5 tips for finishing your essay in less than 40 min - ielts writing task 2 discuss both views

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  • @niladrimitra8956
    @niladrimitra8956 Год назад +16

    Hey Lilie,
    Thank you for your guidance on my writing module. I discovered your channel only a week before my test and meticulously went through all of your tutorials, which was the only practice I could do. I appeared for the test on 15th July and got an overall score of 8.5, with a solid 8 in writing.
    Thanks again, and best wishes :)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад +1

      Woow, you got amazing scores, congratulations! And thank you so much for sharing your experience here!

    • @gioplantasrn
      @gioplantasrn Год назад

      does 21 days enough to practice?

    • @susannjoki7859
      @susannjoki7859 11 месяцев назад

      😅
      A

  • @aasrithasai5574
    @aasrithasai5574 11 месяцев назад +24

    Found your RUclips channel just 2 days before my exam. Watched all of your writing videos. And guess what, I scored 7 bands in Writing. And secured an overall score of 7.5. Thank you so much, Lilie. To those who are preparing, I would recommend These three youtube channels- IELTS Liz( for listening tips) , IELTS ADVANTAGE(for speaking and reading) and Lilie IELTS ( for writing)

  • @rafsanayan7443
    @rafsanayan7443 6 месяцев назад +4

    😢😢😢most disgusting module for me is writing... I can't generate the ideas but know various structure and vocabularies. if i get 6 in writing it's enough

  • @thorfinn3737
    @thorfinn3737 2 года назад +15

    u deserve more views, all of your contents are very useful!, btw im gonna take my IELTS exam in 24 September, i'm very nervous😵

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Thank you and Good luck!!✊

  • @faizaa4859
    @faizaa4859 Год назад +13

    Bro!! you made it way more easier than it actually is. I love your style of writing. Thank you :)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад +4

      You're very welcome!😊

    • @manpreetbrar4327
      @manpreetbrar4327 11 месяцев назад +2

      Not bro though don’t you here a pretty girl’s voice

  • @udochimbano3550
    @udochimbano3550 Год назад +1

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  • @조바이든-r6r
    @조바이든-r6r 2 года назад +9

    your quality of lecture is getting better and better! seems like you are growing right now!

  • @omjwad2661
    @omjwad2661 Месяц назад +1

    Hi Lillie, this is just an opinion of course you know better "I was really impressed with how you addressed the issue of losing low-paying jobs to automation in the previous essay about people who resist change . For the current essay, I think it would be great if we could maintain a similar commitment to the main idea. For instance, we could argue that forcing professionals to stay in a country where they don’t want to be will eventually lead them to leave. This approach would be consistent with how effectively you handled the main idea in the previous essay."because I think with talking about creativity and productivity could be connected to the second main idea about feeling fulfilled

  • @godwinochieng3022
    @godwinochieng3022 9 месяцев назад +1

    Hi Lili, l no doubt like how you teach IELTS. Your writing coaching is on another level. You made me to score band 7.0 overall (L-6.5, R-6.5, W-7.5, S- 7.5)

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 Год назад +1

    Please madam can you make a listening video for candidates with hearing difficulties. 🙏😭. Please help

  • @omjwad2661
    @omjwad2661 Месяц назад

    What about saying that i disagree with the second viewpoint,if the main idea is that they travel only for money?

  • @NhuYNguyen-sz9dq
    @NhuYNguyen-sz9dq Год назад +2

    Hi, I have a small question: is it compulsory that we explain why we agree or disagree at the end of the two body? It is so hard to write tho😢

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      I think you should at least explain why you disagree.

  • @sodiqiyandao.9464
    @sodiqiyandao.9464 2 года назад +25

    Hi Lilie IELTS,
    I am Sodiq Iyanda.
    I reside in Lagos State, Nigeria 🇳🇬.
    I want to specially appreciate you for your contributions to helping people ace their IELTS Exams. Your videos and expressive teachings helped me a lot.
    I aced my IELTS Academic with an overall band score of 7.
    Listening 7.5
    Reading 6.5
    Writing 7.0
    Speaking 7.0
    I didn't attend any tutorials except for the videos that I consumed.
    Thank you.
    Lots of love ❤️
    Sodiq Iyanda.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Wooooo, you did an amazing job. Congratulations!👏Do you mind sharing your task 2 question here?

    • @khaffyexcel7413
      @khaffyexcel7413 2 года назад

      Congratulations bro,can you please help me with task 2,I'm lost,if yes let me have you email

    • @sodiqiyandao.9464
      @sodiqiyandao.9464 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS I can't really recall the task again.
      Over eating (eating too much) has become rampant and not hunger.
      Discuss both sided and give your opinion.

  • @gullahdon673
    @gullahdon673 4 месяца назад

    Your accent is too hard to understand

  • @akpaelizabeth9948
    @akpaelizabeth9948 7 месяцев назад

    Good evening lily, i stumbled on your videos last year and they've been so helpful.
    Ill like to ask, regarding this video, is it advisable to give a positive opinion on the side you disagree with before stating the demerits.

  • @Bninee
    @Bninee Год назад +1

    hi, teacher. Can u explain the grammar in sentence ' and only when a person is doing what they want can they find fulfillment in work ' for me ? why ' what they want can they find '. thanks in advanced

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад +1

      Hi, the first clause starts with "only when" so the second clause needs to be inverted. That's why "can" is placed before the subject "they".

    • @Bninee
      @Bninee Год назад

      @@LilieIELTS thanks so much for ur explanation ❤❤

  • @muhammad_shujat_ali
    @muhammad_shujat_ali 2 года назад +1

    Wonderful! Can you tell us what is stuff used for gaining Good Bands in IELTS Writing Especially in IELTS Academic?
    I mean is there any reliable source for learning wide range of vocabulary used in IELTS Writing?
    Probably,Yes! Then what is that and how to access it?
    Need Guidance!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Hi, you can read sample essays on my site and learn vocabulary in context: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

    • @dennismutuma9336
      @dennismutuma9336 4 месяца назад

      ​@@LilieIELTS0:20

  • @kdrama._.1
    @kdrama._.1 2 года назад +1

    What was your band score ?👍🏻🥰

  • @elenasimon4600
    @elenasimon4600 2 года назад +1

    Thank you so much for sharing these useful materials.
    Could you please explain some grammatical structures that can increase our writing score?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +2

      Hi, thanks for the suggestion. I think it's more important to focus on writing error-free, idiomatic sentences than on so called complex sentences.

  • @homayounkhan7035
    @homayounkhan7035 2 года назад

    Hello ma'am.
    I wanted to say that the body paragraph one was not well developed for the topic sentence because your have provided one reason that how does requiring trained people to stay can avoid brain drain, which was that " with out this policy, many would have moved to other other countries " and the if clause sentence was not answering how it will avoid brain drain. It was just an advantage of the policy.
    Thank you

  • @kishankatrodiya8370
    @kishankatrodiya8370 2 года назад +2

    Lilie I appreciate your efforts as well as I like to watch your videos.
    Can you please make some videos on ielts academic reading also..

  • @AndrewSamy-z3z
    @AndrewSamy-z3z 11 месяцев назад

    My test date is on the 18th of October, and I am a bit disappointed because I only have 1 week to be prepared. I believe that my weaknesses are in writing task 2 and speaking. Do you think I can make a big change in 7 days?

    • @AndrewSamy-z3z
      @AndrewSamy-z3z 11 месяцев назад

      By the way, I have already practiced before but I mean that only 7 days left for me to practice more.

  • @MukhitdinT
    @MukhitdinT Год назад +1

    your option about writing really great please keep going.

  • @ellarhxoxo6818
    @ellarhxoxo6818 Год назад +1

    I really struggling with writing task 2 and my exams is 29th of October 😭I’m so nervous and having anxiety, I just pray I ace this exams.

  • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
    @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад

    I need your help can you check this for me is this good or not.
    Topic is some say children should aim to be best other " " not necessary.
    There have been competing views on whether it is mandatory for children to do their best in each and every task. In my opinion they no need to perform each tasks accurately because aim to do best always bring more stress and this approach may effect their overall growth.
    ( My first time to use this method so I request you can check). From india

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      "Mandatory" doesn't work in your paraphrase. Try this: There have been competing views on whether children should strive to be the best. Is this a discuss-both-views essay? If it is, it's best to give only one reason for the side you agree with but you provided two.

  • @lady_sh3288
    @lady_sh3288 Год назад

    Should we include our agreement or disagreement in both body paragraphs

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Yes, I talk about it in greater detail in this video: ruclips.net/video/v6kYss_Mp-g/видео.html

  • @jaspreetkaursidhu2628
    @jaspreetkaursidhu2628 Год назад

    Can we use informal words in writing ??..as brain drain Is informal word..

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      'Brain drain' is totally fine.

  • @kdrama._.1
    @kdrama._.1 2 года назад

    Could please upload some ielts listening tips ?

  • @harpreetharpreet8
    @harpreetharpreet8 2 года назад

    Mam plz app jldi ley ke aya kro apki videos as it is very useful for us ...can plz give some tips to improve reading bcz i cannot get gud score in reading

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      What are the challenges you face on the reading test?

  • @poojapunia8708
    @poojapunia8708 2 года назад

    M just having confusion in this video can you explain it to me Mam

  • @jaylil9442
    @jaylil9442 Год назад

    I really like your efforts so we can write two idea in body para1 and two ideas in body para 2 in opinion essay ? Please give me some suggestion about these?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Better not. If you do that, you won't be able to fully develop your ideas.

  • @zartajkhan6470
    @zartajkhan6470 Год назад

    Hello.I am glad to see your video about writing. Please, i need help . Its difficult for me to generate idea with an example

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      ChatGPT may help. I'm going to make a video about it.

    • @dtdoantrang
      @dtdoantrang 10 месяцев назад

      @@LilieIELTS I am looking forward to watching!!

  • @harwinderpalkaur2492
    @harwinderpalkaur2492 Год назад

    Lilie kindly upload ur listening vedio please. I m waiting from long time to watch your vedio.

    • @harwinderpalkaur2492
      @harwinderpalkaur2492 Год назад

      From Ur neighbour country..India🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳🇮🇳

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      I'm working on it.

  • @rohanadhikari1668
    @rohanadhikari1668 Год назад

    Hey lilie my teacher said we can't write opinion in discussion essay's introductory paragraph can u make me clear about this?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Our opinion should be clear throughout the essay!

    • @rohanadhikari1668
      @rohanadhikari1668 Год назад

      @@LilieIELTS can i write opinion on introduction?

  • @moodypeachx
    @moodypeachx 10 месяцев назад

    Thank you lillie I had my exam last week and your videos helped me a lot ❤ btw you’re so pretty

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  9 месяцев назад +1

      Hope you did well...Let me know your test result.

    • @moodypeachx
      @moodypeachx 9 месяцев назад

      @@LilieIELTS I got my result Lillie got the required score of 6.5 overall with Listening 7 Reading 6 Writing 6 and Speaking 7 . Thanks a lot Lillie ❤️

  • @Studentlife67
    @Studentlife67 Год назад

    I am facing problem in the opinion essay can you help me please

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Hi, you can read sample essays of this type on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/tag/what-is-your-opinion/

  • @saadakhtar8634
    @saadakhtar8634 Год назад

    I have a question related to your answer as in Q, it mentioned only doctors and engineers, and not etc which indicates we must write the essay in the context of only these 2 professions.
    Is it right to ans generally?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      H, doctors and engineers are there to help you understand what they mean by "professionals". It doesn't matter how many professions you write.

  • @gorkhalegendsyt8714
    @gorkhalegendsyt8714 Год назад

    thanks

  • @harwinderpalkaur2492
    @harwinderpalkaur2492 Год назад

    Kindly make vedios on speaking module too

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Speaking isn't my strength. I may make listening videos though .😊

  • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
    @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад

    Hi teacher in your intro you only write one people argument but in other side you write directly your opinion and idea
    If we write like that in exam is this good.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Hi, please note the use of the plural term "competing views", meaning there are two different views. So I didn't present only one side of the argument.

    • @AmandeepKaur-is6nq
      @AmandeepKaur-is6nq Год назад

      @@LilieIELTS can you check my introduction for me 🙏

  • @ohidvhai5259
    @ohidvhai5259 Год назад

    Best IELTS channel take love sister

  • @freaknickkk
    @freaknickkk Год назад

    I'm afraid 😅. I have just 1 month left.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад +2

      one month is a lot of time!😊

    • @Naveenp_05
      @Naveenp_05 Год назад +1

      Dude I have just 20 hours 😅

  • @binhtran4777
    @binhtran4777 Год назад

    I really love your video, this helps me a lot in IELTS Writing,❤ Thank you so much.

  • @muhammadazizurrahmanashik7853
    @muhammadazizurrahmanashik7853 Год назад

    Thanks

  • @gaurisworkharel8692
    @gaurisworkharel8692 2 года назад

    How can we write body paragraphs at exam??

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      Does this help? 😊 ruclips.net/video/0JJHbByTYis/видео.html

  • @bennph_
    @bennph_ Год назад

    Can we state our opinions in the body paragraph?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад +1

      Yes and it's necessary to do so in a discuss-both-views essay.

    • @bennph_
      @bennph_ Год назад

      How about other types of essay?

  • @mithilapriyangani5206
    @mithilapriyangani5206 Год назад

    Superb..💚 Thank you so much..

  • @mia66
    @mia66 Год назад

    Thanks, Lillie! My exam is in 3 days:)

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  Год назад

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊♥

    • @mia66
      @mia66 Год назад

      @@LilieIELTS Of course! hopefully they will be great 😔.

  • @PriankaHowlader
    @PriankaHowlader Год назад

    Soooo helpful❤

  • @dandyminn4352
    @dandyminn4352 2 года назад

    Hi!
    Should I include the ideas of both views in my thesis statement or one which I side is enough?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      Hi, please watch the introductory-paragraph section at 11:47 and the conclusion-paragraph section at 14:06.

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

    Correct me if I'm wrong but I think ma'am you have make punctuation mistake in body para 2 u write "I" capital word before comma

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Where? Can you type the sentence for me please?

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

      You wrote in body para 2
      Since fulfilled workers are more likely to reach their full potential, I agree ( after comma I is capital

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      The pronoun "I" is always capitalized, no matter where it falls in a sentence.

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS ooh thanks

    • @samreeniqbal5686
      @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

      I did not know that before... it wonderful that I know my error. Appreciate your dedication towards teaching keep it up

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

    Can u please do video on tables task 1 individually..

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Thanks for the suggestion. For now, you can read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/

  • @abishekthakur6552
    @abishekthakur6552 2 года назад

    which country u belong to?

  • @ahmedraihan7781
    @ahmedraihan7781 Год назад

    Wow 👏 amazing explanation mam

  • @iqbal-theislander2036
    @iqbal-theislander2036 2 года назад +4

    Hey Lille,
    I took the test on 3rd September. I did very well in writing.
    Part one was tough (Spending of five organizations in four categories each)
    It had too many information. Your idea of RANGING helped a great deal.
    Thank you for listening to your viewers

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +2

      Can't wait to hear great news from you. What was your task 2 question?

    • @iqbal-theislander2036
      @iqbal-theislander2036 2 года назад +2

      @@LilieIELTS Some people believe that reading stories form a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children.
      To what extent do you agree or disagree?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +2

      Where are you from?

    • @iqbal-theislander2036
      @iqbal-theislander2036 2 года назад +2

      @@LilieIELTS Bangladesh.
      Are you from Malaysia?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +3

      No, I'm from China.

  • @jaspreetsharma4048
    @jaspreetsharma4048 Год назад

    Great work lily

  • @n.s4476
    @n.s4476 2 года назад

    Thanks dear Lillie❤

  • @조바이든-r6r
    @조바이든-r6r 2 года назад

    I was waiting for u

  • @Farah_Mahmud
    @Farah_Mahmud Год назад

    Great work! ❤️

  • @Myathew
    @Myathew 2 года назад

    Can u help me with pdf for essay ma'am?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      What do you mean?

    • @Myathew
      @Myathew 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS Can ypu recommend me any books for IELTS writing task 2 ?Also u have some books in pdf,can u share with us?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      You can read sample essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/

    • @Myathew
      @Myathew 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS ❤️

    • @bikal849
      @bikal849 2 года назад

      It is legal to write our opinion in body paragraphs I'm bit confused

  • @Laura-sl4ev
    @Laura-sl4ev 2 года назад +1

    Thank you Lillie for the great video.

  • @ehsandaryadel8202
    @ehsandaryadel8202 2 года назад +1

    Wonderful. Would it be ok if you could create a video for to what extent do you agree or disagree questions? Thank you

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      Great suggestion! What challenges do you face when writing an agree-or-disagree essay?

    • @ehsandaryadel8202
      @ehsandaryadel8202 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS Basically the problem is with the phrase "to what extent" and the difference with the simple do you agree/disagree. Is it ok if I simply include reasons for my agreement or disagreement with the statement or there should be another strategy?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      They are the same except that you need to say something like "I *completely/totally* agree" if it's a to-what-extent essay.

  • @rkaur2888
    @rkaur2888 2 года назад +1

    Hi mam, 🙃
    Could give a suggestion on advantage or disadvantage essay? Should I stick to one point or describe both ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      Hi, these two videos may help.
      ruclips.net/video/DItz_lnAG78/видео.html
      ruclips.net/video/c_iMuGaIXd8/видео.html

    • @rkaur2888
      @rkaur2888 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS thanks

    • @rkaur2888
      @rkaur2888 2 года назад

      @@LilieIELTS but a particular type advantage or disadvantage

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад

      Do you mean "positive or negative development"? ruclips.net/video/dFPVRy_siS0/видео.html

  • @samreeniqbal5686
    @samreeniqbal5686 2 года назад

    Your lessons are quite fascinating

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  2 года назад +1

      Appreciate the kind words!💜💜😊