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  • Are you writing a college essay? START HERE. Brainstorming with my Essence Objects Exercise is a great way for students to begin the college essay writing process with confidence. What's an essence object? Find out!
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Комментарии • 94

  • @Collegeessayguy
    @Collegeessayguy  5 лет назад +7

    What are some of your essence objects? Share below!

  • @strugglingcollegestudent
    @strugglingcollegestudent 3 года назад +79

    Don't mind me just having an existential crisis while writing college essays

  • @hopemooketsa1867
    @hopemooketsa1867 4 года назад +61

    Damn. This must be what therapy feels like. I actually shed a tear trying to complete this exercise. And most of all.. I just realised that I'm not boring at all.. If anything I'm quite interesting.. I think I would like me.. If I met me..
    Wow📝 you need a nap after completing this

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 года назад +6

      Wow, Hope. Couldn't have said it better myself. We've all got a story. Just takes a little digging. :)

  • @amarisky21
    @amarisky21 3 года назад +47

    I didn't expect it to go like this... I cried a few times and had to stop the video. This exercise helped me organize my life into simple phrases. I feel like everyone should complete this exercise even if they're not working on a college essay. THANK YOU!!! This was definitely a much needed roller-coaster.

  • @jameschow8874
    @jameschow8874 5 лет назад +81

    What's a food that reminds you of your grandmother?
    What's an object that reminds you of home?
    What's an object that reminds you of your connection with your father?
    What object represents your relationship with your mother?
    What object represents your superpower?
    What's a secret that you have?
    What's a piece of art or music that you love?
    What's something that makes you feel safe
    What's a challenge that you've faced in your life?
    What resource did you have to draw on to make it through that challenge?
    What's a goal or dream for the future that you have?
    What's something that you love to do so much that you lose time?
    What's a fear that you have?
    What's something that you regret?
    What object reminds you of a perfect day?
    What's a book that changed your life?
    What's your favorite holiday?
    What's something people associate with you?
    I wouldn't be who I am today without _____?
    My life forever changed when _______?
    What's something that you wouldn't want to reveal to just anyone?
    What's an object that represents your connection with your best friend?
    What do you want to be when you grow up?
    What's a quality you possess that you think is underappreciated?
    Which essences of yours are missing from your list?

  • @tayfrankel750
    @tayfrankel750 2 года назад +17

    my college counselor sent me this video to help me brainstorm ideas, but this hit pretty deep and I'm currently rethinking my life's choices

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  2 года назад +1

      LOL, happens sometimes! Thanks for watching.

  • @niaavaadams1200
    @niaavaadams1200 Год назад +10

    I cried so much during this and really didn't think I would. This honestly felt like free therapy and brought up many memories. Thank you so much for this video, I"m definitely going to send it to my friends

  • @saltyxchip
    @saltyxchip 4 года назад +28

    DONT PUT GRANDMA IN A BOX LMAO

  • @LaLa-en2wb
    @LaLa-en2wb 3 года назад +9

    This guy saves so many lives each day

  • @paysonzhang5797
    @paysonzhang5797 5 лет назад +94

    As I went through the questions I found that I don’t know who I am ... :(

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 года назад +8

      It's never too late to start. I recommend starting with the Values Exercise: www.collegeessayguy.com/cwiab-student-15-values-exercise

  • @lillianwyckoff4022
    @lillianwyckoff4022 Год назад +9

    Watching this I realized I'm not even a person lol. There is nothing interesting or deep about me. I don't have a superpower. I haven't struggled. I do really well in school, that's what I spend all my time on, but I can't write about that! "I'm smart let me in your college" lol. I get so irritated when people assume I'm this one dimensional person who just studies all the time but it's true! I'm going to watch your values video now though

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Год назад +1

      Thanks for sharing! Try some more brainstorming! You likely have values, skills, qualities, and itnerests that are worth highlighting in your college essays. :)

    • @smartyltc20o7
      @smartyltc20o7 10 месяцев назад

      Same. What did you end up writing about?

  • @Grkbkasys
    @Grkbkasys 3 года назад +8

    Wow, that was ....got no words ...before, I didn't think I have a story to tell but now hmm ...yeah I've got a lot of untold stories

  • @karinacastaneda4031
    @karinacastaneda4031 5 лет назад +8

    A dream catcher, map, butterfly, ice pack...this was super helpful, thank you!

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  4 года назад +1

      That's awesome. Each one of those is a story I want to hear about.

  • @astronae
    @astronae 3 года назад +9

    you and your wife's tradition is so cute omg

  • @enKhma3
    @enKhma3 11 месяцев назад +1

    Thank you. It helped me to find ideas to write on my college essay after uploaded 5 years. It's still valuable. Good luck.

  • @joannelee5574
    @joannelee5574 3 года назад +8

    Dang, I feel like I just left another plane of reality

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 года назад +3

      I guess I should have listed that as a potential side-effect. :)

    • @joannelee5574
      @joannelee5574 3 года назад

      In an alternate universe, you’re for sure a therapist

  • @hamfahimkabir
    @hamfahimkabir Год назад +2

    Great resource. I explored so many unknown things about me and my values. I got a glimpse of how people view me. Thank you so much.

  • @candybar5927
    @candybar5927 4 года назад +6

    This really works. I am shook.

  • @robertsun8494
    @robertsun8494 2 года назад +6

    Just saying, your friendship bracelet is probably the best object possible to represent the amazing relationship you have with your wife. I'm so confused about this exercise though, what do we do if we can answer your brainstorming questions but can't exactly think of an object to describe it?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  2 года назад +1

      It's OK if you can't think of an object for each question. Maybe that even means there's some insight to illuminate there, i.e....you don't value material possessions, but instead, X. Thanks for watching!

  • @yourbestfriend2564
    @yourbestfriend2564 3 года назад +4

    this really attacked my soul lol
    also shout out to guru academic advising my counselor there recommended this

  • @riotsammy
    @riotsammy 4 года назад +19

    This video's got me all depressed. Unexpected...

  • @margaritabautista9840
    @margaritabautista9840 4 года назад +6

    Your videos are extremely helpful. Thank you so much!

  • @alithea9510
    @alithea9510 Год назад +2

    It seems like a lot of these are so personal that I wouldn't want to share them with the vast majority of people, let alone the people reading my college application. Question: what if you're so boring you have nothing to write about?

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Год назад +2

      Colleges want to get an idea of the skills, qualities, values, and interests you'll bring with you to the school as an incoming student. Sometimes, a good way to do this is by showcasing vulnerability, but there are also other ways. It's OK if you don't want to dig too deep into your personal life in your applications. As long as you can provide insight into who you are and what values you possess, your application will be doing its job. Hope this helps!

  • @aniruddhvasishta8334
    @aniruddhvasishta8334 4 года назад +6

    8:08 damn bro I could've gotten 20 objects just from that question (/s)

  • @gamerguy8516
    @gamerguy8516 5 лет назад +12

    that's so deep

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  5 лет назад +3

      It can get pretty deep, yeah! It's exciting to uncover and discover these parts of your life. :) Hope you have fun with it.

  • @brianshirazi373
    @brianshirazi373 7 лет назад +11

    barbecue sauce is dank

  • @session811
    @session811 2 года назад +3

    Really, thank you soooo much ❤❤

  • @MsJeannieKellyTX
    @MsJeannieKellyTX 3 года назад +2

    Phenomenal

  • @ThomasTheThermonuclearBomb
    @ThomasTheThermonuclearBomb 7 месяцев назад +1

    that moment when half of your items are pride flags because you grew up in the south

  • @yoyotir1360
    @yoyotir1360 3 года назад +2

    well I still have 7days but I didn't start writing my essay yet because I don't know what to write about

  • @HappinessTheBrand
    @HappinessTheBrand 10 месяцев назад

    So extremely helpful

  • @AdnanKhan-vw6ix
    @AdnanKhan-vw6ix 6 лет назад +2

    am i gonna write these all in my 650 words ? confusing !! can you please tell me what about should i write in my common application essay ??

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  5 лет назад

      Thanks for sharing the link, Liam!
      There are also more resources listed in the video description!

  • @chenchen-eo4yf
    @chenchen-eo4yf 8 месяцев назад

    What's the music in the background?! so calm!

  • @PamPassey
    @PamPassey Год назад

    What was the name of the body language book?

  • @brookepitt7600
    @brookepitt7600 Год назад

    I have a million ideas I just can’t seem to decide which will best show me😢

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Год назад +1

      Write a rough draft for a couple topics and go from there!

  • @mxrciful7200
    @mxrciful7200 Год назад

    Can't think of any objects :(

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Год назад +1

      That's OK! Check out some of our other brainstorming exercises. Not all of them will be applicable to everyone, so hopefully you find one that is generative and relevant to your experience.

  • @isabelleoyewole2617
    @isabelleoyewole2617 Месяц назад

    i know im cooked cus i couldn't even answer any of these questions..

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  Месяц назад

      You got this. Sometimes you need to be in the right headspace for brainstorming. Try again later and/or try different exercises! I have tons more on my channel/website.

  • @yerassyl1368
    @yerassyl1368 3 года назад +1

    I am just a crap. Even here I have nothing to write, my life is a big crap

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 года назад +2

      Disagree. Keep pushing. Take a look at some more of my brainstorming exercises. You may have not found the right one for you yet.

  • @m.01st
    @m.01st 4 года назад

    Can I have THE BLACK EDITION PLEASE !!!!!

    • @hopemooketsa1867
      @hopemooketsa1867 4 года назад

      Which one is that.. Drop a link..
      But I actually found this helpful.. A good starting point..

    • @jessicashahan9888
      @jessicashahan9888 3 года назад

      What is something people associated with you? My friend says her butt. I say my hight for me.

    • @m.01st
      @m.01st 3 года назад

      Bro.. I don’t remember typing this.. lol

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 года назад

      Would love to hear your feedback! Feel free to send us an email to help@collegeessayguy.com

    • @m.01st
      @m.01st 3 года назад

      @@Collegeessayguy Hey man, I don’t Recall typing this.. but Thanks for Reaching out

  • @alexm2136
    @alexm2136 3 года назад +1

    one of the cringiest videos I've ever seen

    • @Collegeessayguy
      @Collegeessayguy  3 года назад +11

      Ok then! Thanks for chiming in.

    • @pablocuin2396
      @pablocuin2396 3 года назад

      @@Collegeessayguy face yourself

    • @aspicymeme2773
      @aspicymeme2773 2 года назад

      you're too young to be on the internet, youl regret it in the future