@dr4kz0r thanks for your kind words about the monster. Not sure what you mean by feministic values but I’m pleased you had an emotional response to our story!
The movie reminded me the old 2001 game "Venom codename outbreak", released as a normal war game... At least till you don't find, after some hours of game, these weird monsters in the woods make you think WTF?
@d3adsoulja I realized that a good while ago, long before you decided to say what numerous people were screaming in my face. I always thought that meant that his films were just Oscar winning and he had a funny way of saying it.
Hey AJ, Loved the film. The pacing was well done. The acting was well directed. The sound design and the CGI were hollywood quality. Loved it. Eager to see what else your team will do.
Thanks for the kindness from so many lovely viewers. It’s good to know just how many folks appreciate how much work from so many people goes into creating even a short film like this. Magic doesn’t happen by magic! 😉
@Gangari TheWanderer The monster represents homophobia. The ranger represents the bigoted social order willing to kill anyone to prevent them from revealing homophobia as the sickness that it is. Go ahead, prove me wrong.
Extremely well done. In such little time you captured the essence of the father and his two kids. The only thing that was odd was the reaction of the father upon meeting the monster; smiling along with his calm expression just seemed very unusual, almost as if he knew something we didn't.
He was a little drunk, So.maybe at first he didn't process what he was seeing... thought it was a hallucination, or something ... until it frightened him by stamping its foot.
well given what his wife did to him with another woman... he probably was welcoming the idea of it finishing him off right there... he was well lit up drunk and depressed... what snapped him back was the fact that he realized after he was taken out... it would then move on to his innocent son and brainwashed daughter...
I'd rather the unknowns were just left hanging. Sequels lead to more sequels until you get the inevitable low-quality ones. I like movies and books that resist the compulsion to explain everything.
@@dontaylor7315 my brother makes those kind of movies. The only thing good about an artsy fartsy movie with no ending is not having to watch a sequel with no beginning or ending... especially if your younger sibling who everyone loves more than you even though you worked hard your entire life and have to support him longer than your own children who have already moved out and started lives of their own allowing him to move from the couch to the basement to a room after they left. Sorry, I have issues. He did star in one monster movie I like. Killed the monster, got the girl and made the DVD cover. So proud......
I know if I had a place that was in such a great location, I sure as hell wouldn't go some place else to camp, NOPE!!!! Having a nice home in a beautiful setting would definitely be a big plus for me.
'....and don't ever come back here again'. Right. I think the chances of repeat visits to that particular neck of the woods are......unlikely. Excellent monster. And the old man certainly showed his mettle when his kids were under threat. Great little film. Apparently somebody's little lab experiment got a bit out of hand....?
Family relationships are complicated but they all still love each other. It took an out of this world encounter to mend the upset. Devine intervention.
So, a man that leaves his wife for another woman, is the bad guy. A woman that leaves her husband for another woman, and the husband is the bad guy. ok, got it.
for us it was always that there's right and wrong on both sides of any argument and that it's so easy to get into entrenched positions and forget about other stuff. This film is about common ground and remembering the simple stuff
I don’t think he is portrayed as the bad guy. He is struggling with the fact his wife left him. His kids, especially the daughter, are bitter about the fact it seems he’s deserted them. He’s dealing with the situation in his own way, maybe not the best way, but his own way.
@@SMaamri78 Agreed. Anyway when marriages break up kids either blame themselves or blame one of the parents. They need help working through it and learning there are usually no bad guys.
I think they were somehow connected. At first I thought "monster" representing dad wirh alcohol abuse so I thought he was gonna do something more horrible. Thank God I was wrong
I actually take this note and we talked a lot about it! At the end of the day, we felt it would slow this particular iteration of the story way down so we left it on the cutting room floor!
and that they concordantly keep it a secret . (I assume the "don't speak" part pertains to among each other). I wonder if they will be held for questioning down the road or even surveyed from now on.
Also seemed a bit unrealistic that they could fall peacefully asleep after such an encounter. Just watching it could keep me awake for hours! LOL! But movies of all kinds have those kind of moments that probably wouldn't happen in real life. It was a really good story with a cliff hanger ending that leaves everyone free to imagine their own ending. (I still want to see a part 2 though!) (:
@@hemmojito Or maybe they disappear and are never heard from again.....and maybe it's because Dad will become one of those monsters having been bitten by it. The kids are just collateral damage. They have to stay and live their lives in secret, possibly becoming prisoners or maybe members of the research team. Either way they disappear as far as the rest of the world knows. OR maybe they are just killed. Nah....that's not creative enough. Just being killed would be too common. Definitely need a creative part 2 to bring some closure to this. Then maybe a part 3! (:
wow! Very cool monster, had to be spider like for full on chills! Was weird the way he smiled at it, thought it was going to start talking the way it reacted. Worth a watch, really well made & acted!
@@thedirepuppy6571 Huh? I dunno, maybe because the creature cut him and the Ranger hinted that the cut could be a lot more serious than it looks, i.e. changing his dna or the creatures!
@@c-tha-man9463 The creature may have passed on a carcinogen. Then the mutation could be a cancer. Altering his DNA? That may (going WAY out on a limb here) have an affect on future offspring, but not on him. Certainly not something like Lon Chaney turning into the wolf man. That's comic book movie stuff, not reality.
@@purplesky416 That's the problem. Imagination is not used, if not already in it's death throes. Isn't that the premise of practically every comic book movie/ TV show out there? Look at me! I'm a mutant! Move along. No imagination here!
Very well done in every aspect, though it did feel like the beginning of something further on. Great job folks, solid acting all around, great stuff, and cudos on the monster, VERY well conceived and executed!
This was such a great film. The story flow was well done and the actors were top notch. I would love to see this as a series or film. It ended so quick. I wanted more.
If you came across something like that in the woods you're main aim would be to get out of there as quickly as possible and worry about your injuries later...especially if you had your kids with you
So far, this is one of my favorite Omeleto flicks! The graphics and sound effects were very realistic. Love the characters, esp the one that crashes the camp site!
thank you so much! On behalf of the whole team that made this film, we thank you from the bottom of our hearts for your kind words and we're so pleased you liked the movie!
@@ajspinks268Thank you so much for your uploads! Been collecting a ton of your scifi-ish ones onto a private list. Am curious, do you have any shorts that have anything to do with birds or bird-like cryptids, such as the mothman? 😁
The brat girl in this reminds me… I’m so glad my daughter is grown and I don’t have to deal with her attitudes anymore! Now, if she has an attitude, I don’t have to tiptoe around her. I can simply tell her to go home! Come see me when you feel better!
This film is even a little shorter than the old classic TV Twilight Zone, etc. episodes. Great to see someone doing classic horror in 20+ minutes and making it satisfing.
When marriages break up kids either blame themselves or blame one of the parents. They need help working through it and learning there are no bad guys.
Please don’t make part 2 where they have to flee for their lives and be hunted down to be killed for witnessing it. If the security guy wanted to kill them he could’ve done it when the little kid gave it away. Better that they would be under surveillance for a time so if they said something they could be discredited or taken to the side and explained why they shouldn’t say anything if it was legitimately something that needed to be kept quiet. ( like an inquisitive alien just visiting but doing no real harm but expected and known to them…. Hence the asteroid story on the news. Also…. Any facility that really wanted to be kept secret would have MUCH better maintained signs and video security where they would’ve been detected on arrival. Part 2 could be great if not going down these standard overdone routes. IMHO. But very well done and I liked it. 🙂👍
@@ajspinks268 you gotta be a brit, spelling "tone" rather than "ton". creator writer perhaps? the dad is in on it, he went there to show his kids what he's been doing for 6 months possibly to be infected for unknown reasons, perhaps immoral reasons ...or somehow to save his kids from something
I think dad knew something was out there. He almost seemed glad the monster showed up. I’m thinking family annihilation but then he had second thoughts.
He reacted that way because he felt it was a prank he drank heavily before going to bed and woke up to such sight and maybe thought it’s just his imagination playing a fast one on him until the monster put a foot down
I loved the characters. I just hope they don't end up being killed if there's a part 2. I mean the "ranger" could have already killed them. The monster or alien was also really well done. I love these shorts!
@@ajspinks268 Yes, I agree about your talent, and I'm amazed that not only did you manage to include huge, important subjects like divorce and, the fact that the mom left dad for a woman, how all that affects the children, but also three in a bit about what may be going on in the National forests làtely(not particularly a monster, but something sinister)All in 23 minutes! Bravo!
Great short film ... very well made with a nice build up into the story and a good ending. Though it leaves one feeling there is a lot more that could follow on from this and that's where our own imaginations start to kick in.
Agreed-I would like to see this developed into a full length film focusing on the monster-what is it and why is it there. Kind of like Stranger Things or the Devil Below. I'm a huge fan of monster movies and I love the fact that you got a really good look at it unlike in some films where you only see fleeting glimpses
So glad I am not the only one who has daughters with their mobiles glued to there hands even their mum has to text them to ask questions or tell them dinner is ready lol but all in all I enjoyed the film.
I agree, because my idea of camping does not involve sleeping in the wilderness, because I want to feel safe and be able to use the restroom any time that I need to. If I went camping again, it would be in a cabin, or a very nice motorhome.
All the shorts I have watched so car tell so much more than any other 2-3h Hollywood movie. Great story! Makes me wonder what would happen to them next but sometimes that makes for all the excitement
I love this! Disney and other studios with their unlimited pile if cash throw remakes and prequels at our faces, and here you produce such a brilliant and ORIGINAL short film on a budget probably less than Tom Cruises monthly grocery budget. I hope you get ALL the funding you need!
i dislike that most of the movies on here are left with cliffhangers but at the same time they are STILL better than most modern movies which i think is insane. i LOVE this channel
Dag this is the 1st time watching your channel & I first I thought it was just scary horror story told but I didn’t realize it was a short horror film! I just gotta give the props ya’ll deserve this was actual really really Good, now u got me hooked & gotta find more of these to watch! Better than what’s on the channels now that’s def real talk!
Love to see more! Love stuff like this. And that's why I don't go into the bush lol I know this is just a movie but everything about the bush creeps me out 🤪😱
This film short was better than 99% of what’s available on streaming services that aren’t free. I hope we can see more from the makers of this short. A series or full length film based on this would be great.
@dr4kz0r well I’m the director. And I’ve read your multiple comments, and I’ve taken your constructive feedback on board: always a learning experience!
This is like that film _2012_ but much less extreme and way more believable. Short enough so you don't grow tired of the high stakes and drama, yet with characters so believable you wouldn't mind a full fledge film of it! Don't get me wrong, _2012_ isn't all bad, but it's more for the comedy and my personal preference leans more towards serious, realistic encounters like this film showcased. Really loved the monster! It looked incredible! All the characters were very well written too, but I could honestly relate to Kaela, so thank you for that!
I thought they were going to do a drone strike on the vehicle at the end. The father should've never gone into the woods without the means to protect his family.
@@ajspinks268 I just watched the credits you are the director! This was an amazing short film very well done! the atmosphere how the actors did their job you orchestrated it very well!
How many awesome writers directors actors are out there everything that comes from Omeleto is amazing Hollywood watch out ppl wont be watching your movies anymore
What a wonderful story ❤ of Family resilience and finding each other. Even though this was a short film, the father learned his Beautiful Daughter was incredibly smart and His Son also was in tuned into what was going on with the family dynamics for his age. Ah! Now the Alien, who refreshingly didn't have 2 legs and was very scary. But you left ( I'm moaning now lol) the story wide open for a sequel (part 2) this short story could make for a rather interesting movie. I Loved the Actors and they deserve a Applause because they were excellent. Thank you 😊 for a rather interesting Story/topic.....now please 🙏 A movie ?.
I thought that the monster would be metaphorical or figurative. I didn't hope to see some serious CGI here! Cool.
thanks so much for watching our movie! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it
@dr4kz0r thanks for your kind words about the monster. Not sure what you mean by feministic values but I’m pleased you had an emotional response to our story!
The movie reminded me the old 2001 game "Venom codename outbreak", released as a normal war game... At least till you don't find, after some hours of game, these weird monsters in the woods make you think WTF?
It still was metaphorical, yes.
These films aren't just being made good, they're being made FAST.
Omelete doesn’t produce every movie, they just air it
since they r short films
@d3adsoulja since they short they can be made fast
@d3adsoulja I realized that a good while ago, long before you decided to say what numerous people were screaming in my face. I always thought that meant that his films were just Oscar winning and he had a funny way of saying it.
Better still, they're being made well and they're being made quickly. ;)
Boy: *blatantly tells the Ranger everything*
Also Boy: *Dad! he knows*
Never have kids folks. Never have kids.
Thanks so much for watching our film!
I thought the same thing.
Kid obviously knew that he knew before letting him know that they know.
It’s a good thing your mother didn’t think that way!!
lmao 😆
Thank you everybody who has watched the film and has taken the time to leave a comment. Means a lot to the whole team
I’ll second that!
Hey AJ, Loved the film. The pacing was well done. The acting was well directed. The sound design and the CGI were hollywood quality. Loved it. Eager to see what else your team will do.
it was great!
Great start to a full length film. Like to see where it would go.
You all worked really hard, but the outcome has been so worth it - even the days filming in the dark and the rain !!
Only silver lining other than coming out alive is his relationship with his daughter has improved. Great film.
Thanks so much !
You think they really made it out alive??
@@nikeuchiha3675 well i KNOW what happened because I wrote the movie but I love how many options there is!
You can’t beat a good monster sighting to fix a father/daughter rift ! (At least that’s what I keep telling our own daughter ! 🤦🏻♂️)
Thanks for the kindness from so many lovely viewers. It’s good to know just how many folks appreciate how much work from so many people goes into creating even a short film like this. Magic doesn’t happen by magic! 😉
It was great! Fabulous monster! But I’m worried about what happens next - we need a part 2!
we're hoping to make one! Glad you liked it!
@@ajspinks268 Awesome! We definitely need a part 2 😃!
What...are u blind...they killed the family ofcourse 😂
@@ajspinks268 p 🙄🙄🙄
@Gangari TheWanderer The monster represents homophobia. The ranger represents the bigoted social order willing to kill anyone to prevent them from revealing homophobia as the sickness that it is. Go ahead, prove me wrong.
Extremely well done. In such little time you captured the essence of the father and his two kids. The only thing that was odd was the reaction of the father upon meeting the monster; smiling along with his calm expression just seemed very unusual, almost as if he knew something we didn't.
Thanks so much for watching our film and for your kind words
He was a little drunk,
So.maybe at first he didn't process what he was seeing... thought it was a hallucination, or something
... until it frightened him by stamping its foot.
The most out-of-place things are the shiny and brand new stuff in the garage 1:03 🤣
well he was drunk !
well given what his wife did to him with another woman... he probably was welcoming the idea of it finishing him off right there... he was well lit up drunk and depressed... what snapped him back was the fact that he realized after he was taken out... it would then move on to his innocent son and brainwashed daughter...
THIS NEEDS a SEQUEL!!!!! Thumbs up!!! Kid Sold them All out!!!
Thanks so much for watching the film , we really appreciate it
Thanks! Glad you liked it! :)
I'd rather the unknowns were just left hanging. Sequels lead to more sequels until you get the inevitable low-quality ones. I like movies and books that resist the compulsion to explain everything.
@@dontaylor7315 my brother makes those kind of movies. The only thing good about an artsy fartsy movie with no ending is not having to watch a sequel with no beginning or ending... especially if your younger sibling who everyone loves more than you even though you worked hard your entire life and have to support him longer than your own children who have already moved out and started lives of their own allowing him to move from the couch to the basement to a room after they left.
Sorry, I have issues. He did star in one monster movie I like. Killed the monster, got the girl and made the DVD cover.
So proud......
"Dad, he knows.."
Well, duh! You just told him everything..? 🤨🙄
I have a feeling they’re never leaving that area and they’re never going home… would love to see a part 2.
We’re working on the next part of the story now! Thanks so much for watching!
Omg I’m so excited now! Keep up the awesome work!👍
@@ajspinks268 any updates?
@@deucealmightee the next chapter is written, now we’re searching for funding
@@ajspinks268 Can’t waît for the next one! Great short film.
Who needs to go camping when his house was so beautiful and out in the woods already
he probably just spent a full year in his house during lockdown!!
maybe the camping trip is more about the kids.
I know if I had a place that was in such a great location, I sure as hell wouldn't go some place else to camp, NOPE!!!! Having a nice home in a beautiful setting would definitely be a big plus for me.
I live in the woods and people ask me to go camping. I get up walk out I'm in the woods. ..same thing!
I don't have to go camping I'm already there!
Kiki's part, although pretty stereotypical, was played very well. Max, pretty solid too. The dad, not bad. The monster, definitely the best.
You forgot the Mum and the Ranger ?! They were really good too 👍
I don't have so much time to see lengthy films but these are not so time killing and almost all of these are my fabulous. Thanks 😊
thanks so much for watching the film
@@ajspinks268 no thanks among friends:)
Why you don't have time ?
@@arkglow8223 actually I'm preparing for my final exams. So my parents usually give me a limited time period to watch films. Such a torture !!!
Americans are really living a dream life. Here weekend doesn't exist. I wish I get a life like you guys. Whatever good luck
'....and don't ever come back here again'. Right. I think the chances of repeat visits to that particular neck of the woods are......unlikely. Excellent monster. And the old man certainly showed his mettle when his kids were under threat. Great little film. Apparently somebody's little lab experiment got a bit out of hand....?
Family relationships are complicated but they all still love each other. It took an out of this world encounter to mend the upset. Devine intervention.
So, a man that leaves his wife for another woman, is the bad guy. A woman that leaves her husband for another woman, and the husband is the bad guy. ok, got it.
for us it was always that there's right and wrong on both sides of any argument and that it's so easy to get into entrenched positions and forget about other stuff. This film is about common ground and remembering the simple stuff
I don’t think he is portrayed as the bad guy. He is struggling with the fact his wife left him. His kids, especially the daughter, are bitter about the fact it seems he’s deserted them. He’s dealing with the situation in his own way, maybe not the best way, but his own way.
@@SMaamri78 Agreed. Anyway when marriages break up kids either blame themselves or blame one of the parents. They need help working through it and learning there are usually no bad guys.
Children always act out on the parent they feel safest with and loved by the most. This is actually the same for all beings.
Like my dad always saids. It's in the script lol
This was really well done, acted and very entertaining. Held your attention throughout and yeah.....it really deserves and needs a part two.
Thank you so much!
I’m going to be stuck on the edge of my seat until I know what happens next !!
@@ajspinks268 How's it going? Nice work and any updates on a part 2?
@@rodneystanger1651 being written! Finance for films in genre is hard to come by in the UK!
@@ajspinks268 Good luck with that, looking forward to it.
I gotta hand it to him not freaking out at the first sight of that thing
so did we!
@@ajspinks268 just wanna ask, are you one of the directors of the film?
Agreed! Fear makes people do odd things sometimes!
@Keir Winter I like that idea. maybe the scientific experiments they're doing is on people's minds.
I think they were somehow connected. At first I thought "monster" representing dad wirh alcohol abuse so I thought he was gonna do something more horrible. Thank God I was wrong
I'll take my chances at a Motel 6 ... they leave the light on 🤣
Thanks so much for watching our film!
Unreal that they didn't talk about or seem incredulous about the monster.
I actually take this note and we talked a lot about it! At the end of the day, we felt it would slow this particular iteration of the story way down so we left it on the cutting room floor!
and that they concordantly keep it a secret . (I assume the "don't speak" part pertains to among each other). I wonder if they will be held for questioning down the road or even surveyed from now on.
@@ajspinks268 Honestly a good call and a refreshing take.
Also seemed a bit unrealistic that they could fall peacefully asleep after such an encounter. Just watching it could keep me awake for hours! LOL! But movies of all kinds have those kind of moments that probably wouldn't happen in real life. It was a really good story with a cliff hanger ending that leaves everyone free to imagine their own ending. (I still want to see a part 2 though!) (:
@@hemmojito Or maybe they disappear and are never heard from again.....and maybe it's because Dad will become one of those monsters having been bitten by it. The kids are just collateral damage. They have to stay and live their lives in secret, possibly becoming prisoners or maybe members of the research team. Either way they disappear as far as the rest of the world knows. OR maybe they are just killed. Nah....that's not creative enough. Just being killed would be too common. Definitely need a creative part 2 to bring some closure to this. Then maybe a part 3! (:
The moment when the girl was so reliefed when finding he phone, just precious! Please make part two!
Excellent story telling. Excellent acting. Keep em coming.
wow! Very cool monster, had to be spider like for full on chills! Was weird the way he smiled at it, thought it was going to start talking the way it reacted. Worth a watch, really well made & acted!
WoW. Very good! I think the guy hinted at a possible "mutation", since he had direct contact with the "specimen"??
thanks so much! We appreciate you taking the time to watch the film
How would direct contact cause a "mutation"?
@@thedirepuppy6571 Huh? I dunno, maybe because the creature cut him and the Ranger hinted that the cut could be a lot more serious than it looks, i.e. changing his dna or the creatures!
@@c-tha-man9463
The creature may have passed on a carcinogen. Then the mutation could be a cancer.
Altering his DNA? That may (going WAY out on a limb here) have an affect on future offspring, but not on him. Certainly not something like Lon Chaney turning into the wolf man. That's comic book movie stuff, not reality.
@@purplesky416
That's the problem. Imagination is not used, if not already in it's death throes.
Isn't that the premise of practically every comic book movie/ TV show out there? Look at me! I'm a mutant!
Move along. No imagination here!
Short & sweet, but well done!!!👍
This is great. Well-crafted, great acting and photography. Love it.
thanks so much Peter
Thank you! 😊
Superior film! Extremely well done I agree! Best, from Colorado!
Really good acting. The warning signs where there for a reason...
Very well done in every aspect, though it did feel like the beginning of something further on. Great job folks, solid acting all around, great stuff, and cudos on the monster, VERY well conceived and executed!
thanks so much for your kind words!
Im camping this weekend you bastards.
sorry! There's probably NOT a monster in your campsite though...
@AAKASH TEWARI😂
Look out for cockatiels! One might not do much, but a whole swarm of the little minions can be deadly...🤣
@@ajspinks268 Only bears that can kill you in few seconds
watch the 2007 movie, 'funny games' and see how that effects your motivation to go camping or to your family cottage.
@@jeremywithacamera235 I SURVIVED.
This was such a great film. The story flow was well done and the actors were top notch. I would love to see this as a series or film. It ended so quick. I wanted more.
thanks so much for your kind words! We're working on a longer version!
Thank you so much - that's always good to hear!
If you came across something like that in the woods you're main aim would be to get out of there as quickly as possible and worry about your injuries later...especially if you had your kids with you
So far, this is one of my favorite Omeleto flicks! The graphics and sound effects were very realistic. Love the characters, esp the one that crashes the camp site!
thank you so much! On behalf of the whole team that made this film, we thank you from the bottom of our hearts for your kind words and we're so pleased you liked the movie!
@@ajspinks268Thank you so much for your uploads! Been collecting a ton of your scifi-ish ones onto a private list.
Am curious, do you have any shorts that have anything to do with birds or bird-like cryptids, such as the mothman? 😁
@@avianearth2397 i don't have any cryptid stuff yet but i'm WRITING some cool stuff
@@ajspinks268 Awesome! Lately I've been attempting to write my first book.....Science fiction! It's been an enthralling experience.
@@avianearth2397 All the best with the writing!
One of the best omeleto's I've seen.
Interesting plot and it kept my interest to the very end, it's been a while that I enjoyed a monster film especially a short film, great job Allen.
Thanks so much for the kind words about our film!
We're so glad you enjoyed our film. Thank you!
The brat girl in this reminds me… I’m so glad my daughter is grown and I don’t have to deal with her attitudes anymore! Now, if she has an attitude, I don’t have to tiptoe around her. I can simply tell her to go home! Come see me when you feel better!
This was so good! Needs to be a feature length or have a part two please 🥰
Thank you for watching! 😊 We’re glad you enjoyed it.
thank you so much for watching our movie!
If this was a good enough film, it would stand on its own.
This film is even a little shorter than the old classic TV Twilight Zone, etc. episodes. Great to see someone doing classic horror in 20+ minutes and making it satisfing.
This would make an awesome mini-series. Well done Allen and the Team.
thanks so much for taking the time to watch our movie!
@spirals 73 ur opinion , not mine. Contact the people of the film.
No, they sucked for not writing an ending.
VERY GOOD!! One of the best short films. Cannot WAIT for part 2!!! Thank you HEAPS to the film makers!
thanks so much Brian! I'm thrilled you like the film!
You're very welcome! We're so glad you enjoyed it!
typical, even when the mother is objectively in the wrong being the cheater it's still somehow the man's fault.
You missed the part where he was avoiding his kids
When marriages break up kids either blame themselves or blame one of the parents. They need help working through it and learning there are no bad guys.
@@gaargy1 you missed the part where their mother cheated on their father and has custody of the children.
@Impersonal Immigrant court bias, the kids were shown to be living with their mother and not their father despire her being at fault for the divorce.
@Impersonal Immigrant that's what i'm saying.
Please don’t make part 2 where they have to flee for their lives and be hunted down to be killed for witnessing it. If the security guy wanted to kill them he could’ve done it when the little kid gave it away. Better that they would be under surveillance for a time so if they said something they could be discredited or taken to the side and explained why they shouldn’t say anything if it was legitimately something that needed to be kept quiet. ( like an inquisitive alien just visiting but doing no real harm but expected and known to them…. Hence the asteroid story on the news.
Also…. Any facility that really wanted to be kept secret would have MUCH better maintained signs and video security where they would’ve been detected on arrival. Part 2 could be great if not going down these standard overdone routes. IMHO.
But very well done and I liked it. 🙂👍
We've got a tonne of unexpected stuff in our plans! What a great idea though!
Or they could wipe their minds like the scp foundation
The family was killed.
👍👍👍
@@ajspinks268 you gotta be a brit, spelling "tone" rather than "ton".
creator writer perhaps?
the dad is in on it, he went there to show his kids what he's been doing for 6 months possibly to be infected for unknown reasons, perhaps immoral reasons ...or somehow to save his kids from something
I think dad knew something was out there. He almost seemed glad the monster showed up. I’m thinking family annihilation but then he had second thoughts.
He reacted that way because he felt it was a prank he drank heavily before going to bed and woke up to such sight and maybe thought it’s just his imagination playing a fast one on him until the monster put a foot down
Have just sunscribed! Brilliant! Well done, beautifully done. Now, where's part 2?... .......please xxxx
= really impressed! loved the characters/actors btw…very believable…💛 great job!
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it!
Consider my day made! Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!
This was so good. Two young stars in the making there.
Thank you for watching our movie! It means a lot to all of us
A part two is sorely needed! Or better yet a full length feature film!!
we're writing away! funding for genre films like this is tough in the UK but we're trying!
I perceived the ending that indicated that their vehicle was blown up before they could exit the park.
Great piece... clearly it struck a nerve with me as it paralleled some real life stuff with me personally... Good Job.
The quality of actors' performances in these films is very impressive. The young actors are especially skilled and magnificently authentic!
Lovely film! The kids knocked it out of the park and the writing was excellent. The boy’s snark had me laughing out loud!
Thanks so much for watching our film!
Thank you for the lovely feedback! Really glad you enjoyed the film. ☺️👍🏻🙏🏻
This was gooooood!! Leaves me wondering what happens after contact with the "thorns".
Excellent. Great narrative editing to keep things moving... Great script... Let's have part 2!!!
Thanks Peter! We are working on a story right now!!!
It wasn't a monster. It was a family counselor.
I loved the characters. I just hope they don't end up being killed if there's a part 2. I mean the "ranger" could have already killed them. The monster or alien was also really well done. I love these shorts!
thanks so much for your kind words about our film Clarissa! Means so much to myself and the whole team too
@@ajspinks268 You're very welcome. I can't wait to see more from you all!! 🖤
"Has anyone thought about what we're going to tell mom?" "Yeah, dad dosed us with LSD last night."
That is true 😂😂😂
This Spinks guy is really talented. I’m predicting big things in his future. Looking forward to watching the journey unfold
Ah thank you. Really appreciate you taking the time to watch the film and I’m thrilled you enjoyed it
@@ajspinks268 Yes, I agree about your talent, and I'm amazed that not only did you manage to include huge, important subjects like divorce and, the fact that the mom left dad for a woman, how all that affects the children, but also three in a bit about what may be going on in the National forests làtely(not particularly a monster, but something sinister)All in 23 minutes! Bravo!
typical high school conversations: did you tell em i like em? whatd they say?
*sighs*
Great short film ... very well made with a nice build up into the story and a good ending. Though it leaves one feeling there is a lot more that could follow on from this and that's where our own imaginations start to kick in.
Thanks for watching Martin! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the film
Loved this one!
19:20 "What we're gonna tell mum?" made my day :)
Thanks so much for watching our film!
Agreed-I would like to see this developed into a full length film focusing on the monster-what is it and why is it there. Kind of like Stranger Things or the Devil Below. I'm a huge fan of monster movies and I love the fact that you got a really good look at it unlike in some films where you only see fleeting glimpses
Thanks so much!
We're working on it! :)
They're too busy trying to implement their political views over story content
Child actors are brilliant. Line about waiting by water was funny. I agree with comments - we need part two. If this were a series, I'd watch it.
They need to make a full movie out of this.with everyone we just saw,that guys team,more creatures like that...
Thanks so much for your kind words! Thrilled you enjoyed our film
Thanks for the feedback. So glad you enjoyed the film!
Awesome film would love to see a continuation of this film. Great acting.
we're trying our best! thanks so much for watching
Where’s part 2? This could be a Netflix series. Very well done. Reminds me of “The Mist”.
thanks so much! Hopefully we get to tell the rest of the story!
@@ajspinks268 I’ll look out for it.
Glad you enjoyed it!
A family confronts a "monster" that threatens the integrity of the family unit ...anger.
So glad I am not the only one who has daughters with their mobiles glued to there hands even their mum has to text them to ask questions or tell them dinner is ready lol but all in all I enjoyed the film.
Thanks for your comments Paul! We appreciate it
Beautiful cinematography, nicely composed shots.
People... Just go camping where there are lots of others around. Or go to a cabin.
Or just get a hotel
😂😂😂👍
I agree, because my idea of camping does not involve sleeping in the wilderness, because I want to feel safe and be able to use the restroom any time that I need to. If I went camping again, it would be in a cabin, or a very nice motorhome.
All the shorts I have watched so car tell so much more than any other 2-3h Hollywood movie.
Great story! Makes me wonder what would happen to them next but sometimes that makes for all the excitement
I love this!
Disney and other studios with their unlimited pile if cash throw remakes and prequels at our faces, and here you produce such a brilliant and ORIGINAL short film on a budget probably less than Tom Cruises monthly grocery budget.
I hope you get ALL the funding you need!
i dislike that most of the movies on here are left with cliffhangers but at the same time they are STILL better than most modern movies which i think is insane. i LOVE this channel
thanks so much for your lovely comments on the film
This needs to be a TV series...this would make an outstanding pilot.
thanks so much Nina! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the film!
@@ajspinks268 Oh, it was great. Reminded me a lot of Wayward Pines.
@@ninasmithers1016 we're going to check it out!
@@ajspinks268 You haven't seen Wayward Pines? Great show. Just don't look for spoilers on it or you'll ruin the entire experience.
@@ninasmithers1016 NOTED! Thanks for the recommendation
Enjoyed it a lot. The camera work is just brilliant and so sharp! Definitely should be a feature length movie.
thank you so much! Me and the whole team behind the film are so pleased you enjoyed it!
Definitely !! We need to know what happens next !!
this was absolutely incredible! I really need a part 2!
thanks Abby!
Thank you, Abby (I totally agree, btw :) )
Me too !!! 😱
I have no nails left after watching !!
Boy absentmindedly walking down the wrong path did it for me. Kids are hilarious.
C'mon man.....this should be turned into a movie and released on Netflix !!
thanks so much for the kind words! We'd LOVE to do that as there's more story we want to tell!
Glad you enjoyed it! We’re hoping to make one.
@@ajspinks268 you deserve that appreciation 😊. You guys are really creative. Oh yes, please continue ! Best wishes👏
@@theresahedges1478 I am excited😁. Good luck !
@@soldierofziaurrahman Thank you so much! That’s very kind of you.
So many great short stories here that deserve a series of follow-ups eh? Am I right? Of course I am. Well done all.
Well done.
This needs a part 2. Outstanding.
Thanks Curt! We are working on it!!
Fishing - "Call it something else, like waiting, waiting near water." hehe.
Directly inspired by my own experiences as a child! Thanks so much for watching!
@@ajspinks268 ty for the great vid - and that funny insight which I have never thought of :) may you create a lot more cool art.
It's insane how good these are
Thanks so much for your kind words about our film!
@@ajspinks268 welcome. I truly hope to see more. Amazing work from the writers, all the way to the acting! Thanks for sharing with us.
Dag this is the 1st time watching your channel & I first I thought it was just scary horror story told but I didn’t realize it was a short horror film! I just gotta give the props ya’ll deserve this was actual really really Good, now u got me hooked & gotta find more of these to watch! Better than what’s on the channels now that’s def real talk!
Thanks so much for your kind words about our film Elaine! Thrilled you enjoyed it!
Moral of the story... never go camping.
Great short film. I wish all divorced dads had the opportunity to heroically save their kids from an oversized alien monster.
Who do we speak to to make this happen? Maybe it’s like a tournament or something?
I choose to believe this is canon in the quiet place universe
Better than most two hour big budget movies! Great job guys.
Love to see more! Love stuff like this. And that's why I don't go into the bush lol I know this is just a movie but everything about the bush creeps me out 🤪😱
Thanks so much Anna! Appreciate the kind words
There's just something really creepy about the great outdoors sometimes, isn't there! Thanks for the lovely feedback.
Well this was great 👍🏼
It just felt unfinished, I definitely want to see more. It could easily be made into a miniseries. 🌹
It's unfinished because the lazy ass writers got tired of writing.
This film short was better than 99% of what’s available on streaming services that aren’t free. I hope we can see more from the makers of this short. A series or full length film based on this would be great.
Thanks so much for your kind words about our film! We’re doing our best to make it happen
Wow! That's so kind of you!
@dr4kz0r well I’m the director. And I’ve read your multiple comments, and I’ve taken your constructive feedback on board: always a learning experience!
wow just wow these guys got me hooked on their videos
This is like that film _2012_ but much less extreme and way more believable. Short enough so you don't grow tired of the high stakes and drama, yet with characters so believable you wouldn't mind a full fledge film of it! Don't get me wrong, _2012_ isn't all bad, but it's more for the comedy and my personal preference leans more towards serious, realistic encounters like this film showcased. Really loved the monster! It looked incredible! All the characters were very well written too, but I could honestly relate to Kaela, so thank you for that!
I’m absolutely thrilled that you enjoyed our film! Thanks so much for your comments
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. It's really appreciated!
This would make a great sequel or series!
Thanks!
I thought they were going to do a drone strike on the vehicle at the end.
The father should've never gone into the woods without the means to protect his family.
Surprisingly good acting in this short...not just good effects. Well done.
Thank you very much for the positive feedback! We really appreciate it. 😊
use me as a "this should be a movie" button
we hope to make it into a movie sometime soon! thanks so much for watching!
@@ajspinks268 were you the director? If so this is amazing
@@ajspinks268 I just watched the credits you are the director! This was an amazing short film very well done! the atmosphere how the actors did their job you orchestrated it very well!
@@charisu1438 yeah this is my film! So pleased you liked it!
@@ajspinks268 I subscribed you. You did awesome. Gift us some more like this.....😊
Thank you for a great production, really first rate
thank you so much
Great film! Would love to see this as a feature and see what happens next!
thank you so much for watching! Glad you liked it :)
So glad you enjoyed it!
How many awesome writers directors actors are out there everything that comes from Omeleto is amazing Hollywood watch out ppl wont be watching your movies anymore
What a wonderful story ❤ of Family resilience and finding each other. Even though this was a short film, the father learned his Beautiful Daughter was incredibly smart and His Son also was in tuned into what was going on with the family dynamics for his age. Ah! Now the Alien, who refreshingly didn't have 2 legs and was very scary. But you left ( I'm moaning now lol) the story wide open for a sequel (part 2) this short story could make for a rather interesting movie. I Loved the Actors and they deserve a Applause because they were excellent. Thank you 😊 for a rather interesting Story/topic.....now please 🙏 A movie ?.
Nope, be satisfied with what you see. The writers are too lazy to write a good ending.