We enjoy these stories.... my husband and I are hooked to listening as we lay down for the night. The hubs falls asleep while I continue until morning hours. I’m enduring a chronic illness that rattles my chest and ribs with searing pain with nausea that’s never far away. Just breathing is more painful than a root canal. Thank you for letting my mind escape while your voice brings a sense of calm. Know your performances have the ability to truly help someone likely, many people. We appreciate your talents.
AmandaJones Adams well, you just broke my heart with that! Beautiful young lady, I hope that husband takes good care of you. Whatever your condition, try medical marijuana, if you can't smoke, get the edibles. I pray you find comfort. Love from the Motor City.
MandyJones I am sorry for the hand you were dealt in life. And pain is the worst thing to overcome..I am familiar with pain .. we are on a first name basis, me & pain. But, you cannot dwell on it. Dwelling makes you think..when you think, your mind can race around spinning your thoughts into a frenzy... At which point you surrender to the insanity, the depression.. They only thing that truly relaxes me, like no other! Truly. DR.CREEPEN ❤😺👍❤ 🌌🌌💀🙀😱😰😓😴
PS so if that still didnt clarify things for you I wondered if you were joking (which is why i asked if you were serious) and if not then if you had something wrong with you mentally or was just a bit stupid!
This right here....the way you did this proves even further how much you actually care about your listeners. Making it convenient for us to be able to hear the whole story so easily without making us have to dig for the previous parts. (in case we missed it) It shows you care more than to make us have to go back and watch old vids which in turn gives you more clicks and money. For this simple fact(and the fact you are amazing in a million other ways as well) I want to show my appreciation. So Im going to buy a few things off your merch store on friday...when Im not broke...lol. I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate these small things you do for us. Its a bunch of extra work you dont need to do but it really makes a difference. Even if most people dont realize the significance off rip. Keep being awesome doc. And thanks so much.
Aww. What a lovely comment, and kind thoughtful thing of you to do. I know your comment is from 5 years ago lol, but just thought I'd say how sweet it is. And, I think I may do the same even now 5 years later, as Doc is still going strong!
I really wonder if some kind of gas leak in the mall related to the explosion in town caused hallucinations. Everything is left just vague enough to keep a layer of tension and curiosity! I love this story 💕
On Friday's I always work 11 hour shifts and have to be up ridiculously early, so whenever I come home after a long day I always put on one of your videos and listen to them until I fall asleep and have a nap. It's become a bit of a tradition, even if it means having to catch up on the video again later that night! I love the stories, do keep up the good work. I can't wait to listen to this one, or rather fall asleep to it playing in the background and then listen to it later tonight, haha!
That's how he beats the algorithm: he talks all soothing so you pass out then go back to rewatch what you missed, effectively doubling his view count. :D
If the smirk on my face is any indication then yes, I did enjoy this one. As much a pleasure to hear as for you to narrate. I'll see you Monday dearest Dr
George Treepwood most of the SHTF shit is right but the gun descriptions are terrible. A Colt AR-15 is not an “Assault Rifle.” To be an “Assault rifle” it has to have selective fire and be fully automatic. Saying “a G29 Glock Safe action pistol” is redundant: the “G” in “G29” stands for Glock. The G29 is also chambered in 10mm Auto not 9mm Parrabellum. Noting that the G29 is safe action is unnecessary because all Glock handguns are safe action. Also kinda nitpick-y but still thought I’d mention it: the author calls the G29 a “Pistol” which is technically correct but most people that know their guns use the word “Handgun”. the term “Pistol” is a bit outdated but still correct.
@@OutlawPrince45 I'm not sure if this is redundant, but the "AR" in "AR-15" doesn't stand for "Assault Rifle", but instead stands for "Armalite Rifle".
Wonderful read, as always, Doctor. (and glad I'm in a better state of mind listening!) A bedtime story from you is always a highlight of my evenings. Have a wonderful weekend!
This was a really good story . The first part was very apocalyptic/zombie survival.... the second was a very claustrophobic and eerie ghost style story. Like a good D.J- Mixin it up!🤘
You got that right 😉..oh yeah!! FYI Dr Creepens & G.M.Danielson are doing a St Patrick's Creepy pasta Tomorrow 😊pass it On.. okay 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
A BRILLIANT work from a master storyteller! I was beginning to find the post apocalyptic genre boring but this...was simply exceptional. Thank you for your excellent narration. More from this author please!
Oh yeah driving and listen to the amazing dr.creepen my friend I love your videos and I love when you have a Series well have a wonderful weekend my friend take care be safe
Wow, quite nice Definitely up there with Dark Somnium although you partake in the etiquette of the tale you speak. Very nicely achieved and yes that voice is so good
Damn! Such an excellent story, and so many details were correct! Especially firearms and the like, so many don’t know what’s what and they tend to keep it vague. Praise to the author, Wolfe of Baskervilles, for an intensely enjoyable tale! And thanks to our Dr C for delivering it to us all. 👍👍👍☠️
""...relatively sharp..." "She had the means to defend herself" Then the attempted clever Shakespearian tie-ins. Wow. Amazing writing ha ha ha. An A for effort, though. And yes, physical exertion with no caloric intake will definitely result in muscular deterioration. "One by one, they fell...such fodder!" Wow, this has been done and so much more entertainingly. Great use of the phrase "one by one" twice in the same paragraph. I am available to help edit your work to bring it to its full potential, and in all seriousness, I can provide exceptional assistance. There's something salvageable here, I'm certain.
Excellently read Doctor, I really enjoyed this one. I would love to hear more if the author makes a follow up or a part 3 and find out what could possibly happen next. This story has a brilliant premise and has some pretty immersive, well structured writing. Great video as always!
Wow I liked this one Doctor! I wasn’t expecting all the psychological horror themes mixed in with the grim setting...the situation she’s in kept me thinking of typical post-apocalypse type scenarios. Great narration as always, happy Friday! 🙂
Terrifying. Just Terrifying. I loved it... listened to part one and then i had to find part 2 to hear the end. I loved it. Its amazing how our minds can play tricks on us. Ill admit i found myself checking the locks several times while i listened. Thanks again Dr. Creepen for another nerve racking tale!!
Dr.Creepen I have been able to sleep soundly because of your amazing narration! I have insomnia and anxiety and depression and PTSD. But your voice and the stories make me so happy and I am so grateful to you! Much thanks and much love dear Dr.Creepen!
I love this so much ❤ you might be happy to know that I am currently working on quite a long story for you ^-^ P.s- I still get giddy when you like my comments xD im a fan for life , doc. Im so glad to have stumbled upon your channel
I agree..but I can see how some people don't engage if its a vary long story. Not me! I love AnYtHiNg with the Doctors deep voice melting the words off the pages and slithering into my realm.. My ears✌❤😺🌌❤
Oh we got over an hour of Doctor Creepen's heavenly angelic musical voice. We are going to be in total bliss for sure. You just made us some HAPPY people Doctor Creepen.
Oh Happy Happy Joy Joy 😆 we Get dr Creepens for a whole Hour!! Best Friday Night ever!!! I'm So Excited I can bearly control my self...lol 😅 I hope that your having a Wonderful Night too 💋 Tiffany much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Sexy Grandma Darkness Hey Grandma!!! You're exactly right!!!!! It is beyond description. Hope you have a great weekend too and much love back to you too Grandma!!!!!!!💚🎂😘🍰💙🍬👌🍭💜😇🍺💐👍🍹💛🍷😍🍻💖🍸
Well I'm in time for part two and it's lunchtime..yummy chicken cheese enchilada soup and Ritz crackers and sexy Dr.Creepen.......priceless......happy weekend doc see ya Monday.......💖💖💋
I know it's just a story but one thing bugged me. She couldn't start a fire in the beginning. But it's really easy to start a fire indoors with no wind or rain. I think everyone knows the batteries wires and anything that fibric like trick. And that's just one way to start a fire there are hundreds of ways.
A fun psychological thriller story! Thanks for the great read. Just a bit of feedback to the author, should they read the comment section. More research on the technical details of the firearms the character carries would go a long way to not distract from the story. #1 Glock 29 is 10mm not 9mm. #2 An AR15 is just a semi-automatic rifle, not an "Assault Rifle" as it does not have full automatic fire capability. #3 The 5.56 caliber rounds, though close to .22 caliber (.223) are not referred to as "Long Rifle" as this is usually a term describing a specific case length in .22 caliber. Also two minor points. First, almost all restaurants have mounted can openers. Second, the story repeatedly mentions the lead character needing water badly, but simply ignores the rain that seems to be falling regularly through the duration of the story. Not critical points, but still distracting inconsistencies from an otherwise competent character.
I was waiting for this all day I'm new so I only seen the first 1 today. love the channel and your storytelling. I'm from the uk its 10 so I missed it by an hour 😭 I was listening to the my friends tried making a found footage movie story 😂
Awesome! Great story! We just watched this old 80s scifi horror B movie last night called Viscious Lips that totally reminds me of this. I wonder if the author's seen it?! It could be inspired by it, its ideas are pretty inspiring even if it's execution is a bit corny, lo-fi & silly. It's definitely worth a watch of your into this kinda films. Anyways awesome story Dr. C, we love u!
Hearing these anecdotes makes me appreciate the impact that these creepypasta channels can have on someone who is enduring adverse circumstances such as chronic illness be it physical or mental. Although good story telling doesn't cure illness, I'm so pleased that people gain a sort of peace or sense of tranquility from it to take them away from their ailments, even for a short time. For me, it's purely entertainment. I have no enduring health conditions. I just love listening to the voice and material. However, I do now have a much deeper appreciation for what these fantastic narrators do. Much love to all of you people out there ❤ Stay creepy everybody.
Great reading, as usual. Didn't care much for the story though. Very teenage Mary Sue, complete with the heterochromia. Felt alot like "Twilight, but with Zombies". But, as I said, your reading of it was top notch. Well done.
i listened to this at five this morning still half asleep in bed, it gave me nightmares in my half awake state im listening to it my second time now twelve hours later lol its a bad as i remembered thankyou soooo much to the author and thankyou Dr creepen for reading it to us all this story is truly fantastic!!!!!
Yeahhs a new story for me too get lost in love your stuff Dr helps me threw the day who needs a movie when we got you to narrate a story for us that makes it even better then watching a movie
The author should’ve really researched firearms, the first min and a half had me cringing so hard I’m still debating finishing the story. It’s like saying Ford was started in Russia and a 4 cylinder is commonly known as a v8.
Hay damn it stop nit picking who the hell cares this is a damn good story I bet neither one of you idiots could never do this good even on your dreams so dont criticize just appreciate the story
@@buckylamb8674 i disagree.. I write regularly and i have several publications. First rule of good writing. Research things so you dont sound like a jackass.
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We enjoy these stories.... my husband and I are hooked to listening as we lay down for the night. The hubs falls asleep while I continue until morning hours. I’m enduring a chronic illness that rattles my chest and ribs with searing pain with nausea that’s never far away. Just breathing is more painful than a root canal. Thank you for letting my mind escape while your voice brings a sense of calm. Know your performances have the ability to truly help someone likely, many people. We appreciate your talents.
AmandaJones Adams well, you just broke my heart with that! Beautiful young lady, I hope that husband takes good care of you.
Whatever your condition, try medical marijuana, if you can't smoke, get the edibles. I pray you find comfort.
Love from the Motor City.
Wow, I hope you get better :(
MandyJones I am sorry for the hand you were dealt in life. And pain is the worst thing to overcome..I am familiar with pain .. we are on a first name basis, me & pain.
But, you cannot dwell on it. Dwelling makes you think..when you think, your mind can race around spinning your thoughts into a frenzy... At which point you surrender to the insanity, the depression.. They only thing that truly relaxes me, like no other! Truly. DR.CREEPEN ❤😺👍❤ 🌌🌌💀🙀😱😰😓😴
@@niveks8384 Agree! 100%.. edibles are great for all over body pain..
What disease causes pain like that?
If I ever decide to turn my novel into an audio book, I know where my first stop for a voice actor would be :)
I was listening to an audiobook author Anne Rice, the narrator sounded a lot like Doc.
You’re an author?
@Aerial what do you mean why not Optimus Prime?
@Aerial are you being serious??
PS so if that still didnt clarify things for you I wondered if you were joking (which is why i asked if you were serious) and if not then if you had something wrong with you mentally or was just a bit stupid!
This man has the most soothing voice for reading creepypasta thrillers.
Very kind of you!
This right here....the way you did this proves even further how much you actually care about your listeners. Making it convenient for us to be able to hear the whole story so easily without making us have to dig for the previous parts. (in case we missed it) It shows you care more than to make us have to go back and watch old vids which in turn gives you more clicks and money. For this simple fact(and the fact you are amazing in a million other ways as well) I want to show my appreciation. So Im going to buy a few things off your merch store on friday...when Im not broke...lol. I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate these small things you do for us. Its a bunch of extra work you dont need to do but it really makes a difference. Even if most people dont realize the significance off rip. Keep being awesome doc. And thanks so much.
Aww. What a lovely comment, and kind thoughtful thing of you to do. I know your comment is from 5 years ago lol, but just thought I'd say how sweet it is. And, I think I may do the same even now 5 years later, as Doc is still going strong!
I really wonder if some kind of gas leak in the mall related to the explosion in town caused hallucinations. Everything is left just vague enough to keep a layer of tension and curiosity! I love this story 💕
I’m forever grateful that RUclips suggested your channel to me. You’re the best ❤
Dr. I absolutely luv the pics and videos you take and put together yourself .they are amazing ❤❤❤❤
On Friday's I always work 11 hour shifts and have to be up ridiculously early, so whenever I come home after a long day I always put on one of your videos and listen to them until I fall asleep and have a nap. It's become a bit of a tradition, even if it means having to catch up on the video again later that night! I love the stories, do keep up the good work. I can't wait to listen to this one, or rather fall asleep to it playing in the background and then listen to it later tonight, haha!
Yeah, I have had to do that a few times myself.. molmolmol
@@zombiasnow15 thats ok every day i work 12 hour shifts 😂😂😂 but these definitely help
That's how he beats the algorithm: he talks all soothing so you pass out then go back to rewatch what you missed, effectively doubling his view count. :D
I am SO ready to do this!
If the smirk on my face is any indication then yes, I did enjoy this one. As much a pleasure to hear as for you to narrate. I'll see you Monday dearest Dr
The perfect companion to a late night drive over a snowy, moon less, heavily wooded back road of Maine.
Just stay away from Derry, and that turn off to Salem's Lot.
Shadowcub69 Fortunately, I'm wwaayy north of all that. I'm up by Loring AFB that had real documented UFO sightings.
So true. I'm in the backwoods of Maine myself n I love these stories and Dr creepens voice on these cold snowy nights
Sounds pretty spooky
I'm in VT and I can say creepypasta's are second only to music for backroad drives.
Post apocalyptic stories are the *Best* stories! Thanks Dr Creepin
Whoever wrote this knows his/her gear and accessories and how to pack for SHTF...Enjoyed it..
George Treepwood they don't know their guns though
George Treepwood most of the SHTF shit is right but the gun descriptions are terrible. A Colt AR-15 is not an “Assault Rifle.” To be an “Assault rifle” it has to have selective fire and be fully automatic. Saying “a G29 Glock Safe action pistol” is redundant: the “G” in “G29” stands for Glock. The G29 is also chambered in 10mm Auto not 9mm Parrabellum. Noting that the G29 is safe action is unnecessary because all Glock handguns are safe action.
Also kinda nitpick-y but still thought I’d mention it: the author calls the G29 a “Pistol” which is technically correct but most people that know their guns use the word “Handgun”. the term “Pistol” is a bit outdated but still correct.
@@OutlawPrince45 I'm not sure if this is redundant, but the "AR" in "AR-15" doesn't stand for "Assault Rifle", but instead stands for "Armalite Rifle".
Jack DvR
Not really redundant, just another common misconception.
Well..except for something as vital as matches...
Great story, Wolfe of Baskervilles. I hope you have a sequel in mind. Thanks, Doc!
Thank you, I had a great time! The Continuing Story turned out to be amazing, yet difficult to understand, at this time. You're the best!
Wonderful read, as always, Doctor. (and glad I'm in a better state of mind listening!) A bedtime story from you is always a highlight of my evenings. Have a wonderful weekend!
This was a really good story . The first part was very apocalyptic/zombie survival.... the second was a very claustrophobic and eerie ghost style story. Like a good D.J- Mixin it up!🤘
woot woot! been looking forward to this, will relisten to part 1 too, so well written.........
YAY! part 2 how wonderful! Thanks Doc, Have a beautiful weekend!
Hey, Madame Raven how are you doing this Evening? I'm Great 😁 I hope that you have a Groovalicious Weekend Too 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
I'm doing great! I hope you have a fabulous weekend!
I will Madame Raven 💋 thank You ❣ much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Starting my Friday, with the good doctor himself. It's always a pleasure.
Heyyy Cady D how are you doing this Evening? I'm Great 😁 I hope that you have a Groovalicious Weekend Too 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Sexy Grandma Darkness Hey there miss lady, Make sure you have a fabulous weekend! I already know you will, lol.
You got that right 😉..oh yeah!! FYI Dr Creepens & G.M.Danielson are doing a St Patrick's Creepy pasta Tomorrow 😊pass it On.. okay 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Thank you! I love being able to listen to the whole stories all at once. I really appreciate when you do them! Have a nice weekend Doctor. 🙂
Mae Lewis ur very pretty
Chris D. Thank you! 🙂
A BRILLIANT work from a master storyteller! I was beginning to find the post apocalyptic genre boring but this...was simply exceptional. Thank you for your excellent narration. More from this author please!
Oh yeah driving and listen to the amazing dr.creepen my friend I love your videos and I love when you have a Series well have a wonderful weekend my friend take care be safe
This story was making me hella anxious. I had to hear it through though. I guess that what makes a good story.
Awesome as always. One of the best narrators (no repeated sentences or long pauses etc.). Also, already up to 54k!!!
A wonderful end to a horrendous week. Just what the doctor ordered. Thank you. Have a stupendous weekend.
Thanks Doc!! I've been chillin in my hammock all morning this was a treat!!
Wow, quite nice
Definitely up there with Dark Somnium although you partake in the etiquette of the tale you speak. Very nicely achieved and yes that voice is so good
Damn! Such an excellent story, and so many details were correct! Especially firearms and the like, so many don’t know what’s what and they tend to keep it vague. Praise to the author, Wolfe of Baskervilles, for an intensely enjoyable tale! And thanks to our Dr C for delivering it to us all. 👍👍👍☠️
""...relatively sharp..." "She had the means to defend herself" Then the attempted clever Shakespearian tie-ins. Wow. Amazing writing ha ha ha. An A for effort, though. And yes, physical exertion with no caloric intake will definitely result in muscular deterioration. "One by one, they fell...such fodder!" Wow, this has been done and so much more entertainingly. Great use of the phrase "one by one" twice in the same paragraph. I am available to help edit your work to bring it to its full potential, and in all seriousness, I can provide exceptional assistance. There's something salvageable here, I'm certain.
Excellently read Doctor, I really enjoyed this one. I would love to hear more if the author makes a follow up or a part 3 and find out what could possibly happen next. This story has a brilliant premise and has some pretty immersive, well structured writing. Great video as always!
This was fantastic. Definitely an ending I didn't see coming. A continuation of this would be greatly appreciated 😁😁
This was so excellent I didn’t want it to end!
Wow I liked this one Doctor! I wasn’t expecting all the psychological horror themes mixed in with the grim setting...the situation she’s in kept me thinking of typical post-apocalypse type scenarios. Great narration as always, happy Friday! 🙂
Terrifying. Just Terrifying. I loved it... listened to part one and then i had to find part 2 to hear the end. I loved it. Its amazing how our minds can play tricks on us. Ill admit i found myself checking the locks several times while i listened. Thanks again Dr. Creepen for another nerve racking tale!!
OHHH baby i appreciate you so much for uploading the rest of this gem. I've been waiting for this one :) Enjoy your weekend Doc !
Now that im watching it im glad i waited for part two to come out great story! 👏
I arrived a little to the party: I am speechless, this story is too marvelous for words! This be a wonderful series.
Thanks Doc for the excellent narration! I thoroughly enjoyed this story! I don't have to tell you how wonderful your narrations are, you already know.
Dr.Creepen I have been able to sleep soundly because of your amazing narration! I have insomnia and anxiety and depression and PTSD. But your voice and the stories make me so happy and I am so grateful to you! Much thanks and much love dear Dr.Creepen!
It took me longer than it should to finish this because of work. It was worth it! It was a fantastic story. You are the best!
I wish I would have found you sooner! You take us to a place where the stress of the day just melts away.
Terra M me to :)
I love this so much ❤ you might be happy to know that I am currently working on quite a long story for you ^-^
P.s- I still get giddy when you like my comments xD im a fan for life , doc. Im so glad to have stumbled upon your channel
I'm in the same boat, a fan for life(ffl)! I need to start a "Dr.Creepen Fan Club"
Thanks for a fantastic story Doc,have a wonderful weekend!
I feel like this didn’t need to be a two parter. Nothing really happened in part 1
I agree..but I can see how some people don't engage if its a vary long story. Not me! I love AnYtHiNg with the Doctors deep voice melting the words off the pages and slithering into my realm.. My ears✌❤😺🌌❤
It's like Christmas, my Birthday and Easter came on the same day!🤗
Oh we got over an hour of Doctor Creepen's heavenly angelic musical voice. We are going to be in total bliss for sure. You just made us some HAPPY people Doctor Creepen.
tiffany benefield evening Tiff!!! have a relaxing weekend 😚
L.andM.E ASMR
Hey LandM!!! Thank you!!!!! Hope you have a wonderful weekend too.
Oh Happy Happy Joy Joy 😆 we Get dr Creepens for a whole Hour!! Best Friday Night ever!!! I'm So Excited I can bearly control my self...lol 😅 I hope that your having a Wonderful Night too 💋 Tiffany much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Sexy Grandma Darkness
Hey Grandma!!! You're exactly right!!!!! It is beyond description. Hope you have a great weekend too and much love back to you too Grandma!!!!!!!💚🎂😘🍰💙🍬👌🍭💜😇🍺💐👍🍹💛🍷😍🍻💖🍸
Thank You 💋 Tiffany I hope that you are having a Wonderful Night too ❣ much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
Thanks Doctor, I so look forward to your stories. The mix of horror and your soothing voice is fantastic!
Well I'm in time for part two and it's lunchtime..yummy chicken cheese enchilada soup and Ritz crackers and sexy Dr.Creepen.......priceless......happy weekend doc see ya Monday.......💖💖💋
Dr. Creepen - you, a bottle of wine & a nice hot bath is the best combination ever! Love you, keep up the good work! ♡♡♡
Awesome ❣ much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
jayda posante I am a Romantic And I like you :)
You sparked jealousy. I'll have to prepare better.
Glad to finally hear part 2 was anxious to see where this story would lead!!! I'm a new subscriber to your channel but I love your content
💖💖💖💖😇
I know it's just a story but one thing bugged me. She couldn't start a fire in the beginning. But it's really easy to start a fire indoors with no wind or rain. I think everyone knows the batteries wires and anything that fibric like trick. And that's just one way to start a fire there are hundreds of ways.
Another great story. Very well done.
Happy St.Patricks Day doc! Awesome story, relaxing and waiting to be scared!
I've been so excited for this one!
Thank you, you made my weekend better
Jennifer Joiner ur very pretty
Always loved a good apocalyptic story!👏🏿👍🏿
Another prefect narration, I relisten your stories just to here you over and over again, until new vids come out, 😘
I never got to listen to the first part...YAY! A whole hour of awesomeness;)
nice set up for potential part 3 - amirite ppl?
A fun psychological thriller story! Thanks for the great read. Just a bit of feedback to the author, should they read the comment section. More research on the technical details of the firearms the character carries would go a long way to not distract from the story. #1 Glock 29 is 10mm not 9mm. #2 An AR15 is just a semi-automatic rifle, not an "Assault Rifle" as it does not have full automatic fire capability. #3 The 5.56 caliber rounds, though close to .22 caliber (.223) are not referred to as "Long Rifle" as this is usually a term describing a specific case length in .22 caliber. Also two minor points. First, almost all restaurants have mounted can openers. Second, the story repeatedly mentions the lead character needing water badly, but simply ignores the rain that seems to be falling regularly through the duration of the story. Not critical points, but still distracting inconsistencies from an otherwise competent character.
Helluva good story! Wet and bloody
That was amazing. It totally had me on the edge. Thank you Dr Creepen
WOW! Excellent story! And as always wonderful narrating.
Keep it up like this story telling.
been waiting all week for this Doc
I was waiting for this all day I'm new so I only seen the first 1 today. love the channel and your storytelling. I'm from the uk its 10 so I missed it by an hour 😭 I was listening to the my friends tried making a found footage movie story 😂
Dawning flames And Setting waves Welcome to the Pasta party
Thank you 😘
Absolutely Amazing story.
Loved it my friend great ending
The marathon is over, Doc! Quite enjoyed these! I will now wait patiently for w/e you got in-store for us next week! ;) Thanks much!
Best friday ever ♥ Thank you for posting ♥
Hi how are you doing this Evening? I'm Great 😁 I hope that you have a Wonderful Night too 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
I'm good thank you dear :) and I hope you have an awesome weekend ♡
Thank You 💋 much love Sexy Grandma Darkness ✌💙💙
I think ur very pretty :)
Chris D. Sorry for the confusion dear, but its a picture of a famous horror themed actress named Elvira
ar-15 is not an assault rifle!! =) awesome story!!!!
Then what is it?
@Dr.Creepen you deserve so many more subscribers! Absolutely love your stories and narrating voice
That was fucking fantastic. You are the finest narrator I've ever heard, my friend.
Wow this one is amazing.. nightmare fuel , and some plot twists I dont think this could have gotten better this is the best one yet!!
Really enjoyed this on....
Thanks to the doc for reading and upload, and thanks to the writer of the story...
Immediately upon starting this story I felt as sense of dread because too soon I knew it would be over and I would be begging for more...
Awesome! Great story! We just watched this old 80s scifi horror B movie last night called Viscious Lips that totally reminds me of this. I wonder if the author's seen it?! It could be inspired by it, its ideas are pretty inspiring even if it's execution is a bit corny, lo-fi & silly. It's definitely worth a watch of your into this kinda films.
Anyways awesome story Dr. C, we love u!
I ❤ listening to your stories every night! You have a great voice for story telling and your channel is one of my faves!! ❤
Hearing these anecdotes makes me appreciate the impact that these creepypasta channels can have on someone who is enduring adverse circumstances such as chronic illness be it physical or mental. Although good story telling doesn't cure illness, I'm so pleased that people gain a sort of peace or sense of tranquility from it to take them away from their ailments, even for a short time. For me, it's purely entertainment. I have no enduring health conditions. I just love listening to the voice and material. However, I do now have a much deeper appreciation for what these fantastic narrators do. Much love to all of you people out there ❤ Stay creepy everybody.
I'm turning all my friends on to you Van Pasta!! 🗣️🍻
Great reading, as usual. Didn't care much for the story though. Very teenage Mary Sue, complete with the heterochromia. Felt alot like "Twilight, but with Zombies". But, as I said, your reading of it was top notch. Well done.
i listened to this at five this morning still half asleep in bed, it gave me nightmares in my half awake state im listening to it my second time now twelve hours later lol its a bad as i remembered thankyou soooo much to the author and thankyou Dr creepen for reading it to us all this story is truly fantastic!!!!!
Yes, Ty for this awesome story and read sweetheart ☺💕
Your stories help me alot trough night shift dr. You are the best narrator everr lovee your channel.. :)
Let's do this!
Absolutely amazing Thanks Dr. Creepen!
Loving this tale Doc... Thank you so much ☺️
I’m hooked on dr . Creepen narrations....
Absolutely 5 star story and read
We need a part 3 !!
Yeahhs a new story for me too get lost in love your stuff Dr helps me threw the day who needs a movie when we got you to narrate a story for us that makes it even better then watching a movie
Well that was one of the longest weeks of my life.
that was really good props to you creepen and to the author
I'm loving...& kinda dreading these post-apocalyptic tales!
Ok if this man is a doctor then he's the most awesome sounding doctor on the planet
Incredible narration and story as always! Just what the Doctor (Creepen) ordered! 😉
I love this story. Actual feelers for it lol!! Thank you Dear Dr.😍😍😍😍
This is my favorite to sleep to so far out of.. idk.. 1000 videos from different people? You are the only person on par with NaturesTemper
The author should’ve really researched firearms, the first min and a half had me cringing so hard I’m still debating finishing the story. It’s like saying Ford was started in Russia and a 4 cylinder is commonly known as a v8.
I gave up. I can't take it seriously after that. Maybe someday - not tonight.
As soon as he says "assault rifle" it made me cringe.
"Banana description" magazine. Ewww.
Hay damn it stop nit picking who the hell cares this is a damn good story I bet neither one of you idiots could never do this good even on your dreams so dont criticize just appreciate the story
@@buckylamb8674 i disagree.. I write regularly and i have several publications. First rule of good writing. Research things so you dont sound like a jackass.