My Incredibles Sequel Script: 13 Years in the Making

The Incredibles is my all-time favorite movie. After being disappointed by the official sequel, I decided to write my own. I've shared very few details about my script, but now, after 13 years, it's time.
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[@Eniy_]

That's pretty good plot for the movie

[@RetroBandicoot]

I agree with everything in this video, but i also have an idea for the villain, where he can absorb/take superpowers from other superhero’s, to me it makes the villain more dangerous and actually threatening.

[@zyonfilipe]

They could still do it for a third movie, seeing how disney is gonna do more sequels now!

[@etabiansosin]

To be honest, I don't think Jack should be the stereotypical angsty teenager who gets in trouble and not getting good grades. They did remove this trope with the blind girl in GxK where she was a teenager but is not an angsty teenager.

[@spencerrogers7663]

Why The Incredibles 2 (2018) Sucks:
The Incredibles 2 (2018)...no! This movie is so bloody outrageous! This movie is disappointing and it's an abomination! This is a not-so incredible film and it is certainly the WORST...FILM...EVER! It sucks! It's disgusting and unacceptable! It's horrible and the worst film ever that I've seen! Yeah, this movie is never good at all. I know I like The Incredibles 1 (2004), Jack-Jack Attack, all three Guardians of the Galaxy films, Spider-Man, The Avengers, Doctor Strange, Black Panther, Big Hero 6, Aqua-Man, Mary Poppins Returns, Ralph Breaks the Internet, Inside Out 2, and I am of course gonna like Moana 2 when it comes out in November this year. But The Incredibles 2 (2018) is horrible and it's just disappointing and it's so freaking outrageous. I can't believe we waiting 14 years for an abomination like this! And the plot was pretty bad. Yeah, there's many things bad about the movie. So I'm gonna put the reasons that explain why I hate this movie so much! Here we go.
1. Tony's new look didn't age well and looks nothing like his old counterpart.
2. ATROCIOUS BEGINNING: The detectives in the beginning are a dick to the supers for no reason, accuse them for the Underminer's escape, because they couldn't even fight criminals anymore until the end, because those ass-holes accused them!
3. It introduces the infamous Evelyn Deavor and the Screenslaver. Evelyn is generically an evil endeavor mobster, who wants superheroes to stay illegal forever! She was a gosh-darn witch! This makes her lack anything superhero related and have no characteristics besides evil endeavor. At least, Syndrome from before had some well-written humor to make him a very enjoyable villain to sit through. But, Evelyn has no good traits, making her a really lousy villain to sit through.
4. DVD False Advertising: Evelyn is nowhere to be pictured on the poster, despite being the main villain.
. In addition, Evelyn gets barely any screen-time as a villain before the reveal where she smacks the goggles on Mrs. Incredible for no reason and convinces Bob that she's okay. Well, SHE'S NOT OKAY!! WHAT WERE YOU THINKING DISNEY AND PIXAR?! Creating these horrible characters named Evelyn and the detectives!? They're the WORST...INCREDIBLES...CHARACTERS...EVER!! There's no reason why people would like these characters!
. Her motive is down-right stupid and bland: Despite having clear intentions, she was charged for framing in innocent pizza delivery guy, security breaches, false imprisonment, violating FCC regulations when the Screenslaver hijacked a radio and TV, causing supers get brainwashed for no reason and escapes in a jet! What a terrible villain she was in this film!
5. The Underminer never appears anywhere else after the bad beginning. What the hell?!
6. Despite Helen being the main character of this movie, Bob literally has more screen-time than she does.
. Granted, Bob gets all jealous of his wife being chosen to make supers legal again, which I do like this idea of.
. He even erases Violet's memories of Tony we see in the beginning. See?! Tony has no new memories in his mind no more!
7. The line, "Well, that went poorly." See?! It's never explained why the Underminer escaped in the first place.
8. No clear moral whatsoever.
9. The story makes no sense.
10. A ton of characters from before like Syndrome, Mirage, Omnidroids, Bernie Kropp, Kari McKeen, and Gilbert Huph are nowhere to be found.
11. Despite this film receiving a 93% on Rotten Tomatoes, there's many problems with this film.
Here's a handful of good things about this film
1. The animation still nice to look at.
2. The old characters are still likable, even the new characters like Winston, Rocky and the new superheroes (except for Evelyn and the detectives obviously).
3. Good ending: Once supers are made legal again, Evelyn did get arrested for all her horrible crimes. That's all fine and good. (But the detectives never even apologized to the supers for their actions) Later, Violet gets to know Tony again and later, she introduces herself and her family to him and they drop him off at the theaters and live happily ever after.
4. It is quite nice to know that Jack-Jack gets more focus.
5. The voice acting still does a good job, even the songs are good.
6. If they make a third film, it was hopefully fix the problems this film has.
Overall, I'm gonna give The Incredibles 2 (2018) a 0 out of 10, because it sucks and it's absolute garbage. But, if you like The Incredibles 2 (2018), I respect your opinion.
I'll still give the first film from 2004 and Jack-Jack Attack a 10 out of 10 along the other films I mentioned.
End of rant.