IELTS Task 2 Writing Band 9 Ultimate Guide 2024

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  • Опубликовано: 22 дек 2024

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  • @Abdicator
    @Abdicator Год назад +529

    Well, it is not hard to find an IELTS essay start with the template: "This paper will discuss ... , My writing will discuss ..." which is an absolutely terrible opening for a beginning.Not many examiners talks about this problem.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +61

      You are right Zep. It is important to understand that an indirect thesis is usually low-level writing. We have lots more on this on our website at www.aehelp.com/

    • @Panda-ys5tr
      @Panda-ys5tr Год назад +10

      @@Aehelp I want to join but I don't understand exp

    • @HuuPhuocVN
      @HuuPhuocVN Год назад +7

      Can you give me a better way to start the essay?

    • @lavanyaattili1995
      @lavanyaattili1995 Год назад

      How about this essay will elaborate…?

    • @Abdicator
      @Abdicator Год назад +8

      @@lavanyaattili1995 With that opening u can get a band less than band 5.In fact, we need a good paraphrasing of the question rather than rewriting it.This only makes your become worse :(

  • @AL-fi2us
    @AL-fi2us Год назад +65

    I love this and IELTS Advantage channel. These 2 are the only authentic ones that I trust.

  • @AnhDuong-ug2mj
    @AnhDuong-ug2mj Год назад +49

    Your instruction is very simple and clear to follow. I have trouble learning IELTS by myself, especially in writing skill. You have my thanks.

  • @CraftsmenFilmProduction
    @CraftsmenFilmProduction Год назад +3

    15:00 > Another problem to keep a balance in healthy food and some exercise can improve the body, not just to look good, but also to be healthy. Working out at the gym is tough to lose overweight, but they can do other activities instead of doing that, such as biking, hiking and doing exercises that can assist to develop the body. Some of the vitamins that a body needs, especially vitamin D.
    Score this please...

    • @ieltsspeakingandwriting9170
      @ieltsspeakingandwriting9170 6 месяцев назад +2

      Another significant issue is maintaining a balance between healthy eating and regular exercise to improve overall health, not just appearance. While working out at the gym can be challenging for some, alternative activities such as biking, hiking, and other forms of exercise can also effectively support weight loss and physical fitness. Additionally, ensuring adequate intake of essential vitamins, particularly vitamin D, is crucial for maintaining a healthy body.

  • @wkwk4476
    @wkwk4476 Год назад +12

    ur video is so helpful! since i can't afford ur class now, i choose to not skip any ads in ur video.

  • @Levideosnet
    @Levideosnet Год назад +1

    Hi. I have another recomendations. at 18:10
    “studies show” instead of “studies shows” to match the plural subject.
    Use “the high number” instead of “the higher numbers” to avoid comparison and confusion.
    Use “is” instead of “are” to match the singular subject “the high number”.
    Use “exercising” instead of “excercises” to correct the spelling and the verb form.
    Add a comma after “junk food” to separate the two independent clauses.
    Is that correct?

  • @NotProManitYT
    @NotProManitYT Год назад +7

    Sir, I think you are best IELTS teacher in the whole UNIVERSE.
    The way you explain with ease and all the tips & tricks is just far a ove the teaching benchmarks.
    Some teachers suggest that the way we write " r" is unacceptable if we write the curly way, please clarify.

  • @aparnaearla8199
    @aparnaearla8199 Год назад +40

    Thank you so much Sir! The way you explained each section, is very understandable and it has helped me a lot in the writing exam that happened a couple of days ago.

  • @krnramgarhia5195
    @krnramgarhia5195 Год назад +210

    These things matter too much as I got 7 bands in writing with this strategy and i learnt all this from sir and i believe each student must admire this video 🥰

    • @feetgoall
      @feetgoall Год назад +7

      I'm taking the CB IELTS test tomorrow, Inshallah this video will help me get a 7 in the writing part

    • @thinkbig1260
      @thinkbig1260 Год назад

      Hlo bhai mere ek do questions aa clear krdo ?

    • @Андрей-г4ч7в
      @Андрей-г4ч7в Год назад

      @@feetgoall how did it go?

    • @feetgoall
      @feetgoall Год назад +9

      @@Андрей-г4ч7в у меня 7,5💪💪

    • @englishlearn8198
      @englishlearn8198 Год назад

      Could u help me guys

  • @ThanhTamNguyen-pr3nz
    @ThanhTamNguyen-pr3nz Год назад +82

    thank you so much, this must help me a lot 🥰 i’ll take an exam next month. I hope I’ll get a high band score, thank you 😭❤️

    • @mdxnk124
      @mdxnk124 Год назад +1

      In how many days you will get your ilets score? And when you can repeat your ilets?

    • @saidahmadli770
      @saidahmadli770 Год назад +1

      good luck

    • @aravindthoppil9254
      @aravindthoppil9254 Год назад +2

      @@mdxnk124 we'll get our predictive score within 9-10 days but the actual score will get within 13-14 days and we can write ielts exam whenever we want if we have the money.

    • @sadamhussain7926
      @sadamhussain7926 Год назад +1

      Hopefull

    • @Ra-gy7sr
      @Ra-gy7sr Год назад +1

      Did you get your score or not yet ? mine is next month and I'm a little nervous

  • @AmandeepKaur-kd1hf
    @AmandeepKaur-kd1hf Год назад +21

    I am in Canada my study is going to complete. In Canada, I see Canadian people, white and black people can't speak clear English. But you are a teacher, a good educator and an English speaker I can learn a lot of things from you. Thanks for providing a good knowledge.

  • @SUHAILMUSTHAFA-cr7ob
    @SUHAILMUSTHAFA-cr7ob Год назад +143

    I appeared for my exam a few days back. The writing paper was a nightmare for me the last 2 times I attempted. I had scored 6 and 6.5 consecutively. My morale was low. I required above 7. I happened to watch this video just once before the exam, and I scored a 7.5 with the tips you enilightened me with. Thank you.

    • @PhongLe-rx1yf
      @PhongLe-rx1yf Год назад

      excuse me, can you explain the sentence is " but decrease consumption HELPS " means ( in conclusion )

    • @geraltofriviaa9659
      @geraltofriviaa9659 Год назад +4

      ​@@PhongLe-rx1yfit means people don't have to stop eating fast food for good, but they should simply eat less.( Fast food )

    • @MohinurbonuMurodova
      @MohinurbonuMurodova Год назад +2

      Tomorrow, I have a main exam. Could you please answer my question? Did you write an essay after watching this video ? Or just you watched it before sitting the exam ?

    • @patelshiv6781
      @patelshiv6781 4 месяца назад

      ​@@MohinurbonuMurodovabro what is your score.?

  • @atom2076
    @atom2076 Год назад +37

    thanks sir for a free content about writing that was more than just brilliant ,please continue to post more such related videos.Have a good rest of your day

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +5

      We are working on it and we will have more videos coming soon! Make sure to subscribe : )

  • @AS_IELTS_HUB
    @AS_IELTS_HUB Год назад +7

    In body paragraph, the word after studies should be "show", because studies is a plural

  • @marvhan888
    @marvhan888 Год назад +12

    It's so entertaining to watch you making corrections to the essay. So nice

  • @girllikepearl7080
    @girllikepearl7080 Год назад +7

    Thank you so much for this amazing free resources to learn

  • @abidhassanrayat4223
    @abidhassanrayat4223 Год назад +6

    I really admire the portion Of Information You put in a single video and the way you described every minute of it, feels really connecting and understandable.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +1

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  • @comedyenglishvjcx
    @comedyenglishvjcx Год назад +14

    Hiii teacher from Uzbekistan🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿🇺🇿

  • @poojarao1770
    @poojarao1770 11 месяцев назад +7

    Thank you so much!! I didn’t practice writing at all and around an hour before my exam I went through this video and was able to score really well. Thank you once again ✨

    • @hassanniaz09
      @hassanniaz09 11 месяцев назад +1

      what was your score?

    • @bts_with_me
      @bts_with_me 9 месяцев назад

      Armies are all around the world 💜

  • @SunchuMara
    @SunchuMara Год назад +2

    You are an excellent teacher. I feel lucky to find you on you tube

  • @JayVibe2022
    @JayVibe2022 Год назад +6

    You are giving me a lof of confidence, thank you!

  • @ratnesh0307
    @ratnesh0307 Год назад +5

    Thank you sir, I've my exam tomorrow...hoping for the best!

  • @NiginaIkrom
    @NiginaIkrom Год назад +48

    Wow, the way of your explaining was quite understandable. I believe if I follow your channel, I`ll score well on my February exam!

    • @STROKE1263
      @STROKE1263 Год назад +2

      What part of the world are you from?

    • @zafarbazarov328
      @zafarbazarov328 Год назад +3

      @@STROKE1263 possibly ftom Uzbekistan

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +9

      Thanks : ) Also, be sure to visit our websites aehelp.com and gieltshelp.com and watch our weekly live IELTS classes. I wish you the best of luck on your February exam.

    • @Shwetay793
      @Shwetay793 Год назад +2

      How was your exam?

    • @NiginaIkrom
      @NiginaIkrom Год назад +1

      @@Shwetay793 hey it was gud thx but i didnt get my results yet

  • @b0bursh0h
    @b0bursh0h Год назад +7

    Hello, I have a question for you
    4:12 You said that we must not mix voices.
    But if the essay asks about our opinions, can we use the 1st person voice in the introduction and conclusion, and 3rd person voice for body paragraphs ?

  • @anaceciliagaitan4625
    @anaceciliagaitan4625 Год назад +3

    Now everything makes sense. Some mistakes mentioned were the advice of my language teachers at school 😅

  • @haresakrami6855
    @haresakrami6855 Год назад +1

    I had no idea about the first, second and third person's voice which I have learned from this video. thanks a world.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

      You are most welcome Hares, lots more great info in your course at www.aehelp.com/

  • @adekunletoheeb2813
    @adekunletoheeb2813 Год назад +8

    Your video tutorials really helped me to passed my ielts test.
    Thanks so much
    U re such a wonderful tutor.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

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    • @BabalolaWuraola
      @BabalolaWuraola Год назад

      Please how can I reach you?

  • @tkheart
    @tkheart Год назад +13

    I'm going to face for the ielts writing exam today and I'm very nervous as it's my first time. Hope everything will be fine.
    Sir, thank you for this great video

    • @Артур-т1х4м
      @Артур-т1х4м Год назад

      All the best! Write me when you got your results please

    • @asimbutt32090
      @asimbutt32090 Год назад

      How was your test

    • @tkheart
      @tkheart Год назад +1

      @@asimbutt32090 it was good. I got 6.5 for writing just by following these yt videos

    • @asimbutt32090
      @asimbutt32090 Год назад

      @@tkheart can u tell me about ur topics?

  • @aidagholampour100
    @aidagholampour100 Год назад +1

    Wow, bunch of brilliant tips, thank you so my

  • @juvklucy
    @juvklucy 6 месяцев назад +1

    Thanks sir, I was really confused because I didn't know many fancy words. But after watching this helpful video, I think I can get a high band.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  6 месяцев назад +1

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  • @nocapsii
    @nocapsii Год назад +192

    Saul goodman of ielts

  • @sevara_m
    @sevara_m Год назад +1

    Thank you so muchhhh❤❤I really love your teaching skills good luck 👏

  • @vahorauzair
    @vahorauzair 8 месяцев назад

    this is very helpful to me, and thank you so mutch for the advanced content ;

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  8 месяцев назад

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  • @berkany.476
    @berkany.476 Год назад +2

    I ll take the exam 12 days later and I just started studying with your videos. Hope it works well

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @psicotiagoregis
    @psicotiagoregis Год назад +13

    Great edition! Great production and remarkable content!
    Congratulations

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +1

      Thanks Tiago, I appreciate it. If you have and IELTS related question, just let us know.

    • @monikadeswal81
      @monikadeswal81 Год назад

      How can I contact you??

    • @monikadeswal81
      @monikadeswal81 Год назад

      I want to take information about ur course...this is recording batch or live session?

  • @nettigloriasitumorang2630
    @nettigloriasitumorang2630 Год назад +2

    Great. Thank you for the explanation

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @Altraboss_01
    @Altraboss_01 Год назад +4

    Thank you so much sir for the well explanation ☺️

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @playboiroza9718
    @playboiroza9718 Год назад +137

    My exam is tomorrow wish me luck..

  • @blacknwhite6186
    @blacknwhite6186 Год назад +7

    I saw a video mentioning that the IELTS test is designed to basically just examine whether an individual can communicate something clearly. The video that I saw also suggested against using the standard essay structure which I was about to use in my IELTS test. It was mentioned that the reader or examiner is looking at how good the writer is in communicating his message across to the reader and writing a hook sentence is useless as the reader is not looking to really read the essay and get hooked but just to examine the writer. I am so confused.

    • @lollol-p9p1o
      @lollol-p9p1o Год назад

      i refered the ielts advantage channel first, his points align with ur points. i was also confused just lik u. its been 6 months i hope u already took the exam so, as a test taker, who would u say are correct.

    • @blacknwhite6186
      @blacknwhite6186 Год назад

      @@lollol-p9p1o I got a 7 and I did not follow this guy, I wrote a simple essay without using the standard structure that we are taught. Just make it clear and concise. It was 3 years ago so I don't know if this will help.

  • @anonymousexistence4304
    @anonymousexistence4304 Год назад

    At 22:06 I think the word many is not needed. It can be written as
    "Studies show that the high numbers of obesity are caused by people consuming junk food and not doing proper exercise."
    Or is it needed?

  • @muhamaddemiprakarsa7490
    @muhamaddemiprakarsa7490 Год назад +2

    What's the difference between "academic IELTS premium package" and "IELTS academic - Reading, Listening, Writing, Speaking" ??? I'm interested to buy.

  • @op-gamer3668
    @op-gamer3668 Год назад

    17:20 In conclusion, studies shows I think it is wrong and correct statement is
    Studies show or Study shows

  • @KirylMladenets-g5c
    @KirylMladenets-g5c Год назад +2

    Just want to clarify. You've said that we can't combine first and third person voice, but in the essay we analyzed here is exactly this combination of voices.

    • @KirylMladenets-g5c
      @KirylMladenets-g5c Год назад

      And another question, is it necessary to write in the first person voice if in the essay question includes "To what extend do YOU agree?"

    • @minhnhatvan2392
      @minhnhatvan2392 29 дней назад

      @@KirylMladenets-g5c the question is literally asking YOU directly.However,it doesnt mean that you should use the second voice too.As the video mention,you could use either 1st person voice or 3rd person voice

  • @obunachipodpischik
    @obunachipodpischik 3 месяца назад +1

    If before correction his/her marks were:
    Task responce :8
    Coherence:6
    Lexical: 7
    Grammar: 5
    If added and divided by 4 he could get 6.5 ?
    How he/she could get 5 before correction? How come?

  • @ShadinAfroz-w7p
    @ShadinAfroz-w7p 5 месяцев назад

    Thanks Adrian , you have deceased my tension, god bless you..

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  5 месяцев назад

      Thank you, be sure to check us out at www.aehelp.com/ for lots more IELTS help.

  • @اطلبالحقوالرحمة
    @اطلبالحقوالرحمة 3 месяца назад

    19:48
    How come the band is 5?
    The average indicators you score is clearly more than 5. (8 + 6 + 7 + 5 divide by 4 which is 6.5)

  • @abirsonet925
    @abirsonet925 Год назад +1

    thank you!' it was really helpful for me.

  • @UsmonxonMahmudxonov
    @UsmonxonMahmudxonov 10 месяцев назад

    Thank you very much ,it was very helpful for me❤❤

  • @AbdulAziz-cj4hg
    @AbdulAziz-cj4hg Год назад

    on 15:22 why use singular “exercise”? i thought exercises is the correct plural form, the subject there could do any kind of exercise, or even doing more than one exercise?

  • @Rabia.Fatima
    @Rabia.Fatima Год назад +1

    Really,very impressive and helpful 👏

  • @brethensakhova
    @brethensakhova Год назад +7

    Hello there! I'm currently practicing for my IELTS exam and would greatly appreciate any suggestions for free resources that could assist me in my studies🥰. Would you kindly consider sharing your recommendations with me? Your help would be most appreciated. Thank you!

    • @brethensakhova
      @brethensakhova Год назад

      Try ewriter it provides model essays on almost any topic. It will help you a lot in improving your vocabulary and help you to find new sentence patterns.

  • @emrekuslu4418
    @emrekuslu4418 Год назад

    this one was very good. Thank you very much.

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      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @graciousogbonna9539
    @graciousogbonna9539 Год назад +1

    Thank you for the wonderful teaching. You've gained a new subscriber. Sir, I want to ask in the aspect of writing with the voices. I didn't fully understand the third person voices. Is it something like, "This essay will"?

  • @MumtozMaxmudiy-if1iw
    @MumtozMaxmudiy-if1iw 7 месяцев назад +1

    thank you bro as well i undrestand from you!

  • @DalliyorBerdiyev-x1s
    @DalliyorBerdiyev-x1s Год назад +1

    Your advises is just amazing right you are best of the best trust me mr adrian love you❤❤❤

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      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @funnycuties8951
    @funnycuties8951 Год назад +1

    Love this video

  • @REBOR1
    @REBOR1 Год назад +3

    This video was very useful for me, please create more videos like that plssss

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

      We are working on it.

  • @NiShi87
    @NiShi87 2 месяца назад

    13:27 Well, I’m studying in an language school for IELTS and the teacher told me that I should use could instead of can,may,might. It’s so confusing 😢

  • @hamzarasool7669
    @hamzarasool7669 Год назад

    Literaaly one of the best advices regarding, IELTS

  • @rina6522
    @rina6522 Год назад +7

    Thank u very much, You convey information so understandable❤️

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад +1

      You’re welcome 😊

  • @RustamBazarbaev
    @RustamBazarbaev Год назад

    The video helped me! Thank you!

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      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @nttnguyen304
    @nttnguyen304 Год назад +6

    Really appreciate! How about the LR criteria, sir? It seems that the vocabulary you used in the band 9 version does not reach to C1, C2 levels. So, is it necessary to add high-level and fancy vocabulary while we are writing?

  • @fsstudioz123
    @fsstudioz123 7 месяцев назад

    amazing class, i just highlighted based on this video, can i add my own experience that has happened practically from my side with a third-person voice. I sometimes get lost and felt confusing to think about the ideas when that's something new. But looking at this video, i got some clarity.

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  6 месяцев назад +1

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  • @bakhodirpardayev9108
    @bakhodirpardayev9108 Год назад

    Adrian okamizaga kotta rahmat ishlariga omad yaxshi kontent bo'libdi, o'zbekcha gapirganim uhun uzur🤣🤣🤣🤣😅😅

  • @MdSiafulislam-t5v
    @MdSiafulislam-t5v Год назад +1

    please, provide us more and more such videos which will aid us in being meticulous about simple errors.

  • @guzalmamedova5499
    @guzalmamedova5499 Год назад

    Thanks for lesson teacher👏🏻

  • @amodhyalankathilaka8609
    @amodhyalankathilaka8609 Год назад +1

    perfect teaching

  • @magarone1919
    @magarone1919 Год назад

    this kind of video is more effective than other
    plz make more like this sir

  • @bibektiwari1370
    @bibektiwari1370 Год назад

    A second major solution instead of problem..Am I right?15:00

  • @itzarcade5141
    @itzarcade5141 4 месяца назад

    I cant write so much fancy vocabularies but i can decorate the sentances and then provide valid to the point details

  • @surxayabbasov6316
    @surxayabbasov6316 Год назад

    You re real GOAT my man

  • @galaxy9258
    @galaxy9258 Год назад

    what?😦
    this video makes my life much easier, THANKS A BUNCH!!

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @lilkwinass5077
    @lilkwinass5077 Год назад +5

    thank u, sir! it was really understandable, but I could not image, that current essay really had band 6...
    when I started to read, I thought that it had band 5 as maximum..

  • @aluthwalasubash5038
    @aluthwalasubash5038 Год назад

    Thanks ,great job

  • @esnathvimbisonyamukunda
    @esnathvimbisonyamukunda Год назад

    Very good explanation,am learning a lot,thank you

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      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @minkhantzin9996
    @minkhantzin9996 Год назад

    Thank you for these details sir

    • @Aehelp
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  • @thepinayexplorer1991
    @thepinayexplorer1991 Год назад +4

    Thank you sir for sharing this video. It inspired me more on improving my english speaking. . .I am a canada dreamer🙏❤️

    • @yigitcan824
      @yigitcan824 Год назад

      Hi Pinay
      I'm looking for a speaking partner to practice and improve my English speaking skills
      I wonder if you are interested in

    • @thepinayexplorer1991
      @thepinayexplorer1991 Год назад +1

      @@yigitcan824 sure i want to practice too

    • @yigitcan824
      @yigitcan824 Год назад

      @@thepinayexplorer1991 oh cool,I'm studying ME and trying to improve my speaking English. But first we need to contact each other, how can I contact you

  • @abu._.7
    @abu._.7 Год назад

    18:05 Affirmative

  • @Wonderland_kids_official
    @Wonderland_kids_official Год назад +6

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    • @Aehelp
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  • @Mr_boss_off
    @Mr_boss_off Год назад +1

    Thank you Adrian

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      @Aehelp  Год назад

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  • @non9178
    @non9178 Год назад

    20:53
    Isn’t it *exercise ? Whay did we but the s at it?

  • @Gurwinder_Sran
    @Gurwinder_Sran Год назад

    But using "People" may be used to give an example of the people and "I" can be used for giving personal example or in both views when they say "Discuss both views and give your opinion" which technically means we have to discuss ideas of the third person's and give or own opinion hence "people and I"

  • @Nothing-cg8jd
    @Nothing-cg8jd Год назад

    AcademicEnglishHelp and IELTS advantage are the best IELTS channels ever

  • @aliindianclothes8253
    @aliindianclothes8253 Год назад +1

    Thanks very much sir

  • @ezozahomecook
    @ezozahomecook Год назад

    Thank you so much ❤

  • @Talkhiyaa
    @Talkhiyaa Год назад

    Wow really very helpful your video

  • @rondkgameel6562
    @rondkgameel6562 7 месяцев назад

    ‘ in my opinion, the main reason is that people do not have time to prepare a healthy meal for themselves mostly due to their busy work life , and fast foods are an easy option for them. Another reason is that , people prefer to sit on the sofa and watch TV all day long instead of going to gym and doing some exercises to improve their physical fitness levels.’ Is that correct?

  • @struggler_youtuber18
    @struggler_youtuber18 Год назад +2

    Sir you have explained really well 💜
    Thankyou so much💜

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  • @amanbatth3854
    @amanbatth3854 8 месяцев назад

    Lavish teaching method .

    • @Aehelp
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  • @ramisamorshedanadi6462
    @ramisamorshedanadi6462 Год назад +1

    In the 3:25 minute, isn’t the spelling "persuasive"?

  • @can_do2024
    @can_do2024 Год назад +2

    Thanks for all your great points but in fact the country that you are taking the exam really matters. In my country, Iran, unfortunately many examiners pay attention to academic and complex words. For example the band 6.0 that you read in the video will get 5.0 or even less in Iran
    I think there should be an option that if we have any doubt in the correction of our writing, we can report it to IELTS center in UK and they recorrect the paper themselves.

  • @artbysarkhan7420
    @artbysarkhan7420 Год назад +1

    Hi, i really do like this channel, please if it is possible could you make a video about how to use " the" . I mean it is easy when i need to just remember some grammar rules about "the" but when it is about the specificity of a subject it becomes really confusing, i had been searching for answers on the internet and still couldn't find any video with proper explanation in it.😢When i write the ielts essays, I always spend most of my time just guessing if i should use " the " before a subject or shouldn't, THIS " THE " DESTROYS MY LIFE AND MENTAL HEALTH ON A DAILY BASIS, PLEASE HELP :(

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  • @tungtrinhthanh9267
    @tungtrinhthanh9267 Год назад +3

    Very helpful video, sir.
    By the way, I have a question:
    Some books I have read show me that I should use some modal verbs like "could", "may", or "might" to "soften" the language and avoid over-generalisation. Can you show me in which cases should I use these to soften the language and when to use affirmative language, please?

    • @QuynhNguyen-lr3zb
      @QuynhNguyen-lr3zb Год назад

      I also have that thoughts, some students seem to be quite subjective while using affirmative language, so I'm also wondering this

  • @crydark137
    @crydark137 2 месяца назад +1

    Thank you so much!

    • @allinonemedia3373
      @allinonemedia3373 2 месяца назад

      Today is your exam …right

    • @crydark137
      @crydark137 2 месяца назад

      @@allinonemedia3373 , right..🥲

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      @Aehelp  2 месяца назад

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  • @YuuY-pz7px
    @YuuY-pz7px 5 месяцев назад +1

    In this video, our teacher looks excited! Thanks for the information. Still, I’ve got two questions here. First, is using affirmative words different from hedging languages and making less generalized ideas? The second one is that the official book of Cambridge Guide to IELTS mentions one way to express a personal view by using modals such as might or could, on page 127, 3.B. Thanks again, and please don’t blame me for having too many questions, I’m just one inquisitive 14-year-old kid.
    😅

    • @Aehelp
      @Aehelp  5 месяцев назад +1

      Affirmative language is confident - yes, it is slighly different. --- Cambridge books give some advice that does not lead to high scores.

  • @stevensuen1075
    @stevensuen1075 Год назад

    This is a classic example of level 2 in HKDSE.
    After correction,that’s much better.

  • @DMJ-Creation
    @DMJ-Creation Год назад

    My favourite teacher and Channel

  • @learnenglishwithfarhana6506
    @learnenglishwithfarhana6506 Год назад +3

    It was really helpful.
    Want more such videos❤

  • @hosseinmoosavi9037
    @hosseinmoosavi9037 Год назад

    when I look at the final writing there are some change of words or add than you correction writing such as : By before doing in the end of first body paragraph, at 2 paragraph correction to keep and final to keeping

  • @phangjun1979
    @phangjun1979 Год назад

    well, thank you teacher this is helpful😊

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