I Have noticed sequence of writing SOP as follows: 1) aspiration 2)Research interest 3) learning from Retrospective events 4) modules you took in Masters n Bachelors 5) what u tend to do in Ph.D I think, I can also write in the sequence given above.
I think this particular SOP is mostly suited for those aspiring for PhD career in Law or Political Sciences, some modifications will need to be made for Engineering guys particularly at the last two paragraphs. My submission based on my findings so far .
It’s a good one Victor. Totally different from what we are used to writing. I certainly would’ve scored you a 9 out of 10. Wish you all the best in your PhD journey!
you have about 9 paragraphs on this SOP, I like your storytelling ability, it connects the purpose to why you need the Ph.D. I wish someone with an engineering focus can put in some presentations. I don't know if I may suggest an area you should also investigate in your research which is, the effect of social media as a tool of propaganda in influencing voters' perceptions about a candidate when they switch parties.- the 8th senate president, Dino, and few others were victims. fortunately for them, some of the propaganda against them has been proven to be wrong. - You have more work to do Dr.
Hello Victor, I am Adeoye Abiola,42 years with Bsc Economics from Lagos State University.(2008) After many applications were turned down by Universities in Canada for my Masters program due to low cgpa(2.65),I finally got admission to study Liberal Acts (but Diploma) at University of Regina. My issues is how to write S.O.P. to these effect; * Isn't it a downgrade going for a diploma * Saying anything about the Bsc Economics certificate appropriate while writing the SOP? Infant,I'm confused. Anyway,am ready to employ your service even if it's going to be premium. Looking forward to your quick response
Victor, I appreciate you for a good job always. I want you to kindly shed more light here please.... I saw PhD research openings by a university in Europe. The professors stated they need PhD students in those research interest areas. So to contact these professors, through their stated mails, (1) do I need to write to them showing my interest in those research interest areas, OR (2)do i need to submit a research proposal to them, matching their research interest areas? (3) do i need to write to them showing my interest in those research interest areas AND THEN submit a research proposal matching their research interest areas? Your prompt response on this will be appreciated please.
Not really? Some are more than 500. Some give you specific questions to reply to and they will say "250 words for each questions). However, when a school indeed says 500 words, it has 10% +/- grace or allowance. Which means, it could be 10% lesser than 500 words or 10% more than 500 words (that's like the elasticity). Any would be accepted.
@@VictorAgboga can you refer me to a professional that can do that for me at a cost?I already have an admission from Robert Gordon University for September.
I've been following your videos recently. And they very educating. How did you search for a supervisor(s) for your PhD. I'm lost on how to search seeing that there are many schools in Germany.
Narrow down your search to particular universities/departments and search their staff page/website for professors whose research interests align with yours.
Wonderful. Suggestion for your next videos: Split the screen and share the statement on the right as you read it. Wonderful video, my brother. Edit: I see that you do that in your future videos ..... fantastic.
Thanks so much for this Victor. However, in a situation where the SOP should not be more than 500 words which makes it difficult to include all these juicy aspects of our achievements, what would you suggest?
Aaaaaah Victor! I cannot lie, you are intelligent. 💯💯. Thank youuuu for sharing. Your videos are very insightful
I Have noticed sequence of writing SOP as follows:
1) aspiration
2)Research interest
3) learning from Retrospective events
4) modules you took in Masters n Bachelors
5) what u tend to do in Ph.D
I think, I can also write in the sequence given above.
This PhD scholarship application can be overwhelming. You did a good job with your statement of purpose
This SOP is over 3 and a half pages... I sat down to write it out... May you did a great job here. 10 over 10 for you sir
It's so enlightening, ladden with real& practical experiences
Brilliantly arrayed. Thank you for the generosity...
U really did a good job with this, it's soo exceptional
Great job!
Certainly a 10 over 10!
You are good!
You are intelligent!
Well done!
10/10, amazing Bro. Keep it up!
Sir, I thank God for meeting you.
I am an alumnus of Imo state university . May God bless you
This is amazing… thank you for sharing!
You are exceptional. I have learnt a lot from your experiences.
I think this particular SOP is mostly suited for those aspiring for PhD career in Law or Political Sciences, some modifications will need to be made for Engineering guys particularly at the last two paragraphs. My submission based on my findings so far .
This is awesome. I rate it 9 out of 10. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, I wish I can arrange words like this. Biko, how did you learn to structure words?
You did well. Kudos
Me toooooo
In writing statement of purpose,can we indicate more than one research topics??
It’s a good one Victor. Totally different from what we are used to writing. I certainly would’ve scored you a 9 out of 10.
Wish you all the best in your PhD journey!
you have about 9 paragraphs on this SOP, I like your storytelling ability, it connects the purpose to why you need the Ph.D. I wish someone with an engineering focus can put in some presentations. I don't know if I may suggest an area you should also investigate in your research which is, the effect of social media as a tool of propaganda in influencing voters' perceptions about a candidate when they switch parties.- the 8th senate president, Dino, and few others were victims. fortunately for them, some of the propaganda against them has been proven to be wrong. - You have more work to do Dr.
Hello Victor,
I am Adeoye Abiola,42 years with Bsc Economics from Lagos State University.(2008)
After many applications were turned down by Universities in Canada for my Masters program due to low cgpa(2.65),I finally got admission to study Liberal Acts (but Diploma) at University of Regina.
My issues is how to write S.O.P. to these effect;
* Isn't it a downgrade going for a diploma
* Saying anything about the Bsc Economics certificate appropriate while writing the SOP?
Infant,I'm confused.
Anyway,am ready to employ your service even if it's going to be premium.
Looking forward to your quick response
Plz share your written drat of sop i really need it to take help.i cant understand your accent as i am from Pakistan and we have different accent
Hi there, I want to apply PhD in Pol.Sci at LSEPS. Could you please guide me on it...I need full scjolarship. Cheers
Come and become our president. We will vote for you
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Wow,.. that first nature was a flex.. I join you soon.
Thank you Victor
I score you 10/10. Congrats bro
Please can we use thesame statement of purpose for both the university and for financial aid?
Hi, Victor please how can I convert my dissertation into journal articles. Please I need direction.
@Victor agboga can you please share the document in some pdf or word format?
Please how do I see your clips
Victor, I appreciate you for a good job always. I want you to kindly shed more light here please....
I saw PhD research openings by a university in Europe. The professors stated they need PhD students in those research interest areas. So to contact these professors, through their stated mails,
(1) do I need to write to them showing my interest in those research interest areas, OR
(2)do i need to submit a research proposal to them, matching their research interest areas?
(3) do i need to write to them showing my interest in those research interest areas AND THEN submit a research proposal matching their research interest areas?
Your prompt response on this will be appreciated please.
Very interesting one. I will recommend you edit your auto generated caption/subtitle. Thanks for sharing.
Well done Victor.Please how do I convert my research work into journal. Any link or contact please
Excellent writeup I will say. I will score 9 out of 10. You are so intelligent. What is the word count . Its it more than the required number.
So it means one can use this format as well to draft a Statement of purpose for MASTERS APPLICATION?
Ex seminarian are very intelligent well done
This sounds m uch like what i just wrote for the university of Emory's scholarship, i hope i get an approval .
Well done!
Hi Victor! So for Mphil+Dphil Economics course at University of Oxford would this format of SOP work or the Masters one?
Can you share in written form
A fantastic one. However, is this not more than 500 words, which is often the demands by most universities.
Not really?
Some are more than 500.
Some give you specific questions to reply to and they will say "250 words for each questions).
However, when a school indeed says 500 words, it has 10% +/- grace or allowance.
Which means, it could be 10% lesser than 500 words or 10% more than 500 words (that's like the elasticity).
Any would be accepted.
The way i am smiling🙏
I want to write a financial assistance for tuition payment for my msc,pls I need assistance,cos it's going to a governors office
Check the channel. There is a video on writing financial aid statements.
@@VictorAgboga can you refer me to a professional that can do that for me at a cost?I already have an admission from Robert Gordon University for September.
I've been following your videos recently. And they very educating. How did you search for a supervisor(s) for your PhD. I'm lost on how to search seeing that there are many schools in Germany.
Narrow down your search to particular universities/departments and search their staff page/website for professors whose research interests align with yours.
Wonderful. Suggestion for your next videos: Split the screen and share the statement on the right as you read it. Wonderful video, my brother.
Edit: I see that you do that in your future videos ..... fantastic.
This is well written, but what happens when they request only 1 page 😅😅
Hello Victor plz may I know ur field of study, like administration, engineering, etc
@Victor: did you reach out to professors at Warwick and SOAS before you applied to the universities?
Yes
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Hi I'm from india .I want to apply for phd programe in abroad in dept of mathematics please do guide me
Hey VIctor this question is personal to me, are you a stamerer?.. you seem to talk slowly
No, I don't.
@@VictorAgboga alright, thanks for the response
Quite impressive.
Is letter of motivation same as statement of purpose?
They are synonymous.
hi good day i will like to have a conversation with you. please do i reach you. waiting for your response
Hello
So is it compulsory to extensively discuss one's PhD research?
I am currently on my PhD statement of purpose.
I would advise at least two paragraphs about your proposed PhD research and its significance.
@@VictorAgboga
Okay boss.
I will do that.
I hope we can connect more.
@@VictorAgboga pls do I also need to talk more on my research proposal plan in my S.O.P for my masters program
@@dannydeo3583 No, check my masters SOP
@@VictorAgboga alright
Great job! Dear Victor, I am finishing my personal statement for PhD. Can you please help give me some feedbacks?
Thanks so much for this Victor. However, in a situation where the SOP should not be more than 500 words which makes it difficult to include all these juicy aspects of our achievements, what would you suggest?
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@@VictorAgboga Hi Sir...please do you have a community you mentor
No academician or scholar will read this your statement of purpose and not offer you the scholarship..... It's irresistible and lacks any correction.
HI VICTOR
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@@VictorAgboga can you help me get study scholarship PhD IR??
@@curingsoulwithlina4970 I believe you can do that yourself by engaging with materials on this channel. Cheers
@@VictorAgboga is that a NO?
Wooow!!!!!
Amazing...can i have your email?