creepen, your narration was brilliant as always! 🙂✌️👍
“This door is broken. Can you come around to the....”
*pizza boxes spin in mid air* *Mazdasuzubarhonda engine roars* Through the swirling road dust, my voice booms out:
“I’m not that stupid. I listen to the Dr. !”
I subbed to your channel because of the long stories. Please do keep them coming!
Same here!