Writing Dialogue: 20 Smart Tips
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- Опубликовано: 13 июл 2017
- Here are 20 tips to help you learn to write dialogue and monologue for your series. Enjoy!
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I love movies that explain a plan exactly , but tben everything goes to shit, nothing works as indent but by chance all the steps that were planed still happen for a different reason or by accident, so at the end it leaves people wondering if the person who's plan it was, has alot of pure luck, is awesome at spontaneously adjusting the the current situation or has planned everything all along.
Best thing is if the person telling this plan is in prison talking to a guard or surrounded by enemies, talking directly at them.
That moment when you are told what is going to happen, and even if you do anything to stop it, you are forced to watch the plan played out as if you are just a chess figure being played without any control over to situation, is one of the most basass scenes for me to watch
watch reservoir dogs, if you like heist movies, this is gonna surprise you!
:O just realized you were at 125k subs, thats awesome!
Ive been here since 3k.
almost to 500k
Whyt you gotta watch Hunter X Hunter (2011), then watch Aleczandxr's videos analysing it. Trust me watching HxH and those videos will improve your story writing, I feel like it's a necessity for anyone trying to make a shounen battle story.
Weeb Indeed, right now, in my opinion, I find his story very boring and his characters also.
Honestly (just from the first 4 chapters since I'm poor) I agree sorta. I feel like there's just so much that can make this story *A LOT* better. From what he's said and the fact that it's been over a year I feel like volume 2 will be a lot better.
Oh yeah and read *BERSERK!*
Or watch the 1997 anime or Golden Age movies.
Weeb I'm at chapter 147 already in Berserk. Love it and all. But I find the art style stiff a lot. In my opinion I prefer HxH's art style over Berserk.
Let's hope Whyt doesn't plan to create a typical shounen that doesn't change anything.
Bro I'm litterly write all this down. Seriously ' xd
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Thanks this will definitely assist me with writing the dialogue for my manga
with me being a writer this video is exactly what I needed. you should do more videos for writers, specifically how to overcome writers block.
im not a pro writer in the least but latching onto characters you develope in a story help when you can flesh them out more. Thats just me maybe. I also take experiences that i do everyday. There was one day o had writers block and while i was making tea in the morning i was thinking how cool it'd be if someone had some capability that was comparable to a kettle. Like if there blood boiled and there bones whistled, or if they had some ability to boil there blood and like have excessive scebts within it to captivate people or maybe poison people. I linda scrapped the idea, but point being Life is a great writers block block xD. Thats just me maybe
I could watch your inking for hours, love those clean lines god bless
11:50 This can be seen as far as Scooby Doo. Whenever Fred explains the trap they make it rarely works vs when he doesn't explain the trap to the audience.
Your advice is spot on. I've been itching to try comics for awhile, and these videos are super inspiring.
How did you know? I was just struggling over this issue when you posted this, you mad man!
I love your work! Keep it up!
Thanks for the tips, WhytManga.
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Whyt Manga Great tips man you are so skilled and i know you've worked hard to get where you are now. There's no where else to go but up. Keep going :)
bruh im early as shit, also cant wait for Vol.2
Thanks for the tips!!!
Thank you so much! you got the best manga-making tips :D
Awesome vid. The Tipps are really helpfull
You have talent bro !!
Nice tips .... really helpful
here since 34k keep growing bro! make your comics to a show!
Great video bro, these tips helped me make a scene waay better
I Love your channel
Dude, thanks a lot
What type of paper do you use for your comics? I'm new to this
Deleter type B B4 paper.
I can't wait for volume 2
I think Isayama is the master of dialogue, worldbuilding, character development, and especially foreshadowing
The guy is 20 steps ahead of most mangakas
Hard agree bro
this helped a bunch, thanks for the info
subscribed lol
You have a nice voice. I'm not a mangaka, but definitely a writer. Everything you talked about got me excited to write, but sadly, it's late and I'm tired.
Noti squad💯💯
thanks for the tips :D
The plan part about making the audience think it didn't go to plan when it did is like in Now You See Me 2 with the plane and it was all set up!
Just ordered a copy of vol 1
Do you have a video on planning out a script for a manga book?
When is the exact date when Vol. 2 is coming out!? T^T (Can't wait)
Hi I run a manga myself and I want to thank you whyte manga as I didn't know how to do it you helped me to make the manga in which I am the typesetter and it helped me very much thank you whyte manga
I know I'm like really late but can you tell me the name of your manga I would like to read it 😁🙃
I'm sketching as a watch this. When he said Sometimes silence can be the best response... that hit hard for me lol
Really helped me out but slow down a lil dawg lol u jus rattle off like 16 things at once but when I got use to that u really helped me out
thank you whyt maga .I drawre you
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Hey Whyt Manga can you do a tutorial on how to draw different body types?
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So the speech bubbles are drawn and the text is done on the computer ? what program is it you use ?
Thanks!
Amazing tips!
Cant believe i was first!
Do you also wanna make manga? :)
How do you write dialogue when someone is speaking a different language?
I keep feeling like my story has some holes in it
im guessing thats the interface of manga studio 5 . yes i think I got this stuff down , thx. do you go to comic con at all ?
can you make manga hairstyles that are close to the present one?
like 2017 hairstyles
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Whyt manga can do a video how to draw a manga cover plz
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When the hell do we get a paperback volume 2 on Apple black
do you use any specific font of some kind or do you to the writing yourself?
OMG my charachter is soo similar!
Hi guys
Whyt Manga akibento is not available for India and I'm from India
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May I ask what kind of paper is best for line art?
did you suspend the drawing of original characters
can you push for a SAHD:AM app?
Shoutout to the early squad
How many pages do you prefer for a chapter
Which kind of program do you use in this video
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If you can make a video of why do mangaka in Japan have phrases on their covers like in Bleach volume 1 it's titled Death and the Strawberry. Is there a reason for that?
Nephtalie Albert it's the name of the volume
Crimson Creeper oh okay. Is it necessary to have it? Is what I'm asking.
Nephtalie Albert Not Really, seeing as the volume name is actually in the book, but I can guess it can be nice for decoration
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Which application is that
When I come up with characters I put myself into the character
Rethorical questions...
Who's deku?
Its you draw this pages of manga ???
yeah
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I've been wondering how to pronouce Fattimunga's name for the longest time lol. I've been pronouncing it in my head "Fatty munga" lol i'm so sorry
Wait, SANO'S A GIRL????
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Why does he give away so many spoilers about the future of Apple black in his vids
wow 1 like 0 views when i opened the video fuck yea
y dont u just use a screentone
wtf the spoiler though. You didn't give me time to stop. Disliked.
★_Vizualize_★ gay
★_Vizualize_★ he gave you plenty of time shitstick