The Justice League Rewrite (Part 1)

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  • Опубликовано: 30 сен 2024
  • Justice League was a disappointment. Critically. Financially. Creatively. It wasn't great.
    And I don't think you can make one small change to fix it.
    I think you need to make A BIG CHANGE.
    So, this is Part 1 of my Justice League rewrite. I'm taking the whole movie apart, beginning to end. Some things will stay the same but a lot of it will be different but hopefully it will accomplish everything the original Justice League was supposed to accomplish and embody the spirit of the movie we all wanted it to be.
    Part 2 is coming soon.
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  • @acopella431
    @acopella431 6 лет назад +585

    10/10 would watch the Nando Cinematic Universe

    • @leisurelyindex
      @leisurelyindex 6 лет назад +10

      Amani Jones that has a great ring to it.

    • @SimonCleric
      @SimonCleric 6 лет назад +4

      yes please

    • @sephikong7880
      @sephikong7880 6 лет назад +4

      Amani Jones 9002/10

    • @Modification102
      @Modification102 6 лет назад +1

      Rolls of the Tongue far better than "Sony's Universe of Marvel Characters"

    • @abdullahx4908
      @abdullahx4908 3 года назад +1

      How about Nando Cinematic Interconnected Universe or, drumroll please,.....
      NCIS

  • @luciapando2668
    @luciapando2668 6 лет назад +365

    This is just.... this is AMAZING. It sounds so much more interesting than the original one. Also, you have a way of narrating the movie that just paints the action in my head. Love this! Amazing work!!!

  • @dustinviers4508
    @dustinviers4508 6 лет назад +481

    Can I just say, I love your editing cuts of completely different, but related, media to help visualize the scenarios you layout. Like, eyes on that Weather Wizard shooting lightning at Wonder Woman transition. Just really smooth work, props earned.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +34

      Thanks! I'm glad someone noticed. Each video has one shot combo that I really like and that was this one.

    • @Pants.69
      @Pants.69 5 лет назад

      Dustin Viers completely agree👏

  • @your_dar_ling
    @your_dar_ling 5 лет назад +1122

    Nando: oh no big Villains
    *Literally 3 seconds later*
    Nando: So we got DEATHSTROKE-
    *IM SORRY WHAT?*

    • @thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527
      @thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527 5 лет назад +89

      dar He’s not a “big villain” in the sense that most non comic book fans or DCTV fans wouldn’t really know much about him

    • @nynjanyck
      @nynjanyck 5 лет назад +38

      @@thelittleredhairedgirlfrom6527 Dctv fans would know about Deathstroke

    • @unamandlaxulu5840
      @unamandlaxulu5840 5 лет назад +41

      Lol XD! I was literally like, "No big villains? Are we just gonna ignore the fact that Deathstroke could probably destroy Batman in hand-to-hand combat?"

    • @sarasamaletdin4574
      @sarasamaletdin4574 5 лет назад +38

      Unamalda, I am sure he means by name recognition not power. Besides there are more powerful villains too.

    • @aaronxiaofj
      @aaronxiaofj 5 лет назад +5

      UnamandlaS Xulu well to be fair if it’s one-on-one, Batman would win easily

  • @Sephern
    @Sephern 6 лет назад +464

    I'm really glad you added that you're not trying to say you're a better writer. That's super respectful, and it's awesome you acknowledged that there are so many reasons a good writer's work can get ruined by someone else in a production. I may not like entirely where your changes are going, but I'm really excited for part 2. :D

  • @JustKrin
    @JustKrin 6 лет назад +803

    At least this Justice League will have a part 2

  • @tomatoanus
    @tomatoanus 6 лет назад +1512

    not enough forehead tattoos, the studio would never sign off on this

    • @That1BlkDude
      @That1BlkDude 6 лет назад

      tomatoanus why hello there

    • @thisisfyne
      @thisisfyne 6 лет назад

      LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

    • @fehzorz
      @fehzorz 6 лет назад +6

      damaged

    • @onekthmatt
      @onekthmatt 6 лет назад +21

      When Bruce unmasks, it'll be revealed he tattooed "I'm sorry clark :(" on his forehead.

    • @antjack6192
      @antjack6192 6 лет назад +3

      How about start off with a younger Batman 25-28 years old, instead of a old seasoned Batman stupid idea

  • @michaela.webermann4141
    @michaela.webermann4141 6 лет назад +720

    Holy crap. Not only is this such a better premise for a Justice League movie, but it’s so good that I truly thought the video had only been six or seven minutes when the 20 minutes were up. I was actually edge of my seat gripped by this plot. I can’t wait for the follow ups!

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +33

      Thanks! Part 2 is fun.

    • @patrickparadis9038
      @patrickparadis9038 6 лет назад +3

      can;'t wait! i missed the part about how this was only part 1... biggest cliffhanger since the snap...

    • @AffectiSaVerb
      @AffectiSaVerb 6 лет назад +2

      I totally agree. Isn’t a movie supposed to be riveting? Edge of your seat excitement. I don’t get it wouldn’t you make more money on a movie if it was an awesome, repeatable watch rather than a built in audience? Wouldn’t you make more money by having twice as many people go to see the movie and see it more than once than hitting a number?

    • @lebronjim1582
      @lebronjim1582 6 лет назад

      Nando v Movies When is part 2?

  • @Eccentrick218
    @Eccentrick218 6 лет назад +243

    "It's the Legion of Doom."
    The moment you said that, I realized everything that should've been didn't happen. It would've tied the whole DC cinematic universe together in one scene, without having the need to retcon anything at all. An apocalyptic villain never feels like a true threat, because no one on a meta level is ever afraid of the world dying. But seeing the Legion of Doom show up? That would've left fans desperate for more.

    • @stevenirizarry1304
      @stevenirizarry1304 3 года назад +4

      The legion of doom is unique

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL 2 года назад +3

      @@stevenirizarry1304 or the intergang since theyre also founded by darkseid ...also it could of been man-bat since he also fights batman on rooftoops plus it would fit with the whole "meta humans" reveal nando pitched

  • @thejoshbrown95
    @thejoshbrown95 6 лет назад +790

    Screw the Snyder Cut, I want a Nando Cut.

    • @kerberb5994
      @kerberb5994 5 лет назад +29

      I think we’ll need more than a cut...

    • @toytoonz1421
      @toytoonz1421 5 лет назад +18

      I think I can make the Nando cut. I'll report back when I'm finished.

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +12

      @@toytoonz1421 Work fast, my friend.

    • @toytoonz1421
      @toytoonz1421 5 лет назад +6

      @@Sentryman002 I will try.

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +8

      @@toytoonz1421 I know you will friend. No pressure from me.

  • @logancox9280
    @logancox9280 6 лет назад +2357

    Nando “I’m in no way saying that I’m a better writer than these guys”
    Proceeds to be a better writer

    • @michaelsayavong2656
      @michaelsayavong2656 6 лет назад +99

      He’s not saying he’s better, it’s just implied.

    • @logancox9280
      @logancox9280 6 лет назад +25

      Axtwyt Starkiller hindsight’s 20/20

    • @Gomenred
      @Gomenred 6 лет назад +30

      I Make Content Sometimes but Is it really hindsight when he's pretty much taken the movie in an entirely different direction

    • @blackmanwithcomputer
      @blackmanwithcomputer 6 лет назад +10

      Hindsight makes everyone better, yo.

    • @notstorm208
      @notstorm208 6 лет назад +6

      You really didn’t understand why he said that did you?

  • @Relfar2
    @Relfar2 6 лет назад +1299

    I cried. 20 minutes of better content then the whole actual movie

    • @officialtrailers9075
      @officialtrailers9075 5 лет назад +27

      Jesse Harrison I cried. 500 likes and you couldn’t bother using the right than/then

    • @matthewcrane5294
      @matthewcrane5294 5 лет назад +6

      Tortanus The MegaCarrier 💀

    • @mik3y448
      @mik3y448 3 года назад +6

      @@officialtrailers9075 its just one grammar mistake get over it

    • @SomeGlasses
      @SomeGlasses 3 года назад +4

      @@officialtrailers9075 truly heartbreaking

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL 2 года назад +1

      one thing ill add is clayface also was in the batman animated series and his arc was one of the best of the series...but i love his addition here since hes a batman rogue villian

  • @ross396
    @ross396 6 лет назад +1099

    This guy... started the movie off with Clayface? Omg. I'm like... speechless.

    • @bobwilson679
      @bobwilson679 6 лет назад +31

      In a good way or a bad way?

    • @jokerstein627
      @jokerstein627 6 лет назад +22

      Still waiting for a response...

    • @kryptonian56
      @kryptonian56 6 лет назад +71

      I've said for years that clay face fight/ chase would be great for a opening scene.... Awesome!!!!!

    • @anglozombie2485
      @anglozombie2485 6 лет назад +40

      I think they would fuck up the cgi on clay face though

    • @iainarlt7668
      @iainarlt7668 6 лет назад +37

      @@anglozombie2485 I don't think clayface needs good CGI the more abhorrent and unnatural the better right? Correct me if I'm wrong I don't know much about CGI.

  • @adammuniz4149
    @adammuniz4149 6 лет назад +602

    I didn’t have a problem with the casting of aquaman

    • @mikemike7326
      @mikemike7326 5 лет назад +68

      Same, its a rarity to see someone disagree

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +11

      I agree.

    • @isaiahmaldonado349
      @isaiahmaldonado349 5 лет назад +35

      I love Jason Mamoa as Aqua Man

    • @princesoulger999
      @princesoulger999 5 лет назад +52

      I love Jason, but he looks like Lobo wearing Aqua-Man's costume

    • @sdprz7893
      @sdprz7893 4 года назад +58

      @@princesoulger999 The original Aquaman look is very basic, typical blonde blue eyed guy. I like the new spin, it makes him way more memorable and unique.

  • @box2122
    @box2122 5 лет назад +85

    12:16
    Well obviously I would have to say kite man. That's a no brainer.

    • @franciscorendon2783
      @franciscorendon2783 5 лет назад +12

      #ReleaseTheGliderCut

    • @liaminator4950
      @liaminator4950 3 года назад

      @@franciscorendon2783 OSFIDPD0TFOFO THIS IS IT THIS IS THE BEST COMMENT

    • @franciscorendon2783
      @franciscorendon2783 3 года назад

      @@liaminator4950 hm but I stole it from a video

    • @mik3y448
      @mik3y448 3 года назад

      condiment man is better

  • @ColinDakotaKelly
    @ColinDakotaKelly 6 лет назад +169

    Nando, I've watched all of your videos, this is absolutely beautiful! I fully respect your hard work and all of the effort you put into these videos. Let it be known that your hard work does not go unnoticed.

  • @bruce7068
    @bruce7068 6 лет назад +786

    Imagine an after credits scene where Amanda Waller pays Slade a visit in prison offering him a place on Task Force X similar to the post credits scene in Arkham Origins. Presumably teasing a decent Suicide Squad sequel.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +73

      I actually have two post credits scenes planned and that may be close.

    • @solidpython4964
      @solidpython4964 6 лет назад +24

      I feel like Deathstroke has been so depowered over time and given a backseat when imo he is such a cool villain

    • @matthiuskoenig3378
      @matthiuskoenig3378 6 лет назад +2

      be is not a Batman villain tho, he is a merc and a titans villian that fights alongside and against most heroes, although he does go up against batman alot.

    • @TStamp-lw4ku
      @TStamp-lw4ku 6 лет назад +1

      Bruce but then it would be copying Arkham origins

    • @emc246
      @emc246 6 лет назад +1

      SOLID PYTHON The Arrowverse used him pretty well.

  • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
    @saj-manthesonicfan1893 6 лет назад +348

    20 Minutes?! Part 1!?! JUSTICE LEAGUE!?!?!? All my dreams are coming true! Love your channel, love your ideas, can't wait for the 2nd and 3rd act!
    I absolutely agree that there should have been supervillains throughout the film and Superman should have stayed dead for a while longer. So glad you brought that up! C:

    • @TybudX
      @TybudX 6 лет назад +6

      It is a great solution to that mustache problem.

    • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
      @saj-manthesonicfan1893 6 лет назад

      Tyler Desrosiers; YES, EXACTLY!

    • @codymaple8959
      @codymaple8959 6 лет назад +2

      Can't wait for parts 2 and 3

    • @saj-manthesonicfan1893
      @saj-manthesonicfan1893 6 лет назад

      Cody Maple; The anticipation is killing me! >.

    • @codymaple8959
      @codymaple8959 6 лет назад

      SAJ-Man the Sonic Fan I know right this was the first video of his I saw I submitted to him and watched his old videos

  • @RadinV1
    @RadinV1 5 лет назад +108

    "Justice league was bad. I mean it was fine, but it's fineness makes it bad."
    -Nando v movies, 2018

  • @francisjomergallardo4593
    @francisjomergallardo4593 3 года назад +7

    The Nando cut is still better than the Snyder Cut. #ReleaseTheNandoCut

  • @Marbletrain60GR
    @Marbletrain60GR 6 лет назад +257

    Batman in traffic, now that’s what I wanna see

    • @seandabest6353
      @seandabest6353 6 лет назад +7

      Batman’s just sitting in the bat mobile while car horns go off.
      He sighs.
      Sits there for a bit.
      Adjusts the seat position.
      Makes those popping noises bored people make, I dunno how to describe it.
      Turns on the radio.
      Radio plays the Batman theme (you know which one I mean).
      Grins slightly.
      Starts humming along.

  • @Jesse-yo7uw
    @Jesse-yo7uw 6 лет назад +133

    I think scarecrow should be in the legion, it would be a great opportunity to get to know more about flash and cyborgs backstory while under the fear gas. It could also show of character conflict, say flash and batman are fighting some members of the legion and scarecrow is one of them, flash would think "oh this is just a regular guy in a costume, I can take him easy" and before batman can warn him about what scarecrow can do, flash is already running at him and ends up with a face full of fear gas. That would show off flash's quick to act personality and how he's not willing to listen to others a lot of the time. Just a thought, really enjoyed the video!

  • @IAmGeorgeLucas
    @IAmGeorgeLucas 6 лет назад +41

    When you're more excited for part 2 than you are for anything from the DCEU.

  • @markreid6251
    @markreid6251 6 лет назад +24

    Wait! You hate Wonder Woman's theme? I was loving everything about this video until you said that. Her theme is amazing and never fails to get me fired up even more in an action scene.

    • @Chuck_EL
      @Chuck_EL 2 года назад +2

      i agree it fits her to a t

    • @Im.myfuture
      @Im.myfuture Год назад +5

      It's a badass theme. The problem is it's a battle theme. It builds hype for when she's about to go ham. But when it's a cameo of her just assisting in a rescue or saying hi, it's...overpoweringly jarring.

  • @Daydreamer1130
    @Daydreamer1130 5 лет назад +82

    How are you not a movie writer/director/everything, all your ideas are super intriguing and great changes to what were bad/meh movies

  • @thepriorstone4064
    @thepriorstone4064 6 лет назад +74

    But...why NOT have a Nando v movies universe?

  • @dojomojo5085
    @dojomojo5085 6 лет назад +159

    I still don't know why you aren't a writer at Marvel Studios or something.

    • @knallekalle9920
      @knallekalle9920 6 лет назад +8

      Because that would probably be overkill for the DCEU, which the Justice League is a part of...

    • @getschwifty5537
      @getschwifty5537 6 лет назад +34

      To be fair, while Marvel has a few misfires and Nando would have made a much better Age of Ultron, MCU is doing fine without him.
      DC/Warnerbros need Nando the most.

    • @rayshiotile9487
      @rayshiotile9487 6 лет назад +7

      let's be real the execs would meddle to much and ruin his great script because of "the charts"

    • @ghost_pl9259
      @ghost_pl9259 6 лет назад +2

      David Lopez That Age of Ultron rewrite of his sucked in my opinion. Defenders one wasnt so good as well.

    • @frogholdingmachinegun377
      @frogholdingmachinegun377 6 лет назад

      DOJO MOJO! He's good but calm down there, kiddo.

  • @cam3rian
    @cam3rian 6 лет назад +124

    This is so much better definitely gonna listen to your podcast

  • @snaake9389
    @snaake9389 6 лет назад +34

    There’s one huge problem with using the Legion of Doom:
    Casting

  • @JaguarBrickFilms
    @JaguarBrickFilms 5 лет назад +68

    Would you mind if I used this to make a Lego film?

  • @rejachemno
    @rejachemno 6 лет назад +205

    Nando making Justice League great again.

  • @logan_was_here_3382
    @logan_was_here_3382 6 лет назад +166

    p-p-p-p-p-part....1...?
    *AND ITS 20 MINUTES?? YESSSSSSS*

    • @filthy.kasual
      @filthy.kasual 6 лет назад +2

      AqUaM_CaPaciToR and there’s going to be 4 parts lol

    • @RicardoHipper
      @RicardoHipper 6 лет назад +1

      Filthy Casual All those parts pretty much make up a movie

    • @frankteng
      @frankteng 6 лет назад

      AqUaM_CaPaciToR and then you realize the 20 minutes have just past

  • @MrE_
    @MrE_ 6 лет назад +434

    2:48 I caught that jab at BVS
    "...where superman fought Doomsday for a second..."

    • @phone5579
      @phone5579 6 лет назад +44

      Kevin the whole channel is a jab at BVS

    • @CabezasDePescado
      @CabezasDePescado 6 лет назад

      yeah he is an idiot

    • @Ok-eg8dg
      @Ok-eg8dg 5 лет назад

      @rice milk. It had it's moments tho

    • @LjuboCupic1912
      @LjuboCupic1912 5 лет назад

      rice milk. He said had it’s moments, not that it was good.

  • @userunknown203
    @userunknown203 6 лет назад +38

    Holy heck when you said "Legion of Doom" I lost my shit because I've literally been saying they should be the Justice League villains since 2013. This is not the first time you've said exactly what I've always felt and it gets better every time. You're a dank fellow Nando

  • @soldofpol7026
    @soldofpol7026 6 лет назад +70

    Hey there bud, don't hate on Jason Momoa as Aquaman...awesome casting there
    But actually, great job, you should write movies

    • @TickleMeElmo55
      @TickleMeElmo55 4 года назад +7

      Jason's casting was a bit inspired. Whole Aquaman movie needed a better script. The actress who played the love interested needed to be replaced. She was mediocre.

  • @mr.e3768
    @mr.e3768 6 лет назад +88

    Love this channel, everything is so well thought out and well written...

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +2

      Thanks!

    • @mr.e3768
      @mr.e3768 6 лет назад +4

      Keep up the great work man! I always look forward to new videos from this channel... Btw would you ever consider doing another video on improving Thor 2? Or maybe a video about how to make Thor Ragnorak better as in less silly and fit the tones of the original more? The first Thor I've always felt was really underrated and really similar to a Shakespeare drama...

  • @sfdko3291
    @sfdko3291 6 лет назад +55

    You have got to stop doing this bro.
    You're way too good to do this for youtube and get nothing out of it.
    If you're good at something, never do it for free.

    • @magic75450
      @magic75450 6 лет назад +9

      SergioTov
      He gets money from it if he has enough subscribers and viewers.
      Not a lot, but still.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +9

      Hop on his patreon boys.

    • @loonaticzack3447
      @loonaticzack3447 6 лет назад +4

      I understood that reference

    • @AnastasiaIoppolo
      @AnastasiaIoppolo 6 лет назад +1

      Hafiz Rafiee sorry, what was that? I was playing galaga

  • @sfdko3291
    @sfdko3291 6 лет назад +32

    So I'm guessing the Egyptian artifacts are for Black Adam or .... maybe Dr. Fate?
    Can't wait to see where this goes.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +4

      It's the Egyptian God Cards! That's why the book was about Ra. haha

    • @lenwezzyman
      @lenwezzyman 6 лет назад +6

      Why not Vandal savage

    • @RickyLiveOG
      @RickyLiveOG 6 лет назад +3

      I'm thinking they will be trying to resurrect BA and the Legion will be defeated by the JL, but not before setting in motion the resurrection anyway in a post credit scene, leading into Shazam.

    • @purpleglasses4511
      @purpleglasses4511 6 лет назад

      R C Why can't WB writers think like this, what kind of shit do they imagine smh

    • @shriramprasadvenkatesan5459
      @shriramprasadvenkatesan5459 6 лет назад +1

      Or could it be the Hawkman/Hawkgirl? Maybe evil thanagarians?

  • @CL12356
    @CL12356 6 лет назад +127

    Love it! What would you think if at the memorial service, the final person to speak is, of course, Lois Lane. She begins the speech honoring Superman and the all the good he’s done for mankind, but then turns very dark, saying mankind let him die: “You let the Batman kill him. You killed the only god willing to protect your pathetic lives, and now there’s no one left to save you,” as she turns around and pulls out a gun on the president. Batman throws a baterang, which not only relieves Lois of the gun, but also her hand. Batman jumps to the stage as the secret service takes the president away. Lois, in “pain” screams at Batman, “Look at what you’ve done. You destroy everything you touch, everyone around you...” Batman is distraught, taken aback. Then Lois holds up her hand, which is not bleeding, but dripping clay. Batman realizes who he’s dealing with. The fight ensues, and Lois is later discovered to be held captive by the Legion of Doom. This allows Clayface to show off his infamous acting skills and it makes sense he would impersonate Lois, since she is the most unassuming to get closet to the president. Clayface also gets a stab at Batman’s insecurities of letting down both Superman and Robin (further fueling Bruce to work alone) and it turns the public’s attention on the role Batman played in Superman’s death (which is later escalated by the media). And his mentions of “gods” can allude to the possible agenda of summoning and evil god in the absence of Superman, if that’s where you were going. Thanks for reading all of this if you did!

    • @CL12356
      @CL12356 6 лет назад +25

      AnHeC she wouldn’t actually be Lois Lane, she’d be Clayface incognito. And the whole thing isn’t about killing the president, it’s about creating a distraction and drawing mass attention to Batman’s role in Supe’s death

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +4

      Wow, I TOTALLY like this!

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +4

      My friend, this is chilling. I like it!

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +3

      Buddy, this scene is chilling. I've already added it in my head!

    • @ThatOneDude521
      @ThatOneDude521 2 года назад +1

      That’s… incredible

  • @HxH2011DRA
    @HxH2011DRA 6 лет назад +15

    Now *THIS* is gonna be fun (btw I NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED a Nando Cinematic universe series. Get artist and do whatever else ya need to do to make it happen)

  • @Jun-bm8ly
    @Jun-bm8ly 6 лет назад +259

    this is actually great, definitely better than JL. but can you change the "collect some mcguffins" part to something else? "collect the mcguffins" trope in superhero movies is getting pretty old now (same goes for Villain "hunger for power". "world domination" and "something shooting some/a giant hole into the sky" trope)

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +71

      Thanks and to that I would say, I have a feeling you're going to be cool with the Mcguffins. Give me a few more videos.

    • @Jun-bm8ly
      @Jun-bm8ly 6 лет назад +20

      senpai just noticed me :o .. jokes aside, your explanation on how character in DCEU should behave is really on point and great!! I hope those hacks behind DCEU should atleast learn something from you.

    • @ELFanatic
      @ELFanatic 6 лет назад +22

      It's a common mistake to think mcgruffins make a movie weak. The problem is too many movies misuse mcgruffins. Paychecks are a mcgruffin in our real lives. How do we choose to make our paycheck, what do we do with our savings? Do we have aspirations? nest it in fear of the future? How do we survive the hard times? What do we put up with at work to make that paycheck. Put that in a story and it defines your character, it motivates them. A mcgruffin is a thing you need. When the story's end goal is just getting the thing you need, it's weak. but when the thing you need is a tool to define who your character is, what their ambitions are, and how they handle not having it. Who are their during hardships. That's where the real power lies.

    • @unstoppableExodia
      @unstoppableExodia 5 лет назад +2

      The average movie goer:
      Yeah hi I put me down for a mcguffin with fries and a sundae to go

    • @samsulh314
      @samsulh314 5 лет назад

      What about just collecting muffins?

  • @BakaryD
    @BakaryD 6 лет назад +665

    Everyday we figure out a little more how bad the DCEU is.

    • @no-vd2rh
      @no-vd2rh 6 лет назад +4

      Yusuke Urameshi warner bros*

    • @JCardo2502
      @JCardo2502 6 лет назад +14

      Warner Bros has become a mediocre entertainment company now a days, it used to be Disney’s rival but now they are below mediocre

    • @gkay8889
      @gkay8889 6 лет назад +4

      Bilal Ahmed no..DCEU*

    • @Leon-xo4wl
      @Leon-xo4wl 6 лет назад +1

      True

    • @mckenanbundy3578
      @mckenanbundy3578 6 лет назад +1

      I love it

  • @grimmjow_jaegerswag
    @grimmjow_jaegerswag 5 лет назад +15

    "Amanda waller"
    "Flag"
    "Hopper"
    A demogorgon should be the villain instead of Steppenwolf

  • @TheYankeesUnited
    @TheYankeesUnited 6 лет назад +17

    Imagine that issue alfred saying bring in the younger heroes.
    Batman saying no, not again. They are to young, I won't let something like this happen once more.
    Alfred goes its not the same Bruce, these young men can help.
    And Batman just yelling "I will not bring in another one Alfred, not after everything that has happend!"
    I would of loved that.

  • @Maggoz777
    @Maggoz777 6 лет назад +20

    #ReleaseTheNandoCinematicUniverse

  • @suspiciousmaninhat5941
    @suspiciousmaninhat5941 6 лет назад +27

    I was wondering today, “I wonder if Nando forgot about that big Justice League rewrite... OH SHIT”.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +3

      I heard that, so I was decided to put this out today.

  • @lucmorris9183
    @lucmorris9183 6 лет назад +344

    How the heck can you fix the unfixable mess that is justice league?
    Edit: oh nando just answered my question

    • @GoldLight73
      @GoldLight73 6 лет назад +51

      Stop letting the competition with Marvel take center stage over making a good movie franchise.

    • @thaisolomon9519
      @thaisolomon9519 6 лет назад +16

      He just did

    • @lucmorris9183
      @lucmorris9183 6 лет назад +17

      Gold Wade who said anything about marvel? Justice league is a generally bad movie.

    • @leonardodavi2695
      @leonardodavi2695 6 лет назад +11

      How? Did you not watch the video? Nando just described a first act that is goddamn eons better than the movie's.

    • @MrDman21
      @MrDman21 6 лет назад +4

      I wanna see Nando fix the mess that was Age of Ultron.

  • @cadenpresley3674
    @cadenpresley3674 6 лет назад +89

    Something I disagreed on: WW's theme. Her main theme is badass and catchy. But to each their own. Otherwise, I actually love your version of JL. A much better premise than what we saw. As you mentioned, they should've used the roster of other DC characters to their advantage since they own the rights to all of the DC characters.

    • @FirstLast-kp9jx
      @FirstLast-kp9jx 5 лет назад +3

      I also don't like it. I'm not saying it's bad, I just don't find it to be badass or catchy.

    • @jayjaysink1828
      @jayjaysink1828 5 лет назад

      and that's where you are wrong my friend

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 5 лет назад +3

      I like Wonder Woman's theme too.

    • @InoMercy
      @InoMercy 4 года назад +2

      It doesn't really work for a Wonder Woman theme. It's catchy, I guess. But it doesn't really convey the grandeur or legendary status of a woman literally created by the Gods. Other than the obnoxious guitar riff, it's just an uninspired orchestral piece.

  • @Cadambank
    @Cadambank 4 года назад +8

    In comics / cartoons, the legion of doom was created as a reactionary mechanism to formation of justice League.
    It is interesting that here Legion is first formed then followed by justice League.

  • @viatic5878
    @viatic5878 6 лет назад +45

    The only positive thing I can think about the DCEU is that Nando is gonna come out with a video with something better

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад

      It's like how 'Something Witty Entertainment' abridged 'Sword Art Online' from dirt to gold.

    • @evolvedturtleproductions7600
      @evolvedturtleproductions7600 6 лет назад +1

      Only to be even more disappointed because it isn’t the real thing.

  • @neccodealer
    @neccodealer 6 лет назад +15

    Since I haven’t seen Justice League and I’m not planing to, I’m gonna pretend this is what actually happened.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +3

      I reject your reality and substitute my own!

  • @DCMarvel2009
    @DCMarvel2009 6 лет назад +51

    Lol Toyman played by Toby Jones...THAT WOULD LEGITIMATELY WORK.
    Also, LOVE the Legion of Doom idea. Great work Nando!

  • @marmex9912
    @marmex9912 5 лет назад +7

    Dceu rewritten
    Phase 1
    1st Superman
    2nd Batman
    3rd wonder woman
    4th Aquaman
    5th Green lantern
    6th The Flash
    7th The Justice League
    Phase 2
    8th Superman 2
    9th batman 2
    10th Martian man hunter
    11th Teen Titans
    12th Arrow
    13th Wonder woman 2
    14th Justice league: Rise of Braniac

    • @dblxde
      @dblxde 5 лет назад

      eh i dont agree

    • @dblxde
      @dblxde 5 лет назад

      I'd say this
      Phase 1
      1st Batman
      2nd Superman
      3rd Batman 2
      4th Wonder Woman
      5th Trinity
      6th The Flash
      7th Justice League
      Phase 2
      8th Batman 3
      9th Superman 2
      10th Aquaman
      11th Green Lantern
      12th Wonder Woman 2
      13th Teen Titans
      14th Green Arrow
      15th Justice League: Rise of Brainiac
      Phase 3
      15th Shazam
      16th Batman 4
      17th The Flash 2
      18th Teen Titans 2
      19th Aquaman 2
      20th Green Lantern 2
      21st: Justice League: Crime Syndicate
      22nd: Injustice Year One
      23rd: Doctor Fate
      24th: Injustice Year Two
      Phase 4
      25th Hawkman & Hawkgirl
      26th DC: Legends
      27th Justice League: Apokolips
      28th Atom
      29th DC: New Genesis
      30th Superman 3
      31st Booster Gold
      32nd Justice League: Return of the Apokolips

  • @vaheakopian
    @vaheakopian 6 лет назад +126

    My problem with your "big change" of creating the legion of doom is that it doesn't make sense. The LoD exists as a reaction to the justice league. Villains are inherently selfish and not inclined to work together. If superman is dead, the villains have a free pass to do whatever they want. I doubt they are gonna team up. But when the justice league existed, they villains needed a force to counter the JL, and that's how the LoD came to be.

    • @agentice7718
      @agentice7718 6 лет назад +24

      Honestly if I saw that instead of what the movie did it would be soooooo much better

    • @cheetoschrist5685
      @cheetoschrist5685 6 лет назад +35

      it still beats whatever Step-on-wolfs was

    • @optillian4182
      @optillian4182 6 лет назад +12

      This is why I like the idea. It adds a twist to the usual narrative.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +63

      Well, I think Batman could conceivably stop all of these criminals if they are on their own.

    • @ELFanatic
      @ELFanatic 6 лет назад +33

      I don't know all those villains but the initial group appears to be weaker villains, villains that batman would be able to stop. Seems like this legion is just to win against Batman, and once JL forms, the legion would expand to include the heavy hitters.

  • @alexanderaljabbar7773
    @alexanderaljabbar7773 6 лет назад +70

    I have been waiting for this video for such a long time. Thank You for making it. The DCEU is such an interesting universe with diverse cast, and You have fixed some of the movies. My favorite video of yours is The wonder woman series. Please keep making these kind of videos.

  • @connormagee9858
    @connormagee9858 6 лет назад +35

    Alright, you say your not a better writer than the staff of justice league, so let me say it. Your a better writer than the staff of justice league and I honestly think you could show a producer one of your videos and get hired like that

    • @shawnk6736
      @shawnk6736 6 лет назад +1

      if only the film industry were built on merit...

  • @venomissocute3448
    @venomissocute3448 6 лет назад +10

    Step 1: Give other characters such as Flash and Aquaman movies BEFORE Justice League.
    Step 2: Remove the ‘Big Red CGI Fight’
    Step 3: ?

  • @luislima3476
    @luislima3476 6 лет назад +14

    Instead of the Legion, it could be the Cryme Sindicate. With this, the “they don’t know which villain they want to use” wasn’t really a problem, since they would be used just for this story

  • @theperson101ful
    @theperson101ful 6 лет назад +18

    Love this! And not having Superman in this movie means no moustache contract, will miss the Superman vs Justice League fight tho, thought that was the best part of the movie.

  • @matejas8433
    @matejas8433 6 лет назад +20

    FINALLY. Do you know how long i have waited?

  • @sambennett1757
    @sambennett1757 6 лет назад +18

    When you get the time I would love to see a DC based Nando Cinematic Universe

  • @bogdanhxc
    @bogdanhxc 6 лет назад +464

    Justice League is below bad - it's boring.

    • @logan6034
      @logan6034 6 лет назад +25

      Hard Core say what you want but I
      enjoyed it. Though it should have been A LOT better

    • @warrust
      @warrust 6 лет назад +14

      I'd say messy is a better term for it

    • @lunatic4152
      @lunatic4152 6 лет назад +3

      Hard Core it's the worst superhero movie of all time.

    • @logan6034
      @logan6034 6 лет назад +16

      CHESCOchannel **looks at Batman & Robin, Catwoman, Captain America 1990, Fant4stic, Electra, Wolverine Origins** yeah...I’m pretty sure you’re exaggerating there, bruh

    • @lunatic4152
      @lunatic4152 6 лет назад +2

      Logan Gun nope. Not at all it is worse than those. Fan4stuc had good effects. Cat woman is close but this one is more disappointing. Batman and Robin had amazing practical effects and effects are great plus acting is pretty good the writing is terrible tho and the rest of the movie is one of the worst but has better stuff than JL. Electra, is not as terrible. It is terrible but it's not awful or unwatchable. Same thing goes for daredevil and x men origins wolverine. Cap 1990 is in no way as bad as JL at least that one tries.
      Justice league, is bad at everything. Effects are shit, acting is terrible, jokes are bad, cringy dialogue, characters are badly written, action sucks, costumes are ugly, bad guys are boring, everything is wrong with that movie. Nothing good at all. Thanks WB you literally outdid yourself, you managed to make a movie worse than batman and Robin.

  • @Thelazyninjas4eva
    @Thelazyninjas4eva 5 лет назад +5

    You sound like a happier Chris stuckman

  • @pedanticat9479
    @pedanticat9479 6 лет назад +13

    Man, this act alone is a million times better then what we actually got

  • @youmnasherif9424
    @youmnasherif9424 6 лет назад +20

    i'm calling it, you're definitely getting hired by some big company real soon

    • @ubayyd
      @ubayyd 6 лет назад

      Sounds good but not necessarily

  • @maxhydekyle2425
    @maxhydekyle2425 6 лет назад +11

    You're not allowed to close plot holes! This is the DCEU not the DCAU! It's not supposed to make sense, it's only meant to look good.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад

      Yeah, I thought one of his rules was to leave the film consequences the same, plot holes and all, haha.

  • @DrakeVagabond
    @DrakeVagabond 6 лет назад +27

    I hope Slade is a part of a bigger picture, because Deathstroke with ambition is cool, but not his best. Still great video.

  • @caiquemarlon5579
    @caiquemarlon5579 4 года назад +9

    So next year he's gonna make "Snyder Cut rewrite"

    • @djgaben6187
      @djgaben6187 3 года назад +1

      Impossible. The Snyder Cut was fantastic

    • @SomeGlasses
      @SomeGlasses 3 года назад

      Well I mean he wouldn’t have to since this exists

    • @whyequalswhat
      @whyequalswhat 3 года назад

      @@djgaben6187 The Snyder cut was horrible too.

    • @djgaben6187
      @djgaben6187 3 года назад

      @@whyequalswhat I personally found it far more enjoyable than the Whedon Cut, but I will admit there are a few points that just drag and drag

  • @jimmyz2684
    @jimmyz2684 5 лет назад +11

    I know this is late, but it seems like Batman should be used to taking on multiple bad guys at a time by now...

    • @Sentryman002
      @Sentryman002 4 года назад +1

      Not if they're superhumans, friend.

  • @marc5533
    @marc5533 6 лет назад +10

    I'd pay for a Nando Cinematic Universe

  • @jeremyliebe8732
    @jeremyliebe8732 6 лет назад +12

    Idk if anarky is the best choice, while he is all about chaos(mostly) he's more of an anti hero. Maybe someone like the trickster would work better

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +8

      Trickster would be fun.

    • @jeremyliebe8732
      @jeremyliebe8732 6 лет назад

      My thoughts exactly anyway keep up the good work man

    • @magic75450
      @magic75450 6 лет назад

      Jeremy Liebe
      But he has no power.
      Even one hero can win easily.
      Mabye he can team up with someone.

    • @Iritis-
      @Iritis- 6 лет назад

      I would have gone with Black Mask and scenario swapped it to a bank robber instead of a terrorist attack.

  • @saikgamingproductions
    @saikgamingproductions 6 лет назад +16

    You really kept Batman's values similair to the comics.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +1

      The Nando Cinematic Universe's characterisation of batman is better than the DCEU's portrayal...
      because he's BATMAN!!!

    • @saikgamingproductions
      @saikgamingproductions 6 лет назад

      very true

  • @cringeproof100
    @cringeproof100 5 лет назад +10

    These clips and description aren't even a real movie but it's still way more gripping than the real JL. If only the industry allowed for more creativity & thinking

  • @pizzachef3358
    @pizzachef3358 5 лет назад +6

    5:36. in the scripts i write i usually start them with someone dying

  • @venomissocute3448
    @venomissocute3448 6 лет назад +4

    This is more interesting than the real one, and this doesn’t even have visuals

  • @Luismanuel77777
    @Luismanuel77777 6 лет назад +9

    Can you imagine Nando's Vision of this movie adapted into a comic book series, maybe something called "Justice League: Year One or Year Zero". Have this whole video be like the first issue, Then maybe make like the last issue brings Superman back in the end or something. I would honestly pay for that!

    • @Luismanuel77777
      @Luismanuel77777 6 лет назад +1

      or even a short 8 episode series......... I just want Nando to write or direct something lol

  • @Sailn2Sunsets
    @Sailn2Sunsets 6 лет назад +11

    How do we show this to DC?
    I think one of the biggest things I took away from this is that the villains have to be just as *awesome* as their hero counterparts. Which seems to be a running theme for your DCEU fixes. Loved this.

    • @purefatdude2
      @purefatdude2 6 лет назад

      This is amazing but studios do not have creative freedom. The sole fact that superman does not get resurrected will reject this proposal .

  • @efp722
    @efp722 4 года назад +3

    So this is just a straight up different movie. got it. I like it.

  • @RushStriker9
    @RushStriker9 6 лет назад +18

    You lost me at "Strange Casting" for Jason Mamoa. Really dude.

  • @marietheotaku94
    @marietheotaku94 6 лет назад +9

    This is so good, it's making me feel embarassed on behalf of DC. I can see that it's very Batman focused, which I get, but what do you think would be the arcs for the other characters? Batman learns to trust the others, Diana rejoins the world? Cyborg would clearly clash against the Toy Man both of them being hackers. Flash is still a young hero so it might be like in the movie where he is learning the trade. Not sure what's in it for Arthur tho.

  • @etnisanches2564
    @etnisanches2564 6 лет назад +6

    Ha! I love it!
    If this video was 1 hour long, I would watch it completely with a smile on my face!
    Love the changes, love how you turned the Batman/Alfred more Batman/Alfred. And I love how you'd construct everything.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +1

      He even set up a good mystery in act one, super hyped for more!
      Think you've made a typo, @Etni Sanches.

  • @leftybefty9766
    @leftybefty9766 3 года назад +3

    The Nando cut

  • @melonhead8052
    @melonhead8052 3 года назад +2

    Who else came to compare this to the Snyder cut . Loved the Snyder cut

  • @MisterW-24
    @MisterW-24 6 лет назад +14

    Post credit scene from the actual film:
    Steppenwolf kneels before Darkseid who we barely see, just darkness. He tells Darkseid that he failed to obtain the motherboxes due to Earths new protectors. Darkseid brings up Superman’s resurrection and how he tried to get him to turn evil, figuring out that Steppenwolf would’ve used Superman to overthrow him after taking over Earth. We see Darkseids eyes go red and Steppenwolf is killed. The scene then transitions to an Apokolipian prison cell, with Abin Sur inside and a ring inside a magic container across from him.

  • @diego-dy1ik
    @diego-dy1ik 6 лет назад +6

    This might be repetitive but ou should work for either dc or marvel

  • @juliusalesandro
    @juliusalesandro 6 лет назад +9

    As much as i loved your ideas and this made more sense and made the movie WHOLE lot better, wouldn't it fall to underdeveloped characters criticism? Considering putting few more villains in (and only focusing on Deathstroke (exploring the others in the next act wouldn't help the pacing I suppose)) , and how this movie probably would be less than 120 min long. Also, even if it makes sense and really brings a "story" in the universe, I don't think leaving Superman out of a JL movie is a good move, because I think he is too important for JL name. If your idea were to be put in a movie before JL comes out, it will be better i think, but I'm not sure what the title would be lol so maybe it is the only logical way then. But really, i frickin' love your idea man, loved all your videos! Peace!

  • @mruv5944
    @mruv5944 5 лет назад +4

    It’s funny cos you mention the MCU not yet capitalising on a Villain team up, yet if you take a closer look at Phase 4... that could be what’s coming next!!

  • @btrsbspic231567
    @btrsbspic231567 3 года назад +3

    Who's here after watching the snyder cut?

  • @dominicreyes8150
    @dominicreyes8150 6 лет назад +5

    Gotta say loved it all but my favorite part wasn't even a change it was "queue the Wonder Woman theme...which I hate" because me too man

  • @kdrfcgaming7902
    @kdrfcgaming7902 5 лет назад +5

    Legion Of Doom? Finding Egyptian artefacts. Someone watched Legends Of Tomorrow 😂😂

  • @cryptocole239
    @cryptocole239 6 лет назад +7

    You should really be working for DCEU now!!

  • @PapasKino
    @PapasKino 5 лет назад +3

    They should call themselves the Society and the members are, Toyman, Gentleman Ghost, Copperhead, Sportsmaster, and Tsukuri. Later on, in Justice League 2, the team will fight the Legion of Doom, led by Maxwell Lord.

  • @CarlosGarcia-zo1vm
    @CarlosGarcia-zo1vm 5 лет назад +6

    “I’m not going to change the movie much”
    Completely changes the villain, premise, and base story.

  • @Kuipoa
    @Kuipoa 6 лет назад +5

    I want a Nando cinematic universe

  • @Maggoz777
    @Maggoz777 6 лет назад +5

    Also, the fact that YOU're gonna need, what 3 or 4 videos to fix this, talks about how bad the DCEU has been doing. I still love DC, btw.

    • @kingcole5977
      @kingcole5977 6 лет назад +1

      He might be going for a video per act, for that three act structure he was going on about, regardless I'm feverishly waiting in anticipation for the next part.

    • @Maggoz777
      @Maggoz777 6 лет назад +1

      IKR? Still, if the man who fixed truly terrible movies in one video has to do three for this, is quite impressive, LOL

  • @troyareyes
    @troyareyes 6 лет назад +7

    Why don't you like Wonder Woman's theme?

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +6

      I think the electric cello always sounds out of place and takes me out of the movie.

    • @troyareyes
      @troyareyes 6 лет назад +2

      Nando v Movies I get that. I think it might not be as jarring if everyone elses theme was equally as unique and interesting.

    • @NandovMovies
      @NandovMovies  6 лет назад +5

      Yeah. There was a bit in Wonder Woman where they used the theme but without the cello and just what was used for the rest of the score, and I really liked it.

  • @Rinchen8192
    @Rinchen8192 6 лет назад +22

    Why does Clayface need to plow through a crowd? he can just shape shift into a police officer or a journalist, or maybe even a President's special security guy if he's part of some team that is planning stuff.

    • @zap4th368
      @zap4th368 5 лет назад +15

      Because he was supposed to make a scene

    • @MrSircharles05
      @MrSircharles05 5 лет назад

      @@zap4th368 attempting to assassinate the President isn't causing a scene?

    • @zap4th368
      @zap4th368 5 лет назад

      The true hero of Naruto it is if no one REALIZES you are trying to assassinate the president.

    • @noahthompson2912
      @noahthompson2912 4 года назад

      @@MrSircharles05 he was distracting everybody for the legion of doom

  • @JOVONO
    @JOVONO 6 лет назад +5

    The person who recorded the Batman v Superman fight could have been the Riddler.

  • @tahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha
    @tahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhha 6 лет назад +9

    GENIUS. YOU ARE A GENIUS, MY MAN.

  • @lucavincenzo5526
    @lucavincenzo5526 6 лет назад +7

    Nando: "And I am in no way saying i'm a better writer than these guys."
    Me: *Reaches through screen to snap Nando out of it.*