The Premonition by Lewis Darley

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  • Опубликовано: 4 янв 2024
  • Lewis Darley is a copywriter and illustrator living in Nottingham. He contacted me early in 2023 about an animated film he was making for his story The Premonition. This horror story is set in Bristol around 8 years ago. We agreed, I would record the audio and he would then do the long, hard work of animating the film.
    I said that I thought listeners would be interested in the story and then in him telling us about the project, so seven months after our first contact, we managed to record an interview. The delay was solely down to me, I should say.
    Anyway, I hope you enjoy the story and the interview afterwards: The Premonition by Lewis Darley
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  • @lewisdarleyillustration
    @lewisdarleyillustration 4 месяца назад +110

    Thrilled that people are enjoying my story! Thanks again Tony for reading it and for speaking to me

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +8

      My pleasure! It was all great

    • @Earnshawfully
      @Earnshawfully 4 месяца назад +5

      A compelling story! It reminded me of how disconnected the first weeks as a student can feel. I was a bit confused about the cat episode. It seemed odd that all of Sarah's school mates interacted with the cat, if it was a ghost-vision.

    • @roxyabrooks864
      @roxyabrooks864 4 месяца назад +2

      Wonderful tale! Thank you, Mr. Darley!

    • @itgetter9
      @itgetter9 4 месяца назад +2

      I love it! Thanks so much for sharing it with us! (By the way, I am reading a new book about the Luddites -- Brian Merchant's Blood in the Machine -- Nottingham has such a wonderful history of standing up against oppressors!)

    • @skeleczar
      @skeleczar 4 месяца назад +3

      It was awesome! ❤ Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

  • @angelachouinard4581
    @angelachouinard4581 4 месяца назад +57

    Bad winter weather moving in. Thanks Tony for a nice long listen tonight with cats and teapot.

    • @waking_nicole
      @waking_nicole 4 месяца назад +12

      Literally my idea of heaven.

    • @chasidahl8563
      @chasidahl8563 4 месяца назад +7

      ​@@waking_nicole- me too! 🐱☕️💀😬

    • @THEPAGEBURNER1979
      @THEPAGEBURNER1979 4 месяца назад

      @@chasidahl8563
      🎉😂🎉SNOW😂🎉😂

    • @roxyabrooks864
      @roxyabrooks864 4 месяца назад +5

      Me, too. Lots of snow and sleet to make it even more treacherous. I'm going to save this for when it actually hits (7am, EST) so I have something wonderful to listen to while I watch the world gently blur away...

    • @rebeccawoolfolk5377
      @rebeccawoolfolk5377 4 месяца назад +7

      I listened to it while driving home in the dark and snow. Creepy.

  • @smasome
    @smasome 4 месяца назад +10

    Ohio here, English major, graduated from the University of Iowa in 1972 so you can well imagine how much I enjoy Tony's narration and selection of stories. This was excellent, recalling my days in college, walking the dark streets and visiting the bars with my friends -- only without the premonition! Kudos, Lewis!
    Tony, there have been jokes about how your reading puts us to sleep, but you have to know what a gift you have, and give to your listeners. I have weird chronic illnesses that sometimes prohibit my enjoyment of television or even reading, yet I can close my eyes to the sound of your wonderful voice. You are engaging enough to keep me from ruminating, yet when I'm tired, there is nothing that can compare to your soothing voice.
    I belong to a FaceBook group for chronic illness, and when a poster wrote of trouble relaxing, I of course suggested Tony Walker Classic Ghost Stories Podcast!
    Please take care, and keep reading for many years to come. God bless you!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад

      Thank you very for suggesting me !

    • @mamacypress
      @mamacypress 4 месяца назад +2

      Same! Also have several chronic illnesses and over the past few months this channel has been such a blessing while stuck in bed during respiratory illness and Tony’s gentle voice is even easy to listen to in the dark during migraines. So glad to have found you!

    • @jpmonkman
      @jpmonkman 4 месяца назад +2

      Aha we all end up on the best story channels when we are ill. Ive got late stage emphasyma so its nice to have my mind taken off the real world.

  • @lancelotdufrane
    @lancelotdufrane 4 месяца назад +23

    I so enjoy your narration. Rare talent to “read” with more acting capabilities than most film. Thank you.

  • @hollywebster6844
    @hollywebster6844 4 месяца назад +20

    I really enjoyed this story. The interweaving of potential realities with the idea that there is only one eventuality was elegantly presented. This was such a gentle telling of a harsh reality. I felt like the reader/listener was guided so gently along this story, shepherded towards the inevitable ending. I'm looking forward to more from this author.

  • @stardust949
    @stardust949 4 месяца назад +13

    Good luck to Lewis on his project! I personally lack the patience to listen to the "explanations" this world uses to deny our spiritual reality---but I know plenty of people still think that way.

  • @jenniferlevine5406
    @jenniferlevine5406 4 месяца назад +6

    Wow - that was an amazing story. Wonderful to hear your chat with the author. Thank you both so much! I really enjoyed the video.

  • @TheMrCougarful
    @TheMrCougarful 4 месяца назад +7

    She tried, bless her heart.

  • @lesleykaygosson315
    @lesleykaygosson315 4 месяца назад +16

    Great Story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
    Perfect Narration ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐❤
    Wonderful Interview With
    The Author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

  • @BarbaraJV1
    @BarbaraJV1 3 месяца назад +2

    For such a modern story, it still has a gothic feel about it. Really well written and narrated. 🙏

  • @connieohara7301
    @connieohara7301 4 месяца назад +8

    I wish you could fathom how excited I get when you put out a new story. Especially the longer ones. I have listened to Night Time Sleep Radio over and over and over because no one puts me to sleep like you Tony. You have ruined me for everyone else. Thanks A lot!!!

  • @stevegoodwin2656
    @stevegoodwin2656 4 месяца назад +10

    Enjoyed that very much and I'm looking forward to reading some more of Lewis's writing on his website.

  • @shroomyk
    @shroomyk 4 месяца назад +7

    Really liked this one. It's sort of a classic theme of fate and destiny (and if the choices we make matter) but I think it was done well. Thank you for sharing it with us, Mr. Darley.

  • @lunablue745
    @lunablue745 4 месяца назад +4

    Holy Guacamole! This was amazing! Bravo Lewis for a brilliantly written story. Kudos to Tony for recognizing the great paring of his narration with this tale. My stomach is still in knots! Poor, poor, Tom and Sarah!

  • @jpmonkman
    @jpmonkman 4 месяца назад +2

    Oh yes sir. Its well recieved.I enjoy longer stories because Im stuck in bed Ill so its nice to lose myself for a few hours! Keep it up and thank you.😊

  • @allysonlewis1576
    @allysonlewis1576 4 месяца назад +5

    A very different story but bloody brilliant. Thank you for this fantastic piece of work

  • @debra333
    @debra333 4 месяца назад +5

    Hi, dear Tony! Yours is the audial offering I most anticipate. Thank you for your excellent work
    .❤

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      thank you. great to have your support

  • @Su-Jo
    @Su-Jo 4 месяца назад +4

    This one made me cry 😢

  • @AndreaDingbatt
    @AndreaDingbatt 4 месяца назад +4

    Freezing Fog here in Carlisle!!
    I have the Influenza after pneumonia and thus Gratefully Appreciated this 🌟⭐🌟⭐🌟 Narration, great Stuff indeed!!❤

  • @fetlock
    @fetlock 4 месяца назад +3

    I can't thank you both enough for this lovely story and interview. I'm a life-long fan immediately.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +2

      it would be lovely if people visited Lewis’s site and left him a message :) he’s such a lovely person

    • @AndreaDingbatt
      @AndreaDingbatt 4 месяца назад +2

      ​@@ClassicGhost❤I have to get to visit Lewis's site as soon as I have finished listening to this!!❤
      Bristol is a place I've spent a lot of time in, and the description of it is perfect!!
      (The Bear pit has a familiar sound about it!!)
      Andréa and Jasper. ...XxX...❤

  • @matthewpilarski4857
    @matthewpilarski4857 4 месяца назад +6

    Brilliant story

  • @doorbasher77unwellnews52
    @doorbasher77unwellnews52 4 месяца назад +5

    Very good story. Lewis is very talented. Thanks Tony

  • @annnovy4537
    @annnovy4537 4 месяца назад +1

    Please read more of Lewis’s stories and for highlighting a young writers work

  • @thurayya8905
    @thurayya8905 4 месяца назад +4

    In the end, if she hadn't interfered, he wouldn't have been standing where he was. He would have taken his second bus and have been gone. That's the trouble when you try to make something not happen. You don't know if your actions will help cause the undesirable outcome.

  • @code-52
    @code-52 4 месяца назад +4

    The narration was amazing as usual.
    The story was perfectly written in line with Victorian ghost stories.
    Good job both!

  • @mares3841
    @mares3841 4 месяца назад +2

    Thanks for the interview and conversation and reading.

  • @martiwilliams4592
    @martiwilliams4592 4 месяца назад +4

    Gripping, vivid , masterful story and narration. Love the visual discussion after the story. Much appreciated! Thank you and warmest wishes to you both!

  • @caragarcia2307
    @caragarcia2307 4 месяца назад +5

    It irritated me that her therapist and mother decided to convince her that her last interaction with her father wasn't real. I'm not sure therapists regularly do that but it was just sad. It's pretty common for people to have a visit when a loved one dies.

    • @angelachouinard4581
      @angelachouinard4581 4 месяца назад +1

      I was lucky to find a spiritually minded therapist. Totally non-denominational but very open to exactly that kind of thing. I think that was the basis for The Sixth Sense, Bruce Willis's character was a psychologist who missed that his patient's problem was dealing with the departed.

  • @janefan77
    @janefan77 3 месяца назад +1

    So glad you mentioned The Signal-Man, which brought up the horror/fate point. Such a great discussion!

  • @mlsg8
    @mlsg8 4 месяца назад +2

    How fun to hear and see Tony and Lewis ... Love all the insights on Nottingham... I teach Psychic Development in Orlando FL so The Premonition had special draw for me.. i will definitely listen again. I've had thousands of psychic and spiritual experiences over the years, and evidential mediumship is probably my favorite gift to share.
    The idea of a premonition, meaning to warn ahead of time, does bring up a discussion of whether some things are just fated and cannot be avoided, or if the premonition itself is a sign that there's still time to dodge the bullet, so to speak.. which Lewis dealt with in his main character Sarah.
    Really enjoyed the point of view and the descriptions through Sarah's eyes.
    Wouldn't that make a great title for a book from her perspective, Lewis? Through Sarah's Eyes. I can see her sequel coming up, can't you? 😅❤ Again, thanks so much for this "visit"! Brilliant story, brilliant narration and timing.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +2

      weirdly evidential mediumship is what i’ve been trawling the internet for these past few days

  • @ruthfrewin9389
    @ruthfrewin9389 3 месяца назад +1

    I loved that story, Lewis! And I loved finally being able to put a face to a name, Tony. I lreally enjoy your choice of stories and your narrating... as well as your musings/ramblings at the end.

  • @sirmintyclack
    @sirmintyclack 4 месяца назад +2

    This is one of my favorites!! I was connecting with Sarah from the beginning.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад

      Glad you enjoyed it. Hope Lewis realises how popular his story was.

  • @angelaroberts2803
    @angelaroberts2803 4 месяца назад +2

    Lovely story.well read.Thank you tony.

  • @tmaz3654
    @tmaz3654 2 месяца назад +1

    Excellent, well done Lewis for this story. I am looking into his art now. thanks Tony for showing the interview
    Toni

  • @Uknowho9967
    @Uknowho9967 4 месяца назад +4

    Poor Tom😔

  • @earlschandelmeier751
    @earlschandelmeier751 4 месяца назад +1

    Solid story! Funny how the author didn't see his own connection to Dickens and the inevitability of future events. Great narration as always. Very cool addition with the interview!!!

  • @ainemoroney9965
    @ainemoroney9965 4 месяца назад +4

    Very inspiring work there. Very well written story. 👌

  • @kekebaseden41
    @kekebaseden41 4 месяца назад +3

    Loved the story and the telling of the story (of course :). ❤ A real treat! Thanks very much!

  • @edf777
    @edf777 4 месяца назад +2

    Thank you sir 😊❤

  • @Austrian_blood
    @Austrian_blood 4 месяца назад +1

    Magnificent story. Thank you so much.❤

  • @geraldinestone2274
    @geraldinestone2274 3 месяца назад +2

    I enjoyed this story. Early on I was expecting it to turn out that Sarah herself was dead.

  • @micheleoreilly
    @micheleoreilly 4 месяца назад +1

    ❤️💯💋 to both of you!

  • @andreacooper9821
    @andreacooper9821 3 месяца назад +1

    This was one of my favorite stories! Thank you!

  • @gillrippingale1173
    @gillrippingale1173 4 месяца назад +3

    Well I absolutely LOVED this tale! Beautifully read as asual😊. And fascinating interview! I lived in Nottingham for many years, and now half an hour away in Grantham, so thrilled to hear all about the author. Nottingham is a fantastic, edgy atmospheric place, as too is Sherwood Forest..the most magical of places. I shall be looking out for future updates on this exciting project!

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      Hope you’re not flooded

    • @gillrippingale1173
      @gillrippingale1173 4 месяца назад +1

      @ClassicGhost That's very thoughtful, and much appreciated 🙏☺️ But no, thankfully not. My home is halfway up a steady incline and well away from a river ! It must be very distressing for those who are flooded.

  • @elstongunn4277
    @elstongunn4277 4 месяца назад +4

    Well done, both the story and the narration!

  • @banterj
    @banterj 3 месяца назад +1

    Omg!…a cliffhanging end.I am devastated…I wanted closure for Sarah,I needed to Andrea to declare she was right….

  • @adriennewalker1715
    @adriennewalker1715 4 месяца назад +1

    Excellent story, really enjoyed it. Initial prefiguring with the scaffolding but then the story whisks you onward .. brilliant.

  • @pinstripesuitandheels
    @pinstripesuitandheels Месяц назад

    Oooh... That was a good one! Simply thrilling!

  • @jeanetteshaw4573
    @jeanetteshaw4573 4 месяца назад +3

    Finally! Sure have been missing your readings!!!!🎉

  • @nancycardenas2724
    @nancycardenas2724 4 месяца назад +2

    Thank you, an excellent read

  • @jayfox28
    @jayfox28 4 месяца назад

    How incredibly sad. And amazing. Thank you as always Tony!

  • @davidcolley7714
    @davidcolley7714 4 месяца назад +1

    Bloody good yarn and well read sir

  • @sonnetlikely
    @sonnetlikely 4 месяца назад +2

    Great story! There was a similar student housing building where I went to Uni. Ancient, sways horribly in the wind, always in disrepair and has a terrible sense of dread around it so this really resonated with me!! Thanks for the tale and wonderful narration! Look forward to the animation!

  • @MaggieatPlay
    @MaggieatPlay 4 месяца назад +2

    Brilliant story! Wonderful narration. Fascinating interview. Thank you, both, Tony and Lewis.
    The story itself brought up memories of premonitions in my life and the lives of my mother, aunt, sisters, nieces. Gave me wonderful chills.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      Glad you enjoyed the story Maggie

  • @CleoHarperReturns
    @CleoHarperReturns 4 месяца назад +1

    It's so rare for a modern story to be well written. This was truly a treat. Thanks to Mr. Darley and to you as well Tony! I'd love to hear more collabs between the two of you in the future. And as always I'm a fan of long format.

  • @meganmcnelis7136
    @meganmcnelis7136 4 месяца назад

    Very cool story! I was surprised when it first revealed the modern setting.

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    That comment about the classic warning to not go into the cellar reminded me of a time (back in the 1980s), that my sister and I were watching a slasher film on TV. The nice neighbor was heading for the cellar. My sister and I shouted, No! Don't go in the basement! Our brother was passing by. He poked his head in the room and conversationally said, Yes, go into the basement. Don't take a flashlight [electric torch if you're British].

  • @AmandaLee-in2yl
    @AmandaLee-in2yl 4 месяца назад +1

    I really enjoyed that story very good
    Thank you

  • @THEPAGEBURNER1979
    @THEPAGEBURNER1979 4 месяца назад +2

    Snow for Connecticut 😂🎉😂🎉😂

  • @Mintychops
    @Mintychops 4 месяца назад

    This was a really good story, and very enjoyable narration, thanks both of you!

  • @allierowland9
    @allierowland9 4 месяца назад

    Really interesting and entertaining. Thank you both.

  • @tyramasters-heinrichs921
    @tyramasters-heinrichs921 4 месяца назад

    Loved the story, thank you!

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    Well, that was certainly chilling!

  • @glosteiger2517
    @glosteiger2517 4 месяца назад +2

    An excellent story and excellent narration.

  • @mereditheve7895
    @mereditheve7895 4 месяца назад +1

    Fantastic story tonight. Thank you very much for your wonderful narration🙏🏻

  • @vickiereed643
    @vickiereed643 4 месяца назад +1

    Thank you for the great story Lewis and the most excellent reading Tony!
    Sarah probably caused the young man’s death. If he had gone on with his team mates, he wouldn’t have had part of the building fall on him.

  • @terrioestreich4007
    @terrioestreich4007 4 месяца назад +1

    So great!!

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    I have not read "Harry" by Rosemary Timperly, but I looked it up and I see you did a podcast on that in 2021. Thanks.

  • @missmouse20
    @missmouse20 4 месяца назад

    I enjoyed this, thank you!

  • @sheilakirby5616
    @sheilakirby5616 4 месяца назад +1

    THANK YOU MR. TONY FOR MAKING LISTENING TO YOU READ MORE INTERESTING THAN WATCHING TELEVISION'S NONSENSE ***
    I'VE TRULY ENJOYED LISTENING TO YOUR NARRATIONS OF THESE OLD STYLE STORIES MAKING THEM SEEM TO COME TO LIFE IN MY IMAGINATION ***
    MUCH LOVE AND RESPECT MY FRIEND ❣️❣️❣️

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад

      I agree . i’d rather listen than watch TV these days

  • @mbeaux5693
    @mbeaux5693 4 месяца назад

    Great story!

  • @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos
    @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos 4 месяца назад +1

    I hope you are doing well Tony Walker and all is good in your part of the world. It's been a few days (which is like 8 years in my head) without a story from you. I got the stickers right around Christmas Eve, I love them, thank you.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      Glad you like the stickers. They’re my favourite. that and the little pin badge

    • @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos
      @DenWell-SeedsOfChaos 4 месяца назад +1

      @@ClassicGhost Ah, yes, I need that little pin badge. 😊 I just ordered it.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад

      Let me know when it arrives

  • @lindamcdermott8537
    @lindamcdermott8537 4 месяца назад +1

    Great story… loved it…!❤️

  • @Thomas-wn7cl
    @Thomas-wn7cl 4 месяца назад +2

    A morality tale about the importance of shed scaffolding at ground level in a commercial construction zone. As a trained scaffold erector, Tom's accident could been avoided. Not by the second site, but from sound construction practices. The number one way to die on a construction site is to fall to your death. The number two way is to have something fall on you.
    I was on a job waiting for the exterior hoist, and a mason laborer stepped outside the building and was hit by a falling sheet of plywood from above. It shattered his forearm. He was lucky. If the material had struck his head, it would have been lights out. On the same job, a plumber's apprentice was diligently standing below his journeyman's scissor lift waiting for instructions. The journeyman carelessly kept his tools on the floor of the lift, and accidently kicked a wrench off the open end of the lift. It struck the apprentice square on his head. Lots of blood from a head wound. The initial call for a bandage resulted in the procurement of an oily rag from the pipe threader. This was luckily rejected with disdain. As it was summer, a good man donated his tee shirt, which may have been a bit sweaty, but at least it was nor soaked in cutting oil. The shirt was wrapped around the unfortunate apprentice's head like a turbin. I could go on about various other catastrophes, but I will leave it there. Overhead protection saves lives.

    • @angelachouinard4581
      @angelachouinard4581 4 месяца назад +2

      Thanks for sharing. My grandfather used to say walking under ladders was bad luck for a reason. Rather than tote things up and down they leave them on the ladder or at the edge of where they are working. You bump the ladder or they shift on it and you wind up like the apprentice. Have a safe new year.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      This is perhaps the best comment on a video I’ve ever had

    • @Thomas-wn7cl
      @Thomas-wn7cl 4 месяца назад +1

      Thanks, I have another story about a worker attempting to shift a ton or so of glass... it oddly had a tragic yet humorous ending.

    • @randomroses1494
      @randomroses1494 4 месяца назад +1

      Many years ago, I saw someone who was injured in what must’ve been a similar accident to the one you describe . He was being walked along, supported by workmen with his whole head, including most of his face wrapped up like a giant turban. I remember feeling shocked, horrified and sickened all at once. He looked very young. I desperately hoped he would be okay.

    • @Thomas-wn7cl
      @Thomas-wn7cl 4 месяца назад

      @randomroses1494 yeah, I was working for an Irish outfit renovating an older building that had oversized brick arches on the ceiling. One of these worked loose and stuck a worker in the head. They dragged him to the slop sink and tried to stem the bleeding with paper towels. I remember being a young man and looking at the amount of bloody rags sloshing about in the blood and water of the clogged sink. He had a horrible ringing in his head from the blow.

  • @jodywho6696
    @jodywho6696 4 месяца назад

    That was a great story. The reading was also great✨

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    Before this story, all that "Bristol" brough to my mind was "ship shape and Bristol fashion" and Diana Wynne Jones.

  • @jayturner3397
    @jayturner3397 4 месяца назад

    Sweet 😋 cheers

  • @Sharon-bb5vj
    @Sharon-bb5vj 4 месяца назад +2

    Boss 🙌🏻🩷

  • @williamdolbear2848
    @williamdolbear2848 3 месяца назад

    great narration keep it up !!!

  • @JustFamilyThings
    @JustFamilyThings 4 месяца назад

    I’d like to launch one of our discord book chats from this story! I’ll make the suggestion there. Great story, and I love the author interview.

  • @alexiswilliamsinc
    @alexiswilliamsinc 4 месяца назад +2

    TL;DR: Both author and narrator have fascinated me to effusion. My bad for the essay. 🤷🏽‍♀️
    ***
    This is only my second listening experience for the channel and I can’t say enough how elated I was to get not only Tony’s end reflections but also an interview with the author and to find out about Lewis’s (coming and other) work.
    Huge compliment to Darley (whose name will be easier to remember now that you’ve made the famous Dalí association in my porous brain) that I expected him to be way older from his storytelling, although there is also a freshness to the content that makes sense, too. Please don’t rush the animation. I - at least - will gladly find it once released no matter how far in the future. Much respect for your inspiring goal-setting for learning animation skills associated with your passions!
    I’m afraid of spoilers for anyone reading this before listening, so
    *Spoilers*
    The horror these two discuss at the end - of knowing but being powerless to change what you know - made me almost angry at Lewis when he started the interview!! “He killed Tom!” 😂😂 I realized I had spent the last part of the story saying, “NO!!! No no no no,” in my mind. “Not the gRaVy!” 😅😅😅
    What this means for me is that Tom’s character - and really all three main characters - had enough depth by the end to have become “people.” Does that make sense? In such a short time, Lewis provided enough detail that I had begun to care about each of them, including the roomie who might in other tales have been a superficial afterthought. I like her obsessive cleaning. 🥲
    Tom might have been just a cute jock in someone else’s story but instead he had immediate personality and just enough inner life to draw me in. In the narrations about his thoughts, I can see through his eyes, the swirling confusion of what sense to make of the ghost story about …himself.
    And then his moment of reckoning that ends with never actually seeing him again in the story…. It’s like I can hear the quiet dread begin from that point, imperceptibly at first, but becoming louder and more insistent as I fight it back, denying this soundtrack’s existence despite it eventually becoming deafening. Unavoidable and undeniable. 😩
    Bear with me. I just woke up and finished the story so I’m still half asleep.
    I loved the looming dorm, too. It reminded me of coming “home” in college to my own high rise dorm late one weekend night. As my friends and I approached the front doors, a salt shaker fell from a high window and crashed to the concrete near us. We gained a new respect for gravity at the same time that we were PISSED at the person responsible for the incident, whom we didn’t find.
    So yeah, umm, I have a feeling both of you will have some of my money in the future. 😊🎉

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад +1

      Thank you for your thorough and thoughtful comment. very much appreciated

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    That was a ghastly vision.

  • @Mr_Flerb
    @Mr_Flerb 4 месяца назад

    Extremely well written. This is why contemporary fiction isn’t for me, though. That is, trauma and emotional realism at the forefront with the uncanny primary used as a means to communicate it.

  • @janefan77
    @janefan77 3 месяца назад

    Also, Sarah was a bit of a Cassandra too

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    I would think that someone feeling suicidal, but squeamish, would try cleaning that haunted model galleon, but I guess not.

  • @user-db2fb1db1m
    @user-db2fb1db1m 4 месяца назад +1

    Bloody excellent British horror
    Too bad we going extinct

    • @user-db2fb1db1m
      @user-db2fb1db1m 4 месяца назад

      That’s good you comprehend what Boris Johnson is about
      It is tragic that ancient culture is disappearing from political agendas and financial systems that do have motives that rival that of any horror fiction genre.

  • @boxfox2945
    @boxfox2945 2 месяца назад

    X-files, mulder asks clyde' if everything is already prewritten. & it cant be changed' what's the piont in doing' anything? And clyde says, "now" ur getting the picture..

  • @boxfox2945
    @boxfox2945 2 месяца назад

    Final destination'🕯 more things change, more they will stay, - what will' may.. 💀

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    Pity Sarah didn't heed the song about keeping one's moggy in.

  • @killerdoug20
    @killerdoug20 4 месяца назад

    This one hasn't really been done. room 13 by robert swindells

  • @joanieann6179
    @joanieann6179 4 месяца назад

    So sad...😢

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 4 месяца назад

    Which university in Bristol is Sara attending? I know the bar and bearpit are real because I looked them up to enter in the "important places" section for this story's entry at LibraryThing.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  4 месяца назад

      +@annnichols3091 I’ll
      have to ask Lewis

    • @annnichols3091
      @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

      @@ClassicGhost Please do. If it's a fictional one, no need to mention it if it's not named.

    • @ClassicGhost
      @ClassicGhost  3 месяца назад

      @@annnichols3091 I asked him and i think he said UWE but then building which is real was used by different universities he said

    • @annnichols3091
      @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

      @@ClassicGhost Thank ou.

  • @annedromeda9857
    @annedromeda9857 4 месяца назад +1

    Did she kill him, if he had gone to football, he would not have been under the scaffolding, did her fear kill him?

    • @boxfox2945
      @boxfox2945 2 месяца назад

      In away. The future is set in stone. What ever you try, thinking to alter it' only proves to be a part of its unfolding..

  • @user-qj6wj5kz3x
    @user-qj6wj5kz3x 5 дней назад

    She made it happen in the end because if she haven’t been there he would have got his bus home 😢

  • @annnichols3091
    @annnichols3091 3 месяца назад

    Mr. Darley graduated just before the Covid-19 pandemic? Ouch.

  • @robloggia
    @robloggia 3 месяца назад +1

    I find myself getting mad when I read stories like this. Not mad at the author, but mad as a father at the fictional parents of the character for not recognizing Sarah's super natural powers earlier.

  • @electrictofumuffins6384
    @electrictofumuffins6384 4 месяца назад

    Faulkner's 1st published short story is a doozy. In the style of American gothic, it's called "A Rose For Emily".
    en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Rose_for_Emily