I am literally so deeply moved, because of what you said: “Parents are the roof that protect the house, the leaves that shield the branches. Without the walls the roof comes crashing down, without the branches leaves flattern to the ground (…) Perhaps the world is nothing. When the leaves flattern to the ground, the wind scatters them, leaving no memory of their existence”. This vivid way of describing the position of parents who lost their kids is EPIC. It really does help to understand the gravity of the situation and feel the emotions you describe.Thank you for making this video!
Your essays inspire me. You have a unique character that everyone should emulate . I'm glad I stumbled on your video and I hope and know I'll see you in Yale 2023
Hey, do you know there is a way you can avoid doing assignments ever again but still get great grades? It's a simple trick that will blow your mind: ruclips.net/video/Qcz790uxHFQ/видео.html
I really admired her way of writing. She is the most competent writer I have ever come across when it comes to scholarships. I am so jealous(in a positive way, I will practice).
hi, I’m a Baha’i from Vietnam. Watching this video really give me a sense of familiarity since you mentioned the faith quite regularly. I also dream to get into Yale some day as well ^^ congrats on your achievement, those essays really touched my heart!
Beautiful! the fact that you put little anecdotes about your parents + sister and what you learnt from them is brilliant. it is something very simple but has a profound impact on the reader.
Alla’u’abha dear friend! I’m a Baha’i from Macao, China, Hong Kong, China and Canada who had some physical problems that stunted my academic growth, I only did semester 1 of Bachelors. However, I just got accepted into a MA in creative writing by a uni in UK, they waived my BA requirement because my writing sample was good enough. I’d love to attend or teach at Harvard some day. Unity in diversity and independent investigation of the truth are my favorite Baha’i values.
For anyone who’s feeling down: Romans 8:18 “The pain you’ve been feeling can’t compare to the joy that is coming!” John 3:16 “For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life.” Whatever is going on right now, have faith, your situation will get better. :) Jesus bless anyone reading this and have a great day!!🥰✨💖
This is some genuinely beautiful writing. Thank you for the video, was definitely helpful now that I'm starting to think about what I want to write about
your essays are amazing! and your name is so pretty. a lot of videos like these demoralize me and make me depise both myself and the people who can do, what i think i couldnt, but not YOURS! your essay about your family was inspiring - i love how you totally caught us off guard with what you chose! how did you know what essays you wanted, and choose your ec, so on?
take advantage of all of the opportunities presented to you. join clubs, take up leadership positions, and enter contests. above all, do what YOU want to do
Just start a club of anything to help community- with 3 friends and grow it all 4 years. Ivy’s love lots of volunteer hours so find 1 organization and devote 4 years to it and be a leader by junior year. Find any kind of internship by sophomore/ junior year--it can be small. Take 2 AP in freshman and 3 in sophomore year etc and keep that GPA up--what ever it takes. Start taking the psat and get High scores on it. All doors open when you become a national merit finalist-scholarship, all colleges. Ivies also love tutoring youngsters-- so start teaching elementary kids 2,3 of them anything....music, reading,math. Ivies/ top colleges love starters, leaders, volunteers, high scores. Don’t do clubs only 1-2. Be a leader to start a new club--far better than winning contests.
I meant to say speech and debate, journalism, robotics all 4 years in any of these are considered intelligent activities by ivies;.... don’t make athletics your focus, definitely do it,
I'm on the verge of writing my UChicago supplement and I can't lie, I'm as confused as you were. I have no idea how to get it done. I hope your video helps me to get to my destination. Thanks for the video though .
Your essays are so genuine. Can I read them please, as I am not native speaker some sentences are not hard to understand in sequence. Thank you! Can you send me ?
omg are you kidding, you write like a star. these essays are genuinely beautiful and pretty sure the committee couldnt deny you an acceptance
I am literally so deeply moved, because of what you said: “Parents are the roof that protect the house, the leaves that shield the branches. Without the walls the roof comes crashing down, without the branches leaves flattern to the ground (…) Perhaps the world is nothing. When the leaves flattern to the ground, the wind scatters them, leaving no memory of their existence”. This vivid way of describing the position of parents who lost their kids is EPIC. It really does help to understand the gravity of the situation and feel the emotions you describe.Thank you for making this video!
It’s the essay making me cry for me
@Luis Forest wut?
Your last essay was absolutely beautiful, and it brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for sharing it!
Your essays inspire me. You have a unique character that everyone should emulate . I'm glad I stumbled on your video and I hope and know I'll see you in Yale 2023
Hey, do you know there is a way you can avoid doing assignments ever again but still get great grades? It's a simple trick that will blow your mind: ruclips.net/video/Qcz790uxHFQ/видео.html
did you get into Yale?
2023 bro
Did u do it?
Actually unbelievable. They were all very well written and I hope to one day write an essay as interesting yours.
Now I know how high the bar is 😭😭
I really admired her way of writing. She is the most competent writer I have ever come across when it comes to scholarships. I am so jealous(in a positive way, I will practice).
You're such a talented writer! Congratulations on all of your acceptances
hi, I’m a Baha’i from Vietnam. Watching this video really give me a sense of familiarity since you mentioned the faith quite regularly. I also dream to get into Yale some day as well ^^ congrats on your achievement, those essays really touched my heart!
I loved how your essays were soo personal and relatable but at the same time brilliant enough to get you into the ivy leagues .
I'm not even near college age yet but I'm just listening for the sake of hearing beautiful, poetic words and stories to please my ears.
These Essays were amazing !!
Beautiful! the fact that you put little anecdotes about your parents + sister and what you learnt from them is brilliant. it is something very simple but has a profound impact on the reader.
the last sentence of the common app essay was so good, loved all the essays!!
The essay is so amazing. I'm from Ethiopia and i'm watching your vid's. They are so nice i love you. And i love that you are Eritrean
Kenean Samuel wow like Nipsey Hussle
I knew it. Am from Ethiopia and new right away she was from our hood
as someone who was part of bahai youth groups, this was so inspiring. thank you for sharing your experiences and essays!
not even kidding this almost made me cry!! aaaaa goosebumps
Jese, that's the best essay I have ever heard. Respect
your common app was beautiful! i love the way it was worded and you're storytelling is great
Your essays are amazing
Words cannot describe how beautifully scripted and unique your essay was. Thank you for sharing it :)
This is really random, but the whole video I was just distracted by how pretty you are
Actually 😭😭
Same 😆
More creepy than random, but okay
W rizz ?
Same
The best essay I’ve ever listened!
Ur voice is angelic and the essay is amazingg
I love your essays, I am trying to write mine now and still stuck. Really love the essays
Alla’u’abha dear friend! I’m a Baha’i from Macao, China, Hong Kong, China and Canada who had some physical problems that stunted my academic growth, I only did semester 1 of Bachelors. However, I just got accepted into a MA in creative writing by a uni in UK, they waived my BA requirement because my writing sample was good enough. I’d love to attend or teach at Harvard some day. Unity in diversity and independent investigation of the truth are my favorite Baha’i values.
the way you portray your admiration for your parents is so beautiful; loved it!
Ok, but all of your essays are incredible!!!!!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
For anyone who’s feeling down:
Romans 8:18 “The pain you’ve been feeling can’t compare to the joy that is coming!” John 3:16 “For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son that whosoever believes in Him shall not perish but have eternal life.” Whatever is going on right now, have faith, your situation will get better. :) Jesus bless anyone reading this and have a great day!!🥰✨💖
Gwen Shin My pleasure!! Know that you are loved sis! By Him and me! God bless you!!🙏🏽✨💖
God bless you for this!!💗💗
Thank you so much. God bless you, sister!
This essay is so good and inspired me as a child to Kenyan immigrants, I relate a lot.
I am from Eritrean too and my parents went through the same thing as yours and it's just amazing how you wrote it.
Thank you for sharing. The essay about parents who lost a child, should be recorded as a spoken word piece/poem.
omg wonderful!! all of your responses were wonderful wow.
This is some genuinely beautiful writing. Thank you for the video, was definitely helpful now that I'm starting to think about what I want to write about
hopefully i can get better at writing when i write my essay in 5 years
this is genuinely incredible
That last essay of yours needs to be published somewhere!
Literally full body chills
Bro beautiful essay!
Ps-you should write a book, I’d totally read it!
Wooow your essays are soooo great.This is good thumbs up! I've really learnt a lot.
Powerful 🖤 & your hair is EVERYTHING 🖤
this is so cool! im from asmara eritrea too!
as soon as i clicked on the video i was like “wow she’s so pretty.. she looks habesha” LMDAOOA
your essays are amazing! and your name is so pretty. a lot of videos like these demoralize me and make me depise both myself and the people who can do, what i think i couldnt, but not YOURS! your essay about your family was inspiring - i love how you totally caught us off guard with what you chose!
how did you know what essays you wanted, and choose your ec, so on?
This was very inspiring! thank you for sharing your wonderful experience
I like your easy. Because it contains natural life history and wisdom.
I am literally inspired by your story and such a beautiful essays indeed Leleda.
i couldnt help crying by the end of this video
literal chills!!!
LOVE the hairstyle!
Thank you so much for this video , I loved all your essays.
weird question, what's your favorite book/ type of book you read?
Bro YOU ARE SO GOOD
off topic but you and your entire family are so pretty
OMG 🥺 THANK YOU SO MUCH,MY BELOVED SISTER💕💕💕
Oh gosh your writing is amazing!
Me tryna replicate this 💀
Lmao thx for the inspiration tho
Be original!
😭😭
You are so pretty 😭
You are amaaaazing!!!
I'm a freshman (as of this year) and I want to take steps to getting me into an ivy league school. Please help me!!
take advantage of all of the opportunities presented to you. join clubs, take up leadership positions, and enter contests. above all, do what YOU want to do
Just start a club of anything to help community- with 3 friends and grow it all 4 years. Ivy’s love lots of volunteer hours so find 1 organization and devote 4 years to it and be a leader by junior year. Find any kind of internship by sophomore/ junior year--it can be small. Take 2 AP in freshman and 3 in sophomore year etc and keep that GPA up--what ever it takes. Start taking the psat and get High scores on it. All doors open when you become a national merit finalist-scholarship, all colleges. Ivies also love tutoring youngsters-- so start teaching elementary kids 2,3 of them anything....music, reading,math. Ivies/ top colleges love starters, leaders, volunteers, high scores. Don’t do clubs only 1-2. Be a leader to start a new club--far better than winning contests.
I meant to say speech and debate, journalism, robotics all 4 years in any of these are considered intelligent activities by ivies;.... don’t make athletics your focus, definitely do it,
Beautiful essay!
this is good to watch
How exactly do you come up with such amazing essays ❤❤ it’s wonderful, no wonder you got in🎉🎉
She didn’t have a laptop and wrote everything on her mobile phone😭
I love your essays!! I have a questions though, does each university have its own personal statement prompt?
some require their own short supplemental essays
Thank you for sharing. You are loved.
PaperGen is the best way to write long papers and stay clear of AI detection!
elelelelleelele congrats konjit!
Love your hair. ❤️❤️❤️
youre glowingg
your hair is gorgeous and you are as well
Honestly I love you
Sending you love from east africa 💕💕
Will you make a life at Yale vlog ?
I'm also Eritrean and its my dream to go to Yale.
love from ethiopia
Great essay!!
I knew you are from Ethiopia/ Eritrea when I saw ur face. BTW your essay is amazing.
So inspiring! You're so cute! And so smart!
Just asking, did you do the SAT
This literally sounds like my family 😢😢
I'm on the verge of writing my UChicago supplement and I can't lie, I'm as confused as you were. I have no idea how to get it done. I hope your video helps me to get to my destination. Thanks for the video though .
Hello i want to ask if i should write my 2021 common app essay in paragraphs or should i just write one long essay with no paragraphs
Always write essays with paragraphs
That was amazing 😮.
Thank you for the video butt your so pretty
how long did it take you in total to write your essays and supplemental questions?
They say 20+ hours
Ummm ur stunning
Ikr!! So preeettttyyyy
Love u so much ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Do you also read essays and give feedback? Thanks
please make a video about you extracurriculars
omg Im a bahai too this is so inspiring!
Can't find the first part of this video
I thought this girl was Ethiopian, don't get me wrong love ma Ethiopians. But we are so proud of our Eritrean girl Leleda. More videos to come
What's are some books you recommend?
YT recommended me this video a BIT too late lmao
Hi 🙋♀️ this is a really nice 👍🏻
Did you apply to UT Austin ?? I have had a hard time deciding on where to apply and trying to see if many even found it as an option??
Why am I crying?
Your essays are so genuine. Can I read them please, as I am not native speaker some sentences are not hard to understand in sequence. Thank you! Can you send me ?