The Underground by R. Chetwynd-Hayes

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  • Опубликовано: 24 ноя 2024

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  • @donnasandstrom6286
    @donnasandstrom6286 Месяц назад +73

    Gotta love a content creator who actually cares about his listeners. Thank you for all your hard work and dedication. Greatly appreciated.

    • @DanielSmith-dj8ek
      @DanielSmith-dj8ek Месяц назад +4

      Your narrations, your accents and the way you deliver a story are the stuff of legend! Taig O'Kane was a masterpiece!! You love what you do, so just keep doing it!! Thank you, Tony. X

  • @countiblis1246
    @countiblis1246 Месяц назад +19

    My childhood introduction to Horror was watching the old Amicus anthologies back in the 70's when Appointment with Fear was on ITV. I still love them to this day.

  • @maury0009
    @maury0009 Месяц назад +21

    The sound quality is spot on! 👌🏻 Your dedication and the generosity with which you share these beautiful readings truly mean a lot. Thank you for bringing these stories to life and for all the hard work you put in. 🌟

    • @lindasmith6202
      @lindasmith6202 Месяц назад

      I agree about the sound! I hate when I am tempted by a story only to find I can't hear it.

  • @stellacollins3114
    @stellacollins3114 Месяц назад +6

    Beautifully read as always, I was totally convinced it was set in the 1960's so was shocked to find it set in the 1980's

  • @thurayya8905
    @thurayya8905 Месяц назад +16

    I love your "take apart and then put back together" of the story at the end. It helps me a great deal in processing it. When you mentioned Hades, I realized that was where my unconscious mind was groping. A couple of little things struck me. One was the description of the soldier's grey eyes and her father's grey eyes, which took on more meaning at the end. Also, when the soldier disappears, a nice man with rimless glasses takes his place. I see that as a ray of hope for the future. Once Harold has buggered off (STAY lost, Harold!) and the ghost of the soldier has been exposed, her future is now clear to begin.

    • @maryeckel9682
      @maryeckel9682 Месяц назад +5

      I couldn't imagine a worse fate than 40 years with Harold.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Месяц назад +4

      Yes, a lovely subtle little thing about the eyes

  • @franken-pattern
    @franken-pattern Месяц назад +16

    I had chores to do today, and I just sat down. Imagine my delight to see another wonderful tale uploaded a few minutes ago! I got a reward for being good to myself 😅 Thank you, Mr Walker 🎉🎉🎉

  • @dodiekoehler
    @dodiekoehler Месяц назад +13

    I really like the story. The end really surprised me, that doesn't happen often. I look forward to your insight about the story and the writing. And yes, I find it very educational. I always learn something. I thank you for that. I dislike click bait, I'm pleased when creators, do not use it.

  • @janglaschu
    @janglaschu Месяц назад +8

    I enjoy the discussion of the stories very much, it adds a lot to the enjoyment. Thanks!

  • @BertieShaul-mn4qc
    @BertieShaul-mn4qc Месяц назад +9

    I find your commentaries very educational ❤❤😊😊🎉🎉

  • @maryeckel9682
    @maryeckel9682 Месяц назад +4

    What an intriguing story! I felt that the specter of 40 years with Harold was the real horror 😂

  • @along5925
    @along5925 Месяц назад +5

    Description is intriguing! Thanks very much, Tony. I'm looking forward to it tonight.

  • @Josephinejefferies
    @Josephinejefferies 28 дней назад +1

    Enjoyed this. Really reminiscent of my early childhood in London during the late fifties early sixties. My father was a soldier and my mother died when I was a toddler so the underground was a big feature of my life.

  • @leoniem6920
    @leoniem6920 Месяц назад +2

    I haven't read any of this authors stories. Thanks for bringing this to life in your inimitable way! If only we'd had delicious stories like this to study at school.

  • @nancyrogalewski4017
    @nancyrogalewski4017 Месяц назад +3

    Loved this. I love when the ending surprises me and this one did.

  • @MartiWilliams-r2z
    @MartiWilliams-r2z Месяц назад +2

    Chilling, gripping, disturbing tale with the elegant imagery, word-painting language that I love, enhanced by the vivid, expressive voices of your narration. Enjoy your commentary, which leaves us with much new information to think about. Thanks so much, Tony, For all of your hard work for us. Much appreciated.

  • @angelachouinard4581
    @angelachouinard4581 24 дня назад

    November dawns with a "sailor take warning" red sky turned slate gray. With all the autumn outdoor chores ad winterizing done I'm catching up on all I've had to put off listening to. Thanks for all!

  • @thurayya8905
    @thurayya8905 Месяц назад +4

    Can't wait to hear this one.✨️💛👻✨️

  • @annmarieray3922
    @annmarieray3922 Месяц назад +1

    Thank you Tony,I really enjoyed this story...I wasn't expecting such a twist...I thought maybe..she might have fallen in love with the ghost...at least I thought that was where it was headed...but yes loved it..........xxx

  • @joycanadian8133
    @joycanadian8133 21 день назад

    This is the first story that’s made me cry 😭 thank you for sharing!

  • @jamieundead1232
    @jamieundead1232 26 дней назад

    Thank u for not using a.i narration. Trust me, us audiobook enthusiasts appreciate it. Keep up the good work.

  • @jighoststar8943
    @jighoststar8943 Месяц назад +1

    Such an interesting idea, a ghost of a living person. I haven't experienced that before. I wonder if I have left a ghost of myself anywhere?
    I like the story breakdowns, it helps me understand them more deeply, thank you.

  • @marieeab01
    @marieeab01 Месяц назад +2

    Such a cool story an enthralling listen, thank you.

  • @edf777
    @edf777 Месяц назад +4

    Thank you sir 😊❤

  • @annikee5925
    @annikee5925 Месяц назад +1

    O Tony I could listen to you all day. Stay you.

  • @crazy4277
    @crazy4277 28 дней назад +2

    Brilliant! Loved it - thank YOU!

  • @drezdendolla.9143
    @drezdendolla.9143 12 дней назад

    Tony, I just want to thank you for all you do! Your channel has become my favorite! You have the best reading voice, I adore your thoughtful commentary at the end as well as your random ramblings, please do not give those up! It's lovely that you play D&D with family and friends. I know you put a tremendous amount of work in your recordings! I listen on my commute to work or when I'm at home working on a puzzle (I'm currently working on "The World of Terry Pratchett" puzzle, it's 1000 pieces and quite challenging!) You made me fall in love with Shirley Jackson. I bought 3 of her novels and 2 short story collections. Thank you, thank you, thank you again for being an amazing human and the best storyteller on RUclips!!! ❤🎉😊

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  12 дней назад

      aww that is really nice.
      I am so pleased that I introduced you to Shirley Jackson . I haven’t done the jigsaw puzzle for some years. I think I don’t have the patience.

  • @rachael7060
    @rachael7060 Месяц назад +3

    I enjoyed it.

  • @talex1625
    @talex1625 26 дней назад

    I love hearing about your dogs. It really makes me smile 😊

  • @tonymardon3710
    @tonymardon3710 29 дней назад

    A great episode for us…Very happy to see Chetwynd-Hayes here! I love his work, especially as a horror film director myself. And sapphire and steel gets a mention! Great! And my partner, Lauren is the author of the book ‘Deathlines:Walking London’s Horror film History’ which of course, features the underground quite a lot. Thank you for this.

  • @MrsJanLong
    @MrsJanLong 29 дней назад

    I used to lov the Armada ghost and horror books! Thanks for this one, such a great story. And well read of course!

  • @lauraf4202
    @lauraf4202 27 дней назад

    Love this ❤ Excellent narration and bonus points for mentioning Sapphire and Steel.

  • @michaelhunter2136
    @michaelhunter2136 28 дней назад

    Great story and very well thought out commentary. Thank you!

  • @lymarie1974
    @lymarie1974 27 дней назад

    Thank you so very much

  • @JasonJason210
    @JasonJason210 Месяц назад +2

    Chetwynd-Hayes...been a while since I read one of his.

  • @MarianneOrent
    @MarianneOrent Месяц назад

    Loved this one, Tony, and was completely taken in by the twist! Thank you!

  • @amymurdock5905
    @amymurdock5905 Месяц назад

    Excellent story, Tony! Thank you for sharing it. The ending totally tripped me up.

  • @AND-od5jt
    @AND-od5jt 29 дней назад

    Thanks for the great - slightly gnostic - story!

  • @saradillon2252
    @saradillon2252 21 день назад

    Amazing narration and really interesting commentary. Thank you!

  • @themonkeymanofStockbridge
    @themonkeymanofStockbridge 5 дней назад

    You are bloody good at narrating. This author is also excellent. Many thanks

  • @tzaph67
    @tzaph67 29 дней назад

    Sorry Tony, I forgot to thank you at the end of my comment - I really enjoyed the story. I also really enjoy the discussions at the end of the stories, including this one. It makes me think about my own ideas more deeply and gives me new ones. Take care and thanks loads.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  29 дней назад +2

      I think I do it for two reasons one is to understand what I think about the story by writing out and then speaking it out and then also hopefully sparking off other people’s pleasure in understanding the story

    • @tzaph67
      @tzaph67 28 дней назад

      @@ClassicGhost well it’s certainly much appreciated!

  • @blackfyre365
    @blackfyre365 Месяц назад

    I loved this story- and thanks for turning me onto this author ❤

  • @denisepeters8551
    @denisepeters8551 27 дней назад

    This story makes you think.Maybe we all linger in a place mentally that for some reason is significant to us.Not really knowing what powers our thoughts and dreams can have on that place.
    Loved the story and your chat
    My westie does the gummy thing sometimes. ❤

  • @stellacollins3114
    @stellacollins3114 Месяц назад

    Oh and I love to hear you talk about the story and author, it is educational 😊

  • @SashaIsAFox
    @SashaIsAFox 10 дней назад

    İ really love the part at the end where you tell us about the story

  • @ramonpiper
    @ramonpiper Месяц назад +2

    Keep doing the commentary and dog updates!

  • @Chele212
    @Chele212 27 дней назад

    His voice is my fave❤

  • @shadownet3d
    @shadownet3d Месяц назад

    My first time hearing this author. A very good story, made better by such an excellent narration. I enjoy hearing your afterthoughts on the story and author, and hope you will continue to include these.

  • @stardust949
    @stardust949 Месяц назад

    What a cool story---I thought it was brilliantly written. Loved it. I always enjoy your end of story rambles, Tony.

  • @amandine512
    @amandine512 Месяц назад +1

    I missed your uploads.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Месяц назад +3

      oh no! Glad you're here now though

  • @indigosue3070
    @indigosue3070 18 дней назад

    I loved your story. I would call it horror, though, because it wasn't horrible! Thank you for your work.

  • @amgroves76
    @amgroves76 Месяц назад +1

    Yay you did one by the master of macabre!!! Thank you ! 💚🇬🇧
    Love curse of strahd! There are several cthulhu editions, I have one kicking about, but barovia is my ultimate favourite

  • @Thomas-wn7cl
    @Thomas-wn7cl 24 дня назад

    Great story. Skillful narration. Who would not want Tony Walker as dungeon master? I do not even play d&d and I know all his assets that make this channel great must add up to an epic dungeon master.

  • @stevenshipman650
    @stevenshipman650 Месяц назад

    Quite a good story. I enjoyed it and most especially your talk afterwards.

  • @susanmercurio1060
    @susanmercurio1060 Месяц назад

    That is actually what I believe causes a ghost: they don't leave because of some unfinished business. (Unlike "what makes them come back?")
    And I love ❣️ your discussion of the story at the end! They make the time with you much more entertaining.

  • @BJPDesigns
    @BJPDesigns 29 дней назад

    I am really looking forward to your Victorian author videos! I like discovering authors I didn’t know about before and hearing more about the well known ones too.

  • @julierobinson3633
    @julierobinson3633 Месяц назад

    Actually the Underground is an excellent place for a ghost story because although obviously not gothic age it IS actually very old - the oldest in the world. While at the same time being completely part of the modern world. It somehow contains both realities. I think that's why the idea of ghost stations etc fascinates people so much - because the Underground simultaneously contains all eras.
    I love the talks at the end. Please continue.
    I do listen to some other storytellers on RUclips but I find I'm frustrated at the end wanting to hear other opinions on what happened and not getting them.

  • @jessicajackson8064
    @jessicajackson8064 25 дней назад

    I much prefer the stories you narrate when you discuss them at the end. Thanks.

  • @nomansgoddess
    @nomansgoddess Месяц назад

    And this comment may be late but a big YES on the Mythos idea for D&D!

  • @DavidA.-bv8xy
    @DavidA.-bv8xy 29 дней назад

    Educational!? Talk about a twist ending! Ooh, I shall have to report this! But a wonderful, subtle ghost story, Cheers😊

  • @sleethmitchell
    @sleethmitchell 18 дней назад

    great story and great narration. a ridiculous tom waits' song; UNDERGROUND...

  • @micheleshave323
    @micheleshave323 Месяц назад

    Thank you for another wonderful story and an equally wonderful commentary. I so enjoy your work and I was wondering if you were going to be doing only ghost stories and some detective stories because I haven’t seen anything new on your Classic Stories channel and I miss not being able to enjoy them as well. Thank you so much for all the stories and commentaries and I hope you never get a cold or a sore throat.

  • @ryanjohnson3615
    @ryanjohnson3615 Месяц назад

    Wonderful!

  • @karenrichards3770
    @karenrichards3770 Месяц назад

    Brill,thankyou,and v good commentary.

  • @kaustosis9383
    @kaustosis9383 Месяц назад

    Ravenloft D&D campaign setting is pretty top notch imo...have fun and thanks Tony.

  • @SMichaelDeHart
    @SMichaelDeHart 26 дней назад

    Mr. Tony, just imagine, in about 50 to 100 years from now, there will be a classic horror and detective loving influencer that'll be giving a breakdown of your stories and the channel started by a RN specializing in mental healthcare. The future fans will be heaping praises upon you, just like you do on those writers of yesteryear.
    Have never heard this story before, but really enjoyed. Her father was a total j€rk!! Its wild that her father saw his past self.
    Keep up the hard work!! Still enjoying the stories.
    Btw, tomorrow is Halloween... a possible 'Halloween Special' is in our very near future?? Like tomorrow...

  • @frederickbrock2740
    @frederickbrock2740 29 дней назад

    Fantastic

  • @sybilmcpherson2240
    @sybilmcpherson2240 Месяц назад

    Loved it - and the twist! 😂

  • @PoffinFresh
    @PoffinFresh 22 дня назад

    Tony, if you GM Call of Cthulhu, I highly recommend Seth Skorkowsky’s RUclips channel. It has lots of scenario’s reviews and tips for running them, with links to better maps and handouts. There’s also general advice on running horror and mystery games, and stuff for DnD, Traveller, and other RPGs.
    Also, I liked this story. It was poignant, makes you think about life choices and how well you really know people.

  • @Annapurna818
    @Annapurna818 Месяц назад

    A favorite of mine

  • @robertgraves8843
    @robertgraves8843 Месяц назад

    I'm quite a fan of Chetwynd-Hayes. His stories have one foot in the real world and one somewhere else........

  • @amandine512
    @amandine512 Месяц назад

    Relatable.

  • @classicangel887
    @classicangel887 29 дней назад

    Most people I knew growing up would know about The Hellfire Club,and been there at some stage, also I heard of a lot of scary stuff happening there. There was one incident that happened that was terrifying and the people involved never went there again as far as I know.

  • @chuckanddebraorlick4004
    @chuckanddebraorlick4004 Месяц назад

    Good stiry

  • @suecondon1685
    @suecondon1685 Месяц назад

    Great story, I was very surprised to find a Chetwynd Hayes story that's so grim and murderous. Love the depiction of the underground crowds as some kind of creature. I also loved your interpretation at the end. It made me dream that I murdered someone, so I listened to it again to make sure it was the story influencing me and not something I'd actually done!

    • @ct6502-c7w
      @ct6502-c7w Месяц назад +1

      It's a good story, but the attitudes of the characters (even the protagonist) seem totally out of place for the 1980's. It sounds more like something from the 1800's.

  • @zeromt3577
    @zeromt3577 Месяц назад

    Man!! If, somehow, you didn't get your fourth player for your campaign, please let me know. I doubt streaming all the way from the US would be super-stable, and I can think of lots of reasons why others (e.g. Patreon members or RUclips joiners) would be better choices, but I've been looking for a good game of Call of Cthulhu or even another good DnD game, and I'd love to join one run by one of my favorite narrators and authors, so please shout at me if you think a random weird fiction fan / rpg geek from the US would make a good player in the game you decide to run.
    Also, great reading and analysis as usual! These sorts of "fractured" ghosts are especially fascinating. If you think of any given person's complex behavior as the result of a "committee" of more simplistic internal archetypes crumpled into his skull -- a bundle of two-dimensional snapshots that, folded together, approximate a fully three-dimensional personality -- then it's not too hard to imagine one or two of these snapshots peeling off during some emotionally tempestuous episode and blowing away on its own, to be seen again only when stirred by the next gust. I love the idea of so many of them getting trapped in the tunnels and drawn flitting behind the subway trains. It's a fertile idea... you could imagine them potentially combining again, forming partial, new entities from all the trapped bits lost by all the other hearts that were broken in the underground.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Месяц назад

      We're still doing Strahd in D&D but email me at classicghostpodcast@gmail.com and I'll get back to you if we do CoC

  • @kaytris
    @kaytris Месяц назад

    I enjoyed this.. nice twist on the traditional unfinished ghost business theme. (Although Harold's about face at the end was a bit jarring, and not really believable that such a passive person would abruptly whiplash-react like that - but maybe that's just me.

    • @denisesudell2538
      @denisesudell2538 11 дней назад

      I completely believed it. Harold didn't seem passive to me--he sounded self-absorbed. He never asked the main character about herself or how her day was, and he simply assumed that she would go along with whatever he wanted. It's people like that who get angry when others refuse to follow their presumptions.

  • @Hlaford29
    @Hlaford29 Месяц назад

    I'd like to comment on that warning in the underground. I believe it wasn't just "red herring", on the contrary, it showed that there were many such stories around, and that the best way of dealing with them was not to notice them - thus you could live your life. These "ghosts" are like scars, and they start aching when you touch them. And like scars these things have no moral resolution - just pain for all the involved.

  • @angelachouinard4581
    @angelachouinard4581 24 дня назад

    Harold's a true mama's boy, he doesn't have enough left to love her properly, it's all gone to mum. He is too enmeshed, spoiled for real feeling the way the father was spoiled by the wife leaving. Lovely twist on the end, wonder if the father's ghost showed to her because that version of him was holding it all in and somehow wanted her to know the truth. Undergrounds and subways always have a spooky feeling in my opinion, have ridden on many.

  • @ajcbng8289
    @ajcbng8289 28 дней назад

    One of the scariest things that has ever happened to me was as a young adult during a cross country drive. I suddenly realized I was about to enter an undersea highway tunnel with no opportunity to turn around. I still sweat even thinking about it. 😮💀💀😂

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  28 дней назад

      That old trapped feeling indeed

  • @susanr1277
    @susanr1277 28 дней назад +1

    I always enjoy the discussion and the disparate disciplines you bring to it. You don't do click bait content so why would you do click bait titles, which will bring viewers who expect click bait content? Personally I have no faith in consultants. Just do what you do; it works.

  • @nomansgoddess
    @nomansgoddess Месяц назад

    I think the best way to look at the actions and feelings of other people going through our short existence of what we perceive as reality is to remind ourselves to think honestly to ourselves what would we do if we were in that other persons shoes. However as we all are imperfect being human we sometimes forget to. I would consider the underground to be 'liminal spaces '. The world between two worlds. Or some sort of pocket universe. Sorry just really got into what alot of people call 'The Backrooms ' this year 😊

  • @KarensOpinionsMayDiffer
    @KarensOpinionsMayDiffer Месяц назад

    Didn’t see that coming.

  • @julierobinson3633
    @julierobinson3633 Месяц назад

    If the father was 20 ish in WWII ('40-'45) with an infant daughter who is now 45 then that does date the whole thing to the 1980s, but I agree the whole ethos does feel earlier.
    'From Beyond the Grave' is my favorite of the anthology films.

  • @KyloRenRadio
    @KyloRenRadio 28 дней назад

    Hi - I just subscribed; how do I download the ghost story bundle? Thanks!

  • @ianwhite5477
    @ianwhite5477 Месяц назад

    David McCullum was the Sapphire & Steel actor.

  • @Addwrite
    @Addwrite Месяц назад

    It is quite difficult to find books by R Chetwyn Haynes.

  • @WhiteRabbitAnne
    @WhiteRabbitAnne Месяц назад

    What an interesting story, took a turn I didn't expect which I love in a story.
    The story of your dogs reminds me of our cat. He gets peckish around 3am he has kibbles. But he really wants the wet food. I'm not sure if he's dreamed of it which is why he's so insistent. But he won't take no for an answer. I'm disabled it's my husband that does the feeding. But my husband sleeps like the dead. So our little guy will come to me and gently nibble on my hands to say he's hungry. Because he knows I'm a light sleeper and I can wake up "daddy". So every night around 3 I'm nudging my husband. "honey the cat wants feeding. Honey? Honey?"
    And the poor man stumbles to the kitchen.
    Then our little Mishtu comes in after eating and snuggles down with him purring his head off. Both are asleep in minutes. I look for one of your stories to listen to because I'll be up for at least an hour before falling back to sleep.
    Funny how rituals just sort of happen. No doubt years from now when our cat is in cat heaven I will still wake at three thinking he needs to be fed. No cat but it will still be time for a story.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Месяц назад

      They are very clever. Cleverer than most people give them credit for

  • @lunablue745
    @lunablue745 28 дней назад

    One thing confused me. In the beginning Laura imaines the "dragon" of a train's conductors would yell; "Mind the claws!" But, Isn't the usual expression in Britan, "mind the gap!"? I know thats picking nits, but, it just stood out funnily to me.
    I enjoyed your rendition very much. Not so sure about the story though.

  • @sybilmcpherson2240
    @sybilmcpherson2240 Месяц назад +1

    Really! I dont think Harold loved her at all!

  • @angeladawn2343
    @angeladawn2343 Месяц назад

  • @emahgreen7874
    @emahgreen7874 28 дней назад

    ❤🙏

  • @susanmercurio1060
    @susanmercurio1060 Месяц назад

    I think the word you're looking for, Tony, for Harold is "prosy."

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  Месяц назад

      I don't know what that means in this context. Prosy for me is a style of writing I suppose. What does it mean to you?

    • @susanmercurio1060
      @susanmercurio1060 Месяц назад

      @@ClassicGhost "Prosy" is used in Regency novels, such as Jane Austen or Georgette Heyer, to describe a person who is boring and wordy.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  23 дня назад

      i didn’t know that

  • @kristinasper8223
    @kristinasper8223 26 дней назад

    Chetwynd-Hayes seems to have had some good insight into the psyche of middle-aged women. I’m just so relieved that she didn’t marry Harold!

  • @OccupyForeverBand
    @OccupyForeverBand 11 дней назад

    My dnd group just did Curse of Strad :D I wanna play! How do I join??

  • @benmulvey2704
    @benmulvey2704 29 дней назад

    The story is set in the 1970s, but bowler hats were long out of fashion by then. Was the man who delivered the warning another ghost, perhaps of the dead variety?

  • @flashcraft
    @flashcraft 25 дней назад

    Why is the video resolution so very low (360p) ? Maybe because the video is pretty long?

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  25 дней назад

      it’s 480 i think . Just because it makes the file a lot smaller and people tell me they don’t care about the visuals :)

  • @tzaph67
    @tzaph67 29 дней назад

    I don’t think Harold loved her at all - all that stuff about the money for the taxi! Harold isn’t a wicked man but nor is he kind or loving.
    I didn’t think the dad was a monster but there was that remark about him driving her suitors away when she was young. He mistrusted young love - all his young love was left in the underground with his dead wife.
    I thought it was very sad thinking what the dad could have been if he’d held onto his capacity for love despite the tragedy of the murder.
    I thought Laura seemed quite self sufficient because she’d had to be. I feel that freed from Harold and her father it might have been possible for her to blossom in some ways - not necessarily romantically, but not totally ruling it out.

  • @stevedavenport2975
    @stevedavenport2975 28 дней назад

    Should have a creepyness rating 1-10

  • @chancewatkins5071
    @chancewatkins5071 27 дней назад

    A great narration but I am critical of this story because: 1. I don't really like nor can relate to any of the characters (the protagonist seems dull)
    2. It was unrealistic to me on how the protag reacted to seeing a ghost; actually there were a handful of things that just instinctually gave off the vibe of unrealistic emotions/fake dialogue.
    Basically what I am saying is, the story was woven well given the ending but I found the characters to be too one dimensional. Thanks for the story

  • @stevejeffery3112
    @stevejeffery3112 Месяц назад

    Awesome story, and I understand the nuance, but let's remember - that wasn't love. That was jealous murder. He's not a 'Good Guy' in any way. He was a dick and his punishment is to be seen for what he is by his daughter.