"The Brooding Star" | CreepyPasta Storytime
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- Опубликовано: 19 сен 2024
- Mathew Varney's Lovecraftian horror The Brooding Star
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The post apocalyptic setting was very creative, and left room for the audience to wonder what came before. The tidbits about the historians and their masters, traveling time flows and all that made it feel like a fleshed out world. The description of the brooding star monster was amazing and shackles the imagination with morbid fascination. Good stuff!
I couldn't really conceptualize the idea of temporal storms or fluctuating, localized time currents. Not in any meaningful way at least. But I was able to paint the picture, as aggravating as it was. The whole dead world with a ravaged atmosphere, and a rich history of extraterrestrial intervention was super cool, though.
The words of this story are intense... I am awestruck by both the author and narrator, Bravo boys. Your voice carries all of the emotional and physical body of the story. Love you man!
MrCreepyPasta is different from other narrators bc he is not afraid to get loud and intense and doesn’t focus on being soothing all the time. If the story is crazy and intense he follows suit. He reads very fast and yet with a good cadence and without sacrificing enunciation. Additionally, he does some narrations I have not heard anywhere else... Because they are so weird and intensely gory... Too much so for many narrators. I enjoy his videos in a different way than other narrators. It’s more of an edge of your seat kind of experience than most others out there. Keep up the great work!
So, am I the only one who thinks this is about Azathoth and not Cthulu? Cause Cthulu is under the ocean, not in space, and Azathoth is the one made out of tentacles and eyes
Eternal Horizons I completely forgot the name. But yeah, agreed. 99% sure thats the one the story is referring to.
It could be yog'sothoth
Yog Sothoth wouldn't bother punishing a single human for screwing with a single plan. He's got plans for days, I suppose if this was the most successful and he had what he wanted, this guy could have killed his pet human.
Azathoth has no capacity for spiteful vengeance, since our reality appears to be a dream of his.
Well, the best thing about the Mythos is that this doesn't have to be any Outer God or Great Old One we know about. It could potentially be Cthulhu, but I doubt humanity's had contact with 1% of Mythos entities, and Yog-Sothoth or Azathoth would essentially be like us trying to torture a bacterium. Either way, seems safe to assume this is after the Stars came Right, given humanity's near-extinction and the dissolution of the laws of physics, so Earth's fair game for whomever.
half of hpl's stuff r made out of tentacles and eyes
Amazing powers of description. This writers vocabulary is one to be envied along with the narration.
Great job!
"A Hamlet of seven buildings"
DARKEST DUNGEON INTENSIFIES
FINALLY A FELLOW DARKEST DUNGEONEER
The degeneracy of the hamlet is nothing, I fear, when compared to the condition of the surrounding acres.
*A SINGULAR STRIKE*
Even though I know Lovecraft didn’t make this story, if you said he did and I didn’t know better, I would believe you.
Cj Marshall Nope the writings good but not that good
Cj Marshall His writing style is nothing like Lovecraft’s lmao
Been binge listening to Lovecraft stories, his way of writing isn't this conversational and the way he speaks doesn't work for this story. The premise is similar, but Howard would have worded things differently.
Not enough racism and paranoia to pass for genuine Lovecraft.
You must not read a lot of lovecraft.
Love listening to a creepypasta just before bed, thank you
Need a niahlistic star god? Why not ziodberg?
Your comment's bad and you should feel bad!
Made me laugh bruh
yeah, i was using the app when i posted that and couldn't be arsed to open another window just to check the spelling
Okay but Cthulhu
WHY DO WE NEED ZOIDBERG OR CTHULUL WHEN WE HAVE FLOATING SPAGHETTI MONSTER, PRAISE THE FLOATING SPAGHETTI MONSTER
Bro your background music always make the story better
The artist behind most if not all his music is myuu
The description feels more like Azathoth than Cthulhu.
Desolate Hound do you know what azathoth is
Says someone who actually has read lovecraft👏👏👏
Machu Picchu? 🤔
@@Nexus-hj6bt åikii
This is so beautifully written and read...I'm speechless.
I love it when you do stories like this one! I'm on the edge of my seat the entire time! Well done, my friend!
That was a Lovecraft style masterpiece.
This is one of the best I’ve ever come across, seriously.
Excellent.
Hey this is really good. Makes me wanna go back and read some more of my Lovecraft books.
Bill Bobinson My thoughts exactly.
Go drink ranch you dork
Yeah, same. I love the works of Lovecraft so much that I bought the H. P Lovecraft Necronomicon, which is a collection of his greatest works. I'd highly recommend it.
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Cthulhoid it's free and has most all his works, essays, revisions, collaborations, poetry, youth writings etc etc . if not a true fan yet you will be shortly. May need an E reader also but it will sugest one if u don't have one. (Written, and audio) I haven't tried the audio I just read his works. Its a true treasure chest
Agreed
The brooding star, the emo kid of the Milky Way lol
In all seriousness though, I've been digging all of the Lovecraftian horror lately!
Who knew a ball of fire and gas could be so dark and edgy
Calm down edgy kids
Justin Bieber?
r/edgykids
It must be difficult reading all those MTG words so flawlessly.
I love it when it’s a long story !!!
"a soft lot with no valid cause for worry" great line.
Holy shit. A story about maximum entropy. I was reading about this stuff yesterday.
Welcome to weirdmageddon
Ayyyyy
Never found triangles so annoying...I know.....
Grappling Hook!!
Stop being annoying
yooo
Gravity falls theme plays
Tempting offer, but I think I'll keep my rainy days, thanks. Your world sounds very not okay.
Fucking fantastic can’t stress this enough
I have some questions about this story, maybe a fellow listener will see this and tell me if i understood properly.
If I'm not too wrong the story is as follows;
The brooding star showed up at one point and essentially ruined earth. A hundred or so years later the story starts following a dad and his son. Dad goes out to scavenge for something and discovers a place housing a robed figure who claims to be his son. The son tells his father that he can end the earth if he kills him right there. Having lost track of time The father now having no choice but to die from the environment or to take up the robed figures offer he kills the figure.
Moments later the brooding star reawoke or something and see me quite agitated. The man closed his eyes to accept his fate and when he opened his eyes he Was in some parallel earth (possibly an earth not too long after the arrival of the brooding star) that he thinks is paradise until he hears scurrying noises implying some monsters live there now. The father is now in some purgatory where he is forced to relive the moments that lead him to where he is now every seven years.
That's the story right? Did I miss anything?
I don't think this is about Azathoth or Cthulhu.
Azathoth isn't awake. He's never awake. Otherwise the universe can't exist, because it only exists in his dreams. And Cthluhu is the ocean, not space.
I love the stories and i love that you keep doing what your doing keep up the work,your one of my favorite youtuber I've been listening to you for a couple of years now❤
Hereafter I'm going to be suspicious of anyone named "Dylan".
yes yes yes , can you do like a full cthullu mythos man , that will be so awesome
Clever placement of Cthulu there
Verde the Star Warrior it’s about the Flying Spaghetti Monster you idiot
Death Its obviously Nyarlethotep
I feel like it’s probably more like Yog’sathoth or a fragment of Azathoth
I feel like it’s probably more like Yog’sathoth or a fragment of Azathoth
it's a fragment of azathoth
There's got to be more to this one!
It can't end like that! I really want more! :D
Everyone says Azathoth, but I think of Hadar, the Dark Hunger.
I love the wording in this one and thank you MCP for sharing it with us!
Beautiful story, and a beautiful narration
I’m loving these lovecraftian stories
There's a new runners story by the title of Far Too Much Mold. It's not classified under the Tag yet but look it up.
It’s about a leaky AC window unit the landlord won’t fix.
That being said... I knew a guy who had all the skin on his hands slough off from black mold exposure. It was total horror material.
Definitely one of my favs now !!!
Great reading narration. Not my favorite material but your narration skills were excellent and added a needed depth and emotion to the words.
I quite liked this. Well done, whoever wrote it.
MCP I absolutely love your videos man keep up the great work
This is basically what I intend for my current d&d campaign setting to turn into, should the bbeg get their way
Great story, like Ellison meets Lovecraft. And the narration perfwctly captures the feeling of panicked insanity. Kudos to both the author and the narrator on a great job.
Hey I don't know if you take requests but can you please read "Beyond the Veil of Sleep" by H.P. Lovecraft, Hearing my Favorite Story by my favorite Narrator would be euphoric.
catchy tune too!
I have zero clue what the flying fuck is going on
pep inyostep Basically reality is broken because humanity did something stupid again.
Welcome to reality, where humans fu*ked everything up, very possibly ours if we as a species continue to exploit and corrupt our planet. But what do I know, I'm just a random person of the internet who feels like every thing I do hurts someone else in some way shape or form.😐
I CANT UNDERSTAND YOU GO BACK TO YOUR COUNTRY
Chaslasher H You win the internet.
I know this is old, but I just found it! It's incredible.
This happened to me not so long ago and it is true:
It was night time. I couldn't sleep this was normal because I didn't really like to sleep. I went downstairs to get my iPad, I didn't turn on the lights so my parents don't suspect that I'm downstairs.
I look outside of the kitchen window....I saw a black figure with eyes that glowed orange in the back of my garden but what was weird because it at the back of the garden and we have a light that reacts to movement.
I ran into the corridor, at the stairs i could see the same exact thing in the corner of my living room. I ran upstairs faster with the iPad in my hand and I locked the door.
After a while of watching stuff on my iPad I heard footsteps outside of my bedroom door. I looked outside to see if the bathroom lights were on....they weren't on and those were the first pair footsteps I heard.
I quickly went to my room locking the door again. Then I heard knocking and scratching at my door seconds later. After they stopped I looked up to my window from bed only to see that thing standing there watching me, then disappeared.
This was happening all in an hour.
After the thing disappeared I looked at the clock...I was exactly 4:00am....
Good one! Yog Sothoth is my fav.
Anther great read thnx bro you da best🍺🍺🍺
Amazing video mcp! Keep it up!
Im strapped in and ready to go!
Is this the origin story of the necrons?
LET THE GALAXY BURN
@@darksnarder in the name of the all father i spit at thee
Wow man your narration was excellent I could hear the pain in your voice when you read as the messenger keep up the good work my friend:)
Love cosmic horror
“I was left to the mercy of gravity, who was NOT merciful” Well that’s quite the pickle
That was utterly amazing!...
Ryan Mendez hi
Beautifully narrated
10 out of 10
Lovecraft would shed a tear of joy Mr. Creepypasta
Ooooo. This is gonna be so good
Oh I have a brooding star for you MCP
Yogsothoth, is that you?
Nah he wouldn’t torcher humanity it only wanted knowledge
@@Mitchy-qw8no dude I made this comment 2 years ago
@@jimmercarter9052 ok and?
this story makes HELL look Good.
Right?
More of this stuff!
I loved hearing you read tales from the gas station!
Everybody is all "this is so wonderful". Me, I just heard a bunch of psycho babble that went nowhere. Zoned out. I'm a simpleton 😭
Sounds like the metro series, and or DND session
Fucking hell. This is one of the darkest creepypastas I've ever heard. Like, this story is to Cosmic Horror what Borrasca is to Realistic Horror
Hellstar Remina
This is by far THE BEST !!!! Please PLEASE make more yaassss
There’s only so many tines I can listen to this one lol
Why did you make this same comment, THREE TIMES?!
Yes. I've been waiting for this :D
Whats the back ground mr creepy pasta? I would like to have it for my wall paper, if you can i would really appreciate a link to it.
The brooding star... oh you mean Cthulhu
reminds me of the scp story named; the stars do not wait for you. awesome !!
Good stuff man! I love your content!
Sounds like Hermaeus Mora to me lol
Brooding Star?! Quickly, get Travis the Moonstar!
Brooding star? Dont you mean Sasuke?
Arthas Menethil
I was referencing an ancient meme, but sure why not?! Where do we find this Sa-su-ke?
So was it Yog-Sothoth or Azathoth. I think it's Yog, with the description of the tentacle ball.... but the awakening is Azathoth death strike on the universe.
Xerocoo I think it's Azathoth
Honestly, it could have been either, both, or something man knows absolutely nothing about. A big part of what makes cosmic horror so frightening is the fact that anything bigger than a glimpse of the truth means madness and death, or mutation into something inhuman. These are Gods. They don't owe humanity any answers, because for the most part they don't notice us.
I thought upon Azathoth's awakening, the Universe itself ceases to exist. Like literally blink out of existence.
Space and lovecraft perhaps? I look very much forward to this...
Yep, and i absolutely loved it. Thanks Mrcreepy, you do the most solid work on youtube in this genre. While most seem to sell out to top10 videos or reddit-stories, you do a variety with great competence. Thanks for being there throughout the years so far and please stay and do your thing forever.
Starcraft LOL.
Potato
Potato girl is best anime waifu
creepy one 😱
I CRIED TEARS OF JOY. YOU GOT IT, FUCKER? He sounded so angry when he said that. It's like dude you need a third voice for that emotion.
This was amazing
Azathoth fits this more than Cthulu.
The answer to what could possibly go wrong? Let's start making a list...
Oh I wanted the breeding star. Get it bcoz stars breathe other stars to create space and timeworms and...stuff
No comment on the comment.
Hellstar remina?
cool
Has he ever did a face reveal?
Cadillac Deville Have you ever used Google?
Cadillac Deville done*
anthony smith I been looking and can't find it
Palafico3 Yes I have...
Cadillac Deville just google ‘mrcreepypasta face reveal’ I got 2 videos of it immediately. Dayum that a nice face.
And Then I was awoken by the ayahausca shaman
‼️‼️‼️ SO MUCH MORE OF THIS PLEASE ‼️‼️‼️
Yo this is pretty cool!
Can someone explain how this story is an hp lovecraft creepypasta?
... Similar to the way Serge Brussolo shapes his story. And with some Lovecraft sprinkle.
Was the Oracle an avatar of Nyarlathotep? I mean it did mimic the protagonist's son for a little
This reminds me a lot of an upcoming video game called Death Stranding. Has anyone else gotten that sensation from this story?
Ur awesome, Creepy.
So, I don't know why but these creepypastas that are written in such a way that imitates Poe or Lovecraft's poetic writing rarely come out great. At least IMO, they just seem to bore me after a while.
Good god, did this author use a thesaurus on EVERY damn word??
when is the next finding venessa
what’s the name of the song at 24:40?
"Voices" by Myuuji