Writing Cliffhangers: 6 Smart Tips!

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  • Опубликовано: 29 окт 2016
  • What are Cliffhangers? writing cliffhangers are key to keep audiences at the edge of their toes. Learn here with your boy! Get 6 legit tips on how to write cliffhangers! ENJOY!
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Комментарии • 93

  • @WhytMangaOdunze
    @WhytMangaOdunze  7 лет назад +43

    I apologize for the poor angle in the beginning of the video, I thought I fixed it.

    • @Wolf-fe3ci
      @Wolf-fe3ci 7 лет назад +1

      Whyt Manga can you make a video on some of your artist hacks?

    • @RensGoguma
      @RensGoguma 7 лет назад

      i think he has one on storyboarding...try using the search function for that on his channel

    • @kawaiivideos4735
      @kawaiivideos4735 7 лет назад

      Whyt Manga yo acho que usted dibuja muy bien

    • @drawzspace6370
      @drawzspace6370 7 лет назад +1

      Whyt Manga how do u joined Saturday morning

    • @WorldPaperChamp
      @WorldPaperChamp 7 лет назад

      maybe you fixed it already or its not a big deal but i thought i should say that for the female character pulling back the curtain, for her left hand, it looks like her thumb is draw for the right hand.

  • @stalkerzhs1864
    @stalkerzhs1864 7 лет назад +25

    And that's why he's called Cliff Hanger

  • @junioranthoney7306
    @junioranthoney7306 7 лет назад +40

    can u do a video on how to make your character transform like into a monster is it like a transition In the panel

  • @xandredarium4209
    @xandredarium4209 7 лет назад +10

    I try to keep a mini cliffhanger at the end of every single page.

    • @tomholder183
      @tomholder183 6 лет назад

      LOL

    • @MAR-sc7np
      @MAR-sc7np 3 года назад

      I think that only works in a fight scene that the reader wants to turn the page to see what happens next.

  • @phoenixxking4156
    @phoenixxking4156 7 лет назад +16

    Can you do a video on how to go about it using special powers or abilities

  • @16JPE
    @16JPE 7 лет назад +4

    I read Tokyo Ghoul Volume 9 and that has a hell of a cliff hanger

  • @ohmchee
    @ohmchee 7 лет назад +1

    Your videos are so awesome and helpful! cant wait to watch more!!

  • @leemuleemu7915
    @leemuleemu7915 5 лет назад +2

    Best way to write a cliffhanger, put enough thought into it for a FILM THEORY!!!!! AAAAAAANNNNDDDDD CUUTT!!!

  • @henriqueribeiro2915
    @henriqueribeiro2915 7 лет назад +2

    You're fantastic,dude! I'm a huge fan. Greetings from Brazil >

  • @Aylinismay
    @Aylinismay 7 лет назад +1

    Thank you for the amazing tips! :D This will be very helpful for when I start my litle series! ^-^

  • @jiru331
    @jiru331 7 лет назад +2

    Thanks for the video, you deserve more subscribers!

  • @adriananthony602
    @adriananthony602 3 года назад

    Thanks for all the content you share!

  • @keith1984rich
    @keith1984rich 7 лет назад +3

    Bruh I really appreciate your videos. It's been paramount to forming my idea's into reality. Just a couple of requests I have to get your opinion/perspective on somethings.
    •How to handle multiple story arcs
    •How to start and refine your beginning outline for your story/characters.
    • Diversity in your stories(how to create characters that aren't stereotypes but genuine)
    •Creating a simple story with real depth.
    Just some ideas bruh. Great videos!

  • @socalledartist6388
    @socalledartist6388 7 лет назад +2

    Your a great artist😌✍🏾️

  • @miguelcosta7063
    @miguelcosta7063 7 лет назад +3

    Hi im new to your channel and i have got to say You have gained a new sub
    Btw Your channel is so awesome

  • @fishaccordion7601
    @fishaccordion7601 7 лет назад

    Thank you I really love your channel! :)

  • @jodelthompson
    @jodelthompson 7 лет назад

    Thanks whyt manga these tips will help me in my manga series. Keep up the great work.And btw i subbed about six months ago

  • @lumomagus
    @lumomagus 7 лет назад +1

    I'm so keen for the next issue of the comic 😭

  • @justice9689
    @justice9689 7 лет назад

    Great Video you inspire me so much I really want to become a manga artist

  • @user-pz9lk7pz7f
    @user-pz9lk7pz7f 7 месяцев назад

    I really enjoyed this video this would definetely help me in my manga . Can you make a video on how to structure your story.

  • @rennypam6245
    @rennypam6245 7 лет назад +4

    Hey Whyt you got any tips for character development?

  • @nyla.m
    @nyla.m 7 лет назад

    Awesome

  • @16JPE
    @16JPE 7 лет назад +1

    Very great video. it helped me a lot

  • @uzakikena8294
    @uzakikena8294 7 лет назад +1

    can you do one about transformation?

  • @GarouThehumanmonsterZZ
    @GarouThehumanmonsterZZ 7 лет назад

    I'll try to make some really rage cliffhangers in my manga hahah

  • @rakeen1690
    @rakeen1690 7 лет назад

    I hope we get to see an Apple Black anime........!!!!!!!

  • @ramsestaveras1843
    @ramsestaveras1843 7 лет назад

    Hey Whyt! just a question, what comics/mangas are you reading now a days? What are those you think are more interesting? Thanks and keep up your hard work!

  • @trendy7889
    @trendy7889 7 лет назад +2

    Hey! I've got one question, why do you make the manga on the paper and what the size of your manga paper, is it a4 or a5?

  • @AceArgent
    @AceArgent 7 лет назад +4

    Heyy, these're pretty solid! Thanks for providing. I especially liked how you used the example of an event in Apple Black and gave a bit of context! Even without prior knowledge of your manga, I was able to get a clear idea of what you were trying to get across to us.
    Probably my only criticism here - the term 'tranny' is derogative, and using that casually tends to give bad vibes. :\
    But other than that, I'm interested to see what else you can give us aspiring serial-makers Tips on!

    • @WhytMangaOdunze
      @WhytMangaOdunze  7 лет назад +5

      Thank you. regarding your criticism I obviously mean no offense but I understand you and I'll be more careful in the future.

  • @Veon_512
    @Veon_512 4 года назад

    Plot twist: there are actually 12 tips but he left yall on a cliffhanger

  • @__-fi6xg
    @__-fi6xg 7 лет назад +1

    Damn its so hard... I wrote/ drawn 3 beginnings of a story. Longest has 8 pages. But I cringe at my own story. I'm sooo hard to myself. Especially when I draw. I allways try to change the angles but my skills aren't there yet, I struggle a lot.

  • @nobleknighttony1671
    @nobleknighttony1671 7 лет назад

    Can I get serialized at Saturday A.M.

  • @StigmataSasha
    @StigmataSasha 7 лет назад

    What do you use for your recording setup? Tripod, camera, etc?

  • @baddrawer1139
    @baddrawer1139 7 лет назад

    What type of paper do you use

  • @dezz9046
    @dezz9046 6 лет назад

    What inking pens do u use

  • @jonathanjernagin9952
    @jonathanjernagin9952 7 лет назад

    what kind of pen is that

  • @sandinochristian
    @sandinochristian 7 лет назад

    Reasoning for switching to Microns?

  • @Jetmonkie
    @Jetmonkie 7 лет назад

    how do you make a double spread page?

    • @16JPE
      @16JPE 7 лет назад +2

      You just take two pages, and right at the part where they insect (go to the spine) they go on top of one another and you just draw the double spread. I hope that made sense. If you get buy a manga pages book at a art store the book will have instructions on how to make double spreads

  • @ggs4869
    @ggs4869 7 лет назад

    hey man just found your youtube channel. really amazing! i have a question however, I dont have a drawing table, pencils, inks etc..... but a Cintiq 27qHD. Is it possible to do quality work without traditionel pencil&ink work? I have never drew anything remotely close to manga/anime but maybe wanted to make it my little secret hobby.

    • @monkeyXmonkey
      @monkeyXmonkey 7 лет назад +1

      Dude, why do you even have a cintiq lol.... But seriously, just work with what you got, and since you have a cintiq, just work with that. Quality work can be done with any medium. So just go draw, and have fun.

    • @ggs4869
      @ggs4869 7 лет назад

      monkeyXmonkey yes thats what I thought first but digitally my linework sucks hard. I dont think you can have great lineweight because the medium limits you. I saw some videos where pros kept it traditionel all the way, all the time. I dont know if lines can have personality if you do it digital but then again there is a cintiq lying around and maybe its gonna work out somehow. My concern is, that i get a screwed up workflow.

    • @monkeyXmonkey
      @monkeyXmonkey 7 лет назад

      Just draw man, don't concern yourself too much and just adapt and use what you have. Personality can flow from any type of medium, digital or traditional. Only thing that's limiting you is yourself. Also, I'm sure you can acquire a pencil and paper easily if you think digital is too much atm. I mean, how can you just have a cintiq lying around, and not have a paper and pencil, and a regular table. lol

    • @ggs4869
      @ggs4869 7 лет назад

      monkeyXmonkey I draw for about 6 years (more serious) now and its part of my future career ( Architecture) but Manga/ Anime is a different world in terms of drawing. I got the fundamentals down but dont want to develope bad habbits.

    • @GarouThehumanmonsterZZ
      @GarouThehumanmonsterZZ 7 лет назад

      I use a Cintiq 24HD for my webmanga so it is possible yeah.. you just need the right softwares like paint tool Sai or Manga Studio 5

  • @yellowtod4745
    @yellowtod4745 7 лет назад +1

    could you give me private lessons?

  • @guilhermeeuller5248
    @guilhermeeuller5248 7 лет назад

    Cara se comprar vc traduz para português?

  • @Thiago-qu8xe
    @Thiago-qu8xe 7 лет назад +2

    queria poder comprar o seu mangá ;-;

  • @nikitahatter440
    @nikitahatter440 5 лет назад

  • @geokorf
    @geokorf 6 лет назад

    H3H3 music *cough*

  • @tr1zzy-kun672
    @tr1zzy-kun672 7 лет назад

    Second

  • @prankstergangster661
    @prankstergangster661 7 лет назад

    I thought you used G-Pen

  • @allstarlord9110
    @allstarlord9110 7 лет назад +2

    why did you stop using the G-pen and instead use microns in the whole page?

  • @BSide-ky2og
    @BSide-ky2og 7 лет назад

    Third

  • @sylvrsky2521
    @sylvrsky2521 7 лет назад

    third

  • @blckboy5864
    @blckboy5864 7 лет назад

    Hey Whyt Manga why do you never do steps on your drawing videos. I think it would help us a little. I'm not trying to trash you or anything but I'm just saying. I'm actually a pretty good artist but it would do me a little better if you did.

  • @javiergomez4753
    @javiergomez4753 6 лет назад

    Dude, don't spoil your own manga! I just bought vol 1 and I already know how it ends!!!

  • @TripleCatAttack
    @TripleCatAttack 7 лет назад

    I just figured out that you sometimes draw original characters from the comments and I would like you to draw mine.
    Name: Soda
    Gender: Female
    Height: 5'1 In (154.94 cm)
    Weight: 98 Ib (44.5 Kg)
    Cup Size: 28 B
    Info: She is a lively and spunky young girl. She wears a purple dress under a white dress under a sort of vest. She has short spiky blue hair and purple eyes. She is very cheerful and loves to eat. She is very energetic and she wants to become a hero although she can be quite lazy at times. Her main abilities include shooting purple fire from her hands and fingers, sword skills and levitation. Without going into much details she is actually millenniums old. She is the goddess of creation although she got lazy and fell asleep just waking up in this age.
    I actually have a picture of her on my Facebook if you were interested.
    facebook.com/NeptuniaMasterXD/photos_albums
    The one that says MKII is her current design.
    I'd love to have your take on her and would be happy if you drew her yourself! Thx

  • @666Keppo
    @666Keppo 7 лет назад

    mate.. I know this is dumb to come here asking for this kind of stuff, but could you send me sum of these pens? I simply don't have the money for them, too young for a job, my family is too poor and all dat jazz..

    • @royalanimelover9030
      @royalanimelover9030 7 лет назад

      oh that's unfortunate 😮 then you'll just have to wait to make money or save up the pens are 8 dollars and under

    • @666Keppo
      @666Keppo 7 лет назад

      Royal Animelover welp.. Would cost me a lot more than that since I can't get them in the town I live in

    • @royalanimelover9030
      @royalanimelover9030 7 лет назад

      Do you live out of the us

    • @jumpsandflips
      @jumpsandflips 7 лет назад

      GamerWolf it kinda dosent matter what kind of pen you use as long as it has black ink and dosent fade when you erase.

    • @jumpsandflips
      @jumpsandflips 7 лет назад

      GamerWolf it kinda dosent matter what kind of pen you use as long as it has black ink and dosent fade when you erase.

  • @c.r.adamson7482
    @c.r.adamson7482 7 лет назад

    I really don't get why you don't just jump on that digital bandwagon, its more cost effective and it could add a larger arsenal of tools at your disposal. Any chance you could make a video about that?

    • @c.r.adamson7482
      @c.r.adamson7482 7 лет назад

      I've also found it faster then physical, plus it's easier to fix mistakes.

    • @c.r.adamson7482
      @c.r.adamson7482 7 лет назад

      Wacom intuos pro, Model: PTH-451. Its my first tablet and seems to fit my needs just fine, it's kinda small though.