Robert, I just followed along closely with the lyrics as you performed. You are indeed a song poet and the words are most engaging as I try to follow along with my own appreciation of the message your are sending in the song. Thank you.
Another song to love, Robert. You really are a very skillful writer and tunesmith, my friend. Everything fits, every line carries me onto the next. Terrific arrangement, vocal and guitar. Yes, I like very much. If I could subscribe again, I would.
Bravo Eric pour cette belle composition. Beau jeu de guitare et belle interprétation. Amitiés musicales. Bravo Eric for this beautiful composition. Beautiful guitar playing and beautiful interpretation. Musical friendships. Pierre. (FRANCE)
Good job! Good lyrics ! I liked your rhyme pattern ! I would consider putting in a chorus where you could put the tittle instead of just in the tag at the end of the song ! Maybe even a different tittle ! But that is just me and I am not saying there is anything wrong with the way you have done it but just how I would probably have done it !
Thank you, Ron. I appreciate the comment. I usually write songs by first selecting a chord progression, then weaving a melody into it, and only then writing the lyrics. But this song started life as a poem. I wrote the poem in 2010. A friend recently suggested I turn it into a song. I resisted the idea at first, but then thought I'd try it. I didn't want to alter the structure or wording of the poem, so that ruled out adding any chorus. I decided to turn the final stanza into a coda, to bring the song to a resolution. I'm fairly happy with way it turned out.
@@roberthaigh3206 We have a different style of writing ! I generally always start with a tittle and I find with a good tittle the song will almost write itself !
@@ronhammar1154 There is no right or wrong way to write a song, of course, and I do sometimes have a title in mind before I've even composed the first line. The world of music is a wonderful and varied thing!
I write both poetry and songs. The lyrics to this song were written as a poem in 2010. Then, in 2023, a friend suggested I should turn it into a song. After a little thought I did just that and this is the result.
@@michaelmurphymusic Thank you, Michael! I usually think twice before turning a poem into a song, because I don't like to add to an existing poem. But, sometimes it can work out OK, without a chorus, in the manner of an old folk song.
I'm glad to listen to the "I" of a poet, it is an I in whom each heart can recognize or discover his or her self! 🙏🏻🕊
Thank you very much, Mario! I'm glad you like my song!
Beautiful song Robert
Thank you very much!
Very nice Robert!!! Lots of feeling. "I am".......grateful for hearing your song!
Thank you very much, Kevin!
Robert, I just followed along closely with the lyrics as you performed. You are indeed a song poet and the words are most engaging as I try to follow along with my own appreciation of the message your are sending in the song. Thank you.
Thank you for your considered comment, Mike! I appreciate your thoughts and comments!
Excellent performance and song Robert sounds awesome
Thanks a lot, Jeff! Much appreciated!
Hello, Robert! It's a beautiful original song! Pretty melody, very good vocal and amazing guitar sounds!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!
What a beautiful song Robert!
Thank you for your kind words, Ryan!
You have a lot of great covers but I am always drawn to the originals. And I really like this one. The lyrics are great.
Thank you so much!
Another song to love, Robert. You really are a very skillful writer and tunesmith, my friend. Everything fits, every line carries me onto the next. Terrific arrangement, vocal and guitar. Yes, I like very much. If I could subscribe again, I would.
Thank you once again for the comment and your support, Robin! I am grateful!
Great sound
Thank you!
Very nice! Great lyrics.
Thank you! Glad you like it!
I Figured You Can Write Good Songs Robert, Your A Natural At It!!!
Thank you for the kind comment, Rob! I appreciate it!
Very nice! I really like the chord progression too.
Thank you for the comment. I appreciate it.
Excellent..Gongratulations 👍Have a good day Danielle 🎵 🎶👋
Thank you, Danielle! You have a good day too!
Wonderful composition with cool & picturesque lyrics. Excellent performance! Super cool 👍👍
Thank you for your kind comment. Much appreciated!
Great job Robert. Nice message. Melody. Dynamics. Thanks. Thanks Music!
Thank you, Paul!
Sweet tune, Robert! All the way around!!! Also, Pardon my intermittent silence, buddy. It's just a busy world at present!!
Thank you for the visit and the comment, Hal! No need to apologise for any temporary absence. We all live busy lives. Best wishes, my friend!
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Thank you for the visit, and for the like! Much appreciated!
Hallo Robert, a fantastic version of a lovely original my dear friend ! Can't be done much better 👍👍 BIG like.
I wish you all the best ... Fons.
Thank you, my friend! I appreciate the comment!
Bravo Eric pour cette belle composition.
Beau jeu de guitare et belle interprétation.
Amitiés musicales.
Bravo Eric for this beautiful composition.
Beautiful guitar playing and beautiful interpretation.
Musical friendships.
Pierre. (FRANCE)
Thank you for your kind words, Pierre!
Beautiful original Robert!! Congrats for your job🎸
Thank you so much!
This has a wonderful sound! Lyrics and melody 😊
Thank you for your kind words!
Very well written and performed. You have quite the talent; I am glad I found your RUclips channel.
Thank you for your kind words, James!
Beautiful lyrics and arrangement.
Thank you! I'm glad you like this.
Super schön,
Thank you!
Good job! Good lyrics ! I liked your rhyme pattern ! I would consider putting in a chorus where you could put the tittle instead of just in the tag at the end of the song ! Maybe even a different tittle ! But that is just me and I am not saying there is anything wrong with the way you have done it but just how I would probably have done it !
Thank you, Ron. I appreciate the comment. I usually write songs by first selecting a chord progression, then weaving a melody into it, and only then writing the lyrics. But this song started life as a poem. I wrote the poem in 2010. A friend recently suggested I turn it into a song. I resisted the idea at first, but then thought I'd try it. I didn't want to alter the structure or wording of the poem, so that ruled out adding any chorus. I decided to turn the final stanza into a coda, to bring the song to a resolution. I'm fairly happy with way it turned out.
@@roberthaigh3206 We have a different style of writing ! I generally always start with a tittle and I find with a good tittle the song will almost write itself !
@@ronhammar1154 There is no right or wrong way to write a song, of course, and I do sometimes have a title in mind before I've even composed the first line. The world of music is a wonderful and varied thing!
@@roberthaigh3206 I agree with what you are saying ! You as a writer can write the way you want to write ! I was only trying to be helpful !
I write both poetry and songs. The lyrics to this song were written as a poem in 2010. Then, in 2023, a friend suggested I should turn it into a song. After a little thought I did just that and this is the result.
Thank your friend for us. Well done,
@@michaelmurphymusic Thank you, Michael! I usually think twice before turning a poem into a song, because I don't like to add to an existing poem. But, sometimes it can work out OK, without a chorus, in the manner of an old folk song.