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  • Опубликовано: 21 апр 2024
  • Human Saved The Alien Girl, Then She Fell In Love With Him | HFY | A Short Sci-Fi Story
    #story #ai #hfy #aliens #scifi #stories #battle #humanity #myths

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  • @georgearden7075
    @georgearden7075 3 месяца назад +33

    If she had bioluminescent skin then I am all in.

  • @leannaerickson9745
    @leannaerickson9745 2 месяца назад +8

    Leeloo (5th Element) - way more interesting. And what happened to the bounty hunter? This could be a bare-bones sketch for a real story. It lacks details. Thank you.

  • @elessar60
    @elessar60 3 месяца назад +64

    wait a minute! come on, they need to finally admit their love for one another and the story needs to tell about their next steps in their relationship!

    • @nitrosavy
      @nitrosavy 2 месяца назад +3

      I know right, I feel ripped off 😂

  • @johnflesner8086
    @johnflesner8086 3 месяца назад +48

    I want to live a world where a chicken can cross the road, and not be endlessly questioned. 😊

  • @BigDaddy_MRI
    @BigDaddy_MRI Месяц назад +1

    Did they release the bounty hunter, or ?? Some parts are missing. Don’t leave threads not tied up in a story. Not too terrible, but be careful not to allow too many uses of the same words in a story.

  • @glundgren2097
    @glundgren2097 3 месяца назад +33

    And now Mike is pregnant?! Such bravery!

  • @purelightlove8888
    @purelightlove8888 2 месяца назад +5

    Sooo Loved this story! Many Thanks! ✨⛎❇️⛎✨

  • @FLANG3265
    @FLANG3265 3 месяца назад +20

    Alien-human hybrid soon to follow.

  • @tobyadams6461
    @tobyadams6461 3 месяца назад +16

    When did lyra learn English or when did he learn her language?

    • @athelwulfgalland
      @athelwulfgalland 3 месяца назад +3

      It was likely a plot hole derived from the AI generated story. Artificial Intelligence doesn't seem very intelligent at all.
      Have you tried to have Windows Copilot use DALL-E 3 to create an image for you? I just wanted a CGI image of a Martin P6M SeaMaster painted marine green over light gray. Instead I kept getting images of airliners, C-17s or C-130s on the water's surface. Fair enough, some were on floats, but one even had just the fuselage on a wooden raft... Half of them had some green, somewhere, on the planes. The other half didn't have a speck of green anywhere. -_-;

    • @januszlepionko
      @januszlepionko 2 месяца назад +1

      More, who would use a *radio* for communication with distant star in other sector of the Galaxy?

    • @athelwulfgalland
      @athelwulfgalland 2 месяца назад +1

      @@januszlepionko People with a whole lot of patience, time & maybe cryogenic sleep chambers on hand to wait for the reply? lol

    • @januszlepionko
      @januszlepionko 2 месяца назад +2

      @@athelwulfgalland Context of this story suggested it did not took even days to hear an answer. The answer was almost immediate. So… take a radio and tune it up to have almost immediate communication with distant star system. Good luck!

    • @athelwulfgalland
      @athelwulfgalland 2 месяца назад

      @@januszlepionko Duuuuude! They just told me to snort the comet under the sink & I'd get me well past the sky?! 🤭

  • @chuckclark9464
    @chuckclark9464 2 месяца назад +2

    Now this they should make a mini movie out of. I enjoyed this thank you.

  • @ronbuckner8179
    @ronbuckner8179 3 месяца назад +10

    How did the communication gap heal.

  • @kennethschweighardt4920
    @kennethschweighardt4920 2 месяца назад +6

    I really, really, really, loved this story. However I really wanted a shared kiss to complete it. Very well done...

    • @LizGibson-wk5uo
      @LizGibson-wk5uo 2 месяца назад +2

      They should make it into a TV series, asap, As the Stars Turn....wow ! ☆☆

    • @kennethschweighardt4920
      @kennethschweighardt4920 2 месяца назад +1

      @@LizGibson-wk5uo Yes.. just not Apple Tv... I will never see it then..

  • @johnflesner8086
    @johnflesner8086 3 месяца назад +25

    Instantaneous Radio conversation over light years of distance?

    • @jameytechsan7622
      @jameytechsan7622 3 месяца назад +5

      lol, I was thinking that very thing.

    • @FLANG3265
      @FLANG3265 3 месяца назад +1

      She helped him build and adjust the radio. Maybe it was more.

    • @lewismitchell5367
      @lewismitchell5367 3 месяца назад +3

      Quark quantum entanglement, it can be done from scratch if one has perfect pitch. The easiest way is to get a Crystal singer to cut precise jewels from the same crystal.

    • @erichayes2890
      @erichayes2890 2 месяца назад +1

      YES,...I KNOW!!! HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE? (Hint)...actually it's not. All made up from AI.

    • @dag1489
      @dag1489 2 месяца назад +1

      Subspace communication.

  • @sandralouth3103
    @sandralouth3103 3 месяца назад +33

    I can always tell an A-I generated story. The word "palpable" is used multiple times. Outside of that, nice story.

    • @donaldforest1942
      @donaldforest1942 2 месяца назад

      Should be known as a fake story

    • @JohnJBrowne11209
      @JohnJBrowne11209 2 месяца назад +2

      It's better than most of the AI generated scrap out there and the voice is better than most.

  • @MerryRedRose-ez6ih
    @MerryRedRose-ez6ih Месяц назад +2

    She may be an astronaut or space girl. Alien is just a robot use to investigate the planet which ET want to investigated.

  • @ragingrebel8660
    @ragingrebel8660 2 месяца назад +2

    And now Mike lives on an alien planet and they have a little alien kid.

  • @Astrofrank
    @Astrofrank 3 месяца назад +3

    That was wonderful!

  • @thomasstevenrothmbamd2384
    @thomasstevenrothmbamd2384 2 месяца назад +3

    Wow! This is excellent writing.

  • @alien6495
    @alien6495 2 месяца назад +1

    Cool story. I couldn’t get away without finishing it. But you left us hanging

  • @TexasDog3
    @TexasDog3 3 месяца назад +4

    If this is from a book, I would really love to know what the title is!

  • @richardcox6935
    @richardcox6935 2 месяца назад +9

    So Lira just suddenly started speaking English?

    • @Luckyrider1958
      @Luckyrider1958 2 месяца назад

      Also.. moved to cabin off grid, yet, built a radio (out of what) to communicate with space ( with what power source??) .. AND he called his friends(on what?) for help??

  • @kevinbrice9198
    @kevinbrice9198 2 месяца назад +1

    I believe I lived extraterrestrial lifetimes like that, before I came to this planet.

  • @davidroberts5602
    @davidroberts5602 2 месяца назад +2

    Hi thanks for amazing story David 🚀👌❤️🇬🇧👍

  • @macroevolve
    @macroevolve 3 месяца назад +8

    Lira or Lera < it bounces between the spellings in the caption

  • @jaredsanchez3969
    @jaredsanchez3969 3 месяца назад +12

    Definitely brings a whole new meaning of taste the rainbow

    • @arthurchadwell9267
      @arthurchadwell9267 2 месяца назад +3

      🤣 Skittlingus...

    • @LizGibson-wk5uo
      @LizGibson-wk5uo 2 месяца назад +1

      Her star-craft looks like an outdated jet airplane, should be a saucer type flying craft...☆.

  • @arthurchadwell9267
    @arthurchadwell9267 2 месяца назад +1

    If I was Mike, I'd be on the first shuttle pod smoking out....

  • @robertbates6057
    @robertbates6057 2 месяца назад +1

    This would make for a cool mini series.

  • @edwardlittle5541
    @edwardlittle5541 2 месяца назад +1

    Im disappointed. I clicked on this because I thought it was a short movie not just a story. Oh well...ya can't win 'em all I guess.🥴

  • @notcherbane3218
    @notcherbane3218 3 месяца назад +16

    I keep seeing this title and they keep changing what the woman/girl looks like so is it different stories with the same theme or they just ripping each other off or they just change the image ?

    • @MrBenjamin1983
      @MrBenjamin1983 3 месяца назад +3

      Someone wrote it, published it on reddit or some such forum. They're all using the same text/title, some with permission. I get the feeling that none are exclusive so we see the same stories over and over.

    • @ncox001
      @ncox001 3 месяца назад +2

      It just shows the limitations of AI-generated stories

  • @maryadams6415
    @maryadams6415 2 месяца назад +17

    I must have missed how Mike went from going to MUFON type meetings, to SOMEHOW having his own ship capable of FTL travel, or did I also miss where she said she would send an intergalactic Limo for him.

    • @mikepaulski1108
      @mikepaulski1108 2 месяца назад

      Shalom Aleichem.
      Yeah that part had wondering as well?
      Ratson haba b'shem YaHuah

  • @Nwladylaura369
    @Nwladylaura369 2 месяца назад +8

    Hum… all of a sudden they can talk to each other! The writer (human or AI) left out how that magically happened.

    • @bijukumarkn4626
      @bijukumarkn4626 2 месяца назад +1

      😀😃

    • @dalor4906
      @dalor4906 2 месяца назад

      I love how AI used Delorian instead of Valorian towards the end of the story😂😂😂

    • @LizGibson-wk5uo
      @LizGibson-wk5uo 2 месяца назад +1

      Hugs, & sign language ?

  • @rezahemmatzadeh1191
    @rezahemmatzadeh1191 2 месяца назад +1

    A good sci-fi story😁

  • @jasperwright9237
    @jasperwright9237 Месяц назад

    Great short story.

  • @baldbeardedbloke6887
    @baldbeardedbloke6887 2 месяца назад

    The only things this story needs about it that needs to change IMHO Is the role of Valeria being replaced by the role of Valerian and Mike Both Being Naturist.

  • @SkLui-pe5zc
    @SkLui-pe5zc Месяц назад

    Such a romantic love story, illuminated by the grandeur of the stars that separate these two lovers.

  • @elwelkin
    @elwelkin 3 месяца назад +10

    Do you believe Lyra was impregnated by a human before leaving earth ?

  • @andyvan5692
    @andyvan5692 2 месяца назад +1

    this is not the right platform, this is an Audio track, with a cover image, no video!

  • @faerieSAALE
    @faerieSAALE 2 месяца назад +5

    Mike knew he had made a huge mistake when he visited the Volorian central kitchen and saw the recipe book labeled, To Serve Man! 😯

    • @ivanhorvat8964
      @ivanhorvat8964 2 месяца назад

      VERY FUNNY !? NOT EVEN CLOSE ! 👋👎🤔🤪😆🇨🇦🍁🇭🇷

  • @af1023
    @af1023 Месяц назад

    Good story, thank you

  • @unitedworld6618
    @unitedworld6618 2 месяца назад +4

    What about the Bounty Hunter, what happened to him????

    • @arthurchadwell9267
      @arthurchadwell9267 2 месяца назад +1

      Mike secretly killed him.

    • @louraposo3795
      @louraposo3795 2 месяца назад

      Didn't you hear ? He got his own TV series , 😆

  • @johnnickel5387
    @johnnickel5387 2 месяца назад

    I liked it ,one could read this to thier children or grandchildren

  • @arthurwagar88
    @arthurwagar88 2 месяца назад +1

    Nice story.

  • @walkerke1
    @walkerke1 3 месяца назад +6

    Great story keep them coming, or turn this into a series.
    Am I the only one who is curious about what happened to the bounty hunter after she left?

  • @januszlepionko
    @januszlepionko 2 месяца назад

    Who would use a *radio* for communication with distant star in other sector of the Galaxy? Radiowaves' speed in vacuum is the same as the speed of light, so how long it would take to get the answer from the other sector of the Galaxy?

  • @terrydaniels9126
    @terrydaniels9126 2 месяца назад +1

    Cool story

  • @diamondjim7560
    @diamondjim7560 2 месяца назад

    Sooo, ET really did “Phone home”! The only thing missing from this story was a John Williams score.

  • @ricardobufo
    @ricardobufo 2 месяца назад +2

    What about the poor bounty hunter??

  • @darrellhagan6124
    @darrellhagan6124 2 месяца назад +1

    Good story but I must have missed something - What happened to the bounty hunter?

  • @ErnestoDelaCruz-lj8hb
    @ErnestoDelaCruz-lj8hb 23 дня назад +1

    This means there are aliens im other planets

  • @michaelconlee4433
    @michaelconlee4433 2 месяца назад

    Read a book called "The Star Kings" by Edmund Hamilton. the story line is generally very much the same, but some of the answers to your questions can be found there.

  • @edongashi9489
    @edongashi9489 3 месяца назад +4

    Part 2 m***********, don't let me hanging😊

  • @guruji243
    @guruji243 Месяц назад

    There were true contactees who experienced this in real life.

  • @nicholasklangos9704
    @nicholasklangos9704 2 месяца назад +8

    Mike showed Lira Star Trek TNG and the Federation of Planets and together they helped make Gene Roddenberry dream come true...

  • @dwightcosper8676
    @dwightcosper8676 2 месяца назад

    Is there a book length adaption of this short story
    Somewhat reminiscent of Edgar rich Burroughs novels if a hundred years ago
    Did anyone notice?

  • @mikepaulski1108
    @mikepaulski1108 2 месяца назад

    Shalom Aleichem.
    I enjoyed this short story., but not the ending. It should've gone a tad longer.
    It reminds me of the e-books I used to listen to when I was driving a semi OTR.
    More like this would be nice.
    Ratson haba b'shem YaHuah

  • @tommissouri4871
    @tommissouri4871 2 месяца назад +1

    Ok, here is another of today's 7th grade English story writing assignment. This one must be about an alien girl who crashes and a human rescues her. If you read the sidebar carefully, you will see all the other classmate entries. And class, you must use a dictionary and use at least a half dozen big words to show your sophisticated writing abilities.

    • @thurley7731
      @thurley7731 15 дней назад

      is that why there were so many misused words like Son?

  • @katherinecooper6159
    @katherinecooper6159 2 месяца назад

    Knowing a wee bit about the military and our government I would never tell either of them anything.

  • @eldrenbiddle9358
    @eldrenbiddle9358 2 месяца назад +1

    What happened to the bounty hunter, did he get a job repossessing cars for banks?

  • @user-rs3ck8hr7f
    @user-rs3ck8hr7f 3 месяца назад +5

    Are all of these stories written by an AI?

    • @SteveWithers
      @SteveWithers 3 месяца назад +2

      I think a lot of them are taken from reddit subs where people post this stuff.......

    • @ncox001
      @ncox001 3 месяца назад +2

      yes

  • @bobbell5928
    @bobbell5928 2 месяца назад +1

    So...did they do the dirty or not? The painting was cool anyway

  • @lesley643
    @lesley643 2 месяца назад +1

    Yes yes yes Mike did slip her a length multiple times. You betcha.

  • @gagasmancave8859
    @gagasmancave8859 3 месяца назад +6

    So what happened to the bounty hunter

    • @navigatorofnone
      @navigatorofnone 3 месяца назад +3

      Discarded and forgotten like trash, such is the fate of a filler character. 😂😂

    • @SteveWithers
      @SteveWithers 3 месяца назад

      I was wondering the same thing. Plus no mention of the arrangements for Mike to get to Valoria. 'Nek minit' (Google it) he's on a ship out in space....

  • @choctaw2sticks193
    @choctaw2sticks193 3 месяца назад

    right on . . .

  • @arthurchadwell9267
    @arthurchadwell9267 2 месяца назад +1

    That's what happens when you fall in love with a career woman. She leaves you for her job...

  • @ErnestoDelaCruz-lj8hb
    @ErnestoDelaCruz-lj8hb 23 дня назад +1

    What will be their offspring

  • @ErnestJones-vp6ty
    @ErnestJones-vp6ty 3 месяца назад

    The sound,audio was way to low for easy listening.

  • @ombundarculipsuri
    @ombundarculipsuri Месяц назад

    "Deloarean" society ot Valorian ? This reminds me of Dolorean car maker / inventor ! ;) What's Next ?
    P.S. Was she named Lira or Lera? Was Mike a man or ... ? Will their love end with an organic silicon based baby or a super human?

  • @dennisgood2887
    @dennisgood2887 16 дней назад

    That was cool

  • @ivanhorvat8964
    @ivanhorvat8964 2 месяца назад +1

    I’ve been able to Recognize the Possibility of a”BLOCKBUSTER HIT” full version 🤔👍🙏👁️✝️🇨🇦🍁🇭🇷

  • @DrBillPezzaglia
    @DrBillPezzaglia 3 месяца назад

    how did he get a spaceship with a star drive?

  • @stevenmull2587
    @stevenmull2587 2 месяца назад

    I'm thinking this was AI written. Still interesting though.

  • @Larry.Roberton
    @Larry.Roberton 2 месяца назад

    Nice story, but why the harsh cold voice?

  • @lorneschalm5056
    @lorneschalm5056 3 месяца назад +3

    Woman driver😮

  • @jehangirkhan8989
    @jehangirkhan8989 2 месяца назад +1

    👌

  • @earthtraderssaga
    @earthtraderssaga 2 месяца назад

    This isn't very interesting compared to my stories. AII generated story and voice. It makes me doubly glad I hired VO artists.

  • @MinnesotaBeekeeper
    @MinnesotaBeekeeper 2 месяца назад +3

    I've been to Valoria. Their toilets don't flush.

  • @larrys9241
    @larrys9241 3 месяца назад

    Gee
    Where is the human on alien hot magambo . 😂

  • @arthurchadwell9267
    @arthurchadwell9267 2 месяца назад

    Weaving him into DeLorian society? 😂

  • @garyb2392
    @garyb2392 2 месяца назад

    This isn’t a book ? Or the recap of a movie?

  • @eliteaccount7974
    @eliteaccount7974 2 месяца назад

    AI or not.....I think we are not allone and hope in the Future we can have such a Contact in Friendship and Loyalty. Who knows.....it can be or not,,,time will bring it

  • @kennethgrantham5092
    @kennethgrantham5092 2 месяца назад

    I thought she did not speak human language? How, then, did they discuss their situation?

  • @MyTubeOne
    @MyTubeOne Месяц назад

    10/10

  • @dsloop3907
    @dsloop3907 3 месяца назад +1

    ET phone home................

  • @patrickmiano7901
    @patrickmiano7901 Месяц назад

    Again with the palpable?

  • @yootoober2009
    @yootoober2009 3 месяца назад

    "Wires" in an alien spacecraft? Elon Musk has started to eliminate "wires" in Tesla EVs in just a few years, what kind of "wires" would terrestrial and space vehicles have in a hundred or thousand years?

    • @robertbates6057
      @robertbates6057 2 месяца назад

      Where do you think fibreoptics came from?

  • @petermann1150
    @petermann1150 2 месяца назад

    The story littered with typo errors.

  • @Blakeproski
    @Blakeproski 2 месяца назад

    Please get a better Voice to text program!!!

  • @jansrensen7582
    @jansrensen7582 2 месяца назад

    Ok Nice ❤

  • @flyhigh5056
    @flyhigh5056 2 месяца назад

    Yea, that didn't happen.

  • @ayalatxaluma3789
    @ayalatxaluma3789 2 месяца назад

    no image for the intercourse ? a pity ! we d like to know how species work together ...

  • @PatrickTerry-mw6xe
    @PatrickTerry-mw6xe Месяц назад

    Thats what i am way thing to herd

  • @TinaKayser-ls1cj
    @TinaKayser-ls1cj 2 месяца назад

    Human was married to the real queen he cheated on her get it

  • @TheWolfster001
    @TheWolfster001 Месяц назад

    Is this a movie or a story???

  • @draganastojadinovic1303
    @draganastojadinovic1303 2 месяца назад

    Story is too long

  • @johnLee-bb2do
    @johnLee-bb2do 2 месяца назад

    Sorry but this sounds (reads) like a bad SiFi YA novel from 1965.

  • @petersommerville3574
    @petersommerville3574 2 месяца назад

    When science fiction engages with social politics and becomes evangelical it loses its impact.

  • @michaelwilliams9265
    @michaelwilliams9265 3 месяца назад +1

    I concure b origanal

  • @baldbeardedbloke6887
    @baldbeardedbloke6887 2 месяца назад +1

    In Science Fiction Both Good and Bad Aliens can speak English or Any Other Language they wish.

  • @happymonkey420
    @happymonkey420 2 месяца назад

    Whoop Whoop homies Smokem if you gottem 🧖🏼‍♂️ 😶‍🌫️ 🙏🏻
    ✌🏻🐵✌🏻

  • @TheSolidSnakeOil
    @TheSolidSnakeOil 3 месяца назад

    In the criminal justice system the people are represented by two separate, yet equally important groups. The police who investigate crime and the district attorneys who prosecute the offenders. These are their stories. DUN DUN.
    Complete and total Law & Order vibes from the AI narrator.