r/menwritingwomen…DRAWN LITERALLY
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- Опубликовано: 16 ноя 2023
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this reddit is so funny and silly I thought it would be fun to draw them exactly as written!
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I liked this idea, good video c:
Eek i asked for unfamiliar for Christmas (1 & 2!) i really hope i get it
YES! YES.
hello! what app do you use to draw? i want to try drawing on computers.
@@UnhealthyCatObsession.. I think she uses photoshop
The second girl is not built like a refrigerator. She’s built like a mini freezer.
DONT DO HER LIKE THAT BHAHAAHHA
Bro she looks like a fucking Lego character lmfao
As someone built like a refrigerator I can confirm
Nah she’s built like a roblox char
@@SemiCollon2she looks like tgat one body package?? Like the woman one but with the rounded feet instead of the blocky ones 😭
"i know its not the most natural pose, but this isnt the most natural prose" was an ICONIC line
HELL YES
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I read this as she said it 😭
REALL
Can i ask what a prose is? •3•
I always thought the whole “hips so thin she could not give birth to a baling wire” was talking about how extreme the beauty standard was and how predatory the modeling agency was. I pictured her severely underweight with her collar bone showing and ribs showing and all that and found it super sad
Tbh, if this book realy is about horrors of modeling agency, than description of main character realy got the point across and could be considered actualy good
exactly i took it as a hyperbole for how thin you must be to be considered in the modelling industry
Could be, but I ain’t gonna read to book find out.
@@Marrianno I doubt, the title of the book is "Easy Prey". "orz
That description was the creepiest for me. Talking about a sixteen year old giving birth in her description like that.
The girl described with a ‘knife edge cheekbone’ made my brain immediately go to Yzma from emperors new groove.
I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE-
YES, EXACTLY HER
Who the heck is that? 🤔
@riverselive_kdmz_8458 the main antagonist of Kuzko's life 😂
I was thinking Curella De Vill lol
An unexplored alternative possibility for the lashes she could lick is that her eyelashes are totally normal, she just has a freakishly-long snake tongue, which is of course for the purpose of making it easier to lick her own eyeballs
🤣🤣🤣
Or somewhere in between where her toungue is extra long but so are her lashes 😂
She is straight up a lizard
you could even go as far as to say it isnt her tongue or lashes that are short or long but infact her face is so incredibly short that her tongue reaches her lashes
All of these replies are horrifying i love them
The second one actually was the author just describing stereotypically beautiful aspects in a woman, he’s obviously one of those people in love with his car
not just any car... late 80's, 90's cars..
Your comment actually made me snort out loud! Can't help but to think of Queen's "I'm in love with my car", written and sung by Roger Taylor:
🎵🎶 I'm in love with my car
Got a feel for my automobile
Get a grip on my boy-racer Rollbar
Such a thrill when your radials squeal 🎵🎶
is that a Queen reference? haha
I’m in love with my car too lowkey but I’d never describe my chest that way 💀
...is she a transformer?
i find it funny how the second author went into so much detail describing her square elegance but with the face he felt "her face was nice too btw" was enough haha
As a guy writer, I always see a lot of other guys write women in the weirdest of ways. I know it's tough to write someone who has had different experiences, but come on it can't be THAT hard right???? I always try to make all of my characters as realistic as possible in terms of personality and design and stuff. I know I'm not perfect but I'm working to get better all the time!
In this day and age all you have to do is add more then just pale hour glasses and your practically the best male writer dont worry. (Partly joke)
You know you can just ask women for their experiences. You don't have to know anything or learn anything. Just listen and take notes.
My advice would be to always remember that women are not aliens or a different species, so most of their experiences are simply people experiences, just like the ones you have.
im sorry but i have to laugh at how she kept using the 'giving birth to a bailing-wire' part as an example for how weird these people can get describing female characters lmao
i could not get over it,,, i could not move on
@@LavenderTownepraying they meant the entire coil and NOT a singular wire
Dude, authors like these loveee to specify puberty features when it comes to young girls and teens. It's like their fav thing to point out "budding breasts" or "growing hips" or birthing ability specifically towards young characters. Major creep vibes, to be that focused on a young girl's growing process.
@@TNP- damnit now thats making me giggle even more lmaooo
@@ettaetta439 yeeah, its why i tend to avoid older books. but [unfortuneately] it happens in a LOOOOT of fanfics too. its one thing to want to describe your characters well enough that the reader can visualize them as if they knew them in the real world. but pointing out things like uhm...that? yeah no. its like an immediate ick for me. bonus points if the reader has actually had experience with a pedo preying on them like that..
They said be there or be square and this is what she did
THIS HAS NO REASON TO MAKE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS I JUST DID 😭✋
IM DEAD BRO
LMAOOO NOOO
a content creator friend once had "be there or be square" title on their live stream, i saw it going live on discord but didn't have time to watch.. but for some reason i had time to do simple "photoshop" (iirc i used ms paint) where i changed spongebob square pants color, clothes and face to reflect my avatars features and i shared that pic on discord with "i guess i am square then"
girl WAS there, and she WAS square as well. get you a girl who can do both
Nothing on that subreddit will ever beat the absolute silliness of the infamous "breasted boobily" post.
Where and why
As a female writer, im now changing all my female characters to look like this because this is peak character design
"She walked though the door and gazed into my eyes. She looked like the most hideous creature I have ever seen."
@@kikosawaLMFAOOO
@@kikosawaHELP THAT MADE MY DAY
I hate women's hips being described in terms of giving birth.
Same, it’s just disturbing tbh
Right like it can be a genuine medical concern to have narrower hips in the context of birth. So, it weird to throw that out so flippantly
agreed, whenever they do it it just feels like they only see women as baby making tools :[
People said that a few times to me when I was a teen (which makes it worse) and I found it so creepy.
But is basic biology, lol.
“her f***-me shoulder blades” Ahh, the haunting imagery of shoulder blades morphing into a mouth to beg the author to sleep with their owner.
Wait, is that what it said????
LMFAOOOOO
@@greenapple9477yes, usually I see that describing someone's gaze (f*ck-me eyes), or something, never seen anyone describe shoulder blades that way...
NAHH
Sometimes people should just....think what they're doing.
As a dude I once asked my audience how to write women and they said “Write them how you write men. Like actual people.”
Sis is out here slaying while gracefully smuggling 2 toasters in her shirt. 😂💀 Great art and love the idea of drawing them as literal as possible!
Is it bad that I still think they're actually kinda pretty in their own unique way?
nah bro/girl, they are kinda pretty.
It’s thanks to her artstyle
No, they’re very cute in her style
the way haley draws makes everything look pretty
it's the art style
As a man who writes mostly female characters... I don't feel called out, because I write them like people.
THANK YOU!
Yo that confidence
What is writing females correctly means
Good on you, not feeling the need to apologize for something you're not responsible for.👍
well you start by not using the term "females" to describe people@@devilslayer3548
What male authors think women think when they look in the mirror: “my flawless white skin and lush lips. Stunning”
What we actually think: “what in the cinnamon toast fuck has sprouted on my face overnight!?”
Or: “Great, that bruise STILL hasn’t healed, I should get that checked out.”
"Dang. I guess them eyebags are permanent huh"
@@spam-el3ee Relatable as a guy, too.
Sometimes when I look in to the mirror, I start to think about how weird and bald humans look compared to other animals and I start to freak out... XD
@@Pupsuli We have the worst skin. Other mammals have hair that keeps them warm, but we have to purchase our equivalent. Now we're more vulnerable to cold temperatures and sunburns.
the way you drew the first girl is just... so compelling? like man idk what it is about her giant eyes and ridiculous lashes, i just love her lol
It’s very shojou 😅
Haha same. It looks weird but I love it. The big eyes makes her look cute
And this foot, mmmm
it’s her art style i think
“she looks like she’s been eating bees”
the author should have combined this line with the 16 year old girl
At least she would have been eating something, poor dear.
@@nineblackgoatsYeah. Is bailing wire girl eating okay? I am actually a little concerned for her.
NOOOO THE BEES :((((((
My friend said something like "the winner of the yearly nettle-sucking competition" once. I was reminded of that.
@@elainez'least she has those shoulder blades
I actually really like the square girly. In spite of the writing mistakes, I think that it's kinda nice that a non-stereotypically beautiful or feminine girl is being shown to be lovely and graceful.
Yet they described her body in the finest details giving it all the protagonism, but when describing her face the author just wrote "and her face is pretty too" like 💀
She is honestly sounds like the most unique of them
Yeup
@@DanGabrielle The author's name is Moto Moto
Her description is weird for unique reasons. The author could do better, but it’s not awful. Besides looking like she’s shoplifting boxes, she looks the most human.
Honestly "she looked like she had been eating bees" is a pretty "men writting women" valid descritption x)
I don't even know what that means can someone explain 😂
Who eats bees? like i stepped on a bee expression ?
In the video, Lavendertown says that the lips are so big and swollen, the girl looks like she ate a bee/ was stung by a bee on the mouth. I thought that would make a good bad descricption of big lips in a woman descritpion written by a man :D@@chixkgoddess8499
@@chixkgoddess8499 I think she was comparing this woman's lips to the lips of someone with a bee allergy getting stung.
This premise would be a great horror themed drawing. Like you could really exaggerate to make them skinwalkers.
I’m sorry, but I want someone to write a story using all of these as the protagonists.
Someone please do that I will read it immediately!
With the majestic box girl has the mc
Or maybe an animated reality TV show bc 😂
It would make a great Newsground satire show
I might do it lol
The way they describe women scares me sometimes 💀
Those guys saw a woman their whole life and decided to take inspiration from kitchen appliances and infrastructure
OH MY GOD A WILD SPOOKY MONTH FAN!!!!!!!! HI!!!!!!
@@drfluffff YES HAIIIIII
Men tend to have a problem with thinking women are always about trying to look pretty, or be feminine all the time.
I have no idea why so many men have so much difficulty when writing women, you literally just write a character
Who goes by she/her
It’s not hard
@@Soapz_drawzzz AAAAAAA ITS SO RARE TO FIND US OUTSIDE OUR NATURAL HABITAT!!!!!!!! HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Because of LavenderTowne's distinctive art style, I feel like these gals could be a friend group! XD
“With lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them” Gurl what 😭😭😭
Yeah that must look kinda creepy😅
ONLY SOMETIMES?? do they fluctuate in length?
how do you lick your lashes??? it literally makes no sense
as a girl, i can confirm, i think of myself as having "lips made for kissing" and frequently make out with my own reflection /j
Huh
You joke but when I pass I mirror I genuinely think "Damn"
@@galaxyjam3742ngl same, I always think I'm kinda ugly the moment I'm not looking at my reflection...then when I actually see myself I am pleasantly surprised.
@@galaxyjam3742
*_Passes mirror_*
*_Bites lip_*
no like srsly i look at myself and think "how am i single"?@@galaxyjam3742
The way you drew the “easy prey” girl reminds me of what happens when your legs atrophy after you’ve been in a wheelchair for a long time. Which don’t get me wrong people in wheelchairs are just as gorgeous as anyone else.
I thought the exact same thing I just didn't know how to say it. It looks like it could be someone with a disability.
It's kind of funny to think that if they actually went with the route the character would have looked less nightmare fuel
I don’t think it changes your waist and hips size though?
@@HiBuddyyyyyywell of course not but in a cartoon art style things can be exaggerated
@@jellyfishfingernail oh yeah, that makes more sense. Sorry for misunderstanding.
when i heard "lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them" my stupid ass closed my eyes to see if my tongue could reach my eyelashes and was more disappointed in what i had just done than how disappointed my parents are with me
IM GONNA CRYYYYYRHDGGDGDGGWGQYYSHSD
11:33 "she looks a little bit like she's been eating bees"
so many good sentences in this video
i would love a part 2 of this
If you turn the third girl cheek bones into literal knives I think you might just have a new creepypasta on your hands.
"you might wonder how I ended up with these scars..."
Ah yes, the ol' Jenny Knifecheeks.
@mer-acle8101 “My father… he wasn’t a very good man”
JENNY KNIFECHEEKS 🤣@@omegabet3912
Edwina Scissorcheeks
I don't know if I can get over the "lashes so long that sometimes she could lick them." I wonder if they continuously grow, like the hair on a person's head 💀
"What? You mean to tell me women don't try to lick their eyelashes???" - male author
I hate how it reminded me about The Man from Nantucket 😭
No because the picture of eyelashes that long isnt even attractive at all anymore. 😭
Imagine waking up and your eyelashes are so long, they got tangled and fused with eye boogers, your eyes can't open. 😂😂
@@ItsDaJax I remember a show that had a "city" girl with mascara so thick her eyelashes had trouble opening sometimes. It was played for laughs.
I like they they are trying to describe beautiful women but when you draw out and see what they are describing it actually becomes something horrifying
The way the girl friend was describing that one girl was one of the gayest things I’ve heard today. In my head all I could see was the girl rapidly describing every detail and being like “no you don’t understand, she’s perfect! Let me tell you everything I love about her appearance!” While the guy is kinda concerned about how down bad this girl is.
That’s actually kinda true! I read the book and there is a heaven “gay-but-don’t-say-gay-because-it’s-the-90s” vibe the whole series. They even kinda get married later in the series but… not really it’s weird.
If you're talking about the last one - the series has explicitly homosexual relationships that are common and unremarkable in society, meaning there is no stigma behind them. The culture of the woman doing the describing of her friend is such that talking about the physical form of another person is not a sexual thing. They see nothing wrong with nudity even between sexes, and are open about sexual relationships (not to say they are all just constantly screwing, they aren't). The woman talking about her friend is supporting her and listing her good qualities, and knows that the man she's talking to DOES like her friend (he is not the same culture as them). There is nothing wrong with this in her culture. HIS culture is very restrained, so it seems exaggerated even more to him. If he didn't stop her from talking more, then she would have gone into more detail and talked about her personality too.
BTW, tomatoes don't have to be super red, they can be pale pink and other shades too. And "fine and well-rounded" bosom doesn't mean big, it just means that the shape is nice.
The other commenter talking about the 2 women being "married" is incorrect about what the relationship is between them. They both love the man, and he loves them (and gets both pregnant), but there is no marriage. The women do NOT have a sexual relationship between them, they are friends as close as sisters. The relationships are important to the story as they are exploited by the antagonists, especially one who loved a previous incarnation of the man and is now extremely jealous of the women.
As a male writer, I don't understand how things like that even come up. I never even THINK about my characters chest or screwability
Its just incels who write this stuff. So long as your not an incel, I presume your writing will stay fine
Right? Like...do you have any self-awareness or understand that you're writing book that everyone would see and read, not just you?
I was about to take serious that "men writing women" subreddit, but then I remember that she hulk and captain marvel are written by women, and Kim Wexler and Carmela Soprano are written by men. Reddit just being reddit.
@@dollycheesecakes3658
The writers who are criticized in that subreddit have wives and kids, wtf are you talking about?
"Incels are men who do something I don't like".
You don't? I do. I just don't write it.
That last one made me remember all the time characters would be described with "ruby red lips" or "lips like ripe cherries" for characters that either don't wear make up, or wouldn't have access to make up (in general, or of those colors). Because like, that's a sort of unnatural color for lips to be. Idk, not a huge thing, just sort of funny. It's the same sort of break in realism when a character is described as having smooth legs when she lives in a time period and culture where leg shaving wasn't a thing.
1. Natural red lips exist, not that red like the drawing, but exist.
2. Shaving exists since first humans.
@@SuperiorGothCat You missed my point. Most people don't have bright red lips without make up. And like, many cultures did not shave legs. Many cultures to this day do not shave legs. Oh sure the greeks and egyptians might've, but the english until the modern era didn't. It wasn't a beauty standard in america until razor companies started pushing it in like the 40s.
@@SuperiorGothCat You're such a bad troll. You comment bullshit but then when people call you out on it you don't reply because there is no defense for the nonsense you're saying.
@@SuperiorGothCat
OP: it's not natural for people to have ruby/cherry led lips
You: it's not natural for people to have lips just like how you literally just described, but I will mention that natural red hued lips do exist because I want to argue against something you never even said
bro you either lack comprehension skills or just want to argue for the sake of arguing... or both
Rosacea and that a large percentage of the world doesn't naturally have that much body hair, I guess. My mother doesn't have very much body hair because that's not a trait common to her ancestors from western africa and south east asia (neither have that much body hair naturally) but I wouldn't know what ethnicity the character in your story was.
The dude describing the second girl was sooo close. Like I can see how she would look like and I know what he means it’s just…the way mans described her is out of pocket and made me think “damn…you didn’t have to do her like that” 😭 as Lavender said it was giving “so I know she isn’t conveniently attractive BUT like look tho!!! she still cute I swear” 💀
I love that the first girl looks like she stared into the void, then put it in her gaze to make everyone experience what she did
“describing a 16 year old in possibly the creepiest way I’ve ever seen”
Oh it gets SO much worse
I’m pretty sure I’ve seen something on there about describing a 13-year-old as having “budding breasts” 🤢
@@genesisofthebetween That's typically the time they start getting them, if not sooner.
@genesisofthebetween to be perfectly fair, I was a double d at 13 and had friends who were just beginning to develop. The context in which a description like that happens is of more concern to me. It could be very normal and kinda basic or super creepy depending on the perspective it's coming from.
@@oneechanknowsbest615yeah but it’s still weird…why are you describing a child’s breasts
@@urcryingteacup Writers, I assume, have this tendency to want to be extremely specific so you can visually imagine the character in your mind. You could see someone like this in real life, and it'd be perfectly normal. All they are doing is describing that perfectly normal thing so you know what you're looking at.
If it were a drawing of a teenager, you'd expect their to at least be some sort of chest size on a female character as opposed to a male one and wouldn't bat an eye if it was just an innocent drawing, but for some reason, having it described in a book is weird? I think people are overthinking it, honestly.
I'm surprised at how Lavendertowne always gets such creative ideas for her videos. No wonder why she's so beloved in the art community
I'm a guy who writes a lot of female characters and I am so glad that I studied up on my women's anatomy before writing women and I'm also glad that I love this subreddit because it's so funny how some men write women. Like just write them as people, it's not that hard and when you need to describe things such as periods (I tend to include mentions of those in my books because they're just part of every day life), just do your research.
I’m sorry, you’ve dropped this, you beautiful human being:
👑
But fr, let’s normalize this sheet!
When I found that subreddit, I aspired to never be a subject of scrutiny.
"Her hips were breedable in the most anatomical way possible"
4:56 SHE LOOKED LIKE SHE WAS A ROBLOX CHARACTER
"Eyelashes so long, she could like them."
She got them Patrick Star eyelashes
"He'll probably give us 40 lashes!"
"Ohh noo!"
I think the most off-put part abt the “square” girl (and what proved they needed to be put on the subreddit) was the way they described the *whole* body.
The body itself was described is weirdly specific details, but when they got to the face it was suddenly just “-oh, and her face was beautiful too ig (idk)” LIKE *that’s* what really cemented the fact that the author was weirdly describing this womanly character
Literally, like man had to seriously add in the "her FACE is pretty" Like what about the rest.
And it was described after it already seemed to be done with her physical description and was getting into describing how she walks, as if the author was like "Alright, finally described my character properly, now I can get into the actual story...but why do I feel like I'm forgetting som- OH, right, her face! Uhhh, I guess it's just...pretty?"
He first checked out her assets and then only found her face , like a true man 😂
To be fair if you saw someone like that their face is not gonna be the defining feature lol, so it’s just an afterthought there too
This would be definetly me but with plots. I imagine the most detailed, especific and complex lore and then I just wake up and remember that I need a plot.
2:04 If i saw someone with lashes like that, I'm getting outta there before I get sacrificed.
I love how each girl is almost a representation of a different part of r/menwritingwomen: eyes/lashes, breasts, cheeks/hips, and finally lips
(only the avatar, writer of all elements, will get the subreddits top post of all time)
The last one is actually kinda terrifying cuz she doesn't have even a hint of emotion, there's absolutely nothing behind those gem-like eyes, just the sound you'd expect to hear when the void's calling you lol
Edit: I'd love another video like this! It's both hilarious, unsettling, and thought inducing. I agree with the other comments, I adore the second girl!!
Robert Jordan apparently goes overboard with equally describing everything. Wheel of Time is actually a really good fantasy series but even the fans joke how ridiculously over-board Jordan's descriptions go.
Just from the title I can tell it’s going to be amazing and hilarious
10:27 To be fair though, as someone who is a huge fan of this series the context for this is actually that Aviendha (the one describing her friend) is an “Aiel person”, and these people have no boundaries AT ALL in these kind of things and all the women in it are sort of gay (it’s never made explicitly clear but that’s the vibe I always got from them)
Nah. They say pretty often that the Maidens sleep with guys. I don't remember any references to them sleeping with other women, and I've read the series several times. They're explicit with other characters having homosexual or even bisexual relationships, so RJ wouldn't have been coy about it. Especially with the Aiel.
7:40 not the Cruella de Ville cheekbones💀😭😭😭
The long lashes are kind of cool but I can't imagine how HEAVY that would feel
Imagine them just getting stuck in your eye aswell 😭
imagine having to wear glasses with these
the first description: woman has feet, lashes, eyes, shoulders…
there’s literally no description of what she actually looks like
And yet she is probably the most described character in the books
What, you've never seen a woman? She probably looks somewhat like them
@@kikosawawhat’s a woman
@@AshKittenPKXD a man, but different
@@kikosawawhat's a man
0:32 “SOMETIMES”??? 😭😭😭 HOW IS IT ONLY SOMETIMES
4:24 her chest looks like smart, glasses wearing anime character lol
As a man, I’m so sorry for our terrible women writing skills
Oh no, not the dude apologizing for other dudes to whom he has no relation.
Lucy Steele and Hot Pants:
@@ucantknowwhoiamformyownsaftey *Steel
Is that a m*therfucking JoJo reference?
As a trans man I'm just here for the entertainment. Why did I specify that I'm trans? Idk why did you make your comment? 😂
@@ucantknowwhoiamformyownsafteyyeah, Araki is some of the few male authors who knows how to write characters regardless of their gender. But he explicitly said he got some help from his wife (basically, ask people of your opposite gender how they feel or act in a certain situation and you'll learn how to write them)
3:48
Not the ‘Mom I threw up’ pose 💀
☠️☠️☠️☠️
i think its crazy that in the second one it describes her as "moving on the fronts of her feet" like thats desirable OR graceful. like i walk on tip toes as a habit and i trip like 5 times a day. and not in a "perpetual dance" way in an eating shit on the concrete on the regular way
5:17 “let me be square ☝️🫡🤔”
I love how the first description is so wild that google thought she was talking about an injury.
finishing up homework before break! cannot wait to watch this new video! r/menwritingwomen is a good example of how women are stereotyped and sexualized in all types of media sometimes
The giant eyelashes are honestly a vibe when they're SUPPOSED to be cartoony.
wh- THE SHOULDER BLADES?!? SIXTEEN!!?!?!
4:36 Even tho I saw the cube-boobs in the thumbnail, I STILL nearly choked on my dinner from wheeze-laughing once you started shading them in. 😭
ITS HILARIOUS
Love the use of meme overlays, made me genuinely laugh. The first one reminds me of that one creepy drawsta that you drew.
The way you went at Aviendha's description of Elayne is hilarious, and I couldn't agree more. XD Although, in the book series, the whole point was that Aviendha was hyper-exaggerating to compensate for having a serious crush on the same guy she was trying to hype her friend to on top of her whole culture being seriously socially awkward by our standards. So it fit. I also had no idea love-apples was another name for tomatoes. That's so funny!
When I read the books way back then I thought that Aviendha had a crush of her own on Elayne and was in fact a bisexual disaster... Which, I mean, considering how (keeping it spoiler free) the whole thing ends up working out with Rand, well, that's just a plus
@@CrescentMond That's definitely a possibility. Doesn't exactly work with the whole "sisters" thing they go for, but still possible. I don't think it's strictly what was intended, especially with how subtle he had to be at the time with "pillow friends" etc, but it was certainly something he WAS inserting into the plot.
I'm just here annoyed at the people in the comments missing the context.
I was searching for this comment, and I want to add that it wasn't just the crush, it was also Aiel culture lol
@@CrescentMond They literally went through the process to become sisters. Like, not in the sorority way, but in the "we are family" way. That's really, really disturbing thinking that. You wouldn't think of someone in a sexual way and then try to become their sibling.
Homosexual relationships aren't stigmatized and they even blatantly say that there are characters who are not straight. If Aviendha was into women, then that would have come across at some point.
"this is suggesting a narrowness of the hips that is haunting and terrifying" THAT WAS SO FUNNY 😭 whoever wrote that one literally just needs to go to a gas station and talk to a woman.
3:08 i kinda hoped she would draw Alex from minecraft.
YEAH why did they make her 16 and then go onto talk about how hard it would be for her to give birth,,,,,,that is a child 😭
let's not forget the f-me shoulder BLADES (???) ... mixing predatory sexual desires with knives 2x already (cheek/jaw, I forget..)
*pubescent teen. Not child.
@@strangeanimations588does it matter? Either way it's wired as hell teens may not be little kids but there definitely not adults and there like older children in a way if that makes sense
@@strangeanimations588 still a child though, any adult would still refer to a teen as a child. I'm almost 16 and I still feel very young
@@iam_crumb Yeah, I'm 16 and before I was a teen, I would definitely not think of 14+ as "child" just "underage" but now that I am sixteen, I do still feel that me and even other people my age are still children.
Someone once told me that I write women better than most of Hollywood. I don’t know if I should take that as a compliment or an insult.
If you write them better than Hollywood, you are doing everything right. If you write them like real people, than your audience would love to read more of your books
That's a compliment to your side and an insult to Hollywood
It's a compliment, but it's a low bar.
@@bluelfsuma 🥲
@@joetheartbro2859don’t be discouraged; even if it’s a low bar you’re still doing something right!
As a guy who draw and writes whole world's, im glad I learned how to describe characters, and draw characters. Also I never realized how so many blonde haired girl main or side characters there are in stories
3:17 mans went all in on describing a female minecraft villager then really ended on “her face was beautiful.” 0 further elaboration. Just yup, pretty face BUT LEMME TELL U BOUT THEM SQUARE BITTIES
“She looks a little bit like she’s been eating bees” 💀
Ur mom looks like she's been eating bees
I think that with "love apples" the writer meant "caramel apples". Love Apple is how we call caramel apples here in Brazil for example (we call them "Maçã do Amor")
Eu tava procurando alguém pra explicar isso KKKKKKKKKK tanto que quando ela leu eu imaginei uma boca com um lip tint bem vermelho e com gloss por cima
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Definitely not. He meant tomatoes, but probably not the bright/intense red ones. They come in other colours/less intensity.
9:00 looks like enki from fear and hunger 😭😭😭
I love how you draw 😩 i know the characters are creepy and weird but even when scary the hair is sooo beautiful or the HANDS and anatomy (proper anatomy, not the one with shrunk hips lmfao) is so beautifullllll. I love when you draw plump girls too, don’t get me wrong. They look so amazing but i dont see their skin as much, the skin/anatomy is hidden behind clothes so i appreciate the ones with tank tops more.
Im now realizing how creepy this sounds but artists please tell me you understand what i mean 🥲 ya know when you find good reference or inspo and you really like it and wanna draw it but its hard to draw a pose with clothes??
"Lashes so long she could lick them."
Wh... What? Why... why would you want that?? That sounds extremely uncomfortable and creepy.
I would've just drawn a Minecraft character for the second one.
"...DRAWN LITERALLY."
1:00 Actually, high arches are very commonly talk about in ballet like how they “want high arches” or “how terrible it is to have high arches in pointe shoes” 😂
literally love them all. authors can be funny when describing people lol
8:12 thats a young Cruella DeVille. getting her start as a model before becoming a fashion designer.
the third girl feels like the love child of lucius malfoy and voldemort
Im now inspired to write some characters (both male) who are trying to get their friend back with his ex girlfriend and are describing her weirdly, while the boy theyre trying to convince is just horrified.
That is one of my favorite subreddits, the descriptions are just mind boggling
On the last one, it feels like the friend describing her other friend has a unresolved crush on her while trying to deny it by pushing the male character towards her 😭 And the 16 year old one was the worst 😟
The female character describing her friend is doing that on purpose... and they later go through a process to become sisters. Like, actual sisters, not the sorority type. They do not have a sexual relationship of any kind.
The "she's going full minecraft mode" had gotten me, I was already laughing a little lol
These descriptions make me feel better about my own writing.
11:12 a love apple is a caramelized apple in a stick,pretty common on Brazil for a festivity
I would LOVE a part two, this was so enjoyable to watch and laugh at!! It's so creative and you did an amazing job
YES
The arch of a character’s foot is also a really weird thing to describe unless they have some sort of condition… 😅
The 3rd girl looks like she’d make a great monster like character, it’s pretty well designed especially in juxtaposition with her discription
"Lana Del Rey Phase" so specific yet I did go through that phase 😂
This is a fantastic concept for a video. I often find myself trying to understand the escher-like geometry of the girls in these descriptions as I read them.
You should absolutely consider making this a series! I could see these videos becoming an eye opener to some of those writers
Took one for the team and checked out the baling wire book and it‘s? A detective novel? Where Alie’e dies. Every sentence of the summary got steadily worse and also they reused the “knife edge cheekbones and jade green eyes” description again because they were really proud of it I guess
You absolutely know how to draw everything so cute, even when the descriptions are far from it. Fantastic editing btw.
Not to get nitpicky, but the word 'demesne' is actually pronounced like 'domain', as demesne is an archaic-French form of the word.
I actually thought it was pronounced de-mez-nee the first time I saw it, but I first heard the correct pronunciation in Triangle Strategy, which used a lot of archaic vernacular ( and also looking it up on Google or Wikipedia)
That reminds me of a friend's little sister where she's named Kieara but it's spelt "Clare".
@@inkersbrew6370 that is so hilarious I almost don't believe it
@YayaFeiLong
I KNOW RIGHT?? SHE IS A REAL PERSON!!!
The family of my friend's little sister went to Ireland before she was born and went to a place called "Clare Island" and apparently that's how you say the name in Irish??? Its so funny whenever my friend brings it up. We're all collectively American btw so who knows if she was named the incorrect pronunciation.
@YayaFeiLong ok, looking at the Wikipedia article, it's spelt Cliara. Which, makes more sense, expect they say the C like a K, so it's more akin to Kieara
This poor child has three different names g'dammit
@inkersbrew6370 I find Anglicization like this fascinating since it lets us see how other languages say essentially the same word.
Looks like she’s been “eating bees” caught me off guard
I always enjoy seeing things drawn as they are literally described, especially when the description is somewhat out there.