I thought I replied but I guess my wifi said no. I'll remember the key stuff I said: - The beginning is far too long and may deter many people from your content (their attention may not be kept) - The video concept of a "Not So Average" Terraria Playthrough is personally why I clicked, but you should give the viewer a taste or hint of what that is in the beginning so they remain intrigued - I would use an editing program such as Davinci Resolve or Hitfilm. This would drastically increase the quality of your videos - even if you keep it simple (which, if you do, you'll only have to re-learn your current skill. Which I see you have some already) - The AI voice is fine. It could be a staple specific to your channel - When night falls in Terraria, definitely try to light up where you're recording. It can be hard to see anything as the viewer - In addition to when night fell, I think you could have spiced it up, such as making a death montage - I noticed during some parts of dialogue, the footage is created under the needs of the monologue. If this is a roleplay then that's fine (that's a separate critique) but I would reverse it. The speech and patterns can follow after I think that was about everything. Maybe you think I'm pulling this out my ass or I know what Im doing, but of course, I went through the time and energy to critique because I see potential in this channel and it's evolution. If you need help or advice with any of the above you can ask here or my Discord
@@Zapper777 Wow. I think you're definitely right about switching to a different editing software. I've been doing all this on a tablet, but I think editing the footage on a PC would be much better. I also wouldn't have annoying watermarks plastered on top of each other. In fact, I may just transition to filming on PC entirely. (I'm considering having an episode with Ocram which would require mods). Episode 3 is mostly filmed so expect to see some major improvements by episode 4 (:
Nice one😊
Interesting concept (and monologue). Do you plan on making more terraria content?
I'm working on an episode 2, it should be out soon (:
That’s good to hear, you’re grinding. Though, if I may, can I give you some constructive critique?
@@Zapper777 Let's hear it
I thought I replied but I guess my wifi said no. I'll remember the key stuff I said:
- The beginning is far too long and may deter many people from your content (their attention may not be kept)
- The video concept of a "Not So Average" Terraria Playthrough is personally why I clicked, but you should give the viewer a taste or hint of what that is in the beginning so they remain intrigued
- I would use an editing program such as Davinci Resolve or Hitfilm. This would drastically increase the quality of your videos - even if you keep it simple (which, if you do, you'll only have to re-learn your current skill. Which I see you have some already)
- The AI voice is fine. It could be a staple specific to your channel
- When night falls in Terraria, definitely try to light up where you're recording. It can be hard to see anything as the viewer
- In addition to when night fell, I think you could have spiced it up, such as making a death montage
- I noticed during some parts of dialogue, the footage is created under the needs of the monologue. If this is a roleplay then that's fine (that's a separate critique) but I would reverse it. The speech and patterns can follow after
I think that was about everything. Maybe you think I'm pulling this out my ass or I know what Im doing, but of course, I went through the time and energy to critique because I see potential in this channel and it's evolution. If you need help or advice with any of the above you can ask here or my Discord
@@Zapper777 Wow. I think you're definitely right about switching to a different editing software. I've been doing all this on a tablet, but I think editing the footage on a PC would be much better. I also wouldn't have annoying watermarks plastered on top of each other. In fact, I may just transition to filming on PC entirely. (I'm considering having an episode with Ocram which would require mods). Episode 3 is mostly filmed so expect to see some major improvements by episode 4 (:
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