''They Knocked…'' by Mmm-Brainss | DOC'S CAMPFIRE TALES [EXCLUSIVE STORY]

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  • Опубликовано: 12 ноя 2024

Комментарии • 360

  • @cidangst2986
    @cidangst2986 7 лет назад +21

    My power was out for the past two days because of wonderful North Dakota, winter weather. The last two nights I sat in the dark bundled up reading by flashlight, freezing my ass off. No TV, no wifi, NO HEAT. The whole town was shut down (no power anywhere), great setting for a horror story, 'ey.... Anyways, power finally came on tonight and it is awesome to have a good story waiting. Thanks Doc. Great job as always.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Hope this made the power coming back all the better!

    • @chrisparker5796
      @chrisparker5796 3 месяца назад

      Is your power still on......

  • @dread7684
    @dread7684 2 года назад +1

    revisiting your old videos and i keep getting fucking terrified by the damn clowns LMFAO love your vids, creepen!

  • @angelasmith5351
    @angelasmith5351 7 лет назад +19

    I live in st. Louis and I've never been near any woods but this scared the hell out of me! thanks Doc, this is one of my favorites so far.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +3

      Watch out for those weird kids and stay safe, Angela!

    • @yourshadow5501
      @yourshadow5501 7 лет назад +5

      Dr. Creepen I love stories about the black eyed kids. And this story was masterfully written and told. Made my day (only because that situation has a snowball's chance in hell of happening to me). ^_^

  • @kenmark1240
    @kenmark1240 4 года назад +2

    Black eyed children wow one of the urban legends true and scary. They say those kids are normally sited in Texas in isolated areas an woods or middle of nowhere I never thought they would be killers trying to ask someone to open door. It's one scary story dr. Creepen. Scary an awesome thank you for the black eyed children story.

  • @robertofwar2355
    @robertofwar2355 7 лет назад +11

    Well done on this story doctor. Your tone just made it all the more unsettling. I've been listening to all your old stories and MAN ARE THEY GOOD. Looking forward to seeing what the future has in store for you.

  • @madcat4301
    @madcat4301 7 лет назад +6

    MmmBrainss, kudos to you, this was one genuinely scary tale. And kudos to you too, Dr. Creepen, for your magnificent narration. Warmed the cockles of my evil heart to read that the story took place here in my hometown, St. Louis Missouri. The fuglies here are notoriously rude and impolite. That Ozark bigfoot down the street is one nasty character. His house is usually covered with flies because he won't put his trash on the curb for pickup. And don't get me started on those gremlins next door....

  • @mirandah9758
    @mirandah9758 7 лет назад +9

    This was a good one. And with you narrating, it always makes the story better! I really think you have the most amazing voice I have ever heard in my life, and I mean it! Thank you once again for taking the time to share your gift with us. I look forward to hearing what you create next.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Thank you very much for these kind words, Miranda :-)

  • @thetalkingbear
    @thetalkingbear 7 лет назад +50

    I'm fascinated by black eyed children. Those were worse by a few factors. Also would have been polite of the realtor to disclose that the nearby woods were infested by demonic children.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +10

      Realtors, eh!

    • @squeakydolphin9615
      @squeakydolphin9615 7 лет назад +1

      The Talking Bear they just want to sell
      It's their job, whether you like it or them

    • @skylartipton909
      @skylartipton909 6 лет назад +1

      So agreed! Technically by law they do not have to disclose any supernatural things. If there was a murder though they have to release that to potential clients.....and btw this is the scariest bek story ever. You have the perfect voice!!!

    • @thedivineswordpoet4401
      @thedivineswordpoet4401 6 лет назад +1

      @@skylartipton909
      That's because it wasn't thought of enough to be a law. And the government doesn't care to even try to believe in supernatural things

    • @dannymiller7129
      @dannymiller7129 4 года назад

      Black eyed children are a myth cooked up by charlatans.

  • @deadisbetter6177
    @deadisbetter6177 7 лет назад +221

    Omg!! Thank you for narrating my story. You did a spectacular job. Good show old boy! 😁

    • @killer4kash
      @killer4kash 7 лет назад +5

      MmmBrainss! Very impressive and enjoyable tale. I look forward to seeing more from a fellow writer.

    • @deadisbetter6177
      @deadisbetter6177 7 лет назад +4

      Justin Farrar Thank you! I really appreciate it. The Dr really brought it life. Do you have any of your writings posted? I'd love to read a fellow writers work. 😁

    • @angelzavala5637
      @angelzavala5637 7 лет назад +4

      MmmBrainss! - Great story, screwed me up on the boy crawling on fours! lol.

    • @deadisbetter6177
      @deadisbetter6177 7 лет назад +5

      Angel Zavala haha! That's one of my personal fears. A creepy thing on all fours. I'm glad it gave you the creeps! Lol

    • @deadisbetter6177
      @deadisbetter6177 7 лет назад +4

      Adam Steed Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. A lot of the credit goes to the Dr though. He made it come alive. I'm glad I could be museful (see what I did there? Lol). I don't see any other comments though. But I'd be interested in hearing a continuation. I just felt a cliff hanger was fitting haha

  • @Jonathan-ph8pr
    @Jonathan-ph8pr 7 лет назад +1

    This is geniusly narrated and written story. Wow this has to be one of the creepiest narrations Ive heard on these channels. Good stuff and cant wait to listen to more from you guys!!!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Thanks for your kind words, Jonathan.

  • @Falsh125
    @Falsh125 7 лет назад +10

    You are getting better and scarier by the day!

  • @theredqueen6911
    @theredqueen6911 7 лет назад +6

    I always figured I would have no problem taking out creepy possessed kids. another great story +MmmBrainss! Doc, Great pick to end the year. Happy New Years from Washington State!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Happy New Year to you too!

  • @CaliforniaCowgirl707
    @CaliforniaCowgirl707 7 лет назад +3

    Great job on this story, it was super creepy and makes you not wanna go outside when its dark outside. Keep up the good work Dr. Van Creepen

  • @Tazirai
    @Tazirai 7 лет назад +13

    I love the black eyed kid stories. I've always wanted to write one about them... Great narration as usual.
    Your collaboration on Dogman/Rake is awesome. You bring that added OOMPH! to the tale.
    There wasn't much in this world or any other for that matter that Abigail despised.
    She'd met and chatted with many...things out there. Not all of them good, nor bad.
    Most just existed. There wasn't much that made her overly angry or fearful.
    Most of the "old things" that existed had no wish to be bothered, or bother others.
    Much of those encounters were in part misunderstandings. Misunderstandings that
    sometimes led to bad things happening. Some of them viewed anything, not themselves
    as food. Much as humans view other animals as either pet or food. Neither good nor evil.
    However, there was one classification of being that infuriated her and made her question existence at times. The bully.She'd encountered many things in her travels and let them live simply because they may be disgusting and vile to others, and defended themselves or their lands and homes. But sought no intentional malice.
    The bully, however, whether Echo, human, or Old Thing, she despised them. They were a different entity altogether.What scared her most was knowing she could not save everyone, and this is why she spent time alone these days. A day ago, she felt something as she drove through a random town, in a random state. Drawn to the vacant property, she saw the for sale sign on the lawn. Her eyes narrowed, and she could feel her blood boil. Pulling out her cell phone, she dialed the number.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +2

      Definitely hope to return to Abigail in the near future: it's on my schedule!

    • @Tazirai
      @Tazirai 7 лет назад +1

      No worries mate. I enjoy commenting like this anyway, well as long as the reader and author are cool with it. :)

  • @jackbentley5328
    @jackbentley5328 7 лет назад +11

    Very good stuff. You're my favorite narrator lately.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Glad you like my work!

  • @angelzavala5637
    @angelzavala5637 7 лет назад +4

    I lost my shit when I imagined the boy coming on all fours. "Holy Fuck!?"

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      You and me both, Angel!

  • @lorettacupples1603
    @lorettacupples1603 7 лет назад +8

    Oh My Gosh!! Here we are again out in the woods!!! I can assure you,,I Won't be going outside, for sure!!! That was Creepy as all git out!!! You were The perfect person to narrate it ! I liked that you didn't have background music,,,it would have taken away from the horror of it! Thanks for another Great read!!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Some stories seem to fit with music, while others feel like they should be told around the campfire!

  • @MANNY100123
    @MANNY100123 7 лет назад +13

    I'm so glad I'm still on vacation right now! It's so nice to just relax for a while and listen to one of your narrations! ;)

    • @angelzavala5637
      @angelzavala5637 7 лет назад +4

      MANNY~EmberDim - Nothing at all can stop dark evil. Unless you are Jesus. lol.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +4

      Hope you enjoyed this one :-)

  • @hannable70
    @hannable70 7 лет назад +1

    Heh heh, some time around minute 34 when the main character is calling a priest, Dr. Creepen did one of those accidental word reversals that happen sometimes. He narrated, "I could hear his voice in his age" instead of saying, "I could hear his age in his voice." Just got a little chuckle out of that.
    Thanks for all the stories, Doctor. I've been binge-listening for the past few days. You do have one of the best voices for this sort of thing, very professional.

  • @danielgoetz7821
    @danielgoetz7821 6 лет назад +1

    Excellent story by an amazing narrator. You've quickly become one of my favorite narrators.

  • @amandastephanie8989
    @amandastephanie8989 7 лет назад +14

    Omg this one was wicked creepy. I was listening to it before bed and had to shut it off and saved it tor the morning it scared me so bad

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      It's rare I get scared reading one of these... glad I recorded it during the day!!!

  • @maitesheart
    @maitesheart 7 лет назад +2

    O sweet baby Jesus! This scared and creeped me out at the same time. I love your voice as you read. I feel like I am there. Great job!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Thanks for your kind words, Maria. This is one of my personal favorites!

  • @perrymathis4557
    @perrymathis4557 6 лет назад +1

    OMG this needs to be a movie or horror short!!!! Loved it

  • @dhumin610
    @dhumin610 7 лет назад +7

    i was hoping the relator was the monsters leader/mother and she was just giving them toy/food

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +3

      That would have been a fantastic twist!

  • @hyfryd6677
    @hyfryd6677 7 лет назад +26

    For the love of god please don't stop uploading

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +8

      I won't, I promise!

    • @djentile7773
      @djentile7773 6 лет назад

      Dr. Creepen kept your promise so far!

  • @samysany
    @samysany 5 лет назад

    This was insanely scary ! Thank you for your remarkable job in narrating this...

  • @Kehwanna
    @Kehwanna 5 лет назад +1

    You live in St. Louis, one of the most homicidal cities in not only the U.S, but one of the top 100 violent cities in the world. I would not be surprised if ragging psychopaths were not the only thing to worry about, but rather aggressive paranormal entities as well.

  • @aarongates2036
    @aarongates2036 5 лет назад +2

    I just saw an old reading from you I loved all the evil clowns in the beginning "they knocked " I love it ... I know u ask if u should change the beginning u start your read I said no but after seeing that maybe cross them both together some how

  • @darkfae5423
    @darkfae5423 7 лет назад +3

    Brava! This scared me silly and that's not an easy thing to do. Loved it!

  • @stevebell7628
    @stevebell7628 5 лет назад

    Wow doc! I listen to a couple of your stories every day and this one gave me a serious case of the jim-jams!

  • @heidi681
    @heidi681 7 лет назад +5

    I love your confession of fear while narrating, Dr. Creepen! A comrade in terror, hehehe. Thank you, my evening is complete. The author's name is wonderful, as well as her story. You bring out the best in each one. 😏😮

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +2

      Very kind of you to say so, Heidi!
      It's a rare story indeed that affects me while narrating; that's how I knew this was a good one.

  • @ludinev9726
    @ludinev9726 4 года назад +1

    “She sat the bottle of wine on the counter and said:”
    Thats when I got an AMBER alert and jumped

  • @Yuanigem
    @Yuanigem 7 лет назад +9

    love your narrations your voice really is perfect for creepy pastas etc. keep it up and I'll Def continue to like and share your work .

  • @wanderingcalamity360
    @wanderingcalamity360 6 лет назад +1

    Great job on this one. Got me thoroughly unnerved.

  • @jeremyporter5540
    @jeremyporter5540 4 года назад

    Dr.
    I can't wait to hear another one. I'm hooked I can't wait to get home from work just to hear more. Thank you for all your content. I'm getting my favorite drink as I text. And ready for more!

  • @melindaahmed1392
    @melindaahmed1392 7 лет назад +7

    Happy New Year Dr. Creepen!! So glad to have found your channel this year!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Happy New Year to you, too!

  • @FIONA21ful
    @FIONA21ful 7 лет назад +2

    Can't beat a spooky story. Black eyed kids are a intriguing subject too. . You read beautifully.
    I've subbed😁...love your voice lad. Greetings from Ireland.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Hello from Istanbul!

    • @FIONA21ful
      @FIONA21ful 6 лет назад

      Dr. Creepen Merhaba!! 😘

  • @Samualethemonke
    @Samualethemonke 6 лет назад

    Hands down one of the best stories I've heard in a while

  • @shermgood4547
    @shermgood4547 6 лет назад +1

    Wow great story great narrative 👍👍👍👍

  • @killer4kash
    @killer4kash 7 лет назад +16

    Amazing story. I've heard others like it but none are so well told. Begs the question, how do you defeat an unstoppable evil?

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +3

      How indeed?

    • @AnomalyINC
      @AnomalyINC 7 лет назад +3

      You move out of its way, and it'll just keep going past you! Since it can't stop, it'll run right into a wall!
      See, this is why I am still alive, and Van Helsing is not!

    • @WhiteManOnCampus
      @WhiteManOnCampus 7 лет назад +1

      You call the Hellsing Organization.

    • @TheFirstAurora
      @TheFirstAurora 7 лет назад +3

      You call Sam and Dean winchester, or Buffy at that point.

    • @kingsizeblues616
      @kingsizeblues616 6 лет назад

      Or Ghostbusters

  • @greepthesheep01
    @greepthesheep01 5 лет назад +3

    "maybe you need some more time"
    Her:
    "OH HELL NAAAAAWWWW"

  • @sandracrosse8337
    @sandracrosse8337 7 лет назад

    GREAT storytelling Dr. Creepen..
    Brilliant!
    U have a new fan...

  • @unwantedangel9025
    @unwantedangel9025 7 лет назад +3

    great read that was fu***** terrifying!!!! The thought of being alone out there with woods and that thing on all 4s holy shit!!!! great job though!!!

  • @tobyturtle10
    @tobyturtle10 6 лет назад +1

    Really well written story and beautifully narrated 😻

  • @sprinkledoreo1090
    @sprinkledoreo1090 7 лет назад +6

    thing: in, in, us in, innnnnn
    me: *I'm trying to take a dump!*

  • @lazybrat5411
    @lazybrat5411 6 лет назад

    Awesome story. Loved the sound of the crackling wood at the end too.

  • @brendalewis2431
    @brendalewis2431 6 лет назад

    👏👏👏👏👏 well done Dr. You tell the story so well you being your listeners right in. Great creepy story.

  • @zoeys_protector25
    @zoeys_protector25 7 лет назад +1

    I know I'm late to the party but I really enjoyed this. Appreciate all your hard work.

  • @peaches3327
    @peaches3327 7 лет назад +2

    Okay, I'm home listening to this with my Mom asleep on the couch & the t.v's on & I'm still getting that creeped out feeling you get when listening to this stuff & nobody's home!

  • @justjo510
    @justjo510 5 лет назад +2

    Running on all fours?! (That and spider crawls are thee worst!) My daughter does that to me sometimes, its terrifying, she thinks its the funniest thing in the world and laughs like crazy lol lil turd 😅

  • @emmanuelmunoz5753
    @emmanuelmunoz5753 6 лет назад

    I stopped listening for a while. Had a few things going on in my life that were hard on me but this story was the best way to get back into it. Thanks to the author and to the Doc for reading it. I had been a while since I had a good scare.

  • @emmal2317
    @emmal2317 7 лет назад +3

    Love this series! Just keep getting better and better. :)

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Glad you approve, Emma :-)

  • @TwinmomFamof6
    @TwinmomFamof6 2 года назад +1

    No to the clowns .. about peed my pants right from the beginning

  • @creepheartpasta4232
    @creepheartpasta4232 7 лет назад +3

    Listening to this just made my night better, thanks ❤️

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      You're very welcome :-)

  • @pjb3150
    @pjb3150 5 лет назад

    Excellent story and narration. Thanks for sharing.

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster6725 7 лет назад

    Great story & of course as always great narrating! 💜

  • @piesenberg3098
    @piesenberg3098 7 лет назад

    Great story and narration as always. Keep it up!

  • @lordkarasu2263
    @lordkarasu2263 5 лет назад +3

    Black eyed children...neat, I truly thought this story would be some random boring monster, gotta love the beks!

  • @Ruf_da_Listener
    @Ruf_da_Listener 5 лет назад

    This is by far my most favourite story ever! Being selfish here but I would love it if it was on my phone

  • @cpthetas488
    @cpthetas488 7 лет назад +5

    glad that this vid got 1k views, you deserve it!!!

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Hopefully many more too!

  • @leeannsalas9984
    @leeannsalas9984 5 лет назад

    Nice twist!! Thank you for narrating it for us.

  • @dr.creepenfan7161
    @dr.creepenfan7161 5 лет назад

    ❤️🥇💯🏆🤘... loved the story and of course you were amazing as always Dr.

  • @thefaceless1341
    @thefaceless1341 7 лет назад +3

    Thoroughly enjoyed this 52 min piece!! A grand job Herr Doctor!! And whoever wrote this...Is very talented indeed. :)

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Very happy to have such a great story to work with; makes my job easy!

  • @lsuboi1165
    @lsuboi1165 5 лет назад +1

    Just open the dang door. Maybe it only wants to call a ride to get out of there. He might not be familiar with proper etiquette and unknowingly comes across creepy!😂

  • @RustyNail5856
    @RustyNail5856 7 лет назад +7

    great video , good and creepy . thanks for sharing.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      You're very welcome, Rusty Nail :-)

  • @EtherealEmperor
    @EtherealEmperor 7 лет назад +1

    Plot twist, the kids are hired by the real estate women to chase residents out with a loss, she's paid off the church and had the women's husband killed. IT MAKES SO MUCH SENSE

  • @leepicmemelord8715
    @leepicmemelord8715 7 лет назад +2

    Black Eyed Children?
    Nice, I've heard of those, this was an interesting story, I like the addition of the 'Kids', First time I've seen on that included them in it.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +2

      I enjoyed reading this one immensely.

  • @Συπερκύβος
    @Συπερκύβος 7 лет назад +4

    Oh! The new story in my feed made me a moderately-less-angsty camper today.
    Good timing, Doctor. Thank ye most graciously. xo

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      You're very welcome!

    • @Συπερκύβος
      @Συπερκύβος 7 лет назад +1

      Your stories have been a great comfort through one of the most difficult tests I have experienced yet in this lifetime. Am I truly the only ...person...alien...who really doesn't ever lie? There must be someone out there...

  • @captaincapricorn7288
    @captaincapricorn7288 7 лет назад

    i love going to bed hearing the storys on the channel

  • @carolyns.672
    @carolyns.672 7 лет назад +4

    Another great story, thank you!

  • @slagit
    @slagit 7 лет назад

    Another great one that I filmed in my mind or viewed as a film if you will. A pretty creepy one and thanks!

  • @lordsyphil1
    @lordsyphil1 4 года назад

    This may be an old video, but omg I love this clown intro!!

  • @ibraheemabdulraheem4688
    @ibraheemabdulraheem4688 5 лет назад +1

    It sure is terrifying

  • @Babylandy1
    @Babylandy1 7 лет назад +2

    OMG, Your an amazing narrator. I can't believe you don't have millions of subscribers already. keep it up and I'm sure you will soon enough. Thanks so much, you scared the hell out of me and that's not an easy thing to do.

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Very glad you liked the story, Samantha :-)

  • @madreverbowski6104
    @madreverbowski6104 4 года назад

    Well.. I'm terrified of clowns.. So..after THAT introduction!! I dropped my phone.. Yanked the headphones off and yelping that had the effect of scaring all my sleeping furbabies! 😅👀😅
    I'm READY for the storytelling!

  • @1276chrissy
    @1276chrissy 6 лет назад

    Awesome story, coming from my neck of the woods! Yessss!!! 😲

  • @magoswes3588
    @magoswes3588 5 лет назад +2

    I am now imagining Eric Andre haunting this house

    • @Widow-Cicada
      @Widow-Cicada 5 лет назад

      Commissar Cody lmfao, you just ruined it for me. “PLLLLLEASEE LET ME IN”

  • @NenaPop1905
    @NenaPop1905 6 лет назад

    Fantastic narration as always and suspenseful endurance to the bitter end.....
    So he took the little critters with him huh? I figured something was gonna happen with that bite...
    He was smart in not letting them in.
    As you can tell what happened to the last people who let them
    In.
    But.... they are in his blood.
    Is there a part 2 to this story?
    There should be!!!!!

  • @maitreyalux
    @maitreyalux 7 лет назад +1

    Very stuff man.

  • @Yuanigem
    @Yuanigem 7 лет назад +8

    Great story . did you do a narrative for chilling tales . about a bunch of kids playing a spin off of hide in seek in a house . where a girl died . was that u

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +3

      I've not done anything for Chilling Tales, but I'm in touch with them about doing stories in the future.

  • @rebeccamurphy8083
    @rebeccamurphy8083 7 лет назад

    Someone should make this into a movie! Great story :)

  • @magic-catt98
    @magic-catt98 7 лет назад +1

    Beautiful reading yet again, Doctor!

  • @cassanova4126
    @cassanova4126 4 года назад

    I love the accent especially how you say PRIVACY
    the narration is as ALWAYS
    Amazing 😉

  • @TheFirstAurora
    @TheFirstAurora 7 лет назад

    Great story and amazing narration!

  • @weirdgirl7679
    @weirdgirl7679 7 лет назад +10

    Crrrrreeeeeepyyyy!!!! Is this related to the Black-Eyed Kids Creepypasta?

  • @compucutie
    @compucutie 7 лет назад

    new subscriber here! Love the way you oil the listener in with your creepier than creepy voice!

  • @lisavanvorous3879
    @lisavanvorous3879 3 года назад

    When are we going camping? I love this story. We need you to tell us some spooky stories.

  • @dragonlordd7894
    @dragonlordd7894 7 лет назад

    i just love this intro so much. best clowns ever.

  • @juliashenandoah3965
    @juliashenandoah3965 7 лет назад +1

    In my decades of being a horror junkie and after having experienced every imaginable aspect of horror I can no longer be frightened or shocked. But this story here is a very special and different thing, this story is so extreme creepy and made me feel uncomfortable yesternight. And making me afraid of something that`s RARE and not easy to do, really.
    Imagine this strange predator disguised as harmless thing waiting at the border where the fields flow in almost dark dense woods with heavy rain clouds above the tree tops, only waiting for nightfall and staring at you the whole time - every time you look out of some window it is there.... somewhere... all the time... stalking just YOU all the time.... you notice IT somewhere lurking between dense roots and dark bushes lying in the shadows of the trees staring at your house, no matter what time of the day you look out the window.
    I prefer seeing this creature as a predatory supernatural animal that become capable of using a human-shaped mimikry for a more efficient hunt, the term "Demon" is not scientific and too ridiculous religious (killable with holy water...) and therefore not really frightening in my opinion. A scientific explainable monster and predator is always waaaay better, and exactly that is this thing.
    An unspecified predatory beast that uses mimikry like many insects do, always hungry for human flesh, and this house is his spiderweb.
    You know you can never escape this predator, because every time you want to pack something and want to leave the house, a strange tiredness overwhelms you, followed by waking up a minute before sunset.
    And every night the horror begins anew when IT get`s hungry...... and your shotgun will be no help at all when it crawls around your house on all fours with distorted elonghated limbs.....
    Aaaw a wonderful story with perfect narration. This classic Resident Evil 1 music fits perfectly to the nights in this house:
    ruclips.net/video/sITJuWV3HXg/видео.html

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад +1

      Thanks, Julia. I think I have very much the same kind of response in general to all things horror, and that I had similar feelings to you about this story. It really is rare - almost never - that I actually get chills while doing the recording, but this one really did affect me in that way.

    • @thedivineswordpoet4401
      @thedivineswordpoet4401 6 лет назад

      That is a force demonic in origin though. This is a supernatural being, demons and dark forces have been existing way before religion. Religion just adopted them
      its not learning from bugs and stuff either Though you have an interesting tale there.

  • @chieftaindave2049
    @chieftaindave2049 3 года назад +1

    1:53 when the Jehovah's witnesses are outside your door

  • @katielynn7053
    @katielynn7053 3 года назад

    I love this channel so much!!

  • @drd6893
    @drd6893 6 лет назад

    I'm not at all scared by ANY movie... You kno, sometimes i wish it did scare me like it does to my friends who'll leave a film terrified! But me.... Nothing scares me.... Until now!
    You're awesome,!
    I know I've commented before.... But your reading skilks! Your voice! What can i say! Amazing job! And a great pick! You scared me half to death!!! 😫

  • @9bang88
    @9bang88 7 лет назад +2

    You can hear people moving in the background of the video

    • @DrCreepen
      @DrCreepen  7 лет назад

      Are you sure it's not just your imagination?

  • @bloodycupcake219
    @bloodycupcake219 5 лет назад

    You're reading of this caused me genuine fear. Thank you.

  • @danielgoetz7821
    @danielgoetz7821 6 лет назад +1

    For some reason, this one really creeped me out 😂

  • @pandemonium26
    @pandemonium26 7 лет назад +1

    great story and great narration well done

  • @elanacurl
    @elanacurl 7 лет назад +3

    Loved it sweetheart. Great read and keep it up!!! ♡♡♡

  • @rickyhurtt8692
    @rickyhurtt8692 4 года назад

    I listen every nite sometime for hours. (insomniac). Never have come across this one. Not far in but so far so good

  • @charmie42
    @charmie42 7 лет назад +1

    Very well narrated.