By the way I liked the "It's not an 'S'" throwback in choosing Wonder Woman's codename. Also Barry should have asked Bruce what his codename will be and Bruce will answer " *I'm Batman!* ", then Barry says he knows but he just wanted to hear him say it in person to have a nerdgasm.
Wait, the Flash was in Suicide Squad? Man I totally forgot. Speaking of Flash: one big, necessary change would be to *MAKE HIM RUN LIKE AN ACTUAL RUNNER* rather than flailing his arms about like a rag doll.
not to mention the way he seems to throw his feet out to the side as he runs, he looks like he's struggling to not trip over constantly as if he's recovering from a stumble on every footfall
The dialogue you wrote between Flash and Cyborg is so much more meaningful than what we got in the original. So glad that you are making changes so the characters actually impact each other. Also, love the *pirates* line.
Barry: I was thinking, the Flash Everybody: (snickers) Barry: No, not li- Arthur: No, no, I get it, we just have to stay away from Parks, Schools Barry: How about something like, Lightning Lad Arthur: Too late, you're the Flash Diana: I think it's a Lovely name this would be the best part of the movie
It is good but it has one flaw; writers generally avoid that kind of jokes because only work in English, and this movies rely a lot in foreign market. The joke for flash = flasher does not work in Chinese or Spanish for example (of course a creative team doing the dub/sub may find a similar that works with the language but studios often prefer not to take risks)
I hated how weird, awkward and dumb they made Barry. But that joke seems more in his character. Barry Allen is awkwardly cute and the Flash is the better half of him, wise cracking and smart. Another joke could be: Bruce: This is Diana. Arthur: What are you supposed to be? Alfred: She’s a goddess. Barry: We can tell. (Not thinking and flustered by her beauty) Silence. Diana to Barry: (chuckles) You’re cute. (Then walks on to the plane) Cyborg follows snickering, Aquaman mumbles “cute” and makes a pained expression. Bruce has lighter expression on his face clearly amused and walks on to the plane leaving flash behind. Bruce: You coming? Barry: No, I’m just gonna run back in time and kill myself. Bruce: You can do that. Barry: (walking) no but I wish. And that establishes that Barry is still in the fledging phase of his superhero life whilst establishing to this audience what the flash can and can’t do.
Man, all the bonding stuff between Barry and Victor, Victor and Bruce, and Barry and Diana really moved me... You totally nailed the human moments here! Like, this is the stuff I hardcore want to see in a DC movie, because I care about the characters. Cool action is not the main selling point for me. This is what makes the MCU so amazing to me: the party in Age of Ultron, the conflict between Steve and Tony in Civil War, the teamwork of Natasha, Steve and Sam in Winter Soldier, and the great team-ups in Infinity War! The DCEU needs this too!
there is a myth about hermes that could help Barry. once in mythology hermes stole the sun cows of Apollo and then was granted with godhood by Zeus himself. you really should use this legend for Barry.
POST CREDIT SCENE IDEA: After the final act of justice league, we see cyborg and Bruce, in the batcave. Cyborg is doing some calculations while Bruce is fixing up the batmobile. "Superman, how was he?" Cyborg asks. "He was a hero" Bruce replies. "The one I never was" "If he were to be here, right now, how do you think the world would react?" He asks(Cyborg). "I don't know, why are you asking? Bruce turns around and sees cyborg in the batcomputer with motherbox and Superman files open. "Because I think we could bring him back"... SCREEN CUTS TO BLACK.
"He was a hero. The one I never was". Sorry, but that doesn't quite sound like Bats. He was never envious of Superman and it kinda sounds like that's what you're implying. How about, "He was a hero. A hero who showed us that justice doesn't always have to come from the darkness". By the way, that was a quote from the Justice League animated series, episode titled Hereafter, where Batman is mourning the loss of Superman at his memorial.
The only reason I didn’t click on the video when I got the notification was bc I waited for an opportunity of food and relaxation to fully enjoy your video. It was painful to resist but it was worth it.
That's a reference to one of Ian Malcolm's lines in the movie "Well, when Pirates of the Caribbean breaks down, the pirates don't eat the tourists." Jurassic Park is one of my favorite movies.
DtoonerGames 7 well how do you know the dinosaurs don't see themselves as pirates? Then you have the best of both worlds. Dinosaur pirates or pirates dinosaurs
I got an Idea for how to solve the problem with flash suit! Let's say the Justice league was kept a secret during a couple of months, and when flash gets his suit from batman, he goes to test it. Then when he comes back, he tells batman he even got to stop a robbery. The robbery is obviously the one he stopped in Suicide squad.
Love it! Suicide Squad taking place in the future can be tricky. Superman is alive in the movie. So as long as DC remembers that for future movies we’re good.
1:58 John Hammond: All major theme parks have had delays. When they opened Disneyland in 1956, nothing worked! Ian Malcolm: Yeah John, but if the Pirates of the Caribbean breaks down, the pirates don't eat the tourists.
No I think the helmet would work, cuz the Silver Age Flash cowl design is like a colored, more form-fitted version of the Mercury/Jay Garrick helmet (it still has the "wings," now lightning-shaped). Perhaps Barry starts off with a simple metal dish that is aerodynamic (like a bike helmet) and is metallic for maximum head protection (and maybe it could be spray-painted red, but the speed of his running has chipped off a lot of the paint so it's just a slight red stain on the back of the helmet, if anything. Also, maybe he painted some small yellow emblems on the helmet, but the speed elongated them into streaks, like the "wings" on Jay's helmet), and he wears just some jeans and a shirt with a lightning bolt, made heat-resistant by some homemade means that Barry designs. Then when Bruce makes the more form-fitted version, he integrates the helmet into the rest of the costume as a cowl, colors it red, and we get the Silver Age design made with space-age materials. It's a decent nod to Jay Garrick, since I doubt these movies would do much with Jay Garrick himself or the Justice Society, at least anytime soon.
I fucking love this rewrite I genuinely laughed when Barry was giving the code names That type of interaction is so well done Why didn’t you write justice league
In this version I can picture Aquaman messing with Flash when they first meet,. like Aquaman telling Flash to get of his seat, and when Flash superspeeds to another one Aquman instead just uses Flash's previous chair as a foot rest. And Flash with his moth open holds his hand up as if saying "are you seeing this" to Batman who just replies "Settle down we're about to get started" before going over the introduction or the beginning of their plan.
It would’ve been a fun little nod if when Bruce was teaching Barry to fight that Barry would’ve been all like “I can’t do that I’ve tried and I can’t” or something like that and then Bruce is all like “yes you can just do it again” and Barry, again says “I cant do it I’ve tried my hardest” and now Bruce ,all worked up, says “You’re not trying hard enough Robin!” and Barry just sits there looking confused and Bruce is like “Sorry, uhm just take 5 minutes”
I think it would be funny if the flash said "we need a team name...what about the titans?" And aqua man was like "that's the worst team name I've ever heard" and cyborg was like "I think that sounds kind of cool needs work though"
Bruce: Great, now that we understand our capabilities... Barry: Wait, shouldn't we know each other's weaknesses too? Like, I have a problem with sub-zero temperatures. [Aurther and Diana start to protest] Bruce: I already know what everyone's weaknesses are. [drops the mic]
This. So much this. That's way more in line with Batman. In fact, it's his primary character trait in the comics. He has a system for every superhero in case they turn evil.
See, I get why you'd expect batman to know everyone's weakness already, but if we were picking up with the justice league after they had been together for a while (and if all these heroes had previously shown solo movies that showed their weaknesses already) that would be perfect. However, I think in this version we're meeting them as they first start interacting with each other. There's no real history of Atlante and or Amazons or speedsters in this universe, and even the Greatest Detective can't conjure it up out of nowhere.
I think the perfect way would be doing both. Bruce asks them, because he wants to see if they trust each other and him enough to disclose their weakness, but he already knows, as we see in a later scene with Alfred, or a member of the JL checks the Batcomputer and discovers Batmans plans for taking down everybody.
He can have knowledge of there weaknesses already, he can even still try to coax the info out of them for team building reasons. However Bruce shouldn't divulge this information, as it becomes a major plot point in the JL sequel when a villain steals this information and uses it to almost kill the Justice League. Resulting in Batman being kicked off the team, and the JL being fractured while simultaneously preparing for Darksieds invasion.
I LOVED the codename scene, so funny! (And it made me realize that yeah, Diana's been around for 100 years in this continuity and she doesn't have her official superohero name, not even in passing? You would think there would be a nice story/myth/legend to go with that photo from the Wonder Woman movie by this point in the timeline... nice Flash XD) And the bonding moment between Flash and WW was sweet as well, and I like Barry and Cyborg's budding friendship (: Can't wait for Act 2B!
+nando v movies hey, even with the talk Diana has with Barry about Hermes to lift his spirits, may she can say something like he reminds her of him (hermes) and after he leaves (or she does, she wonders about re-incarnation and you can see that moment of realization hit her face and from then on, she regards him as family, a little brother?) But I think in the comics, they had a love affair?? or Was that Diana and Aquaman, where she kills Arthur's wife? I'm starting to confuse myself - sorry.Gist is, I don't know what's canon but it could be cool if Flash is a reincarnated God (Hermes who is what, Diana's brother/uncle/cousin?) and she realizes this and takes an extra protective shine to him. Whaddya think?
Maybe Beuce gives him a suit meant for a Robin, saying that the materials should hold up against his speeds. Then, later on, the R gets damaged during combat, somewhat resembling a lightning bolt, and at the very end when Barry is adding the wings to the suit, he solidifies the bolt as his logo.
That Cyborg retcon and Mother Box shrinking combo was genius. Seriously, I don't understand why DC made the Mother Boxes so huge, it's just not practical.
SAJ-Man the Sonic Fan well honestly... I kinda like it. It just looks like something the alien. Yeah it’s just a box but not earthly and it looks pretty good and it still it’s pretty easy to keep with you. Especially if your a new god
Alberts Choise; I hear what you're saying. I like the design of the Mother Boxes too, it's just... why are they so big? They can keep the look of them, I just think they should be closer to the size of the Mother Boxes in the comics.
25:15 The Ankh of Anubis = Doctor Fate with his Egyptian backstory and his use of the symbol A hawk = Hawk man or Hawk girl or some Thanagarian i’m guessing A scarab = a talking scarab gives Blue Beetle his abilities. amazing nods to future members of the justice league! ;)
I just realized that if this was the real Justics League movie, the Snyder Cut of Justice League would have instead just been a sequel. Superman is finally brought back in the black costume after being gone for like four movies, Darkseid and Stephen Wolf show up, Cyborg’s dad dies, destroying the last part of his human life, and Flash time travels. Perfect continuation.
Only negative is that we've haven't seen or heard about the villains of the movie for an entire act. A simple cutaway to a scene of them or something like that would definitely keep the focus on "stopping the bad guys" than "forming the justice league" which isn't the original point for them teaming up in this version. Other than that, this is so much better and the interactions between the characters are great, can't wait to see the 3rd Act.
Yash Bansal But there should be one or two cut away scenes to them. Establish/Reinforce a certain dynamic. Mention the Smithsonian so it makes sense for later. Just stuff like that.
I guess Copperhead is still around, she's just not so important for this part. T hey could try to get something out of her about the Legions plan. Leaving her alone in the original Bat Cave would be a terrible Idea, so she's still with them in a place where she can't hear them
I love that this takes place in D.C. Even if they fail in this first encounter, saving a few people during it excuses The Washington Post to publish the incredibly cheesy front page header reading "DC's Justice League Defends Smithsonian". It's terrible, but I love it.
Or if they don't have the team name by that point it could say "DC Heroes Save Smithsonian" Either way it's a cute little thing to throw in as a "blink and you'll miss it" kinda thing.
I'm a huge DC fan and I'm so happy that you have taken the story line of "legion of Doom" it's the best to start and unite the JL and also the way you have taken the story line, if WB or DC would have done this as actual movie I would have been so happy, these 2 parts kept a smile on my face just imagining the story...get the next part in soon...thank you...😊
You need to make A Nando Cinematic Universe where you make a Marvel or Dc universe. Edit I know you said that you won’t do that for this series but you can make a second series where you would rewrite JL if you made the universe or do a MCU reboot with the X men and F4
@@calebelson1 Yeah but they combine heroes in that. I'd like a universe where all the characters reside in the same world. I've actually thought about this at length and have ideas that span decades.
You articulate everything so well. I can literally see the scenes coming to life by your vocals and description. Glad I found this channel. Followed everywhere, I recommend everyone else does the same... (If you haven't yet)
Aquaman: "Okay Flasher." Aquaman: "No no no, I get it I get it. So we have to stay away from Parks and schools." Flash: "How about Lightning Lad?" Aquaman: "Too late, you're Flash!"
If you see this, Nando. I just want to tell you that I discovered your channel a week ago and I watched all of your videos in five days. Keep up the amazing work, you rock!
The Flash's speed don't have to be a ret-con. You can explain it with "him being slower now, because now he is surrrounded by gods and is looking down on himself. He wasn't surrounded by gods before... So then he thought more about himself.
I like where you're taking Act 2 of your version of the Justice League movie so far. The team characters development is great and I could relate to your version of Aquaman. -The scene, where each teammate gets their superhero names, reminds me of the one from X-Men: First Class. Side note: Batman actually has a Batcave in Washington DC. As far as I know, it only appeared in a Batman: The Brave and the Bold episode where Darkseid was invaded Earth.
Cyborg lecturing Bruce on team leadership is my favourite scene. Cyborg tends to be a kind of "out of nowhere" character when you put him with the League, but he always makes his office his own and commands respect
I know I'm rly late to the party here & I'm just on pt 2, BUT THIS IS AMAZING. All the character interactions, the lines you wrote for them, down to their (new-ish) personalities, all their mannerisms, all their little quirks & speaking tendencies, their jokes & humor & lil jabs at each other, their bonding moments, the way they carry out those lines, even (or esp) your voice acting of them embodies them perfectly to the tee! Like it's just so believable & so natural, it's pretty perfect tbh. That is exactly how I'd imagine they would talk & act. Bravo, you got a gift. Great job rly bringing them to life. Best characterization I've seen/heard yet, it's not even close. Except for maybe some of DC's esp recent animated films, those are rly great too (which is actually kinda similar to your script in a lot of ways, esp Death of Superman 2018 & opening scene of JL vs Teen Titans, at least in using Legion of Doom for the latter. I wouldn't be surprised if you predicted or "inspired" those animated films in some way where the writers actually got ideas from this series lol. Also amazing how you pretty much predicted aquaman before it even came out). Completely consistent w/ the universe they're in. WB you need to hire this man! Looking forward to pt 3 & 4 (& hopefully more), well all your vids tbh, I subbed immediately lol.
Aquaman: I'm really strong and durable Batman: I thought you talked to fish Aquaman: Uhh... 😂😂😂 This whole scenario is masterful, sir... sell it to DC and make a killing and they can finally make a good JL!
Great story! I love how connected you made everyone. I especially loved how you gave Victor such an importance when he influenced Batman, but using his experience as a quarterback.
How do you get the dialogue interactions between characters better than the actual movie got them. Like seriously, the conversation between Victor and Barry, the entire power sharing bit, and the code names part were spot on. Amazing job on the new plot by the way, I would definitely watch this movie if you made it.
Dude. You're banter with the team when they were making the codenames was by far amazing. XD You should be brought on board as the writer. You're great!
13:34 reminds me A LOT of the JLU cartoon like "the Justice Lords went overboard because their Flash died. So as long as you focus on keeping ME alive, that'll never happen here!" "...Let's put a pin in that theory to explore another time."
Joey Salads you’re always so chill in the comments sections I see you in. You seem like a nice guy. But then when I check your videos, it’s the same garbage as back when you were a jerk to everyone. What gives? I bet you could do better, my man.
that'd be adorable! Maybe that's where Batman gets the idea of using a Lightning bolt since his pajama already had that as a pattern. His helmet is just him using something to cover his face like a plastic gray hat or a grey cap he tends to use
this just makes me angry... because of how good the movie actually could have been! DC/WB should just hire Nando already so these characters can be done Justice!
It should've been DC's saving grace, but it didn't feel epic. It's the first time we're seeing the DC characters we grew up with (I always loved the animated Justice League and Unlimited, always preferred them over Marvel) team up on the big screen, and it ended up being...ok. Not a summer blockbuster, not this great event...just ok. It was incredibly disappointing, and DC needs to get their heads out of their asses.
The last bit of artifacts hints at an interesting Fate, and hit me somewhat out of the Blue. Man, I can't wait for it, but I had a 50/50 chance of getting that right.
This part was great, for establishing much needed character relationships, conflicts, and development. Can't wait for the next one. See you in another two weeks or so.
During the Hermes story I really hope that Barry would mention smthn like "Hey that reminds me of Jay's helmet! He was this old guy who lived next door to me as a kid, very nice, pretty jumpy though. Never saw me coming but would always laugh at it after it"
Hermès story can be that he saves his family of gods from the Titans who have escaped by breaking the time barrier to go into the past and stop the Titans from ever escaping...finally realizing his worth after a lifetime of feeling useless. Foreshadowing his future role in the flashpoint.
Montez Demarrco Do you mean the CW Flash? Because Netflix never made their own Flash show. Most people wanted Grant Gustin to play the Flash in JL, but it would require too much paperwork, probably would cause the show to end or to be put on hiatus, and would have to ignore all of his history on the tv show or risk confusing people who haven't seen the show.
#ReleaseTheYouShouldProbablyMoveCut
Totally. If you look at the Twitter screenshot in the video, you can see my reply with Internet Celebrity Nick Mason's terrific Cyborg fan poster.
#ReleaseTheMyTurnCut
#ReleaseTheNandoVMoviesCut
#ReleaseTheCutWhereSupermanDoesntHaveAWeirdCGIMouthAndInsteadJustHasAMustache
This guy copied my comment and got a heart wtf
By the way I liked the "It's not an 'S'" throwback in choosing Wonder Woman's codename.
Also Barry should have asked Bruce what his codename will be and Bruce will answer " *I'm Batman!* ", then Barry says he knows but he just wanted to hear him say it in person to have a nerdgasm.
That would have been fun
Zach Ryder Khandaq Black Adam
RELEASE THE ZACH RYDER CUT
I'm not entirely sure if this is the comment Nando uses in part 4
Zach Ryder I thought the not Ws comment was a boob joke. Didnt even remember the s isn't a s thing from man of steel lol
Wait, the Flash was in Suicide Squad? Man I totally forgot.
Speaking of Flash: one big, necessary change would be to *MAKE HIM RUN LIKE AN ACTUAL RUNNER* rather than flailing his arms about like a rag doll.
I also forgot he was in that movie
The way he swings his arms and how he kinda slides across the ground reminded me of an Olympic speed skater
Having him naruto running would have looked more realistic than what they did in the movie
not to mention the way he seems to throw his feet out to the side as he runs, he looks like he's struggling to not trip over constantly as if he's recovering from a stumble on every footfall
@@greenEntertainer. naruto running is not realistic. If you naruto run your arms become dead weight
The dialogue you wrote between Flash and Cyborg is so much more meaningful than what we got in the original. So glad that you are making changes so the characters actually impact each other.
Also, love the *pirates* line.
Barry: I was thinking, the Flash
Everybody: (snickers)
Barry: No, not li-
Arthur: No, no, I get it, we just have to stay away from Parks, Schools
Barry: How about something like, Lightning Lad
Arthur: Too late, you're the Flash
Diana: I think it's a Lovely name
this would be the best part of the movie
It is good but it has one flaw; writers generally avoid that kind of jokes because only work in English, and this movies rely a lot in foreign market. The joke for flash = flasher does not work in Chinese or Spanish for example (of course a creative team doing the dub/sub may find a similar that works with the language but studios often prefer not to take risks)
I hated how weird, awkward and dumb they made Barry. But that joke seems more in his character. Barry Allen is awkwardly cute and the Flash is the better half of him, wise cracking and smart.
Another joke could be:
Bruce: This is Diana.
Arthur: What are you supposed to be?
Alfred: She’s a goddess.
Barry: We can tell. (Not thinking and flustered by her beauty)
Silence.
Diana to Barry: (chuckles) You’re cute. (Then walks on to the plane)
Cyborg follows snickering, Aquaman mumbles “cute” and makes a pained expression. Bruce has lighter expression on his face clearly amused and walks on to the plane leaving flash behind.
Bruce: You coming?
Barry: No, I’m just gonna run back in time and kill myself.
Bruce: You can do that.
Barry: (walking) no but I wish.
And that establishes that Barry is still in the fledging phase of his superhero life whilst establishing to this audience what the flash can and can’t do.
i agree. this bit of dialogue would have been the best!
*_lightning lad_*
Honestly it would.
Man, all the bonding stuff between Barry and Victor, Victor and Bruce, and Barry and Diana really moved me... You totally nailed the human moments here! Like, this is the stuff I hardcore want to see in a DC movie, because I care about the characters. Cool action is not the main selling point for me.
This is what makes the MCU so amazing to me: the party in Age of Ultron, the conflict between Steve and Tony in Civil War, the teamwork of Natasha, Steve and Sam in Winter Soldier, and the great team-ups in Infinity War! The DCEU needs this too!
Too bad snyder can't write moments like these
2nd3rd1st they just need to meet up at a Cafe
gargoyles9999 Like, sitting in a booth right by the window type stuff? Isn't that a little suspicious?
2nd3rd1st yeah but then you can have other heroes join them like the Avengers
gargoyles9999 That type of meta humor never works, I don't think people want to watch something like that.
“Too late you’re the flash.”
“It’s a lovely name.”
That was good
Haven't heard the words "Justice League" and "Part 2" together in a sentence in quite a while, this will be a great video
Earth Fire Water i love this comment
I have just not in a positive context.
DC should hire you to write their next Justice League film script, if they make it. Would LOVE to see your version of the movie.
Alex L. You deserve more likes
that's like asking jesus to come back, but this was a great video
That's very good.
there is a myth about hermes that could help Barry.
once in mythology hermes stole the sun cows of Apollo and then was granted with godhood by Zeus himself. you really should use this legend for Barry.
I like that a lot.
Bat Cow
Nando could also work this into Superman's resurrection, if he wanted to in the future.
Wasn’t Hermes a baby when he did that?
@@everest5718 yes, but you could say that Barry is a baby super hero at this time
POST CREDIT SCENE IDEA: After the final act of justice league, we see cyborg and Bruce, in the batcave. Cyborg is doing some calculations while Bruce is fixing up the batmobile. "Superman, how was he?" Cyborg asks. "He was a hero" Bruce replies. "The one I never was" "If he were to be here, right now, how do you think the world would react?" He asks(Cyborg). "I don't know, why are you asking? Bruce turns around and sees cyborg in the batcomputer with motherbox and Superman files open. "Because I think we could bring him back"... SCREEN CUTS TO BLACK.
I like it. I have two already planned but something very similar to that was going to be the third one.
@@NandovMovies thx
Even though it’s predictable that they’d bring him back, that end credit scene sounds like it would hype me up so much
"He was a hero. The one I never was". Sorry, but that doesn't quite sound like Bats. He was never envious of Superman and it kinda sounds like that's what you're implying. How about, "He was a hero. A hero who showed us that justice doesn't always have to come from the darkness". By the way, that was a quote from the Justice League animated series, episode titled Hereafter, where Batman is mourning the loss of Superman at his memorial.
Bruce : "He was a hero. The type I can never be."
The only reason I didn’t click on the video when I got the notification was bc I waited for an opportunity of food and relaxation to fully enjoy your video. It was painful to resist but it was worth it.
Pluto Grayson this is literally exactly what I did lmao
I'm doing it now! Lmao
Me too. Wow, funny how we all think alike.
I had work
Sammme I was at work.
Wait a minute
Anhk- Dr Fate
Hawk- Hawkman/Hawkgirl
Scarab- Blue Beetle
Lucien D’Aversa eyup.
my man
Slowbro.jpg
Ikr
Fourth one just needs to reference Black Adam/Shazam and you've got 4 potential future Leaguers.
did you say....”pirates eating the tourists”? Now I haven’t seen Jurassic Park in a while, but I don’t think that’s how it goes
That's a reference to one of Ian Malcolm's lines in the movie "Well, when Pirates of the Caribbean breaks down, the pirates don't eat the tourists." Jurassic Park is one of my favorite movies.
Nando v Movies haha right! just thought it was a slip of the tongue, but that’s pretty damn clever
@@NandovMovies So it wasn't a mistake and just a sneaky reference?
...nice :D
DtoonerGames 7 well how do you know the dinosaurs don't see themselves as pirates? Then you have the best of both worlds. Dinosaur pirates or pirates dinosaurs
@@shmee123ful may I steal you idea for a D&D campaign?
I got an Idea for how to solve the problem with flash suit! Let's say the Justice league was kept a secret during a couple of months, and when flash gets his suit from batman, he goes to test it. Then when he comes back, he tells batman he even got to stop a robbery. The robbery is obviously the one he stopped in Suicide squad.
YASS
Love it!
Suicide Squad taking place in the future can be tricky. Superman is alive in the movie. So as long as DC remembers that for future movies we’re good.
@@HeavyC31190 doesn't they say he is dead in SS? Otherwise this scene I made up could have been after supermans return
@@samuelf7163 yes, Superman is dead in Suicide Squad
Yeah I completely forgot he’s dead in the movie. So this still works :)
Even your whatever-story about Hermes was good. Come on!
1:58 John Hammond: All major theme parks have had delays. When they opened Disneyland in 1956, nothing worked!
Ian Malcolm: Yeah John, but if the Pirates of the Caribbean breaks down, the pirates don't eat the tourists.
Just realized that if they did a Spider-Man Homecoming-esque Barry and Bruce scene, the raggedy costume could totally have been Jay Garrick's costume.
YES!!!
I love it.
that's brilliant
No I think the helmet would work, cuz the Silver Age Flash cowl design is like a colored, more form-fitted version of the Mercury/Jay Garrick helmet (it still has the "wings," now lightning-shaped). Perhaps Barry starts off with a simple metal dish that is aerodynamic (like a bike helmet) and is metallic for maximum head protection (and maybe it could be spray-painted red, but the speed of his running has chipped off a lot of the paint so it's just a slight red stain on the back of the helmet, if anything. Also, maybe he painted some small yellow emblems on the helmet, but the speed elongated them into streaks, like the "wings" on Jay's helmet), and he wears just some jeans and a shirt with a lightning bolt, made heat-resistant by some homemade means that Barry designs. Then when Bruce makes the more form-fitted version, he integrates the helmet into the rest of the costume as a cowl, colors it red, and we get the Silver Age design made with space-age materials. It's a decent nod to Jay Garrick, since I doubt these movies would do much with Jay Garrick himself or the Justice Society, at least anytime soon.
Or better yet, his prototype costume could be the CW Flash outfit!!! ^^
I fucking love this rewrite
I genuinely laughed when Barry was giving the code names
That type of interaction is so well done
Why didn’t you write justice league
They didn't ask.
Nando v Movies they really should have
In this version I can picture Aquaman messing with Flash when they first meet,. like Aquaman telling Flash to get of his seat, and when Flash superspeeds to another one Aquman instead just uses Flash's previous chair as a foot rest. And Flash with his moth open holds his hand up as if saying "are you seeing this" to Batman who just replies "Settle down we're about to get started" before going over the introduction or the beginning of their plan.
The Mother Boxes could shrink like the AllSpark from the Transformers movie.
If the Mind Stone taught us anything, it's that a macguffin can be any size the plot demands at any given moment
1:59 hold up, did you just say pirates eating tourists
Yeah, Jurassic Park: The Curse of the Black Pearl is a classic, don't you know? 😁
One of Ian Malcolm’s lines is, “ When the Pirates of the Caribbean ride breaks down the Pirates don’t eat the Tourists.”
@@Day67733 huh, neat
No, he actually said, "Parrots eating tortoise."
almost commented the same thing haha
(19:41) “Barry and Victor connects over being accidents” yeah I’d probably be able to connect if I were there
It would’ve been a fun little nod if when Bruce was teaching Barry to fight that Barry would’ve been all like “I can’t do that I’ve tried and I can’t” or something like that and then Bruce is all like “yes you can just do it again” and Barry, again says “I cant do it I’ve tried my hardest” and now Bruce ,all worked up, says “You’re not trying hard enough Robin!” and Barry just sits there looking confused and Bruce is like “Sorry, uhm just take 5 minutes”
Be kind of funny if Bruce actually says, "You're not trying hard enough, Dick!" and Barry looks at him all hurt.
PaulyCatz82 Haha! That's a good one.
PaulyCatz82 I feel like “Jason” would be a better nod and unfortunately that would make me sad
I feel that might be a little too on the nose, friend.
Ok, now I wanna go and re-watch Justice League... oh... wait... it's not the movie described here... damn...
I think it would be funny if the flash said "we need a team name...what about the titans?" And aqua man was like "that's the worst team name I've ever heard" and cyborg was like "I think that sounds kind of cool needs work though"
I like that a lot.
Nando v Movies thanks man big fan of your videos
mc bad robot voice ... yes.
Diana should be the one to dislike the name
Fernando Giubilei that could work
Bruce: Great, now that we understand our capabilities...
Barry: Wait, shouldn't we know each other's weaknesses too? Like, I have a problem with sub-zero temperatures.
[Aurther and Diana start to protest]
Bruce: I already know what everyone's weaknesses are.
[drops the mic]
This. So much this. That's way more in line with Batman. In fact, it's his primary character trait in the comics. He has a system for every superhero in case they turn evil.
See, I get why you'd expect batman to know everyone's weakness already, but if we were picking up with the justice league after they had been together for a while (and if all these heroes had previously shown solo movies that showed their weaknesses already) that would be perfect. However, I think in this version we're meeting them as they first start interacting with each other. There's no real history of Atlante and or Amazons or speedsters in this universe, and even the Greatest Detective can't conjure it up out of nowhere.
I think the perfect way would be doing both. Bruce asks them, because he wants to see if they trust each other and him enough to disclose their weakness, but he already knows, as we see in a later scene with Alfred, or a member of the JL checks the Batcomputer and discovers Batmans plans for taking down everybody.
Remember, Bruce already has Luthor's secret research on all these guys.
He can have knowledge of there weaknesses already, he can even still try to coax the info out of them for team building reasons. However Bruce shouldn't divulge this information, as it becomes a major plot point in the JL sequel when a villain steals this information and uses it to almost kill the Justice League. Resulting in Batman being kicked off the team, and the JL being fractured while simultaneously preparing for Darksieds invasion.
I LOVED the codename scene, so funny! (And it made me realize that yeah, Diana's been around for 100 years in this continuity and she doesn't have her official superohero name, not even in passing? You would think there would be a nice story/myth/legend to go with that photo from the Wonder Woman movie by this point in the timeline... nice Flash XD) And the bonding moment between Flash and WW was sweet as well, and I like Barry and Cyborg's budding friendship (: Can't wait for Act 2B!
I just love the way you wrote Flash. And it feels consistent with the way the actor portrayed him in the movie. But BETTER. GG
maybe Bruce makes a dark colored suit for Barry, but barry paints it red..? What do you guys think?
That could be fun. And Barry adds the lightning bolts because they look cool.
Nando v Movies or also because of Diana mentioning Hermes and Barry running (ha) with the idea...
YEAH!
+nando v movies hey, even with the talk Diana has with Barry about Hermes to lift his spirits, may she can say something like he reminds her of him (hermes) and after he leaves (or she does, she wonders about re-incarnation and you can see that moment of realization hit her face and from then on, she regards him as family, a little brother?) But I think in the comics, they had a love affair?? or Was that Diana and Aquaman, where she kills Arthur's wife? I'm starting to confuse myself - sorry.Gist is, I don't know what's canon but it could be cool if Flash is a reincarnated God (Hermes who is what, Diana's brother/uncle/cousin?) and she realizes this and takes an extra protective shine to him. Whaddya think?
Maybe Beuce gives him a suit meant for a Robin, saying that the materials should hold up against his speeds. Then, later on, the R gets damaged during combat, somewhat resembling a lightning bolt, and at the very end when Barry is adding the wings to the suit, he solidifies the bolt as his logo.
The whole Flash naming conversation is one of my favorite things now.
That Cyborg retcon and Mother Box shrinking combo was genius. Seriously, I don't understand why DC made the Mother Boxes so huge, it's just not practical.
SAJ-Man the Sonic Fan well honestly... I kinda like it. It just looks like something the alien. Yeah it’s just a box but not earthly and it looks pretty good and it still it’s pretty easy to keep with you. Especially if your a new god
Alberts Choise; I hear what you're saying. I like the design of the Mother Boxes too, it's just... why are they so big? They can keep the look of them, I just think they should be closer to the size of the Mother Boxes in the comics.
They look closer to Father Boxes, they act similar to them too.
Adron Duell; I'm completely unfamiliar with Father Boxes, what's the difference between them and Mother Boxes?
@@saj-manthesonicfan1893 To oversimplify: A mother box is basically like a super iPhone. A Father box is basically a miniature nuke.
Can someone hire this man pleaseeee!!!!!
25:15
The Ankh of Anubis = Doctor Fate with his Egyptian backstory and his use of the symbol
A hawk = Hawk man or Hawk girl or some Thanagarian i’m guessing
A scarab = a talking scarab gives Blue Beetle his abilities.
amazing nods to future members of the justice league! ;)
I just realized that if this was the real Justics League movie, the Snyder Cut of Justice League would have instead just been a sequel. Superman is finally brought back in the black costume after being gone for like four movies, Darkseid and Stephen Wolf show up, Cyborg’s dad dies, destroying the last part of his human life, and Flash time travels. Perfect continuation.
Only negative is that we've haven't seen or heard about the villains of the movie for an entire act. A simple cutaway to a scene of them or something like that would definitely keep the focus on "stopping the bad guys" than "forming the justice league" which isn't the original point for them teaming up in this version.
Other than that, this is so much better and the interactions between the characters are great, can't wait to see the 3rd Act.
Well he said this was only part of the second act, I assume 2B will be more action packed
The little red haired girl from across the street Yes. But still, not having your villains in 2A isn't great.
I think Nando is going for not knowing the villains, only Batman knows each of them, but like Batman is doesn't go over it too much
Yash Bansal But there should be one or two cut away scenes to them. Establish/Reinforce a certain dynamic. Mention the Smithsonian so it makes sense for later. Just stuff like that.
I guess Copperhead is still around, she's just not so important for this part. T hey could try to get something out of her about the Legions plan. Leaving her alone in the original Bat Cave would be a terrible Idea, so she's still with them in a place where she can't hear them
I love that this takes place in D.C. Even if they fail in this first encounter, saving a few people during it excuses The Washington Post to publish the incredibly cheesy front page header reading "DC's Justice League Defends Smithsonian". It's terrible, but I love it.
Or if they don't have the team name by that point it could say "DC Heroes Save Smithsonian" Either way it's a cute little thing to throw in as a "blink and you'll miss it" kinda thing.
yes, i love the idea of the heroes of the event in DC being known as "the dc heroes"
Wonder Woman: W's? These aren't-
Batman: 00100110011010001010
Wonder Woman: I guess they're W's
ah yes, the binary for 'hope'
I have never laughed so loudly and so suddenly. Thank you!
I'm sorry II'm stupid what the hell does the binary mean?
Binary is essentially the language of computers. It's how they process information, in 1's and 0's.
Just'in Case I translated it and it came out as nothing.
“Bruce always wanted a family”
*cuts to his parents graves*
I'm a huge DC fan and I'm so happy that you have taken the story line of "legion of Doom" it's the best to start and unite the JL and also the way you have taken the story line, if WB or DC would have done this as actual movie I would have been so happy, these 2 parts kept a smile on my face just imagining the story...get the next part in soon...thank you...😊
You need to make A Nando Cinematic Universe where you make a Marvel or Dc universe.
Edit I know you said that you won’t do that for this series but you can make a second series where you would rewrite JL if you made the universe or do a MCU reboot with the X men and F4
HiSHE?
There is no Nando Cinematic Universe. He said so in the last video.
Marvel and DC interconnected universe already exists. It's called the emalgum universe look it up
*Amalgam
@@calebelson1 Yeah but they combine heroes in that. I'd like a universe where all the characters reside in the same world.
I've actually thought about this at length and have ideas that span decades.
The amount I smiled and laughed during this correlates directly with the amount of disappointment I had for JL, which was a lot.
13:17 you mean like...CAPTAIN COLD???
QueWea how have you already seen 13 minutes when the video just came out or are my notifications off
@@shivmahida5652 he posted the video like 30 minutes ago, he deleted it because of an error in the editing
HOW??
My man
QueWea oh that makes sense
You articulate everything so well. I can literally see the scenes coming to life by your vocals and description. Glad I found this channel. Followed everywhere, I recommend everyone else does the same... (If you haven't yet)
AListProductions, your RUclips channel is awesome!!!
Aquaman: "Okay Flasher."
Aquaman: "No no no, I get it I get it. So we have to stay away from Parks and schools."
Flash: "How about Lightning Lad?"
Aquaman: "Too late, you're Flash!"
I'm really liking your version of Justice League, can't wait to see the next part.
It's gonna be something.
I’ve been waiting for this, don’t rush yourself tho quality over quantity
Absolutely. I think two weeks is about the right amount of time for one of these. About a week per ten minutes of movie, rounding down.
ok, we're getting there, but STILL NO FOREHEAD TATTOOS? cmon dude
damaged
"Super Fast"
"Talks to fish"
"You should probably move"
"Dresses like a bat"
HOW ELSE WILL WE KNOW THEY'RE DAMAGED?
Blyzer “I dig it.”
I love the codename scene, I wish that was in the actual film.
Along every other scene you've rewritten
Blue beetle, hawk man/woman, and dr fate I hope the last artifact is Shazam/Black Adam reladed
I got so many chills when he mentioned the three artifacts/easter eggs and then I remembered this isn't part of the real DCEU :(
The lines between Wonder Woman and Aquaman could set up the Amazonian-Atlantian war
The flashpoint !
If you see this, Nando. I just want to tell you that I discovered your channel a week ago and I watched all of your videos in five days. Keep up the amazing work, you rock!
Thanks. You came at just the right time.
I did the same when I found this channel last year. Good stuff.
Check out 24 frames of Nick, and captain midnight too if you like this type on content.
Captain Midnight is great. Been subed to him for a while. But I've haven't heard of 24 frames of Nick. I'll totally check him out.
"The Pirates eat the Tourists" the perfect description of Jurassic Park,
You do know the reference, right?
"we need a big strong warrior to join the team"
"But you're already on the team, Diana."
The Flash's speed don't have to be a ret-con. You can explain it with "him being slower now, because now he is surrrounded by gods and is looking down on himself. He wasn't surrounded by gods before... So then he thought more about himself.
I forget this channel exists then a new video comes out and it's all I can think about
Yep, DC totally needs you right now. Have you talked to Geoff Johns or something? Your story is very awesome!
I like where you're taking Act 2 of your version of the Justice League movie so far. The team characters development is great and I could relate to your version of Aquaman.
-The scene, where each teammate gets their superhero names, reminds me of the one from X-Men: First Class.
Side note: Batman actually has a Batcave in Washington DC. As far as I know, it only appeared in a Batman: The Brave and the Bold episode where Darkseid was invaded Earth.
A "Ankh" a "Hawk" and a "Scarab"
-Doctor Fate, Hawkman and Hawkgirl, and Blue Beetle right...
Cyborg lecturing Bruce on team leadership is my favourite scene. Cyborg tends to be a kind of "out of nowhere" character when you put him with the League, but he always makes his office his own and commands respect
I know I'm rly late to the party here & I'm just on pt 2, BUT THIS IS AMAZING. All the character interactions, the lines you wrote for them, down to their (new-ish) personalities, all their mannerisms, all their little quirks & speaking tendencies, their jokes & humor & lil jabs at each other, their bonding moments, the way they carry out those lines, even (or esp) your voice acting of them embodies them perfectly to the tee! Like it's just so believable & so natural, it's pretty perfect tbh. That is exactly how I'd imagine they would talk & act. Bravo, you got a gift. Great job rly bringing them to life. Best characterization I've seen/heard yet, it's not even close. Except for maybe some of DC's esp recent animated films, those are rly great too (which is actually kinda similar to your script in a lot of ways, esp Death of Superman 2018 & opening scene of JL vs Teen Titans, at least in using Legion of Doom for the latter. I wouldn't be surprised if you predicted or "inspired" those animated films in some way where the writers actually got ideas from this series lol. Also amazing how you pretty much predicted aquaman before it even came out). Completely consistent w/ the universe they're in. WB you need to hire this man! Looking forward to pt 3 & 4 (& hopefully more), well all your vids tbh, I subbed immediately lol.
You are a master story teller. I want to see this movie you have totally improved it. Petition to write the novel at least!
He is an ok story teller, but a master story maker
This was... AMAZING!! You should really be a writer or director for movies. I mean THIS justice league would probably compete with the avengers movie!
23:14 ''I guess they're W's'' definitely would have been a fun scene.
Aquaman: I'm really strong and durable
Batman: I thought you talked to fish
Aquaman: Uhh...
😂😂😂
This whole scenario is masterful, sir... sell it to DC and make a killing and they can finally make a good JL!
Great story! I love how connected you made everyone. I especially loved how you gave Victor such an importance when he influenced Batman, but using his experience as a quarterback.
This video is somehow better than the entire dceu. I can't wait for part 3.
I watch this so many times like it's already a movie.
Just you wait. It's gonna get real.
Me too, friend.
How do you get the dialogue interactions between characters better than the actual movie got them. Like seriously, the conversation between Victor and Barry, the entire power sharing bit, and the code names part were spot on. Amazing job on the new plot by the way, I would definitely watch this movie if you made it.
this video series is so tight. cant wait for the next!
Dude. You're banter with the team when they were making the codenames was by far amazing. XD You should be brought on board as the writer. You're great!
13:34 reminds me A LOT of the JLU cartoon like "the Justice Lords went overboard because their Flash died. So as long as you focus on keeping ME alive, that'll never happen here!"
"...Let's put a pin in that theory to explore another time."
I will give u $100 for part 3 right now!
Joey Salads you’re always so chill in the comments sections I see you in. You seem like a nice guy. But then when I check your videos, it’s the same garbage as back when you were a jerk to everyone. What gives? I bet you could do better, my man.
Bob Pickleson lmao he’s still putting gone wrong
wtf, you got good taste in channels, man
Bro I didn't know you were a fan boixD fuck yeah Joey👊 I'll put a hundo down as well
I thought you would be to busy making black people look like violent people.
Amazing character interactions! You're definitely making their personalities, histories, and character arcs mesh together well. Great vid!
16:02
Your voice impressions of all the characters, especially Diana and Berry, are great!
I think barry's first "pajamas" suit should be like Jay Garrick's suit but without the helmet
that'd be adorable! Maybe that's where Batman gets the idea of using a Lightning bolt since his pajama already had that as a pattern. His helmet is just him using something to cover his face like a plastic gray hat or a grey cap he tends to use
this just makes me angry... because of how good the movie actually could have been!
DC/WB should just hire Nando already so these characters can be done Justice!
It should've been DC's saving grace, but it didn't feel epic. It's the first time we're seeing the DC characters we grew up with (I always loved the animated Justice League and Unlimited, always preferred them over Marvel) team up on the big screen, and it ended up being...ok. Not a summer blockbuster, not this great event...just ok. It was incredibly disappointing, and DC needs to get their heads out of their asses.
19:21 “Hey, could you say that one thing from back in the day?”
“You should probably move.”
The Super Friends thing made me laugh
you could've added flash picking his codename
"What about savitar "
"nope too late youre the flash "
for all the other movies you change one minor thing for the justice league you have to change pretty much everything for it to sound nice ^^
great job
The last bit of artifacts hints at an interesting Fate, and hit me somewhat out of the Blue. Man, I can't wait for it, but I had a 50/50 chance of getting that right.
This part was great, for establishing much needed character relationships, conflicts, and development.
Can't wait for the next one.
See you in another two weeks or so.
During the Hermes story I really hope that Barry would mention smthn like "Hey that reminds me of Jay's helmet! He was this old guy who lived next door to me as a kid, very nice, pretty jumpy though. Never saw me coming but would always laugh at it after it"
Hermès story can be that he saves his family of gods from the Titans who have escaped by breaking the time barrier to go into the past and stop the Titans from ever escaping...finally realizing his worth after a lifetime of feeling useless. Foreshadowing his future role in the flashpoint.
Don’t worry I’ve only watched this 58 times waiting for part 3
I hope you have already sent a cv to WB
I was a fan on Part 1. This is now the ret-conned version in my mind.
The editing for the name choosing scene was so perfect! Those clips worked so well with the dialogue you scripted.
That dialogue and the scene of coming up with the names, I love. I'd pay a full money ticket for just that scene, lol.
The Superfriends reference would be a bit on the nose but I love it.
Totally. As long as stuff like that is quick, I don't mind it.
An Ankh, a Hawk and a Scarab? Ok, I thought it was just an Easter egg before, but you're going to expand the League, aren't you?
the flash is a TERRIBLE runner in justice league, like god he runs like hes on ice
Yeah, that's the point. His skills include ice skating. And running like that distributes energy more.
Montez Demarrco Do you mean the CW Flash? Because Netflix never made their own Flash show. Most people wanted Grant Gustin to play the Flash in JL, but it would require too much paperwork, probably would cause the show to end or to be put on hiatus, and would have to ignore all of his history on the tv show or risk confusing people who haven't seen the show.
That was fabulous. Not just the narration but also the editing. Looking forward to Part 3 (or 2B)
"An ankh, a hawk, a scarab" I see what you did there. Nice and subtle.
Ok that name scene idea is probably the best thing I've ever heard.
*oK FlAShER*
If I didn't dislike Warner Bros. Justice League before, I do now. And we're only halfway through.
Welcome back to a should be movie directors RUclips chanel
The scene you described where Barry prompts Victor to say his catch phrase legit gave me goosebumps.Great setup.
1:59 “the pirates eating the tourists”. That’s a very dark and disturbing mistake.
Shoulda photoshoped in John Cena when you showed Cyborg in that last part since he wasn't supposed to be there. Other than that great video!!