Building a Better Siege
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- Опубликовано: 30 авг 2020
- In this video I discuss an alternate version of Siege I cooked up in two hours.
I'm sure this will cause cancer in most people who watch it. View at your own peril.
Clips taken from: Netflix Siege
Music: Zaza: Be together.
Love the idea that Bee eventually gives up and just decides to go by Goldbug later on when he is rebuilt
When does he do that.
I've got an idea for the Mirage/Impactor fight. They resolve their differences after they find out their mother's are both named Martha. Great, isn't it!?
No each one's mom was named The Crushinator.
Vector*
Oh that's a PADDLING!
@@PerspectiveEnd BEHOLD, PERSPECTIVE THE ENDDY GUY, THE CRUSHINATOR!!
This plot is so much better than netflix's... i can imagine it now and enjoying the series already 🙂
Thank you very much, I thought for sure everyone would hate this, but people loved it. And yeah, I'm confident that if I had the reigns of this show it would be good.
Whoa, THREE-Dimensional robot beings, much better characterized than official
I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually surprised at the reaction this got, I though for sure people would deride the hell out of it.
“BY a Lot He mEAnS mE CrUmBDungLERs” (takes a deep breath) this is an amazing line which should’ve made it into the show fight me
I'm glad you didn't cringe your self inside out having heard that.
Can’t cringe at something if you’re already cringe
At the end of the Scavengers episode two of the reflectors should die and have it be treated really seriously, with everyone mourning the loss of the other two reflectors only for the remaining one to find out he can duplicate himself at will, creating like 10 of him annoying Spinister and Skytread even more.
That's actually an idea I've had for a while, but up to that point they would be more individual. They would all just be friends, and when the other two died, the mentally fragile one would be the one who was left, and he couldn't take it, so he started making duplicates to pretend to him self he wasn't alone any more.
@@PerspectiveEnd well that got dark... perfect for the scavengers
@@PerspectiveEndLove that idea. Dang now I have to read the Scavengers comics.
I’m glad you included Red Alert’s Paranoia in your Siege rewrite. I was absolutely baffled that they completely ignored that part of his character.
Yeah they ignored so much of every one of the characters, I wanted to try and put as much as I could back in. Like the Fact that Mirage was just generic jerkass, was weird too.
Wish you were the director of this series, you have actually managed to capture the vibe of G1 and have several characters interact with each other really well. If only you were the director of the show. You have completely made this show a lot better and I love it, thank you.
Thank you so much. I'm blown away at the reception of this video, I thought for sure people would hate this but amazingly enough people really loved it.
@@PerspectiveEnd it was really well done also, if you think your Starscream impression is bad, wait till you hear mine.
That was infinitely more coherent and enjoyable than the actual series (your voice acting wasn’t nearly as bad as you thought).
All hail the king of witty dialogue! Another great video!
Thank you very much. Yeah to my surprise this was a popular one, I never thought this video would catch on in a million years, it was just something I was doing for my own sanity.
This is my head cannon now
Well now I have to fix Earthrise, and that's going to be harder.
SOMEONE GIVE THIS GUY MONEY, HIRE HIM AS WRITER FOR THE NEXT SERIES
IT IS BEAUTIFUL
(no joke, I would actually watch your version of Siege than the original)
Thank you. I'm actually shocked by how well received this video has been. I thought people would think it was stupid and cringy.
Well, if you wanted to make Impactor join the autobots, here is how I would do it
He is left barley alive after mirage is done, and mirage has to make a choice, take the energon back now and risk Hound’s life, or take Hound to ratchet and risk the decepticons sending backup to guard it, Mirage chooses Hound and so Impactor radios Soundwave (as head of communications) about the situation after seeing this, so the decepticons bomb the place knowing he is still there, Impactor barley survives and joins them because they care about each other more
Well personally I don't want him to join the autobots I want him to die, and a character Arch for him kind of goes against my thesis for this video which is jettison as much of the Extraneous material as possible.
That would be a good way to do it though. I feel like that calls for Trail Breaker as well though.
Really like the fan fiction !! Really love how you gave attention to most characters and your way of thinking. You should make stop motion series with your way of thinking. And your voice acting wasn’t horrible trust me 😅😂!!
Thank you, but, that wouldn't turn out well. I've never animated that way before, and I have no set up for it, and no way to have a set up. I lack the space to make something to fit a stop motion set.
Also Stop Motion takes TONS of time, and I'm always busy.
That Starscream voice sounds like an old British Lady 🤣🤣🤣
Ouch, go for the heart why don't you.
@@PerspectiveEndWell, he is referred to as 'Megatron's bitch'
now that i have seen earthrise
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the Allspark plays a key role in earthrise
Yep.
Decepticon Mirage was my second, favorite figure from this line (Spinny's first). I was so disappointed he didn't actually switch sides within the show, that it was just a holographic disguise. We're always getting heroic Con turncoats (Catilla, Dinobot, Knock Out, Drift) so much that it's been done to death, and thus, it would've been interesting to have a character who does the opposite. Closest we've come are the TFA Constructicons (only partially counts, since, while the were buddy buddy with Bulkhead they weren't, officially Autobots) and ex-Wrecker leader Valve (one MTMTE flashback panel). NOTE: I would've included Grimlock, but, everytime he's gone purple badge was incredibly brief, so, it didn't seem to fit the above, who all permanently joined the Deceps.
I would have figured he'd have started out as a Deception and switched to Autobot.
And yeah, it was Lazy, but I can't think of too many good ideas the show actually had.
@@PerspectiveEnd Nah, man. Cliffjumper's relentless paranoia needs to be validated. :P
One of the major ones before they started making the conflict more morally grey was Armada Wheeljack, (who was clearly supposed to be Red Alert or Sideswipe) who defected to the decepticons after being accidentally left for dead on a mission
Perhaps instead of having galaxy upgrade Optimus as a separate character, he could be like the wingblade armor that animated Prime had, just built by Magnus and Wheeljack.
It could play out like;
Magnus explains to Prime, that since the Deceptions are surly going to find the ark soon they might as well improve their current weapon systems. Given their current lack of enough able bodied troops, the Decepticons have more than enough firepower to overpower them in a full on battle.
As he explains this they are headed towards wheeljack’s workshop. (Wheeljack is busy checking to make sure the engines work perfectly.)
He then explains that him and Wheeljack designed the current armor system. As well as it’s advantages and disadvantages. Such as the obviously increased firepower and flight capabilities. While also stressing that the current prototype has the drawbacks of guzzling energon, the more restrictive movement and added weight, and faulty targeting systems.
Optimus would respond that while he understands the gesture he doesn’t believe that it is currently necessary and obviously given the current scarcity of energon.
Burning through it by using weapon upgrades such as it would only mean they would have to collect even more energon for longer than necessary. But ending with how the idea is good it just needs refinement.
That way you can advertise the (very bad) toy and keep the suit for later if necessary. I am sure there is a better way to write this, and perhaps the idea may get some Cybertron fans upset that their prime was relegated to nothing more than a power up;
But (A) the toy it is advertising is far worse at representing the character, what with how flimsy his vehicle mode trailer is, his G1 Optimus head in normal robot mode, and how he even looks terrible in his super mode due to the hollowness, everywhere, and all the unpainted details.
And (B), I do not see any continuity where two Optimus Primes are fighting one Megaton and don’t immediately flatten him.
I mean that's the way I assumed it already was.
Your whole story would be a good way to incorporate it though.
You don't have Starscream, you have Star-having-a-normal-conversation
Damnit This line of logic has defeated me. My channel is yours now.
Someone should make a stopmotion of this! It’s so good! Also loved the goldbug joke considering it was a funny reference, I loved the format and it’s way better than siege. Personally siege was really boring to me.
Siege was so dull it made me start a RUclips Channel.
The are you primus bit had me laughing for a solid 1-2 minutes 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I'm really proud to hear that. I was proud of that Banter.
Better Than Netflix’s Version
Thank you very much.
Damn you did a better job than the guys at netflix
Thank you, but that's really only because it wasn't hard. Anyone could have done better.
Petition for this guy to write all future transformers shows and movies
Hey. I'd do it. I'd probably do it for free, just to get some good shows made.
13:21 man, did that age well given the Earthrise story
I don't know that well is the operative term, but it did become more apt.
Wow this is awesome! This has given me more excitement than the whole series!
I'm glad you enjoyed it, but I don't know that the show it self will benefit from this.
Just get the prime and animated writers and boom, perfection.
Just get Bob Forward. Boom Perfection.
Man, this is amazing! great job! Netflix seems to really fire and hire new people all the time, hope they have sense enough to hire you someday reallll soon!!!
This really struck a chord with a lot of people. I thought this was going to get universally hated.
I don't think Netflix actually wrote the show they just paid for it getting made.
@@PerspectiveEnd Still, no reason why they couldn't make something better than what a true TF devotee cooked up in a couple of hours!
Appreciate all you contents man! Keep it up!
@@shoeit6357 Yeah, when I'm writing circles around your story you did something wrong.
The only thing I liked about that season was Bumblebee’s potential to put him in a completely new light that isn’t a cliche kid friendly character.
You are talking about the Real show that actually exists right?
@@PerspectiveEnd Yes, your version is way better.
Over all, I have to say, this was a solid work..... But also I have view more sujestions .
the idea with Red and Sideswipe wasn t bad, but I would probadly put Hounde or some eals .( as for reasoning why, I have to say if anything I kind of licked the idea of Red been a Medic , or at least the only guy who can help ,but probadly thats just me and my memoris with Armada/Cybertron version of Red, so in short my preference)
The episode with grunts and you short was fun, but as much as I like SCAVENGERS, at least in case of promoting things SIEGE related, it would been better ( in my opinion) to use other unsed decepticons in the line, like RAINMAKERS, Barricade,Scrapface,Apeface, you get the idea....
And if anthing at least one good/interesting idea from a Netflix show was Mercenarys faction ( the idea was good, besides the name like SYRIESLY HAZBRO?, You coudn t use something eals , that was the best you could do?) and an idea of Soundblaster ( with strong emphasis on " idea" considoring it was hard to take " a clone going wrong" when the whole backrounde are nothing more them cheap clone recolors , or to put it simple " Transformers SIEGE The clone wars" but sh#tier )
So those are my thought, but over all the video was very fun to watch, and since you did a good job with rewriting view ideas with this, how about making something similar with live action movie hmmm?
Well my advice for the movies would be throw out everything start over.
Anyways the reason I teamed up Red Alert with Sidewsipe was because Sideswipe is a gun ho action oriented guy, who likes to fight and takes it seriously. So he'd be chafe at being teamed up with a timid, bundle of nerves.
Characters like the Rainmakers would be used in my serries during all the deception episodes they'd be around in the background, but I didn't really think they had the personality to drive an episode. Of course if I could successfully argue for more than 6 episodes I'd be glad to give them bigger roles, but with just 6 I was limited.
I think Mercenary's doesn't quite make sense as a FACTION but as a group, yeah. Like they can have a faction badge and everything so they are distinguished on the battlefield and people know they can hire them for jobs, but it doesn't make sense for them to all be working together.
Daaang, this was really good. Nice job!
Thank you very much.
The duo idea reminds me of the jazz and cliffjumper mission in fall of cybertron
Oman I remember that one. That was one of them better missions in the game.
The fact that I can never watch your first 4 videos without making the speed 1.5x
That fact does what? And yeah, they are kind of tough to watch now because of how slow they are.
Once again I had literally NO context and had a blast. I could understand what was happening quite well despite knowing NOTHING about the show. Congrats for pulling that off!!
What I thought throughout the video [I’ll put in timestamps later]:
That’s a good idea.
This is very funny!
Oh that joke started here, cool!
The explanation for why Jetfire / Skyfire was revived way later makes sense. I really love their friendship! It’s fascinating seeing Starscream genuinely care about someone that’s not him.
Hilarious.
Very fun scene that humanizes the Decepticons and makes them feel 3-dimensional.
Oh Primus those lips! Why does he have such thick lips!! Is that what he looks like in the show!?!
Deliciously dark.
Once again great dialogue and characterization. Just from this one scene I know who they are.
Red Alert is a worry wart with keen observational skills, and the other is a low energy pragmatist with no patience for the ball of anxiety that is Red Alert.
Oh that’s cool!
That sounds like a really fun sequence of it was animated.
Oh that is so fun!!! Oh that is a fun role reversal!!
Crumbdumblers - peak insult.
Sounds like a fun character to watch.
I love this. Feels cartoony in a great way.
This sounds like fun episodes. It'd be neat to see a whole episode from the perspective of Decepticons and show how they aren’t all heartless monsters.
This scene is peak comedy! This scene is hilarious!! Also like how they point out Reflector’s only remembered for his / their cloning ability. (The monotone voice you gave him makes him really funny playing off the others!)
Overall this video was a blast to watch and you just have only approved from there. I eagerly await the next part. Keep up the good work and happy Independence Day!!! (Or if not, then happy Tuesday?)
And thus I never have to get a Netflix account. Also hope you do one of these for the earthrise and kingdom cause this felt great.🤩
I've planned to for a very long time, hopefully it will happen soon.
NLG should of just said for Seige we actauly give wheeljack his proper toy for seige that way we have an offical wheeljack in his classic cybertronian mode
Agreed.
Coming back to this for the 5th time and I'm still realising new stuff
Interesting. Do tell what is it that you are realizing this time through. And I'm glad you are enjoying it enough for that to be viable.
The ratchet covered in rust joke was one I only caught this time round, and the genius of how open ended your plot is means that it ties in better with earthrise and Kingdom more than the original show does
Liked. Subscribed. I have a friend who will absolutely love this too, because it's awesome.
Thank you so much glad you enjoyed this, I always worried this would be something people mocked me for but people love this one.
@@PerspectiveEnd This was the video that actually made me hit the button, but honestly I'd already decided to at least start following your reviews because you are so far the ONLY toy reviewer I've found who will call out bad aspects of a figure, even if I don't always agree. Hype-hype-hype just gets tiresome after a while,. especially when I'm watching reviews to see which figures are worth extending my limited budget and even smaller shelf space to.
I think that instead of Skyfire/Jetfire should said to be in a dormant state instead of a coma
Dormant state sounds more easily exited, and it's not like a Coma is an inherently biological concept.
18:20 this gets me every time, I don't why
I was proud of that joke back when I made it, got it so hard to listen to myself back then.
Reading a script was such an endeavor. My brain sounds like it's running at 1% normal capacity.
10 mins in and i have to say this is really good, keep up the great work man
Thank you. Most people really hate this one, and I mean I get it, I was not as well argued as I could have been, but it's always nice to see someone actually appreciate this video rather than tell me I'm an idiot for making it.
@@PerspectiveEnd yea, I always enjoy your works, and agree with almost everything you have to say. And you made this in two hours, it’s not like your some sort of writer or expert story teller, unlike Netflix whom have made many upon dozens of award winning shows
@@pabloguerrero6281 Oh wait. I mistook the video you were on, I thought this was my initial Earthrise video.
This one was shockingly well received. I was not prepared for how much people would love this one.
I thought for sure people would call me a moron for making this one, but basically no one did, Instead people just kept asking for more.
@@PerspectiveEnd great to hear man, and like I said great work
4:01 That is the most well acted hand I've ever seen since Thing from the Addams Family XD
5:09 through 6:22 - Well shit I'm pretty much sold on this XD
12:04 - Imagine that with better acting? Shit with dialog like that I don't even need it to be animated, it could be just two or so hours of this still image photos thing your doing and I'd still be enthralled XD
17:32 - The fuck is a crumb dungler? XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD
18:37 - Hey you guys leave Three Guys alone he's trying his best here! Not his fault you need to buy three of his figure to make a camera......although I, uhhh, ended up buying six.....first time I ever did army building......
1 Are you talking about Wheeljacks arm?
2 Yeah, their banter is one of the highlights for me, though that last line was a bit clunky.
3 ouch, maybe next time take off the Steel Toed Boots when you kick me in the nads. But yes with better acting and actual animation the scene would be a lot better than anything in the actual show.
4 A Crumb Dungler is a Dungler of Crumbs... What's hard to get about that?
5 Did you get the special versions of him too, or did you just go for 6 of the normal one?
@@PerspectiveEnd Yeah just the nice purple normal ones, like an actual army of troopers in uniform.
In my opinion for the Netflix version, Ultra Magnus had so much wasted potential. He shouldn’t have been killed almost immediately after being introduced.
Absolutely. It's so lame what they did with him. He was basically just there out of Obligation.
I like this because some of the parts have good comedy unlike the actual show were the comedy is barely there
Thank you. I tried to make it as funny as possible so it wasn't just dreary as shit.
Talking about Goldbug, it kinda sucks that Goldbug seems to be so hated in the TF community, all because it doesn't look like Bumblebee, even that the original intention was Goldbug to be grown up and matured Bumblebee. I would like to see Goldbug used in some future TF series some day without Goldbug being a separate character from Bumblebee, tho Bee's name is cuter and it's Bee. And off track note, I think they missed a good opportunity to use the name Goldbug back in Armada when Powerlinx Oppy was released with Corona Sparkblug. They should have used the name Goldbug instead if you ask from me.
And I do love what you did with Starscream and Jetfire. I would wait an eternity to get more SS and Jetfire interactions, that does not involve sticking rods into one's exhaust pipes, if you know what I mean.
Thank you.
And I think the reason for all the dislike might be threefold, One it's a bad name, it just doesn't sound great. It's got no pop, no sizzle. Two the way he got the name is stupid. Bumblebee:"Hey look I'm a Gold Bug." Optimus "THAT'S YOUR NAME NOW, NO TAKE BACKSES!". Lastly I think people were just angry at such a radical redesign of a well liked character.
@@PerspectiveEnd Yea, I get the reasons why people don't like it, but I still find it to be a neat idea.
@@uberkirbeeh7954 A need idea in that bumblebee changed who he is, or the two guys idea?
@@PerspectiveEnd Goldbug being grown up Bee. I like character arcs where the character grows up. I will eat that any day.
@@uberkirbeeh7954 So you're probably one of the near mythical fans of Cheetor as well.
Also I never really noticed a Change in Bumblebee when he became Gold Bug personality wise.
You've inspired me good sir to make a Siege rewrite of my own, but with the War for Cybertron game in mind cuz I love that game and is my personal favorite interpretation of the Cybertron war. (My headcanon is Megatron Origin -> Cybertron Games -> Rest of IDW G1 -> Beast Wars -> Whatever rewrite I can think of for Beast Machines. If IDW has things that contradicts BW though then..crap. I already know characters like Rattrap and Waspinator are there so that already complicates stuff) The idea is the campaigns are switched, "Siege" having an Autobot focused story happening during the Decepticon campaign and vice versa.
Oh yeah, there is NO wrangling IDW into line with G1 in any sense. The Beastformers are not from the future, most of them are from Eurcharis, Rattrap is from a different world where the only thing he had to scan was a rat, and yeah there are not Enough Rewrites in the universe to set them in the same world.
Also Awesome. So are you going to write this as a fanfic, or are you going to make a video about it?
@@PerspectiveEnd Dang. Also I'm starting it as a fanfic and maybe do a comic, if I ever plan on posting it at all. A couple of my friends are great artists so if I wanted to make it as a "comic dub" or somethin maybe I'd ask em about it. So far I got it being six chapters cuz that sweet episode limit, and each 3 are a reverse of the WFC campaign. That starts the first half with the Decepticons, this first half is the Autobots with Wheeljack and Bee as usual. It goes a bit into Jetfire and Starscreams past, and ends with Bee goin to alert Optimus about Zeta. The other halfs a bit trickier because all the Cons are a bit preoccupied so I'm thinkin maybe it can be Shockwave testing around with weaponizer tech for his upgrade armor and then mutating three normal bots into Skrapnel Bombshell and Kickback cuz of the whole Insecticon thing in the second game.
Playback speed set to 1.5
Now it's normal Perspective End!
also hasbro should take a page out fun publications book and did what you said about just having the characters in the toyline just interact with each other and their personaltys write for themselves
Yeah it's super easy the characters are all well defined, so we know how they would act give any situation.
Apparently the show was slowed not because of animation, but voice acting
I've heard that, it's an extraordinary slow down for a reason like that. Still Does that mean that they've been working on the Animation for season 2 the whole time, if so why does it look so rough in the trailers.
@@PerspectiveEnd good question, I think that it took so long because they wanted to dub all the languages before it was released, and I think COVID did play a role, no clue why the ER animation is so choppy though, maybe they tried to speed it up to not repeat the mistake?
@@hickettsisepic989 Well it's not just that it's a little choppy, like look at Doubledealer's face. It's so unpolished.
@@PerspectiveEnd I think that’s probably because they saw what people though about Megatron’s lips and thought “hey, you know what would be funny.....”
@@hickettsisepic989 That's a good prank they are pulling on the people that paid them millions to make a show. There's no way that backfires.
If I was the showrunner I’d make sure there would be 24 episodes. Also I’d make the voice actors try harder. In the first episode it would be Optimus talking about the war and stuff But the change is it’s more like a movie prequel. Optimus shot the allspark up into space. And the main plot is a race to space.
It would start out with hot shot and bumblebee and hot shot scouting for an energon stash bumblebee found, hot shot is really overconfident, and bumblebee is a pessimist who is struggling for energon. He is unhappy to give it up to the autobots. However a team of seekers are scouting the area, Jetfire, Starscream, Purple man number 1, Pink boi number 1, the first 5-10 minutes is them hiding, however unfortunately the seekers catch them and show off these characters personalities, Starscream and Jetfire act like an old married couple, Purple man and Pink boi act like generic seekers who joke and push eachother around. The bots try to run with 2 large energon cubes in there hand but get caught and sent off to a prison camp.
The second episode is Optimus and Elita trying to free the two, while hotshot and. bumblebee use teamwork to escape. The camp is ran by Shockwave. The third episode is them discussing what happened, the decepticon’s have prisoners which are other decepticon’s while Shockwave and Soundwave are just chillin, nothing to climatic maybe 1 fight, it just tries to flesh out the characters.
The next 6 episode’s are just both sides try to get energon and fights, and in the 5th episode you get to meet Megatron, who was off watching another prison camp. And, you get to learn Starscream and Megatron really don’t like eachother. However meanwhile with the autobot’s Elita questions Optimus, and Magnus is getting kind of fed up, so he leaves the autobots.
anyways the next 12 episodes are, is just Optimus, taking more extreme measures to get energon, first asking ratchet for help, then a disastrous battle which results in the Death of Hotshot, who is literally Optimuses best friend, and then him trying to get help from the Omega Sentinels, but they are like no. Meanwhile the decepticon’s capture Magnus. Magnus seems to want to make an alliance with Megatron, but Megatron just wants the location of the Ark, but anyway’s Magnus befriends Jetfire, who after befriending Magnus, begins to become a better bot, and begins to show some remorse towards the autobots. But the decepticon’s are also taking extreme measures as well, like in episode 16, Megatron reveals how he is going to get his energon, his prisoners, not just bots, also the cons. And in episode 18, Magnus gets killed, which ultimately changes Jetfire’s spark and goes in search for the bots, he meets up with the wreckers who are led by springer, they beat Jetfire up first but then realizes he wants to change. So over time Jetfire gets some wrecker friends. Also did I forget to mention Bumblebee is just chillin? And grows closer to prime after the death of hotshot?
The final 3 are Starscream getting promoted to Air commander, causing chaos, Impactor and Mirage guarding a space bridge which I forgot to mention lol, and the almost last episode is bumblebee showing his fellow bots where a HUGE supply of energon is, the mercenaries shop base, ran by Soundblaster. And that space bridge team gets help from those wreckers and the final episode is kinda the same, but with wreckers and no allspark, also tons of micro masters die, and weaponizers. That is my rewrite of siege, also the characters will look more like actual robots instead of toys.
Please break stuff like this up into paragraphs. This is very hard to read.
Apparently Netflix was completely unwilling to fund more than 6 Episodes.
So the Alspark would already be in space by the start of the serries?
A lot of what you are describing sounds expensive to make, I mean it all sound interesting but what I was trying to do was work within the limitations the show had.
Why does Jetfire have Wrecker Friends.
Yeah I do think they should have made the show models look a little less like the toys.
That was all interesting, well done, I just think because they wanted to be cheap they wouldn't try something that actually ambitious.
@@PerspectiveEnd My explanation for some of the things, is that while Optimus is speaking in the beggining of the first episode he states he sent the allspark up into space, and now the decepticon's and the autobots are now in a race to space to find it.
The reason Jetfire has wrecker friends in because, after he left the decepticon's, he seeked out for autobot's and met up with the wreckers who he slowly became friends with, and then later they catch up to the other bots.
Also I forgot to mention, the main antagonist of each episode can be different, one can be, Shockwave, Megatron, Starscream, and the occasional Jetfire, in the earlier episodes.
And yeah Netflix probably was working on something that had ACTUAL effort put in to it.
First things first...Produce a TOTALL KICK ASS INTRO SONG! I knew Seige was gonna be shit when there was no catchy intro!
Intro's are important.
@@PerspectiveEnd So why didn't anybody tell the director??? They didn't have to tell you the summary of the story! Just some really sweet vibes from the original intros with a...Transformers!!! More than meets the eye! at the end. To wake ya up and get hyped! No, instead it was lame slow music from the OG Xbox Station startup archives that truly made it SNOOZEFORMERS 😴
17:45 YOOOOOO IMPACTOR GOT THAT SLICK TRIM!
Please make another one of these! PLEEEAAASSSEEE!!
I plan to.
YEEEEEESSS!!!
If this was the show we got, it would be so good!
At the very least it couldn't have been worse. But thank you.
2:58 Truly, a creature to surpass Metal Gear!
Amazing video. It would be cool if you did something similar for Earthrise, Kingdom. I would like to take some of your ideas for my stop motion series (if I can do it) I hope you don't mind.
Feel free to use what ever you want from me. And I've been planning on doing this for Earthrise for over a year now. it just keeps getting pushed back.
Your Ironhide voice is still better than the one in the show
Thank you. Most of them hurt me to hear, but Ironhide I did think sounded good.
I honestly like this, you should do a stop motion film or collaborate with other stop motion creators.
Thank you for the vote of Confidence. I'm not a Stop Motion animator though, and those other people are all busy on their own serries.
See, it's hard but not that hard to fix this.
And I put restrictions on my self I probably didn't need to.
*takes notes for an WFC Paradox fan series*
Paradox Fan Series? Glad you liked it.
@@PerspectiveEnd I mean, I'm making one, but better than the Netflix show.
@@alphaprime1000 You could cough on a piece of paper and hold it up in front of the camera for 3 hours and it would still be a better show than what they made.
But I expect what you make to be *MUCH* better than that.
This is perfect
Thank you!
Do earthrise tied into this and kingdom when it comes out
That's kind of the plan but the issue is if I do it as a sequel to this it will just spin off into fantasy land, and it won't be how Earthrise should have been done better.
hey perspective end, is it okay if i use your idea from this video for a stop motion mini series?
Go ahead, I'm happy to see someone do something with it. It's not like I have a copyright on the idea anyway.
@@PerspectiveEnd k thx!, i'll be sure to credit you in it
@@demoniccharcoal No problem, it's not a big deal if you don't, I don't own the idea, and I was never going to profit off it.
If you want, I don't expect there to be any yet.
If you want to know my email, I'll give you 3 guesses as to what it is.
I wish that was the beginning scene.
Glad you liked it.
Really made a show I would want to watch Netflix really has no excuse
I wish one of the power dashers were in the mirage vs impactor episode
Except there wasn't a Vs episode.
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This is so much better than the show, Seriously I'm surprised Netflix was so bad and I did not comprehend How bad all of It was until I saw This!
Thank you. I'm always floored by how much people like this. I though for sure people would think it's Cringy BS.
@@PerspectiveEnd It was crigy at points, But Still very great Content!
I want to hire for acting now.
I'm glad you enjoyed the performances. I can't say that I felt too confident in them when I was doing it.
Well hindsight is always 20/20
I could have come up with this before watching the show. This wasn't made because of hindsight this was made because doing a good story is easy, and don't one like they did requires a distinct lack of talent.
@@PerspectiveEnd if doing a good story was easy than the Star Wars sequels wouldn't have sucked. It's easy to say, "oh I would've done a better job" after the fact and criticize someone's work when you're not under pressure to produce something familiar yet new to appease the long time fans and to entice new ones to the IP. While I don't disagree completely with your take on the first chapter, it'd be interesting to see what you'd produce if you were tasked with the same thing.
Now we just need to find a animation studio...
A lot of people really want to see my version of the show.
These earlier videos are best viewed at 1.5x speed
I'm sure they are, I had no idea what I was doing back then.
Now I'd like to see what you'd do with it if you didn't have the 6-episode limit.
I had a plan on that a long time ago but man I just can't get around to it.
Well, I really enjoyed Seige as it was/is. Fanfiction has always existed, because everyone's a critic. Great job though!
Thank you. Personally I just couldn't find anything to get invested in in the show, I don't normally come up with alternate takes on how I would have made something, unless I feel like they really missed something.
If you liked the show, I'm glad people were able to get more out of it than I did.
This is great. I liked it....... you didnt..... and we are both fine with that. Not everything thats made is for me or you. But it is for someone. Keep up the good work on your channel.
@@BryBry2ply Yeah. I don't know what happened to the world.
Why did it because, "We don't like the same things so we are enemies."?
Everyone is different, everyone likes different things, if that weren't the case the world would be so boring.
What would people even talk about if everyone had the exact same opinion?
Hey your starscream voice is better than mine
Ehh, it's just like my voice like 1 octave higher.
You know if you ever decided to do an actual series, I could probably provide some services in a couple of years
I just might, if you still want to help in a couple years.
I feel like idea-wise this isn’t that bad (although I don’t remember any G1 episode having a Text crawl and generally those are not good. Star Wars was an exception. Most of the time it’s just a bad way to get out your exposition in a way that just tells and doesn’t show anything.)
The issue that I’d say is we’d need more of some actual “character arcs” for a Character driven story. I feel like it would have been better to see more of the war though. In fact I can imagine the entire thing of the Ark being seen more like a crazy pipe dream of some of the Scientific/Pacifist characters with others just flat out being against it. Perhaps have the first 3-4 episodes being some other plan with the start of the series having Omega Supreme refusing to help Optimus and warning that Cybertron cannot keep up Energon production at the rate needed to manage this war and may end up becoming desolate for generations for Primus to heal. Optimus attempts a plan that ends in a fight with Megatron and the Decepticons where Megatron manages to win the fight and one of the last Energon refineries on the planet is destroyed. With now even less useful Energon on the planet, Optimus reluctantly must declare the mission to abandon Cybertron as any further war on the planet could harm the planet further. But Megatron insensed that Optimus would abandon the Planet especially after Optimus was “to blame” for destroying the last Energon refinery - he tries to turn the rest of the Planet against the Autobots. The finale has Omega Supreme come online and stop the Decepticons as the Autobots manage to blast off and get away from Cybertron but with Megatron revealing that they can track the Ark… and stop them before they can “spread their evil” to another planet.
I very much get what they wanted Megatron’s character arc to be but you just can’t manage that in 6 episodes. You would need 13 at least with Megatron as the main character. Really if this was like 26-39 episodes you could do a full arc where Megatron falls from his noble ideals to becoming so obsessed with “winning the war” that he compromises his ideals and ends up fighting Optimus, but that was just too ambitious for only 6 episodes
Oh absolutely normally you don't want that, but Considering there are only 6 episodes and a lot of Backstory so it was needed here.
I think you could have achieved any one to two things in six episodes, that's longer than most movies after all, but they had to limit their scope somewhere.
@@PerspectiveEnd yea for sure. Netflix bit off way too much for 6 episodes. And I really don’t think that the fans would mind having to watch a longer series… but screw it we will only do 6 episodes! Seriously though, if they focused on the idea as more of a movie and not more of episodes of a show it would probably of made the series a bit better…
Also side note - I do like just scrapping Red Alert’s character for the Armada Red Alert for the most part. Then again that might be more of just me really REALLY hating G1 Red Alert after coming from Armada and really liking the character. I feel like if he’s gonna be paranoid it should be toned down or just scrap that idea…
Surprised you didn’t speed up the audio here. It sounds kinda weird without it.
I'd yet to figure out my style. I thought the fast Talking thing might put people off, even though i wanted to do it from the beginning, so I tried without it.
@@PerspectiveEnd to me personally, it gives your channel some kind of charm. In this, you talked pretty slow, and this video could have easily have shaved off five minutes if you either talked faster or just sped up the audio.
Oh I could probably have shaved 10 minutes off this but I didn't know what I was doing yet, there are too many long pauses and too many slow takes.
Your ideas are far better than Netflix, alright. Personally, the Scavengers idea is genius. But why keep it there? Have Springer show up with Mirage instead of Hound, and make it a Wreckers origin to have Impactor join the Autobots.
Well I wanted to have the two Illusion power guys to be in one episode together.
But Springer being the Antagonist of the Scavengers Episode would be great.
@@PerspectiveEnd Yeah, I was just thinking that Impactor switching to autobot side due to meeting Springer would work and also make happy the Wreckers fans.
Why does this video's speed feel so *slow*
Because I wasn't going fast yet, and it was my first time reading a script.
Actually on the hasbro website it says star scream is a captain
And sound wave is a major so he does out rank star scream
Also reflector, spinister, and sky treads are all raiders
So I like how they work together
But it does make me sad how ape face and brunt aren’t there
Yeah. It makes sense that way, not quite the same in the show though, since Starscream was a grunt who got promoted to the leader of the Seekers which isn't any kind of military position.
I like this more than the series but this sadly only proves that it takes just one, well knowledgeable writer than a team of incompetent "writers".
You actually sound like WFC Optimus. Why didn't they hire you? Since you'd be in the cast, you'd probably have influence to change some things about the show, like in this video.
I mean I assume they had all the voice actors literally phone in their lines so I don't know that I'd have really been able to get off any influence, but I'd have tried. I think my other impressions are better.
@@PerspectiveEnd Keep up the good work. Just look at Jobby. He's been doing this over six years now and he's very influencial. He has voiced a lot of characters (especialy Starscream) in a lot of YT channels. He's so influencial that he actually got David Kaye in his video. TWICE! One day I hope something as good may happen to you. And fuck dem haters bro. If they don't have valid points or criticidize you on how to improve your vids, they aren't worth your time. I can barely even consider them as actual people.
@@odyseasthalassinos3427 They are people just fine, they have different tastes is all or might just have a stick up their but. They don't bother me in the slightest.
I know my stuff won't be loved by everyone, no sense on getting hung up about it or developing a complex.
The day I decide my stuff is perfect and can't get better is the day I become bad at this.
Did you do one of these for Earth rise?
I have not. I've been meaning to do one FOR EVER but every time I get ready to do it, something pops up and pushes the video back, I'm a try to do it in the next couple months.
@@PerspectiveEnd It was just really good… love the buddy cop idea, love how you came up with it in a couple of hours because you know and love the characters from way back... Honestly how hard could it be to get someone like that on the staff when making one of these shows???
Ze colonel starsrema
👏🏼😎
I don't know what you mean, but thanks for the comment.
What do you think of it so far
And by it I mean a cliff jump Down hill
It sounds like fun silly little show. I can see it in my head. You clearly like Cliffjumper.
Cliff jumper never gets used in any transformers show or movie
I finally finished it
@@Deema1979 Yes, you seem to be posting it right now.
Ok I need to bring this up, I like this video because I thought it was clever and kinda funny, but I showed this to a friend who’s kinda into Transformers and he kinda hated this. Now let me be clear he hates the Netflix show to but this pissed him off for a couple of reasons.
1. How you treated Impactor. My friend is a wrecker fan so I think you can understand why that made him mad.
2. This is kinda a recurring thing you do P that I agree you need to stop doing. You need to stop saying that no one cares about different things like the AllSpark, the 13 Primes, and a few other things. Now I agree they’re done to death concepts but they are still staple parts of the franchise now so they won’t leave. And also, I’m pretty sure that most if not all of your audience are people born in the 2000s and grew up with this stuff so we prefer this over G1 stuff.
I know there are other reasons other than this but I wanna stop here. Again I just thought I needed to bring this stuff up because if one person feels like this than I’m pretty sure others feel like this also. I liked it and want to see more things like this, but I just thought that you should know P.
Interesting points.
I will say I have since calmed down on the making definitive statements about the communities reactions to things for the most part, however I said stuff like "No one likes this or that" because in as far as I could tell it was the general consensus. Like Even Thew doesn't care for the 13 and he's the nicest Transformers fan.
And I feel comfortable about the Allspark because it serves a completely superfluous job. Depending on the continuity it steals abilities from other Cybertronian artifacts that existed before it.
How ever your friend being broken up that I made a joke about Impactor doesn't weigh on me much, it's not like he was the butt of the whole episode, he is supposed to be a threatening and intimidating presence in the story I came up with.
I cracked a joke at Impactors expense at the end. I don't think that was stepping over a line.
Also fun Fact, due to my analytics only about 30% or less of my audience was born after 2000. I even have subscribers up into their 60s.
@@PerspectiveEnd The 60s!?!? And also good points
Can you Finish episode 6 because this is a little better than siege
You want me to voice another episode? But that would be cruel and unusual punishment to anyone listening to me doing a girl voice.
Thank you, I'm glad people like my vision.
Yeah...I'd watch this.
Thank you. It always shocked me this was so well received.
@@PerspectiveEnd I'm a new subscriber, and I've been checking out the older stuff I've missed...I really dig what you're doing.
So what do you think of cyberverse
Hello ???
Huh. I responded to this the other day, but my response has disappeared. RUclips!!!
It's funny you ask because I actually just started Watching it. I'm most of the way though the first season, and man I have to say the Voice Acting for anyone who's not Bumblebee, Windblade, Grimlock or Starscream is terrible.
The tone is also horribly inconsistent, Like everyone on Velocitron dies and then 2 seconds later we see bumblebee bump his head because wacky.
So far it's OK, but it has issues I'm hoping the hammer out as time goes on.
I hate cyberverse grim lock
@@Deema1979 I don't care for him, but I can't say that I hate it.
I thought the skits were real good even if the voices don't even though honselty there so similar that I can not remember any of there voices
Any of the voices I did, or the ones that were in the actual show. I'm not a Professional Voice actor, and thank you very much.
Is this the only video we’re his voice isn’t fast
I wasn't doing the fast thing for the first 4 videos I made, I wasn't sure people would like it, so I was hesitant to do it.
Bumblebees cheeks will consume cybertron
@@whydopeoplelovefoxy2051 He will store all of it in the side pouch like a Gerbil.
But the rest of the universe is in his other cheeks
@@whydopeoplelovefoxy2051 Ok he's not that fat, give him a little credit.
what is soundwave saying
Classified?
@@PerspectiveEnd oh i thought he was saying positive or negative
yeah i see it know
Your bad acting was better then all of siege
Why thank you very much, though I do think my Starscream is terrible.
I did have a idea for a siege show but I don’t think you want to hear it
Can you give me a short overview, preferably in one post?
Basically everything is included every figure get 1 line weaponiezers get a episode every micro master gets an episode about fixing omega and sky fire ( turning sky fire into the robotech amor ) galaxy upgrade Optimus prime is in the final episode. And a lot of other stuff made to have every single last thing from siege even the rain makers that die at the end of there episode
@@Deema1979 I mean that sounds liked the dream, but the question is would any serries get the budget to do it.
Flip I knew I forgot something
You give too much crap to your acting. Remember that the Prime Wars trilogy exists. Your acting is fiiiiineeee 😌👌
I suppose that's fair. Thank you!
Well time to try to make transformers ( I have still not figured out a name yet ) episode 2 season 1
I assume you are about to send a long string of comments my way then?
Episode 2: power glide vs the blue Baron
You’re correct
Announcer guy: and welcome to the cosmo talk show
Announcer guy: and here’s your host cosmo
Hasbro don’t really care about the series’s there a toy basic series
I mean if they aren't going to bother making it good, why spend the money on it at all?
@@PerspectiveEnd yeah it’s was a waste of money for hasbro it’s a slap to shows in general who even green light this
I don't know why they didn't fire FJ Desanto after the PWT.
This crappy video actually made me want to get the toys more than siege. Sad that one guy with good editing skills and a mic can do better that a huge company.
Crappy. Ouch my feelings. Glad you think I did better than they did though.
Also...remove the slow moving dialogue. It'd also be the 1st time Optimus and Ultra Magnus worked together as LEADERS since Scramble City. It baffles me how with as many toys they had, they NEVER thought to include them as background characters.
Well the show was relentlessly cheap which is why there were so few characters who actually showed up.
And yes talk faster damn it.
That’s it I’m just gonna tell you the idea for my transformers show transformers I haven’t gave it a name yet
Season1 Episode 1: cliff jump into doom
It opens up in a apocalypse
A manly voice: in a world
Is this the same one you were telling me about before?
A manly voice: There’s nothing but dumb decepticons