I'm afraid of a few things. One is BJs. I always have this fear of her biting my penis. I don't know why. It's never happened to me. But I can never get rid of the thought. 26 years old, had sex thousands of times. But I have only ever had 3 BJs and each time I had to basically just switch and go down on her instead after 20-30 seconds. I have no desire for them anymore. I wish I was joking. Fuck my life right..... Lol! 😶
CreepsMcPasta Hey! I just watched your clown video, the little clips you put in made me actually look at the screen and it changed to that damn clown.. It was 1am and it scared the hell out of me :( great video though!
It's also the shortest of all readings which made me think it was rushed and it kinda was but rushed works perfect for this stori its fucking freaking me the fuck our
man I'm an author but when I see stuff like this it just makes me question what a good story really is. This is inspirational work to me, and I appreciate every word every phrase, so perfectly aligned to draw the readers attention, to hide the thought of an author and to simulate a real life man who is not unlike the reader. This right here is true art.
I have listened to hundreds of really good creepypastas by you and CreepsMcPasta, here I lay in bed, 2:01 A.M. Commenting for the first time on a creepypasta, I can't express in words how much I like this masterpiece, the plotline is just so beautifully written, not to mention your amazing narrative skills, certainly one of the most enjoyable stories in the realm of creepypastas. Thanks.
This went quite deep. This story simulates an exaggerated trait of the consciousness in which the mind plays a game on itself by coming up with many different scenarios based on the information given. These scenarios together come up with a theory that within the moment of brainstorming, seem true. These scenarios, whether realistic or implausible, tend to trigger emotions to the person of that mind. Unlike the story, the insanity usually ends when you realize you've just came up with a bunch of farfetched possibilities, and think logically about the solid facts. But this creepypasta takes this strategic trait to a different level. "Psychosis" takes the paranoia trait of the mind to such a great depth, that it questions the state of reality. This piece of writing relates to people like me who sometimes comes up with many possibilities or solutions to our problems that can effect us. Another thing about this creepypasta that is interesting is how the shift from thinking of oneself to be crazy, to completely trusting their own theories after so much time passing by, begs a question: Are the external forces attempting to deceive us, or is it our own mind trying to deceive us? At the end of the day, our minds and thoughts are the most rooted things in mystery.
***** Throughout this entire escapade, the man doubts himself. At the end, the doctor thinks to himself how insane the man must be nit for fall for the deception, and wishes to congratulate the man for his amazing show of the human spirit, but cannot as the unspeakable horror controlling his brain, as well as those of everything else on earth, forces him to tell the man he is wrong. The nerve endings coming out of the doctor's brain are what the... thing uses to control people.
This was one of the best Creepypastas I've ever listened to. It was so sad and heart-wrenching, and your narration only added to it's masterpiece. All I can seem to say is thank you for this.....thank you so much
As someone who suffered a psychotic episode this summer, the descriptions of fear and paranoia in this hit very close to home. They're very effective. Overall a really good story, though I'm not sure if like the plot twist at the end, or if I would have preferred if everything was simply the main character's delusions. I suppose it's a matter of tone - this ending is really disturbing, while the alternative would have made things a bit more sad.
I mean, without that twist, it would have invalidated all the hints that something isn’t right and would have left a lot of plot holes. He may be psychotic but he’s a reliable narrator, hence his self-awareness throughout.
I quite liked the subversion, because I was really convinced he was simply delusional and that everything was normal, but then the whiplash I got when the doctor hit him with the “any sane man would have been deceived a long time ago” the dude’s still absolutely insane, but he’s right.
I felt the character's fear through the whole story. So much so that for a long moment I myself was starting to believe everything and everyone was trying to deceive me for some awful, gut-churning reason.. I love this so much, and especially the way you tell it. I can't remember the last time I heard someone read something so well. ♡ Thank you.
This one by far, is my favorite. Complemented by your smooth--almost perfect narration, this story had me on edge and made me feel very sad, but in a good way. The background music and your voice combined, can bring anyone to an emotional halt whether it be good or bad.
He also isn’t doing creepy voice because it doesn’t fit the story. His talking gets more panicked throughout the video, showing this mental state getting worse.
Read this story a year ago or so, loved it at the time. I really enjoy psychological horror and while this wasn't super long, it was very well written.
Idk about a handwritten version but checkout Asylum by him it's a collection of these stories , not just creepypasta s but these in particular there's several more.
Year after year I find myself returning to this story, it's scares me every single time. The residual fear, the paranoia this video leaves me with, it's all so addicting. I love this narration so dearly.
This has to be one of my absolute favorites so far.. just WOW.. And you did an absolutely fantastic job of capturing the feeling of paranoia and insanity... And for a change the ending SERIOUSLY caught me off guard, so that was awesome! :D
As someone who suffers from disosiation and phycosis I can confirm that if you don't take your meds and surround you self with people, you can get like this. I remember last year I became so numb, id carry myself around like a puppet and would just lay down and pretend to be dead. I was hospitalized 4 times in 5 months.
Thats very sad yet I am totally fascinated by the puppet thing. I would love to hear more about you and learn more about this. Like why did you feel like a puppet and while playing dead were you suicidal? Hope you are still doing well and hope to hear from you. ~♤~ ♡
Best creeepypasta of all time in my opinion. I've been looking for years to find something better than this but i just can't... I keep coming back to it and i like it more and more every time i listen to it.
That gut punch of an ending is just so... Perfect. Such a perfect crescendo of pain and sadness. The untold horror of losing your grasp on reality, destroying not only your life, but the lives of those who loved you. Truly a worse fate than death, and such a beautiful ending. And then they ruined it with the last paragrapgh, turning what was an amazing story about the horrid effects of mental decay into a dumb twist that no one gives a shit about.
I keep coming back to this one, it’s just so good. The panic and the way everything just seems to make sense and confirm your thoughts is so fucking accurate
Read this years ago and finally found it again, I forgot what it was called. Thanks for uploading! I'm enjoying listening to this while working in the office at 1am by myself...
This is the best creepy pasta I have ever read. I get chills every time. Your performance really brings the panic alive kudos to you, and kudos to the author.
Wait a minute I have replayed the last minute several times, and I'm confused lol my gut tells me that everyone is being controlled by someone and is trying to deceive the poor man
@@jacksonarnold9669 Actually... Do you mean that he was right all the time, but, in fact, he was crazy. He develops the illness in the road of the story. His psychosis saves him somehow of the thing that want him. This story it's just a masterpiece.
I really enjoy the way you read the stories with the emotion they deserve! This is one of the few I've read several times and I loved your narration of it :3
I've been subbed since you had only 100,000 subs and I still love every video you have ever made, the fact its been so many years and still you can upload all these videos consistently is amazing!.
This story was amazing, I love stories that mislead you the whole way up until the end where they reveal the twist. If this story isn't on Channel Zero there is no justice!
i know i am so late to this creepypasta, but i am glad that i came across it. The story was amazing and gave me literal chills down. Also the narration was SO GOOD! Keep up the good work! both MrCreepyPasta and CreepsMcPasta
It's been a few years since I've heard this story and it's still the best I've ever heard. Paired with the brilliant voice acting, I'm still getting goosebumps. Classic.
This is was amazing. That's all I can really say, but this story is just written so perfectly, I don't think there could really be any other CP like it. Just wow.
MCP's original narration of this is what got me hooked on CPs. Unfortunately, few have lived up to this expectation since. I would love it if you did more of the Asylum series. Hands down some of the most disturbingly intimate CPs out there.
"he must've not finished typing" but hit send from beyond the grave lmao (this is my 5th time listening to this over the years and i only just noticed)
This is one of my all-time favourite Creepypastas and you can't imagine my *cough* delight *cough* when I saw you narrated it. My all-time favourite narrating RUclipsr reading my all-time favourite Creepypasta(s) 😍♥
This story brought tears to my eyes. Know someone with paranoid schizophrenia. Drugs make some sick to stomach &/or feel 'not' their self. This story is gut wrenching. When your mind, overwhelms your logic. Please, don't think there's _nothing_ you can do. There is. Simply staying friends with someone who has a mental illness can be _very_ hard work. It's something everyone needs though, a friend.
I struggle with two types of delusions. 1.) No one is real. Merely figments of my imagination. I’m the only person in the world that truly exists. The last person alive who became so lonely he made 7billion imaginary friends. 2.) Everyone and everything is out to kill me. Little old ladies are trained assassins. My family wants to see me rot in a box. Anyone I encounter on the streets is trying to gun me down or slit my throat. This is so well thought out. I’ve seen psychological simulations on RUclips before. But just sitting there listening to this reminded me of the few times my delusions kept me from living a normal life. I have bipolar ii and PTSD. I’m medicated, heavily, but I have to be. Lest I end up a fate like my father or the main character. Thanks for your stories MrCreepyPasta. They often help when I’m stuck in one of those delusions.
I’m watching this half past midnight and am not going to sleep tonight. This is most bone chilling creepypasta I have ever heard and the ending made me fell even more hopeless than the ending for 1984 this is amazing.
This is my go to channel regarding Creepypasta, for a reason. Oh, and I have suffered psychosis personally, twice even. I don't really remember the second one, but the first one... Battling against robbers ( that sometimes dressed out as police) trying to open my door with lockpicks, then screwdriver and hammers, to sledge hammers and jackhammers even. That battle, holding up the doorhandle, and gripping the lockknob(?) for dear life, it is still vivid to me. Felt literally like 5-6 hours of gripping the handles ( I had marks for more than one entire day in my palms, like deep crevases, freaking painfull even after you couldn't see them anymore) I was shouting like a madman ( Ofc I was, people were trying to to force themselfs into my home after all) so the police came. For some reason, I actually hid the khukri and the other knife I had on me in a rubber boot right before they came in. I can't image what would have happend if I still had those on me. One of the police, a blond woman, shorter than me even, she was okay. Tried to calm me down and felt like a mother ( young though, but she felt caring you know?) but the other one, the dude, was... Well, I woldn't have trusted him at all and would for sure have attacked him. He was not caring and wanted to just barge into my home. He was the worst thing a paranoid dude in a psychosis would have wanted to meet. Might have stuck him in the guts and throat and then gotten shot if not for her. The worst part is how real it is to you... As real as anything, or even more real in how you believe all that shit
One of the things I love about this story is that you can read it again and enjoy it more, because you can pick up on all the clues that something actually isn’t right.
ah man, I didn't realize I saw this video before until something he said around 6 minutes into the video, and some comments I read. Love this video so much!
I have a friend who went through a hash psychosis. What kept him sane was his logic, he told me that he had to remind himself everything all the time for a few weeks.
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"It was such a strange thing to be afraid of nothing."
that hit me hard holy shit.
yooooooo not coool
we were talking to the guy who was saying mean stuff
there was a person who was swearing at her,they mustve deleted their comment
I'm afraid of a few things. One is BJs. I always have this fear of her biting my penis. I don't know why. It's never happened to me. But I can never get rid of the thought. 26 years old, had sex thousands of times. But I have only ever had 3 BJs and each time I had to basically just switch and go down on her instead after 20-30 seconds. I have no desire for them anymore. I wish I was joking. Fuck my life right..... Lol! 😶
me too
“After all, a sane man would’ve fallen for the deception long ago” I got chills
Darn, I had an idea to want to slam all this in one video a few days ago! Glad it's been done. Such a classic
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CreepsMcPasta Hey! I just watched your clown video, the little clips you put in made me actually look at the screen and it changed to that damn clown.. It was 1am and it scared the hell out of me :( great video though!
you can still do it creepa
How come Creeps doesn't have the Verified check, i mean he has over a million subs
CreepsMcPasta you can do it, adds variety to the story different accents
Love the fact that you don't just speak in a creepy voice because it doesn't fit this story, you just sound like a natural but panicked human being
It's also the shortest of all readings which made me think it was rushed and it kinda was but rushed works perfect for this stori its fucking freaking me the fuck our
U lika da apex tin??
man I'm an author but when I see stuff like this it just makes me question what a good story really is. This is inspirational work to me, and I appreciate every word every phrase, so perfectly aligned to draw the readers attention, to hide the thought of an author and to simulate a real life man who is not unlike the reader. This right here is true art.
Agreeeeeeed
I have listened to hundreds of really good creepypastas by you and CreepsMcPasta, here I lay in bed, 2:01 A.M. Commenting for the first time on a creepypasta, I can't express in words how much I like this masterpiece, the plotline is just so beautifully written, not to mention your amazing narrative skills, certainly one of the most enjoyable stories in the realm of creepypastas. Thanks.
Amit Guillamon I'm laying in my bed at 2:03 O_O
Dude wtf it’s 2:01 for me
What you said is accurate top, this is my first time commenting on a creepypasta
This is actually part one in a larger series about mental illness and/or cybernetic organisms called the Asylum series.
TELL ME WHERE TO FIND THIS
same where
Here you go. creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Asylum_(series)
Yep, I so badly wish MrCreepyPasta would read them all.
actually this was a seven part series he produced years ago and has now put it in a warped package. The asylum series is something different entirely.
This went quite deep. This story simulates an exaggerated trait of the consciousness in which the mind plays a game on itself by coming up with many different scenarios based on the information given. These scenarios together come up with a theory that within the moment of brainstorming, seem true. These scenarios, whether realistic or implausible, tend to trigger emotions to the person of that mind. Unlike the story, the insanity usually ends when you realize you've just came up with a bunch of farfetched possibilities, and think logically about the solid facts. But this creepypasta takes this strategic trait to a different level. "Psychosis" takes the paranoia trait of the mind to such a great depth, that it questions the state of reality. This piece of writing relates to people like me who sometimes comes up with many possibilities or solutions to our problems that can effect us. Another thing about this creepypasta that is interesting is how the shift from thinking of oneself to be crazy, to completely trusting their own theories after so much time passing by, begs a question: Are the external forces attempting to deceive us, or is it our own mind trying to deceive us? At the end of the day, our minds and thoughts are the most rooted things in mystery.
Holy shit, this is one off the best stories I've heard in a long while.
***** Throughout this entire escapade, the man doubts himself. At the end, the doctor thinks to himself how insane the man must be nit for fall for the deception, and wishes to congratulate the man for his amazing show of the human spirit, but cannot as the unspeakable horror controlling his brain, as well as those of everything else on earth, forces him to tell the man he is wrong. The nerve endings coming out of the doctor's brain are what the... thing uses to control people.
This is one of the best creepypastas *ever*.
This was one of the best Creepypastas I've ever listened to. It was so sad and heart-wrenching, and your narration only added to it's masterpiece. All I can seem to say is thank you for this.....thank you so much
This is absolutely heart breaking
MCP can make anything sad.
Your delivery of, "I am the hero.", is one of the best I've ever heard you give. Bravo for a great performance of such a great story.
As someone who suffered a psychotic episode this summer, the descriptions of fear and paranoia in this hit very close to home. They're very effective. Overall a really good story, though I'm not sure if like the plot twist at the end, or if I would have preferred if everything was simply the main character's delusions. I suppose it's a matter of tone - this ending is really disturbing, while the alternative would have made things a bit more sad.
The author continued the story in “Asylum”, so the ending makes sense if compared with that story. I actually listened to Asylum before this
I mean, without that twist, it would have invalidated all the hints that something isn’t right and would have left a lot of plot holes. He may be psychotic but he’s a reliable narrator, hence his self-awareness throughout.
I quite liked the subversion, because I was really convinced he was simply delusional and that everything was normal, but then the whiplash I got when the doctor hit him with the “any sane man would have been deceived a long time ago” the dude’s still absolutely insane, but he’s right.
i love the ending. the doctor saying there was noone trying to decieve him when he himse;f was lying
ikr, I was like holy shit, this is awesome
The Quarantine brought me back to this one. Its very relatable, during this time.
Word!! me too lol. Not sure if that's a good or bad thing.🤔😶💀
MrCreepyPasta doing one of the most memorable of the online scary stories! ^_^
for the second time!
It is very good
I felt the character's fear through the whole story. So much so that for a long moment I myself was starting to believe everything and everyone was trying to deceive me for some awful, gut-churning reason.. I love this so much, and especially the way you tell it. I can't remember the last time I heard someone read something so well. ♡ Thank you.
This one by far, is my favorite. Complemented by your smooth--almost perfect narration, this story had me on edge and made me feel very sad, but in a good way. The background music and your voice combined, can bring anyone to an emotional halt whether it be good or bad.
He also isn’t doing creepy voice because it doesn’t fit the story. His talking gets more panicked throughout the video, showing this mental state getting worse.
Read this story a year ago or so, loved it at the time. I really enjoy psychological horror and while this wasn't super long, it was very well written.
This story made me sad AF....
sprocaster don't make me collect your soul early...
you could have mine I dont need it
you could have mine I dont need it
Jazzy Rainey good😘
I wish there was a handwritten-style paperback copy of this that we could buy that would b so cool
Idk about a handwritten version but checkout Asylum by him it's a collection of these stories , not just creepypasta s but these in particular there's several more.
Year after year I find myself returning to this story, it's scares me every single time. The residual fear, the paranoia this video leaves me with, it's all so addicting. I love this narration so dearly.
Now that is how you read a story!!!!!!!
nope, his original recording is better!
psychosis is a 5 part pasta on his channel!
Jeff Clement read it best.
Is it strange that I love your voice? I love these!!!!
no it's normal to like something about a person
Hello I'm Nico no no no i married a woman i hated everything about XD
Hihams Divorce her.
I love his voice too
We all love his voice.
This has to be one of my absolute favorites so far.. just WOW.. And you did an absolutely fantastic job of capturing the feeling of paranoia and insanity... And for a change the ending SERIOUSLY caught me off guard, so that was awesome! :D
As someone who suffers from disosiation and phycosis I can confirm that if you don't take your meds and surround you self with people, you can get like this. I remember last year I became so numb, id carry myself around like a puppet and would just lay down and pretend to be dead. I was hospitalized 4 times in 5 months.
Snips, snails and, puppy dog tails hope u r okay
Thats very sad yet I am totally fascinated by the puppet thing. I would love to hear more about you and learn more about this. Like why did you feel like a puppet and while playing dead were you suicidal? Hope you are still doing well and hope to hear from you. ~♤~ ♡
Jasmine that was 1 year ago I checked no other comments from barbie
gay snake hes legit tho, ppl are trying to capture him.
lmao ok gay snake
Best creeepypasta of all time in my opinion. I've been looking for years to find something better than this but i just can't... I keep coming back to it and i like it more and more every time i listen to it.
" I dont have to win. We just both have to lose"
That gut punch of an ending is just so... Perfect. Such a perfect crescendo of pain and sadness. The untold horror of losing your grasp on reality, destroying not only your life, but the lives of those who loved you. Truly a worse fate than death, and such a beautiful ending.
And then they ruined it with the last paragrapgh, turning what was an amazing story about the horrid effects of mental decay into a dumb twist that no one gives a shit about.
Melinda Greer I feel like that’s just ur feelings on it
Listening to this during COVID 19 is a mood
I LOOOOOVE how this ties into his Asylum story and his massive story arc. Gawd it's beautiful
When you get a weird text from a number you dont know while watching this...
you posted this 4 months ago so the entity has probably gotten you already sorry mate
Lol im still alive dont worry
And now it’s been 2 years and I only just heard about this amazing creepy pasta
My bad, wrong number 😂
I keep coming back to this one, it’s just so good. The panic and the way everything just seems to make sense and confirm your thoughts is so fucking accurate
This.. this is something else..
from the naration, to the writing, it's just.. a masterpiece.
Thank you, *Mr.CreepyPasta*
FINALLY! My favorite creelypasta of all time is finally being done by my favorite Creepypasta Channel!
The ambiant noises you added into the music were really spooky
This is my all time favourite Creepypasta. I've read it and listened to it quite a few times
Ikr? Its freaking awesome. A good separation from the cliche horror these days. This classic was good at the start, and is great even to this day.
Read this years ago and finally found it again, I forgot what it was called. Thanks for uploading! I'm enjoying listening to this while working in the office at 1am by myself...
This is the best creepy pasta I have ever read. I get chills every time. Your performance really brings the panic alive kudos to you, and kudos to the author.
The doctor bit at the end just makes it absolutely incredible
How can cameras be real if our eyes aren't?
Clearly, you're just a blind sheep, following everything the man tells you.
AlternateEnding you're going thru it
LMFAO
AlternateEnding stop stealing Jaden Smith's Tweets! lmao
Go to sleep........
Wait a minute I have replayed the last minute several times, and I'm confused lol my gut tells me that everyone is being controlled by someone and is trying to deceive the poor man
xFinalR3sortx ikr
It was my impression as well
It's supposed to connect to the asylum story, because in that we find out everyone has nerve endings or something in their eyes that control them.
Yeah that’s the plot twist. He wasn’t crazy, the entity is real.
@@jacksonarnold9669 Actually... Do you mean that he was right all the time, but, in fact, he was crazy. He develops the illness in the road of the story. His psychosis saves him somehow of the thing that want him. This story it's just a masterpiece.
Omg the nostalgic such a good story
I really enjoy the way you read the stories with the emotion they deserve! This is one of the few I've read several times and I loved your narration of it :3
I love how you tell this story. Your voice fits the character perfectly and I love the way you portray his thoughts. Well done!
This story is spectacular. Its one of the best pastas I've come across. And the most eerie thing of all of it, is just how realistic it is.
I've been subbed since you had only 100,000 subs and I still love every video you have ever made, the fact its been so many years and still you can upload all these videos consistently is amazing!.
This story was amazing, I love stories that mislead you the whole way up until the end where they reveal the twist. If this story isn't on Channel Zero there is no justice!
i know i am so late to this creepypasta, but i am glad that i came across it. The story was amazing and gave me literal chills down. Also the narration was SO GOOD! Keep up the good work! both MrCreepyPasta and CreepsMcPasta
first video I'm watching from this channel and I've been told of this one before but the emotion you put into this makes it so much scarier ^^
It's been a few years since I've heard this story and it's still the best I've ever heard. Paired with the brilliant voice acting, I'm still getting goosebumps. Classic.
This is was amazing. That's all I can really say, but this story is just written so perfectly, I don't think there could really be any other CP like it. Just wow.
MCP's original narration of this is what got me hooked on CPs. Unfortunately, few have lived up to this expectation since. I would love it if you did more of the Asylum series. Hands down some of the most disturbingly intimate CPs out there.
"Seen with my own eyes don't trust them they" fucking amazing.
I could listen to this story over and over again. It's just so well written and well read.
"he must've not finished typing" but hit send from beyond the grave lmao (this is my 5th time listening to this over the years and i only just noticed)
31:30 "Date Unknwon"
Oh my God. This was a insanely amazing story. The writer is amazing.
When I reached the ending I about shit my pants that was such a good plot twist....made me question my life for 3 days at least
Probably my all-time favorite pasta, it's what created my love for them in the first place. Cheers for doin' it!
This is one of my all-time favourite Creepypastas and you can't imagine my *cough* delight *cough* when I saw you narrated it.
My all-time favourite narrating RUclipsr reading my all-time favourite Creepypasta(s) 😍♥
An an excellent representation of the fact that certainty is never.
When one can prove anything beyond that they exist, only then can certainty be.
this is one of my favourite creepypastas out of the hundreds ive read or listened to.
This story brought tears to my eyes. Know someone with paranoid schizophrenia. Drugs make some sick to stomach &/or feel 'not' their self. This story is gut wrenching. When your mind, overwhelms your logic. Please, don't think there's _nothing_ you can do. There is. Simply staying friends with someone who has a mental illness can be _very_ hard work. It's something everyone needs though, a friend.
Love this one a lot and it's awesome to see you redo it all it in one video
Beautiful, whoever wrote this is amazing. This should be a movie.
Sounds like hell of a drug, how much for a gram of psychosis?
Lots of trama and the right brain
2t
25$
I don't think you want to take this drug
Just take a psychotropic.
Does he always have to sound nervous?
idk but I just still liked it when CreepsMcPasta read it.
awesome story. i already listened to it about 15 times. I love the way he explains every little detail.
That moment when you actually have Psychosis
I struggle with two types of delusions.
1.) No one is real. Merely figments of my imagination. I’m the only person in the world that truly exists. The last person alive who became so lonely he made 7billion imaginary friends.
2.) Everyone and everything is out to kill me. Little old ladies are trained assassins. My family wants to see me rot in a box. Anyone I encounter on the streets is trying to gun me down or slit my throat.
This is so well thought out. I’ve seen psychological simulations on RUclips before. But just sitting there listening to this reminded me of the few times my delusions kept me from living a normal life.
I have bipolar ii and PTSD.
I’m medicated, heavily, but I have to be. Lest I end up a fate like my father or the main character.
Thanks for your stories MrCreepyPasta. They often help when I’m stuck in one of those delusions.
Ah, this has been one of my favorite CreepyPastas for years. Great to see it get a video.
omg.. I just love how passionate you are in narrations!!
The best part about this is that it puts you in his shoes. Because the whole time I couldn't tell if he was right or not. I still can't.
Man I remember hearing your original reading years ago. It's nice to hear an oldie again
An insane egomaniac. "THIS ALL POWERFUL ENTITY NEEDS ME AND ONLY MEEE"
I’m watching this half past midnight and am not going to sleep tonight. This is most bone chilling creepypasta I have ever heard and the ending made me fell even more hopeless than the ending for 1984 this is amazing.
Hands down one of the best pastas ever written!
I went through a 1 month psychotic episode last year. Can relate to this story, the mind really can create some weird shit
Expertly written, expertly read. Well done.
That final twist!! I honestly don't know if that can ever be topped!
Damn... that was an amazing story!! It's one of my new favorites now! 😊
This is my go to channel regarding Creepypasta, for a reason.
Oh, and I have suffered psychosis personally, twice even. I don't really remember the second one, but the first one... Battling against robbers ( that sometimes dressed out as police) trying to open my door with lockpicks, then screwdriver and hammers, to sledge hammers and jackhammers even. That battle, holding up the doorhandle, and gripping the lockknob(?) for dear life, it is still vivid to me. Felt literally like 5-6 hours of gripping the handles ( I had marks for more than one entire day in my palms, like deep crevases, freaking painfull even after you couldn't see them anymore)
I was shouting like a madman ( Ofc I was, people were trying to to force themselfs into my home after all) so the police came. For some reason, I actually hid the khukri and the other knife I had on me in a rubber boot right before they came in. I can't image what would have happend if I still had those on me. One of the police, a blond woman, shorter than me even, she was okay. Tried to calm me down and felt like a mother ( young though, but she felt caring you know?) but the other one, the dude, was... Well, I woldn't have trusted him at all and would for sure have attacked him. He was not caring and wanted to just barge into my home. He was the worst thing a paranoid dude in a psychosis would have wanted to meet. Might have stuck him in the guts and throat and then gotten shot if not for her. The worst part is how real it is to you... As real as anything, or even more real in how you believe all that shit
My replay button has ptsd. I WISH I could write like this guy.
Damn this story is so intense, you read it to perfection. Keep up the good work.
Got your book from Amazon!! So excited for it to arrive :)
I love his story .. one of the first ones I listened to
One of the things I love about this story is that you can read it again and enjoy it more, because you can pick up on all the clues that something actually isn’t right.
ah man, I didn't realize I saw this video before until something he said around 6 minutes into the video, and some comments I read. Love this video so much!
this story is more sad instead of creepy or scary to me...
This guy is now in the "Asylum".😮
I came back to this after hearing "The Asylum" series, and I'm SO GLAD I did! LOVE the connections!
Fantastic reading! great radio of the mind. I have subbed....you got me :)
my favorite creepypasta! you do a great job MrCreepypasta
Ahhhh. Listening to Mr. Creepypasta while doing my library aid job is the best.
wow I was at the edge of my seat and of my wits the whole 35 mins !! GREAT READ!
I have a friend who went through a hash psychosis. What kept him sane was his logic, he told me that he had to remind himself everything all the time for a few weeks.
2021 and this is still smackin
nice story cousin i love it!!! so dark it send chills up my spine i like the endin tell Creeps i said hi
It's 6:20 am and I don't regret my decision. This was awesome.
one of my all time favourite stories, and sometimes I come back to listen to it again~