the weird essays that got me into STANFORD (reading my stanford supplements) | my supplement essays

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  • Опубликовано: 11 июл 2020
  • in this video, I read my accepted stanford supplemental essays! these are the real, weird essays that got me into stanford university! I give advice and read my essays. comment questions about the common app, stanford essays, or anything else about college admissions or college life!

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  • @houdamiftah8996
    @houdamiftah8996 3 года назад +75

    I loved her essays. U can really see why they admitted her!

  • @aisuluzhurginbay3557
    @aisuluzhurginbay3557 2 года назад +13

    0:40 IV
    2:54 roommate
    4:40 meaningful

  • @EmilyMatthews
    @EmilyMatthews 3 года назад +69

    Finally someone whose sharing what's actually helpful! Admission's offices don't want to see the same essay a thousand times. It's the unique ones that count :)

  • @quennienguyen3237
    @quennienguyen3237 3 года назад +19

    So unrelated to the actual content (essays were amazing btw), but the symmetry of the doors on both sides is so satisfying

  • @sunnykulkarni623
    @sunnykulkarni623 3 года назад +10

    i love these essays! thank you sm for sharing :)

  • @nicolecrescini3856
    @nicolecrescini3856 3 года назад +8

    This is gold congrats!!

  • @ravishankaryadav9832
    @ravishankaryadav9832 3 года назад +3

    Just blown! Loved it!

  • @sallygoose
    @sallygoose 3 года назад +6

    These were so amazing! I would love to check out the blog you were talking about :D

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад

      hahahha you’re so sweet! we haven’t used it in a while but it’s an instagram account called jsmoothfashion

    • @sallygoose
      @sallygoose 3 года назад +1

      ​@@stanfordtrio9834 i love it so much! You guys should consider having an essay editing service because i'd love to use it :D

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад

      we do! email thestanfordtrio at gmail! we would love to help

  • @erinye8327
    @erinye8327 3 года назад +16

    i also love the bachelorette!! wonderful essays; i think stanford '22 by far has the best college youtubers out here hahaha

  • @folao.9257
    @folao.9257 3 года назад +28

    So, I will be rewriting my supplements

  • @olivia8075
    @olivia8075 3 года назад +2

    hey, so i found y'all in the comments from hannah elise's vid and i thought that ur name was cool so i looked y'all up and actually, this is a pretty cool channel. it's rly rare for ppl to go to stanford these days, it's so hard to get into so i rly admire y'all

  • @anya-kq7gw
    @anya-kq7gw 3 года назад +22

    “I could’ve done this. I didn’t.”
    LMAOOO SISSSSS 💀
    but dang it was a great essay

  • @dbr_199
    @dbr_199 Год назад +8

    You have no idea how offensive you're being to my essays simply by criticizing yours haha

  • @Kate-hf4ms
    @Kate-hf4ms 3 года назад +4

    omg wow! those essays were amazing!

  • @Gummybears545
    @Gummybears545 3 года назад +7

    HHAHAH omg i 100% appreciate ur brutal honesty with ur roommate essay

  • @rajsharma3921
    @rajsharma3921 2 года назад

    How many essays you write (total)

  • @purposefulperformance
    @purposefulperformance 3 года назад +13

    Tara :"You don't have to be completely truthful in your application"
    Arpi Park: "Stanford rescind this dude"

  • @unknown4life913
    @unknown4life913 3 года назад +4

    You’re essays aren’t annoying girl lolz. But how do u guys get better vocabulary??

  • @katharinemarieropers5690
    @katharinemarieropers5690 3 года назад +2

    yess the bachelorette

  • @OrianaRiley
    @OrianaRiley 3 года назад +2

    Do you have a video about the Short Questions?

  • @rahulc4223
    @rahulc4223 3 года назад +1

    Did your friend's sport get cancelled ? I remember her talking about sailing earlier.

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад

      yes sadly it did :( it’s a tough time for athletes

    • @rahulc4223
      @rahulc4223 3 года назад +1

      That must be really hard. These essays are amazing by the way :)

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад

      @@rahulc4223 thank you :)

    • @olivia8075
      @olivia8075 3 года назад +1

      what sport is it???? i love stanford women's soccer and basketball, but ik that those weren't cancelled, bc they're too good lmao!!!!!

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад

      @@olivia8075 There was 11 varsity sports cut including Sailing, Sammy's sport. Sadly, Stanford Sailing is one of the best teams in the nation but they made budget cuts. :(

  • @ashekins
    @ashekins 3 года назад +1

    Why hello! :)

  • @praveengo
    @praveengo 3 года назад +4

    I liked your essays except bachelorette and tallmen. There is some disconnect there. From intellectual to ...

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад +4

      haha thanks

    • @kennedylareign
      @kennedylareign 3 года назад +8

      it shows a different side to her application. not everything has to be deeply introspective and thoughtful, but she definitely still shows intellectual vitality in both of those essays since she digs deeper into things she’s passionate about even if they’re not world-changing topics.

    • @stanfordtrio9834
      @stanfordtrio9834  3 года назад +3

      @@kennedylareign ily

  • @Ray-io8tt
    @Ray-io8tt Год назад

    love that western bias about china. I admire your effort and work into the topic of censorship in china but I see your biased view about china even before you start to research.