It's a bastardized version of a good story. It's quite disgusting honestly. Look for "The nature of predators" several channels have the actual, good, version.
So much more encouraging to hear humans being a force for good instead of the usual drivel of "humans are the most evil thing in the universe". Even though the AI reading is uncomfortable, I am glad I came across HFY stories.
I don't think the original series is AI as it's really good there's well over 100 episodes it's really a space opera or it's getting there, THE NATURE OF PREDATORS.
The humans should have come clean and told them " Yes, even though we could be classed 'Predators", we value peace so much, because we have, several times, come too close to destroying ourselves". "We have learned our lessons well".
Only listened to the story up to 90 seconds in and I must say that this is an interesting take on "The Nature Of Predators" that so many have already brought forth in their own style of transcription, most of which are complete trash thanks to very bad text-to-speech without so much as an attempt to go over their own work. I will save this one and see if it is, indeed, a strangely abridged version of the multi-chapter story.
I would assume the human ship was intercepting transmissions from the planet, our own planet is constantly broadcasting through various microwaves and frequencies, albeit slow moving.
a titanium projectile can not be stopped by a electromagnetic field because titanium is not magnetic. because titanium has a crystalline structure with no unpaired electrons, which are required for a material to exhibit magnetic properties. This means titanium projectiles do not interact with magnetic fields & is considered to be a diamagnetic material. In your stories a rail gun slinging titanium projectiles can penetrate electromagnetic shields making them useless
I'd just figured out what the video was, then I read your comment. "Not a bad story needs more work" That bit made me chuckle. This is the "The Nature Of Predators" story that's on the Agro Squirrell channel. Excellent story, it has well over 170 chapters to it. This video, the first half is basically chapter 1 of NOP, and the second half is something like chapters 2 - 75 of it lol
@@LawrenceKennardcrazy idea: go to the nearest middle school and ask the best readers to read a few stories. Give them each a plaque for accomplishment. Students get recognized, you've greatly improved your product and the cost is minimal.
The story has no "meat" there is no interaction between the humans and the Arksers, (As the title suggests) especially when the latter realize they have encountered serious foes. A battle is simply summarized in a few sentences. I could do a LOT better than this. Having the Humans show their "Nasty Side" to an unsuspecting, confident foe would be quite fun.
You should go listen to the story this one was taken from. It will give you the whole story. Like the fact the the venlill are predators to. And humans eventually befriend the arxur.
If this represents an example of AI achievement for telling a story, someone needs to pull the plug on it before the thing hurts itself. It has religiously regurgitated every popular social platitude over the past decade while utterly failing at the goal of telling anything resembling a compelling or insightful story.
This is part one of a very long series. The Nature of Predators. There is another channel who has up to episode 151. Done with multiple voices and sound effects. It sounds just like a movie just no visual
I listen to these stories just to see how AI is learning. The content is low grade at best... for now. But all AI has to work with, is the content of the internet
The AI speaker is a bit off putting and makes it a bit difficult to follow, but it’s not bad. I’m one of those people who do wonder if humanity is alone in the galaxy. I do think that it was a bit foolish for humanity to share their military capabilities. Even today the public isn’t told the full capability of classified weapons and vehicles. I found myself hoping that the new predators show the “Arxur” who is the dominant predator in the galaxy. And things turn out well in real life if we aren’t alone in the universe.
It see.s like all the different people providing content love the word palpable. Don't think I heard that word 20 times in my 73 years. Now all these scify channels use it at least 2 times every story.. Are you making content from the same company with minor changes to story? Sounds like Gereral Motors using the same platform for Chevy and buick, pontiac with minor changes. The pictures also are a bit different. This is just a passing thought.😊
In 66 years , I have never heard it used in conversation. Kind of makes a person wonder why the word exists, as the written word usually follows use in spoken language
We haven't met any life, even a microbe would be amazing, but also we have heard about the other violent race? Well which is it? Did the humans lie or is this just terrible a.i story telling 😂
Too many errors... Early in story... It is stated that [Earth/Humans] destroyed themselves in a nuclear war. Then... Lo and behold... We have humans from Earth exploring space and things seem fine in Earth. Plus... Humans say they've never met intelligent species...Then... say they've heard about the Arksur...
It is a wonderful story. The written words you show denigrate the story when you keep changing the name of the planet. Your definition of the name ranges from Venel, to Vengeful, Vandals, and not many are flattering. If you can't produce proper consistency about your own story, how are we the readers supposed to understand? The story and the morals presented is good, but the detractions are off-putting. Thanks for sharing.
Given the story that this is clearly rippled from, the races are: Arxur, Venlil, Farsul, Krakotl, Kolshians, and about 40 others. Check out "The Nature Of Predators" that this is clearly ripped from.
Awww...did mama's very special boy see something he didn't like? How earth-shattering...grow up, boyo, noone is interested in your insignificant opinion.
It was nice to hear a story without tons of curse words.
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Plot hole, Humanity has not encountered any other species, yet 13 minutes in they talk about what they have heard about other species…
It's a bastardized version of a good story. It's quite disgusting honestly. Look for "The nature of predators" several channels have the actual, good, version.
It's after the party, so maybe they heard it during that. Still, I will look into "The nature of predators" that @jakeand9020 mentioned.
So much more encouraging to hear humans being a force for good instead of the usual drivel of "humans are the most evil thing in the universe". Even though the AI reading is uncomfortable, I am glad I came across HFY stories.
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Well it's one of the better AI generated stories, but very typical, alot of high sounding idealism and very little substance or development.
I'll work on that and try to improve. Thanks for the advice.
It's Nature of predators series.
Excellent story.
A lot of hgh level stuff with no character development - this story could have been delivered across many episodes/chapters.
I don't think the original series is AI as it's really good there's well over 100 episodes it's really a space opera or it's getting there, THE NATURE OF PREDATORS.
@@tellyfanatic not ai and it's completed story.
There are dozens of sfy channels out there and most of em release same stories.
This a real dream and I would just love to meet a new species than our own this would be just like Star trek and i hope to live this long.
You do know that there is another video online that covers this from episode 1-172
The humans should have come clean and told them " Yes, even though we could be classed 'Predators", we value peace so much, because we have, several times, come too close to destroying ourselves". "We have learned our lessons well".
Sooooooo. Having never met another species they have universal translators?
Nahh I just assumed similar evolution English is the universal language
It's always the responsibility of the more advanced species to translate.
Great story, nice to see humanity as decent as well as powerful.
It really is!♥️
Your title does not reflect the focus on peace and cooperation. Not on how humans preyed on predators. So misleading.
Nice one, that is not all war and warheros.👍
I remember Noah Claire and Lyra. I know how the coming war ends. I didn't expect a prequel.
So the aliens came to eat humans but the humans hunted them YAY!!
So, another “the life of predators”
And how pray tell did they hear of what the other species had done when supposedly they had never met another species before?
Only listened to the story up to 90 seconds in and I must say that this is an interesting take on "The Nature Of Predators" that so many have already brought forth in their own style of transcription, most of which are complete trash thanks to very bad text-to-speech without so much as an attempt to go over their own work.
I will save this one and see if it is, indeed, a strangely abridged version of the multi-chapter story.
Okay. How have our guys heard about the invaders even as this is first contact at13:00.
I would assume the human ship was intercepting transmissions from the planet, our own planet is constantly broadcasting through various microwaves and frequencies, albeit slow moving.
a titanium projectile can not be stopped by a electromagnetic field because titanium is not magnetic. because titanium has a crystalline structure with no unpaired electrons, which are required for a material to exhibit magnetic properties. This means titanium projectiles do not interact with magnetic fields & is considered to be a diamagnetic material. In your stories a rail gun slinging titanium projectiles can penetrate electromagnetic shields making them useless
Need to check your spelling before posting or just get rid of the subtitles all together. Not a bad story needs more work
I'd just figured out what the video was, then I read your comment.
"Not a bad story needs more work"
That bit made me chuckle. This is the "The Nature Of Predators" story that's on the Agro Squirrell channel.
Excellent story, it has well over 170 chapters to it.
This video, the first half is basically chapter 1 of NOP, and the second half is something like chapters 2 - 75 of it lol
This is a ripoff of a much longer series.
Omnivores are not an obligate Carnivore. But, a predator just the same.
Many predator species have cooperation among group members then.
If this is first contact for humanity, how did Claire and Noah hear about the Arxur?
Best of luck with the AI cosmic tales
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Ditto here. What they can't afford to have someone read it😮
@@LawrenceKennardcrazy idea: go to the nearest middle school and ask the best readers to read a few stories. Give them each a plaque for accomplishment. Students get recognized, you've greatly improved your product and the cost is minimal.
The story has no "meat" there is no interaction between the humans and the Arksers, (As the title suggests) especially when the latter realize they have encountered serious foes. A battle is simply summarized in a few sentences. I could do a LOT better than this. Having the Humans show their "Nasty Side" to an unsuspecting, confident foe would be quite fun.
This story has nothing to do with the title
I kept waiting for yhe stiry to get good.
From AI drivel? Ha!
This is I think chapter 1 of a much longer series. “The Nature of Predators.”
Yes but still AI full of bad pronunciations and drops in the plot
Hopefully with experience, i can make it work better for me 🤞
You should go listen to the story this one was taken from. It will give you the whole story. Like the fact the the venlill are predators to. And humans eventually befriend the arxur.
The nature of predator’s is the name of the story this is from.
If this represents an example of AI achievement for telling a story, someone needs to pull the plug on it before the thing hurts itself. It has religiously regurgitated every popular social platitude over the past decade while utterly failing at the goal of telling anything resembling a compelling or insightful story.
This is part one of a very long series. The Nature of Predators. There is another channel who has up to episode 151. Done with multiple voices and sound effects. It sounds just like a movie just no visual
youtube.com/@adastra1978?si=larXwAsle1xoaa-G
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More like a gross AI bastardization of that good story.
@@jakeand9020 you haven't even heard it and already trashing it. Keep being a petty salty hater.
@@CountryAndProud Fascinatingly wrong assumption.
So what's the name of the enemy it's been arsux, what's the real name of the enemy?
I listen to these stories just to see how AI is learning. The content is low grade at best... for now. But all AI has to work with, is the content of the internet
The AI speaker is a bit off putting and makes it a bit difficult to follow, but it’s not bad. I’m one of those people who do wonder if humanity is alone in the galaxy.
I do think that it was a bit foolish for humanity to share their military capabilities. Even today the public isn’t told the full capability of classified weapons and vehicles.
I found myself hoping that the new predators show the “Arxur” who is the dominant predator in the galaxy. And things turn out well in real life if we aren’t alone in the universe.
Wonderful Observation 💯♥️
It see.s like all the different people providing content love the word palpable. Don't think I heard that word 20 times in my 73 years. Now all these scify channels use it at least 2 times every story.. Are you making content from the same company with minor changes to story? Sounds like Gereral Motors using the same platform for Chevy and buick, pontiac with minor changes. The pictures also are a bit different. This is just a passing thought.😊
you sure it’s only 2 times per story 😂? I heard some stories with a lot more times
well, I would imagine that these stories in text form are quite... Palpable to an AI reading it.
In 66 years , I have never heard it used in conversation. Kind of makes a person wonder why the word exists, as the written word usually follows use in spoken language
Good story but deceptive title.
Looks like Clickbait
We haven't met any life, even a microbe would be amazing, but also we have heard about the other violent race? Well which is it? Did the humans lie or is this just terrible a.i story telling 😂
Too many errors... Early in story... It is stated that [Earth/Humans] destroyed themselves in a nuclear war. Then... Lo and behold... We have humans from Earth exploring space and things seem fine in Earth.
Plus... Humans say they've never met intelligent species...Then... say they've heard about the Arksur...
The narration on this story is so incredibly bad that after a while you can't even follow the story.😡👎👎
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I appreciate your feedback and will consider it for future videos.
The title does not fit the plot at all. Negative feedback.
Clichéd effing rubbish
At 1.5 speed it’s ok. Normal speed? Boring. Giving information of military, abilities, weapons, limits? Always a bad idea.
It is a wonderful story. The written words you show denigrate the story when you keep changing the name of the planet.
Your definition of the name ranges from Venel, to Vengeful, Vandals, and not many are flattering.
If you can't produce proper consistency about your own story, how are we the readers supposed to understand?
The story and the morals presented is good, but the detractions are off-putting.
Thanks for sharing.
I will work on it. Thanks for suggesting.
"A man learns from his Mistakes"
Sort the images as well - try and align them to the story.
Need t learn english...
Besides the very bad AI voice you had to name the other species.. "VENMO"? really why not name them, "ZELLE", or "Paypal"...
Given the story that this is clearly rippled from, the races are: Arxur, Venlil, Farsul, Krakotl, Kolshians, and about 40 others. Check out "The Nature Of Predators" that this is clearly ripped from.
AI rubbish
Awww...did mama's very special boy see something he didn't like? How earth-shattering...grow up, boyo, noone is interested in your insignificant opinion.
Learn how to spell and i will subscribe
Thanks for your feedback Sir , Life is the name of learning , The day you stopped learning , you died ♥️
So when the hell does it start?They eat the aliens the bad ones not the good ones
We are extremely warlike.I would love to meet a good species.But i'm not sure if humans are ready for it
Thanks for your feedback ♥️