Great storyline, bit of Punisher mixed with the Mechanic and a touch of Dexter thrown in, topped off with a hint of Shawshank - hope there's more of this character Thank you good Dr for this one, love the tale and of course your narration
@@monageter9264 actually it's not, while I agree there are some similar elements it's a distinctly different story, hence the references I listed for their similarities
He should have told the cops in the hospital, "Oh, the knife was still stuck in her when I found her. I was afraid to remove it. It must have fallen out on the way over here."
Man this really helped me tonight I use ur videos to get me outta my own head in a sense so I greatly appreciate all the hardwork n time u put in it truly shows as u my sir are the best ! Thanks DOC!! Enjoy ur Vacation.
Dr. Creepen, you should expand your backround music and SFX. What you made and use is great, but having the same few things in the background tends to rip me out of one story and connect it to other prominent parts of other good stories. Just a suggestion. I thoroughly enjoy what you create and appreciate the effort that goes into making these videos. 🙃
Thanks for your hard work. Your story telling takes up the void of being lonely as I am. I like to write my own stories just letting my mind work and I ride along. It’s truly a beautiful thing. I’ve been a long time listen and will be around as long as you have stories to keep my brain occupied all day and nights for all this time and much more to come. Again, thanks!
How could they search his car without a warrant? Exigent circumstance would only have kicked in if someone was in danger IN the car. The evidence would have been inadmissible.
Dude I was about ready to block and other things with the doggo close to the end of the video. Your truly a awesome storyteller. Great story and video!
Two hours of that velvety Smooth million dollar voice of yours. Thanks again my Friend. Remember my Friends. A creepypasta a day. Will keep the good Dr at bay lol 😆
The AR in .556 uses more of a double stack stick type magazine than a banana type magazine. The size and shape of the ammo dictates the size and shape of the magazine. The 7.62X39 rounds have a banana type magazine because of the shape of the round. Particularly the necked down portion. Small front to a larger backside is what causes the curve of the magazine to make the Banana curve in those. Where as with the .556 it has less of a difference between the ends and it causes it to have more of a stick shape with WAY less curve. This is also why pistol mags are about all stick type. Since they (in most cases) have no neck down.
Good morning Doctor, and good morning all. I've never had the experience of intentionally killing someone in an illegal setting, and it's not something that I want any experience of either! From what I've heard from people who ARE experienced killers (legally), there are generally 3 types of people, those who just regard it as being part of the job, those who hate it, but understand that it's something that needs to be done, and those who are dangerous because they get an adrenaline buzz from it. The third category really are just addicts who haven't yet discovered extreme sports for a less antisocial way of getting the buzz! Hope everyone is having a great weekend......Mine starts at 9pm :D
That certainly seems true. The commonalities between some soldiers/paramilitary operators who enjoy killing, and spree "thrill killers" who do it for adrenaline are uncanny. I wouldn't be surprised if a good chunk of people who are government sanctioned killers then end up being serial killers, but having done it for an actual job, they know how to cover their tracks much more efficiently than people who haven't had that experience. It's crazy to think of killing people for a job as "experience" lol. Put that one on your CV
Guys i need help! I want to find a story i listened to. I listened to a lot of them, and i don't remember the name, so its kind of hard to find. It starts as like a post apocalyptical/invasion ambient. The point of the story was to make you believe humans were invaded, but it was actually the humans who were invading on nature... Its like a 20ish minute story. I think Doc put it in a compilation which makes it even harder to find. Thank you!
Hello Dr creepen, The way you change your expressions in your voice for each character remind me of a play Was derived by CS Lewis called the Screwtape Letters, you might have heard of it.. Anyway I just want to pay you a compliment on that!!
The full conversation copied from "the boondock saints" at about 38 min really made this feel cheap, hope the rest isn't jus a rip off of the film. Oh I wrote this an as I was writing got to a copy of the poker scene from the same film, hope this changes soon 🙄
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This is so many TV shows and movies circled into one!
Boondocks Saints
Dexter
L&O SVU
Sons of Anarchy
All blended together! 👍🏻
Great storyline, bit of Punisher mixed with the Mechanic and a touch of Dexter thrown in, topped off with a hint of Shawshank - hope there's more of this character
Thank you good Dr for this one, love the tale and of course your narration
Actually it is straight out of the script of Boondock saints
@@monageter9264 actually it's not, while I agree there are some similar elements it's a distinctly different story, hence the references I listed for their similarities
@@charlieghostwolf6161 are you kidding. Reference is one thing. Direct plagiarism is another
There are several lines which are clearly Boondocks saints (you should recruit ) scene for example. Still good read.
@@efuller6770right this is just straight copying boondock saints
He should have told the cops in the hospital, "Oh, the knife was still stuck in her when I found her. I was afraid to remove it. It must have fallen out on the way over here."
Great story, the author must be a big fan of "The Boondocks Saints", used some of their lines word for word... One of my favorite movies 😉
Im glad someone else noticed that....
Not only was the speech from his friend from Boondock Saints but it seems like the plot to the poker game was too
Yes I was paying homage to an excellent movie. Cheers
@@BV-Auto Active duty myself, good to see a fellow green-suit writing and getting recognized enough to get a video.
@@wolfman5349 hey thanks. Yeah I wrote a long time ago when I was going through some shit. It helped me get through it. Hooray!
I love the Boondock Saints lines
This upload couldn't have come at a better time. Thanks doc.
You get em Doc !! Death is too good for this bestiary of poker players and smoochers ! 😡
This one legit needs a fricking sequel, i loved it, some good action-drama.
I LOVE the Boondock Saints reference in this one!
Man this really helped me tonight I use ur videos to get me outta my own head in a sense so I greatly appreciate all the hardwork n time u put in it truly shows as u my sir are the best ! Thanks DOC!! Enjoy ur Vacation.
I love these types of stories. Living vicariously through an author.
In the ballpark of Boondock Saints narrated by you.... pure awesome
Yes Boondock Saints is one of the best vigilante movies ever made
Ballpark, some of them were exact excerpts from the movie
Glad to know I wasn't the only one who noticed a monologue from one of my favorite movies
@@higgi1234ifynot just dialogue but plot points and scenes lol
was just wondering if this story was inspired by the punisher and at 29:55 that was definitely confirmed lol
Nd the boondock saints. A fair bit was word for word from the movie.
That reference to The Boondock Saints has me dying, props to the author!
I hope this series is going to be continued! Thanks Doc, an oldie, but a goody.
I'm like half way through... The reading is way better then the writing... Love this channel though!
At times, there are many, many writers. Some great, some not so much.
Lol its not as bad as some I've listened to though
Yeah I wrote this during a very difficult time in my life.... Many of it was rushed. Thanks for listening
@@BV-Auto hope things are better for you now. At least you write, contribute some.
@@tonyromano6220 / Thank you, life has improved. I've been given a second chance In life. God has blessed me.
From The Punisher to Shawshank Redemption
Dr. Creepen, you should expand your backround music and SFX. What you made and use is great, but having the same few things in the background tends to rip me out of one story and connect it to other prominent parts of other good stories. Just a suggestion. I thoroughly enjoy what you create and appreciate the effort that goes into making these videos. 🙃
That's a really good suggestion. I hope he reads this and considers it.
He should ask dark somnium if he can borrow some tracks
The only shit part of this series is it’s clearly written by someone researched guns a lot but has no practical experience with them.
/k/ in a nutshell
This is my kind of story!!! I love it! Please do more stories like this???
That was absolutely amazing. Not a lot of times I stop the stories and look forward to picking them back up again well done.
It's a parody of the hells angels
Min 37ish boondock saints word 4 word. Great movie
One of my favorite so far Doc. Vigilante justice🤗
Fantastic!! Thankyou so very very much! You're the dog's danglies!!
I recognize the Boondock saints monologue. One of my all time faves.
Thanks for your hard work. Your story telling takes up the void of being lonely as I am. I like to write my own stories just letting my mind work and I ride along. It’s truly a beautiful thing. I’ve been a long time listen and will be around as long as you have stories to keep my brain occupied all day and nights for all this time and much more to come. Again, thanks!
It's been a few years since I last listened to this one.
Was a good story. Well worth listening to again.
Yeah, I appreciate u releasing the video, I hadn't heard it before!
How could they search his car without a warrant? Exigent circumstance would only have kicked in if someone was in danger IN the car. The evidence would have been inadmissible.
Good story!! Only heard parts of it!! Good one doc!
Thank you Dr Creepen for the awesome pasta. This was definitely a good one.🖤🖤
The Devils Minions lol . For some reason I picture the looking like the little minions except red instead of yellow
Thanks Doc! Just wondering, will you take this story further? LOVED 🥰 IT!
I did write more. Up to the Doc if it continues! Cheers
I've loved the series and long stories lately! I appreciate you!
Love the reading as always, good Dr! Author reused some dialog from Boonedock Saints but all in all a great tale!
Dude I was about ready to block and other things with the doggo close to the end of the video. Your truly a awesome storyteller. Great story and video!
Thanks!
❤
Very kind of you!
As soon as he said 3000gt vr4, I was thinking "that is the most unreliable "fast," car ever made"
Damn Doc, I do so love a good revenge story! Kudos to you and the writer.
Thanks Nancy! Cheers
I hate to say it but I enjoyed this story!!!☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️
Listened to this one years ago, very good.
The captain is talking g about planting evidence over the phone. I'm yelling at my phone. "What is wrong with you my guy!!!"
Thatsa good one... love your narrations, well written story, keep'em coming.. will look forward to an expanded universe on this caricature...
You are such a great narrator!
I remember this story!
The line talking about "good men with loving familes..." was taken from The Boondocks Saints!
Yes Frank Castle… loving this story
Very reminiscent of punisher, boondocks saints and some others. Part of the second part is literal word for word with the boondock saints.
if it has not been said the person took a clear line from the boondock saints movie lol nice.
Multiple
It's been a few yrs since I've listened to Dr.Creepen..
Two hours of that velvety Smooth million dollar voice of yours. Thanks again my Friend.
Remember my Friends. A creepypasta a day. Will keep the good Dr at bay lol 😆
Dayum Good story!!! Exceptional Narration!!! I can't wait to hear more about this one!!! Can't Wait!!!
The AR in .556 uses more of a double stack stick type magazine than a banana type magazine. The size and shape of the ammo dictates the size and shape of the magazine. The 7.62X39 rounds have a banana type magazine because of the shape of the round. Particularly the necked down portion. Small front to a larger backside is what causes the curve of the magazine to make the Banana curve in those. Where as with the .556 it has less of a difference between the ends and it causes it to have more of a stick shape with WAY less curve. This is also why pistol mags are about all stick type. Since they (in most cases) have no neck down.
This seems sick
Like they say; Either you die a hero, or live long enough to become the villan..
Thank You Doctor ❤
Absolutely worth the wait!
If I turned to vigilantism I know I would cross the line and include those that anger me. So it's just a daydream. Thanks for the great story.
😎Hey Doc, this story was EPIC, thankyou!
Nice one brother👏
i don't know what id do without your stories doc thanks as always
This is basically the movie Boondock Saints. Great movie and this is a good story but once I put the two together that’s all I could picture!
Same
Merry Christmas
Happy New Year.
huh it's July. nearly August.
@@felicityjohnston9276 it’s December 25th in my timezone
@@Zeabox smart-ass
Need more of this story.😊
PLEASE SAY THERE IS MORE TO COME LIKE N A SERIES
WOULD LOVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
PEACE OUT 💛
One of your best doc C. I loved every second. Yr the best
Good morning Doctor, and good morning all. I've never had the experience of intentionally killing someone in an illegal setting, and it's not something that I want any experience of either! From what I've heard from people who ARE experienced killers (legally), there are generally 3 types of people, those who just regard it as being part of the job, those who hate it, but understand that it's something that needs to be done, and those who are dangerous because they get an adrenaline buzz from it. The third category really are just addicts who haven't yet discovered extreme sports for a less antisocial way of getting the buzz! Hope everyone is having a great weekend......Mine starts at 9pm :D
That certainly seems true. The commonalities between some soldiers/paramilitary operators who enjoy killing, and spree "thrill killers" who do it for adrenaline are uncanny. I wouldn't be surprised if a good chunk of people who are government sanctioned killers then end up being serial killers, but having done it for an actual job, they know how to cover their tracks much more efficiently than people who haven't had that experience. It's crazy to think of killing people for a job as "experience" lol. Put that one on your CV
..and listening to Slayer..well, I'm glad you at least didn't mention our song dear Dr.
Greetings from Netherland
Oh, well, I like your photo's better.Thanks for the upload. Don't wear yourself out!
Good story Doc,
About 35min mark those lines are almost verbatim from boondock saints
Love that story doctor I enjoyed it...
Great story I like the long ones😊😊😊😊
Guys i need help! I want to find a story i listened to. I listened to a lot of them, and i don't remember the name, so its kind of hard to find. It starts as like a post apocalyptical/invasion ambient. The point of the story was to make you believe humans were invaded, but it was actually the humans who were invading on nature... Its like a 20ish minute story. I think Doc put it in a compilation which makes it even harder to find. Thank you!
I know, he takes too long to finish one lol joking. I love this one.
I love this story.
Disengaging is turning the safety off, engaging is turning the safety on......
I love the Boondock Saints plagiarism about 38 minutes in…
Someone is a fan of boondocks saints, still a great story
I reslly enjoyed this reading. I dont care if it was lifted from somewhere else it was still very good and the narration was perfect.
Oh and I hope you have a Great Vacation, a mucb deserved one! ✌️😁
brilliant looking forwards to more
Great story, thanks to both the author and you.
This feels so much like the tv show Dexter.
He called it his "dark passenger"
In this story its called " dark follower"
Many similarities lol
Beretta putting holes in your sweater
🖤🙌🏻🫶🏻✌🏻Thank you Dr
This was a really cool story. Thanks heaps Doc ♥️♥️♥️🇦🇺✌️
He could have just dropped her off outside of the hospital and took off like so many people do in violent related incidents.
This story is legit. Is there more ?
Fantastic" "As Always, Happy Holiday"🍦☕🍻
Great fun!! ❤🎉😊
Love a good movie quote Love The boondock saints
Wowwow wow what a story thank you for the read friend ...
"arise suspicion" -- close but no. "raise suspicion."
DAMN EXCELLENT STORY. 5*
As a gun guy the way he talks about them is painfully bad but the story is so good
Perfect bravo
At the 2H 17m mark it says “Tonight’s tale of vigilante Justice is “The Last Radio Call” woops
In the description too
That was awesome...
Hello Dr creepen, The way you change your expressions in your voice for each character remind me of a play Was derived by CS Lewis called the Screwtape Letters, you might have heard of it.. Anyway I just want to pay you a compliment on that!!
Sorry it came from a book that turned into a play Called the screwtape letters
I'm binging you my Dark Smooth Doc. Nine hours of Hunting a Killer wasn't enough of you for me my sweeting❤
Side note enjoy your vacation! 💚💚💚💚💚
The full conversation copied from "the boondock saints" at about 38 min really made this feel cheap, hope the rest isn't jus a rip off of the film. Oh I wrote this an as I was writing got to a copy of the poker scene from the same film, hope this changes soon 🙄
I dont think he is the person that writes what he reads so he probably wasn't aware
@felicityjohnston9276 yea I know its other people that write, jus thought it was a shame the writer got lazy
@@derekgardiner3583 totally agree
The pool hall and poker scean was boondocks as well like word for word
That’s so crazy , I just bought a 3000gt a week ago !!!