Fixing Wish, to be Amazing
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- Опубликовано: 10 сен 2024
- It was meant to celebrate 100 years of animation.
Well it could have been a much more memorable movie if they had made some small changes.
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This story is better than the original indeed. It sounds simplistic but it definitely works. Would have been good as a fairytale.
I totally agree with this video! These changes would have made the movie so much more enjoyable and interesting!
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Yesss! I want this version to become a movieee!
Louder for people in the back!
This is awesome!
Great video
I think they knew what they were doing when they released this movie. Bet they want us to get bored of the classics of Disney so it can incorporate new ones.
I agree! Totally missed opportunity for a potentially great story
Nice video! I went with a less aggressive approach in my rewrite. I kept Rosas positive but gave it a high suicide rate and toned down Asha's adorkableness in favor of her being more proactively humorous and capable.
So is your rewrite a animation or a book?
I'm currently on a second rewrite, but my first one (Tale of the Pure Wish) has Asha be the apprentice, her dad is alive, has a brother and sister, and her friends are more involved. Magnifico is insane for a sympathetic reason, but I made it so that Amaya, his wife had died in a fire, and that caused him to go insane (Both are evil), but he figures out how to bring her back. Water later comes down to help, and they soon celebrate her 18th birthday. The King and Queen arrive, he crushes the moms wish(which was to cure her only son from an illness), making her fall temporarily unconscious, Asha is attacked by him, but Aster intervenes, they escape to an island, then Aster later sees Asha try to hang herself because of what had happened lately and she found out that Magnifico wants to marry her for an unknown reason. Aster snaps her out of it and she has a meltdown, and he assures her that he'll never let her get hurt again, and the CANON version of "At All Costs" is sung. Things escalate to where everyone is captured, but Aster saves her.from getting executed, they fight the royals, but he's stabbed in the process,.making him slowly change color. The only way to save him is if Asha gives away her wish to bring back Amaya, but that would kill her since they're so powerful, so she chooses to be killed, resurrected, and then marry Magnifico if she can save the boy with the gem from his staff. They agree, but shackle him and the kingdom, so that no one can interfere. It transcends into Stanford's finale, but instead of hair, Aster crushes her wish to save her, since it powers up.the staff, and destroys it, killing Amaya. Asha attempts to save Aster, but he's almost gone. She tries the staff, freaking out when it fails to work. He gets her attention, and tells her that she's his wish, with her saying the same thing, with them both crying. He attempts to say "I love you", but he ends up going limp and dies in her arms. The ending plays out similarly to the one we got, but her brother is the one helps her with the crowd. They eventually kill Magnifico, and our couple land on the ground safely. But when it looks like he's dead, she kisses him, making him glow, and brought back to life. The epilogue is pretty much Tangled's, but its revealed that Aster was the narrator at the beginning, but it's also revealed that they're about to get married. The story ends like we know what, they kiss, having their faces be the last picture in the book, and it closes with " The End". Fade to black, roll credits!
Wow (:
Stupid autocorrect.. Its Aster, not Water.. Sorry commentators! That was a mental note, nothing against you😥😥
Shit! I don't know what Stanford is! I meant the STANDARD finale!
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Is the original worth watching? Still holding off after hearing the reviews
The only thing you're missing is missed potential, so I don't think so. It was okay, but it's very disappointing because it could've been soooo good.
I've watched it, trust me it's not worth your money.