Writing task 2 (academic) It is believed that some individuals think providing home education to children is best for their development, whereas others think institutional education is important for children. This essay aims to discuss both sides and showcase their advantages. Teaching children from home is termed as home schooling, and it can be beneficial to both the child and the parents. The child has access to education within their own home and to various educational material, that may br available online or offline through books. It also puts less financial burden on the parents for educational investment. It is suited towards those who may have a lack of means of transportation, or especially for disabled children who can attain specialised education and teaching methods adjusted towards their needs. On the other hand, children going to school for education have advantage of socializing. School going children have enhanced development in social behavior due to interacting with various instructors as well as classmates. Having friends adds to a child's personality and development in the future. This approach is suited for parents who may not be properly educated or are too occupied in their work lives to teach their children personally at the comfort of their own home. In conclusion, I believe children should go to school, not only does it have a great impact on their education, it also adds the benefit of being socially active and friendly due to interaction with different people as well as being able to participate in events and activities hosted by the school.
Absolutely, home schooling can indeed involve private teachers and tutors, providing a broader range of educational experiences beyond just parent-led instruction. This can enrich the learning environment significantly.
Task 2 (Academic) It is argued by some that it is important for children to study at home. Others, however, believe in school education. Home education can boost family bonds, while school education helps to foster a sense of community. This essay agrees with the latter because being part of the society is more important.
While some families consider homeschooling as the best method to benefit their children's skills, there are others who simply prefer the traditional school out of their homes for their education. However, I strongly consider that children get more benefits by going to an educative institutions than being taught at home.
Dear Sir or Madam. I am thrilled to hear about the upcoming new cycle path system that will be introduced to reduce traffic in the area. I am writing to you to explain why I support it. I believe this is an excellent plan because the area has been suffering from severe traffic congestion. Introducing a new cycle path system not only reduces traffic congestion but also reduces the amount of smoke emitted from vehicles and automobiles. My main reason to support this plan is the worsening traffic congestion. During peak hours, automobiles, and other vehicles are widely used, causing congestion and delays in delivering services. Another reason is that it can help lessen the emissions from these automobiles. Therefore, improving the air quality. I would like to suggest other means to reduce traffic congestion by improving our public transportation system. This will encourage people to use public transport rather than private transport. Thus, reducing traffic congestion. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Sincerely. Dennis Jason Bago
Task 2 It is often argued that learning from home is the best for the development of children, while others say that it is more effective for their development to go to school. Although children can focus on their study when they are taught at home, I believe that it is better for them to go to school as they can develop their social skills.
I was afraid of IELTS as naturally we're scared of all tests but I thought this was going to be way harder... I was wrong. I had only a week to prepare and got a band 7 overall. I just watched a few RUclips videos like this one, took practice tests on british council & IDP websites, and gave it a shot! Also, the result came out the next day (super fast!). I gave a computer-based exam on 17 August, 24. Plus I was sure my speaking didn't go well but guess what, my score's the highest in it! I think there's lenient marking. I gave it through British Council. Listening 7.5 Reading 6.5 Writing 6 Speaking 7 I must say listening was the easiest for me. One advice I'll give is to stick to paper-based if your typing's slow. I decided on computer one as I wanted the results early. Although my typing's way to slow, I managed somehow 😂
It's completely normal to feel nervous before the test! 😊 Remember, you've been preparing, and you're more ready than you think. Take a deep breath, trust your practice, and approach each section calmly. You’ve got this! 💪
@@eritharaundi8430 Don't be scared. I got to know that this test is nothing as compared to the rest of the procedures. There are much more difficult steps (like finding scholarships, applying to universities etc.). So be calm, practice, and go for it. You can do it!
That's great advice! 💯 Staying calm and focusing on your practice is key. The test is just one step in the journey-keep pushing forward, and you’ve got this! 💪😊
Dear sir, I am writing with regards to the new circle path system about to be brought by our local council. This is really long over due. This is indeed a very positive development, because it will be of a great benefit to the community as a whole. Apart from reducing traffic congestion to the barest minimum; it will also curb the problem of accidents on our roads thereby saving the lives of our citizens, Also this a step in the right direction as this will speak volume about the present local council I would love to chip in here that, if you could through your kind office set up a unit of traffic control officers in all the routes where there are usually traffic build-up so as support your intended gesture ; this will ultimately make our day-to day lives bearable. Thank you sir, and keep up the good work. Yours Faithfully, KANU NGOZI I
Children's education is significantly important and whether they should be sent to educational institutions, or home-schooled has long been a topic of debate. I believe it is apt to send children to established educational institutions to receive their education. Children from different cultures, social backgrounds, and even ethinicities gather at a school.
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to the proposed new cycle path system to reduce traffic in our city. I strongly support this initiative for two reasons. Aside from the obvious reason of reducing vehicular traffic in our city, the program will encourage our people to adapt a more active lifestyle by encouraging them to use bicycles to go around the city. This will greatly benefit the community’s overall health. Moreover, the program will also help reduce the adverse impact of carbon monoxide on the environment. When we take care of our environment, we take care of ourselves, too. Lastly, I would like to propose an additional program that is worth studying to reduce traffic in the city. Other countries successfully use a number scheme whereby vehicles with plate numbers ending in a particular number would be restricted for use in a particular day during the weekdays. I hope the council will take a look at this traffic scheme and decide if can be implemented in our own city. Thank you for your time. I wish success to the endeavors of the council to reduce traffic in the city. Yours faithfully, Maria
Hey Tom! I know you mate! You're a Very good teacher, i remember i saw Your one video few yrs ago from your channel (Eat Sleep Dream English) about England, Britain UK difference I like it so much
Varying opinions exist about how children should be educated. While some are convinced that homeschooling is the best choice, others hold that attending school is the most ideal one. Of course, each option presents it unique advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I prefer that children learn at school, in company of their peers and the reasons for my preference, as well as the pros and cons of either option, will be outlined in the subsequent paragraphs of this essay.
Thanks for the video, it's very useful! I'd like to participate in the Academic writing task: It has often been said that kids learning at home acquire the highest education level, whether for the rest of the people is more valuable that kids can go to school. In my opinion, children who go to school enjoy a richer social environment that shapes their life character behavior.
Task 2 (Academic) "It takes a village to raise a child." this quote shows how much effort we put into children's parenting, which brings us to the topic of which educational facilities have the best outcomes for children's development between home-schooling and school. As a teacher, I have experienced many student with wide variety of upbringing situations... This is some of the answer from my academic writing task 2 example. If it is still available, please give your opinion on my writing. I'm so stressed because I tend to write a sentence with many complicated clauses all the time as sometime it can be hard to understand.
Task 2 answer : Many parents believe that their children have to educate by his own parents at home to get an education, but there are also those who argue that children have to going to school to get an education. In my opinion, we must try to understand case by case because educate children to boost their development is actually an option like whether we will choose tailor made clothes or market clothes produced in the factory. It depends on their parent’s time and resource too.
If the children were going to school, its system have set some standard for student. It consists of the curriculum, training for teachers, supporting facilities in school and so on. For example in elementary school, In first and second grade, the student will learn about simple math, language. Later in fifth and sixth grade learn about natural science and social science followed by an national standardization examination at the end of education. Student will get education dan knowledge based on the system and the output may meet this curriculum. If the children were taught at home, their parents are given more freedom to determine the curriculum. As an example if they want to add some archery lesson, math for life, basic cookery lesson is more flexible. Other advantage is also their children have an undivided attention because it is more like private lesson with a few students and of course lots of time with parents. This can also be an option for parents who have children with special needs such as children with ADHD or disabilities.
Thank you for your response. Here are some suggestions to improve clarity and coherence: Grammar and Clarity: "Many parents believe that their children should be educated by their own parents at home, but others argue that children should go to school to get an education." Structure and Consistency: Use consistent tenses and clearer examples. Separate advantages of each method into distinct paragraphs.
There is a common belief that it is better for children's growth to study at home than attending school, which is a supported and preferable choice by many. For me, both sights have their own views, which will be discussed in this essay.
Thank you for your response. You have introduced the topic and acknowledged the two perspectives effectively. However, to improve your essay: Clarity and Specificity: Specify the advantages of both homeschooling and traditional schooling. For example, "Homeschooling allows for personalised learning and a flexible schedule, while traditional schooling offers social interaction and access to diverse resources." Develop Your Opinion: Clearly state your own opinion in the introduction and conclusion. For example, "In my opinion, a combination of both methods can be most beneficial for a child's development." Overall, a good start. Keep practicing to enhance your writing skills.
Dear Sir, I support the council for the new cycle path system. It will indeed reduce the traffic in the area. It is also an amazing idea as kids will be safe from other vehicles. Kids might lack the experience of driving safely in busy roads. So, the new cycle path system will surely keep the young bicycle users less likely to face big accidents. I would also suggest the council to increase awareness in people regarding the traffic rules. This could make the vehicles of the area to commute in a more organised manner. Yours faithfully, Sakshyam Khatri
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While homeschooling is getting more popular as the best way of educating children, some people also believe that the experience students get from learning at school is irreplaceable. In my opinion, school provides the best education.
Great point! 👏 There’s definitely something unique about the social and learning experiences at school. It’s all about finding the right balance that works best for each child! 🏫📚😊
A certain number of people have a notion that in order to progress with a developed personality, a child should be schooled at home, whereas certain others opine that attending school is imperative for children. I consider both aspects have their own merits of development arising from both atmospheres of school and home and this essay will outline them in detail.
Thank you for your insightful comment! Both home schooling and traditional schooling offer unique benefits. Home schooling provides personalized attention and a flexible learning environment, while traditional schooling offers social interaction and a structured curriculum. It's important to consider what works best for each child. 😊📚
Hi Tom, Thank you for the video. It's excellent explanation about the Task 1 and Task 2. I have a doubt in Task 1. It's about the Overview, where shall I write it? I write it after the Introduction or at the end of the Task. Thank you very much Tom🥰
Hi! Thanks for the kind words! 😊 For Task 1, it’s best to place the overview right after the introduction. This gives a clear summary before diving into the details. Good luck! 👍
Task 1 - general Dear local council, I hope that this email finds you well. As a resident in the area, I fully support the introduction of a new cycle path system to minimise congestion. Over the years, traffic in the neighbourhood has become worse and worse. The volume of 4-wheeled vehicles is exceeding the capacity of the road. The new cycle path system will attract more people to cycle and benefit society in terms of well-being by reducing air and noise pollution caused by traffic. Furthermore, the local council can also take into account an integrated public transport system as an alternative to reducing traffic congestion. Compared to private vehicles, trains, trams, and buses can carry a large number of passengers all at once. This will significantly lower the need to travel in private vehicles, thus reducing traffic. I hope the council will consider this suggestion, looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter. Best regard, Angel
Task 1 answer: Dear sir the new idea that the local council planned to introduce a new cycle system path is very helpful for many people and for the traffics too and the reason is because if the council haven't planned that traffic problems might increase and traffic might get slow too so it is very helpful of you to introduce this plan. and one thing i suggest for more plans to reduce traffic in the area is if you make the roads more wider because the number of cars in the area is increasing drastically and if you decrease the number of zebra crossing's because most of the zebra crossing's aren't used and people can just use two or three zebra crossing's in a single part of a road and that will help to decrease the traffic in the area and it will be helpful if you do that yours faithfully.
I am having problem in task 2 of academic part. I don't know whether i am staying on track or getting off of it and mixing too many personal examples in it. Please help me with this issue.
Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this letter to support the idea of our council to introduce a new cycle path system in Old Airport Area as it will resolve the issue of heavy traffic and it’s jamming again and again. A new cycle path system will allow the cyclists of our community, whose major ratio consists of young kids, to have a safe and secure rides. This will also avoid any mishap, injury as well as severe accidents that unfortunately happened in recent past. This system will also permit the cars and other vehicles to pass through the streets and roads without fear of hitting the cyclists. It will also help the smooth running of traffic without jamming any further. I also want to suggest some ways that can reduce the pressure of traffic in our area. For instance, banning the loaders and lorries in residential area, making some underpasses for cars and vans and overhead bridges for pedestrians to cross the roads will effectively aid the unhindered flow of traffic. Yours sincerely Name
Thank you for your detailed response. You have effectively explained why the new cycle path system is a good idea and how it will benefit both cyclists and motorists. Your letter is well-structured, and your suggestions for further reducing traffic, such as banning loaders and lorries in residential areas, creating underpasses for cars, and overhead bridges for pedestrians, are practical and relevant. Overall, you’ve done a commendable job in addressing the task. Keep practicing, and you'll continue to improve.
It's no brainer that some people think that children should be home schooled as this is the best for a child rather than enrolling in formal education I believe that that formal education is the best for a child as it enhances not just mental development but cognitive and social development of a child. Children should be taken to schools to help them fit into the society by playing and interacting with their peers and also solving problems which home schooling cannot teach them. I firmly believe that while a child is enrolled into formal education, the parents should do their best at home not to home school the child but to teach them values and beliefs that the formal education does not cover as this also helps the child to not only benefit from learning at school but to learn holistically in every aspect of life. I would conclude by saying that children should first and foremost go to school and while doing so, they should also be taught values at home by their parents to raise an individual that is whole.
Writing Task 2: Some argue that homeschooling is the best for a child's development. Others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think that is essential for toddlers to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills. let me know if its a good intro, and if there are any grammar mistakes.
Thank you for your response. Your introduction clearly presents both viewpoints and states your opinion. Here are a few suggestions to improve it: Clarity and Structure: "Writing Task 2: Some argue that homeschooling is the best for a child's development, while others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think it is essential for toddlers to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills." Grammar: Replace "that is" with "it is" for clarity. Also, "toddlers" is a very specific age group (1-3 years old), so you might want to use "children" to cover a broader range. Revised version: "Some argue that homeschooling is best for a child's development, while others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think it is essential for children to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills." Overall, it's a solid introduction. Keep up the good work!
I have a question about the word count. I'm going to do the exam on the computer God willing, so will the test include a visible word count for me or will I have to count the words myself?
If you're taking the IELTS exam on a computer, there's no need to count the words yourself! The IELTS on Computer test includes a visible word count, which will be displayed as you type. This makes it easier to keep track of your word count for the Writing section. Best of luck with your exam! 😊
Task 1 The graphic illustrates how many male and female in tertiary education in Britain among 1970/71,1980/81 and 1990/91. Either the student takes a full-time education or part-time education On the whole, many students prefer taking part-time education to full-time education with a large difference in numbers. There is also a different number of students between male and female. In male student at first there is a huge disparity between part-time and full-time education approximately about one-tenth of the other. Nevertheless as time goes by, this difference becomes not as much as it used to be because of the number of student which takes full-time education could catch up with the part-time education one. On the contrary, in female student, the disparity is still exists. Although number of student increases significantly. For instance, in 1970/1971 in part time student around 800 and full time student close to 100 compare with 1990/91 in part time student around 1200 and full time student close to 200.
Thank you for your response. You've done well in identifying the key trends. Here are some suggestions to improve clarity and coherence: Grammar and Clarity: Ensure correct usage of articles and plurals. Structure: Organise the response into clearer sections
There are opposing opinions on the developmental effects on homeschooling versus scholar education. Personally I think the advantages of learning at school outweigh those of young people being educated by their parents. Certainly one upside of teaching pupils in their homes can be making up for strong political influences on a curriculum. For example creationism has been in included in many biology classes throughout the united states, leaving many parents worried. On the other hand, in a well organized school system, teachers would generally be more experienced educators and thereby avoid problems that parents might encounter. A very common example is probably the well-known difficulties of many parents who are trying to tutor their offspring with after-school homework and often finding themselves struggling to either understand or properly explain the content of lessons. In conclusion, while some parents may prefer to teach their children at home to avoid misinformation by a faulty curriculum, the overall better experience of professional educatros in providing learning opportunities makes schools a generally more effective learning environment.
Thank you for your response. You've effectively discussed the pros and cons of both homeschooling and traditional schooling. Here are a few suggestions to make it more concise: "There are opposing views on homeschooling versus school education. Personally, I believe the benefits of school education outweigh homeschooling. Homeschooling allows parents to avoid politically influenced curricula, such as the inclusion of creationism in some US biology classes. However, experienced teachers in a well-organised school system can better address educational challenges. Many parents struggle to help with homework, highlighting the advantage of professional educators. In conclusion, despite some parents preferring to avoid a flawed curriculum through homeschooling, the expertise of professional educators generally makes schools a more effective learning environment."
Dear sir/madam I've heard about programs for new cycle path system in the area, especially at the city in order to reduce traffic. In my point of view, those program was a outstanding and great idea in order to reduce the crowd and the traffic. I will explain my point to presentate my opinion in accepting local council new program to reduce traffic - It was a eco-friendly program - It will open a new line of traffic, so there will be less of polution and crowded Please review my text please
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As an English teacher, this is arguably one of the best IELTS videos I have seen in a while. Always be encouraged, Tom.
Writing task 2 (academic)
It is believed that some individuals think providing home education to children is best for their development, whereas others think institutional education is important for children. This essay aims to discuss both sides and showcase their advantages.
Teaching children from home is termed as home schooling, and it can be beneficial to both the child and the parents. The child has access to education within their own home and to various educational material, that may br available online or offline through books. It also puts less financial burden on the parents for educational investment. It is suited towards those who may have a lack of means of transportation, or especially for disabled children who can attain specialised education and teaching methods adjusted towards their needs.
On the other hand, children going to school for education have advantage of socializing. School going children have enhanced development in social behavior due to interacting with various instructors as well as classmates. Having friends adds to a child's personality and development in the future. This approach is suited for parents who may not be properly educated or are too occupied in their work lives to teach their children personally at the comfort of their own home.
In conclusion, I believe children should go to school, not only does it have a great impact on their education, it also adds the benefit of being socially active and friendly due to interaction with different people as well as being able to participate in events and activities hosted by the school.
But home schooling could also include private teachers and tutors, not necessarily the sole presence of parents.
Absolutely, home schooling can indeed involve private teachers and tutors, providing a broader range of educational experiences beyond just parent-led instruction. This can enrich the learning environment significantly.
Task 2 (Academic)
It is argued by some that it is important for children to study at home. Others, however, believe in school education. Home education can boost family bonds, while school education helps to foster a sense of community. This essay agrees with the latter because being part of the society is more important.
While some families consider homeschooling as the best method to benefit their children's skills, there are others who simply prefer the traditional school out of their homes for their education. However, I strongly consider that children get more benefits by going to an educative institutions than being taught at home.
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@@MadhubalaEalumalai Hey! How did it go?
Dear Sir or Madam.
I am thrilled to hear about the upcoming new cycle path system that will be introduced to reduce traffic in the area. I am writing to you to explain why I support it.
I believe this is an excellent plan because the area has been suffering from severe traffic congestion. Introducing a new cycle path system not only reduces traffic congestion but also reduces the amount of smoke emitted from vehicles and automobiles.
My main reason to support this plan is the worsening traffic congestion. During peak hours, automobiles, and other vehicles are widely used, causing congestion and delays in delivering services. Another reason is that it can help lessen the emissions from these automobiles. Therefore, improving the air quality.
I would like to suggest other means to reduce traffic congestion by improving our public transportation system. This will encourage people to use public transport rather than private transport. Thus, reducing traffic congestion.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your Sincerely.
Dennis Jason Bago
Task 2
It is often argued that learning from home is the best for the development of children, while others say that it is more effective for their development to go to school. Although children can focus on their study when they are taught at home, I believe that it is better for them to go to school as they can develop their social skills.
Absolutely phenomenal, salute to the teacher; I’ve been looking for a video like this for so long.
I was afraid of IELTS as naturally we're scared of all tests but I thought this was going to be way harder... I was wrong. I had only a week to prepare and got a band 7 overall. I just watched a few RUclips videos like this one, took practice tests on british council & IDP websites, and gave it a shot!
Also, the result came out the next day (super fast!). I gave a computer-based exam on 17 August, 24. Plus I was sure my speaking didn't go well but guess what, my score's the highest in it! I think there's lenient marking. I gave it through British Council.
Listening 7.5
Reading 6.5
Writing 6
Speaking 7
I must say listening was the easiest for me. One advice I'll give is to stick to paper-based if your typing's slow. I decided on computer one as I wanted the results early. Although my typing's way to slow, I managed somehow 😂
Lucky you, am like you am so scared to do the test .
It's completely normal to feel nervous before the test! 😊 Remember, you've been preparing, and you're more ready than you think. Take a deep breath, trust your practice, and approach each section calmly. You’ve got this! 💪
@@eritharaundi8430 Don't be scared. I got to know that this test is nothing as compared to the rest of the procedures. There are much more difficult steps (like finding scholarships, applying to universities etc.). So be calm, practice, and go for it. You can do it!
That's great advice! 💯 Staying calm and focusing on your practice is key. The test is just one step in the journey-keep pushing forward, and you’ve got this! 💪😊
Dear sir,
I am writing with regards to the new circle path system about to be brought by our local council. This is really long over due.
This is indeed a very positive development, because it will be of a great benefit to the community as a whole. Apart from reducing traffic congestion to the barest minimum; it will also curb the problem of accidents on our roads thereby saving the lives of our citizens, Also this a step in the right direction as this will speak volume about the present local council
I would love to chip in here that, if you could through your kind office set up a unit of traffic control officers in all the routes where there are usually traffic build-up so as support your intended gesture ; this will ultimately make our day-to day lives bearable. Thank you sir, and keep up the good work.
Yours Faithfully,
KANU NGOZI
I
Children's education is significantly important and whether they should be sent to educational institutions, or home-schooled has long been a topic of debate. I believe it is apt to send children to established educational institutions to receive their education.
Children from different cultures, social backgrounds, and even ethinicities gather at a school.
useful and concise !
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to the proposed new cycle path system to reduce traffic in our city. I strongly support this initiative for two reasons. Aside from the obvious reason of reducing vehicular traffic in our city, the program will encourage our people to adapt a more active lifestyle by encouraging them to use bicycles to go around the city. This will greatly benefit the community’s overall health. Moreover, the program will also help reduce the adverse impact of carbon monoxide on the environment. When we take care of our environment, we take care of ourselves, too.
Lastly, I would like to propose an additional program that is worth studying to reduce traffic in the city. Other countries successfully use a number scheme whereby vehicles with plate numbers ending in a particular number would be restricted for use in a particular day during the weekdays. I hope the council will take a look at this traffic scheme and decide if can be implemented in our own city.
Thank you for your time. I wish success to the endeavors of the council to reduce traffic in the city.
Yours faithfully,
Maria
The Writing section's quite tough for my students! I'll definitely be sending this video to them.
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Very effective lesson. Thanks
I've loved this video! This instructor definitely knows what do we need for this part of exam. Please continue doing that great work!
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Hey Tom! I know you mate! You're a Very good teacher, i remember i saw Your one video few yrs ago from your channel (Eat Sleep Dream English) about England, Britain UK difference
I like it so much
Varying opinions exist about how children should be educated. While some are convinced that homeschooling is the best choice, others hold that attending school is the most ideal one. Of course, each option presents it unique advantages and disadvantages. Personally, I prefer that children learn at school, in company of their peers and the reasons for my preference, as well as the pros and cons of either option, will be outlined in the subsequent paragraphs of this essay.
Thanks for the video, it's very useful! I'd like to participate in the Academic writing task:
It has often been said that kids learning at home acquire the highest education level, whether for the rest of the people is more valuable that kids can go to school. In my opinion, children who go to school enjoy a richer social environment that shapes their life character behavior.
Task 2 (Academic)
"It takes a village to raise a child." this quote shows how much effort we put into children's parenting, which brings us to the topic of which educational facilities have the best outcomes for children's development between home-schooling and school.
As a teacher, I have experienced many student with wide variety of upbringing situations...
This is some of the answer from my academic writing task 2 example. If it is still available, please give your opinion on my writing.
I'm so stressed because I tend to write a sentence with many complicated clauses all the time as sometime it can be hard to understand.
Task 2 answer :
Many parents believe that their children have to educate by his own parents at home to get an education, but there are also those who argue that children have to going to school to get an education.
In my opinion, we must try to understand case by case because educate children to boost their development is actually an option like whether we will choose tailor made clothes or market clothes produced in the factory. It depends on their parent’s time and resource too.
If the children were going to school, its system have set some standard for student. It consists of the curriculum, training for teachers, supporting facilities in school and so on. For example in elementary school, In first and second grade, the student will learn about simple math, language. Later in fifth and sixth grade learn about natural science and social science followed by an national standardization examination at the end of education. Student will get education dan knowledge based on the system and the output may meet this curriculum.
If the children were taught at home, their parents are given more freedom to determine the curriculum. As an example if they want to add some archery lesson, math for life, basic cookery lesson is more flexible. Other advantage is also their children have an undivided attention because it is more like private lesson with a few students and of course lots of time with parents. This can also be an option for parents who have children with special needs such as children with ADHD or disabilities.
Thank you for your response. Here are some suggestions to improve clarity and coherence:
Grammar and Clarity: "Many parents believe that their children should be educated by their own parents at home, but others argue that children should go to school to get an education."
Structure and Consistency:
Use consistent tenses and clearer examples.
Separate advantages of each method into distinct paragraphs.
There is a common belief that it is better for children's growth to study at home than attending school, which is a supported and preferable choice by many. For me, both sights have their own views, which will be discussed in this essay.
Thank you for your response. You have introduced the topic and acknowledged the two perspectives effectively. However, to improve your essay:
Clarity and Specificity: Specify the advantages of both homeschooling and traditional schooling. For example, "Homeschooling allows for personalised learning and a flexible schedule, while traditional schooling offers social interaction and access to diverse resources."
Develop Your Opinion: Clearly state your own opinion in the introduction and conclusion. For example, "In my opinion, a combination of both methods can be most beneficial for a child's development."
Overall, a good start. Keep practicing to enhance your writing skills.
Thank you for the helpful video showcasing strategies and tips for the IELTS writing test.
Thank you! We're glad you found the video helpful. Best of luck with your IELTS preparation! 😊✍️
Dear Sir,
I support the council for the new cycle path system. It will indeed reduce the traffic in the area. It is also an amazing idea as kids will be safe from other vehicles.
Kids might lack the experience of driving safely in busy roads. So, the new cycle path system will surely keep the young bicycle users less likely to face big accidents.
I would also suggest the council to increase awareness in people regarding the traffic rules. This could make the vehicles of the area to commute in a more organised manner.
Yours faithfully,
Sakshyam Khatri
A wonderful video, to the point, exact example and useful tips.
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While homeschooling is getting more popular as the best way of educating children, some people also believe that the experience students get from learning at school is irreplaceable. In my opinion, school provides the best education.
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A certain number of people have a notion that in order to progress with a developed personality, a child should be schooled at home, whereas certain others opine that attending school is imperative for children. I consider both aspects have their own merits of development arising from both atmospheres of school and home and this essay will outline them in detail.
Thank you for your insightful comment! Both home schooling and traditional schooling offer unique benefits. Home schooling provides personalized attention and a flexible learning environment, while traditional schooling offers social interaction and a structured curriculum. It's important to consider what works best for each child. 😊📚
It is very educational information about academic writing
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Thank you for the helpful video, Sir
Hi Tom, Thank you for the video. It's excellent explanation about the Task 1 and Task 2.
I have a doubt in Task 1. It's about the Overview, where shall I write it? I write it after the Introduction or at the end of the Task. Thank you very much Tom🥰
Hi! Thanks for the kind words! 😊 For Task 1, it’s best to place the overview right after the introduction. This gives a clear summary before diving into the details. Good luck! 👍
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The video was very helpful
Task 1 - general
Dear local council,
I hope that this email finds you well. As a resident in the area, I fully support the introduction of a new cycle path system to minimise congestion. Over the years, traffic in the neighbourhood has become worse and worse. The volume of 4-wheeled vehicles is exceeding the capacity of the road. The new cycle path system will attract more people to cycle and benefit society in terms of well-being by reducing air and noise pollution caused by traffic. Furthermore, the local council can also take into account an integrated public transport system as an alternative to reducing traffic congestion. Compared to private vehicles, trains, trams, and buses can carry a large number of passengers all at once. This will significantly lower the need to travel in private vehicles, thus reducing traffic. I hope the council will consider this suggestion, looking forward to hearing from you regarding this matter.
Best regard,
Angel
Task 1 answer: Dear sir the new idea that the local council planned to introduce a new cycle system path is very helpful for many people and for the traffics too and the reason is because if the council haven't planned that traffic problems might increase and traffic might get slow too so it is very helpful of you to introduce this plan. and one thing i suggest for more plans to reduce traffic in the area is if you make the roads more wider because the number of cars in the area is increasing drastically and if you decrease the number of zebra crossing's because most of the zebra crossing's aren't used and people can just use two or three zebra crossing's in a single part of a road and that will help to decrease the traffic in the area and it will be helpful if you do that yours faithfully.
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I am having problem in task 2 of academic part. I don't know whether i am staying on track or getting off of it and mixing too many personal examples in it. Please help me with this issue.
Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to support the idea of our council to introduce a new cycle path system in Old Airport Area as it will resolve the issue of heavy traffic and it’s jamming again and again.
A new cycle path system will allow the cyclists of our community, whose major ratio consists of young kids, to have a safe and secure rides. This will also avoid any mishap, injury as well as severe accidents that unfortunately happened in recent past. This system will also permit the cars and other vehicles to pass through the streets and roads without fear of hitting the cyclists. It will also help the smooth running of traffic without jamming any further.
I also want to suggest some ways that can reduce the pressure of traffic in our area. For instance, banning the loaders and lorries in residential area, making some underpasses for cars and vans and overhead bridges for pedestrians to cross the roads will effectively aid the unhindered flow of traffic.
Yours sincerely
Name
Thank you for your detailed response. You have effectively explained why the new cycle path system is a good idea and how it will benefit both cyclists and motorists. Your letter is well-structured, and your suggestions for further reducing traffic, such as banning loaders and lorries in residential areas, creating underpasses for cars, and overhead bridges for pedestrians, are practical and relevant.
Overall, you’ve done a commendable job in addressing the task. Keep practicing, and you'll continue to improve.
It's no brainer that some people think that children should be home schooled as this is the best for a child rather than enrolling in formal education
I believe that that formal education is the best for a child as it enhances not just mental development but cognitive and social development of a child. Children should be taken to schools to help them fit into the society by playing and interacting with their peers and also solving problems which home schooling cannot teach them.
I firmly believe that while a child is enrolled into formal education, the parents should do their best at home not to home school the child but to teach them values and beliefs that the formal education does not cover as this also helps the child to not only benefit from learning at school but to learn holistically in every aspect of life.
I would conclude by saying that children should first and foremost go to school and while doing so, they should also be taught values at home by their parents to raise an individual that is whole.
Writing Task 2: Some argue that homeschooling is the best for a child's development. Others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think that is essential for toddlers to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills.
let me know if its a good intro, and if there are any grammar mistakes.
Thank you for your response. Your introduction clearly presents both viewpoints and states your opinion. Here are a few suggestions to improve it:
Clarity and Structure: "Writing Task 2: Some argue that homeschooling is the best for a child's development, while others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think it is essential for toddlers to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills."
Grammar: Replace "that is" with "it is" for clarity. Also, "toddlers" is a very specific age group (1-3 years old), so you might want to use "children" to cover a broader range.
Revised version: "Some argue that homeschooling is best for a child's development, while others believe that sending children to school is a better option. I think it is essential for children to go to school, as it develops not only their cognitive functioning but also their social skills."
Overall, it's a solid introduction. Keep up the good work!
I have a question about the word count.
I'm going to do the exam on the computer God willing, so will the test include a visible word count for me or will I have to count the words myself?
If you're taking the IELTS exam on a computer, there's no need to count the words yourself! The IELTS on Computer test includes a visible word count, which will be displayed as you type. This makes it easier to keep track of your word count for the Writing section. Best of luck with your exam! 😊
Task 1
The graphic illustrates how many male and female in tertiary education in Britain among 1970/71,1980/81 and 1990/91. Either the student takes a full-time education or part-time education
On the whole, many students prefer taking part-time education to full-time education with a large difference in numbers. There is also a different number of students between male and female.
In male student at first there is a huge disparity between part-time and full-time education approximately about one-tenth of the other. Nevertheless as time goes by, this difference becomes not as much as it used to be because of the number of student which takes full-time education could catch up with the part-time education one.
On the contrary, in female student, the disparity is still exists. Although number of student increases significantly. For instance, in 1970/1971 in part time student around 800 and full time student close to 100 compare with 1990/91 in part time student around 1200 and full time student close to 200.
Thank you for your response. You've done well in identifying the key trends. Here are some suggestions to improve clarity and coherence:
Grammar and Clarity: Ensure correct usage of articles and plurals.
Structure: Organise the response into clearer sections
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There are opposing opinions on the developmental effects on homeschooling versus scholar education. Personally I think the advantages of learning at school outweigh those of young people being educated by their parents.
Certainly one upside of teaching pupils in their homes can be making up for strong political influences on a curriculum. For example creationism has been in included in many biology classes throughout the united states, leaving many parents worried.
On the other hand, in a well organized school system, teachers would generally be more experienced educators and thereby avoid problems that parents might encounter. A very common example is probably the well-known difficulties of many parents who are trying to tutor their offspring with after-school homework and often finding themselves struggling to either understand or properly explain the content of lessons.
In conclusion, while some parents may prefer to teach their children at home to avoid misinformation by a faulty curriculum, the overall better experience of professional educatros in providing learning opportunities makes schools a generally more effective learning environment.
Thank you for your response. You've effectively discussed the pros and cons of both homeschooling and traditional schooling. Here are a few suggestions to make it more concise:
"There are opposing views on homeschooling versus school education. Personally, I believe the benefits of school education outweigh homeschooling.
Homeschooling allows parents to avoid politically influenced curricula, such as the inclusion of creationism in some US biology classes. However, experienced teachers in a well-organised school system can better address educational challenges. Many parents struggle to help with homework, highlighting the advantage of professional educators.
In conclusion, despite some parents preferring to avoid a flawed curriculum through homeschooling, the expertise of professional educators generally makes schools a more effective learning environment."
Dear sir/madam
I've heard about programs for new cycle path system in the area, especially at the city in order to reduce traffic. In my point of view, those program was a outstanding and great idea in order to reduce the crowd and the traffic. I will explain my point to presentate my opinion in accepting local council new program to reduce traffic
- It was a eco-friendly program
- It will open a new line of traffic, so there will be less of polution and crowded
Please review my text please
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Please can someone help me with the test score and its band score
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