Sharing My Multi-Award-Winning Statement of Purpose (Two Masters Scholarships in UK & Germany)

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  • Опубликовано: 19 июн 2020
  • This statement of purpose was part of my application documents that earned me two masters scholarship; one at the London School of Economics and Political Science (LSE), and another at the University of Duisburg-Essen

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  • @mbunaboemmanuella4654
    @mbunaboemmanuella4654 3 года назад +2

    It is beautiful and flawless 👏🏼👏🏼
    You deserve everything good coming your way.
    I absolutely love it.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • @avosehtimothy414
    @avosehtimothy414 3 года назад +12

    Wow! You wrote a very good and convincing essay! This is fantabulous.
    Thanks for the video.

  • @musayazid4806
    @musayazid4806 2 года назад +3

    Awesome
    Thanks for helping me out on how to share my own statement of purpose

  • @babatopetade887
    @babatopetade887 2 года назад +3

    This really is brilliant!

  • @obiamakaebo3818
    @obiamakaebo3818 Год назад +1

    This is a bomb. I'll definitely start writing mine an I k ow it will come out excellent

  • @jeanpierrejironsosa4801
    @jeanpierrejironsosa4801 2 года назад

    Thank you so much for this video!! It was very helpful!

  • @mohammedalhassan368
    @mohammedalhassan368 3 года назад +1

    Wow, what a brilliant and academically convincing statement of Purpose. Good work done bro.

  • @feranmielizabeth6364
    @feranmielizabeth6364 2 года назад

    Wahoo, very powerful Sop you have there.😍

  • @Fatima-ph9ju
    @Fatima-ph9ju 2 года назад

    Excellent statement of purpose 👌

  • @okthatsinteresting
    @okthatsinteresting 3 года назад +1

    Hey Victor, do you know of any service that can help review the SOP we write? If not a service, then some forum or FB group perhaps?

  • @stanlluxy
    @stanlluxy 2 года назад +1

    Hello Victor, thanks for your kindness. However, for a B.Sc graduate in International Relations & Diplomacy, does M.Sc in Development and Governance align? Or would u prefer M.Sc in Peace and Conflict studies?

  • @Sabina_Eshun
    @Sabina_Eshun Год назад +1

    Where is the first, second and third paragraph how will I know how you structured it ?

  • @dawughantie9433
    @dawughantie9433 2 года назад

    Very useful information Mr. Victor

  • @hejarshahabi114
    @hejarshahabi114 4 года назад +4

    why do you do that "reading it". just put the link to download it.

  • @ebereezike3448
    @ebereezike3448 3 года назад

    Amazing! I noticed you applied to just one school. Was this a personal choice or there weren't two schools provision then?

  • @mehreengul5557
    @mehreengul5557 2 года назад

    you should make your website where these all things can be written ..it will be great for us

  • @asogwaobiora3991
    @asogwaobiora3991 2 года назад

    One of the best

  • @enloveyduvey001
    @enloveyduvey001 9 месяцев назад

    we appeciate you, Victor!

  • @hejarshahabi114
    @hejarshahabi114 4 года назад +2

    put the link to download the pdf

  • @sasurichmond6761
    @sasurichmond6761 2 года назад

    Please after writing, how can I send it to the university?

  • @lovelylilly3225
    @lovelylilly3225 4 года назад +2

    Again nice and helpful video ❤❤can i get its hard copy or download it???

  • @momentswithesolob
    @momentswithesolob 2 года назад

    This perfect!!!

  • @ejeefe4816
    @ejeefe4816 3 года назад +2

    How are you doing. Nice content. I also studied in Germany. Am trying to to get a PhD in politics. I see this is your area...... Can you give me some pointers and advice. Sure I have watched most of your videos but am sure you could give me more direct info........

  • @dawughantie9433
    @dawughantie9433 2 года назад

    Please, is recommendation letter a requirement when applying for scholarship

  • @avosehtimothy414
    @avosehtimothy414 3 года назад +20

    Guys, I think it is appropriate for him not to share the soft copy with us, in order to avoid plagiarism. Thanks.

  • @chinwe_nkwocha
    @chinwe_nkwocha 2 года назад

    Wait, one does not have to begin with an introduction of oneself?

  • @sasindusilva2907
    @sasindusilva2907 Год назад

    Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • @nitishshrimal
    @nitishshrimal 3 года назад +1

    Can someone please specify what should be word limit for a Statement of Purpose ?

  • @kepler3570
    @kepler3570 3 года назад +3

    Please how is statement of purpose different from motivational letter?
    Thanks

  • @stevetheanalyst
    @stevetheanalyst Год назад

    Victor, I noticed you requested scholarship at the end of your SOP.... currently Is it still accepted when applying for a university in USA....thanks

  • @rachaelaikhuomon2669
    @rachaelaikhuomon2669 2 года назад

    Hello Victor, did you have to prove you really did all these activities you listed?

  • @__nadiah_
    @__nadiah_ 3 года назад +3

    Good evening, thank you for making this video. Please I would appreciate if you can help me review my statement of purpose. Thank you

  • @Peterja91
    @Peterja91 8 месяцев назад

    This is great

  • @championolatunji6062
    @championolatunji6062 3 года назад +2

    I've definitely been writing my SOP the wrong way!!!!!

  • @tobilobaalade1099
    @tobilobaalade1099 2 года назад

    Awesome

  • @SehaliMohammed
    @SehaliMohammed 2 месяца назад

    I am a postgraduate what do you advise me i want to continue my PhD program

  • @elvisnnaemeka6722
    @elvisnnaemeka6722 2 года назад

    Nice essay. Are you an ex-seminarian?

  • @jabss7847
    @jabss7847 4 года назад +3

    Hi victor, I am applying for the DAAD Helmut schidmt scholarship. I have prepared and written my motivation of letter as best as I can but I am not sure if I have wrote it well enough. I think it would be a great help to me if you can share your motivation letter to me. Thanks and I am looking forward towards your reply !

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  4 года назад +1

      I just shared it in this video. Kindly check my channel for both my master's and PhD statement of purpose.

  • @kazeemmuraina6769
    @kazeemmuraina6769 3 года назад +2

    Hello Mr Victor. Please is there any correlation between statement of purpose and motivation letter? If an institution requested for only motivation letter, is it advisable to add statement of purpose?

  • @victoragageche8014
    @victoragageche8014 2 года назад

    I noticed that you only spoke about one university in this motivation letter. Or did you pick this course as your first and second choice ?

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  2 года назад

      The instructions were different 4 years ago!

  • @mavisayorinde8766
    @mavisayorinde8766 3 года назад +3

    Hello @victor, I must commend your for the great help. You made me realize how I needed to improve on my SOP.
    However, @victor, how should someone who did not graduated with first class of second class upper, that is, he/she graduated with 2.2 or lower credit from university or polytechnic. How can they coin their SOP to still convince the scholarship committee to award them?
    Though, I'm not in same field as you, but I can borrow some ideas and adapt it to my field. I shall expect your feedback. Thanks

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +6

      ruclips.net/video/CaGWQtCKmD8/видео.html

    • @mavisayorinde8766
      @mavisayorinde8766 3 года назад +1

      @@VictorAgboga Thank you. I hope to contact you

  • @arowojobemojisola9754
    @arowojobemojisola9754 3 года назад +3

    Hi Victor... How do we start a motivational letter....do start with an address just like a formal letter or we just go straight to the heading then the letter....this has been delaying me n I just don't know how to start....thanks

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  3 года назад +1

      Usually, no need for address and salutations except stated otherwise.

    • @arowojobemojisola9754
      @arowojobemojisola9754 3 года назад +2

      @@VictorAgboga so I just go right into the letter???

  • @oceantouch69
    @oceantouch69 Год назад

    Hey, I have an urgent and serious question about how to apply for chevening scholarship,
    My Question is do I need to apply to the university of my choice in UK first before I can apply to chevening scholarships. Or do I have to continue my chevening scholarship application before choosing any UK university of my choice.

    • @VictorAgboga
      @VictorAgboga  Год назад

      They have different deadlines. Priorise the one with an earlier deadline.

  • @afolabiogunmekan8157
    @afolabiogunmekan8157 3 года назад

    Good read

  • @west7932
    @west7932 Год назад

    Seriously, how on earth can I write this relating it to veterinary medicine.?
    You wrote well ,at some point I felt as if I was listening to news...

  • @chinnyfolktales
    @chinnyfolktales Год назад

    Hello Victor, please can you help me review my essay?

  • @frankeghosa6108
    @frankeghosa6108 2 года назад

    Wow! Am so impress with ur sop. Please how can I reach you for mentorship? Please I need your contact. Am applying for Sweden institute scholarship. Thanks and God bless you for your help.

  • @abdirazaqali8921
    @abdirazaqali8921 2 месяца назад

    Hi Victor what did you persue at your undergraduate level

  • @onyiokeke627
    @onyiokeke627 3 года назад

    Goodday Victor, any scholarship for 2021 in Germany. dont mind if you could share your email?

  • @promiseusoro3037
    @promiseusoro3037 Год назад

    Should I address my sop

  • @ekekakimunfredrick2032
    @ekekakimunfredrick2032 3 года назад

    Please help proofread my essays

  • @asogwaobiora3991
    @asogwaobiora3991 2 года назад

    One of the best

  • @ebereezike3448
    @ebereezike3448 3 года назад +1

    Amazing! I noticed you applied to just one school. Was this a personal choice or there weren't two schools provision then?