''There’s Something Wrong with my Fiancé'' | FULL STORY WITH NEW UPDATE
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- Опубликовано: 22 сен 2024
- NOTE: All the single-episodes vids have been removed, as this now represents the whole story complete with the update!
From an original story by The Life of Nikki, kindly shared with us at NoSleep and narrated with the author’s kind permission:
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Thank you Dr my girl and I listen every night. We are young, broke on our own with no cable and rarely food to eat but look forward to cuddling up and get a story or two before we fall asleep. Thanks again
Keep your head up. Things will get better if you work for it. This is how me and my husband started out. Now we own our own home, still no cable but there's Netflix and Hulu! Lol and a full fridge!!!
I hope things have gotten much better for ya'll. Best of wishes
Stay strong friends..hope alls ok
I love this 💚
What a brilliant ending , I gasped lol , as always exceptional narration
Loved this story! Your channel is wonderful and your voice is so lovely and soothing!
Only half way through the story but wanted to pause and say how much I'm enjoying this tale. Not sure what it is, maybe just the mood I'm in but it's a great mystery, well written and well narrated. It's just what I needed on this rainy day.
Your channel has been so addicting lately, I can’t seem to get enough. Love your content ❤️
Agreed
Absolutely.
Yea all of his stuff is great amd these writers do a damn good job making these stories
sorry to be off topic but does anyone know of a tool to get back into an instagram account?
I was stupid forgot my password. I would appreciate any tricks you can offer me.
It was so relaxing to hear your voice telling this tale yesterday. No insomnia! Tks for it!
This is a sweet treat that you put the whole story all in one video! I’ve really enjoyed this complete story and the bonus... my generous narrator, your style is impeccable! Love to you and yours
Love this one! I was playing your stories while i was in hospital after my third, (yes third!) brain tumor surgery. I think every nurse that came in wanted to know about that sexy voice. lol Hard to believe how many people have never heard of creapypasta. Never fear, I did my best to educate every one of them.
i love this community, it can scare the shit out of me AND leave me in pure wonder from how creative you all are. Props!
Great story! Keep um coming! The Backround music around 29:00 is awesome! Also, the name Samiel Solabate is both creepy and smooth all at the same time
Sounding well my friend, it's 2.02AM here at home. This is the most relaxing and unwinding thing to do after a stressful day. Helps me sleep. Before I got together with my beloved 8 months ago I was able to listen to you most days at a time. Miss those old days. Look forward to hearing from you soon my friend.
Great story, throughly enjoyed it, superb narration as always and great music 👍😊❤️
I am completely in love with your videos. Your deep and creepy voice is perfect to keep in the background while I work on my novel. I just wrote some of my best chapters thanks to you, so thank you
Great story I love the longer ones and this was excellent, not too mention your wonderful story telling abilities it's a pleasure listening every time,, Thank you
im high i thought it said 'There’s Something Wrong with my Fence"
'There’s Something Wrong with my Fiancé''
😹
Lololol
Dave what? Does your fence have chipped paint? Is it broken?
yeah dude, the story involved a painted fence with a missed spot... {insert horror soundtrack}
Dave 😂😂😂😂
I really dig that +Dr Creepens composes the background music for his videos. My literal first recordings that I ever made were “horror soundtrack” style songs of nothing but sparse, ambient, ethereal creepiness. That was over 20 yrs ago. Said CASSETTE tape (produced by holding up the cassette recorder to my Casio keyboard) was taken without my knowledge one day and oddly passed around my high school and eventually back to me after I heard my creepy music coming from a classroom I had no classes in... A teacher was playing it for their class. It was probably my first performance in addition to my first recording... I have never thought of that before... In my best “awkward 16 yr old” I asked the teacher to leave the tape at the office when they were done. He said “And you are?” I replied “This is my music. I made what you are listening to.” I probably whispered it. However, the kids all clapped! It was bizarre. Not the type of music mid-‘90s kids would just be exposed to and then enjoy... And it wasn’t exactly studio quality work...And I had no intention of it being listened to at my school! Or at all by other people! It was strange and not really “songs” and I was already weird enough to the other kids. Truth be told, I could not be mad at my friend for taking the tape. A lifelong addiction began right then and there (horror had started years earlier). Music is and always will be a force I am joyfully dependent on. I still have that tape too. Just no player to listen with! I should make some modern HQ scary tracks again some time soon. #ramblecomplete
Jordan May do you still make horror soundtracks? Also do you sell them if you do? I have a true crime and paranormal blog and some creepy music would come in handy lol
I realize your comment is from a year ago lol but hopefully you see it
You would like Philip Glass's soundtrack for the film "Candyman." It's by far the best horror music I have ever heard. I would love to hear your stuff 😁 "evil" music is my favorite.
Deliberately bad story summation: Woman disagrees with husband over the recommendations of his new life coach.
Really am crying laughing
Why?
😆
43:48 Curiosity may have killed the cat, but ill be damned if satisfaction didnt bring it back.
Yessssss! Just got myself a new splashproof speaker, I'm taking you pool side Dr. With my favorite drink of course. 😆
Kuchi Kopi Don't we all, at some point in our existence..? 🤔
Just finished, I knew she was going to say she was carrying twins at the end!! 😨
Ahh thank you for the story, I love listening to your stories while doing art or school projects and it really makes the time go by. Thank you for another amazing narration and I hope you’ve had a wonderful weekend ❤️
Literally tapped my screen at 16 minutes thinking it would be over soon than I noticed it was an hour long 1 and I was just dumbfounded great work ,love the effort
Intriguing story and superb narration.
This is perfect for this rainy day !
lol it's literally thunderstorming out rn
What a great story. Thanks Doc
Samael, the angel of death and souls, that's some happenstance, I was writing a story involving Samael
new sub here:)i find your narration very soothing to the ears.stories are great.at that keep up the good work & i'll be watching
That was good. I really liked it. Good one Doc.
i can say a fact... you doc are the besr youtuber out there.... have an awesome sunday... listening to the end (heard this before, except the updated pare) before i go to bed... hope you guys have your favourite drink.. cause this story is juicy..
Wow, this was so good. Thank you! Truly appreciate this long video.
The whisperer always double crosses...then laughs and waits 🔥
Whoa.... I wonder if they’re the Detective’s babies , hmmmm!
It's called Egyptian Flu. You catch it, and nine months later, you become a mummy.
Belias Phyre lmao! Love it!
Hahaha! Love it. Will defo be stealing this!
Ha! Took a min.
Ok that was pretty clever/funny. I’ll have to remember this joke & be ready to diagnose when I encounter a pregnant person ;)
Belias Phyre I hate you show mush
I read the title as "there's something wrong with my face" and it took longer than I'm willing to admit before I realized I was wrong
Doctor Creepen,
Thank you for sharing your heavenly angelic musical voice with us for almost 2 hours TODAY. Also thank you for this bonus story. I hope you & everyone else has had a great weekend so far.
Hi Tiffany 😙💜 I hope that your having a Wonderful Night too 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Sexy Grandma Darkness
Hey Grandma I'm good thanks!!! Glad you are doing good too and much love back to you too Grandma!!!!!
These two thirsty af on all these vids lmao
I just would prefer a women's voice when a female is telling the story its confusing.
One of ur best stories we've heard. Dont mean to sound likd a creep. Me and the wife have been falling asleep to u for 3 months now.
Shit. I listened to this last night like twice, and a third time this morning. I don't know what it is about this that is so daunting and engaging to me. Your narrative on this story is explicit. I love your voice, and how each character has an individual tone of voice. thanks so much for this, it's ridiculously amazing, haha.
Ah. ha!! Demons always come in twos!
Ever think of doing a Q&A video? i would love to see it
Thank you, this is one of the best ones Ive heard😘
Oh boy I was definitely waiting for more on this one its been awhile!!!! thanks doctor you always deliver👍😁
Dr. Creepen i love your narration and the stories you read and with that being said CAN YOU PLEASE FINISH DEAD MAN RUNNING?!! Ive been left in suspense for months waiting to hear what happened!!😩😫
Rocio Goodwin oh my gosh I’ve been asking the same question. I’ve been sucked into the story since the day he uploaded the 1st part, back in October of last year. I’ve never seen him take so long to finish a series before. He’d mentioned b4 something about the author still finishing it up. But that was months ago
Juniper S right! I catch myself thinking about it and wondering what happened! It was one of my favorite stories and it left me in a cliffhanger!!!😩😩
Rocio Goodwin I’ve asked about the story a couple of times over the past few months, he’s remains silent on this topic. I’ve loved all of the stories he’s done while we wait, but man would I like an update on Dead Man Running.
Hey Doc,excellent job on this video.
God I love your range of emotions ,the mystery that you sometimes invoke ,the narcissistic air that you seem to be able to convey with some of your dialog, and the overall ability to impress upon your listeners the mystery and the horror yet to come .
I am not trying to pretend that you are the 1 of a few which seems to be able to pull off. But what I'm trying to say is that you are probably one of a select several number of narrators who are able use these features as if you are just engaged in a regular conversation and starting to imbued a little by little horror into you listeners
Please keep them coming , as that if you stopped the world would be an emptier place without them.
I really enjoyed listening to the compilation of this story and I thought the narration was spot on! Thanks for the entertainment and I hope you are having a wonderful day! 😊✌👍
yo about an hour into the story when nikki picks up the call from the dead guy she's RADIATING bde. hear that sass in her voice? dang.
AWESOME CREEPYPASTA!!! 🤗👍❤💋👍👍👍 Even Better 4 years later! 🤗 Love, Love Dr. Creepen!!! ✝️💜☮️
I wish you and Clancy would do a long story with dual characters
This story is so amazing. To be honest I'm lost but it's Mark's turn to talk & I hope it clears some stuff up
Another great story thank you!
great update to the story!! let's see where this goes...
time stamps?
I managed to find the time stamp for the update. It starts at 1:37:08
Excellent. Greg
Doctors visit on a Sunday, wonderful.
Especially for you m'dear ;-)
Hey ,girl how are you doing? I'm Good 😊 I hope that you are having a Wonderful Night too 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌❤❤
Dr. Creepen 😙
Sexy Grandma Darkness evening wonderful ms g-ma!
Thank You 💋 Girly 😙💛 I will ok;) much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌❤❤
WOW great story and narration.
❤❤❤Great story and amazing narration and the last update was my Birthday❤❤❤
You should do the voice for self hypnosis lol seriously your voice is so calming which is weird for what I’m listening to lol your videos are great any time of day but I especially like them right before bed. Your voice helps me fall asleep lol :)
Moral of the story: there's more to life than an expensive wedding.
"Mark doesn't cook. Not to say that he can't cook, but he burns everything"...um, that means he can't cook.
After listening to the rest of this story Dr C the end was a real dozzie 🖤🖤🖤🖤
The word COUPE, is pronounced with a silent E..... made me giggle every time you said it 😂
I think maybe it could have been Detective Smith calling from beyond the grave maybe trying to warn Nicky of her fiance I mean now that it's brought up I think it's possible I mean things didn't make much sense before and I had been wondering who had been calling Nicky sense Detective Smith's body had been found now I think it's making sense, great story!
Good one
have to sleep but cant stop listening!!! love it:)
So good. Thanks
I've said this before and I'll say it again- money is the root of all evil..... & Doc, you're awesome! Thanks ♡♡♡♡♡
jayda posante - I would have to say that the DESIRE for money is the root of all evil.
jayda posante it's not the money but the love of money. Hi Jayda, I didn't t write it, It's in the Bible. Paper and gold cannot hurt people. People hurt people.
how can money be the root if it cannot exist without humans?
Alexander Burrell In answer to your question... It is the LOVE of money, not the money itself. Whoever made that comment missed the mark, and doesn't understand the meaning of the writing. I don't know if God is real but the Bible is loaded with stories to live by.
@@tomlarson5486 the love of money is the root of all evil?
First, the word love and root of all evil should not be used in the same scentence when describing the root.
And once again, how can love of money be the root when it still a human creation? You think there wasn't evil before money existed?
Now that was brilliant
wow great story. I can't believe no one at the police force pieced together that the missing detective and the woman's fiancé were twins! I mean after ALL that time, that had to be a basic thing to find out. Man I guess it's true... you just can't get the staff these days
That was superb Docter, absolutely brilliant!
Yass! All I've been waiting for!
Good evening Dr. Can I ask, what mic do you use? I want to find a mic which aborbs sounds richly like yours. Thanks.
There can be only one?
What is this, The Highlander?
Lol yeah I kinda thought that too :)
"I watched the 'Highlander' movie... IT WAS SHEEETTT!!"
Great story kept me listening and wondering what was going to happen next. But super tired gonna finish tomorrow night.. sleep well all my Doc story telling friends.
Great story
Yessss!!!! I’m listening as I type ❤️❤️❤️
Dope story from the first second to the last second
Great story you are the best
For the love of god every time I listen to your channel and you've used the music from Diablo (Tristan) for background music it makes me want to break out that old game and play it!!!!
Doc Creepen with a Sunday special!
Nice for this cold rainy Sunday. All that's missing is coffee or cocoa. ..
Why did Ian Smith have a picture of her in his pocket???
Were you not listening? It was explained pretty blatantly.
Shhhh its time to listen to the good Dr. 🖤
Deee Light Full 😍
Loved this! Well done
Really enjoyed this . Thanks so much fo your beautiful voice😻
This Mark seems to be a real jerk or else Nicky really is crazy to be honest I don't know what's going on but I do know one thing for sure, this has been one crazy good story!
🤗 awesome story
Ahhhhh, coffee and the Doc. You sir just keep getting better and better 😆😁 cant wait till the next video.... I think it'll be Thursday my time.... looks like tomorrow night shift will be me catching up on your older stories.... ohhhh excitement!!!
That was a great story, I really enjoy your voice, are you musically talented?
I don't know what happened but it seems I missed a part of this story in the past. I don't know how, I make sure to always seek you out even if RUclips doesn't notify me. But thankfully I was able to hear it all tonight. Quite a story. I'll see you Monday dearest Dr...oh I should warn you I'm getting spoiled with these extra posts, I may start to count on them
Well at least she lived in a time when women hadn’t lost autonomy over their bodies, so she didn’t have to worry what state she was in if she chose to end the pregnancy… probably the best idea in this case.
Loved this story, her fiance is a real jerk & a cold blood killer too boot, she needs to be rid of him. Again loved the story 🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤
I thought it said "There's something wrong with my face" totally different type of story lol
Woah! Just realized! this was uploaded today! been a while since I caught a narration from you day 1, Doc! :)
great story as always!
Am I the only one who felt like the creepy guy sounded like Filch? "Oh we are in trouble.... "
Your voice is more intoxicating than my whiskey.. Love it😏
Hahaha, AWESOME story and terrific narration!! That double twist ending, too, wow.... Thanks for narrating such a killer story!!
AND ALL YOU MEN WONDER WHY THESE WOMEN HAVE SO MANY TRUST ISSUES.. SMH 🤦🏻♂️
Anthony Rez lmao speak for yourself
You realize this is a story right? SMH🤦♂️
A detective Smith from only two counties over goes missing, some girl comes into the station talking about a detective Smith and a mysterious phone call and no one at the station thought anything about it until they ran the number?
I need to hear a story with a super twisted ending, if you had a suggestion from your narrations. I seem to be cursed with knowing ,endings before I get there.(with-in a dart boards target area of the bullseye)
Nah Dectective Smith is lowkey Chief Keef THE CHICAGO CONNECTION😂
Not like I had anything else to do tonight c:
So the nurse was like "Congratulations, is this your first pregnancy" but wasn't like "Congratulations, you have twins", is that news really less important than the very fact of the matter?